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El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2014-10-15T05:37:09+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月16日 at 11:46:33

Artist: Marika
Title: Soul Release
Source: ハロー・レディ！
Tags: Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel ts8zs UnitedWeSin
BPM: 188
Filesize: 6331kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:

Insane (4.35 stars, 733 notes)
Liberation (5.05 stars, 850 notes)
Normal (2.25 stars, 386 notes)
Ts8zs' Easy (1.72 stars, 246 notes)
UWS's Hard (3.46 stars, 647 notes)

Download: Marika - Soul Release
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Changed the mp3 on 2015/01/31, please redownload

Easy by ts8zs
Normal by me
Hard by UnitedWeSin
Insane by me
Liberation by me (screw distance snap)

Thanks for everyone's support and feedback!

Last edited by El SolarBeam 2015-02-18T01:01:11+00:00, edited 51 times in total.

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-10-19T04:57:41+00:00

finished

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Marika - Soul Release.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 187538
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Soul Release
TitleUnicode:Soul Release
Artist:Marika
ArtistUnicode:Marika
Creator:El SolarBeam
Version:Ts8zs' Easy
Source:ハロー・レディ！
Tags:Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-10-19T06:24:43+00:00

yeah, I like the pattern. keep it on

(just don't make it too hard to read w)

ts8zs

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Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-10-19T06:35:41+00:00

El SolarBeam wrote:
yeah, I like the pattern. keep it on
(just don't make it too hard to read w)

hard to read? where ;w;

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-10-20T02:56:34+00:00

the repeating slider part, well it's fine but don't overuse it :3

ts8zs

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Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-10-20T03:32:20+00:00

El SolarBeam wrote:
the repeating slider part, well it's fine but don't overuse it :3

01:06:262 (2) - ? I couldnt think a better way now ;w;

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208,56,169666,6,0,P|136:32|56:80,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,170624,2,0,P|216:152|296:104,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,40,171581,2,0,L|408:56,3,40,2|2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,172219,12,2,176687,0:0:0:0:
304,288,177326,6,0,L|224:272,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,177964,2,0,P|128:256|136:312,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,179241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,96,179560,2,0,P|256:64|328:96,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,181156,6,0,P|88:88|104:48,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,181794,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,192,182113,6,0,P|138:218|95:225,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,183070,2,0,P|271:229|352:232,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,320,183868,2,0,P|264:352|144:288,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,200,184985,6,0,B|160:152|184:120|184:120|176:80,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,176,186262,2,0,L|304:168,2,40,2|0|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,186900,2,0,L|279:285,2,40,2|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,187539,6,0,P|104:304|64:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,188177,2,0,B|72:176|78:130|78:130|51:100,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,189453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,64,189773,6,0,P|272:131|256:207,1,160,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,296,190730,2,0,P|256:304|296:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,191368,6,0,P|392:303|352:376,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,192645,2,0,P|304:184|264:176,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,193283,6,0,P|360:80|416:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,194560,2,0,P|152:80|96:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,195836,2,0,B|280:224|232:272|256:328,1,160,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,196794,2,0,P|384:304|424:296,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,197751,6,0,P|336:200|296:208,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,198389,2,0,P|209:243|245:290,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,120,199666,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,104,199985,2,0,P|329:40|251:31,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,201581,6,0,P|376:200|416:192,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,202219,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,120,202538,2,0,P|254:150|247:193,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,203495,6,0,P|320:248|264:280,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,368,204293,2,0,P|173:292|208:203,1,200,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,205410,6,0,B|312:168|288:136|288:136|296:96,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,206687,2,0,L|168:192,2,40,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,207325,2,0,L|201:301,2,40,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,207964,6,0,P|368:328|408:320,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,208602,2,0,B|400:200|394:154|394:154|421:124,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,209878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,80,210198,6,0,P|208:147|224:223,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,211155,2,0,P|224:320|184:312,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,211793,6,0,P|88:311|128:384,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,213070,2,0,P|176:192|216:184,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,213708,6,0,P|120:88|64:120,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,214985,2,0,P|304:24|360:56,2,120,2|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,120,216261,2,0,B|264:176|312:224|288:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,240,217219,2,0,P|160:248|120:240,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,218176,6,0,P|144:88|168:32,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,219453,2,0,L|280:88,3,40,2|0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,220251,2,0,L|296:192,1,40,2|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,220729,6,0,P|392:168|352:112,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,192,221527,2,0,P|288:248|328:304,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,328,222324,1,10,0:0:0:0:
472,248,222644,2,0,P|479:208|480:168,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,72,223283,6,0,B|428:86|428:86|388:70|348:86,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,224080,2,0,B|345:191|305:175|305:175|269:190,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,224878,2,0,P|176:191|184:230,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,225835,6,0,P|224:64|152:64,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,116,226634,2,0,P|124:151|184:152,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,227431,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,200,227750,2,0,P|360:152|336:120,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,56,228388,6,0,P|328:32|392:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,112,229186,2,0,P|402:136|343:125,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,229985,1,10,0:0:0:0:
166,106,230304,2,0,P|154:144|160:184,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,230942,12,0,234613,0:0:0:0:

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-10-20T05:58:38+00:00

well, personally no offense about it, just let the modders check it /o/

i'll update it as soon as the internet supports

EDIT : so, here's left the hard diff w

Ciyus Miapah

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Ciyus Miapah 2014-11-09T06:12:48+00:00

Hi

[Insane]
00:05:811 (4,5) - try to increase distance in here
00:04:375 (4,5) - whistle
00:05:013 (1) - ^
00:05:332 (3) - ^ in slider tail
00:05:811 (4) - ^
00:05:970 (5) - ^ in slider tail
00:06:928 (3,4) - ^
00:07:566 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:08:205 (3,4) - ^
00:08:684 (7) - Clap
00:09:481 (3) - whistle
00:10:120 (1) - ^
00:10:439 (2) - ^ in slider tail
00:10:918 (3) - ^
00:11:077 (4) - ^ in slider tail
00:12:673 (1) - ^
00:12:832 (2) - ^
00:13:311 (4,5) - ^
00:16:343 (2,3) - ^ (for slider in head only)
00:19:056 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:21:449 (2) - ^
00:21:609 (3) - ^ slider head
00:23:763 (9) - delete clap
blah, so much notes who didnt hitsounding yet.... especially in intro, but i dont know what do you think

00:38:364 (5,6) - why you stack this?
01:04:375 (10,11,1) - seems this pattern unusual, but is up to you
02:26:795 (1) - confusing NC, please NC 02:26:396 (5) -
03:37:726 (7,8,9,10) - really confusing, dont directly antijump 1/2 pattern after do triplet. just stack 03:38:045 (10,1) -

almost FC it, i miss in that long stream after 1/1 slider, so confuse in there. the rest is very good, i like it xD. but still this map needs more hitsounding

[Hard]
Not Available yet, so put this map on WIP.

[Normal]
00:11:396 (1) - middle point in x0 y144, last point in x20 y260
01:27:992 (1) - fix blanket
01:35:652 (1) - out of bonds, please that slider hit my score number
01:38:843 (3) - fix blanket?
03:30:226 (1) - overlap in here

same like Insane, this map needs more Hitsounding too.
i cant find anything wrong in pattern or maybe anything, i FC this map and its okay.

[Easy]
im just look at this one http://puu.sh/cJbNQ/ba738d0f63.png (im still believe this, so the pattern in Easy is like normal i think)
and why so much 1/2 in here, there should be Easy+ in this map. but idk im just testplaying this still can FC it lol

okay, that's my mod. im really sorry for very short mod, because im seriously cant find some problem in your map (except add Hard diff). so goodluck with your map.

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2014-11-09T12:38:43+00:00

waiting for hard diff before applying mod

とりあえずjust enjoy this 2 kudos first

Ciyus Miapah

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Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-11-09T13:11:25+00:00

why 2 kudos for short mod?? blame peppy pls

ts8zs

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Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-11-09T14:05:38+00:00

Fort wrote:
why 2 kudos for short mod?? blame peppy pls

mod a map didn't update and be modded for 7 days ;w;

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2014-11-10T03:14:22+00:00

~~because I'm generous~~ ok no lol

thanks for the explanation pal

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2014-11-22T23:56:15+00:00

hi :3

[General]
Remove all wide screen support on the diffs since you got no SB o.o
Better to keep this on the WIP state since it's still not completed yet

[Insane]
00:01:184 (1,2) - These sounds a bit too loud for me, i'd reduce the hitsound volume a bit ><
00:05:811 (4,5) - How about move them farther ? (3) and (4) now spaced just like a 3/4 rhythm for me, it would make the player a bit confused imo
00:13:630 (1) - You can hear a slightly cymbal crash here, how about a finish ? you can lower the volume a bit to create great effect
01:04:694 (1) - ^
00:14:269 (3) - I'd separate this into 1/2 slider and note to follow the vocal, somehow a bit rude to skip the first vocal of the song xD
00:35:811 (5,5) - Missing clap on these note
00:42:035 (1) - Add finish i guess ?
01:17:460 (4) - ^ 02:08:843 (1) - at start 01:26:715 (1) - at end
01:02:301 (2) - I can hear some highbeat sound at the downbeat, pretty awkward to see it skipped, i'd go for note and 1/2 o.o
01:12:354 (5) - Missing clap
01:29:109 (4,5) - Move them farther ? looks a bit cramped for me atm
01:31:822 - Stop plays awkwardly due the vocal being skipped, add a note here
02:21:290 (4,5,6,7) - Clap to this stream..
02:31:503 (9) - Missing finish orz.. you can clearly hear a cymbal crash there on the music
02:40:758 (1) - Is this really need to be double reverse ? lol i think you can make more creative pattern here since it was Insane
03:16:503 (1,3) - Finishes on them ?
03:25:120 (1) - How about CTRL G for softer transition between them ? don't forget to restack (7)
03:35:013 (7) - Missing clap
03:38:045 (10,1) - This would surely confusing since it spaced just as same like the previous triplet. People may think this was a duplet, pls move this farther

[Normal]
Hitsounds suggestion on Insane may applied on this diff to if you feel like it
00:16:822 (4,1,2,3,4) - This whole part feels boring due to that overuse of reverse slider, i think you can combine more 1/1 and 1/2 sliders to create attractive pattern here since it's Not an Easy diff o.o
01:33:737 (2) - CTRL H + J ? xD
01:41:715 (2) - I'd go for straight slider instead here for neater transition before and after this slider
02:08:843 (1) - Missing finish
02:42:035 (1) - 02:47:141 (1) - ^
Fine diff, on some place i think it can be more neater. Some of your flow is not very natural imo

[Easy]
00:03:258 (1) - It's not good to start an Easy diff with a 1/2 not which indentical with Normal diff, simplify this into a single note.
00:34:375 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Too much 1/2 s !! pls mix some of them into 1/1 slider or so !
01:37:726 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^
01:06:290 (2,3) - This would surely confusing since you using more than 1 repeat point. Separate them at least? though 3/2 slider is better imo
02:10:119 (2,3) - ^
02:04:374 (1) - Should be a clap at the slider start instead of whistle
02:52:247 (1,1) - Unrankable stuffs, object is too close to the spinner. The minimum recovery time of Easy diff is 1 full measure ( 4 white tick )
03:50:970 (1) - End it just like the same as the other diffs ?
THe SV is pretty low which indicate the Easy diff, but i think you emphasize the drum a bit too much. 1/2 slider are overused here imo.
Your pattern itself is fit nicely for beginners, but your rhythm does not. Try simplify more of your rhythm by mixing 3/2 slider and 1/1 slider on some 1/2 drum beat just like 03:06:290 (2,3) - and 03:39:481 (2,3) -

Good luck :C

ts8zs

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ts8zs 2014-11-23T05:05:59+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
hi :3
hi

[Easy]
00:03:258 (1) - It's not good to start an Easy diff with a 1/2 not which indentical with Normal diff, simplify this into a single note. It is harder to catch in hidden
00:34:375 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Too much 1/2 s !! pls mix some of them into 1/1 slider or so !
01:37:726 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^ thinking
01:06:290 (2,3) - This would surely confusing since you using more than 1 repeat point. Separate them at least? though 3/2 slider is better imo um...
02:10:119 (2,3) - ^
02:04:374 (1) - Should be a clap at the slider start instead of whistleI dont think so
02:52:247 (1,1) - Unrankable stuffs, object is too close to the spinner. The minimum recovery time of Easy diff is 1 full measure ( 4 white tick ) fixed
03:50:970 (1) - End it just like the same as the other diffs ? well I think end here is better,depends on creator
THe SV is pretty low which indicate the Easy diff, but i think you emphasize the drum a bit too much. 1/2 slider are overused here imo.
Your pattern itself is fit nicely for beginners, but your rhythm does not. Try simplify more of your rhythm by mixing 3/2 slider and 1/1 slider on some 1/2 drum beat just like 03:06:290 (2,3) - and 03:39:481 (2,3) - um I follow the vocal

Good luck :C

@creator
02:52:219 (1) - End at 02:55:411 -
03:50:943 (1) - End at 03:54:773 -
That's all

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-11-23T05:43:56+00:00

haha well this situation is quite similar with our previous map

will consider after 30% hard diff part left done

EDIT : I think it's fine the way it is (since 2v1 /runs)
you can also keep your style, I don't mind :3

Last edited by El SolarBeam 2014-11-23T10:22:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-11-23T09:40:28+00:00

Fort wrote:
Hi

[Insane]
00:05:811 (4,5) - try to increase distance in here
00:04:375 (4,5) - whistle
00:05:013 (1) - ^
00:05:332 (3) - ^ in slider tail
00:05:811 (4) - ^
00:05:970 (5) - ^ in slider tail
00:06:928 (3,4) - ^
00:07:566 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:08:205 (3,4) - ^
00:08:684 (7) - Clap
00:09:481 (3) - whistle
00:10:120 (1) - ^
00:10:439 (2) - ^ in slider tail
00:10:918 (3) - ^
00:11:077 (4) - ^ in slider tail
00:12:673 (1) - ^
00:12:832 (2) - ^
00:13:311 (4,5) - ^
00:16:343 (2,3) - ^ (for slider in head only)
00:19:056 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:21:449 (2) - ^
00:21:609 (3) - ^ slider head
00:23:763 (9) - delete clap
blah, so much notes who didnt hitsounding yet.... especially in intro, but i dont know what do you think (fixed my sense of ~~humor~~ hitsounding)

00:38:364 (5,6) - why you stack this? (well, it's not false at least)
01:04:375 (10,11,1) - seems this pattern unusual, but is up to you (no problem for the time being)
02:26:795 (1) - confusing NC, please NC 02:26:396 (5) - (fixed)
03:37:726 (7,8,9,10) - really confusing, dont directly antijump 1/2 pattern after do triplet. just stack 03:38:045 (10,1) - (fixed)

almost FC it, i miss in that long stream after 1/1 slider, so confuse in there. the rest is very good, i like it xD. but still this map needs more hitsounding

[Hard]
Not Available yet, so put this map on WIP. (available now so fixed)

[Normal]
00:11:396 (1) - middle point in x0 y144, last point in x20 y260 (fixed)
01:27:992 (1) - fix blanket (it's fine I suppose)
01:35:652 (1) - out of bonds, please that slider hit my score number (haha sorry about that, fixed)
01:38:843 (3) - fix blanket? (it's fine I suppose)
03:30:226 (1) - overlap in here (fixed)

same like Insane, this map needs more Hitsounding too.
i cant find anything wrong in pattern or maybe anything, i FC this map and its okay.

[Easy]
im just look at this one http://puu.sh/cJbNQ/ba738d0f63.png (im still believe this, so the pattern in Easy is like normal i think)
and why so much 1/2 in here, there should be Easy+ in this map. but idk im just testplaying this still can FC it lol

okay, that's my mod. im really sorry for very short mod, because im seriously cant find some problem in your map (except add Hard diff). so goodluck with your map.

