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Sekai-nyan wrote:

Yomi's Hard:
HP +1 would be great since this is a hard not normal :/ if tari increase hp in insane i will increase it
  1. 00:19:245 (5) - same as i said on normal diff o3o
  2. 00:26:854 (4) - it'll be nice if you added a whistle on slider's head, it'll follow the melody so well ><
  3. 00:56:745 (5) - I think adding a 1/4 slider here is a bit too hard, maybe switch to notes instead? k
  4. 02:14:898 (1) - the combo here went a bit too long, adding nc here would be nice imo k,i forgot nc here xD
  5. 03:08:593 - why stopped mapping here? it's kiai don't make such space unmapped >< it's no fun, i suggest you to map throw this space because there are no drums here,so i give up mapping it
  6. 03:14:898 (3) - I think you missed a finish here, so please add it


hitsound is done by tari,wait for his opinion
http://puu.sh/53JPk.osu
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All Change except HP~ This song is not fast enough for HP 7 IMO.

and update yomi's diff
EDIT: Update ORZ
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That SB is something else. I've only got one star, but take it. Take it all.

Where's the speedrank, BAT's pls.
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Hello, Tari ,Google form req.
I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.

[General]

None.

[Normal]

01:09:245 (2,3) - Done in parallel? Because before the parallel (01:04:463

(1,2)).
01:43:158 (2,4) - Do symmetry?
01:46:637 (2) - Notice radians.
01:55:332 (3) - The drum hitsound feel a bit strange,suggest soft whistle?
01:56:637 (1) - Blanket.
02:45:332 (5) - If there were a regular pentagon, this slider head crooked

off.
03:23:158 (2) - DS.
03:21:854 (1,2,3) - (1)"s slider end,(2),(3) slider head,can triangular.
03:49:680 (1) - Internal recesses not symmetry.
04:02:724 (2) - DS,I think this slider should place medium.
04:06:637 (4) - DS. Best average point.The patter can place good.
04:15:332 (2,3,4,5) - The pattern is bad,(3)-DS. Try this pattern?
http://puu.sh/53WQu.jpg

04:19:245 (2) - To move up a bit, with slider (1) slider do symmetry.
04:35:767 (1) - Internal recesses not symmetry.


[Yomi's Hard]

00:00:985 (1,2) - 不太好看呀,也沒blanket,(1)的滑條微調一下可變這樣

http://puu.sh/54uua.jpg
00:37:506 (1) - 這個跳應該可以跟前面再拉大一點距離,我覺得太窄了,移到(28|

244)?
01:14:245 (1) - 尾端是不是能加whistle?
01:45:115 (4) - 同00:00:985 。
01:53:158 (3,4) - 都沒blanket不好看。
02:27:724 (3,4) - (4)再上面點弄個對稱。
02:39:245 (1) - 這邊應該要跟人聲? 減少個折返放到紅線。 不太好抓時機點擊這個


02:59:245 (3) - 尾端可blanket.
02:47:724 (2) - 同00:00:985 。
03:17:071 (1) - 感覺這段太小聲,+個5~10%?
04:11:202 (1) - 同00:00:985 。


[Insane]

00:19:680 (3) - Can blanket (4).
00:20:550 (6) - Move a bit , Become this http://puu.sh/54vM0.jpg. Pentagon

should be good?
and,00:20:984 (3) slider gap target (6)(move to (72|48)).

00:23:158 (2) - Can blanket (1) slider end.

00:32:506 (4) - Rotate slider clockwise (9 angle),blanket 00:31:854 (2)

slider end.
00:35:550 (1) - Slider end should not have drum hitsound?
00:36:637 (1,2,3) - I think let this 3 sliders can be Equilateral triangle.
00:42:724 (2) - Blanket
00:55:550 (3,4) - Can symmetry?
02:13:376 (5) - Blanket 02:12:724 (3) slider end.
02:31:637 (4,5) - Ctrl+g?
03:05:767 (4) - Blanket 03:04:898 (2) slider end. Better flow.
03:25:984 (5,6) - Should can enlarge a bit distance,select all to (308|132).
04:28:376 (4) - Ctrl+g is better flow.
04:35:767 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I feel so many "NC" unnecessarily,imo.

