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Marika - Soul Release

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El SolarBeam
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El SolarBeam
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月16日 at 11:46:33

Artist: Marika
Title: Soul Release
Source: ハロー・レディ！
Tags: Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel ts8zs UnitedWeSin
BPM: 188
Filesize: 6331kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.35 stars, 733 notes)
  2. Liberation (5.05 stars, 850 notes)
  3. Normal (2.25 stars, 386 notes)
  4. Ts8zs' Easy (1.72 stars, 246 notes)
  5. UWS's Hard (3.46 stars, 647 notes)
Download: Marika - Soul Release
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Changed the mp3 on 2015/01/31, please redownload

Easy by ts8zs
Normal by me
Hard by UnitedWeSin
Insane by me
Liberation by me (screw distance snap)

Thanks for everyone's support and feedback!
Last edited by El SolarBeam , edited 51 times in total.
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
finished
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Marika - Soul Release.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 187538
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Soul Release
TitleUnicode:Soul Release
Artist:Marika
ArtistUnicode:Marika
Creator:El SolarBeam
Version:Ts8zs' Easy
Source:ハロー・レディ！
Tags:Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
2,131368,150474
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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El SolarBeam
1,022 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
yeah, I like the pattern. keep it on :D
(just don't make it too hard to read w)
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs

El SolarBeam wrote:

yeah, I like the pattern. keep it on :D
(just don't make it too hard to read w)
hard to read? where ;w;
El SolarBeam
1,022 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
the repeating slider part, well it's fine but don't overuse it :3
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs

El SolarBeam wrote:

the repeating slider part, well it's fine but don't overuse it :3
01:06:262 (2) - ? I couldnt think a better way now ;w;
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Tags:Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel
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208,56,169666,6,0,P|136:32|56:80,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,170624,2,0,P|216:152|296:104,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,40,171581,2,0,L|408:56,3,40,2|2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,172219,12,2,176687,0:0:0:0:
304,288,177326,6,0,L|224:272,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,177964,2,0,P|128:256|136:312,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,179241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,96,179560,2,0,P|256:64|328:96,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,181156,6,0,P|88:88|104:48,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,181794,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,192,182113,6,0,P|138:218|95:225,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,183070,2,0,P|271:229|352:232,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,320,183868,2,0,P|264:352|144:288,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,200,184985,6,0,B|160:152|184:120|184:120|176:80,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,176,186262,2,0,L|304:168,2,40,2|0|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,186900,2,0,L|279:285,2,40,2|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,187539,6,0,P|104:304|64:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,188177,2,0,B|72:176|78:130|78:130|51:100,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,189453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,64,189773,6,0,P|272:131|256:207,1,160,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,296,190730,2,0,P|256:304|296:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,191368,6,0,P|392:303|352:376,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,192645,2,0,P|304:184|264:176,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,193283,6,0,P|360:80|416:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,194560,2,0,P|152:80|96:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,195836,2,0,B|280:224|232:272|256:328,1,160,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,196794,2,0,P|384:304|424:296,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,197751,6,0,P|336:200|296:208,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,198389,2,0,P|209:243|245:290,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,120,199666,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,104,199985,2,0,P|329:40|251:31,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,201581,6,0,P|376:200|416:192,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,202219,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,120,202538,2,0,P|254:150|247:193,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,203495,6,0,P|320:248|264:280,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,368,204293,2,0,P|173:292|208:203,1,200,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,205410,6,0,B|312:168|288:136|288:136|296:96,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,206687,2,0,L|168:192,2,40,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,207325,2,0,L|201:301,2,40,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,207964,6,0,P|368:328|408:320,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,208602,2,0,B|400:200|394:154|394:154|421:124,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,209878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,80,210198,6,0,P|208:147|224:223,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,211155,2,0,P|224:320|184:312,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,211793,6,0,P|88:311|128:384,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,213070,2,0,P|176:192|216:184,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,213708,6,0,P|120:88|64:120,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,214985,2,0,P|304:24|360:56,2,120,2|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,120,216261,2,0,B|264:176|312:224|288:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,240,217219,2,0,P|160:248|120:240,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,218176,6,0,P|144:88|168:32,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,219453,2,0,L|280:88,3,40,2|0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,220251,2,0,L|296:192,1,40,2|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,220729,6,0,P|392:168|352:112,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,192,221527,2,0,P|288:248|328:304,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,328,222324,1,10,0:0:0:0:
472,248,222644,2,0,P|479:208|480:168,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,72,223283,6,0,B|428:86|428:86|388:70|348:86,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,224080,2,0,B|345:191|305:175|305:175|269:190,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,224878,2,0,P|176:191|184:230,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,225835,6,0,P|224:64|152:64,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,116,226634,2,0,P|124:151|184:152,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,227431,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,200,227750,2,0,P|360:152|336:120,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,56,228388,6,0,P|328:32|392:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,112,229186,2,0,P|402:136|343:125,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,229985,1,10,0:0:0:0:
166,106,230304,2,0,P|154:144|160:184,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,230942,12,0,234613,0:0:0:0:
El SolarBeam
1,022 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
well, personally no offense about it, just let the modders check it /o/