Momochikun wrote:
hi :3 owo)/

[General]
Remove all wide screen support on the diffs since you got no SB o.o (fixed, too tired to make SB these day ww)
Better to keep this on the WIP state since it's still not completed yet (completed now)

[Insane]
00:01:184 (1,2) - These sounds a bit too loud for me, i'd reduce the hitsound volume a bit >< (I like the hitsound at the currrent volume though )
00:05:811 (4,5) - How about move them farther ? (3) and (4) now spaced just like a 3/4 rhythm for me, it would make the player a bit confused imo (ok, just a bit then)
00:13:630 (1) - You can hear a slightly cymbal crash here, how about a finish ? you can lower the volume a bit to create great effect (hm, the sound's kinda weak so I'll refrain)
01:04:694 (1) - ^
00:14:269 (3) - I'd separate this into 1/2 slider and note to follow the vocal, somehow a bit rude to skip the first vocal of the song xD (haha well, my forte is the instrument so it sounds unusual for me instead, not a bad idea though :3)
00:35:811 (5,5) - Missing clap on these note (fixed)
00:42:035 (1) - Add finish i guess ? (adding whistle instead, just say it's fixed)
01:17:460 (4) - ^ 02:08:843 (1) - at start 01:26:715 (1) - at end (fixed some)
01:02:301 (2) - I can hear some highbeat sound at the downbeat, pretty awkward to see it skipped, i'd go for note and 1/2 o.o (hm, I think this rhythm is easier to execute imo)
01:12:354 (5) - Missing clap (fixed)
01:29:109 (4,5) - Move them farther ? looks a bit cramped for me atm (I think it looks just nice though)
01:31:822 - Stop plays awkwardly due the vocal being skipped, add a note here (it's more awkwark to suddenly follow vocal I suppose)
02:21:290 (4,5,6,7) - Clap to this stream.. (fixed)
02:31:503 (9) - Missing finish orz.. you can clearly hear a cymbal crash there on the music (fixed)
02:40:758 (1) - Is this really need to be double reverse ? lol i think you can make more creative pattern here since it was Insane (well, no one disallow anyway xD at least it's better than making antijump imo)
03:16:503 (1,3) - Finishes on them ? (ok, nice idea)
03:25:120 (1) - How about CTRL G for softer transition between them ? don't forget to restack (7) (well, you just have to pull the mouse downward on this pattern so no problem imo)
03:35:013 (7) - Missing clap (fixed)
03:38:045 (10,1) - This would surely confusing since it spaced just as same like the previous triplet. People may think this was a duplet, pls move this farther
(fixed beforehand)

[Normal]
Hitsounds suggestion on Insane may applied on this diff to if you feel like it
00:16:822 (4,1,2,3,4) - This whole part feels boring due to that overuse of reverse slider, i think you can combine more 1/1 and 1/2 sliders to create attractive pattern here since it's Not an Easy diff o.o (let me consider later :3)
01:33:737 (2) - CTRL H + J ? xD (it's fine as is maybe ww)
01:41:715 (2) - I'd go for straight slider instead here for neater transition before and after this slider (I'll make it wavy instead, fixed annyway)
02:08:843 (1) - Missing finish (fixed)
02:42:035 (1) - 02:47:141 (1) - ^ (fixed)
Fine diff, on some place i think it can be more neater. Some of your flow is not very natural imo

Good luck :C

thanks for the mod~

Netamaru

493 posts

Joined August 2012

Netamaru 2014-11-23T12:36:41+00:00

[Insane]

01:00:545 (3,4,5) - stack slidernya beda sendiri disini, mungkin kalo di jadiin kaya ini

(cuma saran, mungkin situ punya ide yang lebih bagus lagi)
jadi lebih konsisten sama pattern nya

01:02:141 (1,2) - ^mungkin kalo saran di atas di terima, disini bisa jadi kaya ini

(sama kaya di atas, cuma masukan)

01:04:375 (10,11,1) - 1/4 note mungkin di rapatin, sama kaya di atas disini aja ngak konsisten sama pattern map nya, distance nya beda sendiri dari keseluruhan

[UWS's Hard]

02:28:949 (4) - kenapa ngak 3 beat aja disini? soalnya dari combo" sebelum nya itu 3 beat semua, terus disini tiba" 4 rasanya bakalan sering break karena kaget

03:27:035 (3,4,5) - stack nya buruk disini buat hard, saran saya mungkin dibuat 3 hit circle, lalu slider kaya ini

mungkin cuma segitu aja, dikit sih emang, saya masih ngak begitu ngerti sama mapping ~~sebenernya tugas numpuk masih menunggu juga lol~~, dan juga maklum pake bahasa indonesia, grammar masih hancur

btw goodluck buat map nya /o/

THS

1,024 posts

Joined November 2011

THS 2014-11-23T12:56:28+00:00

Quick mod stil practice
Insane

- replace 00:33:577 (3) - and 00:33:657 (4) - with a single slider
- 00:34:056 reduce the volume a bit?
- 01:27:673 (4,5,6,7,1) - end of the stream at 01:28:152 (2) -
- 01:48:577 add note?
- 02:31:582 (10) - ^
- 03:32:460 (8,9,10,11) - replace with 2 reverse sliders in 8.9 and 10.11?

Normal

- AR+0.5?

UWS's Hard

- AR+0.5? since this is quite high BPM so, i recommend AR8 instead of 7.5 xD

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-11-25T03:28:10+00:00

thanks mas mas o7

fixed some

Asagi

1,021 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 2014-11-25T11:12:21+00:00

yes yes yes

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2014-11-27T01:32:45+00:00

Here as requested from my Modding Queue
Marika is Life and that this is a great song (How come I never find songs like these to map?)

[UWS's Hard]

00:08:364 (3) - Move 2 notches to the left for consistent spacing
00:08:843 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why note make them more consistent like this? the 1,2,3 slider have equal spacing and the 3,4 sliders have ends matching together http://puu.sh/d6Wni/b0c2b34500.jpg (My preference but this is your choice)
00:35:332 (4) - Move to the left 1 notch, it looks more appealing and isn't as spaced out to hit the next note, it's just a tiny adjustment but makes gameplay a lot better/smoother
00:42:992 (3) - Not sure about this note to get it to where you put it but can't tell if this is DS properly or not
00:46:503 (6) - Move down 2 notches for same reason
00:46:822 (1) - Move deeper into the previous slider, seems more appealing (My preference your choice) http://puu.sh/d6WBw/d1a5617778.jpg
00:55:120 (2) - Move a 1 notch to the left for better feels
01:03:896 (5) - Snap this properly
01:08:364 (3) - Not sure if this was intentional or not but it doesn't have to be spaced far, it feels the same with proper DS
01:13:471 (3) - Snap Properly
01:25:439 (1,2,3,4) - Reshape to something like this it's fixed with proper snapping already http://puu.sh/d6Ycu/578bf0aecf.jpg
01:29:109 (5) - Snap Properly
01:31:503 (4) - Move 1 to the left
01:34:694 (2) - 2-3 notches to the left based on how you see those spacing, want to keep them even
01:43:311 (1,2) - 2 notches to the left, reasoning behind this is that it's smoother to play and doesn't have to do just a tad more work to get over there to the next note but instead miss it. Think of it as a stream and how it is spaced evenly(depends on the song) but it helps to create movement that is natural and you follow one single path instead of adjusting it over and over again because of spacing
02:43:311 (1) - DS properly
Other than that it is a fenominal map, please don't take this mod too seriously. I was just moving and fixing things around where spaces looked clean and smooth, and did my best to achieve that. I do hope to see this get ranked in the near future because Marika is my waifu

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-11-27T03:54:46+00:00

thanks a bunch, I'll let uws to check it later

it's always nice to hear someone waiting my maps to be ranked~

Yauxo

1,622 posts

Joined June 2011

Yauxo 2014-11-28T01:54:54+00:00

Hi there, coming from your request in our/my Modding Queue. Be so kind to take some minutes (or seconds, lets be honest) to answer to my mods. Dont be a dick and just "lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr" without an explanation. If I told you something that was against your map, tell me why. This way mapper and modder both gain something.

Unrankable
Suggestion

Other than that, colours yellow to red indicate how important changes would be in my opinion

(copy paste end)

Phew, full spread 4 min, here we go

[General]
■ OD 7,5 for Hard is really damn difficult. There are Insanes with OD 7, so I'd h i g h l y recommend to lower it (5.5 - 6 maybe?)

[Insane]
■ 00:13:630 (1) - I think it'd actually be better if you replace this one with 2 shorter Sliders, where the 2nd would become the NC'd one. This would make more sense since the big white (strong beat) should be clickable. "Starting" a new beat/verse/whatever on a Sliderend is always ... meh

Similar cases

01:04:694 (1) -
01:37:886 (1) -
01:45:545 (1) -

■ 00:19:535 (2) - How about unstacking these so that they act like 00:20:173 (4,5) - ?
■ 00:30:386 (5) - 296/288? I know it's supposed to be an overlap, but touching the next object like this looks rather ugly. People wont notice the overlap anyway
■ 00:33:657 (4,5) - fix spacing to 0.7 DS (0-7 -> 1.0 change)
■ 00:53:045 (5) - How about this? Can be curved as well

img

■ 01:04:614 (11) - I really dislike the big spacing of this one. For most players, this wont be a big problem, but I could imagine that at least some less experienced players might get confused by this one. How about just placing these like you do with all the other streams? :v Even 1.0 would work better
■ 01:06:290 (1,2,3,4) - How about some increased spacing for these? The beats are pretty strong, so why not go a little crazy? I mean, even the normal circles have almost as much spacing :v
■ 01:30:226 (7,8) - At least make them not touch each other
■ 01:37:886 (1) - Give it some more spacing, 1.0 maybe. That way it'll be easier to see that this is >not< a 1/4 timing away from the Slider before, but 1/2 away.
■ 02:00:066 (6) - Stack properly
■ 02:40:758 (1) - Split this one up in two 1/1 Sliders maybe?
■ 03:34:215 (4) - The spacing makes it looks like this one would be 1/4 away, yet it's 1/2 away. Why isnt it spaced like 03:33:418 (2,3) - when it's basically the same thing?

■ There are some Blankets that could be improved here and there, but that's pretty minor. Fix some of them, if you feel fancy

[Hard]
■ See General
■ 00:29:907 (2,3) - ~~I'd space these out. The stack feels weird to me.~~ Actually. 00:29:588 (1) - is off - it feels really damn awkward. How about this? 6 is where the gap was, 7 is where the Slider started

img

■ 00:54:003 (3) - 291/78
■ 01:48:098 (1) - Not neccessarily a fan of this one since the sound starts off really quiet, but I guess it's still okay
■ 01:52:566 (2,3) - 02:02:779 (2,3) - unstack? Movement would support the song more imo
■ 03:07:247 (5) - rotate by -51, then move to 380/72?

■ The only thing that kinda bugged me was the high amount of stacks. You built up alot of movement in this diff, so most of the stacks ruin it.

[Normal]
■ 00:16:503 (3) - to keep consistency, NC here. Also, I really dislike the long, almost boring section that's coming up. You use 3x 3 repeat Sliders, which are basically long 3/1 sections where nothing really happens. Maybe thing about a remap of this section with more normal 1/1 Sliders
■ 00:43:949 (4) - Similar thing with what we had in Insane. It'd be better if the very strong tick would be supported with a clickable object instead of a weak Sliderend. Remove repeat and insert Circle/Slider instead?
■ 02:31:184 (6) - ^
■ 02:36:609 (6) - replace with one Circle and a Slider afterwards (so that it ends on 02:37:247 (1) - ). Similar reasons as ^
■ 03:02:141 (1) - replace with 2 Circle? Reason^

■ Some patterns are rather questionable in design, but Iam not the one to judge. My style differs alot from yours

[Easy]
■ 01:25:758 (2) - Overlap the tail properly
■ 01:34:375 (2,3,1) - Spacing jumps up and down here. keep it consistent
■ 01:38:683 (2) - y 226
■ 02:37:566 (2) - Overlap can be improvied (I think?)

■ Iam really not sure how BATs will handle the 1/2 usage like 00:34:375 (1) - and red-tick usage like 00:08:843 (1) - , since Easy diffs should be kept as simple as possible.
That aside, creative diff, I like it

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-11-28T18:25:32+00:00

Yauxo wrote:
[Insane]
■ 00:13:630 (1) - I think it'd actually be better if you replace this one with 2 shorter Sliders, where the 2nd would become the NC'd one. This would make more sense since the big white (strong beat) should be clickable. "Starting" a new beat/verse/whatever on a Sliderend is always ... meh (fixed the 1st and 4th but not with the other two since it's at least the best way of emphasizing I can think of)

Similar cases
01:04:694 (1) -
01:37:886 (1) -
01:45:545 (1) -

■ 00:19:535 (2) - How about unstacking these so that they act like 00:20:173 (4,5) - ? (sure)
■ 00:30:386 (5) - 296/288? I know it's supposed to be an overlap, but touching the next object like this looks rather ugly. People wont notice the overlap anyway (well as you said, ppl won't notice anyway)
■ 00:33:657 (4,5) - fix spacing to 0.7 DS (0-7 -> 1.0 change) (fixed, didn't notice before)
■ 00:53:045 (5) - How about this? Can be curved as well (I think it's fine already, placing it parallel-wise is better imo)

img

■ 01:04:614 (11) - I really dislike the big spacing of this one. For most players, this wont be a big problem, but I could imagine that at least some less experienced players might get confused by this one. How about just placing these like you do with all the other streams? :v Even 1.0 would work better (well, it's intentional for notes not to touch each others as a normal stream does, just say it's a little experiment)
■ 01:06:290 (1,2,3,4) - How about some increased spacing for these? The beats are pretty strong, so why not go a little crazy? I mean, even the normal circles have almost as much spacing :v (hm yes you have a point, but I'll just put it as is and compensate the jump on 01:07:088 (1) )
■ 01:30:226 (7,8) - At least make them not touch each other (fixed)
■ 01:37:886 (1) - Give it some more spacing, 1.0 maybe. That way it'll be easier to see that this is >not< a 1/4 timing away from the Slider before, but 1/2 away. (fixed)
■ 02:00:066 (6) - Stack properly (lol fixed)
■ 02:40:758 (1) - Split this one up in two 1/1 Sliders maybe? (well what's wrong with the repeating long slider, I know ppl rarely use it in insane tho, but it's just a ridiculous excuse)
■ 03:34:215 (4) - The spacing makes it looks like this one would be 1/4 away, yet it's 1/2 away. Why isnt it spaced like 03:33:418 (2,3) - when it's basically the same thing? (fixed a little, anyway it's not like ppl will often mistaken it)

■ There are some Blankets that could be improved here and there, but that's pretty minor. Fix some of them, if you feel fancy

[Normal]
■ 00:16:503 (3) - to keep consistency, NC here. Also, I really dislike the long, almost boring section that's coming up. You use 3x 3 repeat Sliders, which are basically long 3/1 sections where nothing really happens. Maybe thing about a remap of this section with more normal 1/1 Sliders (it's a style difference imo, well I know I made something out of my style this time, but just let it be for the time being)
■ 00:43:949 (4) - Similar thing with what we had in Insane. It'd be better if the very strong tick would be supported with a clickable object instead of a weak Sliderend. Remove repeat and insert Circle/Slider instead? (fixed)
■ 02:31:184 (6) - ^
■ 02:36:609 (6) - replace with one Circle and a Slider afterwards (so that it ends on 02:37:247 (1) - ). Similar reasons as ^
■ 03:02:141 (1) - replace with 2 Circle? Reason^ (fixed)

■ Some patterns are rather questionable in design, but Iam not the one to judge. My style differs alot from yours

thanks for the mod~

Rukaru

831 posts

Joined April 2012

Rukaru 2014-11-29T06:11:55+00:00

some suggestion from irc

13:02 El SolarBeam: bang adi, minta testplay dums o/
13:02 Rukaru: ok
13:03 *El SolarBeam is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520698 Marika - Soul Release]
13:03 El SolarBeam: baru sadar ganti nama jadi susah nyarinya orz
13:03 Rukaru: oshit 5 star o.o
13:04 El SolarBeam: tapi bukan shitmap kok /o/
13:04 *Rukaru is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520699 Marika - Soul Release]
13:07 Rukaru: ffuuuuu :O
13:07 Rukaru: I can't stream xD
13:08 El SolarBeam: rata" bermasalah sama stream ya xD
13:12 Rukaru: engga, emang aku aja yang ga bisa main stream. xD
13:13 El SolarBeam: owh kirain saya yg bikin streamnya jelek hue
13:13 El SolarBeam: pass /o/
13:14 Rukaru: engga lah, coba minta test play ke player pro
13:14 *Rukaru is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520699 Marika - Soul Release [Normal]]
13:15 El SolarBeam: ok nanti saya coba~
13:19 Rukaru: hmm...
13:19 El SolarBeam: how2spin
13:19 Rukaru: move your hand in circular motion, works 24/7 xD
13:19 El SolarBeam: awkwk ikr
13:20 Rukaru: untuk normal diff...uh gimana ya? harusnya bisa lebih baik
13:20 Rukaru: soalnya ada ritme yang kurang konsisten
13:20 Rukaru: nah, itu yang membuat feel nya agak kurang
13:20 El SolarBeam: agak ngebut ya bikinnya hue
13:21 Rukaru: spacing nya o.o
13:21 Rukaru: ga masalah sih sebenarnya xD
13:22 Rukaru: ini misalnya 00:36:928 (1) - 
13:23 El SolarBeam: normal kali ini kelewat simpel rasanya orz
13:23 Rukaru: harusnya note ini diganti pake 1/1
13:23 El SolarBeam: asalnya mau bikin easy tapi starnya kegedean
13:24 El SolarBeam: considering~
13:24 Rukaru: trus disini 00:37:566 (6) - yang pake 3/4 repeat slider
13:24 Rukaru: coba aja
13:25 Rukaru: dan... 00:39:481 (1,2,3,4) - lebih baik disamakan dengan ritme sebelumnya
13:26 El SolarBeam: hm 1/1
13:26 Rukaru: recommended to change this 00:59:907 (1,2,3) - 
13:26 Rukaru: transisi dari slider 1 ke 2 itu gimana ya, rasanya kea dipaksa gitu
13:27 El SolarBeam: semuanya pilihan sulit orz..
13:27 Rukaru: cieh transisi katanya. xD
13:27 El SolarBeam: transisi omgomg
13:30 El SolarBeam: brb disuruh mandi
13:31 El SolarBeam: kalo ada yg aneh lagi bilang aja owo)/
13:31 Rukaru: ok
13:34 Rukaru: 01:30:545 (1,2,3) - should be like this (lihat timeline, abaikan patternnya. xD) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2290297
13:35 Rukaru: 01:44:269 (2) - lebih baik jika disamakan ritme nya dengan 01:41:715 (2) - 
13:36 Rukaru: 01:56:715 (2) - mending ubah jadi 2 notes. biar dapet feelnya di 01:57:354 (3,4) - 
13:38 Rukaru: 02:06:928 (4) - gunakan slider 3/4 menimbang bahwa pada ritme sebelumnya kamu mengikuti suara gitar.
13:41 Rukaru: 02:45:226 (2) - pertimbangkan untuk mengubah slider ini ke 2/1 slider agar menghemat penggunaan 1/1 slider yang notabene terlalu banyak
13:41 Rukaru: 02:50:332 (2) - ini juga
13:42 Rukaru: 02:59:588 (1) - uh...dunno about this
13:43 Rukaru: gimana ya? kalo dihapus, terasa kosong. tapi kalo engga, ya...note ini membingungkan
13:46 Rukaru: 03:12:673 (1) - sepertinya lebih baik kalo diganti dengan 1 circle. trus tambah 2/3 slider disini 03:13:311 -
13:46 Rukaru: repeat slider ya ^
13:51 Rukaru: udah, itu aja
14:02 El SolarBeam: wogh dateng" udah banyak aja xD
14:02 El SolarBeam: makasih banyak bang
14:03 Rukaru: >bang. I feel old. :(
14:03 El SolarBeam: kan emang lebih tua dari saya hhe

kudosu pls xD

Saut

473 posts

Joined December 2013

Saut 2014-11-29T16:15:00+00:00

yo, as requested

[General]

a consistent increase of the stars (CS,AR,OD,HD) would be cool - easy and normal are quite close to each other followed by a "huge" gap and than same goes with hard and insane.
what about some sexy custom colors?
more than 1/3 of the map is covered in kai time -could be a problem at ranking later on.

