1. Easy (1,37 stars, 54 notes)
2. Extreme (3,97 stars, 170 notes)
3. Hard (2,59 stars, 108 notes)
4. Insane (2,97 stars, 133 notes)
5. Normal (1,53 stars, 69 notes)

1. 00:10:171 (1,1) - Niesymetrycznie.
2. 00:14:239 (1) - Ustaw punkty slidera: 2.(445;126) 3.(396;164)
3. 00:17:544 (2) - Wstaw kółko na (208;212)
4. 00:19:324 (2) - Ustaw na (416;148)
5. 00:21:103 (2) - Ustaw kółko na (344;108)
6. 00:24:154 (3) - Ustaw kółko na (68;144)
7. 00:24:917 (2,3,4) - Ustaw drugie kółko na (168;244) więc czwórkę też ustawisz za pomocą CTRL + H. Trójkę wstaw na (256;284).
8. 00:28:222 (3) - Ustaw kółko na (356;140)
9. 00:31:273 (2) - Ustaw kółko na (28;208)
10. 00:32:290 (4) - Ustaw kółko na (136;236)
11. 00:40:679 (1,2) - Usuń czerwone punkty, niepotrzebne.
12. 00:42:713 (1) - Ustaw na Y=268
13. 00:45:510 (2) - Ustaw kółko na (112;36)
14. 00:45:764 (3) - Może 1/1 slider?
15. 00:46:781 (1) - I kółko na koniec przed spinnerem? Whistle ofc.

1. 00:08:900 (5) - Popraw slider. : / Osobiście radzę ustawić punkty: 2.(216;312), 3.(267;306), 4.(324;300), 5.(380;328)
2. 00:09:663 (6) - Ten też... Punkty: 1.(452;324), 2.(488;292) - radzę ten ustawić jako czerwony, 3.(512;240)
3. 00:11:697 (4) - I to też... http://puu.sh/9E3jB/9076c18cee.jpg
4. 00:12:205 (1,2,3,4) - Jedynkę i slider ustaw na (388;80), dwójkę na (455;179) i trójkę na (366;188)
5. 00:26:824 (2,3) - Ustaw na X=140 i daj w dwójce gwizdek.
6. 00:26:443 (1) - Ustaw ostatni punkt slidera na X=139

1. 00:10:172 (1) - Zmień ustawienie punktów w sliderze: 2.(432;352) 3.(448;203)
2. 00:22:501 (2) - Ustaw na (337;300)
3. 00:28:985 (3) - Ustaw na (117;220)
4. 00:29:239 (4) - Skopiuj poprzedni slider i daj CTRL + <

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Keep background imagery safe. Images should be on a level that can be displayed on all-audience TV, on public signage, and of nature that doesn't require censoring in any country. If you have any possible edge-case scenarios, please PM "ppy" on irc with a link to the image in question and I will start building up a list of images which are/aren't acceptable, to set some visible guidelines.

Krfawy wrote:

OK. I have swapped the BG to JPEG but in my opinion it's not deviant enought to call it 'unrankable' since there is nothing prohibited or to make it censored. I haven't changed SV because there's no rule which say Hard can't have as fast SV as here and I kept my settings in this difficulty. I have seen ranked hards with HP7 AR&OD8 so why not to make HP&AR8 OD7? It's totally OK. :3 Also Insane is... Insane! So why not to harden everything? Now most of people argue when map is too easy, and mappers make maps for PLAYERS, not for MAPPERS. So let's make them satisfied!

1. Remove "polish" from tags, because it's not a SONG, it's instrumental. I mean no words -> Polish language isn't used here

1. AR-1 or -2
2. HP drain -1
3. 00:04:069 (1) - Add a point here, x:228 y:72 for example. Make it a bit kurwa curve o3o And don't forget to make a blanket better with 00:04:069 (1,2) -
4. 00:04:069 (1,1) - Bad overlap.
5. 00:13:222 (2,1) - Make (1) a bit more curved to make better blanket with (2)
6. 00:15:764 (3) - x:254 y:228. If you agreed, fix the distance with (1)
7. 00:19:324 (2,1) - Better blanket. Make them more curved!
8. 00:45:764 (2) - Delete the middle point

1. AR -2
2. OD -1
3. HP -1
4. When I change sliders' speed I like to make the same spacing.. I mean not this but this
   It's up to you, but I'd like you to change the spacing in such places:
   00:00:765 (3,4) -
   00:02:799 (3,4) -
   00:04:833 (2,3) -
   00:06:866 (3,4) -
   00:08:900 (3,4) -
   00:10:934 (3,4) -
   00:15:001 (3,4,5) -
5. 00:22:883 (3) - The slider's end is too near from the HP bar. Make it lower.
6. 00:35:087 (2,3) - Blanket.
7. 00:37:121 (3) - Delete the middle point and move reverse arrow at x:212 y:360?

