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El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2014-10-15T05:37:09+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月16日 at 11:46:33

Artist: Marika
Title: Soul Release
Source: ハロー・レディ！
Tags: Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel ts8zs UnitedWeSin
BPM: 188
Filesize: 6331kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:

Insane (4.35 stars, 733 notes)
Liberation (5.05 stars, 850 notes)
Normal (2.25 stars, 386 notes)
Ts8zs' Easy (1.72 stars, 246 notes)
UWS's Hard (3.46 stars, 647 notes)

Download: Marika - Soul Release
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Changed the mp3 on 2015/01/31, please redownload

Easy by ts8zs
Normal by me
Hard by UnitedWeSin
Insane by me
Liberation by me (screw distance snap)

Thanks for everyone's support and feedback!

Last edited by El SolarBeam 2015-02-18T01:01:11+00:00, edited 51 times in total.

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-10-19T04:57:41+00:00

finished

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Marika - Soul Release.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 187538
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Soul Release
TitleUnicode:Soul Release
Artist:Marika
ArtistUnicode:Marika
Creator:El SolarBeam
Version:Ts8zs' Easy
Source:ハロー・レディ！
Tags:Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-10-19T06:24:43+00:00

yeah, I like the pattern. keep it on

(just don't make it too hard to read w)

ts8zs

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Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-10-19T06:35:41+00:00

El SolarBeam wrote:
yeah, I like the pattern. keep it on
(just don't make it too hard to read w)

hard to read? where ;w;

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-10-20T02:56:34+00:00

the repeating slider part, well it's fine but don't overuse it :3

ts8zs

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Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-10-20T03:32:20+00:00

El SolarBeam wrote:
the repeating slider part, well it's fine but don't overuse it :3

01:06:262 (2) - ? I couldnt think a better way now ;w;

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208,56,169666,6,0,P|136:32|56:80,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,170624,2,0,P|216:152|296:104,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,40,171581,2,0,L|408:56,3,40,2|2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,172219,12,2,176687,0:0:0:0:
304,288,177326,6,0,L|224:272,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,177964,2,0,P|128:256|136:312,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,179241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,96,179560,2,0,P|256:64|328:96,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,181156,6,0,P|88:88|104:48,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,181794,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,192,182113,6,0,P|138:218|95:225,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,183070,2,0,P|271:229|352:232,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,320,183868,2,0,P|264:352|144:288,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,200,184985,6,0,B|160:152|184:120|184:120|176:80,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,176,186262,2,0,L|304:168,2,40,2|0|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,186900,2,0,L|279:285,2,40,2|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,187539,6,0,P|104:304|64:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,188177,2,0,B|72:176|78:130|78:130|51:100,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,189453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,64,189773,6,0,P|272:131|256:207,1,160,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,296,190730,2,0,P|256:304|296:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,191368,6,0,P|392:303|352:376,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,192645,2,0,P|304:184|264:176,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,193283,6,0,P|360:80|416:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,194560,2,0,P|152:80|96:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,195836,2,0,B|280:224|232:272|256:328,1,160,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,196794,2,0,P|384:304|424:296,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,197751,6,0,P|336:200|296:208,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,198389,2,0,P|209:243|245:290,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,120,199666,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,104,199985,2,0,P|329:40|251:31,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,201581,6,0,P|376:200|416:192,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,202219,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,120,202538,2,0,P|254:150|247:193,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,203495,6,0,P|320:248|264:280,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,368,204293,2,0,P|173:292|208:203,1,200,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,205410,6,0,B|312:168|288:136|288:136|296:96,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,206687,2,0,L|168:192,2,40,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,207325,2,0,L|201:301,2,40,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,207964,6,0,P|368:328|408:320,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,208602,2,0,B|400:200|394:154|394:154|421:124,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,209878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,80,210198,6,0,P|208:147|224:223,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,211155,2,0,P|224:320|184:312,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,211793,6,0,P|88:311|128:384,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,213070,2,0,P|176:192|216:184,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,213708,6,0,P|120:88|64:120,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,214985,2,0,P|304:24|360:56,2,120,2|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,120,216261,2,0,B|264:176|312:224|288:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,240,217219,2,0,P|160:248|120:240,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,218176,6,0,P|144:88|168:32,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,219453,2,0,L|280:88,3,40,2|0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,220251,2,0,L|296:192,1,40,2|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,220729,6,0,P|392:168|352:112,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,192,221527,2,0,P|288:248|328:304,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,328,222324,1,10,0:0:0:0:
472,248,222644,2,0,P|479:208|480:168,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,72,223283,6,0,B|428:86|428:86|388:70|348:86,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,224080,2,0,B|345:191|305:175|305:175|269:190,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,224878,2,0,P|176:191|184:230,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,225835,6,0,P|224:64|152:64,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,116,226634,2,0,P|124:151|184:152,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,227431,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,200,227750,2,0,P|360:152|336:120,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,56,228388,6,0,P|328:32|392:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,112,229186,2,0,P|402:136|343:125,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,229985,1,10,0:0:0:0:
166,106,230304,2,0,P|154:144|160:184,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,230942,12,0,234613,0:0:0:0:

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-10-20T05:58:38+00:00

well, personally no offense about it, just let the modders check it /o/

i'll update it as soon as the internet supports

EDIT : so, here's left the hard diff w

Ciyus Miapah

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Ciyus Miapah 2014-11-09T06:12:48+00:00