[Ts8zs' Easy]

I would recommend to reduce the AR to 3
00:07:088 (2,3) - fix ds
00:08:843 (1,2) - ^ (should be between 1,17 and 1,23 - atleast at your map)
00:18:418 (3) - blanket - slightly rotate
00:19:056 (1) - ^
00:28:790 (4,1) - ^
00:32:620 (3,1) - ds
01:14:587 (4,2) - not perfectly stacked
01:24:162 (3) - ds
01:25:439 (1) - ^
01:29:268 (2) - ^
02:10:119 (2) - 2times reverse sliders are very hard for beginners particularly very short ones, because they cant spot them.
02:51:609 (3) - ^
02:35:652 (3,2) - stacking - oh btw you can move circles precisely by holding crtl+shift and then using the arrow keys (would also recommend a tiny grid)
02:46:184 - why do u leave this place blank? Would be confusing while playing
02:49:056 (4,2) - stacking - check all your stackings in this diff there are some more stacking issues (always a few coordinates)

Otherwise a pretty smooth diff - love the use of blankets

[Normal]

00:19:375 (2,4) - blankiniooo
00:32:141 (1,2,3,4) - perfect square would look pretty badass
00:59:907 (1,2) - http://prntscr.com/5bdw76 - little correction, looks better in my opinion :d (01:01:024 (2,3) - would also fit to this one then)
01:03:737 (5,6,1) - http://prntscr.com/5bdzzd what about this?
01:36:928 (4,1) - blanket
01:38:843 (3,1) - also check some of your stackings
02:36:928 (6) - whistle

[Insane]

00:05:013 (1,2) - ds of them is 1,37 so this 00:05:332 (3,4) - (slider end and (4)) should also have ~1,37 ds
01:00:545 (3,4,5) - this is beautiful
01:17:460 (4,5,6,7,8) - sounds badass with claps at 4 and 6
02:38:524 (3,4,5) - 4 should be 3 rotated by -120° and 5 should be 3 rotated by 120°
02:52:407 (1,1) - i dont get why u do dis

im running out of time but the rest seems pretty fine to me

If I find some more time+motivation i will edit this post and add the hard diff mod (and maybe some more aspects at the insane diff)
I hope my mod was still somehow useful and good luck at ranking!

Saut

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-11-29T17:27:01+00:00

well then, I'll reply to it max until next week, in case you're motivated to add something else~

anyway thanks!

Factorial

691 posts

Joined August 2013

Factorial 2014-12-03T01:53:04+00:00

From NLMQ

[Easy]
02:52:247 (1) - Recovery time too short, a guide is 1 full measure

[Insane]
02:31:024 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make slider?
03:19:375 (7) - Ctrl+G
03:12:992 (2) - ^

Well, that was a short mod. GL on map

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-12-03T05:58:24+00:00

=. =

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 187566
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Soul Release
TitleUnicode:Soul Release
Artist:Marika
ArtistUnicode:真里歌
Creator:El SolarBeam
Version:Ts8zs' Easy
Source:ハロー・レディ！
Tags:Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel ts8zs
BeatmapID:523589
BeatmapSetID:222790

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

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49,232,157566,2,0,P|88:224|128:232,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,248,158205,2,0,P|256:296|248:368,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,184,159481,6,0,P|139:150|132:110,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,40,160119,2,0,P|220:73|227:113,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,160758,2,0,P|295:211|334:203,2,79.9999999999999,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,184,161715,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,272,162035,6,0,P|200:312|192:352,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,162673,2,0,P|96:264|104:224,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,136,163311,2,0,P|143:96|135:57,2,79.9999999999999,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,96,164269,1,10,0:0:0:0:
56,192,164588,6,0,P|80:216|128:232,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,165226,2,0,P|245:196|274:223,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,165864,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,152,166343,2,0,L|144:104,1,40,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,96,166822,1,10,0:0:0:0:
56,192,167141,6,0,P|80:216|128:232,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,167779,2,0,P|245:196|274:223,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,168418,2,0,L|200:320,2,40,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,169056,2,0,P|127:168|142:131,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,169694,6,0,P|136:32|56:80,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,131,170652,2,0,P|214:155|294:107,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,48,171609,2,0,L|408:64,3,40,2|2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,172247,12,2,175758,0:0:0:0:
304,288,177354,6,0,L|224:272,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,177992,2,0,P|128:256|136:312,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,179269,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,96,179588,2,0,P|256:64|328:96,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,181184,6,0,P|88:88|104:48,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,181822,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,192,182141,6,0,P|138:218|95:225,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,183098,2,0,P|271:229|352:232,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,320,183896,2,0,P|264:352|144:288,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,200,185013,6,0,B|160:152|184:120|184:120|176:80,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,176,186290,2,0,L|304:168,2,40,2|0|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,186928,2,0,L|279:285,2,40,2|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,187567,6,0,P|104:304|64:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,188205,2,0,B|72:176|78:130|78:130|51:100,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,189481,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,64,189801,6,0,P|272:131|256:207,1,160,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,296,190758,2,0,P|256:304|296:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,191396,6,0,P|392:303|352:376,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,192673,2,0,P|304:184|264:176,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,193311,6,0,P|360:80|416:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,194588,2,0,P|152:80|96:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,195864,2,0,B|280:224|232:272|256:328,1,160,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,196822,2,0,P|384:304|424:296,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,197779,6,0,P|336:200|296:208,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,198417,2,0,P|209:243|245:290,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,120,199694,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,104,200013,2,0,P|329:40|251:31,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,201609,6,0,P|376:200|416:192,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,202247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,120,202566,2,0,P|254:150|247:193,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,203524,6,0,P|320:248|264:280,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,368,204322,2,0,P|173:292|208:203,1,200,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,205438,6,0,B|312:168|288:136|288:136|296:96,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,206715,2,0,L|168:192,2,40,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,207353,2,0,L|201:301,2,40,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,207992,6,0,P|368:328|408:320,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,208630,2,0,B|400:200|394:154|394:154|421:124,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,209906,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,80,210226,6,0,P|208:147|224:223,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,211183,2,0,P|224:320|184:312,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,211821,6,0,P|88:311|128:384,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,213098,2,0,P|176:192|216:184,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,213736,6,0,P|120:88|64:120,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,215013,2,0,P|304:24|360:56,2,120,2|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,120,216289,2,0,B|264:176|312:224|288:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,240,217247,2,0,P|160:248|120:240,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,218204,6,0,P|144:88|168:32,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,219481,2,0,L|280:88,3,40,2|0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,220279,2,0,L|296:192,1,40,2|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,220758,6,0,P|392:168|352:112,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,192,221556,2,0,P|288:248|328:304,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,328,222354,1,10,0:0:0:0:
472,248,222672,2,0,P|479:208|480:168,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,72,223311,6,0,B|428:86|428:86|388:70|348:86,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,224109,2,0,B|345:191|305:175|305:175|269:190,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,224906,2,0,P|176:191|184:230,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,225864,6,0,P|224:64|152:64,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,116,226662,2,0,P|124:151|184:152,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,227459,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,200,227778,2,0,P|360:152|336:120,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,56,228418,6,0,P|328:32|392:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,112,229215,2,0,P|402:136|343:125,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,230013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
166,106,230332,2,0,P|154:144|160:184,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,230970,12,0,234801,0:0:0:0:

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2014-12-03T13:37:25+00:00

Hi! o/
Nice Mapset , and Nice Song !

UWS's Hard
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00:29:588 (1) - Ctrl+G ? flow will be better
00:43:949 (3) - ^
01:31:024 (3) - you sure about this ? player will miss this slider
01:37:168 - add note here .. 01:37:088 (1,2 ) - i think , player think this is 3 notes stream ..
01:57:832 (3) - Ctrl+G "i think" make flow better ..

some irc for Insane difficult

2014-12-03 18:50 El SolarBeam: hai sky trias o/
2014-12-03 18:50 El SolarBeam: boleh minta tolong tes map?
2014-12-03 18:50 Sky Trias: halo :)
2014-12-03 18:50 Sky Trias: ok :)
2014-12-03 18:51 Sky Trias: lagunya ??
2014-12-03 18:51 El SolarBeam: akhir" ini kekurangan testplayer haha
2014-12-03 18:51 El SolarBeam: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520698 Marika - Soul Release]
2014-12-03 18:51 Sky Trias: hahaha ok :)
2014-12-03 18:52 Sky Trias: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520698 Marika - Soul Release]
2014-12-03 18:56 El SolarBeam: gimana, kalo ada bagian yg nyesek bilang aja hhe
2014-12-03 18:57 Sky Trias: ok sip :)
2014-12-03 18:57 Sky Trias: modding nih ceritanya xD
2014-12-03 18:58 Sky Trias: ok nice :)
2014-12-03 18:59 El SolarBeam: butuh masukan aja sih, tapi kalo pengen mod juga boleh xD
2014-12-03 19:01 Sky Trias: 00:10:120 (1) - ga seharusnya di pas in sama 00:10:439 (2) -
2014-12-03 19:01 El SolarBeam: *buka catatan
2014-12-03 19:05 Sky Trias: ... test hitsoundnya ya
2014-12-03 19:06 El SolarBeam: ok
2014-12-03 19:08 Sky Trias: 00:13:630 (1) - whistle?
2014-12-03 19:09 El SolarBeam: hm, clap fits better imo
2014-12-03 19:09 Sky Trias: ehh ok :)
2014-12-03 19:10 Sky Trias: 01:09:801 (4) - finish ?
2014-12-03 19:12 Sky Trias: 00:31:822 (1) - whistle + 00:32:141 (2) - finish ?
2014-12-03 19:13 El SolarBeam: rasanya agak janggal sih nyimpen finish di tengah part lagu, tapi nanti saya pikir" :)
2014-12-03 19:14 Sky Trias: 01:29:907 (6) - ga jadiin slider aja ?
2014-12-03 19:14 Sky Trias: ok
2014-12-03 19:14 El SolarBeam: haha, itu namanya teknik anti-jump
2014-12-03 19:15 El SolarBeam: jadi ga selamanya perlu sama slider
2014-12-03 19:15 Sky Trias: ok .. agak ngestack sih kalo dilihat di edit xD
2014-12-03 19:16 El SolarBeam: iya sih, kalo di editor keliatannya kurang cantik x)
2014-12-03 19:16 El SolarBeam: tapi yg penting gameplay hhe
2014-12-03 19:18 Sky Trias: 03:16:662 (2,4) - ga di ctrl+g?
2014-12-03 19:19 Sky Trias: kayaknya sih flownya agak enak sedikit ..
2014-12-03 19:21 El SolarBeam: hm boleh juga, nanti saya coba edit sedikit
2014-12-03 19:21 El SolarBeam: nice catch xD
2014-12-03 19:21 Sky Trias: HP drain nya kurang tinggi tuh :) coba di jadiin 7 aja .. menurut saya :p
2014-12-03 19:22 Sky Trias: sebelumnya aku ga pernah irc ;-; gmana nih?
2014-12-03 19:23 El SolarBeam: hm, udah dicek option save chatlognya?
2014-12-03 19:23 Sky Trias: belum
2014-12-03 19:23 Sky Trias: sekarang udah
2014-12-03 19:24 El SolarBeam: wah ga ke-save sih kalo baru sekarang wkwk
2014-12-03 19:24 El SolarBeam: bentar saya upload notepad-nya
2014-12-03 19:24 Sky Trias: ok :3
2014-12-03 19:32 Sky Trias: err .. 00:50:971 (6) - ctrl+g?
2014-12-03 19:33 Sky Trias: 00:54:801 (1) - ini memang ngikutin 00:53:684 (2) - ?? kalo menurut saya sih lebih baik di ctrl+g .. :)
2014-12-03 19:34 El SolarBeam: itu sengaja sih, jadi flownya membentuk lingkaran~
2014-12-03 19:34 El SolarBeam: (coba aja ikutin notenya di gameplay)
2014-12-03 19:38 Sky Trias: btw ane mau makan dulu ;) mungkin segitu aja .. oh iya .. nanti tambahan buat hardnya aku tulis di post :)

owo)b Good Luck !

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2014-12-06T04:58:52+00:00

Helloooo
Not 14045 here~

[General]
Clear!

[Easy]

I think you over use this slider http://puu.sh/dhTZi/27732d5986.jpg why not use 1/1 slider instead? sometimes I hear the rhythm not fit with the song e.g. 00:19:056 (1,2) - Well it's still playable though but since it's lowest diff maybe you can use simple rhythm
00:23:684 (5) - Add whistle on head? I hear drum sound begin to hit there
00:33:896 (2) - Delete clap on tail? it's better just use whistle
00:34:375 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - The hitsound not really fit with the song especialy drum sound, so I sugest: 00:34:854 (2) - Add clap on tail, 00:35:332 (3) - Swap the clap from head to tail, 00:35:811 (4) - Swap the clap from tail to head, 00:36:290 (5) - Swap the clap from tail to head, 00:37:407 (2) - Add clap on tail, 00:37:885 (3) - Swap clap from head to tail, 00:38:843 (5) - Add clap on head, 00:39:960 (2) - Add clap on tail, 00:40:439 (3) - Swap clap from head to tail, 00:40:918 (4) - Swap clap from tail to head, 00:41:396 (5) - Add clap. The one I sugest is based on drum sound and I think it'll sound better
01:25:758 (2) - Add clap and whistle on tail
01:27:513 (5) - 01:37:726 (5) - 01:32:619 (4) - Add clap on head?
01:38:204 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - And again the hitsound on that part very odd, I sugest 01:38:683 (2) - Add clap on tail, 01:39:162 (3) - Swap clap from head to tail, 01:39:641 (4) - Swap clap from tail to head, 01:40:119 (5) - Swap clap from tail to head, 01:41:237 (2) - Add clap on tail, 01:41:715 (3) - Swap clap from head to tail, 01:42:194 (4) - Swap clap from tail to head, 01:42:672 (5) - Add clap on head, 01:43:789 (2) - Add clap on tail, 01:44:268 (3) - Swap clap from head to tail, 01:44:747 (4) - Swap clap from tail to head, 01:45:225 (5) - Add clap
01:48:098 (5) - Delete clap? it's better without, since there's only bass sound there
02:10:917 (3) - Add clap on head
Completely pull the break up to here 02:11:396 -

The rest looks fine but this kind of Easy is prety hard as the lowest diff, sorry just focus on hitsound that I think can be improved

[Normal]

Set pake AR 5 aja kak, agak lebay kalo AR 6 apalagi slider speednya dan bpmnya lumayan tinggi
00:01:184 (1) - Kayanya lingkarannya kurang melingkar kak, yang bagian bawah khususnya
00:01:184 (1) - Add whistle and clap on tail
00:35:013 (3) - Add clap on reverse
00:36:928 (1,2,3) - Ritmenya bagusnya kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/diAYY/d6cc5f4445.jpg dengan hitsound (1) pake whistle, (2) kosong, (3) tambah clap di awal sama reverse, soalnya mengikuti ritme sebelumnya 00:34:056 (1,2,3,4) -
01:38:843 (3) - Add clap on reverse
02:00:864 (1,2) - Kak kalo dibuat blanket bagaimana? di kebawahin dikit gitu, lagian engga ngeganggu flownya kok. Ada beberapa yang kaya gitu lagi e.g. 02:41:396 (4,1) - , tp nanti dikirain nasi mod XD
02:06:928 (4) - Add clap on head, karena ritmenya sama kaya sebelumnya 02:04:375 (2,3) - Then add clap here on head 02:07:726 (5) - terlebih nadanya sama kaya bagian kiai selanjutnya 03:35:971 (1,2,3,4) -
02:20:652 (3) - Add finish on head? I hear finish faintly there
02:30:545 (5) - Add finish on tail, same reason

