1. 623's Easy (1.97 stars, 166 notes)
2. Hard (5 stars, 554 notes)
3. Insane (4.9 stars, 665 notes)
4. Solar's Normal (4.04 stars, 283 notes)

316,40,62264,2,0,B|352:112|304:184|304:184|320:232|348:260|392:260|416:228|400:176|364:176,1,332,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

276,256,8160,2,0,B|216:284|160:264|136:196|136:196|176:152|176:92|124:52|72:56,1,339,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,136,9547,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,256,10068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,208,10588,1,8,0:0:0:0:

奥井雅美

Good luck~

puu.sh/619mS.rar

El SolarBeam wrote:

here's the update

puu.sh/619mS.rar

and maybe I'll shoot some stars for this orz

Mira-san wrote:

hi

General

Offset: Hard's offset is set to 0. Set to 1500. ~you mean audio lead in lol, fixed
Files: soft-hitwhistle4, soft-slidertick2, soft-slidertick3, and soft-slidertick5. They could be renamed to "soft-hitwhistle2", "soft-slidertick", "soft-slidertick2"
and "soft-slidertick3", respectively. (optional) ~no change, pag binago ko tong lahat, nag kakameron ng conflicts sa hitsound, at pag nirename ko lahat eh that means babaguhin ko lahat ung green points, e sobrang dami, so yun

Timing is OK.
Hitsounds usage: Depends if you decide to rename the files or not.
Tags are fine

Insane

01:14:750 (2,3) ~fixed
- How the ends aren't stacked is quite disturbing.
01:16:137 (1,2) ~fixed
02:36:600 (1,2) - same here. ~fixed

01:55:328 (2) ~intentional :3
- You can ignore this but..

image inside

Good luck! Pa-rank na. ~GG

1. 00:30:010 - here is a kick and i think its heavy so add note, extend the slider or repeat the slider ?
2. 00:33:478 - i think this clap is not need because the rhythm not two claps of white line which you used for 00:31:744 - 00:41:455 - this part
3. 00:42:842 (6,1) - blanket it better its overlapped with slider's edge
4. 01:02:264 (3) - its pretty but unreadable for beginner
5. 01:24:287 - 01:25:501 - listen to the music's rhythm, maybe you just beat 1/1 but its not good for this different rhythm.
6. 02:46:137 - 02:47:351 - same problem as ^
7. 02:50:472 (1) - add finish because the music have ?
8. 03:09:894 (3,4) - blanket it better its overlapped with slider's edge
9. 03:33:305 - 03:34:519 - same problem as 01:24:287 - 01:25:501 -
10. 03:35:732 (2) - finish as your rhythm what you used like that part
11. 03:36:079 (3) - clap the front and add whistle as your rhythm what you used
12. 03:37:640 (4) - add kick i think its better than none
13. 03:39:721 (6) - add clap i think its better

1. 01:24:981 (2,1) - overlap and looks not pretty
2. 02:57:062 (2,3) - blanket it better its overlapped with slider's edge

1. 00:07:813 (1) - add whistle? i think its better
2. 00:08:160 (1) - add clap ?
3. 00:14:230 (2) - add whistle for thr front ?
4. 00:16:831 (2) - add whistle for the end ?
5. 00:20:126 (5) - add clap for the center ?
6. 00:23:594 (4) - whistle for the end you forgot
7. 02:01:917 (1) - add clap for the end ?
8. 02:37:120 (2) - end whistle not clap ?
9. 02:48:565 (4) - clap front ?
10. 03:35:732 (4) - clap front ?

1. 01:43:709 (7) - add whistle for the front ?
2. 02:27:929 (4) - remove whistle from the front ? ?
3. 03:35:732 (4) - add clap for thr front ?
4. 03:36:079 (1) - add finish for the front ?

Winek wrote:

Hello, this is from my modding queue!

Hard

AR is too high, diminush it to 6 or 7 ~ill just keep it, you didnt explain well why im gonna change it to ar 6 or 7 :v
I see nothing, sorry .v.

Insane

00:08:161 (1,1,1,1,1) - Doing NC like that is not permitted i think ~its perfectly fine, because all of then is increasing SV
See nothign else, sorry.

Hopes it helped

zengdaen wrote:

for my queue

i love this song~~

SPOILER

~pro :3

prefect map ……

[insane]

00:32:612 (4) - maybe is you wish ↓↓↓ ~no no no, it will break the flow

SPOILER

00:36:947 (5) - i think it‘s fun ↓↓↓ ~good idea, but i wanna blanket it on the previous slider so no change

SPOILER

01:12:670 (4,5) - ctrl + G , maybe novel~no, the flow is perfect here

02:05:213 (2) - move to （112.108） , stack 02:05:906 (4) - ~dunno, still thinking about this :3

02:34:866 (6) - distance 2.0 ? i think move to (344.160) is beautiful ~this is perfectly fine, no change

03:11:803 (1) - maybe unrankable ~no its not unrankable, a BAT told me it was fine

[hard]

00:15:790 - your insane diff have whistle , but hard diff no whistle

00:16:657 - ^

00:17:004 - your insane diff no whistle

00:31:397 - finish ?

00:40:415 -

00:41:802 -

00:53:941 -

maybe you wish your hard diff be different from insane diff
~All Hitsound fix :3

dkun wrote:

This set is pretty great. Meron lang isa akong gustong sabihin.

[Insane]
03:11:803 (1) - I don't approve of this slider. It has a clear path, but I would rather see something else there. Hope you can understand.~yeah, tinanong tanong ko n rin sa ibang BAT about this, okay lng cya but ewan, im doubting this slider too, baguhin ko n lng :v

Mira-san wrote:

lol it's near

maybe this weekend or next week na to.
hehehehe.

1. Disable Widescreen Support. It makes no sense to keep it enabled since it for widescreen SB only.
2. Add Solar to the tags, it may be useful if players look for some more guest diffs from him/her.

1. You should reduce HP and OD. Reduce OD by two ticks because of rhythm changes and some confusing patterns + reduce HP by one tick to make diff more playable for beginners.
   Note: I din't really like your DS, but it is playable, so I guess it's just me. Sorry about that.
2. 00:05:386 (4,5,6) - I'd ask you to try something else here. Your flow isn't really logical, from my point of view. I'd recommend to try something smoother here, example.
3. 01:02:264 (3) - the slider overlaps itself. Doesn't look really nice, imo + it can confuse some beginners. Consider avoiding the overlap
   
   Nothing else to say. the rhythm looks a bit confusing in the editor, but it plays surprisingly great!