i'll update it as soon as the internet supports

EDIT : so, here's left the hard diff w
Ciyus Miapah
3,011 posts
Joined June 2013
Ciyus Miapah
Hi

[Insane]
00:05:811 (4,5) - try to increase distance in here
00:04:375 (4,5) - whistle
00:05:013 (1) - ^
00:05:332 (3) - ^ in slider tail
00:05:811 (4) - ^
00:05:970 (5) - ^ in slider tail
00:06:928 (3,4) - ^
00:07:566 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:08:205 (3,4) - ^
00:08:684 (7) - Clap
00:09:481 (3) - whistle
00:10:120 (1) - ^
00:10:439 (2) - ^ in slider tail
00:10:918 (3) - ^
00:11:077 (4) - ^ in slider tail
00:12:673 (1) - ^
00:12:832 (2) - ^
00:13:311 (4,5) - ^
00:16:343 (2,3) - ^ (for slider in head only)
00:19:056 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:21:449 (2) - ^
00:21:609 (3) - ^ slider head
00:23:763 (9) - delete clap
blah, so much notes who didnt hitsounding yet.... especially in intro, but i dont know what do you think

00:38:364 (5,6) - why you stack this?
01:04:375 (10,11,1) - seems this pattern unusual, but is up to you
02:26:795 (1) - confusing NC, please NC 02:26:396 (5) -
03:37:726 (7,8,9,10) - really confusing, dont directly antijump 1/2 pattern after do triplet. just stack 03:38:045 (10,1) -

almost FC it, i miss in that long stream after 1/1 slider, so confuse in there. the rest is very good, i like it xD. but still this map needs more hitsounding


[Hard]
Not Available yet, so put this map on WIP.

[Normal]
00:11:396 (1) - middle point in x0 y144, last point in x20 y260
01:27:992 (1) - fix blanket
01:35:652 (1) - out of bonds, please that slider hit my score number
01:38:843 (3) - fix blanket?
03:30:226 (1) - overlap in here

same like Insane, this map needs more Hitsounding too.
i cant find anything wrong in pattern or maybe anything, i FC this map and its okay.

[Easy]
im just look at this one http://puu.sh/cJbNQ/ba738d0f63.png (im still believe this, so the pattern in Easy is like normal i think)
and why so much 1/2 in here, there should be Easy+ in this map. but idk im just testplaying this still can FC it lol

okay, that's my mod. im really sorry for very short mod, because im seriously cant find some problem in your map (except add Hard diff). so goodluck with your map.
El SolarBeam
1,022 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
waiting for hard diff before applying mod

とりあえずjust enjoy this 2 kudos first
Ciyus Miapah
3,011 posts
Joined June 2013
Ciyus Miapah
why 2 kudos for short mod?? blame peppy pls
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs

Fort wrote:

why 2 kudos for short mod?? blame peppy pls
mod a map didn't update and be modded for 7 days ;w;
El SolarBeam
1,022 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
because I'm generous ok no lol

thanks for the explanation pal
Momochikun
1,927 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun
hi :3

[General]
Remove all wide screen support on the diffs since you got no SB o.o
Better to keep this on the WIP state since it's still not completed yet