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
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smallboat wrote:

[Yomi's Hard]

00:00:985 (1,2) - 不太好看呀,也沒blanket,(1)的滑條微調一下可變這樣

http://puu.sh/54uua.jpg
00:37:506 (1) - 這個跳應該可以跟前面再拉大一點距離,我覺得太窄了,移到(28|

244)? 没关系吧
01:14:245 (1) - 尾端是不是能加whistle? 加了 drum
01:45:115 (4) - 同00:00:985 。
01:53:158 (3,4) - 都沒blanket不好看。
02:27:724 (3,4) - (4)再上面點弄個對稱。 这边对称不好看
02:39:245 (1) - 這邊應該要跟人聲? 減少個折返放到紅線。 不太好抓時機點擊這個


02:59:245 (3) - 尾端可blanket.
02:47:724 (2) - 同00:00:985 。
03:17:071 (1) - 感覺這段太小聲,+個5~10%?
04:11:202 (1) - 同00:00:985 。

blanket 都修了一下,按DS摆的不太好拉
I add my old name in tag,and change one pattern to old one,i think that is better
and your file is bigger than 24m,is that ok?


edit:http://puu.sh/56fJs.osu
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Interesting fact, the SB was done under 8 hours without breaks (excluding lunch and dinner times haha)
And it was done manually (Done without scripting and through osu!) except for the stars rising up. (SO MUCH PARTICLES, HOW TO DO IT ALL [For those curious, its a software called osu!dots])
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smallboat wrote:

Hello, Tari ,Google form req.
I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.

[General]

None.

[Normal]

01:09:245 (2,3) - Done in parallel? Because before the parallel (01:04:463

(1,2)). Not needed, you compare to wrong thing 01:04:463 (1,2) - need be same 02:24:463 (1,2) -
01:43:158 (2,4) - Do symmetry? Don't need, it already flow nice , due to there symmetrical movement
01:46:637 (2) - Notice radians.
01:55:332 (3) - The drum hitsound feel a bit strange,suggest soft whistle? Forgot there need to be clap there XD
01:56:637 (1) - Blanket.
02:45:332 (5) - If there were a regular pentagon, this slider head crooked

off.
03:23:158 (2) - DS.
03:21:854 (1,2,3) - (1)"s slider end,(2),(3) slider head,can triangular.
03:49:680 (1) - Internal recesses not symmetry.
04:02:724 (2) - DS,I think this slider should place medium. No, I stack on purpose because the beat before is
04:06:637 (4) - DS. Best average point.The patter can place good.
04:15:332 (2,3,4,5) - The pattern is bad,(3)-DS. Try this pattern?
http://puu.sh/53WQu.jpg

04:19:245 (2) - To move up a bit, with slider (1) slider do symmetry.
04:35:767 (1) - Internal recesses not symmetry.


[Yomi's Hard]

00:00:985 (1,2) - 不太好看呀,也沒blanket,(1)的滑條微調一下可變這樣

http://puu.sh/54uua.jpg
00:37:506 (1) - 這個跳應該可以跟前面再拉大一點距離,我覺得太窄了,移到(28|

244)?
01:14:245 (1) - 尾端是不是能加whistle?
01:45:115 (4) - 同00:00:985 。
01:53:158 (3,4) - 都沒blanket不好看。
02:27:724 (3,4) - (4)再上面點弄個對稱。
02:39:245 (1) - 這邊應該要跟人聲? 減少個折返放到紅線。 不太好抓時機點擊這個


02:59:245 (3) - 尾端可blanket.
02:47:724 (2) - 同00:00:985 。
03:17:071 (1) - 感覺這段太小聲,+個5~10%?
04:11:202 (1) - 同00:00:985 。


[Insane]

00:19:680 (3) - Can blanket (4).
00:20:550 (6) - Move a bit , Become this http://puu.sh/54vM0.jpg. Pentagon

should be good? Nope, the three circle spacing need be same
and,00:20:984 (3) slider gap target (6)(move to (72|48)).

