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Okui Masami - FISSION

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Asagi
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Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Asagi
Thanks for the Mods :3
SCV mod all fixed
Waiting for the GDer's respond
happy623
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Joined April 2010
happy623
:D
Melophobia
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Melophobia
[Insane]
00:06:427 (4) - Move this note to x:56 y:152? it doesn't look different but flows much better to me.
00:57:583 (3,4) - How about rearranging them like this? Currently it doesn't flow very well imo but this one flows/looks much better i think. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1357190
01:19:953 (2) - This stack make the flow really bad imo. Consider unstacking them.
02:41:802 (2) - ^
03:28:970 (2) - ^
01:52:381 (1) - Currently it's hardly recognizable that (1,2) are 1/4 due to (1)'s shape. How about curving (1)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1357204
03:47:178 (1) - A finish would fit nicely with the last of this difficulty! Apply this in all difficulties if you agree!

[Hard]
00:44:056 (4) - Considering how curved (3) is, this slider should be more curved imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1357220

[Normal]
00:23:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This section is too plain imo.. There can be notes at 00:24:287 - 00:25:675 - 00:27:235 - 00:28:623 - to provite some variety I think.
00:29:490 (2) - There should be a whistle on both the beginning and end.

[Easy]
This difficulty can be a little harder in order to fill in the gap between Normal.
You can probably consider putting claps by another logic (for example, every 1st/3rd white ticks), since you cannot put them constantly due to long sliders and empty beats.
There cab be more finishes in this difficulty imo since there cannot be many notes in easy diff but it's quite empty to me.

00:31:584 -
00:37:293 (1) -
01:52:380 -
01:52:727 -
02:03:305 -
02:04:692 -
02:39:374 -
02:46:137 (5) -
02:46:831 (6) -
02:47:351 -
02:48:912 -
02:56:021 -
03:06:253 -
03:07:120 -
03:28:449 -
03:33:305 (2) -
03:33:999 (3) -
03:34:865 -
03:36:079 -
03:37:640 (1) -
03:41:628 -
El SolarBeam
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Joined September 2011
El SolarBeam
can't afford to force my time in answer all of the mods in one gulp, so please bear with it orz

toybot wrote:

sexy bg

No Dap Modding Team ~~
I'll mod mostly easy and normal, by request

[Solar's Easy]
00:05:386 (4) - nc? (fixed)
01:00:183 (1) - normal hitsound (I think no need to go that detail, but thanks though)
01:20:126 (1) - maybe make this a 1/2 slider, starting at 01:19:952 - ? it's awkward for easy players to press on a 1/2 beat when they've been pressing on 1/1 the entire time (I'll have pro modder to point this out in detail)
01:24:287 (5) - nc (fixed it in different way)
01:52:380 (1,2) - maybe put finish on both of them? accents the music (you have a point)
02:41:975 (1) - do the same as before; make it a 1/2 slider that starts a 1/2 beat earlier than right now
02:46:137 (5,6,7) - add finish to 5,6, and tail of 7? and add nc to 5 while you're at it (fixed some)
02:47:351 (7) - same notes, but maybe add clap to head of 7? (adding finish instead for consistency)
02:56:021 (1,2) - i really think these sliders should be extended by 1/2, this rhythm is awkward (that would rise the awkwardness imo)
03:07:120 (1,2) - add finish to tail of 1 and head of 2? (don't think it gives that strong emphasis though)
03:33:305 (2,3) - these notes should have some kind of hitsound to them imo (adding finish)
03:41:628 (3) - extend this slider by 1/2 tick (giving additional circle instead)

[Solar's Normal]
00:09:547 (3) - nc? triangle pattern (I'm considering it from the music though, not from the pattern)
00:29:490 (2) - add whistle to tail (fixed)
00:35:906 (3) - change into a reverse slider, adds variety, if you cant fit even distance spacing, then lower (2) and (3) together (I think there's no strong reason to do so)
00:47:004 (4) - missing whistle (fixed)
00:58:102 (2) - add whistle? (not that strong to be emphasized imo)
01:07:813 (1) - add clap to head? (good idea)
01:18:565 (3) - nazi, but move up one grid so it's even with (1) (fixed)
01:19:432 (2) - this slider shape looks pretty weird, maybe rearrange so that its symmetrical by a horizontal line? (it's not like anyone would mind, but let's fix it a little)
01:50:472 - add a note here? (why?)
01:53:941 (3) - nc (not necessary)
02:08:854 (4) - add whistle for this slider also? (fixed)
02:19:952 (2) - whistle? (fixed)
02:29:663 (1) - add clap on head of the slider? (fixed)
03:11:282 (3) - nc? (not necessary)
03:11:975 (4) - move to center of the grid, or just center y-line if you want distance space (sure)
03:18:218 (2) - soften the volume of this note (fixed)
03:40:415 (1) - add hitsound to this slider? like maybe clap on head and finish on tail (fixed)


Everything else in those diffs looks good :D

I hope these suggestions are helpful to you!

good luck on ranked!

HelloSCV wrote:

recheck, no kds
[Easy]
  1. same slidertick rate suggestion with Normal (fixed)
  2. 01:14:750 (1) - add a finish here and 01:15:443 (2) - delete it on the head of slider (fixed)
  3. 01:26:715 (8) - NC for consistency (fixed)
  4. 01:57:756 (6) - delete clap on the head of slider (fixed)
  5. 03:29:143 (2) - you'd better to rearrange the NCs from this part for consistency imo (fixed)

[Solar's Normal]
  1. i think setting slidertick rate as 1 feels better, 2 hears kinda annoying even though you added some hitsounds on sliertick (fixed)
  2. i prefer to place NCs consistently throughout the diffs (for example like 01:16:137 (1) - 02:02:784 (1) - and so on) (well, I hope you can tolerate this one since I'm putting the NC by following up the rising beat, so I think it's the best way to fulfill that part)
  3. 00:52:553 (4) - add clap on the repeat arrow (fixed)
  4. 02:50:472 (1) - add finish on this spinner like you did in Easy (fixed)
  5. 03:40:415 (1) - add finish on the head of slider (fixed)
thanks, and the rest will come later~
Asagi
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Topic Starter
Asagi

Melophobia wrote:

[Insane]
00:06:427 (4) - Move this note to x:56 y:152? it doesn't look different but flows much better to me. ~fixed
00:57:583 (3,4) - How about rearranging them like this? Currently it doesn't flow very well imo but this one flows/looks much better i think. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1357190 ~this two are symmetrical 00:57:236 (2,4) - so i think the current one is much better flow, no change
01:19:953 (2) - This stack make the flow really bad imo. Consider unstacking them. ~i cant see any strong reason why the flow is bad here, no change at all
02:41:802 (2) - ^ ~^
03:28:970 (2) - ^~^
01:52:381 (1) - Currently it's hardly recognizable that (1,2) are 1/4 due to (1)'s shape. How about curving (1)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1357204 ~fixed
03:47:178 (1) - A finish would fit nicely with the last of this difficulty! Apply this in all difficulties if you agree!~fixed and the other diff

[Hard]
00:44:056 (4) - Considering how curved (3) is, this slider should be more curved imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1357220 ~fixed
Thanks for the Mod :3
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
EASY

00:37:293 (1) - Stack properly

00:47:524 (4) - Move up a gird or two. Not perfectly symmetrical

01:20:126 (1) - I think this note would be hard to hit for beginners but uhm ok

02:46:137 (5,6) - Comb into slider? :> Easier

03:33:305 (2,3) - ^

NORMAL

00:22:727 (4) - Add whistle and move half a beat forward. (4,5) feels pretty weird but you shouldn't just ignore it totally so just move 4 forward. either that or delete the notes here

Nice blanketing OwO

Can't mod hard and beyond ;-; gomen

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
El SolarBeam
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Joined September 2011
El SolarBeam

Tari wrote:

Checking the easier diffs as requested.

[Easy]

  1. 00:06:773 (5,6) - Change these two circles into a slider? the circle you put in the white tick is a little late, there is actually a stronger beat in the red tick , and probably it'll be harder to click and if you use slider here it will make it more lenient for this part here. http://puu.sh/71taZ.jpg (you have a point, fixed)
  2. 00:37:293 (1) - You need to curve it more, there a regular bad overlap here and I don't think you want that, and fix the blankets too since your already working on this slider. and make sure the slider end stacks like this : http://puu.sh/71tiN.jpg (fixed)
  3. 00:52:900 (4) - Not to be a bother, but shouldn't this be at the previous white tick where the vocals are at? to match with where the vocals are at and to match with 00:42:842 (6) - ? (hm, I just want to emphasis some part of the instrument here, so no problem here)
  4. 01:07:813 (1) - Why can't you add a note here and avoid that tiny little unnecessary break? (and better to stack it too) (indeed, and it sounds better, thanks~)
  5. 02:29:663 - ^
  6. 01:11:975 (4) - I don't see any special purpose of making the slider like this, maybe you can curve it regularly ? like this : http://puu.sh/71tLF.jpg (just wanna create some variation, don't worry about it too much orz)
  7. 01:24:287 (5) - You need to add a new combo here, you started mapping on red ticks here and new combo will help make it easier to tell for the beginners and to make it consistent with your other comboing. (fixed)
  8. 02:01:917 (4) - Wierdly shaped, how about do a regular curvy slider here? http://puu.sh/71u5R.jpg Curve it a little less, so the slider looks better :D (well, some people like it so I'll keep it this way)
  9. 02:33:825 (4) - Like said before, a regular curved slider would be better here , Like this : http://puu.sh/71uiF.jpg
  10. 02:46:137 (5,6,7) - Your missing many finishes here (fixed some)
  11. 02:46:137 (5) - Add new combo here, remove at 02:48:565 (1) - (fixed already)
  12. 03:08:334 (2) - Finish to the start sounds better. (indeed)
  13. 03:29:143 (2) - New combo here, previous note should be a separate combo (fixed already)
[Normal]

  1. 00:23:420 (1,2) - Change the second note to a slider, these pauses don't really go well with the normal and there is a piano sound at the end you need to emphasize. Like this: http://puu.sh/71whS.jpg (hm, I think keeping the beat in consistency gives the player much less confusion rather than emphasizing every single instrument on the song, since not all player know the song)
  2. 00:27:582 (3,4) - Same as above, please be wary of such long pauses in-between notes http://puu.sh/71wjz.jpg
  3. 00:42:842 (1) - It'll get blanketed better if you move it more down and to the right here. (moved, a bit)
  4. 00:45:617 (2) - First off, you should do more of the 1/4 rhythms ocasionally in this diff, since you already did them in places before 00:40:588 (3) - , that being said you can do more of them here http://puu.sh/71wH9.jpg (well, I just don't want to overuse it to bridge the gap between easy and hard, so I'll keep it for a while)
  5. 00:49:432 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/71wLj.jpg
  6. 01:19:432 (2) - This slider can look better orz, it's very unevenly curved how about you just use one slider point to make this slider? (lol how careless of me, fixed)
  7. 01:42:495 (1,2) - Like I said at 00:23:420 (1,2) - You can remove the pauses here, by doing sliders, like this : http://puu.sh/71x3l.jpg
  8. 01:46:657 (3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/71x5C.jpg
  9. 01:53:941 (3) - New combo must be added here, like you did previous section at 00:31:744 (1) - (fixed)
  10. 02:07:467 (2) - Like said before, you need to do more 1/4th rhythms like this : http://puu.sh/71xhF.jpg
  11. 02:11:282 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/71xkw.jpg
  12. 03:40:415 (1) - http://puu.sh/71xtp.jpg Needs a double click here, or you can do two circles both work for me :) (good idea, but I'm afraid it'll be an awkward notes since it comes after the spinner, but I'll reconsider it later)
Done.

Melophobia wrote:

[Normal]
00:23:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This section is too plain imo.. There can be notes at 00:24:287 - 00:25:675 - 00:27:235 - 00:28:623 - to provite some variety I think. （まぁ、それは大きな問題でわないだと思いますので、私にとってそれだけでも結構です）
00:29:490 (2) - There should be a whistle on both the beginning and end. （分かりました）

[Easy]
This difficulty can be a little harder in order to fill in the gap between Normal.
You can probably consider putting claps by another logic (for example, every 1st/3rd white ticks), since you cannot put them constantly due to long sliders and empty beats.
There cab be more finishes in this difficulty imo since there cannot be many notes in easy diff but it's quite empty to me.