1. If you agree with my suggestions about HP/OD on the Easy, do the same here. OD 3 / HP 3 will suit with the diff much better. I'm sure that it will make your diff more balanced and enjoyable for players!
   
   Yeah, good job. I prefer to see some more consistent rhythm, but yours is perfectly playable and interesting. Good job!

1. Try OD7, let's make this thing a bit more challenging. Players like challenge in harder diffs!
2. 01:58:796 (5,1) - there're some jumps like this one. The DS change is minor and it looks more like 3/4 pattern, rather than jump. How about increasing the DS here and in some smilar pattens?
   Note: it happens a few more times, make sure to do the same for every similar pattern!
3. 03:15:097 (2,3,4,5,1) - you could use an 1/4 slider here instad, it makes more sense to me, since this diff isn't the hardest one.
   
   Great! I like your style!

1. I'd set OD highersince this diff is supposed to be challenging.
   
   Nothng else to say! Great diff!

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. Disable Widescreen Support. It makes no sense to keep it enabled since it for widescreen SB only.~fixed
2. Add Solar to the tags, it may be useful if players look for some more guest diffs from him/her. ~i dont need to put it, because it was already on the GD diff name like "Solar's Easy"

[Hard]

1. Try OD7, let's make this thing a bit more challenging. Players like challenge in harder diffs!~im not really sure but i think my hard diff is quite hard like light-insane, well ill just think about it XD
2. 01:58:796 (5,1) - there're some jumps like this one. The DS change is minor and it looks more like 3/4 pattern, rather than jump. How about increasing the DS here and in some smilar pattens? ~i dont understand this that much but, ill just increase the DS a bit XD
   Note: it happens a few more times, make sure to do the same for every similar pattern!
3. 03:15:097 (2,3,4,5,1) - you could use an 1/4 slider here instad, it makes more sense to me, since this diff isn't the hardest one.~dunno ,i think putting a 1/4 there is too hard for hard, and i want to make it consistent on the insane diff
   
   Great! I like your style!~Thanks <3

[Insane]

1. I'd set OD highersince this diff is supposed to be challenging. ~changed into OD8
   
   Nothng else to say! Great diff!~Yay! Yay! =w=

I didn't really like the rhythm on easier diffs, but harder diffs are really cool. It's gonna get ranked soon, I guess.

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Best of luck!

YunoFanatic wrote:

SCV >W< can i use my 1 ticket? for my friend plz!
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/135182 thanks!

• 
  
  hitsound suggestions

  same reason with Insane
  
  00:16:310 (1) - add whistle on the slider start
  00:41:975 (3) - add whistle on the slider end
  00:57:235 (2) - add whistle on the slider start
  01:04:172 (3) - add whistle on the slider start and the end
  01:10:415 (4) - same as above
  01:11:628 (8) - add whistle on the slider end
  01:12:842 (3) - add whistle on the slider start
  01:20:993 (3) - same as above
  01:21:513 (1) - add whistle on the slider end
  01:22:206 (3,4) - add whistle on the slider end and next note
  01:27:062 (1) - add whistle on the slider end
  01:27:582 (2,3) - add whistle on the slider end and next note
  01:52:381 (1,2) - i didn't mention it on Insane diff by mistake orz, try adding whistles on each slider stat
  02:03:825 (3) - add whistle on the slider end
  02:08:680 (5) - delete whistle on the slider start
  02:11:455 (3) - same as above
  02:17:351 (1) - again, same as above
  02:30:877 (1) - add whistle on the slider end
  02:32:264 (4) - add whistle on the slider start and the end
  02:42:842 (3) - add whistle on the slider start
  02:44:402 (4) - need whistle on this note
  02:45:790 (3) - add whistle on the slider start
  02:49:951 (3) - need whistle on this note
  02:57:409 (5) - add whistle on the slider start
  02:57:929 (1) - add whistle on the slider start and the end
  03:03:305 (2) - add whistle on the slider end
  03:03:652 (3) - same as above
  03:04:692 - you forgot to add clap here lol
  03:06:079 (1) - repeat arrow
  03:13:363 (1) - whistle on the slider start
  03:15:443 (1) - try clap on the slider end (and try it on Insane too)
  03:41:628 (1) - whistle on the slider end
  03:42:149 (2) - same as above
  03:42:669 (3) - whistle on the slider start
  03:44:403 (2) - move whistle on the end to start
  03:45:097 (4) - whistle on the slider start

1. 00:17:351 (1) - delete NC, it's unnecessary even you didn't add in Insane
2. 00:40:068 (1) - i think i said silimar opinion on Insane, anyway try to round it more, this sudden big jump in Hard diff doesn't make sense imo (and current slider doesn't very good for play as well), i also have a suggestion as always hehe, this is bit hard too but maybe more playable? and this is the easiest way to fix without changing your pattern much
   
   example

   
3. 03:04:345 (1) - i'd rather reduce 1 repeat, there isn't any sounds on 03:04:779 - here :l
4. 03:27:929 (1) - delete this NC, this doesnt really needed or if you added it because of emphasize, try adding it on 03:28:449 (3) - here as well, it feels kinda nice (and consider about what i said in Insane which you acutally didn't fix ;_;) oh and you'd better to fix same way on Insane too
5. 03:46:310 (2,3,4,5,6) - perhaps you tried to different feeling between (2,3) and (4,5,6) but this plays kinda awkawrd (at least to me orz), i prefer to change 03:46:310 (2,3) - these notes into 1/2 slider and give bigger jump with next objects
   
   example

   

• 
  
  
  hitsound suggestions

  all of suggestions are mentioned because of consistency and match with the song
  
  but i have no idea why you didn't add many whistles on kiai section, dunno whether it's intentional but this feels really empty, i'll point them out anyway
  
