Hi! Very late mod from my queue, sorry X_X
[General]
00:50:481 (1) - maybe you could change this light yellow color to something lighter, so that the reverse arrow turns black >.< (this is from Novice diff, but in general you would have to change it in each diff) (it's especially hard to see during the kiai)
[Novice Party]
[General]
00:50:481 (1) - maybe you could change this light yellow color to something lighter, so that the reverse arrow turns black >.< (this is from Novice diff, but in general you would have to change it in each diff) (it's especially hard to see during the kiai)
[Novice Party]
- 00:05:198 (1,2,3) - I think these should start 1/3 earlier o.o they sound weird like this X_X so, look at the timeline - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2941484
- 00:42:556 (2) - why don't you emphasize those sounds with something louder than soft whistle? it would fit better, for example drum finish
- 00:43:688 (3) - emphasize slider-end with normal sampleset?
- 00:44:254 (4) - same for slidermiddle (just remove the whistle) and for the end of the slider, I would rather use a finish (+whistle that you used to use) so what I mean is, finish sounds better than clap
- 00:47:084 (3) - you could emphasize the sliderbeginning again with something loud like normal sampleset
- 00:55:009 (1) - starting here, I would recommend to use normal sampleset on the loud beats, like:
00:56:990 (3) -
00:58:405 (5) - slidermiddle
01:00:386 (2) -
01:00:669 (3) - slidermiddle...etc.
01:13:971 (2) - same here...etc. I think you know what I mean, you don't have to do it, but I think it would sound better, and your custom sounds can be barely heard imo even if it has 80% volume X_X I mean, it is audible but for this song, something louder is better in my opinion
01:40:292 (1,2,3) - here again, try to use more hitsounds please, sliderend could be ephasized so well!! and sliderbeginning of (2) and (3) should rather be simply normal sampleset (or drum finish etc.) but not clap imo
Well the diff is nice, I didn't really have problems, but the hitsounds could use some more work imo
- 00:21:330 (1,2) - very small thing, but I think you could make this look nicer X_X - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2943471
- 01:55:481 (4) - this is really personal but it's so unappealing :C - might be an ugly example, but it would be nice to see a different shape - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2943517
- 02:43:122 (7,8,9) - this is a bit confusing, I would suggest you to unstack (7) and (9) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2944360
- 03:02:273 (5) - again slidershape, I don't really see a reason to use it
- 03:14:537 (2) - add finish to emphasize the big beat in the music
- 01:46:235 (2) - this looks really weird, moreover the sliderend is too close to the sliderbeginning, it really doesn't look good, I think you should try something different :C
- 02:07:462 (1,2,3,4) - might be just me but these straight sliders don't look nice, try a nicer pattern with different shapes maybe, example - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2944403
- 02:30:952 (4,5) - why the distance change? looks unreasonable so I would rather use the same distance
- 02:33:217 (4,5) - same here ^ and if it was because of the vocals, then try using a little bit higher spacing and a different combo color
- 02:35:481 (3,4) - ^
- 02:38:028 (7,8,9) - weird pattern again, mainly the 2 straight sliders (7) and (8) but it would also look better if (7) and (9) didn't touch - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2944435
- 00:15:103 (5) - it might be just me, but I think this slider doesn't flow well because it leads downwards but then still upwards and it plays a little weird, so I would choose a different shape but it's really just my opinion
- 00:25:481 (3,3,3) - sliders are not bad but I think that hit circles would emphasize the big beats a lot better!
- 00:27:839 (2,3,4) - weird distance, first anti-jump, then a jump, it's kind of misleading and also unreasonable, example - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2946134
- 00:36:896 (3,4) - I really don't like how these flow (because of the weird curve) so it might be better to change but again this is mainly subjective
- 00:38:028 (1,2,3) - weird spacing again, same as 00:27:839 (2,3,4) -
- 00:41:424 (3,4,5) - here again, why do they have equal spacing when they are not like that on the timeline?
- ...in a few hours (I have to catch my bus sorry xD :'D)