Hi

[Insane]
00:05:811 (4,5) - try to increase distance in here
00:04:375 (4,5) - whistle
00:05:013 (1) - ^
00:05:332 (3) - ^ in slider tail
00:05:811 (4) - ^
00:05:970 (5) - ^ in slider tail
00:06:928 (3,4) - ^
00:07:566 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:08:205 (3,4) - ^
00:08:684 (7) - Clap
00:09:481 (3) - whistle
00:10:120 (1) - ^
00:10:439 (2) - ^ in slider tail
00:10:918 (3) - ^
00:11:077 (4) - ^ in slider tail
00:12:673 (1) - ^
00:12:832 (2) - ^
00:13:311 (4,5) - ^
00:16:343 (2,3) - ^ (for slider in head only)
00:19:056 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:21:449 (2) - ^
00:21:609 (3) - ^ slider head
00:23:763 (9) - delete clap
blah, so much notes who didnt hitsounding yet.... especially in intro, but i dont know what do you think

00:38:364 (5,6) - why you stack this?
01:04:375 (10,11,1) - seems this pattern unusual, but is up to you
02:26:795 (1) - confusing NC, please NC 02:26:396 (5) -
03:37:726 (7,8,9,10) - really confusing, dont directly antijump 1/2 pattern after do triplet. just stack 03:38:045 (10,1) -

almost FC it, i miss in that long stream after 1/1 slider, so confuse in there. the rest is very good, i like it xD. but still this map needs more hitsounding

[Hard]
Not Available yet, so put this map on WIP.

[Normal]
00:11:396 (1) - middle point in x0 y144, last point in x20 y260
01:27:992 (1) - fix blanket
01:35:652 (1) - out of bonds, please that slider hit my score number
01:38:843 (3) - fix blanket?
03:30:226 (1) - overlap in here

same like Insane, this map needs more Hitsounding too.
i cant find anything wrong in pattern or maybe anything, i FC this map and its okay.

[Easy]
im just look at this one http://puu.sh/cJbNQ/ba738d0f63.png (im still believe this, so the pattern in Easy is like normal i think)
and why so much 1/2 in here, there should be Easy+ in this map. but idk im just testplaying this still can FC it lol

okay, that's my mod. im really sorry for very short mod, because im seriously cant find some problem in your map (except add Hard diff). so goodluck with your map.

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2014-11-09T12:38:43+00:00

waiting for hard diff before applying mod

とりあえずjust enjoy this 2 kudos first

Ciyus Miapah

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Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-11-09T13:11:25+00:00

why 2 kudos for short mod?? blame peppy pls

ts8zs

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Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-11-09T14:05:38+00:00

Fort wrote:
why 2 kudos for short mod?? blame peppy pls

mod a map didn't update and be modded for 7 days ;w;

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2014-11-10T03:14:22+00:00

~~because I'm generous~~ ok no lol

thanks for the explanation pal

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2014-11-22T23:56:15+00:00

hi :3

[General]
Remove all wide screen support on the diffs since you got no SB o.o
Better to keep this on the WIP state since it's still not completed yet

[Insane]
00:01:184 (1,2) - These sounds a bit too loud for me, i'd reduce the hitsound volume a bit ><
00:05:811 (4,5) - How about move them farther ? (3) and (4) now spaced just like a 3/4 rhythm for me, it would make the player a bit confused imo
00:13:630 (1) - You can hear a slightly cymbal crash here, how about a finish ? you can lower the volume a bit to create great effect
01:04:694 (1) - ^
00:14:269 (3) - I'd separate this into 1/2 slider and note to follow the vocal, somehow a bit rude to skip the first vocal of the song xD
00:35:811 (5,5) - Missing clap on these note
00:42:035 (1) - Add finish i guess ?
01:17:460 (4) - ^ 02:08:843 (1) - at start 01:26:715 (1) - at end
01:02:301 (2) - I can hear some highbeat sound at the downbeat, pretty awkward to see it skipped, i'd go for note and 1/2 o.o
01:12:354 (5) - Missing clap
01:29:109 (4,5) - Move them farther ? looks a bit cramped for me atm
01:31:822 - Stop plays awkwardly due the vocal being skipped, add a note here
02:21:290 (4,5,6,7) - Clap to this stream..
02:31:503 (9) - Missing finish orz.. you can clearly hear a cymbal crash there on the music
02:40:758 (1) - Is this really need to be double reverse ? lol i think you can make more creative pattern here since it was Insane
03:16:503 (1,3) - Finishes on them ?
03:25:120 (1) - How about CTRL G for softer transition between them ? don't forget to restack (7)
03:35:013 (7) - Missing clap
03:38:045 (10,1) - This would surely confusing since it spaced just as same like the previous triplet. People may think this was a duplet, pls move this farther

[Normal]
Hitsounds suggestion on Insane may applied on this diff to if you feel like it
00:16:822 (4,1,2,3,4) - This whole part feels boring due to that overuse of reverse slider, i think you can combine more 1/1 and 1/2 sliders to create attractive pattern here since it's Not an Easy diff o.o
01:33:737 (2) - CTRL H + J ? xD
01:41:715 (2) - I'd go for straight slider instead here for neater transition before and after this slider
02:08:843 (1) - Missing finish
02:42:035 (1) - 02:47:141 (1) - ^
Fine diff, on some place i think it can be more neater. Some of your flow is not very natural imo