I'm not doing nasi mod there, just matter of opinion imo

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Your drain time is exceed mine, so I just mod two diff, but if I'll take a look on hard and Insane later

mana vayne

158 posts

Joined May 2011

mana vayne 2014-12-06T12:20:30+00:00

mod

17:55 *mana vayne is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520698 Marika - Soul Release [Insane]]
2014-12-06 17:56 mana vayne: mau ku gan
2014-12-06 17:56 mana vayne: ganti patternnya
2014-12-06 17:57 El SolarBeam: lol gapapa sih
2014-12-06 17:58 mana vayne: ada pattern mu susah di baca hue
2014-12-06 17:58 El SolarBeam: awkwk stream kah
2014-12-06 17:59 mana vayne: y sama jumpnya kwkwkw
2014-12-06 17:59 El SolarBeam: coba yg mana, barangkali jadi masukan
2014-12-06 18:01 mana vayne: sol kamu bisa gak suara tick rate disini di kecilin
2014-12-06 18:01 mana vayne: 00:01:184
2014-12-06 18:02 El SolarBeam: ooh, boleh
2014-12-06 18:03 El SolarBeam: *irc mod aja sekalian hhe
2014-12-06 18:04 mana vayne: lel jadi w mod nih
2014-12-06 18:04 El SolarBeam: lagi butuh sp nih wkwkw
2014-12-06 18:04 El SolarBeam: 1 diff juga gapapa deh
2014-12-06 18:06 mana vayne: y wes ntar dulu deh lagi mau maem
2014-12-06 18:07 El SolarBeam: woke /o/
2014-12-06 18:16 mana vayne: uda kamu tambahin kah nada suaranya
2014-12-06 18:17 mana vayne: kecilin tick ratenya
2014-12-06 18:18 El SolarBeam: sip
2014-12-06 18:19 mana vayne: 00:28:949 (5,6) - sejajar kayak gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2314950
2014-12-06 18:20 El SolarBeam: blanketnya jadi lepas sih, tapi saya pikir2 dulu
2014-12-06 18:22 mana vayne: ok deh
2014-12-06 18:29 mana vayne: oh yeah fik 00:35:811 (5,7) -  napa gak dipass kan ma sllider
2014-12-06 18:29 mana vayne: 7 nya gak
2014-12-06 18:29 mana vayne: 00:37:407 (2) -  sama ^
2014-12-06 18:30 El SolarBeam: oiya, yg itu sebenernya udah fixed, tapi belum diupdate
2014-12-06 18:30 El SolarBeam: nice catch btw
2014-12-06 18:30 mana vayne: ini juga leh
2014-12-06 18:31 mana vayne: 00:44:588 (1) -  maju kan ke depan deh dikit ya atur streamnya sama kaya 8,9,10
2014-12-06 18:31 El SolarBeam: hm, disitu ada SV change jadi sengaja agak dipisah gan
2014-12-06 18:34 mana vayne: 01:41:237 (2) -  pass kan slider deh (kalau mau )
2014-12-06 18:34 mana vayne: atau uda di fix ?
2014-12-06 18:35 El SolarBeam: lupa wkwk, tapi kayaknya udah
2014-12-06 18:47 mana vayne: 01:29:747 bagian ini emang di kosongin ye
2014-12-06 18:48 mana vayne: 01:29:747
2014-12-06 18:48 El SolarBeam: sengaja itu, buat pattern antijump
2014-12-06 18:49 mana vayne: fiq di 01:30:386 (8) -  itu x sama y mu berapa ?
2014-12-06 18:50 El SolarBeam: x: 404 | y:124
2014-12-06 18:51 mana vayne: ganti deh  jadi x: 404  y :136
2014-12-06 18:52 El SolarBeam: tapi jarak ke slidernya jadi ga konsisten?
2014-12-06 18:53 mana vayne: lihat lah
2014-12-06 18:53 mana vayne: kalau menurut ku sih konsisten tapi gak tahu kamu
2014-12-06 18:54 El SolarBeam: umkay
2014-12-06 18:54 mana vayne: btw stream yang masih berhambur di rapiin donk fiq
2014-12-06 18:55 mana vayne: inb4 bagian sini w bingun lol 01:36:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2014-12-06 18:55 El SolarBeam: lol berhambur
2014-12-06 18:55 El SolarBeam: ok
2014-12-06 18:59 mana vayne: 00:33:258 (1,2,3,4,5) -  bagian ini kamu sengaja dekat ma slider 1 (hijau) ?
2014-12-06 19:00 El SolarBeam: sengaja nempel, biar gampang ditangkep
2014-12-06 19:02 mana vayne: ok deh segitu aja yang  bermasalah (kayaknya)
2014-12-06 19:03 El SolarBeam: wogh sip thanks o7

17:55 *mana vayne is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520698 Marika - Soul Release [Insane]]
2014-12-06 17:56 mana vayne: mau ku gan
2014-12-06 17:56 mana vayne: ganti patternnya
2014-12-06 17:57 El SolarBeam: lol gapapa sih
2014-12-06 17:58 mana vayne: ada pattern mu susah di baca hue
2014-12-06 17:58 El SolarBeam: awkwk stream kah
2014-12-06 17:59 mana vayne: y sama jumpnya kwkwkw
2014-12-06 17:59 El SolarBeam: coba yg mana, barangkali jadi masukan
2014-12-06 18:01 mana vayne: sol kamu bisa gak suara tick rate disini di kecilin
2014-12-06 18:01 mana vayne: 00:01:184
2014-12-06 18:02 El SolarBeam: ooh, boleh
2014-12-06 18:03 El SolarBeam: *irc mod aja sekalian hhe
2014-12-06 18:04 mana vayne: lel jadi w mod nih
2014-12-06 18:04 El SolarBeam: lagi butuh sp nih wkwkw
2014-12-06 18:04 El SolarBeam: 1 diff juga gapapa deh
2014-12-06 18:06 mana vayne: y wes ntar dulu deh lagi mau maem
2014-12-06 18:07 El SolarBeam: woke /o/
2014-12-06 18:16 mana vayne: uda kamu tambahin kah nada suaranya
2014-12-06 18:17 mana vayne: kecilin tick ratenya
2014-12-06 18:18 El SolarBeam: sip
2014-12-06 18:19 mana vayne: 00:28:949 (5,6) - sejajar kayak gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2314950
2014-12-06 18:20 El SolarBeam: blanketnya jadi lepas sih, tapi saya pikir2 dulu
2014-12-06 18:22 mana vayne: ok deh
2014-12-06 18:29 mana vayne: oh yeah fik 00:35:811 (5,7) -  napa gak dipass kan ma sllider
2014-12-06 18:29 mana vayne: 7 nya gak
2014-12-06 18:29 mana vayne: 00:37:407 (2) -  sama ^
2014-12-06 18:30 El SolarBeam: oiya, yg itu sebenernya udah fixed, tapi belum diupdate
2014-12-06 18:30 El SolarBeam: nice catch btw
2014-12-06 18:30 mana vayne: ini juga leh
2014-12-06 18:31 mana vayne: 00:44:588 (1) -  maju kan ke depan deh dikit ya atur streamnya sama kaya 8,9,10
2014-12-06 18:31 El SolarBeam: hm, disitu ada SV change jadi sengaja agak dipisah gan
2014-12-06 18:34 mana vayne: 01:41:237 (2) -  pass kan slider deh (kalau mau )
2014-12-06 18:34 mana vayne: atau uda di fix ?
2014-12-06 18:35 El SolarBeam: lupa wkwk, tapi kayaknya udah
2014-12-06 18:47 mana vayne: 01:29:747 bagian ini emang di kosongin ye
2014-12-06 18:48 mana vayne: 01:29:747
2014-12-06 18:48 El SolarBeam: sengaja itu, buat pattern antijump
2014-12-06 18:49 mana vayne: fiq di 01:30:386 (8) -  itu x sama y mu berapa ?
2014-12-06 18:50 El SolarBeam: x: 404 | y:124
2014-12-06 18:51 mana vayne: ganti deh  jadi x: 404  y :136
2014-12-06 18:52 El SolarBeam: tapi jarak ke slidernya jadi ga konsisten?
2014-12-06 18:53 mana vayne: lihat lah
2014-12-06 18:53 mana vayne: kalau menurut ku sih konsisten tapi gak tahu kamu
2014-12-06 18:54 El SolarBeam: umkay
2014-12-06 18:54 mana vayne: btw stream yang masih berhambur di rapiin donk fiq
2014-12-06 18:55 mana vayne: inb4 bagian sini w bingun lol 01:36:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2014-12-06 18:55 El SolarBeam: lol berhambur
2014-12-06 18:55 El SolarBeam: ok
2014-12-06 18:59 mana vayne: 00:33:258 (1,2,3,4,5) -  bagian ini kamu sengaja dekat ma slider 1 (hijau) ?
2014-12-06 19:00 El SolarBeam: sengaja nempel, biar gampang ditangkep
2014-12-06 19:02 mana vayne: ok deh segitu aja yang  bermasalah (kayaknya)
2014-12-06 19:03 El SolarBeam: wogh sip thanks o7

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El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-12-08T10:28:26+00:00

Saut wrote:
yo, as requested

[General]
a consistent increase of the stars (CS,AR,OD,HD) would be cool - easy and normal are quite close to each other followed by a "huge" gap and than same goes with hard and insane. (hm yes, I'll start thinking about it after someone give this bubble)
what about some sexy custom colors? (fixed)
more than 1/3 of the map is covered in kai time -could be a problem at ranking later on. (nah, I've just do what the music provides, no problem about it until now)

[Normal]
00:19:375 (2,4) - blankiniooo (fixed)
00:32:141 (1,2,3,4) - perfect square would look pretty badass (nope, I squared it with the previous slider, and besides it would ruin the blanket to the next slider)
00:59:907 (1,2) - http://prntscr.com/5bdw76 - little correction, looks better in my opinion :d (01:01:024 (2,3) - would also fit to this one then) (looks nice, but I still can't find way to manipulate the spacing)
01:03:737 (5,6,1) - http://prntscr.com/5bdzzd what about this? (nice!)
01:36:928 (4,1) - blanket (no, it doesn't meant to be)
01:38:843 (3,1) - also check some of your stackings (nah, it's fine and nobody will notice anyway)
02:36:928 (6) - whistle (well I'm sure I've added it)

[Insane]
00:05:013 (1,2) - ds of them is 1,37 so this 00:05:332 (3,4) - (slider end and (4)) should also have ~1,37 ds (nah, it's meant to emphasize the static tone of the music so it's intentionally have different DS)
01:00:545 (3,4,5) - this is beautiful (thanks~)
01:17:460 (4,5,6,7,8) - sounds badass with claps at 4 and 6 (fixed)
02:38:524 (3,4,5) - 4 should be 3 rotated by -120° and 5 should be 3 rotated by 120° (fixed with my own way)
02:52:407 (1,1) - i dont get why u do dis (and I don't get what's your point)

im running out of time but the rest seems pretty fine to me

If I find some more time+motivation i will edit this post and add the hard diff mod (and maybe some more aspects at the insane diff)
I hope my mod was still somehow useful and good luck at ranking!

Saut

Neil Leo wrote:
From NLMQ

[Insane]
02:31:024 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make slider? (I don't think it's necessary)
03:19:375 (7) - Ctrl+G (nope, it would break the flow)
03:12:992 (2) - ^

Well, that was a short mod. GL on map

Mako Sakata wrote:
Helloooo
Not 14045 here~ (awkwkw)

[Normal]
Set pake AR 5 aja kak, agak lebay kalo AR 6 apalagi slider speednya dan bpmnya lumayan tinggi (sebenernya justru gara" BPMnya tinggi ARnya juga seharusnya ikut tinggi, ok 5.5 aja deh biar imbang)
00:01:184 (1) - Kayanya lingkarannya kurang melingkar kak, yang bagian bawah khususnya (iya kah, tapi gapapa gaakan terlalu keliatan sih hhe)
00:01:184 (1) - Add whistle and clap on tail (fixed)
00:35:013 (3) - Add clap on reverse (suaranya terlalu keras kak kalo pake clap)
00:36:928 (1,2,3) - Ritmenya bagusnya kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/diAYY/d6cc5f4445.jpg dengan hitsound (1) pake whistle, (2) kosong, (3) tambah clap di awal sama reverse, soalnya mengikuti ritme sebelumnya 00:34:056 (1,2,3,4) - (sip kak)
01:38:843 (3) - Add clap on reverse (sda)
02:00:864 (1,2) - Kak kalo dibuat blanket bagaimana? di kebawahin dikit gitu, lagian engga ngeganggu flownya kok. Ada beberapa yang kaya gitu lagi e.g. 02:41:396 (4,1) - , tp nanti dikirain nasi mod XD (ah ga masalah sih kak, emang sengaja itu hhe)
02:06:928 (4) - Add clap on head, karena ritmenya sama kaya sebelumnya 02:04:375 (2,3) - Then add clap here on head 02:07:726 (5) - terlebih nadanya sama kaya bagian kiai selanjutnya 03:35:971 (1,2,3,4) - (awkwk kelupaan, makasih kak)
02:20:652 (3) - Add finish on head? I hear finish faintly there (terlalu keras kak kalo dikasih finish)
02:30:545 (5) - Add finish on tail, same reason (sama)
I'm not doing nasi mod there, just matter of opinion imo (namanya nazi kak, bukan nasi hhe)

[]
Your drain time is exceed mine, so I just mod two diff, but if I'll take a look on hard and Insane later

thanks everyone for your helpful mods!
sorry I can't reply irc mods properly since it's too tiring to copy-paste it again, but I ensure you I've fixed some of them

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 2014-12-08T15:05:58+00:00

lol pm req~

[General]
Personally, I think the gap between Easy and Normal diff is a bit small, consider to make Easy a bit easier 0.0

[Ts8zs's Easy]
00:07:088 (2,3) - blanket
00:10:758 (4,1) - blanket when you fixed the blanket -> 00:12:992 (3) - stack
00:23:205 (4,5) - patterns like this can be replaced by a long slider, to make the Easy diff a bit easier. The Easy diff now seems a bit hard.
00:34:375 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:36:928 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^ really needs a change or it's hard for newbies to play
a recommended rhythm here:

SPOILER

the original pattern:

the modified pattern:

00:41:396 (5,1) - blanket
00:56:715 (3,1) - blanket
01:06:290 (2,3) - a confusing pattern, since it's hard for newbies to react on a reverse which reverses for more than one time.
01:07:566 (1,2) - blanket
01:17:779 (1) - why not remove this spin and leave a break? Since it's an Easy diff
01:33:098 (1,2,3,1) - keep the DS
01:38:204 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - same as what I said above
01:59:268 (2,3) - blanket
02:06:928 (3,4) - blanket
02:10:119 (2,3) - same stuff has been mentioned above
02:31:822 (1,3) - blanket
02:41:715 (4,1,2) - move slider one and two a little bit left to make it look cleaner
02:45:864 (3,4,5) - It's a reallyyyyyyyyy confusing stuff! fix it right now! There are instument sounds on 02:46:024 02:46:184 why not make a regular slider?
03:09:481 (3,1) - blanket
03:10:758 (2,1) - blanket
03:17:779 (1,2) - blanket
03:19:694 (3,4) - blanket
03:28:630 (2,3,1) - blanket
03:31:183 (2,1) - blanket
03:39:481 (2,3) - mentioned above
03:47:778 (4,1) - blanket

Overall it's a nice diff~ Sorry for so many nazis

[Normal]
00:05:013 (3) - move 3 a bit right like this, to make the flow more fluent

SPOILER

00:07:566 (3,4,1) - This pattern can be more symmetrical~
00:11:396 (1,2) - blanket
00:25:120 (3,4) - blanket
00:29:269 (1,2,3) - symmetrical?
00:39:481 (1,2,3) - This flow feels bad~~ Try a flow like this?

SPOILER

01:11:396 (3) - It's better moved left
01:12:035 (4) - why not blanket with 01:11:396 (3) - ?
01:13:949 (3) - yes move right plz ;w;
01:23:524 (2,3) - I admit this is not so goodlooking

01:26:077 (2,3) - blanket
01:31:822 (2,3) - This comes like a surprise =A= Consider place more patterns like this or just kill this pattern
01:37:886 (1) - moving right makes this pattern look better and also make full use of the space here
01:53:843 (2,3) - blanket
01:59:907 (4) - move it left
02:19:056 (1) - rotate about 10° 02:19:056 (1,1) - consider stack the tail
02:23:843 (4,3) - A stack
02:48:737 (4) - rotate a bit
02:57:354 (1,1) - delete them and leave a break there~
03:44:588 (3,4) -

Honestly, I think this diff needs more work qaq Ganbare~

[UWS's Hard]
00:13:949 (1) - I guess it's better for this slider to have a curve since the instument's volume is going down here~ A straight slider just feel a bit fast
00:24:801 (3) - What about placing it like this? I guess it feels better

SPOILER

00:47:779 (4,5) - having curves look better?
02:00:226 (2,1) - A stack?
03:22:566 (5,1) - place the slider better?