00:31:584 -
00:37:293 (1) -
01:52:380 -
01:52:727 -
02:03:305 -
02:04:692 -
02:39:374 -
02:46:137 (5) -
02:46:831 (6) -
02:47:351 -
02:48:912 -
02:56:021 -
03:06:253 -
03:07:120 -
03:28:449 -
03:33:305 (2) -
03:33:999 (3) -
03:34:865 -
03:36:079 -
03:37:640 (1) -
03:41:628 -　（自分で注意にチェックをしました。finishを多く場所に加えました）
-Neipezi
2,266 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
owo

[Solar's Easy]
good :D

[Solar's Normal]
00:20:646 (1,2) - i do not like this pattern from the normal. if you change to fit the vocals seem to be good. (my thoughts)
box
00:23:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:11:975 (1,2) - using a drum part
01:23:073 (1,2) - ^
02:44:923 (1,2) - ^
02:56:021 (1,3) - arrow add? add an arrow looks good.
02:59:316 (2,3) - (2) a 1/1 slide to 1/2 after the change, and (3)(03:00:010 - ) it is recommended that the slide is changed.
box
03:07:120 (1) - 03:08:334 (4) - in the same way?
03:09:201 (5) - add the whistle head

[Hard]
00:10:935 (2) - finishi add?
00:11:455 (3) - whistle add?
01:10:415 (4) - NC add?
01:27:929 (2) - whistle add?
01:28:102 (3) - ^
02:57:409 (5) - whistle add?
03:03:825 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:10:936 (5) - NC add? this is because the finish to add.
00:24:635 (2) - x320 y200 move?
00:24:809 (3) - x264 y280 move, (1) (2) (3) constitute a triangular shape.
00:31:051 (1,4) - clap add? 00:31:398 (5,6) - add only the head clap. hear the sound of the clap.
00:34:519 (4) - NC add?
00:46:832 (5) - ^
00:52:381 (5) - ^
01:10:415 (5) - ^
01:43:536 (6) - whistle add?
02:08:681 (5) - NC add?
02:57:409 (8) - NC add? other sounds.
03:11:802 (1) - 03:11:802 - , 03:11:889 - stream can be added here. Because, you will hear the sound of the violin. here circle add
and (1) seems to be right at the beginning of 03:11:975.
03:41:109 (1) - whistle add?

forgive me for being late :o
Asagi
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Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Asagi

-Kirito wrote:

owo ~owo

[Insane]
00:10:936 (5) - NC add? this is because the finish to add. ~fixed
00:24:635 (2) - x320 y200 move? ~fixed
00:24:809 (3) - x264 y280 move, (1) (2) (3) constitute a triangular shape. ~fixed
00:31:051 (1,4) - clap add? 00:31:398 (5,6) - add only the head clap. hear the sound of the clap. ~i think putting clap their doesnt fit well, even i can hear claps myself, still its too bad for me, so i just put finish instead
00:34:519 (4) - NC add? ~fixed
00:46:832 (5) - ^ ~fixed
00:52:381 (5) - ^ ~fixed
01:10:415 (5) - ^ ~fixed
01:43:536 (6) - whistle add? ~fixed
02:08:681 (5) - NC add? ~fixed
02:57:409 (8) - NC add? other sounds. ~fixed
03:11:802 (1) - 03:11:802 - , 03:11:889 - stream can be added here. Because, you will hear the sound of the violin. here circle add
and (1) seems to be right at the beginning of 03:11:975. ~i dont need to put stream there, it fits well so no change
03:41:109 (1) - whistle add? ~fixed

forgive me for being late :o ~its fine :3
Mostly fixed on the Hard diff
Thanks for the mod :3
eeezzzeee
979 posts
Joined August 2013
eeezzzeee
Hi, from modding queue

623's EASY
Fine!

Solar's NORMAL
In general I feel like theres a lot of empty sections in this for a normal difficulty in parts that should have notes, I only pointed out the most important ones.
00:02:611 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i recommend remapping this part. i know you are trying to map the piano but you were doing the vocal for the beginning so should just stick with that. vocal sounds stronger here
00:24:808 (3,4,1) - maybe try to fill this empty part with something like how you did for 00:22:033 (3,4,5,1)
00:58:102 (2,3) - try to add something between here
01:03:998 (1,1) - theres a long time after the spinner, try this:
SPOILER
01:12:669 (2) - add whistle
01:15:270 (2) - add whistle
01:23:767 (2) - add whistle
01:42:495 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - try to fill some of these parts
02:08:854 (4) - add whistle at the end
02:25:848 (1,1) - see above 01:03:998 (1,1)
02:34:519 (2) - add whistle
02:37:120 (2) - add whistle
02:45:617 (2) - add whistle

HARD
00:05:559 (1) - try ctrl+g on this. its far from 00:05:039 (6)
01:25:848 (1,2,3,4) - try move these further apart like in 02:47:697 (1,2,3,4)
02:32:784 (5) - new combo

INSANE
Fine!

That's all. Nice map! Best of luck :)
Asagi
1,021 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Asagi

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from modding queue ~hello :3

HARD
00:05:559 (1) - try ctrl+g on this. its far from 00:05:039 (6) ~its fine like that, its not to hard to catch up that
01:25:848 (1,2,3,4) - try move these further apart like in 02:47:697 (1,2,3,4) ~fixed, the other one is fine no change
02:32:784 (5) - new combo ~i NC'ed 02:32:264 (4) - instead, to be consistent on the 1st kiai

INSANE
Fine!

That's all. Nice map! Best of luck :)
Thanks :3
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Hullo, mod from queue 8-)
3 ~ 4 minutes = 3 diffs
[Hard]
AR - 1?
AR and OD -1 O~O
00:14:923 (1) - Consider adding a finish here to match the cymbal crash heard in the music.
00:16:831 (2,3) - Please unstack, it really does look unpredictable and inconsistent, with seeing how you previously didn't stack 00:14:230 (2,1) - (which were also 1 beat apart with that pause there). Either that, or stack 00:14:230 (2,1) - .
01:42:495 (1) - Add a quiet finish on the head.
03:06:600 (3) - Shrink tail to 03:06:773, its tail sounds really off at 03:06:860.

[Solar's Normal]
00:25:675 - 00:25:848 consider adding a slider here, so that it follows the 'kana'. It'll also add a little flavor to the rhythm here, and make it look less repetitive.
00:28:449 - 00:28:623 ^ Same suggestion as above.
01:43:363 - 01:43:536 ^
01:44:923 - Add a note here to hit the 'na'. Now that we're in the second verse, it's time to add a bit more detail to the rhythm.
01:46:137 - Add a 1/2 slider, same reason as 00:25:675 - 00:25:848
01:47:698 - Add a note here, same reason as 01:44:923 -
01:48:912 - Add a 1/2 slider.
01:50:472 - Add a note here, same reason as 01:44:923 -
03:33:305 (1) - Remove NC, not really necessary.