00:23:158 (2) - Can blanket (1) slider end. Not mean to blanket sorry

00:32:506 (4) - Rotate slider clockwise (9 angle),blanket 00:31:854 (2)

slider end.
00:35:550 (1) - Slider end should not have drum hitsound? Yes it should, so I add finish!
00:36:637 (1,2,3) - I think let this 3 sliders can be Equilateral triangle. I want to keep, 3 sliders in same time a little boring
00:42:724 (2) - Blanket
00:55:550 (3,4) - Can symmetry? I don't think so , this part feel nice with other part,
02:13:376 (5) - Blanket 02:12:724 (3) slider end.
02:31:637 (4,5) - Ctrl+g? Uhm there no jump at 00:32:506 (4) - ?
03:05:767 (4) - Blanket 03:04:898 (2) slider end. Better flow.
03:25:984 (5,6) - Should can enlarge a bit distance,select all to (308|132).
04:28:376 (4) - Ctrl+g is better flow.
04:35:767 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I feel so many "NC" unnecessarily,imo. Keep for special effect.

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.


Blue / no reply = fixed red = no change and reason

Thanks for your mod!
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Just got official permission to use chamooi's artwork for this map!~
We are good to go with Storyboard now!~
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go go go!
posted
holy shit. Kimi no iru machi.
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Hello!

From M4M.

General

  1. First SB? nice job!, hmm, not flash effect? (disible epilepsy warning).

Normal

  1. 00:20:984 (4) - remove NC?
  2. 00:31:419 (3) - change this? (only rythem) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081561
  3. 00:47:071 (1) - change this? (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081568 or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081574
  4. 01:37:506 (6,7) - change this? (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081577
  5. 01:53:158 (1) - move (196,132)? much better-
  6. 02:02:724 (2,3) - change this (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081580
  7. 02:04:898 (3) - move (299,18) / 02:05:332 (4) - move (300,120)??
  8. 04:03:593 (3) - like 01:37:506 or how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081587
  9. 04:21:854 (5) - move (199,37) middle point (258,22) tail point (315,39)??

Yomi's Hard

  1. 00:19:245 (5,1) - change this? (only... pass;toomany) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081589
  2. 00:22:724 (3) - change rythem? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081590
  3. 01:19:680 (5) - remove NC, 01:19:898 (1) - NC?
  4. 01:46:202 (1,1,1,1) - ctri+g, like 01:32:289 (1,1,1,1) - ?
  5. 01:56:637 (1) - NC?
  6. 02:37:724 (1,2,3,4) - like 01:19:680 (5)
  7. 02:42:724 (1) - more jump? ummm
  8. 03:04:463 (1,1,1,1) - hmm, change this. or change 00:04:463 (1,1,1,1,1) -? choice one?
  9. 03:07:941 (3) - add one reverse?
  10. 04:36:637 (1) - ...NC?

Insane

  1. 00:46:202 (2) - perpect blanket. ex) 00:46:202 (2) - move (144,256) middle point (199,236) tail point (255,254), 00:46:637 (3) - move (201,340)
  2. 01:54:898 (1) - uh, move another way? (this can be off-screen in 4:3 resolutions.).....maybe?... i don't know.
  3. 03:51:637 (1) - OMG, It's really pretty! <3
  4. 04:14:028 (1) - ctrl+g?