  00:14:924 (1) - according to the music, maybe whistle is needed on the slider start
  00:19:433 (3,4,5) - i recommend adding finishes on these slider starts, since you added finishes on 00:17:872 (1,3,5) - these sliders, you'd better to add them on these too, it hears really nice
  00:19:433 (3) - or if you don't want to add finishes, just add whistle on this slider start
  00:47:699 (7) - add whistle on the slider end
  00:51:167 (1) - add finish here like 00:48:392 (1) - this
  00:55:502 (1) - move whistle on the slider start to the end
  00:57:757 (4) - this whistle doesn't really needed, just delete it?
  01:05:733 (3) - move whistle on the slider start to the end
  01:07:814 (3) - add finish on the slider start for consistency
  01:16:658 (2) - add whistle on the slder end
  01:20:127 (1) - same as above
  01:28:970 (1) - try finish? it fits really well
  01:46:137 (1) - adding a whistle to fit with the piano sound? sounds better
  02:08:681 (5) - i think the whistle on slider start doesn't fit to any sounds, try deleting it
  02:09:548 (7) - add whistle on the slder end
  02:11:455 (3) - yea another inappropriate whistle on the slider start
  02:11:976 (4) - but whsistle on this part fits nicely with the music
  02:13:016 (1) - finish is needed? because of this note has samy cymbal sound with 02:10:241 (1) - this but doesn't have finish
  02:17:351 (1) - move whistle on the slider start to the end
  02:19:779 (5) - add whistle on the slider start
  02:23:942 (1) - add whistle to fit with the music
  02:26:022 (3) - add whistle on the slider start
  02:27:063 (2) - same as above
  02:28:450 (2) - delete this whistle and add it on 02:28:276 (1) - here insead, and don't forget to add whistle on 01:06:427 (1) - here as well for consistency
  02:30:877 (1) - add whistle on the slider end
  02:32:958 (7) - same as above
  02:32:265 (5) - add whistle instead of finish?
  02:32:958 (7) - add whistle on the slider end
  02:41:976 (1) - same as above
  02:42:843 (3) - add whistle on the slider start
  02:43:363 (1) - add whistle on the slider start and the end both
  02:44:056 (3,4) - you may know that where needs whistle
  02:45:444 (3) - add whistle
  02:46:831 (3) - add whistle on the slider start
  02:48:912 (1) - add whistle on the slider start and the end both
  02:49:433 (2,3) - need whistles on the slider end and next note
  02:52:034 (6) - add whistle
  02:52:381 (8) - add whistle on the slider start and custom clap sound on slidertick
  02:52:901 (1) - change clap on the slider start to whistle
  02:54:462 (1) - add whistle on the slider end
  02:55:155 (3) - same as above
  03:00:011 (1) - add whistle on the slider start
  03:08:335 (1) - add whistle on the slider end
  03:11:802 (1) - missed whistle on the slider start
  03:29:144 (1) - add whistle on the slider end
  03:30:011 (3) - add whistle on the slider start
  03:30:531 (1) - add whistle on the slider start and the end both
  03:31:224 (3,4) - add whistles on the slider end and next note
  03:32:612 (3,5) - asdf add whisltes on note and next slider start
  03:33:305 (1,3) - add whistles on the slider starts
  03:36:080 (1) - add whistle on the slider end
  03:40:069 (3) - add whistle on the repeat arrow
  03:45:098 (6) - add whistle on the slider start
  03:45:791 (2) - same as above
  03:46:138 (4) - add whistle
  
  asdf

1. try decreasing the volumes on sliderticks by 10% each, those are little bit loder than other ones
2. 00:07:294 (7) - i prefer to turn this slider upwards for having better flow, check following image if you have interest
   
   example

   
3. 00:34:520 (4,5,6) - i found the rhythm on (4,5) notes feels kinda weird (well current rhythm isn't very bad but still) and giving a jump between 00:34:173 (3,4) - these fits better with the music's flow, so you'd better to reverse 00:34:520 (4,5) - this rhythm, and make some jump between 00:34:173 (3,4) - these
   
   example

   
4. 01:17:872 (3,4) - consider addng a jump to fit with high pitch vocal, it works much nicer and since this is kiai section, having a playable jump is good choice
   
   example

   
5. 01:56:889 (6) - feels like i'm demanding my styles orz, anyway current slider plays little bit uncomfortable while other parts don't, why don't you make this slier more round?
   
   example

   
6. 03:14:056 (1,2,3) - what about reversing streams oppositely? the rhythm acutally changed from 03:14:056 (1) - here, it would be great for players if you give something new feelings comparing with before
   
   exmaple

   
7. 03:15:443 (1) - and i think expanding this slider by 1/1 fits much better with the music imo or just add a note 03:15:790 - here would be great too(and you need to adjust the next spinner as well)
8. 03:28:449 (1) - what about decelerating the SV little? (x0.8 or x1.0) that's because you emphasized 03:27:583 (1) - this slider using NC, it'll be awesome if there is a slow slider before entering the kiai section, this will make the kiai time much funny
9. 03:41:629 (3) - it would be better if you add NC here for emphasis this part like you did on previous note

-Asagi wrote:

SCV pro =w= SCV for BAT!!

captin1 wrote:

-Asagi wrote:

SCV pro =w= SCV for BAT!!

seems you were right

• 
  
  
  hitsound suggestions

  same reasons with other diffs
  
  00:08:160 (1) - try finish on this pinne
  00:30:357 (4) - delete whistle on the end
  00:52:380 - need whistle on this slidertick
  00:56:021 (2) - missed clap
  01:02:264 (3) - add finish on the slider end, it hears really good (and 02:24:114 (3) - here too)
  01:28:623 (1) - try finish on this pinne as i said in other diffs
  01:49:432 (2) - add whistle on the slider start
  01:52:727 (2) - why you didn't add hitsounds on sliderticks?
  02:11:975 - add whistle on thi slider tick
  02:15:790 (1) - finish for consistency
  02:17:178 (2) - add whistle on the slider end
  02:25:675 (1) - finish?
  02:31:744 (2) - add whistle on the slider start
  02:33:131 (3) - missed whistle
  02:33:825 (4) - add whistle on the slider start and the end both
  02:35:212 (5) - missed whistle
  02:36:600 (1) - same as above
  02:37:293 (2) - add whistle on the slider end
  02:42:842 (2) - add whistle on the slider start
  02:44:230 (3) - missed whistle
  02:45:443 - missed whistle on slidertick
  02:50:472 (1) - what about finish here?
  03:43:189 (1) - same as above

1. same volume suggestions on sliderticks like other diffs
2. why you didn't use 1.0x DS ;__; plz
3. AR -1 ,OD -3 , HP -2 for best spread
4. 03:18:738 - there is no reason to delay the breaktime imo
5. 03:37:640 (4) - NC for consistency on this section

• 
  
  
  hitsound suggestions

  same reasons with Insane,Hard
  
  00:33:825 (4) - add whsistle on the slider start
  01:15:270 (2) - this map doesn't have drum sounds here, so delete the whistle
  01:27:062 (3) - try finish as i said in Insane, it hears really good to me (and add it on 02:48:912 (3) - here and 03:41:628 (2) - here too)
  01:27:929 (4) - add whistle on the slider end
  01:28:623 (1) - same as above
  02:16:484 (1) - again, same as above
  02:25:501 (1) - add finish for consistency
  02:47:698 (1) - missed whistle on the slider start and end both
  02:49:779 (4) - same as above

