Hitoshizuku x Yama* - Party*Party

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Pho
Yea, that bug persisted for a while now orz

Not sure what the issue could be, updating the set doesn't seem to fix it (and i'm currently not able to resubmit it for checking either until next weekend).

EDIT: It seems like this bug is not fixable, but I was told to add the link to the set without the video in the Creator's words (it actually exists yep). There shouldn't be an issue with it this way.
Sieg
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Zero__wind
ok let's see

Novice Party
plz remove the redundant inherited points like 00:08:782 - 02:24:914 - 02:43:688 - 02:53:499 - . plz also check these points in other diffs on your own!
00:07:462 (3) - better NC for consistency referring to the following part
00:17:650 (3) - maybe also whistle at end
02:02:367 (2) - maybe add clap like 02:00:103 (2) - ?
02:24:443 (3) - better use a 5/3 slider like 01:30:103 (6) - as the current repeat doesn't fit in the song well
03:01:801 (3) - probably need a whistle or something on head

Advanced Party
00:09:160 (1) - is not very safe considering the BPM is 212, better replace it with a circle at 00:09:442 - . there's no important beat at 00:09:159 - after all
00:18:217 (6) - better add a whistle or clap on head
00:42:273 (2) - recommended to be moved to 00:42:178 - and have a clap for the drum, of course you need to change the spacing accordingly
01:49:915 (2,4) - better have clap on their heads as you're following the drums here instead of vocal, you did consistent clapping in the following phrases 01:51:613 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:30:103 (1) - need a normal at reversing point for consistency
03:20:386 (1) - I dont think this deserves a single NC. 03:09:159 (1) - and 03:32:650 (1) - are acceptable as they are distinguishing the characters and are consistent in all diffs. but the NC on 03:20:386 (1) - should better be removed

Expert Party
01:38:216 (3,4) - maybe CTRL+G? seems more freindly to be in a Hard diff (this whole pattern is already very unfriendly to be in this diff though =.=)
02:53:877 (1) - better move it more to the center as it's following a spinner quite closely. some easy rotating can solve this
03:09:631 - it'd be nice to add a circle here stacking on the following slider's head

Ultimate Party
00:46:518 - consider adding a circle with normal sample here
00:57:556 (4) - I know you're trying to make blanket and stack with the following slidertail but I don't think 00:57:273 (3,4,1) - flows well, I'd say it's better to move 4 down to around (188,344)
02:07:367 - better add a circle here to fill in the blank, also to mention, the spacing between 02:06:896 (1,1) - would be way too small otherwise
03:20:952 - maybe also add a circle here stacking on the following sliderhead

probably nothing else
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Topic Starter
Pho

Zero__wind wrote:

ok let's see

Novice Party
plz remove the redundant inherited points like 00:08:782 - 02:24:914 - 02:43:688 - 02:53:499 - . plz also check these points in other diffs on your own! Leftovers from copying greenlines throughout all diffs I guess. Will fix, but i don't think it's too much of a concern.
00:07:462 (3) - better NC for consistency referring to the following part
00:17:650 (3) - maybe also whistle at end
02:02:367 (2) - maybe add clap like 02:00:103 (2) - ?
02:24:443 (3) - better use a 5/3 slider like 01:30:103 (6) - as the current repeat doesn't fit in the song well
03:01:801 (3) - probably need a whistle or something on head

Advanced Party
00:09:160 (1) - is not very safe considering the BPM is 212, better replace it with a circle at 00:09:442 - . there's no important beat at 00:09:159 - after all
00:18:217 (6) - better add a whistle or clap on head
00:42:273 (2) - recommended to be moved to 00:42:178 - and have a clap for the drum, of course you need to change the spacing accordingly Done, but used slider to make this segment more lenient to play.
01:49:915 (2,4) - better have clap on their heads as you're following the drums here instead of vocal, you did consistent clapping in the following phrases 01:51:613 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:30:103 (1) - need a normal at reversing point for consistency
03:20:386 (1) - I dont think this deserves a single NC. 03:09:159 (1) - and 03:32:650 (1) - are acceptable as they are distinguishing the characters and are consistent in all diffs. but the NC on 03:20:386 (1) - should better be removed

Expert Party
01:38:216 (3,4) - maybe CTRL+G? seems more freindly to be in a Hard diff (this whole pattern is already very unfriendly to be in this diff though =.=) Nerfed it by making circles stack now as well as decreasing the DS between them slightly.
02:53:877 (1) - better move it more to the center as it's following a spinner quite closely. some easy rotating can solve this
03:09:631 - it'd be nice to add a circle here stacking on the following slider's head I feel this is fine as it is, I'd like to give players a little break here.

Ultimate Party
00:46:518 - consider adding a circle with normal sample here I don't think this is necessary, it's not a beat you would identify in gameplay since it doesn't go with the leading melody IMO. Applying this would also force me to do it consistently at similar places like 00:51:046 - 00:55:858 (6) - 01:01:235 -
00:57:556 (4) - I know you're trying to make blanket and stack with the following slidertail but I don't think 00:57:273 (3,4,1) - flows well, I'd say it's better to move 4 down to around (188,344)
02:07:367 - better add a circle here to fill in the blank, also to mention, the spacing between 02:06:896 (1,1) - would be way too small otherwise Increased the spacing, but a circle feels unfitting to me as there's no strong beat to cover with it at this point.
03:20:952 - maybe also add a circle here stacking on the following sliderhead Feels like too much pressure for me here, I like to have a break here.

probably nothing else
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Will update later and call you back, thanks a bunch for the mod zero! :)

EDIT: Updated, also fixed some rhythm inconsistencies in the kiais of the lower diffs.
Zero__wind
For metadata: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/238660/start=3
Also to clarify that the frequent NC usage like 02:27:838 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - in Insane is a way of color coding which distinguishes the vocaloid characters and is the best idea throughout this whole mapset. So please don't take them as meaningless NC spamming

Party Time!!!
Mint
woah noodle soup you made it!
grats :)
Milan-

appleeaterx wrote:

woah noodle soup you made it!
grats :)
wtf go to sleep


also, paseli <3
Sieg

Zero__wind wrote:

Party Time!!!
Topic Starter
Pho

Zero__wind wrote:

Party Time!!!
Woohoo, thanks to everyone who helped me with pushing this forward , I really appreciate every effort you guys put into it! :)
meii18

Zero__wind wrote:

Party Time!!!
~ \o3o/ ~
luxoDeh
wooo Gratz Pho! :D
guineaQ
bout damn time B)
Euny
gratz pho
Kuo Kyoka
Congrats Phở xD
KatouMegumi
Well... Should be unranked.
Reason: Shocking content.
(Where's Luka's body?)
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