Nothing serious to say here~ A nice diff~

[Insane]
00:05:332 (3,4) - Increase the DS between them
00:15:864 (8) - ctrl + G will feel better, in this case you can refer to the pic, I think this flow is better, also stack 00:15:705 (7,1)

SPOILER

00:24:801 (3) - make it two circles with a jump
00:39:003 (7,9) - blanket
01:02:141 (1) - I guess this note is not looking so good
02:39:960 (3,4,5) - place this pattern better XD
02:39:162 (5,1) - stack

the patterns in the later part of this diff looks nice lol

That's all ~ Good Luck www

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-12-08T22:06:26+00:00

wooh finally another full check \o/

~~I'll try remapping the normal since it's not going like I want to be~~ nah, I feel high now

examination wrote:
lol pm req~

[General]
Personally, I think the gap between Easy and Normal diff is a bit small, consider to make Easy a bit easier 0.0 (made the normal harder instead)

[Normal]
Honestly, I think this diff needs more work qaq Ganbare~ (< maybe you just have to be this straightforward just like this from now on heheh)

[Insane]
00:05:332 (3,4) - Increase the DS between them (nah, it's intended to emphasize the static tone atm)
00:15:864 (8) - ctrl + G will feel better, in this case you can refer to the pic, I think this flow is better, also stack 00:15:705 (7,1) - (oh, nice idea I have to admit)
SPOILER
00:24:801 (3) - make it two circles with a jump (well it's not like it's a bad idea but both the head and the tail doesn't have that much tone different so doesn't suit that well imo)
00:39:003 (7,9) - blanket (tbh doesn't really hoping blanket mod on insane diff but fine, considering it as a hard work)
01:02:141 (1) - I guess this note is not looking so good (it's an interesting pattern to play at least)
02:39:960 (3,4,5) - place this pattern better XD (fixed, I suppose ww)
02:39:162 (5,1) - stack (fixed, lol though that's far)

the patterns in the later part of this diff looks nice lol (thanks~)

That's all ~ Good Luck www

thanks for the mod and sorry for my selfishness ww

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-12-13T07:07:06+00:00

From my queue~

[Normal]

00:34:056 (1,2) - swap NC. add NC at melody changing point
01:37:886 (1,2) - ^
01:47:779 (1,2) - ^
03:17:460 (1,2) - ^
00:55:918 (4,1) - avoid this overlapping
01:17:460 (5) - i prefer a circle not 1/2 slider
01:22:566 (1) - I prefer to delete
01:31:503 (3,4) - following vocal is better, imo. suggeion~
01:58:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm suggetion
02:06:928 (5,6) - a little hard to find rhythm. howa about this
?

[Insane]

00:13:630 (1,2) - swap NC
00:21:130- add a note
00:24:801 (3) - how about Ctrl+G?
00:32:779 (1) - mmm, this SV changing is not suitable for music, imo
00:34:056 (1,2) - swap NC
00:44:508 (10,1) - make DS short
01:04:375 (10,11,1) - ^ I prefer to overlap
01:31:822- add a note (I recommend to stack on the head of 01:31:981 (1) - )
01:37:886 (1,2) - swap NC
02:27:992 (9) - NC. combo per 8 is good looking
03:17:460 (1,2) - swap NC

[Ts8zs' Easy]

01:25:439 ~ 02:03:418- almost same pattern as 00:21:609 ~ 00:59:588- . that's so boring
02:57:354 ~ ^
02:46:343 (4) - hard to find rhythm for beginner. 1/1 pattern is better
02:52:247 (1) - end at 02:56:077

[UWS's Hard]

00:22:566 (3) - I prefer to stack on 00:21:928 (2) - like 00:19:375 (2,3,4,5) -
01:42:354- finish is on purpose?
02:17:141 (5) - I prefer to stack on the head of 02:17:301 (6) -
03:27:035 (3,4,5) - a little confusing because of continuous stack pattern at this part. so, why not avoid correct stack?
SPOILER
03:35:013 (5,2) - stack correctly

~Good Luck~

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-12-13T21:30:21+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~ （まさか図星かｗｗ。ところでRandomEffect 久しぶりー）

[Normal]
00:34:056 (1,2) - swap NC. add NC at melody changing point（でもupbeat(white tick)に NCを使ってのほうがいいよ）
01:37:886 (1,2) - ^ （えと、実はどちでもいいよ、私そのNCパターンよく使う）
01:47:779 (1,2) - ^
03:17:460 (1,2) - ^
00:55:918 (4,1) - avoid this overlapping　（まぁ、そうだね。直した）
01:17:460 (5) - i prefer a circle not 1/2 slider　（え、でもcircleを使ったら格好わるくなるだと思う）
01:22:566 (1) - I prefer to delete　（そのsliderを消えったらちょうど誤魔化すると難しくなるだと思う）
01:31:503 (3,4) - following vocal is better, imo. suggeion~　（まぁ、それはいいけど、sliderのほうが簡単にフォローできるだと思う）
01:58:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm suggetion　（直した）
02:06:928 (5,6) - a little hard to find rhythm. howa about this?　（どうかな、フォローすることはちょっと難しい）
[Insane]
00:13:630 (1,2) - swap NC　（直した）
00:21:130- add a note　（でもそこはbeatがないよ）
00:24:801 (3) - how about Ctrl+G?　（DSは変になってから、それでいいさ）
00:32:779 (1) - mmm, this SV changing is not suitable for music, imo　（私にとっていいけど、あとで考える）
00:34:056 (1,2) - swap NC　（normalと同じ理解）
00:44:508 (10,1) - make DS short　（それはSV changeがあるから）
01:04:375 (10,11,1) - ^ I prefer to overlap　（いえ、そのパターンは面白いからｗｗ）
01:31:822- add a note (I recommend to stack on the head of 01:31:981 (1) - )　（でもdrumの音がないよ（私それをフォローするから））
01:37:886 (1,2) - swap NC　（normalと同じ理解）
02:27:992 (9) - NC. combo per 8 is good looking　（あ、そうだ。忘れてたｗ）
03:17:460 (1,2) - swap NC　（normalと同じ理解）
~Good Luck~

modありがとうー

- Milhofo -

683 posts

Joined February 2014

- Milhofo - 2014-12-16T18:48:31+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue

!! - Very Important
!! - Important

[General]

The easy and normal diffs are a bit hard for the difficulty they should be, I'd even consider them as normal and hard diffs, respectively.
OD on Insane could be pushed to 8 imo

[Ts8zs' Easy]

02:45:864 (3) - this single note breaks consistency since you've been using sliders the rest of the song !!
02:46:343 (4) - is a bit too close to 02:47:141 (1)
02:47:141 (1,4) - that overlap could have been done better !!
Nothing else, pretty good map, maybe just a bit too hard for an easy

[Normal]

imo the spacing between notes should be lower, and the SV seems a bit too fast in some parts (for a normal diff) !!
01:00:226 (2) - move a bit to the left and down, eg x:264 y:64
01:05:013 (1,2) - this overlap is a bit ugly, maybe rotate 1
01:12:673 (1) - not sure if the tip is actually in time with the guitar (if that's what you are trying to achieve)
01:06:290 (4) - this could be matched with 03:39:481 (4,5) , the first one feels too long !!
Overall I think the map could have been polished better here and there, the spacings variate a bit too much and some parts could have followed the vocals instead of the instrumental, but doesn't mean I didn't like it ^^

[UWS's Hard]

00:46:822 (1,3) - blanket?
00:57:035 (1) - you could pull this down to blanket 00:56:715 (8) like this:
SPOILER
02:00:226 (2,1) - bad overlap
02:02:141 (6,1) - possible blanket
02:04:854 (4,2) - ugly overlap
02:11:396 (1,3) - ^ rotating 3 just a bit would help
nothing else, fun map

[Insane]

you probably heard this a lot but I think a spinner fits better than 00:01:184 (1) xd
00:11:077 (4,3) - possible overlap
I think 00:32:779 (1) should be further from 00:33:258 (1) , always missing the timing like this >.<
00:44:508 (10,1) - why are these so far apart? (comparing to the rest of the stream) !!
01:17:460 (4,5,6,7,8) - you make it so people that spin clockwise have a hard time (me ;
01:44:428 (4,5) - blanket
02:04:375 (3,5) - these are not perfectly overlapped (how did I even notice this ?!)
02:31:104 (4) - this note isn't actually played by the drums, so the stream is too long !!
nothing else, this is by far the best map of the set, so much fun it deserves a star :3

I wasn't thinking on modding every diff but I guess I got carried away lol, hope the mod helps somehow, the Insane diff was great gl on getting it ranked o/

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-12-16T22:20:30+00:00

Milhofo wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue

!! - Very Important
!! - Important

[General]
The easy and normal diffs are a bit hard for the difficulty they should be, I'd even consider them as normal and hard diffs, respectively. (it's fine though, most maps with >180BPM have this much of cruelty)
OD on Insane could be pushed to 8 imo (haha pro, sure I'd consider since the insane has same OD with hard)
[Normal]
imo the spacing between notes should be lower, and the SV seems a bit too fast in some parts (for a normal diff) !! (how come, I've made it to be single SV so there's no way it would be too fast in "some part")
01:00:226 (2) - move a bit to the left and down, eg x:264 y:64 (it would ruin the DS instead, since I'm using 1.2x DS there)
01:05:013 (1,2) - this overlap is a bit ugly, maybe rotate 1 (this kind of overlap is a common style, try to analyze more maps)
01:12:673 (1) - not sure if the tip is actually in time with the guitar (if that's what you are trying to achieve) (I'm trying to achieve the drum on the tip, along with guitar sound on the whole slider)
01:06:290 (4) - this could be matched with 03:39:481 (4,5) , the first one feels too long !! (it's the same in general thought, but let's consider later)
Overall I think the map could have been polished better here and there, the spacings variate a bit too much and some parts could have followed the vocals instead of the instrumental, but doesn't mean I didn't like it ^^ (actually following the instrument gives the map more feels to it, don't worry I'm sure you'll understand later :3)
[Insane]
you probably heard this a lot but I think a spinner fits better than 00:01:184 (1) xd (well, it's my own preference but thanks for the advice haha)
00:11:077 (4,3) - possible overlap (that's why I'm using AR9.2 so people wouldn't notice it in gameplay)
I think 00:32:779 (1) should be further from 00:33:258 (1) , always missing the timing like this >.< (sure)
00:44:508 (10,1) - why are these so far apart? (comparing to the rest of the stream) !! (because of the SV change)
01:17:460 (4,5,6,7,8) - you make it so people that spin clockwise have a hard time (me ;; ) (haha you realized? )
01:44:428 (4,5) - blanket (I think blanket isn't that necessary on the insane diff)
02:04:375 (3,5) - these are not perfectly overlapped (how did I even notice this ?!) (well, if you mean "stacked", then you're right)
02:31:104 (4) - this note isn't actually played by the drums, so the stream is too long !! (well I like it though, I'll consider if another mod asks me to change it)
nothing else, this is by far the best map of the set, so much fun it deserves a star :3 (thanks a bunch~)
I wasn't thinking on modding every diff but I guess I got carried away lol, hope the mod helps somehow, the Insane diff was great gl on getting it ranked o/

thanks for the mod and star!

Shurelia

Global Moderator

2,782 posts

Joined December 2013

Shurelia 2014-12-18T13:51:26+00:00

おっす!やったよ!
From the Real Life Req~ (hehe)

[General]

- All Clear~

[Ts8zs' Easy]

01:24:801 (4) - CTRL + G this? i think this would give a better flow
03:15:864 (3) - add clap on the head. Sound's better for me

[Normal]

Normalnya dapat lambang "H"~ kalau bisa diusahakan dapatnya lambang "N" hehe~

00:55:598 (3) - Adjust the slider a bit and move it to the proper place , it would looks like this : http://puu.sh/dzGmm.jpg, biar keliatan nggak kesepian slidernya (gara2 beda sendiri )
02:00:226 (5) - CTRL + J and rotate it "-11 Clockwise" so it would look like this : http://puu.sh/dzGKk.jpg (it'll give better flow imo)
02:49:056 (5) - Add clap so it'll fit the song
02:50:332 (2) - Add clap on the head~ (ada suara drum di sini)
02:52:247 (1) - Move this spinner to 02:52:407 and add a circle (with finish) on the last spinner's place. It'll give more sound to the map.

[UWS's Hard]

00:54:481 (5) - Would change the head into a clap and remove whistle on the tail because it's sounds better for me.

[Insane]

01:57:354 (1,3) - Would recommend this to be changed into Triplets. it plays better imo.
03:02:221 (2) - Masih belum menyerah soal ini.. Remove circle because it's sounds better for me~
03:04:056 (3) - You forgot to add clap on the head i think...

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
And really sorry for the short mod and lateness ;w;/

Oh! Here's a love from me~

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-12-18T21:05:18+00:00

Shurelia wrote:
おっす!やったよ!
From the Real Life Req~ (hehe) (first time hearing this XD)

[General]
- All Clear~

[Normal]

Normalnya dapat lambang "H"~ kalau bisa diusahakan dapatnya lambang "N" hehe~ (because my normal diff contains an explicit content :^)
00:55:598 (3) - Adjust the slider a bit and move it to the proper place , it would looks like this : http://puu.sh/dzGmm.jpg, biar keliatan nggak kesepian slidernya (gara2 beda sendiri ) (lol ok)
02:00:226 (5) - CTRL + J and rotate it "-11 Clockwise" so it would look like this : http://puu.sh/dzGKk.jpg (it'll give better flow imo) (hm, I prefer put it parallel with the next slider like the current one)
02:49:056 (5) - Add clap so it'll fit the song (fixed)
02:50:332 (2) - Add clap on the head~ (ada suara drum di sini) (fixed)
02:52:247 (1) - Move this spinner to 02:52:407 and add a circle (with finish) on the last spinner's place. It'll give more sound to the map. (it would possibly seem harder so I'll keep this)

[Insane]
01:57:354 (1,3) - Would recommend this to be changed into Triplets. it plays better imo. (it would make an inconsistency with another section and I like this hold and release way of emphasizing)
03:02:221 (2) - Masih belum menyerah soal ini.. Remove circle because it's sounds better for me~ (err.. entahlah ww, putting it into consideration anyway)
03:04:056 (3) - You forgot to add clap on the head i think... (owh right)

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
And really sorry for the short mod and lateness ;w;/

Oh! Here's a love from me~ (<3)

gapapa yg penting inget ww. thanks for the support \o/

rEdo

809 posts

Joined November 2008

rEdo 2014-12-20T09:59:16+00:00

[General]
03:02:460 - If you want to start the Kiai at 03:07:566, I think this is a better place to do so.
[Ts8zs' Easy]
00:57:035 (1) - This slider needs a finish, rather than a clap.
01:34:374 (2) - You need to move that a little bit further, changing the distance snap without a reason (especially on Easies and Normals) is a no-no.
01:58:630 (1) - Missing a finish at its beginning.
02:31:822 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - You might want to delete these claps from all over this section, they're way too loud for that part of the song.
02:51:609 (3) - Add an extra reverse to that kickslider? Also, you might want to silence the spinner's end (add a 10% volume section at its end).
02:57:354 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - Same thing as before, a lot of claps that are way too loud.
03:07:567 (1) - Missing a finish at its beginning.
03:26:715 (2,3) - Missing finishes at their ends.
03:30:226 (1) - This slider needs a finish, rather than a clap.
03:50:971 - I would add an extra note here and start that spinner 1/2 later to add some extra impact to the end of the beatmap.
[Normal]
I really dislike most of these red-tick starting 1/2 sliders (such as 00:07:088 (2), 00:12:194 (2) etc.), but I guess they're intentional, so I'm not gonna dig into that.

01:17:779 - Add an extra note here before starting the spinner?
01:27:992 (8) - Missing a new combo here.
01:39:322 (5) - Missing a clap at its end.
01:45:864 (1) - Missing a finish at its beginning.
02:34:375 (1) - Move that two grids higher for both better flow and fixing the distance snap.[/color]
02:52:247 - Same as above, add an extra note here before starting the spinner?
02:52:247 (1) - You might want to silence that spinner's end (just use a 10% volume section at its end).
03:50:971 - Same as before.
[UWS's Hard]
Mainly hitsounding inconsistencies that I'm gonna point out here, the rest seems fine.

00:09:322 (2,3,4,1) - It kinda bugs me that the distance between (1) and (2) is so little in comparison with the other notes.
00:22:886 (4) - You might want to use a new combo here, so the jump is easily recognizable.
03:02:141 (2) - Move it a grid to the left so there's a smooth line between this slider's end and (3)'s beginning.

Hitsound nazis

00:11:077 (3) - Missing a clap.
00:35:013 (3) - Missing a clap.
00:40:120 (3) - Clap at its beginning.
01:09:801 (7) - Clap at its beginning.
01:38:843 (3) - Clap at its beginning.
01:51:290 (3) - Clap at its beginning.
02:10:918 (5) - Missing a finish at its ending.
02:16:503 (3) - Missing a finish at its beginning?
02:42:673 (2) - Clap at its beginning.
02:46:024 (2) - Clap at its beginning.
02:50:332 (3) - Clap at its beginning.
03:06:609 (2) - Missing a finish.
03:07:247 (5) - Missing a finish here as well. Compare that to 00:53:843 (2,3,4,5,1) and 01:57:673 (2,3,4,5,1).
03:08:524 (4) - Missing a clap.
03:18:737 (3) - Missing a clap.
03:37:886 (6) - Clap at its beginning?

[Insane]
00:43:949 (7) - Missing a clap at its end.
00:44:588 (1) - This is placed quite too far when compared with other notes in that stream. Move it a little bit closer, using a 1.0x distance snap.
01:14:269 (3) - Not stacked perfectly with 01:13:630 (4), which I think is supposed to be.
01:16:503 (1) - You might want to change the shape of that slider. Why? Look at this. When you play that slider, you would naturally want to keep the angle you ended it at, but it just doesn't really happen. Reshape it like this and I think it will play much better.
01:25:598 (2,5) - You might want to move these notes by two grids to the right so they shape nicer triangles with (3,4).
01:29:109 (4,5) - This feels kinda too close to each other. Maybe try moving (3,4) a little bit?
01:41:237 (2,3) - Same thing as above. There's no other choice than to move (3) a little bit further. Don't forget to reshape the notes after it, especially 01:42:354 (1) might need a sharper angle.
02:45:864 (1,2) - Add a clap at (1)'s ending at remove it from (2)'s ending?
03:50:971 - I would add an extra note here and start that spinner 1/4 or 1/2 later to add some extra impact to the end of the beatmap.