[Insane]
00:01:184 (1,2) - These sounds a bit too loud for me, i'd reduce the hitsound volume a bit ><
00:05:811 (4,5) - How about move them farther ? (3) and (4) now spaced just like a 3/4 rhythm for me, it would make the player a bit confused imo
00:13:630 (1) - You can hear a slightly cymbal crash here, how about a finish ? you can lower the volume a bit to create great effect
01:04:694 (1) - ^
00:14:269 (3) - I'd separate this into 1/2 slider and note to follow the vocal, somehow a bit rude to skip the first vocal of the song xD
00:35:811 (5,5) - Missing clap on these note
00:42:035 (1) - Add finish i guess ?
01:17:460 (4) - ^ 02:08:843 (1) - at start 01:26:715 (1) - at end
01:02:301 (2) - I can hear some highbeat sound at the downbeat, pretty awkward to see it skipped, i'd go for note and 1/2 o.o
01:12:354 (5) - Missing clap
01:29:109 (4,5) - Move them farther ? looks a bit cramped for me atm
01:31:822 - Stop plays awkwardly due the vocal being skipped, add a note here
02:21:290 (4,5,6,7) - Clap to this stream..
02:31:503 (9) - Missing finish orz.. you can clearly hear a cymbal crash there on the music
02:40:758 (1) - Is this really need to be double reverse ? lol i think you can make more creative pattern here since it was Insane
03:16:503 (1,3) - Finishes on them ?
03:25:120 (1) - How about CTRL G for softer transition between them ? don't forget to restack (7)
03:35:013 (7) - Missing clap
03:38:045 (10,1) - This would surely confusing since it spaced just as same like the previous triplet. People may think this was a duplet, pls move this farther

[Normal]
Hitsounds suggestion on Insane may applied on this diff to if you feel like it
00:16:822 (4,1,2,3,4) - This whole part feels boring due to that overuse of reverse slider, i think you can combine more 1/1 and 1/2 sliders to create attractive pattern here since it's Not an Easy diff o.o
01:33:737 (2) - CTRL H + J ? xD
01:41:715 (2) - I'd go for straight slider instead here for neater transition before and after this slider
02:08:843 (1) - Missing finish
02:42:035 (1) - 02:47:141 (1) - ^
Fine diff, on some place i think it can be more neater. Some of your flow is not very natural imo

[Easy]
00:03:258 (1) - It's not good to start an Easy diff with a 1/2 not which indentical with Normal diff, simplify this into a single note.
00:34:375 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Too much 1/2 s !! pls mix some of them into 1/1 slider or so !
01:37:726 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^
01:06:290 (2,3) - This would surely confusing since you using more than 1 repeat point. Separate them at least? though 3/2 slider is better imo
02:10:119 (2,3) - ^
02:04:374 (1) - Should be a clap at the slider start instead of whistle
02:52:247 (1,1) - Unrankable stuffs, object is too close to the spinner. The minimum recovery time of Easy diff is 1 full measure ( 4 white tick )
03:50:970 (1) - End it just like the same as the other diffs ?
THe SV is pretty low which indicate the Easy diff, but i think you emphasize the drum a bit too much. 1/2 slider are overused here imo.
Your pattern itself is fit nicely for beginners, but your rhythm does not. Try simplify more of your rhythm by mixing 3/2 slider and 1/1 slider on some 1/2 drum beat just like 03:06:290 (2,3) - and 03:39:481 (2,3) -


Good luck :C
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs

Momochikun wrote:

hi :3
hi

[Easy]
00:03:258 (1) - It's not good to start an Easy diff with a 1/2 not which indentical with Normal diff, simplify this into a single note. It is harder to catch in hidden
00:34:375 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Too much 1/2 s !! pls mix some of them into 1/1 slider or so !
01:37:726 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^ thinking
01:06:290 (2,3) - This would surely confusing since you using more than 1 repeat point. Separate them at least? though 3/2 slider is better imo um...
02:10:119 (2,3) - ^
02:04:374 (1) - Should be a clap at the slider start instead of whistleI dont think so
02:52:247 (1,1) - Unrankable stuffs, object is too close to the spinner. The minimum recovery time of Easy diff is 1 full measure ( 4 white tick ) fixed
03:50:970 (1) - End it just like the same as the other diffs ? well I think end here is better,depends on creator
THe SV is pretty low which indicate the Easy diff, but i think you emphasize the drum a bit too much. 1/2 slider are overused here imo.
Your pattern itself is fit nicely for beginners, but your rhythm does not. Try simplify more of your rhythm by mixing 3/2 slider and 1/1 slider on some 1/2 drum beat just like 03:06:290 (2,3) - and 03:39:481 (2,3) - um I follow the vocal