1. OD -1 and AR +1 for balancing
2. actually i expected that you used 1.0x DS on this diff orz, plz consider it
3. same volume suggestions on sliderticks like Hard and Insane
4. 00:10:935 - http://puu.sh/6zIlC.png this should be snapped
5. 00:30:010 (2) - current rhythm feels kinda off according to the vocal, you would better to change it , i have a suggestion anyway
   
   example

   
6. 00:37:986 (2) - another rhythmic issue, try move this note to previous red tick to fit with the vocal sound better, and expand it by 3/2 would be great as well
   
   example

   
7. 00:40:935 (1) - delete NC, it doesn't really needed and for consistecny
8. 03:10:415 (2) - curreny rhythm feels kinda empty even it's Normal, try 03:10:415 (2) - changing this note as 3/2 slider and arrange next notes
   
   example

   
9. 03:17:351 (1) - the gap between previous spinner and this note seems quite close, try deleting this note instead
10. 03:37:640 (1,1) - same problem with above,btw you NEED to fix this, the gap is too small

Norman wrote:

SCV's first bubble <3

1. 01:13:190 (7) - Add NC is best imo, the combo gets a bit long.
   
2. 02:35:039 (7) - Same as 01:13:190 (7).
   
3. 03:15:443 (1) - Try a finish on head.
   
4. 03:47:178 - I think the pattern would be better if you added a note here and started the spinner after it. It gives the player a better satisfaction imo when they are able to click a circle on the final beat after the jump pattern you have.

1. 02:07:120 (3,1) - Use 1.0 spacing.
   
2. 03:04:345 (1) - Imo it would play better to remove two repeats and add a circle at 03:04:692. This avoids confusing the player with the multiple repeats.
   
   Example

   
3. 03:15:443 (1) - Try a finish on the head.
   
4. 03:46:310 (2,1) - I suggest use 1.1 spacing here like 03:45:790 (1,2) so the jumping doesn't start too early.
   
   Example

   
5. 03:47:178 - Same suggestion as Insane, you can consider adding a circle.

1. 00:01:224 (2,3,4) - The rhythm is very difficult to understand because 2 follows vocals but then 3-4 does not. When in doubt you can use a longer slider. Try it like so:
   
   Example

   
2. 00:29:490 (2) - Careful here, since the vocals hit on 00:29:837 it can be very easy for the player to assume the 3 is there. Since you're not following vocals, use a slider so the player will not be confused. You can replace 2 with a slider here:
   
   Example

   
3. 00:40:935 (1,2) - Use .7 spacing since it's still part of the previous phrase.
   
4. 01:07:813 - The break is awkward here since the music is so active. I think you should delete the break and start mapping here.
   
5. 01:10:241 (3,4) - It's difficult for the player to understand the distance spacing here when you put the note behind the previous one. For this difficulty, you should keep your notes moving together in lines. I suggest move the 4 upwards like so:
   
   Example

   
6. 01:13:883 (4) - Try replacing this with a 1/1 slider to follow vocals and to make the pattern here different from 01:14:750 (1,2). Then the next phrase will feel more fresh.
   
7. 01:25:848 (1) - Move it to the left (72,188) for better flow and to avoid the overlap with the previous slider.
   
8. 01:28:623 (1) - You can add a finish to the end if you'd like.
   
9. 02:29:663 - Same suggestion as 01:07:813.
   
10. 02:35:732 (4) - Same as 01:13:883 (4). A 1/1 slider works well.
    
11. 02:58:449 (4) - The rhythm can be more intuitive if you continue to follow the strings like you were. Try a 1/1 slider at 02:58:276 like this:
    
    Example

    [img]02:58:276%20-[/img]
12. 03:05:386 (3) - It would play better if you moved this circle to 03:05:212 imo since then it would follow the strings more closely.
    
13. 03:37:640 (1) - I suggest to end this spinner at 03:40:415 since right now the 1 is too soon after it.
    
14. Add finish.

1. 00:08:160 (1) - Finish.
   
2. 00:33:478 - I think you want SC:3 here instead of the clap.
   
3. 00:35:212 (5) - Whistle on the end instead of clap.
   
4. 01:28:623 (1) - Finish.
   
5. 02:15:790 (1) - Finish on head.
   
6. 03:43:189 (1) - Finish.

HelloSCV wrote:

yea my first mod after BAT status, no kds of course
[Solar's Easy]

• 
  
  
  hitsound suggestions

  same reasons with other diffs
  
  00:08:160 (1) - try finish on this pinne
  00:30:357 (4) - delete whistle on the end
  00:52:380 - need whistle on this slidertick
  00:56:021 (2) - missed clap
  01:02:264 (3) - add finish on the slider end, it hears really good (and 02:24:114 (3) - here too)
  01:28:623 (1) - try finish on this pinne as i said in other diffs
  01:49:432 (2) - add whistle on the slider start
  01:52:727 (2) - why you didn't add hitsounds on sliderticks?
  02:11:975 - add whistle on thi slider tick
  02:15:790 (1) - finish for consistency
  02:17:178 (2) - add whistle on the slider end
  02:25:675 (1) - finish?
  02:31:744 (2) - add whistle on the slider start
  02:33:131 (3) - missed whistle
  02:33:825 (4) - add whistle on the slider start and the end both
  02:35:212 (5) - missed whistle
  02:36:600 (1) - same as above
  02:37:293 (2) - add whistle on the slider end
  02:42:842 (2) - add whistle on the slider start
  02:44:230 (3) - missed whistle
  02:45:443 - missed whistle on slidertick
  02:50:472 (1) - what about finish here?
  03:43:189 (1) - same as above
  (hitsound fixed)

1. same volume suggestions on sliderticks like other diffs
2. why you didn't use 1.0x DS ;__; plz (using 0.8x instead, since this diff contains a really few notes, and it will make the middle field becomes empty if I use too large DS)
3. AR -1 ,OD -3 , HP -2 for best spread (fixed, generally)
4. 03:18:738 - there is no reason to delay the breaktime imo (fixed)
5. 03:37:640 (4) - NC for consistency on this section (fixed)

[Solar's Normal]