[Easy]
00:03:258 (1) - It's not good to start an Easy diff with a 1/2 not which indentical with Normal diff, simplify this into a single note.
00:34:375 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Too much 1/2 s !! pls mix some of them into 1/1 slider or so !
01:37:726 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^
01:06:290 (2,3) - This would surely confusing since you using more than 1 repeat point. Separate them at least? though 3/2 slider is better imo
02:10:119 (2,3) - ^
02:04:374 (1) - Should be a clap at the slider start instead of whistle
02:52:247 (1,1) - Unrankable stuffs, object is too close to the spinner. The minimum recovery time of Easy diff is 1 full measure ( 4 white tick )
03:50:970 (1) - End it just like the same as the other diffs ?
THe SV is pretty low which indicate the Easy diff, but i think you emphasize the drum a bit too much. 1/2 slider are overused here imo.
Your pattern itself is fit nicely for beginners, but your rhythm does not. Try simplify more of your rhythm by mixing 3/2 slider and 1/1 slider on some 1/2 drum beat just like 03:06:290 (2,3) - and 03:39:481 (2,3) -

Good luck :C

ts8zs

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ts8zs 2014-11-23T05:05:59+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
hi :3
hi

[Easy]
00:03:258 (1) - It's not good to start an Easy diff with a 1/2 not which indentical with Normal diff, simplify this into a single note. It is harder to catch in hidden
00:34:375 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Too much 1/2 s !! pls mix some of them into 1/1 slider or so !
01:37:726 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^ thinking
01:06:290 (2,3) - This would surely confusing since you using more than 1 repeat point. Separate them at least? though 3/2 slider is better imo um...
02:10:119 (2,3) - ^
02:04:374 (1) - Should be a clap at the slider start instead of whistleI dont think so
02:52:247 (1,1) - Unrankable stuffs, object is too close to the spinner. The minimum recovery time of Easy diff is 1 full measure ( 4 white tick ) fixed
03:50:970 (1) - End it just like the same as the other diffs ? well I think end here is better,depends on creator
THe SV is pretty low which indicate the Easy diff, but i think you emphasize the drum a bit too much. 1/2 slider are overused here imo.
Your pattern itself is fit nicely for beginners, but your rhythm does not. Try simplify more of your rhythm by mixing 3/2 slider and 1/1 slider on some 1/2 drum beat just like 03:06:290 (2,3) - and 03:39:481 (2,3) - um I follow the vocal

Good luck :C

@creator
02:52:219 (1) - End at 02:55:411 -
03:50:943 (1) - End at 03:54:773 -
That's all

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-11-23T05:43:56+00:00

haha well this situation is quite similar with our previous map

will consider after 30% hard diff part left done

EDIT : I think it's fine the way it is (since 2v1 /runs)
you can also keep your style, I don't mind :3

Last edited by El SolarBeam 2014-11-23T10:22:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-11-23T09:40:28+00:00

Fort wrote:
Hi

[Insane]
00:05:811 (4,5) - try to increase distance in here
00:04:375 (4,5) - whistle
00:05:013 (1) - ^
00:05:332 (3) - ^ in slider tail
00:05:811 (4) - ^
00:05:970 (5) - ^ in slider tail
00:06:928 (3,4) - ^
00:07:566 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:08:205 (3,4) - ^
00:08:684 (7) - Clap
00:09:481 (3) - whistle
00:10:120 (1) - ^
00:10:439 (2) - ^ in slider tail
00:10:918 (3) - ^
00:11:077 (4) - ^ in slider tail
00:12:673 (1) - ^
00:12:832 (2) - ^
00:13:311 (4,5) - ^
00:16:343 (2,3) - ^ (for slider in head only)
00:19:056 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:21:449 (2) - ^
00:21:609 (3) - ^ slider head
00:23:763 (9) - delete clap
blah, so much notes who didnt hitsounding yet.... especially in intro, but i dont know what do you think (fixed my sense of ~~humor~~ hitsounding)

00:38:364 (5,6) - why you stack this? (well, it's not false at least)
01:04:375 (10,11,1) - seems this pattern unusual, but is up to you (no problem for the time being)
02:26:795 (1) - confusing NC, please NC 02:26:396 (5) - (fixed)
03:37:726 (7,8,9,10) - really confusing, dont directly antijump 1/2 pattern after do triplet. just stack 03:38:045 (10,1) - (fixed)

almost FC it, i miss in that long stream after 1/1 slider, so confuse in there. the rest is very good, i like it xD. but still this map needs more hitsounding

[Hard]
Not Available yet, so put this map on WIP. (available now so fixed)

[Normal]
00:11:396 (1) - middle point in x0 y144, last point in x20 y260 (fixed)
01:27:992 (1) - fix blanket (it's fine I suppose)
01:35:652 (1) - out of bonds, please that slider hit my score number (haha sorry about that, fixed)
01:38:843 (3) - fix blanket? (it's fine I suppose)
03:30:226 (1) - overlap in here (fixed)

same like Insane, this map needs more Hitsounding too.
i cant find anything wrong in pattern or maybe anything, i FC this map and its okay.

[Easy]
im just look at this one http://puu.sh/cJbNQ/ba738d0f63.png (im still believe this, so the pattern in Easy is like normal i think)
and why so much 1/2 in here, there should be Easy+ in this map. but idk im just testplaying this still can FC it lol

okay, that's my mod. im really sorry for very short mod, because im seriously cant find some problem in your map (except add Hard diff). so goodluck with your map.