[623's Easy]
00:26:195 (2) - NC instead of 00:25:675 (1) - , because it lands on the large tick mark (which helps emphasizes a new rhythm cycle)
01:00:877 (2) - lol what happened here? O.o I think there's a better way to make this slider blanket 00:59:490 (1) - :

Err, messed up on one of the anchor points. Something like this may work better?
03:11:975 (5) - NC?
03:43:189 (1) - Lower that point in the sliders body like this:
SPOILER

404,204,223189,6,0,B|356:244|300:232|300:232|300:280|268:300,1,182.5,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,324,224403,2,0,P|140:332|96:320,2,73,6|4|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Good luck!
Asagi
1,021 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Asagi

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hullo, mod from queue 8-) ~hi :3
[notice]3 ~ 4 minutes = 3 diffs
[Hard]
AR - 1?
AR and OD -1 O~O ~AR and OD is perfectly fine
00:14:923 (1) - Consider adding a finish here to match the cymbal crash heard in the music.~fixed
00:16:831 (2,3) - Please unstack, it really does look unpredictable and inconsistent, with seeing how you previously didn't stack 00:14:230 (2,1) - (which were also 1 beat apart with that pause there). Either that, or stack 00:14:230 (2,1) - .~good point, fixed
01:42:495 (1) - Add a quiet finish on the head. ~added
03:06:600 (3) - Shrink tail to 03:06:773, its tail sounds really off at 03:06:860. ~this is fine,i just lower the volume on the tail, i want to make it consistent on insane

Good luck!
Thanks :3
RandF
1,249 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. BG: .jpg is better than .png in order to make file size small
[Hard]
  1. 02:53:594 (3,4) - how about blanket correctly?
    SPOILER

    88,230,173594,2,0,P|121:208|161:200,2,81.5,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 03:04:345 (1) - x:339 y:331
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:958 (1) - x:368 y:148
  2. 00:21:514 (3) - x:479 y:223
  3. 00:39:027 (3) - x:235 y:212
  4. 01:58:276 (3) - I prefer Ctrl+G
  5. 02:10:241 (1) - x:272 y:176
  6. 02:15:444 (4) - x:256 y:48
  7. 02:44:056 (3) - x:188 y:160
[623's Easy]
  1. remove "widescreen support"
  2. 00:02:611 (1) - end at 00:03:652 Red line is hard to find rhythm for easy
  3. 00:05:386 (3) - end at 00:06:426
  4. 00:50:126 (4) - end at 00:50:819
  5. 03:18:218 (1) - I prefer to move to 03:18:045
[Solar's Normal]
  1. 02:37:120 (2) - whistle
  2. 02:46:657- clap
nice mapping~☆
~Good Luck~
Asagi
1,021 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Asagi
All minor error fixed
Thanks for the star too :)
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,846 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:855 (1,1) - they overlap i think. i suggest stacking
  2. 00:15:965 (5,1) - i suggest blanket
  3. 00:34:519 (1,3) - ^
  4. 02:46:137 (1,2) - ^ possibly blanket
  5. 00:27:583 (1,2,3) - flow kinda bad
  6. 01:09:548 (2,3) - stack?
  7. 03:26:196 (1,5) - ^
  8. 01:23:767 (4) - uhh why not like this?
    SPOILER
  9. 01:23:248 (1,1) - MIGHT overlap
  10. 01:28:623 - i dont see the reason for having a slidertick sound here. its fine for some hit sounds not to be mapped out since it plays in the music already. and it'd just sound off if the player hits the slider early or too late
  11. 01:46:137 (1,2) - i think this rhythm is better imo.
    SPOILER
    as for the pattern you could either stack them or actually i think it would still be fine if u just ctrl g'd
  12. 01:55:328 (1,2,3) - make a pattern similar to 01:46:137 (1,3,4) - ?
  13. 02:34:519 (4,5,6) - how bout something like this
    SPOILER
  14. 02:44:056 (3,2) - uhh stack?
  15. 03:23:768 (1,2) - this blanket could be better curve (2) slightly more
  16. 03:25:155 (1,2) - ^
  17. 01:56:889 (3) - might be my skin but this touches hp bar
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:068 (1,1) - i think you should just stack normally
  2. 00:16:831 (2,3) - DS
  3. 00:21:513 (3,2) - uhh overlaps kinda?? anyway i still think you should tilt (3) a bit clockwise cuz its going into the next slider at a slightly weird angle
  4. 00:31:397 (4) - idk i just thought this looks cooler imo :o
    SPOILER
  5. 01:14:750 (1,2) - space this out a little more looks a bit cramped
  6. 01:16:137 (1,2) - ^
    And some more--
  7. 02:05:386 (3) - just copy (4) and ctrl + h,j?
  8. 02:07:120 (3,1) - stack?
  9. 02:54:461 (1,5) - ^
  10. 02:52:033 (2) - NC here instead of 02:51:686 (1)
  11. 03:11:108 (1,4) - im not sure how but u should blanket (4)'s head with (1) as well. you'll have to rearrange a few things though
    SPOILER
  12. 03:33:825 (2,3,4) - might be a bit too confusing in easy
  13. 03:36:600 (2,1) - blanket for better overlap
[Normal]
  1. 00:35:212 (2,3,4) - why not something more like this
    SPOILER
  2. 01:07:813 (1,1,2) - is it okay to break DS in normal?
  3. 01:52:727 (2,2) - overlap isnt very good try something like this
    SPOILER
[Easy]
  1. 00:30:357 (1,1) - this could be blanketed better
  2. 00:40:068 (3,4,1) - this pattern doesn't look very nice and may be confusing to read
  3. 00:52:553 (2,1) - ^
  4. 01:00:877 (2) - i just don't understand why u cant just use a 3 point slider
Good mapset, probably very close to rankable
Asagi
1,021 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Asagi