• 
  
  
  hitsound suggestions

  same reasons with Insane,Hard
  
  00:33:825 (4) - add whsistle on the slider start
  01:15:270 (2) - this map doesn't have drum sounds here, so delete the whistle
  01:27:062 (3) - try finish as i said in Insane, it hears really good to me (and add it on 02:48:912 (3) - here and 03:41:628 (2) - here too)
  01:27:929 (4) - add whistle on the slider end
  01:28:623 (1) - same as above
  02:16:484 (1) - again, same as above
  02:25:501 (1) - add finish for consistency
  02:47:698 (1) - missed whistle on the slider start and end both
  02:49:779 (4) - same as above
  (fixed, mostly)

1. OD -1 and AR +1 for balancing (fixed)
2. actually i expected that you used 1.0x DS on this diff orz, plz consider it (using 0.9x and 0.8x on the bridge instead, but let's just consider it as fixed)
3. same volume suggestions on sliderticks like Hard and Insane
4. 00:10:935 - http://puu.sh/6zIlC.png this should be snapped (I don't remember putting any note there though)
5. 00:30:010 (2) - current rhythm feels kinda off according to the vocal, you would better to change it , i have a suggestion anyway (well, since I follow the music instead of vocal, doesn't matter)
   
   example

   
6. 00:37:986 (2) - another rhythmic issue, try move this note to previous red tick to fit with the vocal sound better, and expand it by 3/2 would be great as well (same with above)
   
   example

   
7. 00:40:935 (1) - delete NC, it doesn't really needed and for consistecny (sure)
8. 03:10:415 (2) - curreny rhythm feels kinda empty even it's Normal, try 03:10:415 (2) - changing this note as 3/2 slider and arrange next notes (fixed)
   
   example

   
9. 03:17:351 (1) - the gap between previous spinner and this note seems quite close, try deleting this note instead (not a big deal though, since the note's being put on the middle)
10. 03:37:640 (1,1) - same problem with above,btw you NEED to fix this, the gap is too small (fixed, following UWS' suggestion)

Easy is still progressing

Overall, all of diff seems fine but still has some minor issues (especiaplly on hitsounding), anyway receive more useful mods on this, when you think your map get mods enough (3~5 recommended), you can call me back for recheck

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey as promised~
I'll just follow up on SCV's mod.

[Normal]

1. 00:01:224 (2,3,4) - The rhythm is very difficult to understand because 2 follows vocals but then 3-4 does not. When in doubt you can use a longer slider. Try it like so: (fixed)
   
   Example

   
2. 00:29:490 (2) - Careful here, since the vocals hit on 00:29:837 it can be very easy for the player to assume the 3 is there. Since you're not following vocals, use a slider so the player will not be confused. You can replace 2 with a slider here: (good point, fixed)
   
   Example

   
3. 00:40:935 (1,2) - Use .7 spacing since it's still part of the previous phrase. (fixed)
   
4. 01:07:813 - The break is awkward here since the music is so active. I think you should delete the break and start mapping here. (adding one slider, it's not like I'm being stingy but I just like it orz)
   
5. 01:10:241 (3,4) - It's difficult for the player to understand the distance spacing here when you put the note behind the previous one. For this difficulty, you should keep your notes moving together in lines. I suggest move the 4 upwards like so: (hm, actually it's an interesting challenge though, but I'll look for other opinion before changing this)
   
   Example

   
6. 01:13:883 (4) - Try replacing this with a 1/1 slider to follow vocals and to make the pattern here different from 01:14:750 (1,2). Then the next phrase will feel more fresh. (fixed)
   
7. 01:25:848 (1) - Move it to the left (72,188) for better flow and to avoid the overlap with the previous slider. (fixed because of the new DS)
   
8. 01:28:623 (1) - You can add a finish to the end if you'd like. (sure)
   
9. 02:29:663 - Same suggestion as 01:07:813. (fixed)
   
10. 02:35:732 (4) - Same as 01:13:883 (4). A 1/1 slider works well. (fixed)
    
11. 02:58:449 (4) - The rhythm can be more intuitive if you continue to follow the strings like you were. Try a 1/1 slider at 02:58:276 like this: (I still don't get the point though orz)
    
    Example

    [img]02:58:276%20-[/img]
12. 03:05:386 (3) - It would play better if you moved this circle to 03:05:212 imo since then it would follow the strings more closely. (well, based on the play it could be easier to get, yet I still prefer to follow the rhythm instead)
    
13. 03:37:640 (1) - I suggest to end this spinner at 03:40:415 since right now the 1 is too soon after it. (fixed)
    
14. Add finish. (fixed, assuming you pointed out the last spinner)

Imo the diff needs a lot of work. I think you should rework the sections with .7 distance snap and use .8 or higher instead. If you use low spacing, it can make your rhythms difficult to understand. (fixed this issue, since I realized it recently)

[Easy]

1. 00:08:160 (1) - Finish.
   
2. 00:33:478 - I think you want SC:3 here instead of the clap.
   
3. 00:35:212 (5) - Whistle on the end instead of clap.
   
4. 01:28:623 (1) - Finish.
   
5. 02:15:790 (1) - Finish on head.
   
6. 03:43:189 (1) - Finish.

(fixed the hitsound according to SCV's mod)

This diff is very difficult to enjoy. I recommend remapping it and using a larger distance snap, at least .8. Using .6 DS often makes your placements cluttered, and patterns like 02:01:917 (4,5,6,1) and 03:09:894 (3,4) are extremely difficult to understand. (fixed with 0.8x DS)

Just my 2 cents. Good luck, let me know if you need something else.

happy623 wrote:

oh yea, yeayeayeayea

General

1. so clean!

