from ur req
hmm... i think u need more work on this
good luck
General
- maybe u can quiet the slider track's hs, it sounds noisy in some quiet part.
Insane
- to be honest, i don't expect the map is like this... actually i think it can be much more better...
thou there's little issues in ur diff, i just give some general suggestion to u, and wish u can consider some of them 0,0 - 00:04:743 (1,2,3) - patterns like this have large ts from each other, then u can do lots of different composing style rather than just shrink them in one place. in ur map there're lots of patterns just like the one here, maybe u can change them a bit
- 00:41:106 (1) - from here u just follow the violin or something, and the drum's beats, but why miss those electrical beats just like kiai or the head part? u don't need to fill the blank full of objs like u did in kiai, but follow some of them, it'll be more funny imo.
- 01:39:604 (1,2,3) - patterns like this can have much more distance from each other, even half of the screen, just do the insane jumps having larger ds frequently~
- hmm... what can i say? i wish u creat more fun, thou there do have funny patterns in this diff now. D:
Muya's Hard
- 00:45:849 (1,2,3) - u set too much patterns like this... maybe change some to another style? that will be more fun...
- 01:15:098 (2,1) - stack perfect
- 01:19:841 (3,1) - ^
- too much copy and paste...
Normal & Easy
- one suggestion: set nc to keep ur combo count at about 5 or 6
good luck