1. Easy (1.48 stars, 128 notes)
2. Extra (5.33 stars, 487 notes)
3. kajiyatta's Insane (3.98 stars, 412 notes)
4. Muya's Hard (2.56 stars, 308 notes)
5. Normal (1.89 stars, 177 notes)

Kyshiro wrote:

Hi

Insane:
00:11:264 (1,2,3,4) - This isn't 1/6, listen to it at 25%, it's a 1/8 tripple and then 1/4 later comes the next beat http://puu.sh/5krrj.jpg done
00:14:426 (1,2,3,4) - Same done
00:21:343 (4,5,6,1) - Move these around and create the same spacing for the 4 sliders here done.
00:49:999 (3) - Put this note in exactly in the center of those 2 sliders, looks better http://puu.sh/5krDm.jpg done.
01:01:660 (1,2,3,4) - This plays a bit awkward, try putting them like this to create a better flow: http://puu.sh/5krHx.jpg done
01:14:505 (1,2,3,4) - Same as before, 1/8 done
01:23:201 (3,1) - Move them further apart, it's currently almost impossible to see the next slider
01:28:537 (1,2,1,2) - Same here, I suggest you make a different pattern here, this plays weird and is impossible to read without looking at it in the editor both suggest, notes are not perfect stacking. so, rankable and playable imo :-( I will wait to see what happens for a bit longer. (testplay,modding)
02:04:901 (1) - till 02:08:063 (1) - > it would be fun to space this out a bit, these jumps are really simple and fun to play if placed properly i don't know properly placed =3=!


That's all, call me back when you have the other diffs

Muya wrote:

:o http://puu.sh/5qsoH.osu

General

• Looks good.

Easy

1. 00:06:324 (1) - Although this runs pretty good, I think you could've made them into a blanket. It could be a nice match up between these and 00:08:695 (2,1) -.
   
   Example

   

1. 00:14:229 (3) - Hmm, at first place this should've been placed a bit more to the left, so it could run up nice following the previous two sliders. But since the circle and slider at 00:15:414 (4,1) - follow the same line the slider, you should try a variation between them by making the slidergo into two ways. Here's what I mean:
   
   Example

   

1. 00:32:015 (1) - This should have a whistle to match up with your pattern of hitsounds on the song.

1. 00:49:011 (3,4,1) - Try making them going on a circle shape, goes better for the flow. Also, since they are on the same section, you can try placing 00:52:173 (3,4,5) - the same way for consistency, in case you adjust those I mentioned in the beginning.
   
   Example

   
   

1. 01:37:233 (4,1) - Hmm, these two don't look well, plus that slider doesn't really suit up for the circle at 01:39:209 (2) - . You could try making the blanket on the slider a bit more visible to improve visuals a bit, but, it should be kinda hard giving the SV and the small spacing up there (but I'll put on the box anyways). You can try making a complete circular-shape here or inverting the slider and making it with a reverse arrow. Take a look and see if you agree:
   
   Example

   
   
   

1. 01:49:090 (2) - Should have whistle on the arrow.

Normal

• AR could be -1.

1. 00:45:849 (3,4,5) - Hmm, you could make them a little bit wider, would run nice since it'll follow up the shape of 00:44:268 (1) -.

Example

1. 01:03:241 (1) - Make it inverted horizontally (ctrl+j), will improve flow on the section.

1. 01:53:043 (4,5,6) - Pretty much the same as 00:45:849 (3,4,5) -, would be nice to see them going on a circular-shape either for the sake of flow:
   
   Example

   

• Nice.

Muya's Hard

• Could've used a better variety of hitsounds.

• Delete unsnapped inheriting section at 01:06:503 - and add new one to 01:06:501 -

1. 00:22:924 (3,1) - Hmm, you shouldn't have made a stack here. There's slightly more time between them in comparison to other stacks, so it kinda breaks the flow. But anyways, it's nothing really bad, just something personal I decided to bring up. Same goes to 01:19:841 (3,1) -, and same stuff as you know in case you change it.

1. 00:33:201 (1) - Kinda nazi, but it's kinda close to the slider before it, better move up it upwards a bit. Same to similar patterns you did ahead.

Insane

• I miss some whistles after the beginning (00:15:810 - ).

1. 00:20:750 (2,3) - You could add a circle between them (00:20:948 - ). I don't know, it looks kinda random to me that. Emphasizing the bass here isn't something I'd do in an Insane.

1. 00:23:715 (1,2,3) - Symmetry here could have made using the 0.8x spacing. It's not really that necessary to change the spacing to do it. Try making 00:23:517 (8) - a bit curved, that way you can put (1,2,3) with the consistent spacing and also symmetric:
   
   Example

   
   

1. 00:44:268 (1) - Ctrl+g here flows better to me. See if you agree.

Hollow Wings wrote:

from ur req

SPOILER

General

1. maybe u can quiet the slider track's hs, it sounds noisy in some quiet part.

Insane

1. to be honest, i don't expect the map is like this... actually i think it can be much more better...
   thou there's little issues in ur diff, i just give some general suggestion to u, and wish u can consider some of them 0,0
2. 00:04:743 (1,2,3) - patterns like this have large ts from each other, then u can do lots of different composing style rather than just shrink them in one place. in ur map there're lots of patterns just like the one here, maybe u can change them a bit
3. 00:41:106 (1) - from here u just follow the violin or something, and the drum's beats, but why miss those electrical beats just like kiai or the head part? u don't need to fill the blank full of objs like u did in kiai, but follow some of them, it'll be more funny imo.
4. 01:39:604 (1,2,3) - patterns like this can have much more distance from each other, even half of the screen, just do the insane jumps having larger ds frequently~
5. hmm... what can i say? i wish u creat more fun, thou there do have funny patterns in this diff now. D:

Normal & Easy

1. one suggestion: set nc to keep ur combo count at about 5 or 6

hmm... i think u need more work on this
good luck

no changed, but,thanks for modding

tellertheworld wrote:

[Insane]

open

01:28:537 (1,2,1,2) - cannot understand to read it when I was playing.

Don't use Rebound more than once, if your map is fast-chick.

It is very tiptop map.
I cannot find more wrong, Sorry.

This map look like Saten / 0108 style.
Strive to rank this map.

P o M u T a wrote:

sorry,no changed, but thanks modding.

CakiP wrote:

request in PM
quick mod.

[Easy]
nothing.

[Normal]
01:15:889 (1) - 後ろの音にあわせて音量を徐々にあげてみてはどうでしょう。 easy, insaneもfixed.
00:30:829 (3) - このスライダーの後からclapがスライダーの終点に来るようになっていて少しだけ違和感を感じました。一貫性のあるclapなので問題ないかな。


[Hard]
nothing.


[Insane]
02:09:446 (3,4) - ここ入れ替えてもいいかもです。 jump欲しいのでこのままで。


全然提案できなくて申し訳ないです・・・。 いえいえ、迅速な対応ありがとうございます。
素晴らしいmapだと思います。がんばってください!　ありがとうです！star thanks!!!