Kibbleru wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:08:855 (1,1) - they overlap i think. i suggest stacking ~it will not affect the gameplay too much, im not gonna reply on other nazi stuffs that i didnt fix
  2. 00:15:965 (5,1) - i suggest blanket
  3. 00:34:519 (1,3) - ^
  4. 02:46:137 (1,2) - ^ possibly blanket
  5. 00:27:583 (1,2,3) - flow kinda bad ~i think its fine since the vocal pitch changes, so i intentionally put a flow break there
  6. 01:09:548 (2,3) - stack? ~no no, i dont want to stack this since i didnt did it on other parts of the map
  7. 03:26:196 (1,5) - ^
  8. 01:23:767 (4) - uhh why not like this? ~fixed
    SPOILER
  9. 01:23:248 (1,1) - MIGHT overlap
  10. 01:28:623 - i dont see the reason for having a slidertick sound here. its fine for some hit sounds not to be mapped out since it plays in the music already. and it'd just sound off if the player hits the slider early or too late ~this is fine, since its just a kick, not a snare, it will not affect when to hit, and it fits fine there
  11. 01:46:137 (1,2) - i think this rhythm is better imo. ~nice catch, fixed
    SPOILER
    as for the pattern you could either stack them or actually i think it would still be fine if u just ctrl g'd
  12. 01:55:328 (1,2,3) - make a pattern similar to 01:46:137 (1,3,4) - ? ~the flow is fine here
  13. 02:34:519 (4,5,6) - how bout something like this ~my pattern is like an expanding triangle, so i dont want to change my style
    SPOILER
  14. 02:44:056 (3,2) - uhh stack? ~fixed
  15. 03:23:768 (1,2) - this blanket could be better curve (2) slightly more
  16. 03:25:155 (1,2) - ^
  17. 01:56:889 (3) - might be my skin but this touches hp bar~fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:068 (1,1) - i think you should just stack normally ~i intentionally did this, since the 1st note is NC'ed and i want to make the next note a bit visible
  2. 00:16:831 (2,3) - DS ~putting a bit gap cant hurt too much
  3. 00:21:513 (3,2) - uhh overlaps kinda?? anyway i still think you should tilt (3) a bit clockwise cuz its going into the next slider at a slightly weird angle ~i dont know i should i explain this, but its fine
  4. 00:31:397 (4) - idk i just thought this looks cooler imo :o ~i love this, fixed
    SPOILER
  5. 01:14:750 (1,2) - space this out a little more looks a bit cramped ~fixed
  6. 01:16:137 (1,2) - ^ ~fixed
    And some more--
  7. 02:05:386 (3) - just copy (4) and ctrl + h,j? ~fixed
  8. 02:07:120 (3,1) - stack?
  9. 02:54:461 (1,5) - ^
  10. 02:52:033 (2) - NC here instead of 02:51:686 (1) ~fixed
  11. 03:11:108 (1,4) - im not sure how but u should blanket (4)'s head with (1) as well. you'll have to rearrange a few things though ~fixed
    SPOILER
  12. 03:33:825 (2,3,4) - might be a bit too confusing in easy ~i dont think so
  13. 03:36:600 (2,1) - blanket for better overlap~fixed
Good mapset, probably very close to rankable
Thanks for the mod :3
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. BG: .jpg is better than .png in order to make file size small
[623's Easy]
  1. remove "widescreen support" fixed
  2. 00:02:611 (1) - end at 00:03:652 Red line is hard to find rhythm for easy
  3. 00:05:386 (3) - end at 00:06:426
  4. 00:50:126 (4) - end at 00:50:819 fixed all here
  5. 03:18:218 (1) - I prefer to move to 03:18:045 I will keep this because the cymbal sound is on 03:18:218 - ;w;
nice mapping~☆
~Good Luck~
thanks!!!

Kibbleru wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:30:357 (1,1) - this could be blanketed better nice xD
  2. 00:40:068 (3,4,1) - this pattern doesn't look very nice and may be confusing to read it wont IMO, because the reverse slider from 00:40:068 (3) - have enough time for newbies to react, soo overlapping here is okay
  3. 00:52:553 (2,1) - ^ hmmm, I think its okay?
  4. 01:00:877 (2) - i just don't understand why u cant just use a 3 point slider yea I tried before, but it is waay too hard to make a blanket with 00:59:490 (1) - if you only use 3 points here ;w;
Good mapset, probably very close to rankable
thanks for the mod :D
hi
osu file format v12