Good luck~

Last edited by rEdo 2014-12-20T13:51:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-12-20T12:55:04+00:00

double post unintentionally, proper reply below

Last edited by El SolarBeam 2014-12-20T12:57:57+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-12-20T12:56:31+00:00

rEdo wrote:
[General]
03:02:460 - If you want to start the Kiai at 03:07:566, I think this is a better place to do so. (agree, fixed)

[Normal]
I really dislike most of these red-tick starting 1/2 sliders (such as 00:07:088 (2), 00:12:194 (2) etc.), but I guess they're intentional, so I'm not gonna dig into that. (thanks for understanding)

01:17:779 - Add an extra note here before starting the spinner? (fixed)
01:27:992 (8) - Missing a new combo here. (woops, fixed)
01:39:322 (5) - Missing a clap at its end. (fixed, why I keep forgetting hitsounds)
01:45:864 (1) - Missing a finish at its beginning. (fixed)
02:34:375 (1) - Move that two grids higher for both better flow and fixing the distance snap.[/color] (fine, and phew so nazi)
02:52:247 - Same as above, add an extra note here before starting the spinner? (sure)
02:52:247 (1) - You might want to silence that spinner's end (just use a 10% volume section at its end). (fixed because inconsistency right)
03:50:971 - Same as before.

[Insane]
00:43:949 (7) - Missing a clap at its end. (fixed)
00:44:588 (1) - This is placed quite too far when compared with other notes in that stream. Move it a little bit closer, using a 1.0x distance snap. (hm, dunno since when I put it like that it felt quite awkward because of that SV change so I intentionally put it apart)
01:14:269 (3) - Not stacked perfectly with 01:13:630 (4), which I think is supposed to be. (fixed)
01:16:503 (1) - You might want to change the shape of that slider. Why? Look at this. When you play that slider, you would naturally want to keep the angle you ended it at, but it just doesn't really happen. Reshape it like this and I think it will play much better. (oh right, I didn't aligned it well lol, thanks)
01:25:598 (2,5) - You might want to move these notes by two grids to the right so they shape nicer triangles with (3,4). (I didn't even realize, fixed)
01:29:109 (4,5) - This feels kinda too close to each other. Maybe try moving (3,4) a little bit? (moved 5 instead, I hope it would work out as fine)
01:41:237 (2,3) - Same thing as above. There's no other choice than to move (3) a little bit further. Don't forget to reshape the notes after it, especially 01:42:354 (1) might need a sharper angle. (fixed, I suppose. managing this weird antijump is hard)
02:45:864 (1,2) - Add a clap at (1)'s ending at remove it from (2)'s ending? (not bad, but I prefer the current one)
03:50:971 - I would add an extra note here and start that spinner 1/4 or 1/2 later to add some extra impact to the end of the beatmap. (I hope circle would do)

Good luck~

thanks for the useful mod!

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-12-20T13:21:20+00:00

well,fixed sample and overlap

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 187566
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Soul Release
TitleUnicode:Soul Release
Artist:Marika
ArtistUnicode:真里歌
Creator:El SolarBeam
Version:Ts8zs' Easy
Source:ハロー・レディ！
Tags:Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel ts8zs UnitedWeSin
BeatmapID:523589
BeatmapSetID:222790

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
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240,288,207353,2,0,L|201:301,2,40,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,207992,6,0,P|368:328|408:320,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,208630,2,0,B|400:200|394:154|394:154|421:124,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,209906,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,80,210226,6,0,P|208:147|224:223,1,160,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,211183,2,0,P|224:320|184:312,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,211821,6,0,P|88:311|128:384,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,213098,2,0,P|176:192|216:184,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,213736,6,0,P|120:88|64:120,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,215013,2,0,P|304:24|360:56,2,120,2|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,120,216289,2,0,B|264:176|312:224|288:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,240,217247,2,0,P|160:248|120:240,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,218204,6,0,P|144:88|168:32,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,104,219481,2,0,P|264:168|240:224,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,220279,2,0,L|320:304,1,40,2|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,232,220758,6,0,P|392:176|352:120,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,196,221556,2,0,P|287:254|320:304,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,328,222354,1,10,0:0:0:0:
472,248,222672,2,0,P|479:208|480:168,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,72,223311,6,0,B|428:86|428:86|388:70|348:86,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,224109,2,0,B|345:191|305:175|305:175|269:190,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,224906,2,0,P|176:191|184:230,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,225864,6,0,P|224:64|152:64,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,116,226662,2,0,P|124:151|184:152,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,227459,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,200,227778,2,0,P|360:152|336:120,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,56,228418,6,0,P|328:32|392:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,112,229215,2,0,P|402:136|343:125,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,230013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
166,106,230332,2,0,P|154:144|160:184,1,79.9999999999999,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,230970,12,0,234801,0:0:0:0:

El SolarBeam

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Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-12-24T10:08:59+00:00

all of the diffspread on my side has been fixed

I suppose this is time for this to be pushed forward

UnitedWeSin

891 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2014-12-25T01:22:08+00:00

Gawd I suck.

Kocari

Kocari wrote:
[UWS's Hard]

00:08:364 (3) - Move 2 notches to the left for consistent spacing
00:08:843 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why note make them more consistent like this? the 1,2,3 slider have equal spacing and the 3,4 sliders have ends matching together http://puu.sh/d6Wni/b0c2b34500.jpg (My preference but this is your choice)
00:35:332 (4) - Move to the left 1 notch, it looks more appealing and isn't as spaced out to hit the next note, it's just a tiny adjustment but makes gameplay a lot better/smoother
00:42:992 (3) - Not sure about this note to get it to where you put it but can't tell if this is DS properly or not hm I think the jump to the one is ok here

00:46:503 (6) - Move down 2 notches for same reason
00:46:822 (1) - Move deeper into the previous slider, seems more appealing (My preference your choice) http://puu.sh/d6WBw/d1a5617778.jpg
I see the reasoning but I think I'll leave it how I originally placed it.

00:55:120 (2) - Move a 1 notch to the left for better feels
01:03:896 (5) - Snap this properly I'm confused on what you mean here.

01:08:364 (3) - Not sure if this was intentional or not but it doesn't have to be spaced far, it feels the same with proper DS
01:13:471 (3) - Snap Properly
01:25:439 (1,2,3,4) - Reshape to something like this it's fixed with proper snapping already http://puu.sh/d6Ycu/578bf0aecf.jpg
01:29:109 (5) - Snap Properly
01:31:503 (4) - Move 1 to the left
01:34:694 (2) - 2-3 notches to the left based on how you see those spacing, want to keep them even
I adjusted the 1 here.

01:43:311 (1,2) - 2 notches to the left, reasoning behind this is that it's smoother to play and doesn't have to do just a tad more work to get over there to the next note but instead miss it. Think of it as a stream and how it is spaced evenly(depends on the song) but it helps to create movement that is natural and you follow one single path instead of adjusting it over and over again because of spacing
This one seems pretty natural to me, not sure of the problem.

02:43:311 (1) - DS properly

Thanks! I fixed most of what you pointed out.

Yauxo

Yauxo wrote:
[Hard]
■ See General
It was a mistake, I guess I had forgotten to change the settings.

■ 00:29:907 (2,3) - ~~I'd space these out. The stack feels weird to me.~~ Actually. 00:29:588 (1) - is off - it feels really damn awkward. How about this? 6 is where the gap was, 7 is where the Slider started

Bah I really can't agree with you here. Play stopping after the hold slider at 00:29:269 seems natural since vocals stop, and play beginning again at 00:29:588 with the clap is the right continuation.

■ 00:54:003 (3) - 291/78
fixed

■ 01:48:098 (1) - Not neccessarily a fan of this one since the sound starts off really quiet, but I guess it's still okay
Yea I guess I can't really see a better way to map it.

■ 01:52:566 (2,3) - 02:02:779 (2,3) - unstack? Movement would support the song more imo
Hm yea but I don't see the pattern working without the stack, honestly I feel it supports the music great.

■ 03:07:247 (5) - rotate by -51, then move to 380/72?
k

■ The only thing that kinda bugged me was the high amount of stacks. You built up alot of movement in this diff, so most of the stacks ruin it.
Totally, thx for being honest. It's not really a great habit of mine I think.[/notice]

Sky Trias

Sky Trias wrote:
Hi! o/
Nice Mapset , and Nice Song !

UWS's Hard
[]
00:29:588 (1) - Ctrl+G ? flow will be better
Hm yea it just makes bad flow from 00:28:949 (5) and a sudden jump, I think it's better the way it is.
00:43:949 (3) - ^
I think I'd prefer having the jump here.
01:31:024 (3) - you sure about this ? player will miss this slider
I can't really see a problem. Plays fine imo.
01:37:168 - add note here .. 01:37:088 (1,2 ) - i think , player think this is 3 notes stream ..
Maybe good but I don't think it's necessary. 1/2 sound is much stronger here.
01:57:832 (3) - Ctrl+G "i think" make flow better ..
Sorry I just think it has better flow from 2 placed like this.

examination

examination wrote:
lol pm req~

[General]

[UWS's Hard]
00:13:949 (1) - I guess it's better for this slider to have a curve since the instument's volume is going down here~ A straight slider just feel a bit fast
interesting, will try

00:24:801 (3) - What about placing it like this? I guess it feels better
Hm yea I really prefer the downward motion onto 3 and then upward motion with the slider. Feels better for me.

00:47:779 (4,5) - having curves look better?
Maybe the straight slider create a more lenient flow and house the 1. I think I'll keep it as is.

02:00:226 (2,1) - A stack?
I just preferred it this way for a little more movement.

03:22:566 (5,1) - place the slider better?
fixed I suppose

RandomEffect

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
[UWS's Hard]
00:22:566 (3) - I prefer to stack on 00:21:928 (2) - like 00:19:375 (2,3,4,5) -
Just going for a pattern change there, I think it's much more interesting.
01:42:354- finish is on purpose?
Yep, fits the music I suppose.
02:17:141 (5) - I prefer to stack on the head of 02:17:301 (6) -
I think it fits with the music better if there is movement to onto the 6 since the guitar snaps. That's why 4-5 is stacked.
03:27:035 (3,4,5) - a little confusing because of continuous stack pattern at this part. so, why not avoid correct stack?
SPOILER
Definitely. My pattern was terrible.
03:35:013 (5,2) - stack correctly
k

Milhoto

Milhofo wrote:
[UWS's Hard]
00:46:822 (1,3) - blanket?
Wasn't really intended. Changed a bit.
00:57:035 (1) - you could pull this down to blanket 00:56:715 (8) like this:
SPOILER
Hm yea it just didn't seem necessary, I enjoy the current flow.
02:00:226 (2,1) - bad overlap
Hm yea idk. I like it.
02:02:141 (6,1) - possible blanket
Seems to play better without imo.
02:04:854 (4,2) - ugly overlap
How is it ugly?
02:11:396 (1,3) - ^ rotating 3 just a bit would help
Should be better now.
nothing else, fun map

Shurelia

Shurelia wrote:
!!

[UWS's Hard]
00:54:481 (5) - Would change the head into a clap and remove whistle on the tail because it's sounds better for me.
Hm yea not really sure on that. I think the current set follows the music, sounds ok for me.

rEdo

rEdo wrote:
[UWS's Hard]
Mainly hitsounding inconsistencies that I'm gonna point out here, the rest seems fine.

00:09:322 (2,3,4,1) - It kinda bugs me that the distance between (1) and (2) is so little in comparison with the other notes.
fixed!

00:22:886 (4) - You might want to use a new combo here, so the jump is easily recognizable.
ok
done
03:02:141 (2) - Move it a grid to the left so there's a smooth line between this slider's end and (3)'s beginning.00:11:077 (3) - Missing a clap.
00:35:013 (3) - Missing a clap.
00:40:120 (3) - Clap at its beginning.
01:09:801 (7) - Clap at its beginning.
01:38:843 (3) - Clap at its beginning.
01:51:290 (3) - Clap at its beginning.
02:10:918 (5) - Missing a finish at its ending. clap seems better here
02:16:503 (3) - Missing a finish at its beginning? whistle seems better
02:42:673 (2) - Clap at its beginning.
02:46:024 (2) - Clap at its beginning. whistle seems accurate here
02:50:332 (3) - Clap at its beginning.
03:06:609 (2) - Missing a finish.
03:07:247 (5) - Missing a finish here as well. Compare that to 00:53:843 (2,3,4,5,1) and 01:57:673 (2,3,4,5,1).I think I wanted less noise here since it's buildup.

03:08:524 (4) - Missing a clap.
03:18:737 (3) - Missing a clap.
03:37:886 (6) - Clap at its beginning?

Thanks for that. ;_;

Thank you guys so much for modding! Great to see new faces in modding.

Really sorry for letting so many mods pile up.

I went OD-5 HP-5, feel free to change to whatever.

http://puu.sh/dIpsU/97064fe36d.rar

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-12-25T04:53:21+00:00

thanks for the hardwork UWS, updated at this point (and changed to OD-6 HP-5.5 because of silly diffspread rule)

CaptTatsu

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CaptTatsu 2014-12-26T08:40:23+00:00

Hi! You're lucky to get this NM -3-
Sorry if my mod totally sucks :p

General
*I'll mod in english. I'm just suspicious with the submission date :v
*Great map!

Easy
Wow. I don't see anything wrong.

Normal
00:45:705 white anchor looks almost useless. i reccomend this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389670
00:49:694 I do it like this :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389676
01:15:226 4 anchor is enough https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389688 (optional)
01:23:843 Make blanket on slider 5 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389694
01:33:098 same reason as 00:45:705
03:20:013 same reason as 01:15:226
03:30:226 adjust the slider so it could blanket slider 5's head

Hard
*tunggu... yang buat UWS?! omg..
*BTW i'll just complain about slider's beauty. if you think your slider is beautiful already,

skip this mod :v
00:07:566 not curvy enough to blanket previous slider 3
00:57:035 The curve is not beautiful enough. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389706
01:44:907 same reason as 00:07:566
around 02:11:556 this will make it look better for me https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389723
02:13:949 same reason as 00:57:035 , it's possible to blanket circle 2
02:22:566 move the last anchor by one square
03:01:184 i do it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389730
03:04:056 i'll probably move the red anchor to make it looks parallel
03:09:801 same reason as 00:57:035 , it's possible to blanket slider end 7
03:22:886 seek to 03:22:646, make slider 1's path cut the slider 5's ball it won't change the DS a lot

Sorry i couldn't mod insane and release. T_T
Hope it ranked soon

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2015-01-07T05:40:44+00:00

no change on my side because all are intentional

but thanks for the effort :3

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2015-01-13T01:50:49+00:00

Hi

General:

Add like 1000 AudioLeadIn to have two secs before the first object appear (Apply to every diff)
Inconsistency in widescreensupport
your soft-sliderslide is not an empty file, change it for this: http://puu.sh/erpjR/cc0f4a78dd.wav

Release:

personally I can play this with AR9, I don't see a reason to have decimals on it. There are not big jumps or hard to read patterns.
00:03:418 (1) - just a bit weird that you are ending the slider where the new section in the music is starting 00:03:737 - I can't see a valid reason for this, since there are not vocals just instruments
00:05:970 (5) - ^
00:08:843 (1) - just an example of how nice it sounds, that's why I dislike the previous two.
00:11:077 (4) - same as 00:03:418
00:28:630 (4,5,6) - spacing in 1/2 gap and 1/4 gap is the same, this is not a nice way of introducing 1/4 jumps, I suggest you to reduce the 1/4 spacing there
00:33:258 (1,2,3,4) - I did listen this a different gaps 25% 50% and to be honest I can't hear any 1/4 beats there.
00:35:492 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - in this section you are ignoring some important beats, that has vocals and instruments, I don't see a valid reason, do you mind explaining them?
00:44:588 (1) - spacing, this kind of patterns play really bad and are really hard to read in first play
00:53:364 (1,2) - realy weird rhythm, it doesn't follow vocals or the main beats in the song, try this instead:
01:01:981 (6,1,2) - personally I find that this part flow really poor, I mean 6 to 1 play nice, but then 1 to 2 is like a hand breaker
01:09:801 (4) - same problem as 00:03:418
01:12:354 (5,6,7,8) - I can't listen any 1/4 here, maybe the first triplet is fine, but 01:12:593 (8) - sounds totally out place
01:14:907 (5) - same as 00:03:418
01:41:077 - 01:42:035 . I don't see any valid reason to ignore those beats
01:47:620 (1) - starting kiai in the end of a spinner doesn't represent the song nicely, since the chorus of the song is regulary the stong part in the song, bring it a click action pls
02:10:918 (1) - use 3 circles as before?
02:17:859 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - I'm sure that this should be 1/3
02:29:269 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - nothing wrong, but a bit sad that you didn't follow the guitar with some more streams :C
02:38:045 (1,2) - swap rhythm in the time line

Insane:

00:01:184 is this green line really necesary? since you don't have any slider there, just a spinner~
00:04:543 Unsnapped
01:48:867 ^
01:49:505 ^
00:10:439 (2) - this extended slider doesn't follow the music in my opinion, mainly cuz there is sound in 00:10:598 - but nothing in 00:10:678
00:23:843 (1) - I don't see any reason to has this NC here, since the stack is easy to read without it
00:32:779 (1) - about this rhythm is a bit weird to me, since you are ending the slider where your NC is supposed to be (also the music is suggesting it), try:
00:34:854 (3,4) - fix the stack
00:35:492 (5,1,2) - ^
00:36:928 (1,2) - there are a lot more, not really important, but if you care about design then stack them properly.
01:14:269 (3) - same as 00:10:439
01:30:545 (1) - I'm sure that you can make a better slider, as captin1 said this make me sad panda
01:42:035 there are some beats similar at this one that take you out rhythm when playing, cause that for some reason you are ignoring them
01:44:907 breaking your clap pattern for not reason :l, since you are not following vocals in this diff, from what I listen to it.
01:47:620 (1) - same as RELEASE
02:17:779 (1,2,3,4) - same as release
02:48:896 (2) - really weird rhythm here. sound better if you start the slider in the white tick and the un add a circle in 2:48:896
03:17:460 (1) - same bad feeliing as Release diff in 01:47:620
03:42:354 (2) - this should be a 1/2 slider, red tick has sound, blue doesn't

Hard:

00:39:003 (4,5) - kinda weird to play for a hard dff, since I think most of players will stop holding 4 to hit 5
01:48:098 (1) - maybe 50% volume to be safe
02:14:588 (3) - 1/2 slider sounds alot better with the music, mainly cuz the sound in 02:14:747 is really strong
03:21:609 (1,2) - not a fan of this flow in hard diff to be honest, most of people will stop holding the slider too early

Normal:

00:39:960 (2,3) - fix the stack
01:38:684 (3,4) - ^
01:43:790 (2,3) - ^
01:06:290 (4) - this short double repeat sliders are combo breakers, since people who play normal diffs doesn't see this kind of pattern really often, use two 1/2 slider instead
01:47:779 (1) - same as other diffs
02:31:184 (1) - really weird place to start the new section, make more sense to me starting again in 02:31:503
02:57:354 (1) - probably too soon after a spinner at this BPM
mmm maybe you can do some clean up in this diff, some patterns doesn't look that nice IMO.