Take my star! ;)
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From my queue~

[General]
  1. Title: "センチメンタルラブ"
  2. For SB, the image's size more than 800x600 is not rankable? ( from Ranking Criteria )

[Normal]
  1. 00:09:245 (2) - move to x:336 y:132 (blanket correctly)
  2. 00:11:419 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about regular pentagon?
    339,139,11419,5,0,1:0:0:0:
    255,78,11854,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    171,138,12289,1,0,1:1:0:0:
    203,237,12724,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    307,237,13158,1,4,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:14:028 (1) - I prefer slider: 00:14:028~00:14:898
  4. 00:54:028 (1) - move to x:460 y:120 (blanket correctly)
  5. 01:20:767 (4,1) - DS 0.9x
  6. 01:56:637 (1) - curve more and blanket correctly
  7. 02:43:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about regular pentagon?
    248,184,163593,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    193,271,164028,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    92,246,164463,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    85,143,164898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    181,104,165332,2,0,P|264:30|359:75,1,230,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  8. 03:51:637 (1) - start at 03:51:419?
  9. 04:16:637 (5) - move to x:328 y:220 ( make 04:15:332 (2,3,4,5) - symmetric)
  10. 04:21:854 (5) - make horizontal
  11. 04:22:724- kiai-time end?
  12. 04:29:245- clap

[Yomi's Hard]
  1. 00:11:202 (5) - I prefer circle at 00:11:202
  2. 01:51:854- clap
  3. 03:10:115- ^
  4. 04:17:941- ^

[Insane]
  1. 00:46:202 (2) - blanket 00:46:637 (3) - correctly
  2. 00:51:419 (3,4,5,6) - it is better to uniform DS
  3. 01:25:550- i prefer to remove whistle
  4. 01:25:984- ^
  5. 01:26:419- ^
  6. 01:26:854- ^
  7. 02:06:202 (5,3) - stack slider's heads correctly
  8. 02:43:811- i prefer to remove whistle
  9. 02:44:245- ^
  10. 02:44:680- ^
  11. 02:45:115- ^
  12. 03:24:898 (6) - clap?
  13. 03:28:811 (1) - awkward...
  14. 03:51:637 (1) - Good~ <3
  15. 04:05:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - how about uniform DS like this?
    344,92,245332,5,0,1:0:0:0:
    464,295,245550,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    281,147,245767,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    504,223,245984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    268,228,246202,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    489,143,246419,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    311,297,246637,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    426,91,246854,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    388,324,247071,1,4,0:0:0:0:


How great SB is!
Star~☆
~Good Luck~
posted

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From M4M.

General

  1. First SB? nice job!, hmm, not flash effect? (disible epilepsy warning).

Normal

  1. 00:20:984 (4) - remove NC? no, it breaks consistency with 02:01:854 (1) -
  2. 00:31:419 (3) - change this? (only rythem) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081561 I don't think so it means I have to rework this 02:12:289 (3) - and I think it follows fine for a normal
  3. 00:47:071 (1) - change this? (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081568 or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081574 Too much remap orz, and I follow vocals
  4. 01:37:506 (6,7) - change this? (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081577 02:55:767 (1) - I've have to change this too and I think they both follow fine
  5. 01:53:158 (1) - move (196,132)? much better-
  6. 02:02:724 (2,3) - change this (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081580 What? It needs to match with this rhythm 00:20:984 (1,2,3) - because they both sound the same.
  7. 02:04:898 (3) - move (299,18) / 02:05:332 (4) - move (300,120)??
  8. 04:03:593 (3) - like 01:37:506 or how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081587 I don't see the problem, Circle makes you more alert as you get to kiai and signals it
  9. 04:21:854 (5) - move (199,37) middle point (258,22) tail point (315,39)??