Momochikun wrote:
hi :3 owo)/

[General]
Remove all wide screen support on the diffs since you got no SB o.o (fixed, too tired to make SB these day ww)
Better to keep this on the WIP state since it's still not completed yet (completed now)

[Insane]
00:01:184 (1,2) - These sounds a bit too loud for me, i'd reduce the hitsound volume a bit >< (I like the hitsound at the currrent volume though )
00:05:811 (4,5) - How about move them farther ? (3) and (4) now spaced just like a 3/4 rhythm for me, it would make the player a bit confused imo (ok, just a bit then)
00:13:630 (1) - You can hear a slightly cymbal crash here, how about a finish ? you can lower the volume a bit to create great effect (hm, the sound's kinda weak so I'll refrain)
01:04:694 (1) - ^
00:14:269 (3) - I'd separate this into 1/2 slider and note to follow the vocal, somehow a bit rude to skip the first vocal of the song xD (haha well, my forte is the instrument so it sounds unusual for me instead, not a bad idea though :3)
00:35:811 (5,5) - Missing clap on these note (fixed)
00:42:035 (1) - Add finish i guess ? (adding whistle instead, just say it's fixed)
01:17:460 (4) - ^ 02:08:843 (1) - at start 01:26:715 (1) - at end (fixed some)
01:02:301 (2) - I can hear some highbeat sound at the downbeat, pretty awkward to see it skipped, i'd go for note and 1/2 o.o (hm, I think this rhythm is easier to execute imo)
01:12:354 (5) - Missing clap (fixed)
01:29:109 (4,5) - Move them farther ? looks a bit cramped for me atm (I think it looks just nice though)
01:31:822 - Stop plays awkwardly due the vocal being skipped, add a note here (it's more awkwark to suddenly follow vocal I suppose)
02:21:290 (4,5,6,7) - Clap to this stream.. (fixed)
02:31:503 (9) - Missing finish orz.. you can clearly hear a cymbal crash there on the music (fixed)
02:40:758 (1) - Is this really need to be double reverse ? lol i think you can make more creative pattern here since it was Insane (well, no one disallow anyway xD at least it's better than making antijump imo)
03:16:503 (1,3) - Finishes on them ? (ok, nice idea)
03:25:120 (1) - How about CTRL G for softer transition between them ? don't forget to restack (7) (well, you just have to pull the mouse downward on this pattern so no problem imo)
03:35:013 (7) - Missing clap (fixed)
03:38:045 (10,1) - This would surely confusing since it spaced just as same like the previous triplet. People may think this was a duplet, pls move this farther
(fixed beforehand)

[Normal]
Hitsounds suggestion on Insane may applied on this diff to if you feel like it
00:16:822 (4,1,2,3,4) - This whole part feels boring due to that overuse of reverse slider, i think you can combine more 1/1 and 1/2 sliders to create attractive pattern here since it's Not an Easy diff o.o (let me consider later :3)
01:33:737 (2) - CTRL H + J ? xD (it's fine as is maybe ww)
01:41:715 (2) - I'd go for straight slider instead here for neater transition before and after this slider (I'll make it wavy instead, fixed annyway)
02:08:843 (1) - Missing finish (fixed)
02:42:035 (1) - 02:47:141 (1) - ^ (fixed)
Fine diff, on some place i think it can be more neater. Some of your flow is not very natural imo

Good luck :C

thanks for the mod~

Netamaru

493 posts

Joined August 2012

Netamaru 2014-11-23T12:36:41+00:00

[Insane]

01:00:545 (3,4,5) - stack slidernya beda sendiri disini, mungkin kalo di jadiin kaya ini

(cuma saran, mungkin situ punya ide yang lebih bagus lagi)
jadi lebih konsisten sama pattern nya

01:02:141 (1,2) - ^mungkin kalo saran di atas di terima, disini bisa jadi kaya ini

(sama kaya di atas, cuma masukan)

01:04:375 (10,11,1) - 1/4 note mungkin di rapatin, sama kaya di atas disini aja ngak konsisten sama pattern map nya, distance nya beda sendiri dari keseluruhan

[UWS's Hard]

02:28:949 (4) - kenapa ngak 3 beat aja disini? soalnya dari combo" sebelum nya itu 3 beat semua, terus disini tiba" 4 rasanya bakalan sering break karena kaget

03:27:035 (3,4,5) - stack nya buruk disini buat hard, saran saya mungkin dibuat 3 hit circle, lalu slider kaya ini

mungkin cuma segitu aja, dikit sih emang, saya masih ngak begitu ngerti sama mapping ~~sebenernya tugas numpuk masih menunggu juga lol~~, dan juga maklum pake bahasa indonesia, grammar masih hancur

btw goodluck buat map nya /o/

THS

1,024 posts

Joined November 2011

THS 2014-11-23T12:56:28+00:00

Quick mod stil practice
Insane

- replace 00:33:577 (3) - and 00:33:657 (4) - with a single slider
- 00:34:056 reduce the volume a bit?
- 01:27:673 (4,5,6,7,1) - end of the stream at 01:28:152 (2) -
- 01:48:577 add note?
- 02:31:582 (10) - ^
- 03:32:460 (8,9,10,11) - replace with 2 reverse sliders in 8.9 and 10.11?

Normal

- AR+0.5?

UWS's Hard

- AR+0.5? since this is quite high BPM so, i recommend AR8 instead of 7.5 xD

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-11-25T03:28:10+00:00

thanks mas mas o7

fixed some

Asagi

1,020 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 2014-11-25T11:12:21+00:00

yes yes yes

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2014-11-27T01:32:45+00:00

Here as requested from my Modding Queue
Marika is Life and that this is a great song (How come I never find songs like these to map?)