Solar's Easy

1. 00:03:305 (2) - First of all, you can hear that this slider is a bit off to the music, but I know you dont want to be too hard to put at 1/2, so I suggest you start your slider at 00:02:958 - to follow the vocal, and end at the same place, which will be much better imo :3!! (interesting indeed, but it's quite hard to follow up the rythm if this only one which be made to be attached to vocal with 1/2 beat while the following notes supposed to follow the instrument, well it's just my selfishness orz)
2. 00:20:646 (1) - here is fit for adding a finish, as you listen to the music, you will find a cymbal sound here (hm.. I see asagi use it as well, so I'll just follow up then)
3. 00:34:519 (4,5) - Nazi stuff for here, I saw you want to blanket with the slider and note, but the current one is not enough, try to move 00:35:212 (5) - two grids to right, to make a better blanket (fixed)
4. 00:37:293 (1) - also a suitable place for you to add a finish (asagi don't use it there so I won't)
5. 00:42:842 (6) - ^ (fixed)
6. 00:56:715 (3) - hmmmmmmm, from my point of view, this slider is not really nice, If I were you, I would try to twist it like this : (nice idea indeed)
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:01:917 - if I were you, I'd put a note here, to emphasize the vocal, current one feel a bit empty for me , what do you think of it? (well, since it's an easy diff actually I'm trying to prevent using 1/2 beat as possible)
8. 01:14:750 (1) - as I mentioned before, add a finish to emphasize the cymbal sound (sure)
9. 01:15:443 (2) - ^, at the tail (I felt nothing to emphasize here though, but let's see how it goes later)
10. 01:17:524 (4) - and its head (fixed)
11. 01:24:461 (5,6,1) - okay here, if you try to hear clearly, you will find that the strong beat is on the 1/2, which is the red lines. To this, I suggest you to follow this rhythm instead, dont forget to place finish to emphasize the strong beats you heard! (fixed with a little of modification)
    
12. 01:55:675 (4) - nazi, how about improving this slider's look? (whoops, forgot with this one orz)
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:59:143 (1) - yes, finish ;w; (lol fixed)
14. 01:59:837 (2,4) - hmm, nazi again, I would try the best to stack this two sliders up, if you can, just put to another place instead xD (fixed)
15. 02:23:767 (3) - also, I mentioned this before, add a note to emphasize the vocal will be better in here (I'll say the same here)
16. 02:36:600 (1,2,4) - add finish toooooo, at 02:36:600 (1) - , 02:37:293 (2) - 's tail, and 02:39:374 (4) - 's head (added all but on head)
17. 02:46:310 (5,6,1) - follow the same rhythm I mentioned in 01:24:461 (5,6,1) -, it would totally become easier to catch the beats (indeed)
18. 03:04:345 (3) - finish! (well, it's not hurt to try orz)
19. 03:11:975 (5) - ahh, as you hear the music is going up here, I would put a green line and increase the volume, also, I might put a finish to emphasize the music that is being loud, how about you? (since it's already set to 80% volume, so won't it be too much?)
20. 03:33:478 (2,3,1) - hmm, same as 01:24:461 (5,6,1) and 02:46:310 (5,6,1) (sure)
21. 03:43:189 (1) - I would extend this spinner until the green line, to consist with Hard and Insane, if you accept this, apply to Normal tooo (I'd like to keep this instead)

Solar's Normal

1. 00:20:646 (1) - yessss, finish, you can check out the finish suggestions I pointed out in Easy tooo (fixed)
2. 00:35:212 (2) - nazi, this slider is a bit off-screen, check out and try to pull it some grids down instead (oops, I've just realized there's something wrong with the spacing here, thanks)
3. 00:40:935 (4) - I'd extend this slider to end at 00:41:282 - and add a green line to increase the volume about 20% - 30% of the slidertick, as the vocal is in 00:41:282 -, but you followed the drums behind in 00:41:455 (5) - So I'd extend the slider in order to make the vocal part wont feel empty (nice reasoning, fixed)
4. 00:49:779 (4) - nazi stuff again ( hope you wont mind qwq ), move the last anchor point one grid down to get a better blanket (no problem though, fixed)
5. 00:51:166 (2) - ahh this also ^ (fixed)
6. 01:07:813 (1,1,2) - sweeet, I like this <3 (thanks XD)
7. 01:45:270 (1,2) - yea nazi again, If you want a better flow here, I suggest you follow what you put in 01:43:883 (3,4) - and 01:42:495 (1,2) - , to make the flow better like this : (sounds vague, but I get the meaning)
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:02:784 (1) - same as before, extend the slider until 02:03:131 -, and increase the slidertick volume about 20% - 30% (sure)
9. 02:10:241 (2) - move the last anchor one grid to left for blanket issue (lol fixed)
10. 02:13:016 (2) - how about adding a finish at the head? it fits with the music imo (I prefer keeping its consistency)
11. 02:56:021 - wait, start from here, I saw that you used 0.8x ds, but the overall ds seems to be 0.9x, I think you may need some time to rearrange the objects, since keeping the ds equally will make your diff become more consistent, I hope you know what I mean, as I also find that there is no much strong reason to change the ds here, sorry for that well I will continue the mod without looking the ds xD (well, I can say it's just my eccentricity for trying to make the bridge part feels a bit different with others, or I can say it's my style of mapping)
12. 02:57:062 (2,3) - hmmm, blanket : (Its hard to twist for me xD... If you find its hard too, change another shape instead) (it's not make much difference though, nor it will affect the gameplay, so I'll keep it as is)
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 03:11:975 (4) - as I mentioned in Easy too, increase the volume to emphasize that the music is going higher (I'll keep it for a while)
14. 03:36:079 (3) - well tbh, I would place a finish on its head too, current one is a bit empty as the music is very high here (fixed)
15. 03:37:640 (1,1) - notice that this two object is a bit far imo, Normal players might not have enough time to jump that far, try to put 03:40:588 (1) - some grids closer to the spinner, it would be better (found a way to make it easier, fixed)

DX sorry I may only mod Easy and Normal
I feel Hard and Insane is good to go so skip it
Good Luck with the mapset!
Edit : if Solar you get any problem, dont hesitate to ask me when I am online \o\

1. same slidertick rate suggestion with Normal
2. 01:14:750 (1) - add a finish here and 01:15:443 (2) - delete it on the head of slider
3. 01:26:715 (8) - NC for consistency
4. 01:57:756 (6) - delete clap on the head of slider
5. 03:29:143 (2) - you'd better to rearrange the NCs from this part for consistency imo

1. i think setting slidertick rate as 1 feels better, 2 hears kinda annoying even though you added some hitsounds on sliertick
2. i prefer to place NCs consistently throughout the diffs (for example like 01:16:137 (1) - 02:02:784 (1) - and so on)
3. 00:52:553 (4) - add clap on the repeat arrow
4. 02:50:472 (1) - add finish on this spinner like you did in Easy
5. 03:40:415 (1) - add finish on the head of slider

1. 02:48:391 (3) - delete whistle
2. 03:36:079 (1) - try adding finish on the head of slider