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Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao
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2014-03-25 17:27 -Asagi: hahaha
2014-03-25 17:28 Mao: 00:02:439 (7) -
2014-03-25 17:29 Mao: Split into 2 circles for better emphasis on big white tick?
2014-03-25 17:29 Mao: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/338797 Okui Masami - FISSION [Insane]]
2014-03-25 17:29 -Asagi: urgg
2014-03-25 17:29 -Asagi: i think i sounds horrible?
2014-03-25 17:31 Mao: well sounds better to me since the tail of the slider isn't emphasizing it as much as it should be for me
2014-03-25 17:32 -Asagi: but (7) is following the voice
2014-03-25 17:32 Mao: oh I see
2014-03-25 17:32 Mao: okay
2014-03-25 17:32 Mao: me idiot
2014-03-25 17:32 -Asagi: rooo
2014-03-25 17:32 -Asagi: lol no
2014-03-25 17:33 -Asagi: when i mapped this im not too good yet :v
2014-03-25 17:33 -Asagi: mostly i follow it on the vocals
2014-03-25 17:33 Mao: 00:07:121 (2) - X:179 for stack with 00:06:080 (3) -
2014-03-25 17:33 Mao: NAZI
2014-03-25 17:33 Mao: xD
2014-03-25 17:33 -Asagi: hahaha
2014-03-25 17:34 Mao: well, I dunno but even though you followed vocals at 00:02:439 (7) - you can put a whistle on the tail to emphasize the note at least a bit
2014-03-25 17:34 -Asagi: fixedd
2014-03-25 17:35 -Asagi: so how bout this/? http://puu.sh/7J1cV.jpg
2014-03-25 17:35 Mao: lemme see
2014-03-25 17:36 -Asagi: blurry
2014-03-25 17:36 -Asagi: http://puu.sh/7J1f1.jpg
2014-03-25 17:36 Mao: yeah, seems fine
2014-03-25 17:36 Mao: 00:18:219 (2,3) - Is that not stacked properly on purpose?
2014-03-25 17:36 -Asagi: i forgot where to put hitsound lol
2014-03-25 17:37 -Asagi: maybe i just move a bit
2014-03-25 17:37 -Asagi: since i was stacking it perfectly on 00:17:352 (4) -
2014-03-25 17:37 -Asagi: maybe i forgot to move it
2014-03-25 17:37 Mao: I don't know if it#s a good idea to follow vocals at some points
2014-03-25 17:37 Mao: e.g. at 00:05:040 (7) -
2014-03-25 17:38 -Asagi: is it a major issue? i mean i dont wanna change so many things
2014-03-25 17:38 Mao: nono your rhythm is overall fine
2014-03-25 17:39 Mao: and it's no unrankable issue at all
2014-03-25 17:39 Mao: (since I got 2 maps ranked with H O R R I B L E rhythm)
2014-03-25 17:39 -Asagi: lol
2014-03-25 17:39 Mao: 00:07:293 (3) - A blanket with as you can see in the following screenie could be nice -> http://puu.sh/7J1s0.jpg
2014-03-25 17:41 -Asagi: oaky fixed
2014-03-25 17:41 Mao: 00:13:710 (5) - Snap this with 0,80 as you did with 00:27:583 (1) - for better consistency
2014-03-25 17:41 Mao: 00:21:861 (5) - move to x:238 for proper stack
2014-03-25 17:42 -Asagi: dat 1 grid
2014-03-25 17:42 Mao: 00:23:421 (3,4) - you really seem to have a bad eye with stacks :c Not going to list the rest of them
2014-03-25 17:42 Mao: since I'm lazy and that's just unneeded nazi
2014-03-25 17:43 -Asagi: no
2014-03-25 17:43 -Asagi: its just
2014-03-25 17:43 -Asagi: because i ctrl +g and ctrl+g again
2014-03-25 17:43 -Asagi: so some stacks are move a bit
2014-03-25 17:45 Mao: 00:41:976 (3) - This was breaking the flow a bit for me. Don't really know why but I've got a suggestion for you as seen in the Screenshot ->http://puu.sh/7J1Ms.jpg
2014-03-25 17:45 Mao: also creates a nice blanket with 00:40:416 (2) -
2014-03-25 17:46 Mao: 00:43:017 (1) - you may want to move this after fixing ^ to avoid overlap
2014-03-25 17:46 -Asagi: 00:41:976 (3) - i intentionally did this
2014-03-25 17:46 Mao: 00:46:138 (3) - Snap with 0,80 since it's flowing better. The high distances here are a bit weird to me
2014-03-25 17:47 -Asagi: to make a good blanket here 00:42:670 (5,6,7) -
2014-03-25 17:47 Mao: hmm
2014-03-25 17:47 Mao: well probably just me since everybody plays different
2014-03-25 17:47 Mao: x3
2014-03-25 17:48 -Asagi: 00:43:017 (1) - not sure about this, since it will not reveal that it was overlapped there
2014-03-25 17:48 Mao: oh okay
2014-03-25 17:49 Mao: 00:54:462 (4) - move to 377|170 to create a triangle with the same sidelenght with 00:53:942 (1,2) -
2014-03-25 17:50 Mao: 01:11:109 (3) - Just suggestion, probably CTRL+G
2014-03-25 17:51 Mao: since it was flowing nice with CTRL+G when I tested lol
2014-03-25 17:51 -Asagi: hmmm seems nice lol
2014-03-25 17:52 Mao: I have to comment the kiai time though, the jumps feel a bit overdone to me
2014-03-25 17:52 Mao: nothing you have to fix
2014-03-25 17:52 Mao: but so gigant jumps compared to the rest of the map
2014-03-25 17:52 Mao: the CTRL+H CTRL+J sliders
2014-03-25 17:52 Mao: xD
2014-03-25 17:52 -Asagi: where?
2014-03-25 17:52 -Asagi: 01:08:681 (3,4,1) - ?
2014-03-25 17:53 Mao: 01:00:878 (1,2) - these e.g.
2014-03-25 17:53 Mao: I don't know, was kinda uncomfortable to play
2014-03-25 17:53 Mao: as said before nothing to fix
2014-03-25 17:53 Mao: just wanted to comment it xD
2014-03-25 17:53 -Asagi: i think its fine
2014-03-25 17:54 -Asagi: because the vocal pitch is higher and higher
2014-03-25 17:54 -Asagi: then the jump is getting bigger
2014-03-25 17:54 Mao: okay
2014-03-25 17:54 Mao: 01:46:137 (1,2) - Even tho I said IÄm not going to point these out anymore but this one really catched my eye x.x
2014-03-25 17:55 -Asagi: dat
2014-03-25 17:55 -Asagi: as far as i know i stack that perfectly wtf
2014-03-25 17:56 Mao: 01:49:432 (1) - as I said before consider changing these to 0,80 since it's way more comfortable to play
2014-03-25 17:56 Mao: and you vary a lot with them
2014-03-25 17:56 Mao: sometimes it's 0,80 sometimes 1,00 sometimes 1,16
2014-03-25 17:56 Mao: xD
2014-03-25 17:56 -Asagi: asdasdasdasd
2014-03-25 17:56 Mao: decide for one
2014-03-25 17:56 -Asagi: 0.8
2014-03-25 17:56 Mao: not asdas :c
2014-03-25 17:57 -Asagi: since i start changing it
2014-03-25 17:57 -Asagi: to 0.8 as you said earlier :v
2014-03-25 17:58 Mao: 02:06:426 (1,2,3) - How about using the same slider here, just rotated and flipped? :c
2014-03-25 17:58 -Asagi: dunno
2014-03-25 17:58 -Asagi: im a bit confuse what pattern should i use
2014-03-25 17:59 Mao: the pattern itself is nice
2014-03-25 17:59 Mao: just replace them with a in the same angle rotated version of the slider xD
2014-03-25 17:59 Mao: to make it look more consistent
2014-03-25 17:59 -Asagi: okay okay
2014-03-25 17:59 -Asagi: gets
2014-03-25 18:00 -Asagi: 02:07:987 (3) - yes dont mention it
2014-03-25 18:00 -Asagi: i know i know
2014-03-25 18:00 Mao: yeah going to stop mentioning it x3
2014-03-25 18:00 Mao: skipped it already since i thought you are going to fix them by yourself now
2014-03-25 18:01 -Asagi: yaya
2014-03-25 18:01 -Asagi: maybe i shouldnt ctrl+g 02:32:958 (3) - this time
2014-03-25 18:02 Mao: do it as you like
2014-03-25 18:02 Mao: 02:45:791 (5) -
2014-03-25 18:02 Mao: well I don't know if this sounds good to me
2014-03-25 18:02 Mao: x.x
2014-03-25 18:03 -Asagi: i think this time its a no :v
2014-03-25 18:03 Mao: maybe shorten the slider to 1/2 and put a circle on the white tick
2014-03-25 18:03 -Asagi: wat
2014-03-25 18:03 -Asagi: oh
2014-03-25 18:03 Mao: or map the red tick with a circle and map a triplet here
2014-03-25 18:03 Mao: the white tick needs to be mapped imo
2014-03-25 18:03 Mao: it's there and aaah
2014-03-25 18:03 Mao: x.x
2014-03-25 18:04 -Asagi: screenie?
2014-03-25 18:05 Mao: http://puu.sh/7J2RC.jpg or http://puu.sh/7J2SD.jpg sounds better to me
2014-03-25 18:05 Mao: well maybe it's just me
2014-03-25 18:06 Mao: wanna prepare for the biggest nazi of all nazi?
2014-03-25 18:06 -Asagi: wat whhere?
2014-03-25 18:06 Mao: 03:15:877 (1) -
2014-03-25 18:06 -Asagi: sounds scary nazi
2014-03-25 18:06 -Asagi: oh
2014-03-25 18:06 -Asagi: ohhhhh
2014-03-25 18:06 Mao: not the spinner itself
2014-03-25 18:06 -Asagi: wait
2014-03-25 18:06 Mao: BUT IT STARTS ON A BLUE TICK
2014-03-25 18:06 Mao: AND ON TAIKO
2014-03-25 18:06 Mao: YOU HEAR A SPINNERS START
2014-03-25 18:07 Mao: AND IT WOULDN'T FIT
2014-03-25 18:07 Mao: YGSFRAGSFAGSFDAGDS
2014-03-25 18:07 Mao: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2014-03-25 18:07 Mao: ACTION runs
2014-03-25 18:07 -Asagi: im not sure about that
2014-03-25 18:07 -Asagi: since BAT recommended that since its sounds better
2014-03-25 18:07 Mao: lol you don't have to fix xDD
2014-03-25 18:08 Mao: just joking a bit :c
2014-03-25 18:08 -Asagi: hahaha
2014-03-25 18:08 -Asagi: im not too serious lol
2014-03-25 18:09 -Asagi: why this part is so cool OAO 02:56:369 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) -
2014-03-25 18:09 Mao: 03:26:196 (1) - Consider splitting this as I show in the screenshot for better emphasis on the big white tick! Even if you mapped vocals, the vocals are most emphasized here xD -> http://puu.sh/7J38L.jpg
2014-03-25 18:10 Mao: that part is indeed cool xD
2014-03-25 18:11 -Asagi: okay fixed that
2014-03-25 18:11 -Asagi: cool
2014-03-25 18:11 -Asagi: its 1 am here lol.. and were not still finish on hard QAQ
2014-03-25 18:12 Mao: xD
2014-03-25 18:12 Mao: I have to leave for dinner soon
2014-03-25 18:12 Mao: ACTION hides
2014-03-25 18:12 -Asagi: so forum mod the hard? XD
2014-03-25 18:12 -Asagi: are we finished? XD
2014-03-25 18:13 Mao: rest should be okay, consider fixing some blankets/stacks
2014-03-25 18:13 Mao: and the distance at the blue tick sliders
2014-03-25 18:13 -Asagi: dat
2014-03-25 18:13 -Asagi: then i should do a recheck tomorrow XD
2014-03-25 18:14 Mao: well, I guess I'm posting for now, gonna edit post later for other diffs ^^
2014-03-25 18:14 -Asagi: yay