[UWS's Hard]

00:08:364 (3) - Move 2 notches to the left for consistent spacing
00:08:843 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why note make them more consistent like this? the 1,2,3 slider have equal spacing and the 3,4 sliders have ends matching together http://puu.sh/d6Wni/b0c2b34500.jpg (My preference but this is your choice)
00:35:332 (4) - Move to the left 1 notch, it looks more appealing and isn't as spaced out to hit the next note, it's just a tiny adjustment but makes gameplay a lot better/smoother
00:42:992 (3) - Not sure about this note to get it to where you put it but can't tell if this is DS properly or not
00:46:503 (6) - Move down 2 notches for same reason
00:46:822 (1) - Move deeper into the previous slider, seems more appealing (My preference your choice) http://puu.sh/d6WBw/d1a5617778.jpg
00:55:120 (2) - Move a 1 notch to the left for better feels
01:03:896 (5) - Snap this properly
01:08:364 (3) - Not sure if this was intentional or not but it doesn't have to be spaced far, it feels the same with proper DS
01:13:471 (3) - Snap Properly
01:25:439 (1,2,3,4) - Reshape to something like this it's fixed with proper snapping already http://puu.sh/d6Ycu/578bf0aecf.jpg
01:29:109 (5) - Snap Properly
01:31:503 (4) - Move 1 to the left
01:34:694 (2) - 2-3 notches to the left based on how you see those spacing, want to keep them even
01:43:311 (1,2) - 2 notches to the left, reasoning behind this is that it's smoother to play and doesn't have to do just a tad more work to get over there to the next note but instead miss it. Think of it as a stream and how it is spaced evenly(depends on the song) but it helps to create movement that is natural and you follow one single path instead of adjusting it over and over again because of spacing
02:43:311 (1) - DS properly
Other than that it is a fenominal map, please don't take this mod too seriously. I was just moving and fixing things around where spaces looked clean and smooth, and did my best to achieve that. I do hope to see this get ranked in the near future because Marika is my waifu

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-11-27T03:54:46+00:00

thanks a bunch, I'll let uws to check it later

it's always nice to hear someone waiting my maps to be ranked~

Yauxo

1,622 posts

Joined June 2011

Yauxo 2014-11-28T01:54:54+00:00

Hi there, coming from your request in our/my Modding Queue. Be so kind to take some minutes (or seconds, lets be honest) to answer to my mods. Dont be a dick and just "lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr" without an explanation. If I told you something that was against your map, tell me why. This way mapper and modder both gain something.

Unrankable
Suggestion

Other than that, colours yellow to red indicate how important changes would be in my opinion

(copy paste end)

Phew, full spread 4 min, here we go

[General]
■ OD 7,5 for Hard is really damn difficult. There are Insanes with OD 7, so I'd h i g h l y recommend to lower it (5.5 - 6 maybe?)

[Insane]
■ 00:13:630 (1) - I think it'd actually be better if you replace this one with 2 shorter Sliders, where the 2nd would become the NC'd one. This would make more sense since the big white (strong beat) should be clickable. "Starting" a new beat/verse/whatever on a Sliderend is always ... meh

Similar cases

01:04:694 (1) -
01:37:886 (1) -
01:45:545 (1) -

■ 00:19:535 (2) - How about unstacking these so that they act like 00:20:173 (4,5) - ?
■ 00:30:386 (5) - 296/288? I know it's supposed to be an overlap, but touching the next object like this looks rather ugly. People wont notice the overlap anyway
■ 00:33:657 (4,5) - fix spacing to 0.7 DS (0-7 -> 1.0 change)
■ 00:53:045 (5) - How about this? Can be curved as well

img

■ 01:04:614 (11) - I really dislike the big spacing of this one. For most players, this wont be a big problem, but I could imagine that at least some less experienced players might get confused by this one. How about just placing these like you do with all the other streams? :v Even 1.0 would work better
■ 01:06:290 (1,2,3,4) - How about some increased spacing for these? The beats are pretty strong, so why not go a little crazy? I mean, even the normal circles have almost as much spacing :v
■ 01:30:226 (7,8) - At least make them not touch each other
■ 01:37:886 (1) - Give it some more spacing, 1.0 maybe. That way it'll be easier to see that this is >not< a 1/4 timing away from the Slider before, but 1/2 away.
■ 02:00:066 (6) - Stack properly
■ 02:40:758 (1) - Split this one up in two 1/1 Sliders maybe?
■ 03:34:215 (4) - The spacing makes it looks like this one would be 1/4 away, yet it's 1/2 away. Why isnt it spaced like 03:33:418 (2,3) - when it's basically the same thing?

■ There are some Blankets that could be improved here and there, but that's pretty minor. Fix some of them, if you feel fancy

[Hard]
■ See General
■ 00:29:907 (2,3) - ~~I'd space these out. The stack feels weird to me.~~ Actually. 00:29:588 (1) - is off - it feels really damn awkward. How about this? 6 is where the gap was, 7 is where the Slider started

img

■ 00:54:003 (3) - 291/78
■ 01:48:098 (1) - Not neccessarily a fan of this one since the sound starts off really quiet, but I guess it's still okay
■ 01:52:566 (2,3) - 02:02:779 (2,3) - unstack? Movement would support the song more imo
■ 03:07:247 (5) - rotate by -51, then move to 380/72?

■ The only thing that kinda bugged me was the high amount of stacks. You built up alot of movement in this diff, so most of the stacks ruin it.