1. 00:46:832 (5) - delete whistle on the head of slider
2. 00:54:462 (4) - ^

1. 00:06:773 (5,6) - Change these two circles into a slider? the circle you put in the white tick is a little late, there is actually a stronger beat in the red tick , and probably it'll be harder to click and if you use slider here it will make it more lenient for this part here. http://puu.sh/71taZ.jpg
2. 00:37:293 (1) - You need to curve it more, there a regular bad overlap here and I don't think you want that, and fix the blankets too since your already working on this slider. and make sure the slider end stacks like this : http://puu.sh/71tiN.jpg
3. 00:52:900 (4) - Not to be a bother, but shouldn't this be at the previous white tick where the vocals are at? to match with where the vocals are at and to match with 00:42:842 (6) - ?
4. 01:07:813 (1) - Why can't you add a note here and avoid that tiny little unnecessary break? (and better to stack it too)
5. 02:29:663 - ^
6. 01:11:975 (4) - I don't see any special purpose of making the slider like this, maybe you can curve it regularly ? like this : http://puu.sh/71tLF.jpg
7. 01:24:287 (5) - You need to add a new combo here, you started mapping on red ticks here and new combo will help make it easier to tell for the beginners and to make it consistent with your other comboing.
8. 02:01:917 (4) - Wierdly shaped, how about do a regular curvy slider here? http://puu.sh/71u5R.jpg Curve it a little less, so the slider looks better
9. 02:33:825 (4) - Like said before, a regular curved slider would be better here , Like this : http://puu.sh/71uiF.jpg
10. 02:46:137 (5,6,7) - Your missing many finishes here
11. 02:46:137 (5) - Add new combo here, remove at 02:48:565 (1) -
12. 03:08:334 (2) - Finish to the start sounds better.
13. 03:29:143 (2) - New combo here, previous note should be a separate combo

1. 00:23:420 (1,2) - Change the second note to a slider, these pauses don't really go well with the normal and there is a piano sound at the end you need to emphasize. Like this: http://puu.sh/71whS.jpg
2. 00:27:582 (3,4) - Same as above, please be wary of such long pauses in-between notes http://puu.sh/71wjz.jpg
3. 00:42:842 (1) - It'll get blanketed better if you move it more down and to the right here.
4. 00:45:617 (2) - First off, you should do more of the 1/4 rhythms ocasionally in this diff, since you already did them in places before 00:40:588 (3) - , that being said you can do more of them here http://puu.sh/71wH9.jpg
5. 00:49:432 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/71wLj.jpg
6. 01:19:432 (2) - This slider can look better orz, it's very unevenly curved how about you just use one slider point to make this slider?
7. 01:42:495 (1,2) - Like I said at 00:23:420 (1,2) - You can remove the pauses here, by doing sliders, like this : http://puu.sh/71x3l.jpg
8. 01:46:657 (3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/71x5C.jpg
9. 01:53:941 (3) - New combo must be added here, like you did previous section at 00:31:744 (1) -
10. 02:07:467 (2) - Like said before, you need to do more 1/4th rhythms like this : http://puu.sh/71xhF.jpg
11. 02:11:282 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/71xkw.jpg
12. 03:40:415 (1) - http://puu.sh/71xtp.jpg Needs a double click here, or you can do two circles both work for me

toybot wrote:

sexy bg

No Dap Modding Team ~~
I'll mod mostly easy and normal, by request

[Solar's Easy]
00:05:386 (4) - nc? (fixed)
01:00:183 (1) - normal hitsound (I think no need to go that detail, but thanks though)
01:20:126 (1) - maybe make this a 1/2 slider, starting at 01:19:952 - ? it's awkward for easy players to press on a 1/2 beat when they've been pressing on 1/1 the entire time (I'll have pro modder to point this out in detail)
01:24:287 (5) - nc (fixed it in different way)
01:52:380 (1,2) - maybe put finish on both of them? accents the music (you have a point)
02:41:975 (1) - do the same as before; make it a 1/2 slider that starts a 1/2 beat earlier than right now
02:46:137 (5,6,7) - add finish to 5,6, and tail of 7? and add nc to 5 while you're at it (fixed some)
02:47:351 (7) - same notes, but maybe add clap to head of 7? (adding finish instead for consistency)
02:56:021 (1,2) - i really think these sliders should be extended by 1/2, this rhythm is awkward (that would rise the awkwardness imo)
03:07:120 (1,2) - add finish to tail of 1 and head of 2? (don't think it gives that strong emphasis though)
03:33:305 (2,3) - these notes should have some kind of hitsound to them imo (adding finish)
03:41:628 (3) - extend this slider by 1/2 tick (giving additional circle instead)

[Solar's Normal]
00:09:547 (3) - nc? triangle pattern (I'm considering it from the music though, not from the pattern)
00:29:490 (2) - add whistle to tail (fixed)
00:35:906 (3) - change into a reverse slider, adds variety, if you cant fit even distance spacing, then lower (2) and (3) together (I think there's no strong reason to do so)
00:47:004 (4) - missing whistle (fixed)
00:58:102 (2) - add whistle? (not that strong to be emphasized imo)
01:07:813 (1) - add clap to head? (good idea)
01:18:565 (3) - nazi, but move up one grid so it's even with (1) (fixed)
01:19:432 (2) - this slider shape looks pretty weird, maybe rearrange so that its symmetrical by a horizontal line? (it's not like anyone would mind, but let's fix it a little)
01:50:472 - add a note here? (why?)
01:53:941 (3) - nc (not necessary)
02:08:854 (4) - add whistle for this slider also? (fixed)
02:19:952 (2) - whistle? (fixed)
02:29:663 (1) - add clap on head of the slider? (fixed)
03:11:282 (3) - nc? (not necessary)
03:11:975 (4) - move to center of the grid, or just center y-line if you want distance space (sure)
03:18:218 (2) - soften the volume of this note (fixed)
03:40:415 (1) - add hitsound to this slider? like maybe clap on head and finish on tail (fixed)


Everything else in those diffs looks good

I hope these suggestions are helpful to you!

good luck on ranked!