Gonna edit with other diffs later~
El SolarBeam
1,022 posts
Joined September 2011
El SolarBeam
lol so much works, and yay I've created a world record along this

-Neipezi wrote:

owo

[Solar's Normal]
00:20:646 (1,2) - i do not like this pattern from the normal. if you change to fit the vocals seem to be good. (my thoughts) (fixed in different way)
box
00:23:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ (fixed)
01:11:975 (1,2) - using a drum part (gotta keep this)
01:23:073 (1,2) - ^
02:44:923 (1,2) - ^
02:56:021 (1,3) - arrow add? add an arrow looks good. (nice thoughts, but I like the current hitsound emphasizing)
02:59:316 (2,3) - (2) a 1/1 slide to 1/2 after the change, and (3)(03:00:010 - ) it is recommended that the slide is changed. (fixed)
box
03:07:120 (1) - 03:08:334 (4) - in the same way?
03:09:201 (5) - add the whistle head (fixed)

forgive me for being late :o

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from modding queue

Solar's NORMAL
In general I feel like theres a lot of empty sections in this for a normal difficulty in parts that should have notes, I only pointed out the most important ones.
00:02:611 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i recommend remapping this part. i know you are trying to map the piano but you were doing the vocal for the beginning so should just stick with that. vocal sounds stronger here (indeed, but it's just for the very first part, but with the music going, we can heard that the instrument grows stronger, so I think following instrument right from the start can give better effect)
00:24:808 (3,4,1) - maybe try to fill this empty part with something like how you did for 00:22:033 (3,4,5,1) (fixed)
00:58:102 (2,3) - try to add something between here (done)
01:03:998 (1,1) - theres a long time after the spinner, try this: (I'd like to use this space for break instead)
SPOILER
01:12:669 (2) - add whistle (fixed)
01:15:270 (2) - add whistle (fixed)
01:23:767 (2) - add whistle (I think this part doesn't feel strong enough to be emphasized)
01:42:495 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - try to fill some of these parts (maybe I'll keep it, maybe...)
02:08:854 (4) - add whistle at the end (doesn't sound fitting imo)
02:25:848 (1,1) - see above 01:03:998 (1,1)
02:34:519 (2) - add whistle (fixed)
02:37:120 (2) - add whistle (fixed)
02:45:617 (2) - add whistle (nope)

That's all. Nice map! Best of luck :)

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hullo, mod from queue 8-)

[Solar's Normal]
00:25:675 - 00:25:848 consider adding a slider here, so that it follows the 'kana'. It'll also add a little flavor to the rhythm here, and make it look less repetitive. (fixed)
00:28:449 - 00:28:623 ^ Same suggestion as above. (keeping it for a while)
01:43:363 - 01:43:536 ^
01:44:923 - Add a note here to hit the 'na'. Now that we're in the second verse, it's time to add a bit more detail to the rhythm. (actually I've moved the detail part on the first verse instead, but oh well)
01:46:137 - Add a 1/2 slider, same reason as 00:25:675 - 00:25:848 (wanna keep this only part empty though, but thanks)
01:47:698 - Add a note here, same reason as 01:44:923 -
01:48:912 - Add a 1/2 slider.
01:50:472 - Add a note here, same reason as 01:44:923 -
03:33:305 (1) - Remove NC, not really necessary. (that's for consistency, if you were looking on the previous chorus)

Good luck!

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Solar's Normal]
  1. 02:37:120 (2) - whistle (gonna keep this one since it sounds better)
  2. 02:46:657- clap (fixed)
nice mapping~☆
~Good Luck~
thanks everyone~
dkun
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dkun
[General]
Hindi araw-araw na pwede ako mag mod in Tagalog. Salamat naman sa chance. :P

[623's Easy]
Wag mo i-copya yun metadata directly, the unicode artist/title mo is broken. Pa fix lang naman ito. Reference: img
To the GD mapper: Good job! I'll be back to re-check after Asagi has fixed the above issue. (hi happy!)

[Solar's Normal]
Same as Easy.

[Hard]
May ibang part sa mga sliders mo na pwede pa improve ang mga blankets, pero okay din naman ito. Not going to sit down and complain about cosmetics at this point.
Other than yun, wala din ako masasabi dito other than good job.

