1. 02:19:066 (2,3) - this distance change it disturbing to the eyes tbh xD please place 02:19:349 (3) - to equal distance between (2) and (4) since it doesn't make sense to use different spacing - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2947903
2. 02:32:933 (4) - this might as well be unrankable "Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end." http://puu.sh/gUkAs/e655a12528.jpg - please try to use something different
3. 02:33:217 (5) - same as above, but this one is slightly better but I would still change it (especially because it looks like you want to use a similar (or same) shape to 02:32:933 (4) -
4. 02:45:386 (10,11) - a slider would fit better than 2 hit circles because of the long vocals
5. 03:10:858 (1,2,3) - this is absolutely a no-no X_X "Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds" and you even used a higher slider velocity, but then used wiggly sliders so please use a different shape
6. http://puu.sh/gUn03/6ec5bd5427.png

Mystyk wrote:

The rest of the mod, obviously no kudosu.

[General]
Please make your breaks consistent, becase break start:
novice - http://puu.sh/gUnmG/bd21961d4b.jpg
advanced - http://puu.sh/gUniU/b517669dbe.jpg
break start and ending is different on expert party (and please check ultimate too)

[Ultimate Party]

1. 02:19:066 (2,3) - this distance change it disturbing to the eyes tbh xD please place 02:19:349 (3) - to equal distance between (2) and (4) since it doesn't make sense to use different spacing - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2947903 Herpderp.
2. 02:32:933 (4) - this might as well be unrankable "Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end." http://puu.sh/gUkAs/e655a12528.jpg - please try to use something different I fixed slightly, but the shape's the same. It should be fine now since both sliderhead/-tail are apart from each other.
3. 02:33:217 (5) - same as above, but this one is slightly better but I would still change it (especially because it looks like you want to use a similar (or same) shape to 02:32:933 (4) - ^
4. 02:45:386 (10,11) - a slider would fit better than 2 hit circles because of the long vocals Not needed imo, the vocal started at 02:45:292 - already and i would miss the 10-beat if i'd map it. :/
5. 03:10:858 (1,2,3) - this is absolutely a no-no X_X "Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds" and you even used a higher slider velocity, but then used wiggly sliders so please use a different shape I'm going to ask around. It should be fine as all three are pure wiggle sliders(means no non-wiggle paths inbetween) and of same velocity, and they are clearly distictable from the previous and next combo. Yes, they are manipulating the actual SV in this section, but the speed is constant. Referring to a discussion not long ago about this issue: t/256438&start=0
6. http://puu.sh/gUn03/6ec5bd5427.png

Fixed all from the list (I should really get that tool orz)

Expert Party: turn off widescreen support to make it consistent with the other difficulties

Also, you don't have any custom hitsounds apart from soft-hitclap so there is no use in using D:C1 and N:C1 anymore.

I feel like I'm forgetting something but that's it for now X_X No need to haste, i got time lol

Also, all in all, it's not a bad mapset, but the ultimate and expert difficulties looks so...messy (?) to me, but oh well. Probably because i used so many different/varying patterns and slidershapes. I feel they represent the mood of the song better than conventional shapes/patterns, as this song is meant to be a bit gimmicky (at least that's my interpretation).

Shiro wrote:

WHY ARE YOU MAPPING THIS I WAS REQUESTED TO MAP IT AND NOW I DONT KNOW IF I WILL
I cry.



EDIT: btw offsets are inconsistent across the diffs

Pho wrote:

I know you love vocaloids hue

Zero__wind wrote:

ok let's see

Novice Party
plz remove the redundant inherited points like 00:08:782 - 02:24:914 - 02:43:688 - 02:53:499 - . plz also check these points in other diffs on your own! Leftovers from copying greenlines throughout all diffs I guess. Will fix, but i don't think it's too much of a concern.
00:07:462 (3) - better NC for consistency referring to the following part
00:17:650 (3) - maybe also whistle at end
02:02:367 (2) - maybe add clap like 02:00:103 (2) - ?
02:24:443 (3) - better use a 5/3 slider like 01:30:103 (6) - as the current repeat doesn't fit in the song well
03:01:801 (3) - probably need a whistle or something on head

Advanced Party
00:09:160 (1) - is not very safe considering the BPM is 212, better replace it with a circle at 00:09:442 - . there's no important beat at 00:09:159 - after all
00:18:217 (6) - better add a whistle or clap on head
00:42:273 (2) - recommended to be moved to 00:42:178 - and have a clap for the drum, of course you need to change the spacing accordingly Done, but used slider to make this segment more lenient to play.
01:49:915 (2,4) - better have clap on their heads as you're following the drums here instead of vocal, you did consistent clapping in the following phrases 01:51:613 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:30:103 (1) - need a normal at reversing point for consistency
03:20:386 (1) - I dont think this deserves a single NC. 03:09:159 (1) - and 03:32:650 (1) - are acceptable as they are distinguishing the characters and are consistent in all diffs. but the NC on 03:20:386 (1) - should better be removed

Expert Party
01:38:216 (3,4) - maybe CTRL+G? seems more freindly to be in a Hard diff (this whole pattern is already very unfriendly to be in this diff though =.=) Nerfed it by making circles stack now as well as decreasing the DS between them slightly.
02:53:877 (1) - better move it more to the center as it's following a spinner quite closely. some easy rotating can solve this
03:09:631 - it'd be nice to add a circle here stacking on the following slider's head I feel this is fine as it is, I'd like to give players a little break here.

Ultimate Party
00:46:518 - consider adding a circle with normal sample here I don't think this is necessary, it's not a beat you would identify in gameplay since it doesn't go with the leading melody IMO. Applying this would also force me to do it consistently at similar places like 00:51:046 - 00:55:858 (6) - 01:01:235 -
00:57:556 (4) - I know you're trying to make blanket and stack with the following slidertail but I don't think 00:57:273 (3,4,1) - flows well, I'd say it's better to move 4 down to around (188,344)
02:07:367 - better add a circle here to fill in the blank, also to mention, the spacing between 02:06:896 (1,1) - would be way too small otherwise Increased the spacing, but a circle feels unfitting to me as there's no strong beat to cover with it at this point.
03:20:952 - maybe also add a circle here stacking on the following sliderhead Feels like too much pressure for me here, I like to have a break here.

probably nothing else
call me back

appleeaterx wrote:

woah noodle soup you made it!
grats

Zero__wind wrote:

Party Time!!!

Zero__wind wrote:

Party Time!!!

Zero__wind wrote:

Party Time!!!