HelloSCV wrote:

recheck, no kds
[Easy]

1. same slidertick rate suggestion with Normal (fixed)
2. 01:14:750 (1) - add a finish here and 01:15:443 (2) - delete it on the head of slider (fixed)
3. 01:26:715 (8) - NC for consistency (fixed)
4. 01:57:756 (6) - delete clap on the head of slider (fixed)
5. 03:29:143 (2) - you'd better to rearrange the NCs from this part for consistency imo (fixed)

[Solar's Normal]

1. i think setting slidertick rate as 1 feels better, 2 hears kinda annoying even though you added some hitsounds on sliertick (fixed)
2. i prefer to place NCs consistently throughout the diffs (for example like 01:16:137 (1) - 02:02:784 (1) - and so on) (well, I hope you can tolerate this one since I'm putting the NC by following up the rising beat, so I think it's the best way to fulfill that part)
3. 00:52:553 (4) - add clap on the repeat arrow (fixed)
4. 02:50:472 (1) - add finish on this spinner like you did in Easy (fixed)
5. 03:40:415 (1) - add finish on the head of slider (fixed)

Melophobia wrote:

[Insane]
00:06:427 (4) - Move this note to x:56 y:152? it doesn't look different but flows much better to me. ~fixed
00:57:583 (3,4) - How about rearranging them like this? Currently it doesn't flow very well imo but this one flows/looks much better i think. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1357190 ~this two are symmetrical 00:57:236 (2,4) - so i think the current one is much better flow, no change
01:19:953 (2) - This stack make the flow really bad imo. Consider unstacking them. ~i cant see any strong reason why the flow is bad here, no change at all
02:41:802 (2) - ^ ~^
03:28:970 (2) - ^~^
01:52:381 (1) - Currently it's hardly recognizable that (1,2) are 1/4 due to (1)'s shape. How about curving (1)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1357204 ~fixed
03:47:178 (1) - A finish would fit nicely with the last of this difficulty! Apply this in all difficulties if you agree!~fixed and the other diff

[Hard]
00:44:056 (4) - Considering how curved (3) is, this slider should be more curved imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1357220 ~fixed

Tari wrote:

Checking the easier diffs as requested.

[Easy]

1. 00:06:773 (5,6) - Change these two circles into a slider? the circle you put in the white tick is a little late, there is actually a stronger beat in the red tick , and probably it'll be harder to click and if you use slider here it will make it more lenient for this part here. http://puu.sh/71taZ.jpg (you have a point, fixed)
2. 00:37:293 (1) - You need to curve it more, there a regular bad overlap here and I don't think you want that, and fix the blankets too since your already working on this slider. and make sure the slider end stacks like this : http://puu.sh/71tiN.jpg (fixed)
3. 00:52:900 (4) - Not to be a bother, but shouldn't this be at the previous white tick where the vocals are at? to match with where the vocals are at and to match with 00:42:842 (6) - ? (hm, I just want to emphasis some part of the instrument here, so no problem here)
4. 01:07:813 (1) - Why can't you add a note here and avoid that tiny little unnecessary break? (and better to stack it too) (indeed, and it sounds better, thanks~)
5. 02:29:663 - ^
6. 01:11:975 (4) - I don't see any special purpose of making the slider like this, maybe you can curve it regularly ? like this : http://puu.sh/71tLF.jpg (just wanna create some variation, don't worry about it too much orz)
7. 01:24:287 (5) - You need to add a new combo here, you started mapping on red ticks here and new combo will help make it easier to tell for the beginners and to make it consistent with your other comboing. (fixed)
8. 02:01:917 (4) - Wierdly shaped, how about do a regular curvy slider here? http://puu.sh/71u5R.jpg Curve it a little less, so the slider looks better (well, some people like it so I'll keep it this way)
9. 02:33:825 (4) - Like said before, a regular curved slider would be better here , Like this : http://puu.sh/71uiF.jpg
10. 02:46:137 (5,6,7) - Your missing many finishes here (fixed some)
11. 02:46:137 (5) - Add new combo here, remove at 02:48:565 (1) - (fixed already)
12. 03:08:334 (2) - Finish to the start sounds better. (indeed)
13. 03:29:143 (2) - New combo here, previous note should be a separate combo (fixed already)

[Normal]

1. 00:23:420 (1,2) - Change the second note to a slider, these pauses don't really go well with the normal and there is a piano sound at the end you need to emphasize. Like this: http://puu.sh/71whS.jpg (hm, I think keeping the beat in consistency gives the player much less confusion rather than emphasizing every single instrument on the song, since not all player know the song)
2. 00:27:582 (3,4) - Same as above, please be wary of such long pauses in-between notes http://puu.sh/71wjz.jpg
3. 00:42:842 (1) - It'll get blanketed better if you move it more down and to the right here. (moved, a bit)
4. 00:45:617 (2) - First off, you should do more of the 1/4 rhythms ocasionally in this diff, since you already did them in places before 00:40:588 (3) - , that being said you can do more of them here http://puu.sh/71wH9.jpg (well, I just don't want to overuse it to bridge the gap between easy and hard, so I'll keep it for a while)
5. 00:49:432 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/71wLj.jpg
6. 01:19:432 (2) - This slider can look better orz, it's very unevenly curved how about you just use one slider point to make this slider? (lol how careless of me, fixed)
7. 01:42:495 (1,2) - Like I said at 00:23:420 (1,2) - You can remove the pauses here, by doing sliders, like this : http://puu.sh/71x3l.jpg
8. 01:46:657 (3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/71x5C.jpg
9. 01:53:941 (3) - New combo must be added here, like you did previous section at 00:31:744 (1) - (fixed)
10. 02:07:467 (2) - Like said before, you need to do more 1/4th rhythms like this : http://puu.sh/71xhF.jpg
11. 02:11:282 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/71xkw.jpg
12. 03:40:415 (1) - http://puu.sh/71xtp.jpg Needs a double click here, or you can do two circles both work for me (good idea, but I'm afraid it'll be an awkward notes since it comes after the spinner, but I'll reconsider it later)

Done.

Melophobia wrote:

[Normal]
00:23:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This section is too plain imo.. There can be notes at 00:24:287 - 00:25:675 - 00:27:235 - 00:28:623 - to provite some variety I think. （まぁ、それは大きな問題でわないだと思いますので、私にとってそれだけでも結構です）
00:29:490 (2) - There should be a whistle on both the beginning and end. （分かりました）

[Easy]
This difficulty can be a little harder in order to fill in the gap between Normal.
You can probably consider putting claps by another logic (for example, every 1st/3rd white ticks), since you cannot put them constantly due to long sliders and empty beats.
There cab be more finishes in this difficulty imo since there cannot be many notes in easy diff but it's quite empty to me.

00:31:584 -
00:37:293 (1) -
01:52:380 -
01:52:727 -
02:03:305 -
02:04:692 -
02:39:374 -
02:46:137 (5) -
02:46:831 (6) -
02:47:351 -
02:48:912 -
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03:33:305 (2) -
03:33:999 (3) -
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03:36:079 -
03:37:640 (1) -
03:41:628 -　（自分で注意にチェックをしました。finishを多く場所に加えました）