• It's not a hardcore map, lol

1. HP -1
2. AR -1
3. 00:01:527 (4) - Make this slider like 00:00:765 (3) - . Add a white point after the red point and make those sliders the same!
4. 00:02:290 (2,3) - Move the red point at x:236 y:188 to make a better blanket
5. 00:04:578 (2,3) - Blanket again
6. 00:06:104 (1) - first white point - x:304 y:248, red point - x:296 y:216, 2nd white point - x:284 y:180
7. 00:09:663 (6,1) - Bad overlap. Try this:
   

   476,135,9663,2,0,P|451:180|452:232,1,104.999996795654,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   486,370,10172,6,0,P|490:298|446:226,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. I believe the mp3 needs to be a little louder (compare this to other songs).
2. Re-snap all notes. AI mod didn't catch this.
3. Re-snap the preview point to 00:16:146 -.

1. General: Circle Size 3.5 would fit much better for this difficulty. Will also help diversify the transition between Normal and Hard.
2. 00:06:103 (1) - Move this to x:219 y:43 to stack properly with the 00:04:069 (1) -.

1. 00:39:917 (5,6,1) - Well I personally wouldn't put 3 of the same sliders in rotation on a 1/4 base. It is technically rankable though.
2. Nothing else.

1. General: Try AR8.7. I think it flows better.
2. General: You must change HP to 8 or at least 8.5. 9 is too high.
3. 00:10:172 (1) - Move this to x:486 y:369 to stack properly with 00:09:663 (6) -.
4. 00:34:070 (3,4,5,6,1) - This is kind of hard to play... maybe you can find a better solution?

1. Practically every modder inthe thread suggested you to change the BG, and I completely agree with them. The BGs should be suitable for young (12+ y.o.) players. Now take a look at the BG and ask yourself if the BG is suitable or not. I bet the answer will be "no".
   Note: please, note, that your BG is 1228x767 which is not recommended. (Recommended dimensions are 1024x768 or/and 1366x768). Which is also a reason to change the BG.
   Note: while modding I've had to replace the BG, sorry about it.
2. Remove 8 bit and all variations of this from the tags, the composition doesn't sounds like 8 bit, imo. Such tags as slutty bitch bitchy hoe ho whore are offensive and have nothing to do with the MUSIC, I strongly recommend you to remove them as well.
3. The spread itself feels a bit unbalanced. There's a HUGE gap between Normal and Hard. it's like 1,6 Slide Velocity Difference which is way too much, imo. You could rename Normal to Easy (reduce diff settings, change some patterns, feel free to poke me if you decide to do it.) and map a Normal with higher SV.
4. 00:47:290 - I would recommend you to start the spinner here. It will fit better with the song (since there's a beat and it sounds quite loud) and it fits better with your patterns.

1. Are you sure about your comboing? I would rather place NCs every second measure (big white tick), so, your combos will get longer and look a bit prettier, imo. Having 2-3 objects in each combo is too shrt, I think.
2. 00:12:205 (1,2) - minor - some of your transitions can (and probably should) be improved. Your flow in general is quite good and those little mistakes mke players feel uncomfortable.
   Note: please, understand, that this is not the only pattern with such issue. There're a few more, but I believe, that you can find and fix them on your own.
   
   Don't really get it? Click the spoilerbox!

   The first screenshot shows how your flow works. Red is what Bugs me about your flow, it feels weird/tricky and Blue is what flows good enough.
   
   At this screenshot you can see the fixed pattern. It did not change too much but now it flows a bit better.
   
   Still conused? Click me for more information.
3. 00:24:154 (3) - the beat here is really quite. the circle here sounds strange comparing to the rest of 1/2 beats, I would strongly recommend you to remove it.
   Note: 00:32:290 (4) - pretty similar thing happens here. The whole 1/2 pattern is a little bit too long for a Normal and the beat here sounds confusing, too.
   
   The diff itself is quite good, though it may need some minor improvements and maybe a little bit more work on the rhythm.

1. 00:04:070 (1,2) - I've already mentioned that your transitions are a bit confusing in the Normal, unfortunately, the same happens here and on your Insane. Fixing them would take up 10 minutes but the result will make your map look beautiful!
2. 00:08:137 (1) - comparing to the rest of your patterns, 1/8 does not work here as it should. Sudden switch from 1/2 to 1/8 is too hard to understand for players and makes them miss//fail. Instaead of this tricky slider, try using a simple 1/2 slider with some curves to emphasize the rhythm changes.
3. 00:09:663 (4) - I believe that the downbeat should be emphasized more. Try to remove repeat from (4) and place a circle at 00:10:171 - instead.
   Note: a slider from 00:10:171 - and untill 00:10:425 - (1/2) would also work good. If you're unsure, check out this thing.
4. 00:22:120 - a loud bass sound is ignored here. You should map it to keep your rhythm more consistent and to fit with the song's rhythm better.
5. 00:31:019 (3) - having two repeats here feels a bit tricky. Try swapping them on the timeline in order to match with the song better and to make the pattern more understandable. Example
6. 00:39:281 - most of such beats are mapped, and having this one ignored breaks your consistent rhythm. Try to replace this slider with a repeated 1/4 slider? Example
   Note: it will require re-arrangin this pattern since it breaks symmetry.
   
