ok let's see
Novice Party
plz remove the redundant inherited points like 00:08:782 - 02:24:914 - 02:43:688 - 02:53:499 - . plz also check these points in other diffs on your own!
00:07:462 (3) - better NC for consistency referring to the following part
00:17:650 (3) - maybe also whistle at end
02:02:367 (2) - maybe add clap like 02:00:103 (2) - ?
02:24:443 (3) - better use a 5/3 slider like 01:30:103 (6) - as the current repeat doesn't fit in the song well
03:01:801 (3) - probably need a whistle or something on head
Advanced Party
00:09:160 (1) - is not very safe considering the BPM is 212, better replace it with a circle at 00:09:442 - . there's no important beat at 00:09:159 - after all
00:18:217 (6) - better add a whistle or clap on head
00:42:273 (2) - recommended to be moved to 00:42:178 - and have a clap for the drum, of course you need to change the spacing accordingly
01:49:915 (2,4) - better have clap on their heads as you're following the drums here instead of vocal, you did consistent clapping in the following phrases 01:51:613 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:30:103 (1) - need a normal at reversing point for consistency
03:20:386 (1) - I dont think this deserves a single NC. 03:09:159 (1) - and 03:32:650 (1) - are acceptable as they are distinguishing the characters and are consistent in all diffs. but the NC on 03:20:386 (1) - should better be removed
Expert Party
01:38:216 (3,4) - maybe CTRL+G? seems more freindly to be in a Hard diff (this whole pattern is already very unfriendly to be in this diff though =.=)
02:53:877 (1) - better move it more to the center as it's following a spinner quite closely. some easy rotating can solve this
03:09:631 - it'd be nice to add a circle here stacking on the following slider's head
Ultimate Party
00:46:518 - consider adding a circle with normal sample here
00:57:556 (4) - I know you're trying to make blanket and stack with the following slidertail but I don't think 00:57:273 (3,4,1) - flows well, I'd say it's better to move 4 down to around (188,344)
02:07:367 - better add a circle here to fill in the blank, also to mention, the spacing between 02:06:896 (1,1) - would be way too small otherwise
03:20:952 - maybe also add a circle here stacking on the following sliderhead
probably nothing else
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