Good luck :C
@creator
02:52:219 (1) - End at 02:55:411 -
03:50:943 (1) - End at 03:54:773 -
That's all
El SolarBeam
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Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
haha well this situation is quite similar with our previous map

will consider after 30% hard diff part left done

EDIT : I think it's fine the way it is (since 2v1 /runs)
you can also keep your style, I don't mind :3
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El SolarBeam
1,022 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam

Fort wrote:

Hi

[Insane]
00:05:811 (4,5) - try to increase distance in here
00:04:375 (4,5) - whistle
00:05:013 (1) - ^
00:05:332 (3) - ^ in slider tail
00:05:811 (4) - ^
00:05:970 (5) - ^ in slider tail
00:06:928 (3,4) - ^
00:07:566 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:08:205 (3,4) - ^
00:08:684 (7) - Clap
00:09:481 (3) - whistle
00:10:120 (1) - ^
00:10:439 (2) - ^ in slider tail
00:10:918 (3) - ^
00:11:077 (4) - ^ in slider tail
00:12:673 (1) - ^
00:12:832 (2) - ^
00:13:311 (4,5) - ^
00:16:343 (2,3) - ^ (for slider in head only)
00:19:056 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:21:449 (2) - ^
00:21:609 (3) - ^ slider head
00:23:763 (9) - delete clap
blah, so much notes who didnt hitsounding yet.... especially in intro, but i dont know what do you think (fixed my sense of humor hitsounding)

00:38:364 (5,6) - why you stack this? (well, it's not false at least)
01:04:375 (10,11,1) - seems this pattern unusual, but is up to you (no problem for the time being)
02:26:795 (1) - confusing NC, please NC 02:26:396 (5) - (fixed)
03:37:726 (7,8,9,10) - really confusing, dont directly antijump 1/2 pattern after do triplet. just stack 03:38:045 (10,1) - (fixed)

almost FC it, i miss in that long stream after 1/1 slider, so confuse in there. the rest is very good, i like it xD. but still this map needs more hitsounding


[Hard]
Not Available yet, so put this map on WIP. (available now so fixed)

[Normal]
00:11:396 (1) - middle point in x0 y144, last point in x20 y260 (fixed)
01:27:992 (1) - fix blanket (it's fine I suppose)
01:35:652 (1) - out of bonds, please that slider hit my score number (haha sorry about that, fixed)
01:38:843 (3) - fix blanket? (it's fine I suppose)
03:30:226 (1) - overlap in here (fixed)

same like Insane, this map needs more Hitsounding too.
i cant find anything wrong in pattern or maybe anything, i FC this map and its okay.

[Easy]
im just look at this one http://puu.sh/cJbNQ/ba738d0f63.png (im still believe this, so the pattern in Easy is like normal i think)
and why so much 1/2 in here, there should be Easy+ in this map. but idk im just testplaying this still can FC it lol

okay, that's my mod. im really sorry for very short mod, because im seriously cant find some problem in your map (except add Hard diff). so goodluck with your map.

Momochikun wrote:

hi :3 owo)/

[General]
Remove all wide screen support on the diffs since you got no SB o.o (fixed, too tired to make SB these day ww)
Better to keep this on the WIP state since it's still not completed yet (completed now)