   The diff itself probably needs some work. Both rhythm and patterns seem rather confusing and will probably bug lots of players.

1. Both OD and HP are too high. You have some 1/8 patterns and you mix them with insane velocity changes. I would go with OD and HP set to 7,5 or even to 7. It would greately increase playability of the diff.
2. Your velocity changes do fit with the song but are they readable? Try to set Slider Tick rate to 2, so players will be able to see how and when the velocity changes.
3. 00:18:371 (2) - I feel unnsure about the 1/8 pattern here since it breaks your polarity and feels really uncomfortable while playing. What's polarity?)
4. Your 1/4s are quite hard to understand and can easily be misread as 1/8s. Why? Because you use different DS values for them. For example 00:25:426 (1,2,3,4,5) - x0.4 / 00:31:527 (1,2,3,4) - x0.6 / 00:33:307 (5) - x0.6 with different SV / 00:34:070 (3,4,5,6,1) - I don't understand the stack and unstacked (1) at all, it looks really random annd confusing to me / 00:37:883 (3) - x0.8
   
   You should work more on maijng the diff readable and understandable for players.

Project Railgun wrote:

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Project Railgun wrote:

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1. real for the diffname...? // Of course I am // (i don't think they will have you keep this) also about your HP (as i see this has been suggested before) (while i also have to say that it's quite easy to play right here) // I can agree to change many things in my beatmaps, but HP is the thing I like to increase to the maximum. I love beatmaps which make you fail if you miss too many notes. <3 TBH I wanted to make it HP10, but that would be too serious. So I want to keep HP9. :3 // But just go ahead and type "HP=9" into your search bar and look how many maps turn up, you will most likely not find that many and the HP drainrate has absolutely zero influence on the Maps star rating // That's why I made HP9 Extra >:3 // So if you only chose that so that this map is harder to play and the Starrating skyrockets... well you chose to manipulate the wrong stat then because CS actually has the biggest influence on the Star rating. // TBH I like CS5 and CS6 and CS7 and CS8, but I know many players do not welcome it really, so that's why I want to keep CS4 in the whole mapset. Not too easy not too hard. Everytime touchable with HR! // //
2. 00:25:426 (1,2,3,4,5) - just me saying that i don't like changing the ds for this stream to 0.4 but it somehow fits your triplet spacing so w/e (could have done something funny and similar to 00:22:375 (1,2,3) - , just sayin) // TBH I love experimenting with slutty DS and I like weirdo-like things and I want to keep it since it's very mine and sexually amusing. I just like to try with something new or different and I think this time it's such a totally legit DS abusing. <3 //
3. 00:30:002 (3,4,5,6,1) - I have a problem with those notes because (...) // I understand and acknowledge your reasonable thinking because it's the truth. Notes are unreadable and hard to 300 or even 50, but... Again "To be honset": I must confess I know you won't agree with me, but in my opinion the hardest difficulty (like this, I mean - an "Extra" difficulty) is allowed to use patterns which are extremely hard to play because it's the Extra's destination. And again TBH - it's still not too hard to play it so I don't want to change it. If I changed it, I'd make it REALLY impossible to play, which is not my will - I just want to make it hard to play if you have a miss, but not if you can FC it! BTW "triangle pattern" you say... Well, that wasn't on my purpose. D: No changes, sorry!
4. 00:34:960 (2,3,4,5,6) - i don't really get this pattern since the sounds these doublets are mapping are theoretically also in // Another playing map editor in osu, not osu. And harden ways to play this map perfect. I know it sounds sadistic, but I'm not. I just like to make everything in a troll-way. <3 Well... maybe not EVERYTHING, but sometimes I troll when I don't even know that I do it. D:

