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thanks for modding Wolf wrote:
Hi.
Mod requested through forum-pm (thanks for stopping by).General
- Looks good.
Easy
- 00:06:324 (1) - Although this runs pretty good, I think you could've made them into a blanket. It could be a nice match up between these and 00:08:695 (2,1) -.
- 00:14:229 (3) - Hmm, at first place this should've been placed a bit more to the left, so it could run up nice following the previous two sliders. But since the circle and slider at 00:15:414 (4,1) - follow the same line the slider, you should try a variation between them by making the slidergo into two ways. Here's what I mean:
- 00:32:015 (1) - This should have a whistle to match up with your pattern of hitsounds on the song.
- 00:49:011 (3,4,1) - Try making them going on a circle shape, goes better for the flow. Also, since they are on the same section, you can try placing 00:52:173 (3,4,5) - the same way for consistency, in case you adjust those I mentioned in the beginning.
- 01:37:233 (4,1) - Hmm, these two don't look well, plus that slider doesn't really suit up for the circle at 01:39:209 (2) - . You could try making the blanket on the slider a bit more visible to improve visuals a bit, but, it should be kinda hard giving the SV and the small spacing up there (but I'll put on the box anyways). You can try making a complete circular-shape here or inverting the slider and making it with a reverse arrow. Take a look and see if you agree:
- 01:49:090 (2) - Should have whistle on the arrow.
almost same suggest fixed.Normal
- AR could be -1. no
- 00:45:849 (3,4,5) - Hmm, you could make them a little bit wider, would run nice since it'll follow up the shape of 00:44:268 (1) -.
- 01:03:241 (1) - Make it inverted horizontally (ctrl+j), will improve flow on the section. fixed
- 01:53:043 (4,5,6) - Pretty much the same as 00:45:849 (3,4,5) -, would be nice to see them going on a circular-shape either for the sake of flow: (3) is straight, so, i want use straight circle, sorry
- Nice.
Insane
- I miss some whistles after the beginning (00:15:810 - ). i'll add some whistle
- 00:20:750 (2,3) - You could add a circle between them (00:20:948 - ). I don't know, it looks kinda random to me that. Emphasizing the bass here isn't something I'd do in an Insane. this is fine
- 00:23:715 (1,2,3) - Symmetry here could have made using the 0.8x spacing. It's not really that necessary to change the spacing to do it. Try making 00:23:517 (8) - a bit curved, that way you can put (1,2,3) with the consistent spacing and also symmetric: fixed
I'm not good playing Insanes, but it looks great, good job.
- 00:44:268 (1) - Ctrl+g here flows better to me. See if you agree. no
Good luck, thanks for your interest in my modding.