[Insane]
00:01:184 (1,2) - These sounds a bit too loud for me, i'd reduce the hitsound volume a bit >< (I like the hitsound at the currrent volume though :o)
00:05:811 (4,5) - How about move them farther ? (3) and (4) now spaced just like a 3/4 rhythm for me, it would make the player a bit confused imo (ok, just a bit then)
00:13:630 (1) - You can hear a slightly cymbal crash here, how about a finish ? you can lower the volume a bit to create great effect (hm, the sound's kinda weak so I'll refrain)
01:04:694 (1) - ^
00:14:269 (3) - I'd separate this into 1/2 slider and note to follow the vocal, somehow a bit rude to skip the first vocal of the song xD (haha well, my forte is the instrument so it sounds unusual for me instead, not a bad idea though :3)
00:35:811 (5,5) - Missing clap on these note (fixed)
00:42:035 (1) - Add finish i guess ? (adding whistle instead, just say it's fixed)
01:17:460 (4) - ^ 02:08:843 (1) - at start 01:26:715 (1) - at end (fixed some)
01:02:301 (2) - I can hear some highbeat sound at the downbeat, pretty awkward to see it skipped, i'd go for note and 1/2 o.o (hm, I think this rhythm is easier to execute imo)
01:12:354 (5) - Missing clap (fixed)
01:29:109 (4,5) - Move them farther ? looks a bit cramped for me atm (I think it looks just nice though)
01:31:822 - Stop plays awkwardly due the vocal being skipped, add a note here (it's more awkwark to suddenly follow vocal I suppose)
02:21:290 (4,5,6,7) - Clap to this stream.. (fixed)
02:31:503 (9) - Missing finish orz.. you can clearly hear a cymbal crash there on the music (fixed)
02:40:758 (1) - Is this really need to be double reverse ? lol i think you can make more creative pattern here since it was Insane (well, no one disallow anyway xD at least it's better than making antijump imo)
03:16:503 (1,3) - Finishes on them ? (ok, nice idea)
03:25:120 (1) - How about CTRL G for softer transition between them ? don't forget to restack (7) (well, you just have to pull the mouse downward on this pattern so no problem imo)
03:35:013 (7) - Missing clap (fixed)
03:38:045 (10,1) - This would surely confusing since it spaced just as same like the previous triplet. People may think this was a duplet, pls move this farther
(fixed beforehand)

[Normal]
Hitsounds suggestion on Insane may applied on this diff to if you feel like it
00:16:822 (4,1,2,3,4) - This whole part feels boring due to that overuse of reverse slider, i think you can combine more 1/1 and 1/2 sliders to create attractive pattern here since it's Not an Easy diff o.o (let me consider later :3)
01:33:737 (2) - CTRL H + J ? xD (it's fine as is maybe ww)
01:41:715 (2) - I'd go for straight slider instead here for neater transition before and after this slider (I'll make it wavy instead, fixed annyway)
02:08:843 (1) - Missing finish (fixed)
02:42:035 (1) - 02:47:141 (1) - ^ (fixed)
Fine diff, on some place i think it can be more neater. Some of your flow is not very natural imo

Good luck :C
thanks for the mod~
Netamaru
493 posts
Joined August 2012
Netamaru
[Insane]

01:00:545 (3,4,5) - stack slidernya beda sendiri disini, mungkin kalo di jadiin kaya ini
(cuma saran, mungkin situ punya ide yang lebih bagus lagi)
jadi lebih konsisten sama pattern nya

01:02:141 (1,2) - ^mungkin kalo saran di atas di terima, disini bisa jadi kaya ini

(sama kaya di atas, cuma masukan)

01:04:375 (10,11,1) - 1/4 note mungkin di rapatin, sama kaya di atas disini aja ngak konsisten sama pattern map nya, distance nya beda sendiri dari keseluruhan

[UWS's Hard]

02:28:949 (4) - kenapa ngak 3 beat aja disini? soalnya dari combo" sebelum nya itu 3 beat semua, terus disini tiba" 4 rasanya bakalan sering break karena kaget

03:27:035 (3,4,5) - stack nya buruk disini buat hard, saran saya mungkin dibuat 3 hit circle, lalu slider kaya ini


mungkin cuma segitu aja, dikit sih emang, saya masih ngak begitu ngerti sama mapping sebenernya tugas numpuk masih menunggu juga lol, dan juga maklum pake bahasa indonesia, grammar masih hancur

btw goodluck buat map nya /o/
THS
1,024 posts
Joined November 2011
THS
Quick mod stil practice
Insane

- replace 00:33:577 (3) - and 00:33:657 (4) - with a single slider
- 00:34:056 reduce the volume a bit?
- 01:27:673 (4,5,6,7,1) - end of the stream at 01:28:152 (2) -
- 01:48:577 add note?
- 02:31:582 (10) - ^
- 03:32:460 (8,9,10,11) - replace with 2 reverse sliders in 8.9 and 10.11?

Normal

- AR+0.5?

UWS's Hard

- AR+0.5? since this is quite high BPM so, i recommend AR8 instead of 7.5 xD
El SolarBeam
1,022 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
thanks mas mas o7

fixed some
Asagi
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Joined March 2013
Asagi
yes yes yes
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