1. This isn't that much more difficult than the Hard imo, but whatsoever (maybe nerf the HP8 idk) // I don't know what 'nerf' means D: //
2. To be honset I am going to not use first four tips about spacing 1.00 and 0.80 because I want it as it is. I know it's impurrrfuckt and rough, but it's rankable as it is. Besides imperfect is one of some of people's mapping style which I appreciate because personally I LOVE to use it! o3o 00:08:137 (1) - And I have skipped this one, because Bakari said it might be a bit surprising what I made previously. And notice the way you've just shown is even more crazy than my techniques because it wouldn't follow the rhythm as it does right now! D:
3. 00:14:748 (2) - As I said before - it's rankable and very funny! Besides I like to see people getting confused when playing things like those. And please, notive it's not as confusing as it is in many maps with this kind of various SV. :3
4. 00:39:155 (3) - why does this have one more anchor compared to 00:37:121 (3) - or 00:35:087 (2) - (would be nice to have these the same overall idk) // I don't understand what you want to write... Could you repeat it in the easier way, please? ;=;

1. i suck at modding hards so this will be short // Still better to suck at any skill than to suck one guy's balls, isn't it true? :3 //
2. 00:21:612 (2) - was it too much symmetry to have this face exactly upwards? // Exactly. //
3. 00:23:391 (1,2,3) - idk // It's called 'copy&paste' darling. :3 Just being Bluddy (which is me)! I know you know that, but I couldn't help myself from telling that humorless and dried joke XDDD //

Krfawy wrote:

// I don't know what 'nerf' means D: //

Red : Must Fix. ( Unranked )
Blue : Recommendation.
Black : My personal opinion.

1. change combo colors ( combo 2 , 3 ) color is so Similar. remove 2 or 3. please. Difficult to cheak NC.

1. 00:21:358 (1,2) - see this. http://puu.sh/a3ExW/d825116953.jpg // DS is so long. I think a bit overmapping D:

1. 00:23:900 (1,2,3,4) - Is not overmapping , neither?

1. how about use slidertick? some place awakard. / like this / 00:32:544 (1) -

00:15:256 (4,5) - Instead adding circles here, try this a bit. > http://puu.sh/a6XlE/269beb6e29.png

00:12:968 (2) - Curve more like previous slider... same reason as easy ofc.

00:35:086 (3) - ^, and a bit of blanket with 00:35:595 (4) -

1. Combo colours 1, 2 and 3 are too similar in my humble opinion, I suggest using something more like this:
   
   Colours

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 190,20,20
   Combo2 : 249,170,172
   Combo3 : 248,211,232
   Combo4 : 224,146,231
   Combo5 : 204,49,131

2. The current ranking criteria states:
   

   A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to an username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.

   I'm not sure if your custom difficulty names transmit that well enough, I should ask for opinions on this. What are your thoughts about this matter?

1. About hitsounds: I believe you're using too many whistles. Every 2 sliders, you could totally use a drum-hitnormal instead o a whistle, starting at 00:02:036 (3) -, then 00:04:069 (1) -, 00:06:103 (3) - , and so on (with the exception of the places where you use normal finishes). I believe this adds more depth to your mapping and makes it fit better to the music.
2. Please set OD to 2. Either trust me on this or ask me in-game why I'm saying this.
   
   This recommendation actually fits all of your difficulties. Make sure to check if you like the result better, and apply accordingly.
   (I personally like it better this way, but I won't force you to do this)

1. The OD seems a little high... I'd reduce it a bit. -0,5 should do.
2. 00:00:764 (2) - Blanketing 101. You can always try to make your blankets better by adding more anchor points, or just by trying to use the approach circle as a guideline. For instance:
   
   Example

   

1. To make the difficulty curve smoother, I recommend using AR 7 ~ 7.2, the latter at most.
2. 00:08:137 (1) - It kills me that the end is curved towards the slider body. Please move that last anchor point so it points outwards.
3. 00:17:290 (1) - You're probably using way too many new combos in this section. I think you could do with exactly half of the new combos, removing what would now be every red new combo. Of course, this will mess up the colour haxing so make sure to fix it afterwards!
   (Note: This makes the combo length in the kiai match the combo length in the other sections!)
4. 00:28:985 (3) - In general you didn't use much jumps, so maybe you could remove the repeat and add a circle instead, to try and reduce the jump to 00:29:493 (1) - .
5. 00:31:527 (1) - Wow this is a pretty big jump from the previous object, don't you think? How about tweaking this pattern to reduce the jump a little?

1. I suggest AR 8 for the same reason mentioned in the previous difficulty.
2. In my opinion, this difficulty is already overmapped in the sense that it includes some rythms that I can't really identify in the music, but maybe this could still be ok. But...

1. This is extremely overmapped in my opinion. Especially the kiai section.
   I think the jumps aren't really well placed, and that the rythms are way too forced. You'll probably be mad at me (in case you're the creator of the track, which I suppose you are) - but please be honest, and tell me if the rythms really adequate to the music, or if you're adding stuff just because.
   
   I think it's the second. I'll consult with fellow team members, but my humble opinion is that you'd be better off without this difficulty.
   I really hope you don't get mad, please understand my point.

narakucrimson wrote:

This is extremely overmapped in my opinion.