[Normal]
■ 00:16:503 (3) - to keep consistency, NC here. Also, I really dislike the long, almost boring section that's coming up. You use 3x 3 repeat Sliders, which are basically long 3/1 sections where nothing really happens. Maybe thing about a remap of this section with more normal 1/1 Sliders
■ 00:43:949 (4) - Similar thing with what we had in Insane. It'd be better if the very strong tick would be supported with a clickable object instead of a weak Sliderend. Remove repeat and insert Circle/Slider instead?
■ 02:31:184 (6) - ^
■ 02:36:609 (6) - replace with one Circle and a Slider afterwards (so that it ends on 02:37:247 (1) - ). Similar reasons as ^
■ 03:02:141 (1) - replace with 2 Circle? Reason^

■ Some patterns are rather questionable in design, but Iam not the one to judge. My style differs alot from yours

[Easy]
■ 01:25:758 (2) - Overlap the tail properly
■ 01:34:375 (2,3,1) - Spacing jumps up and down here. keep it consistent
■ 01:38:683 (2) - y 226
■ 02:37:566 (2) - Overlap can be improvied (I think?)

■ Iam really not sure how BATs will handle the 1/2 usage like 00:34:375 (1) - and red-tick usage like 00:08:843 (1) - , since Easy diffs should be kept as simple as possible.
That aside, creative diff, I like it

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-11-28T18:25:32+00:00

Yauxo wrote:
[Insane]
■ 00:13:630 (1) - I think it'd actually be better if you replace this one with 2 shorter Sliders, where the 2nd would become the NC'd one. This would make more sense since the big white (strong beat) should be clickable. "Starting" a new beat/verse/whatever on a Sliderend is always ... meh (fixed the 1st and 4th but not with the other two since it's at least the best way of emphasizing I can think of)

Similar cases
01:04:694 (1) -
01:37:886 (1) -
01:45:545 (1) -

■ 00:19:535 (2) - How about unstacking these so that they act like 00:20:173 (4,5) - ? (sure)
■ 00:30:386 (5) - 296/288? I know it's supposed to be an overlap, but touching the next object like this looks rather ugly. People wont notice the overlap anyway (well as you said, ppl won't notice anyway)
■ 00:33:657 (4,5) - fix spacing to 0.7 DS (0-7 -> 1.0 change) (fixed, didn't notice before)
■ 00:53:045 (5) - How about this? Can be curved as well (I think it's fine already, placing it parallel-wise is better imo)

img

■ 01:04:614 (11) - I really dislike the big spacing of this one. For most players, this wont be a big problem, but I could imagine that at least some less experienced players might get confused by this one. How about just placing these like you do with all the other streams? :v Even 1.0 would work better (well, it's intentional for notes not to touch each others as a normal stream does, just say it's a little experiment)
■ 01:06:290 (1,2,3,4) - How about some increased spacing for these? The beats are pretty strong, so why not go a little crazy? I mean, even the normal circles have almost as much spacing :v (hm yes you have a point, but I'll just put it as is and compensate the jump on 01:07:088 (1) )
■ 01:30:226 (7,8) - At least make them not touch each other (fixed)
■ 01:37:886 (1) - Give it some more spacing, 1.0 maybe. That way it'll be easier to see that this is >not< a 1/4 timing away from the Slider before, but 1/2 away. (fixed)
■ 02:00:066 (6) - Stack properly (lol fixed)
■ 02:40:758 (1) - Split this one up in two 1/1 Sliders maybe? (well what's wrong with the repeating long slider, I know ppl rarely use it in insane tho, but it's just a ridiculous excuse)
■ 03:34:215 (4) - The spacing makes it looks like this one would be 1/4 away, yet it's 1/2 away. Why isnt it spaced like 03:33:418 (2,3) - when it's basically the same thing? (fixed a little, anyway it's not like ppl will often mistaken it)

■ There are some Blankets that could be improved here and there, but that's pretty minor. Fix some of them, if you feel fancy

[Normal]
■ 00:16:503 (3) - to keep consistency, NC here. Also, I really dislike the long, almost boring section that's coming up. You use 3x 3 repeat Sliders, which are basically long 3/1 sections where nothing really happens. Maybe thing about a remap of this section with more normal 1/1 Sliders (it's a style difference imo, well I know I made something out of my style this time, but just let it be for the time being)
■ 00:43:949 (4) - Similar thing with what we had in Insane. It'd be better if the very strong tick would be supported with a clickable object instead of a weak Sliderend. Remove repeat and insert Circle/Slider instead? (fixed)
■ 02:31:184 (6) - ^
■ 02:36:609 (6) - replace with one Circle and a Slider afterwards (so that it ends on 02:37:247 (1) - ). Similar reasons as ^
■ 03:02:141 (1) - replace with 2 Circle? Reason^ (fixed)

■ Some patterns are rather questionable in design, but Iam not the one to judge. My style differs alot from yours