Easy:

00:03:258 (1) - remove this slider? first to all is realy short and doesn't play nicely in an easy diff, second make more sense to start where the music is strong in 00:03:737
00:36:928 (1,2,3,4,5) - to be honest, personally I'm not a fan of those 1/2 sliders in easy diff, they are too short, a newbie will keep getting 100s there
Nice diff, I'm still not sure about those sliders >:, maybe you will need to get more opinions about them

sorry for being late, real life issues :>

Last edited by Natsu 2015-01-18T10:23:49+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

El SolarBeam

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Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2015-01-17T11:14:51+00:00

patiently waiting until the mod finished so I can answer all at once owo

EDIT : oh right, I have my own exam here, so I'd be late as well xD

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2015-01-23T15:35:04+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hi

General:

Add like 1000 AudioLeadIn to have two secs before the first object appear (Apply to every diff) (it's a bit embarassing of me but, how?)
Inconsistency in widescreensupport (fixed)
your soft-sliderslide is not an empty file, change it for this: http://puu.sh/erpjR/cc0f4a78dd.wav (fixed)
Release:

personally I can play this with AR9, I don't see a reason to have decimals on it. There are not big jumps or hard to read patterns. (simple, because I can have less miss this way, though I don't know how people do)
00:03:418 (1) - just a bit weird that you are ending the slider where the new section in the music is starting 00:03:737 - I can't see a valid reason for this, since there are not vocals just instruments (fixed)
00:05:970 (5) - ^ (this one has less stressed sound so I think it's fine)
00:08:843 (1) - just an example of how nice it sounds, that's why I dislike the previous two.
00:11:077 (4) - same as 00:03:418 (same reason)
00:28:630 (4,5,6) - spacing in 1/2 gap and 1/4 gap is the same, this is not a nice way of introducing 1/4 jumps, I suggest you to reduce the 1/4 spacing there (I did it for stressing the beat I suppose, let me hear some more opinion)
00:33:258 (1,2,3,4) - I did listen this a different gaps 25% 50% and to be honest I can't hear any 1/4 beats there. (fixed)
00:35:492 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - in this section you are ignoring some important beats, that has vocals and instruments, I don't see a valid reason, do you mind explaining them? (what I follow here is bass though, I don't really into vocal mapping. maybe some call it hollow but it's a nice kick for me)
00:44:588 (1) - spacing, this kind of patterns play really bad and are really hard to read in first play (fixed)
00:53:364 (1,2) - realy weird rhythm, it doesn't follow vocals or the main beats in the song, try this instead: (that suggestion is nice and all, but I just like how it plays by holding the note a sec there, err like emphasizing it by different approach)
01:01:981 (6,1,2) - personally I find that this part flow really poor, I mean 6 to 1 play nice, but then 1 to 2 is like a hand breaker (some may think so, I won't deny, but in majority of testplayers there's not that much complaint there since they can confront it well enough)
01:09:801 (4) - same problem as 00:03:418 (same reason)
01:12:354 (5,6,7,8) - I can't listen any 1/4 here, maybe the first triplet is fine, but 01:12:593 (8) - sounds totally out place (let me hear some more opinion on this)
01:14:907 (5) - same as 00:03:418 (same reason)
01:41:077 - 01:42:035 . I don't see any valid reason to ignore those beats (same reason with same section before)
01:47:620 (1) - starting kiai in the end of a spinner doesn't represent the song nicely, since the chorus of the song is regulary the stong part in the song, bring it a click action pls (fixed)
02:10:918 (1) - use 3 circles as before? (actually this slider can make challenging pattern in ctb so I'd keep it lol)
02:17:859 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - I'm sure that this should be 1/3 (well now that's something I didn't realize, fixed)
02:29:269 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - nothing wrong, but a bit sad that you didn't follow the guitar with some more streams :C (well, I don't hate that flow though xD)
02:38:045 (1,2) - swap rhythm in the time line (fixed)
Insane:

00:01:184 is this green line really necesary? since you don't have any slider there, just a spinner~ (fixed)
00:04:543 Unsnapped (fixed)
01:48:867 ^ (fixed)
01:49:505 ^ (fixed)
00:10:439 (2) - this extended slider doesn't follow the music in my opinion, mainly cuz there is sound in 00:10:598 - but nothing in 00:10:678 (well, there's nothing wrong in how it plays so no problem I suppose)
00:23:843 (1) - I don't see any reason to has this NC here, since the stack is easy to read without it (really? I hardly figure it out so I'll keep it for a while xD)
00:32:779 (1) - about this rhythm is a bit weird to me, since you are ending the slider where your NC is supposed to be (also the music is suggesting it), try: (though it's a downbeat, I don't think the beat is strong enough for it to be emphasized with a circle so it's fine I suppose)
00:34:854 (3,4) - fix the stack (fixed, I suppose)
00:35:492 (5,1,2) - ^ (I can't even realized lol, fixed)
00:36:928 (1,2) - there are a lot more, not really important, but if you care about design then stack them properly. (fixed)
01:14:269 (3) - same as 00:10:439 (same reason)
01:30:545 (1) - I'm sure that you can make a better slider, as captin1 said this make me sad panda (captin sure has lots complaint lawl, I'm not sure if I've done it right but fixed, I suppose?)
01:42:035 there are some beats similar at this one that take you out rhythm when playing, cause that for some reason you are ignoring them (well yes)
01:44:907 breaking your clap pattern for not reason :l, since you are not following vocals in this diff, from what I listen to it. (let me hear some more opinion on this)
01:47:620 (1) - same as RELEASE (fixed)
02:17:779 (1,2,3,4) - same as release (fixed)
02:48:896 (2) - really weird rhythm here. sound better if you start the slider in the white tick and the un add a circle in 2:48:896 (fixed)
03:17:460 (1) - same bad feeliing as Release diff in 01:47:620 (fixed)
03:42:354 (2) - this should be a 1/2 slider, red tick has sound, blue doesn't (the current one sounds nicer for me tho)
Normal:

00:39:960 (2,3) - fix the stack (fixed all pointed)
01:38:684 (3,4) - ^
01:43:790 (2,3) - ^
01:06:290 (4) - this short double repeat sliders are combo breakers, since people who play normal diffs doesn't see this kind of pattern really often, use two 1/2 slider instead (looking for more opinions)
01:47:779 (1) - same as other diffs (don't think ppl mind having this in normal diff)
02:31:184 (1) - really weird place to start the new section, make more sense to me starting again in 02:31:503 (fine)
02:57:354 (1) - probably too soon after a spinner at this BPM (but it's the best option to emphasize it imo)
mmm maybe you can do some clean up in this diff, some patterns doesn't look that nice IMO. (well, I won't be sure if you don't point it out, just be honest)

thanks a bunch and sorry late

Kibbleru

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5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-01-28T03:59:18+00:00

looking at this again, this song is pretty damn awesome!

i might come mod this soon lol. (no 100% but i probably will)

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2015-01-28T08:25:23+00:00

surely, it would be much appreciated o7

Kibbleru

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5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-01-29T18:29:44+00:00

safksanhkfjwehfmdsfdsk,jf i check this again and theres another diff to mod lol

[General]

your mp3 is only 128 kbps? try finding a better one?

[release]

02:57:354 - duplicate green line
00:03:418 (6) - try drum finish
00:20:971 (7,1) - maybe just make the distance a bit larger.
00:23:684 - imo removing a repeat and putting a circle here is better for emphasis but ur choice.
00:33:418 (3) - nc for sv change?
00:42:035 - finish? may apply to other diffs too
01:01:024 (4) - just my personal preference but it looks somewhat better like this imo
SPOILER
01:01:503 (5) - ^
01:27:354 (3) - ^
01:54:162 (3) - okay ill just stop pointing these out cuz you clearly like the current one lol i think
01:06:290 (1,2,3,4) - you can make these jumps more noticeably larger than the previous ones
01:07:088 (1,2,3) - some nazi straight line thing
01:12:434 (6,7,8) - try a drum sampleset for these, having no hitsound on "somewhat overmapped objects" isn't really good
01:37:168 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:08:604 (6,8) - ^
02:31:104 (4) - ^
bleh do it for all of the no hitsound streams pls
01:29:747 - map this out, the 1/1 gap becomes confusing cuz there's a clear beat in between
01:47:620 (4) - you can use 0.5 sv here like before, the exaggeration would be pretty cool, also nc you could also extend it to 01:48:338 - if you don't hate those extended sliders
02:04:854 (4,6) - overlap is kinda meh
02:09:322 (2,4) - copy paste maybe?
02:18:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - im not entirely sure if this part is 1/3 lol also 1/3 streams don't necessarily play well :X i would much recommend sliders but your choice
02:28:630 (1,2,3,4) - this part also not really clear on the snapping, if you want to avoid it just use a 1/2 slider or something lol
02:31:503 (9) - im not sure if its just preference but techinically you should stack all you finishes with a whistle (kick drum), or at least most of them, it makes more sense musical wise
02:40:758 (1) - i would really expect a bigger jump here :X
02:52:247 (1) - you can decrease the volume but there should be a finish + whistle here, or maybe you can use a normal addition finish
03:24:481 (6,1) - =_= lol..
03:33:098 - finishh
03:40:758 - ^
01:45:864 - ^
03:50:971 (7) - optional nc
hitsound suggestions may or may not apply to any other diffs.

[insane]

00:26:077 (3) - maybe curve this a bit more to look more consistent with the 2 previous sliders
00:43:790 - 00:44:109 - mapping these kick drums will help the build up
00:47:779 (4) - lol space this out or overlap them more, atm they're barely touching looks bad
01:48:737 (1) - not sure if nc is really necessary
02:18:418 (3) - same as the other diff
02:28:630 (3) - ^
02:52:247 - it would be cool if you added a circle here like in the other diff and put it right in the middle of the pentagon
03:16:184 (4,1,1) - pls more spacing.
02:57:354 - duplicate green line
01:47:620 (1) - a bit too short i think :X

[UWS]

00:21:609 (1,2,3) - could possibly get somewhat confusing since its not too consistent with what you did before, and with the distances and such
02:28:630 (3) - im not too sure if the guitars are on 1/4 for this one
01:48:098 (1,1) - mm might be better to space this out normally :X
01:48:338 - so apparently a map was dq'd cuz a slider end was silenced to 10% and was inaudible :X at least 20% pls?

[normal]

00:03:418 (4) - circle is too hidden .-.
00:32:301 (2,5) - not a real problem but this overlap doesnt seem intentional, doesn't look too good lol
00:35:492 (5,1) - ^
01:36:928 (4,3,4) - ^
01:17:460 (5) - unecessary imo, just remove this and add a repeat in the previous slider
02:03:737 (1,2) - kinda clustered, maybe do something similar to 00:59:907 (1,2) -
03:03:418 (4,5) - ^
03:12:673 (1,2) - ^
02:11:396 - wtf this break is so long lol. at least a part of this is mappable, just use long sliders and 1/1s and stuff

[Ts8...sz29128 fuck i cant remember]

00:03:258 (1,2) - this is somewhat hard to read, please expose the slider head of (2)
02:35:013 (2) - ^
00:19:056 (1,2) - offbeat sliders don't fit as well here, please use 3/2 repeats instead like 00:16:503 (1) -
00:23:205 (4,5) - please try not to do this unless the music absolutely suggests it.. these 1/2 sliders are fine but you use too many. also these become awkward to play when you skip a drum beat using them like for 00:28:630 -
00:28:311 (3,4) - ^
00:32:141 (2,3) - ^
01:27:034 (4,5) - ^
01:32:141 (3,4) - ^
i won't mention anymore, but please fix all of these.
00:33:896 (2,1,2,3,4) - this is just a bit too much.
00:36:928 - ^
01:38:205 - as before
00:49:056 (2) - circle hidden, a simple fix would be to remove this and add repeat to 00:48:418 (1) -
01:52:885 (2) - ^
03:01:822 (2) - ^
03:22:247 (2) - ^
01:25:439 (1) - also hidden :X
01:26:715 (3) - ^ not too sure how to fix but these gotta be fixed
01:36:928 (4) - its better to end this 1/2 earlier to get instruments
02:11:396 - same as for normal
02:41:715 (4,2) - is this overlap intentional? doesn't look that great
03:02:141 (1) - how about using a circle then a 1/1 slider? i think it fits the start of the kiai better
SPOILER
03:22:566 (3) - ^
03:03:098 (2,3) - offbeat slider doesn't really fit too well here, use a repeat on 03:03:098 (2) - instead and continue mapping
01:48:098 (5) - i think its better to delete this? somewhat overmapped and it gives a nice effect when left blank.
03:54:641 - i don't really get why there is a 5% volume here then a 10% at the actual slider end, i guess it's not really an issue though..

In general, try to simplify your rhythm down a bit, don't use too many offbeat sliders, stick with the instrumentals more and white ticks and such. if you want to map a vocal on the red tick, its better to go with a 3/2 repeat slider. also those 1/2 things need to be nerfed down. also try not to stack circles under other objects, it becomes difficult to read since it will hide them, same with slider heads.