[Insane]
Overall, yun usage ng 3/4 sliders mo is good. I like the difficulty! Good job.
Normally, ayoko talaga ang 1/4 slider-slide jumps, pero ang funnnnn talaga sa diff na ito!
00:31:398 (5,6) - Na enjoy ko yun 1/4 slider jump dito. Maayos talaga ang flow!
01:19:086 (2) - Yun mga slider na ganito is really clever. Na feel ko talaga ang speedup na ito.
01:23:942 (5,1) - :o
03:41:109 (1,2) - Sana wag mo na lang gawin anti-jump yun (1)? Pwede din na switch mo yun position ng notes, I think okay lang yun jump.
03:42:150 (2) - Pwede pa fix ang symmetry dito? :p
Asagi
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Topic Starter
Asagi

dkun wrote:

[General]
Hindi araw-araw na pwede ako mag mod in Tagalog. Salamat naman sa chance. :P ~nope nope :3

[623's Easy]
Wag mo i-copya yun metadata directly, the unicode artist/title mo is broken. Pa fix lang naman ito. Reference: img ~fixed
To the GD mapper: Good job! I'll be back to re-check after Asagi has fixed the above issue. (hi happy!)

[Solar's Normal]
Same as Easy.~same

[Hard]
May ibang part sa mga sliders mo na pwede pa improve ang mga blankets, pero okay din naman ito. Not going to sit down and complain about cosmetics at this point. ~ewan ko...i fixed some, pero halos wala n akong makita XD
Other than yun, wala din ako masasabi dito other than good job. ~yay

[Insane]
Overall, yun usage ng 3/4 sliders mo is good. I like the difficulty! Good job.
Normally, ayoko talaga ang 1/4 slider-slide jumps, pero ang funnnnn talaga sa diff na ito!
00:31:398 (5,6) - Na enjoy ko yun 1/4 slider jump dito. Maayos talaga ang flow! ~yay
01:19:086 (2) - Yun mga slider na ganito is really clever. Na feel ko talaga ang speedup na ito. ~yay
01:23:942 (5,1) - :o ~d ko gets? looool
03:41:109 (1,2) - Sana wag mo na lang gawin anti-jump yun (1)? Pwede din na switch mo yun position ng notes, I think okay lang yun jump. ~errr... sinadya kong gawin anti jump, kase para bang may "bagsakan" yung music dun, ewan ko kung na gets mo basta yun hahaha
03:42:150 (2) - Pwede pa fix ang symmetry dito? :p~fixed
Thanks Thanks :3
Updated
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
sorrry I forget to reply 10crystal's mod qwq!!!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hullo, mod from queue 8-)
3 ~ 4 minutes = 3 diffs

[623's Easy]
00:26:195 (2) - NC instead of 00:25:675 (1) - , because it lands on the large tick mark (which helps emphasizes a new rhythm cycle) nooo I kept this because I want to keep the NC pattern consistent
01:00:877 (2) - lol what happened here? O.o I think there's a better way to make this slider blanket 00:59:490 (1) - : yea yea I changed

Err, messed up on one of the anchor points. Something like this may work better? ^
03:11:975 (5) - NC? xD hmm, I think this is not really necessary
03:43:189 (1) - Lower that point in the sliders body like this: fixed for sure
SPOILER

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Good luck!

tytytytytytytytytytyty!
dkun
osu! Alumni
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dkun
Ito na pare.
happy623
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Asagi
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Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Asagi
yay salamat :)

Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
just played a bit
I 'd say I love the accelearating sliders, really intuitive and fitting
UnitedWeSin
891 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
Hey. :)
No KD plz.

[General]
  1. I think soft-slidertick5 is not being used?
  2. You've got lots of objects unsnapped by 1 ms. I recommend using the resnap all notes function and making sure it doesn't cause any odd snapping before submitting.
[623's Easy]
  1. 02:56:021 - Delay the break to here or extend the spinner?
[Solar's Normal]
  1. How about HP=4. I think it will work nicer for the diff.
  2. 03:17:351 (1,2) - I think it will confuse players how you stack them. It forces them to try to read the approach circles to play it correctly. Instead I suggest a slider to make it easier like this:
    Example

    It fits the music nicely as well imo. c: You can experiment with a shape.
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:079 (2) - It would be nice if you tried a placement that didn't stack the repeat on under that previous slider. I don't want players to get confused by that since it's hard to notice right when it appears.
Terrific set. Make sure to call me back. :D
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey. :)
No KD plz.

[General]
  1. I think soft-slidertick5 is not being used?
  2. You've got lots of objects unsnapped by 1 ms. I recommend using the resnap all notes function and making sure it doesn't cause any odd snapping before submitting.
[623's Easy]
  1. 02:56:021 - Delay the break to here or extend the spinner?
Terrific set. Make sure to call me back. :D
fixed, thanks UWS :oops:

gogogo you can do it
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Asagi
1,021 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Asagi
All Fixed (and Solar's Diff too since its a minor issue)

Updated
UnitedWeSin
891 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
RANKED!
Asagi
1,021 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Asagi
Finally, Thanks UWS <3
kisata
521 posts
Joined September 2012
kisata
yay

osu! needs more grisaia~!
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
FrzR
Grats!! XD
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay
Oh hey! I was the first mod :D
Gz!
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
finally <3
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Mira-san
*Sweet Victory plays in the background* :)
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
YunoFanatic
Grats~! GOGOGOGO PH MAPPERS!
Seph
Seph
unggoy
Sharlo
667 posts
Joined May 2012
Sharlo
oh oh #1 rank
gratz~
Sapphiire_old_1
1,301 posts
Joined July 2013
Sapphiire_old_1
congrats~
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Good job :oops:
-Neipezi
2,266 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
gratz ranked:3
Asagi
1,021 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Asagi
Thanks guys \:D/
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
congrats! :D
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
congrats :3
EineKrone
147 posts
Joined November 2013
EineKrone
Even if I like having Grisaia soundtrack mapped, the background serves as a spoiler...
Maybe change it? I just played the first one... Though I already saw this image going trough sankaku ._.

(Could comment about the maps later, not possible to open osu now)


Best regards guys o/
El SolarBeam
1,022 posts
Joined September 2011
El SolarBeam
maybe I'm a bit late but.. oh well whatever

GRATZ!
arcwinolivirus
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Joined October 2012
arcwinolivirus
Wow Congrats Asagi /o/
>w<)b
MegumiLuka
11 posts
Joined September 2012
MegumiLuka
Thaaanks!! i love la eden de la grisaia perfect visual novel i love you :) :)
seriously thank you very much for creating the map ;) :D
Xiaolin
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Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
Gratz~ <3
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