thanks for the mod~

Rukaru

829 posts

Joined April 2012

Rukaru 2014-11-29T06:11:55+00:00

some suggestion from irc

13:02 El SolarBeam: bang adi, minta testplay dums o/
13:02 Rukaru: ok
13:03 *El SolarBeam is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520698 Marika - Soul Release]
13:03 El SolarBeam: baru sadar ganti nama jadi susah nyarinya orz
13:03 Rukaru: oshit 5 star o.o
13:04 El SolarBeam: tapi bukan shitmap kok /o/
13:04 *Rukaru is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520699 Marika - Soul Release]
13:07 Rukaru: ffuuuuu :O
13:07 Rukaru: I can't stream xD
13:08 El SolarBeam: rata" bermasalah sama stream ya xD
13:12 Rukaru: engga, emang aku aja yang ga bisa main stream. xD
13:13 El SolarBeam: owh kirain saya yg bikin streamnya jelek hue
13:13 El SolarBeam: pass /o/
13:14 Rukaru: engga lah, coba minta test play ke player pro
13:14 *Rukaru is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520699 Marika - Soul Release [Normal]]
13:15 El SolarBeam: ok nanti saya coba~
13:19 Rukaru: hmm...
13:19 El SolarBeam: how2spin
13:19 Rukaru: move your hand in circular motion, works 24/7 xD
13:19 El SolarBeam: awkwk ikr
13:20 Rukaru: untuk normal diff...uh gimana ya? harusnya bisa lebih baik
13:20 Rukaru: soalnya ada ritme yang kurang konsisten
13:20 Rukaru: nah, itu yang membuat feel nya agak kurang
13:20 El SolarBeam: agak ngebut ya bikinnya hue
13:21 Rukaru: spacing nya o.o
13:21 Rukaru: ga masalah sih sebenarnya xD
13:22 Rukaru: ini misalnya 00:36:928 (1) - 
13:23 El SolarBeam: normal kali ini kelewat simpel rasanya orz
13:23 Rukaru: harusnya note ini diganti pake 1/1
13:23 El SolarBeam: asalnya mau bikin easy tapi starnya kegedean
13:24 El SolarBeam: considering~
13:24 Rukaru: trus disini 00:37:566 (6) - yang pake 3/4 repeat slider
13:24 Rukaru: coba aja
13:25 Rukaru: dan... 00:39:481 (1,2,3,4) - lebih baik disamakan dengan ritme sebelumnya
13:26 El SolarBeam: hm 1/1
13:26 Rukaru: recommended to change this 00:59:907 (1,2,3) - 
13:26 Rukaru: transisi dari slider 1 ke 2 itu gimana ya, rasanya kea dipaksa gitu
13:27 El SolarBeam: semuanya pilihan sulit orz..
13:27 Rukaru: cieh transisi katanya. xD
13:27 El SolarBeam: transisi omgomg
13:30 El SolarBeam: brb disuruh mandi
13:31 El SolarBeam: kalo ada yg aneh lagi bilang aja owo)/
13:31 Rukaru: ok
13:34 Rukaru: 01:30:545 (1,2,3) - should be like this (lihat timeline, abaikan patternnya. xD) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2290297
13:35 Rukaru: 01:44:269 (2) - lebih baik jika disamakan ritme nya dengan 01:41:715 (2) - 
13:36 Rukaru: 01:56:715 (2) - mending ubah jadi 2 notes. biar dapet feelnya di 01:57:354 (3,4) - 
13:38 Rukaru: 02:06:928 (4) - gunakan slider 3/4 menimbang bahwa pada ritme sebelumnya kamu mengikuti suara gitar.
13:41 Rukaru: 02:45:226 (2) - pertimbangkan untuk mengubah slider ini ke 2/1 slider agar menghemat penggunaan 1/1 slider yang notabene terlalu banyak
13:41 Rukaru: 02:50:332 (2) - ini juga
13:42 Rukaru: 02:59:588 (1) - uh...dunno about this
13:43 Rukaru: gimana ya? kalo dihapus, terasa kosong. tapi kalo engga, ya...note ini membingungkan
13:46 Rukaru: 03:12:673 (1) - sepertinya lebih baik kalo diganti dengan 1 circle. trus tambah 2/3 slider disini 03:13:311 -
13:46 Rukaru: repeat slider ya ^
13:51 Rukaru: udah, itu aja
14:02 El SolarBeam: wogh dateng" udah banyak aja xD
14:02 El SolarBeam: makasih banyak bang
14:03 Rukaru: >bang. I feel old. :(
14:03 El SolarBeam: kan emang lebih tua dari saya hhe

kudosu pls xD

Saut

473 posts

Joined December 2013

Saut 2014-11-29T16:15:00+00:00

yo, as requested

[General]

a consistent increase of the stars (CS,AR,OD,HD) would be cool - easy and normal are quite close to each other followed by a "huge" gap and than same goes with hard and insane.
what about some sexy custom colors?
more than 1/3 of the map is covered in kai time -could be a problem at ranking later on.

[Ts8zs' Easy]

I would recommend to reduce the AR to 3
00:07:088 (2,3) - fix ds
00:08:843 (1,2) - ^ (should be between 1,17 and 1,23 - atleast at your map)
00:18:418 (3) - blanket - slightly rotate
00:19:056 (1) - ^
00:28:790 (4,1) - ^
00:32:620 (3,1) - ds
01:14:587 (4,2) - not perfectly stacked
01:24:162 (3) - ds
01:25:439 (1) - ^
01:29:268 (2) - ^
02:10:119 (2) - 2times reverse sliders are very hard for beginners particularly very short ones, because they cant spot them.
02:51:609 (3) - ^
02:35:652 (3,2) - stacking - oh btw you can move circles precisely by holding crtl+shift and then using the arrow keys (would also recommend a tiny grid)
02:46:184 - why do u leave this place blank? Would be confusing while playing
02:49:056 (4,2) - stacking - check all your stackings in this diff there are some more stacking issues (always a few coordinates)

Otherwise a pretty smooth diff - love the use of blankets

[Normal]

00:19:375 (2,4) - blankiniooo
00:32:141 (1,2,3,4) - perfect square would look pretty badass
00:59:907 (1,2) - http://prntscr.com/5bdw76 - little correction, looks better in my opinion :d (01:01:024 (2,3) - would also fit to this one then)
01:03:737 (5,6,1) - http://prntscr.com/5bdzzd what about this?
01:36:928 (4,1) - blanket
01:38:843 (3,1) - also check some of your stackings
02:36:928 (6) - whistle

[Insane]

00:05:013 (1,2) - ds of them is 1,37 so this 00:05:332 (3,4) - (slider end and (4)) should also have ~1,37 ds
01:00:545 (3,4,5) - this is beautiful
01:17:460 (4,5,6,7,8) - sounds badass with claps at 4 and 6
02:38:524 (3,4,5) - 4 should be 3 rotated by -120° and 5 should be 3 rotated by 120°
02:52:407 (1,1) - i dont get why u do dis

im running out of time but the rest seems pretty fine to me

If I find some more time+motivation i will edit this post and add the hard diff mod (and maybe some more aspects at the insane diff)
I hope my mod was still somehow useful and good luck at ranking!