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2015-01-30T02:50:30+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
safksanhkfjwehfmdsfdsk,jf i check this again and theres another diff to mod lol (I didn't expect that you will mod all of them but well thanks really lol)

[General]
your mp3 is only 128 kbps? try finding a better one? (I've thought of it and I'll keep the mp3 so the size won't be that big, and it doesn't sound that bad either :>)
[release]
02:57:354 - duplicate green line (fixed, phew)
00:03:418 (6) - try drum finish (my preference, ain't bad suggestion though)
00:20:971 (7,1) - maybe just make the distance a bit larger. (not sure if it's large enough but fixed)
00:23:684 - imo removing a repeat and putting a circle here is better for emphasis but ur choice. (hm, I prefer keeping it since I don't have any idea to make the flow smooth with circle)
00:33:418 (3) - nc for sv change? (oh right, thanks)
00:42:035 - finish? may apply to other diffs too (added)
01:01:024 (4) - just my personal preference but it looks somewhat better like this imo (since I like how it be hidden :>)
SPOILER
01:01:503 (5) - ^
01:27:354 (3) - ^
01:54:162 (3) - okay ill just stop pointing these out cuz you clearly like the current one lol i think (well that's that xD)
01:06:290 (1,2,3,4) - you can make these jumps more noticeably larger than the previous ones (enjoy your ride)
01:07:088 (1,2,3) - some nazi straight line thing (fixed)
01:12:434 (6,7,8) - try a drum sampleset for these, having no hitsound on "somewhat overmapped objects" isn't really good (fixed)
01:37:168 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:08:604 (6,8) - ^
02:31:104 (4) - ^
bleh do it for all of the no hitsound streams pls (fixed most of them)
01:29:747 - map this out, the 1/1 gap becomes confusing cuz there's a clear beat in between (fixed)
01:47:620 (4) - you can use 0.5 sv here like before, the exaggeration would be pretty cool, also nc you could also extend it to 01:48:338 - if you don't hate those extended sliders (cool, I like this)
02:04:854 (4,6) - overlap is kinda meh (fixed)
02:09:322 (2,4) - copy paste maybe? (fixed, I suppose)
02:18:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - im not entirely sure if this part is 1/3 lol also 1/3 streams don't necessarily play well :X i would much recommend sliders but your choice (dunno, I can play it well at least but let's see how it goes)
02:28:630 (1,2,3,4) - this part also not really clear on the snapping, if you want to avoid it just use a 1/2 slider or something lol (that's intentional, really)
02:31:503 (9) - im not sure if its just preference but technically you should stack all you finishes with a whistle (kick drum), or at least most of them, it makes more sense musical wise (I just feel like it, somehow sounds better for me or my taste is really that off lmao)
02:40:758 (1) - i would really expect a bigger jump here :X (enjoy)
02:52:247 (1) - you can decrease the volume but there should be a finish + whistle here, or maybe you can use a normal addition finish (fixed)
03:24:481 (6,1) - =_= lol.. (I know what you're trying to say but please bear with it heheh)
03:33:098 - finishh (all added)
03:40:758 - ^
01:45:864 - ^
03:50:971 (7) - optional nc (fixed)
hitsound suggestions may or may not apply to any other diffs.
[insane]
00:26:077 (3) - maybe curve this a bit more to look more consistent with the 2 previous sliders (alright)
00:43:790 - 00:44:109 - mapping these kick drums will help the build up (fixed)
00:47:779 (4) - lol space this out or overlap them more, atm they're barely touching looks bad (overlapped lmao)
01:48:737 (1) - not sure if nc is really necessary (fixed)
02:18:418 (3) - same as the other diff
02:28:630 (3) - ^
02:52:247 - it would be cool if you added a circle here like in the other diff and put it right in the middle of the pentagon (fixed)
03:16:184 (4,1,1) - pls more spacing. (fixed)
02:57:354 - duplicate green line (fixed)
01:47:620 (1) - a bit too short i think :X (no probs I suppose, since auto reach 2000)
[normal]
00:03:418 (4) - circle is too hidden .-. (no probs, I've tested it to my friend who has recently start playing this game)
00:32:301 (2,5) - not a real problem but this overlap doesnt seem intentional, doesn't look too good lol (I don't really mind since majority won't notice it in gameplay :>)
00:35:492 (5,1) - ^
01:36:928 (4,3,4) - ^
01:17:460 (5) - unecessary imo, just remove this and add a repeat in the previous slider (fixed)
02:03:737 (1,2) - kinda clustered, maybe do something similar to 00:59:907 (1,2) - (fixed)
03:03:418 (4,5) - ^ (but I like this one lol)
03:12:673 (1,2) - ^ (I'm cool for this)
02:11:396 - wtf this break is so long lol. at least a part of this is mappable, just use long sliders and 1/1s and stuff (following EZ, I'll change if he changes as well)

thanks a bunch kibb :>

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2015-01-30T04:04:15+00:00

alll fixed

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Marika - Soul Release.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 187566
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Soul Release
TitleUnicode:Soul Release
Artist:Marika
ArtistUnicode:真里歌
Creator:El SolarBeam
Version:Ts8zs' Easy
Source:ハロー・レディ！
Tags:Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel ts8zs UnitedWeSin
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:222790

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hope i didn't missed anything.

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2015-01-30T06:23:50+00:00

updated

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-01-30T07:13:36+00:00

easy
00:22:886 (3) - cirlce hidden, sorry this would be somewhat hard to fix but please do fix it

as for the break.. yeah.. lol if you map a part of it, so will el solarbeam lol. peer pressire >:D.

normal
00:03:418 (4) - this sort of depends on the skin you're using, some skins don't have the transparency on the sliders and that will make this impossible to predict.
could you at least expose it like halfway or something? :X
anyway if ts8 doesn't end up mapping the break, at least drag it so that it starts at 02:11:396 -

as for the mp3, is it just you can't find one? or you want to keep the file size small, because the file size is the least you have to worry about right now.
or maybe too lazy to find one lol.

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2015-01-30T07:20:52+00:00

oh well anything else?

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Marika - Soul Release.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 187566
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Soul Release
TitleUnicode:Soul Release
Artist:Marika
ArtistUnicode:真里歌
Creator:El SolarBeam
Version:Ts8zs' Easy
Source:ハロー・レディ！
Tags:Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel ts8zs UnitedWeSin
BeatmapID:523589
BeatmapSetID:222790

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El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2015-01-30T09:55:35+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
easy
as for the break.. yeah.. lol if you map a part of it, so will el solarbeam lol. peer pressire >:D. (lolol you hypocrite 8) )

normal
00:03:418 (4) - this sort of depends on the skin you're using, some skins don't have the transparency on the sliders and that will make this impossible to predict.
could you at least expose it like halfway or something? :X (fixed since an idea come through me, eureka)
anyway if ts8 doesn't end up mapping the break, at least drag it so that it starts at 02:11:396 - (dragged)

as for the mp3, is it just you can't find one? or you want to keep the file size small, because the file size is the least you have to worry about right now.
or maybe too lazy to find one lol. (lmao really, we indonesian have a low resource when it comes to internet connection, just ask xinely nee-san if you don't believe it)

thanks again :>

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Kibbleru 2015-01-30T18:17:41+00:00

waiting onf uws, we got time, ill see if i can find an mp3 lol

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pkk 2015-01-31T02:58:14+00:00

Here is the mp3 courtesy of the one and only kibb

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2015-01-31T04:09:38+00:00

updated the mp3

phew my connection unexpectedly stable when updating today

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-01T06:47:35+00:00

rip wheres uws lol

UnitedWeSin

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UnitedWeSin 2015-02-03T00:25:39+00:00

Sorry ;_;

CaptainTatsujin

CaptainTatsujin wrote:
Hard
*tunggu... yang buat UWS?! omg..
*BTW i'll just complain about slider's beauty. if you think your slider is beautiful already,

skip this mod :v
00:07:566 not curvy enough to blanket previous slider 3
Seems ok for me ;_;

00:57:035 The curve is not beautiful enough. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389706
01:44:907 same reason as 00:07:566

around 02:11:556 this will make it look better for me https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389723
It was like that before, seems ok now. ;_;

02:13:949 same reason as 00:57:035 , it's possible to blanket circle 2
fixed I think

02:22:566 move the last anchor by one square
k

03:01:184 i do it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2389730
kk

03:04:056 i'll probably move the red anchor to make it looks parallel
shud be gud

03:09:801 same reason as 00:57:035 , it's possible to blanket slider end 7
gah seems fine for me

03:22:886 seek to 03:22:646, make slider 1's path cut the slider 5's ball it won't change the DS a lot
seems ok

Nachos

Natsu wrote:
Hard:

00:39:003 (4,5) - kinda weird to play for a hard dff, since I think most of players will stop holding 4 to hit 5
lol yea, fixed
01:48:098 (1) - maybe 50% volume to be safe
\:D/
02:14:588 (3) - 1/2 slider sounds alot better with the music, mainly cuz the sound in 02:14:747 is really strong
hm ok
03:21:609 (1,2) - not a fan of this flow in hard diff to be honest, most of people will stop holding the slider too early
changed it, hope it's ok

Kibbles 'n Bits

Kibbleru wrote:
[UWS]
00:21:609 (1,2,3) - could possibly get somewhat confusing since its not too consistent with what you did before, and with the distances and such
Yea maybe. Just thought it worked really well as a transitional idea.
02:28:630 (3) - im not too sure if the guitars are on 1/4 for this one
For Hard diff this pattern works fine imo. No need to complicate it.
01:48:098 (1,1) - mm might be better to space this out normally :X
kk
01:48:338 - so apparently a map was dq'd cuz a slider end was silenced to 10% and was inaudible :X at least 20% pls?
okie

Thanks for the mods!

I added/removed some combos. Also changed the following: 00:53:524 - , 01:04:056 - ,03:31:822 - , a few other things.

http://puu.sh/foDH9/ca6f0371e6.rar

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-03T03:31:46+00:00

this part should be 1/3!
02:30:864 (3,4,5,6,7) -

apply to all diffs please

i would also like to ask around for those snappings, worst case you'll have to change some to 1/2 spam maybe :X

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UnitedWeSin 2015-02-03T04:21:36+00:00

02:18:418 - Changes back to 1/4.

My 2c

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2015-02-03T07:07:43+00:00

fixed all above and updated

though I find the transition from 1/3 to 1/4 quite deceiving lol

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Kibbleru 2015-02-03T22:25:24+00:00

insane

02:20:811 - add note, the transition between the two sliders is somewhat awkward since i think alot of people would usually interpret that as 1/2 gap
02:26:556 - ^ this one less important but i still think it generally plays better

Release
02:31:184 (4) - maybe nc to indicate change to 1/3
so i asked around for the snapping, and 02:18:098 - is also 1/4. soo i just suggest changing 02:17:886 (5,6) - into a slider and have 1/4 for the rest also that stream seems to be missing some hitsounds too lol whistles/claps. ofc apply for all diffs (UWS too)

also Release isn't a particularly creative name lol, so imo just find a synonym for it like
"Liberate"
"Exemption"

another method is to look up the song's lyrics and find something but idk if i can find any lol

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2015-02-04T00:05:44+00:00

all fixed and did minor tweaking on some patterns

waiting for uws

UnitedWeSin

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UnitedWeSin 2015-02-05T19:01:27+00:00

It felt more intuitive for Hard to leave each slider as 1/3, that's why I mapped it that way. But ok try this.

http://puu.sh/fvVOn/7bf87d87bc.rar

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2015-02-05T22:46:35+00:00

updated

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-05T23:17:14+00:00

easy diff maybe ar 3.5?

also for every other diff add like 500 audio lead in just to be safe.

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2015-02-06T04:30:16+00:00

fixed all, including audio leadin in easy diff as well because I can't bear watching inconsistency warning

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2015-02-06T10:31:31+00:00

Because Galau is way too mainstream already

Aha is that sooo😋

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2015-02-06T12:43:19+00:00

awkwk kabur ada kak mako

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-06T21:43:47+00:00

good~

call me back if u need rebub

meii18

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meii18 2015-02-06T21:47:49+00:00

wow ! Already bubbled ! Sry for that I didn't mod it . Good luck o/

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-06T21:56:17+00:00

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
wow ! Already bubbled ! Sry for that I didn't mod it . Good luck o/

"Sry for that I didn't mod it"

this^
is what i used to do B)

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2015-02-07T06:25:04+00:00

lmao you guys are fancy B)

anyway thanks kibb

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2015-02-10T22:22:45+00:00

late m4m ><

[Ts8zs' Easy]
00:13:949 (1) - maybe another finish here thats lower in volume to finish the transition
00:19:056 (1) - missing hitsounds on repeat
00:36:928 (2) - NC here instead of 00:36:290 (1)
01:25:758 (2) - missing clap on end
01:27:035 (4) - no hitsounds?
01:40:758 (4) - NC to prevent long combo
01:48:417 (1) - this is an exact copy paste of the first kiai, i would recommend you do a vertical or horizontal flip to avoid the similarity
02:59:588 (4) - NC here instead of 03:01:184 (1)
03:04:375 (3) - missing clap, and the end of 03:03:098 (2) as well
03:39:481 (2) - small spacing inconsistency here
there are a lot of missing claps in this diff, try fixing them by going through the diff with 100% hitsound volume and 50% music volume

[Normal]
00:54:162 (5) - see of you can arrange it so this stacks on 00:52:726 (2)
01:06:290 (4,5) - this may raise some confusion since all previous short sliders are one repeat, try something like this:

SPOILER

01:50:013 (5) - try arranging this so you get a blanket with 01:50:652 (1)
02:07:726 (6,7) - this rhythm is a little difficult to play, try swapping 02:07:726 (6,7) for a slider and turn 02:08:205 (8) into 2 circles
02:10:120 (4,5) - no hitsounds?
03:50:971 (1) - move it a bit left for better flow

[UWS's Hard]
03:01:184 (1) - expected this to be a lot quieter, pretty loud hitsounds for a calm build up
03:09:162 (6) - forgot clap
03:26:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - this could cause reading issues for players late into the map, consider moving 03:26:715 (1,2) out of stack

[Insane]
01:04:694 (9) - missing hitsounds here, also this pause plays a little bad because players are inclined to hit 01:05:013 (1) too early; easy solution would be to make this circle into a slider ending at 01:04:854
01:38:364 (2) - the anti jump reads better if the NC was on this instead of 01:37:886 (1)
01:46:822 (2,3) - this anti jump is a little random since there are no music indications, just use normal spacing here
02:47:141 (1) - try a finish here
02:57:354 (1) - why is this not centered lol
03:14:827 - i would add a note here to catch the 1/4 in the music
03:20:652 (3) - the clap on the end sounds a little out of place, since there is no clap in the music there

[Liberation]
00:32:779 (1,1,1) - using how the intensity of the music changes, this should actually be 0.9 -> 0.7 -> 0.5 instead of 0.5 -> 0.7 -> 0.9 which is what you currently have.
01:04:614 (11) - this spacing is a little intense, if anything this belongs to the last kiai where everything is harder
01:36:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - would be great if you can mimic the slowdown effect 00:32:779 (1,1,1) has
01:48:338 - try lowering the volume a bit furthur, myabe 20%
02:17:886 (5) - use a larger spacing here to differentiate 1/3 better from 1/4
02:31:184 (1,2,3,4) - this will catch many people off guard, i recommend you use two sliders here or a repeat slider and a circle
03:29:907 (8,9) - this jump is really uncomfortable to hit, its better if you can reduce the intensity to ~2.3x and form a diamond:

SPOILER

thats all from me, let me know after you have looked through everything

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2015-02-11T02:21:13+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
late m4m >< (no problem, you came on the right time actually \o/)

[Normal]
00:54:162 (5) - see of you can arrange it so this stacks on 00:52:726 (2) (it had quite some chain effect but I hope it fixed)
01:06:290 (4,5) - this may raise some confusion since all previous short sliders are one repeat, try something like this: (fixed)
SPOILER
01:50:013 (5) - try arranging this so you get a blanket with 01:50:652 (1) (fixed)
02:07:726 (6,7) - this rhythm is a little difficult to play, try swapping 02:07:726 (6,7) for a slider and turn 02:08:205 (8) into 2 circles (fixed)
02:10:120 (4,5) - no hitsounds? (added, I forgot orz)
03:50:971 (1) - move it a bit left for better flow (fixed)

[Insane]
01:04:694 (9) - missing hitsounds here, also this pause plays a little bad because players are inclined to hit 01:05:013 (1) too early; easy solution would be to make this circle into a slider ending at 01:04:854 (clap added, but I think it's the right place to put an antijump)
01:38:364 (2) - the anti jump reads better if the NC was on this instead of 01:37:886 (1) (fixed)
01:46:822 (2,3) - this anti jump is a little random since there are no music indications, just use normal spacing here (fixed)
02:47:141 (1) - try a finish here (added, I supposed to do it long ago but it seems I'm so forgetful)
02:57:354 (1) - why is this not centered lol (LOL fixed)
03:14:827 - i would add a note here to catch the 1/4 in the music (fixed and done tweaking the flow a bit)
03:20:652 (3) - the clap on the end sounds a little out of place, since there is no clap in the music there (removed)

[Liberation]
00:32:779 (1,1,1) - using how the intensity of the music changes, this should actually be 0.9 -> 0.7 -> 0.5 instead of 0.5 -> 0.7 -> 0.9 which is what you currently have. (fixed)
01:04:614 (11) - this spacing is a little intense, if anything this belongs to the last kiai where everything is harder (changed to 1.0x to follow the current SV)
01:36:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - would be great if you can mimic the slowdown effect 00:32:779 (1,1,1) has (fixed, phew much better)
01:48:338 - try lowering the volume a bit furthur, myabe 20% (tried another way but fixed)
02:17:886 (5) - use a larger spacing here to differentiate 1/3 better from 1/4 (I hope 1.0x spacing would be enough)
02:31:184 (1,2,3,4) - this will catch many people off guard, i recommend you use two sliders here or a repeat slider and a circle (now that you mention it, I agree)
03:29:907 (8,9) - this jump is really uncomfortable to hit, its better if you can reduce the intensity to ~2.3x and form a diamond: (how about 2.4x? I find it comfortable enough)
SPOILER

thats all from me, let me know after you have looked through everything

thanks, that really help
waiting for GDers then I'll update

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2015-02-13T14:10:35+00:00

so hi, here I am again

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Ts8zs' Easy]
00:13:949 (1) - maybe another finish here thats lower in volume to finish the transition (added)
00:19:056 (1) - missing hitsounds on repeat (clap added)
00:36:928 (2) - NC here instead of 00:36:290 (1) (fixed)
01:25:758 (2) - missing clap on end (fixed)
01:27:035 (4) - no hitsounds? (clap added)
01:40:758 (4) - NC to prevent long combo (fixed for consistency)
01:48:417 (1) - this is an exact copy paste of the first kiai, i would recommend you do a vertical or horizontal flip to avoid the similarity (why I haven't realized since the beginning lol, flipped horizontally)
02:59:588 (4) - NC here instead of 03:01:184 (1) (fixed)
03:04:375 (3) - missing clap, and the end of 03:03:098 (2) as well (added)
03:39:481 (2) - small spacing inconsistency here (fixed)
there are a lot of missing claps in this diff, try fixing them by going through the diff with 100% hitsound volume and 50% music volume (well, judging on how he rarely use any claps on red tick, I suppose it's just his style but anything else beside red tick one are fixed, I suppose)

waiting for UWS

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-13T23:27:42+00:00

hahaha

these hitsounds. gg i was too lazy to check those ;w;

UnitedWeSin

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UnitedWeSin 2015-02-16T00:02:05+00:00

Thank you Mr lfjljfjflj sir. I have fixed those things.

http://puu.sh/fYeQf/bde87afa9c.rar

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