Saut

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2014-11-29T17:27:01+00:00

well then, I'll reply to it max until next week, in case you're motivated to add something else~

anyway thanks!

Factorial

691 posts

Joined August 2013

Factorial 2014-12-03T01:53:04+00:00

From NLMQ

[Easy]
02:52:247 (1) - Recovery time too short, a guide is 1 full measure

[Insane]
02:31:024 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make slider?
03:19:375 (7) - Ctrl+G
03:12:992 (2) - ^

Well, that was a short mod. GL on map

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-12-03T05:58:24+00:00

=. =

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 187566
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Soul Release
TitleUnicode:Soul Release
Artist:Marika
ArtistUnicode:真里歌
Creator:El SolarBeam
Version:Ts8zs' Easy
Source:ハロー・レディ！
Tags:Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel ts8zs
BeatmapID:523589
BeatmapSetID:222790

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

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49,232,157566,2,0,P|88:224|128:232,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,248,158205,2,0,P|256:296|248:368,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,184,159481,6,0,P|139:150|132:110,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,40,160119,2,0,P|220:73|227:113,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,160758,2,0,P|295:211|334:203,2,79.9999999999999,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,184,161715,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,272,162035,6,0,P|200:312|192:352,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,162673,2,0,P|96:264|104:224,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,136,163311,2,0,P|143:96|135:57,2,79.9999999999999,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,96,164269,1,10,0:0:0:0:
56,192,164588,6,0,P|80:216|128:232,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,165226,2,0,P|245:196|274:223,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,165864,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,152,166343,2,0,L|144:104,1,40,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,96,166822,1,10,0:0:0:0:
56,192,167141,6,0,P|80:216|128:232,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,167779,2,0,P|245:196|274:223,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,168418,2,0,L|200:320,2,40,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,169056,2,0,P|127:168|142:131,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,169694,6,0,P|136:32|56:80,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,131,170652,2,0,P|214:155|294:107,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,48,171609,2,0,L|408:64,3,40,2|2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,172247,12,2,175758,0:0:0:0:
304,288,177354,6,0,L|224:272,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,177992,2,0,P|128:256|136:312,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,179269,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,96,179588,2,0,P|256:64|328:96,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,181184,6,0,P|88:88|104:48,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,181822,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,192,182141,6,0,P|138:218|95:225,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,183098,2,0,P|271:229|352:232,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,320,183896,2,0,P|264:352|144:288,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,200,185013,6,0,B|160:152|184:120|184:120|176:80,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,176,186290,2,0,L|304:168,2,40,2|0|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,186928,2,0,L|279:285,2,40,2|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,187567,6,0,P|104:304|64:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,188205,2,0,B|72:176|78:130|78:130|51:100,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,189481,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,64,189801,6,0,P|272:131|256:207,1,160,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,296,190758,2,0,P|256:304|296:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,191396,6,0,P|392:303|352:376,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,192673,2,0,P|304:184|264:176,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,193311,6,0,P|360:80|416:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,194588,2,0,P|152:80|96:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,195864,2,0,B|280:224|232:272|256:328,1,160,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,196822,2,0,P|384:304|424:296,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,197779,6,0,P|336:200|296:208,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,198417,2,0,P|209:243|245:290,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,120,199694,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,104,200013,2,0,P|329:40|251:31,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,201609,6,0,P|376:200|416:192,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,202247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,120,202566,2,0,P|254:150|247:193,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,203524,6,0,P|320:248|264:280,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,368,204322,2,0,P|173:292|208:203,1,200,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,205438,6,0,B|312:168|288:136|288:136|296:96,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,206715,2,0,L|168:192,2,40,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,207353,2,0,L|201:301,2,40,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,207992,6,0,P|368:328|408:320,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,208630,2,0,B|400:200|394:154|394:154|421:124,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,209906,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,80,210226,6,0,P|208:147|224:223,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,211183,2,0,P|224:320|184:312,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,211821,6,0,P|88:311|128:384,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,213098,2,0,P|176:192|216:184,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,213736,6,0,P|120:88|64:120,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,215013,2,0,P|304:24|360:56,2,120,2|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,120,216289,2,0,B|264:176|312:224|288:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,240,217247,2,0,P|160:248|120:240,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,218204,6,0,P|144:88|168:32,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,219481,2,0,L|280:88,3,40,2|0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,220279,2,0,L|296:192,1,40,2|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,220758,6,0,P|392:168|352:112,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,192,221556,2,0,P|288:248|328:304,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,328,222354,1,10,0:0:0:0:
472,248,222672,2,0,P|479:208|480:168,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,72,223311,6,0,B|428:86|428:86|388:70|348:86,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,224109,2,0,B|345:191|305:175|305:175|269:190,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,224906,2,0,P|176:191|184:230,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,225864,6,0,P|224:64|152:64,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,116,226662,2,0,P|124:151|184:152,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,227459,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,200,227778,2,0,P|360:152|336:120,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,56,228418,6,0,P|328:32|392:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,112,229215,2,0,P|402:136|343:125,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,230013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
166,106,230332,2,0,P|154:144|160:184,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,230970,12,0,234801,0:0:0:0:

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