Yomi's Hard

  1. 00:19:245 (5,1) - change this? (only... pass;toomany) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081589
  2. 00:22:724 (3) - change rythem? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081590
  3. 01:19:680 (5) - remove NC, 01:19:898 (1) - NC?
  4. 01:46:202 (1,1,1,1) - ctri+g, like 01:32:289 (1,1,1,1) - ?
  5. 01:56:637 (1) - NC?
  6. 02:37:724 (1,2,3,4) - like 01:19:680 (5)
  7. 02:42:724 (1) - more jump? ummm
  8. 03:04:463 (1,1,1,1) - hmm, change this. or change 00:04:463 (1,1,1,1,1) -? choice one?
  9. 03:07:941 (3) - add one reverse?
  10. 04:36:637 (1) - ...NC?

Insane

  1. 00:46:202 (2) - perpect blanket. ex) 00:46:202 (2) - move (144,256) middle point (199,236) tail point (255,254), 00:46:637 (3) - move (201,340)
  2. 01:54:898 (1) - uh, move another way? (this can be off-screen in 4:3 resolutions.).....maybe?... i don't know.
  3. 03:51:637 (1) - OMG, It's really pretty! <3
  4. 04:14:028 (1) - ctrl+g? Too big of a jump lol
[/notice:1337]

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. Title: "センチメンタルラブ"
  2. For SB, the image's size more than 800x600 is not rankable? ( from Ranking Criteria )

[Normal]
  1. 00:09:245 (2) - move to x:336 y:132 (blanket correctly)
  2. 00:11:419 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about regular pentagon?
    339,139,11419,5,0,1:0:0:0:
    255,78,11854,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    171,138,12289,1,0,1:1:0:0:
    203,237,12724,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    307,237,13158,1,4,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:14:028 (1) - I prefer slider: 00:14:028~00:14:898
  4. 00:54:028 (1) - move to x:460 y:120 (blanket correctly)
  5. 01:20:767 (4,1) - DS 0.9x
  6. 01:56:637 (1) - curve more and blanket correctly
  7. 02:43:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about regular pentagon?
    248,184,163593,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    193,271,164028,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    92,246,164463,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    85,143,164898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    181,104,165332,2,0,P|264:30|359:75,1,230,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  8. 03:51:637 (1) - start at 03:51:419? No change, spinner start at vocal
  9. 04:16:637 (5) - move to x:328 y:220 ( make 04:15:332 (2,3,4,5) - symmetric)
  10. 04:21:854 (5) - make horizontal
  11. 04:22:724- kiai-time end?
  12. 04:29:245- clap Nope break inconsistency

[Yomi's Hard]
  1. 00:11:202 (5) - I prefer circle at 00:11:202
  2. 01:51:854- clap
  3. 03:10:115- ^
  4. 04:17:941- ^

[Insane]
  1. 00:46:202 (2) - blanket 00:46:637 (3) - correctly
  2. 00:51:419 (3,4,5,6) - it is better to uniform DS
  3. 01:25:550- i prefer to remove whistle
  4. 01:25:984- ^
  5. 01:26:419- ^
  6. 01:26:854- ^
  7. 02:06:202 (5,3) - stack slider's heads correctly
  8. 02:43:811- i prefer to remove whistle
  9. 02:44:245- ^
  10. 02:44:680- ^
  11. 02:45:115- ^
  12. 03:24:898 (6) - clap? Whistle is here and fits better because of harp~
  13. 03:28:811 (1) - awkward...
  14. 03:51:637 (1) - Good~ <3
  15. 04:05:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - how about uniform DS like this?
    344,92,245332,5,0,1:0:0:0:
    464,295,245550,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    281,147,245767,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    504,223,245984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    268,228,246202,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    489,143,246419,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    311,297,246637,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    426,91,246854,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    388,324,247071,1,4,0:0:0:0:


How great SB is!
Star~☆
~Good Luck~


Thanks for mods~ no replies are fixed.

Also, you remind me about SB image limit orz, It should be fixed soon but not now~
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Losertic wrote:

Yomi's Hard

  1. 00:19:245 (5,1) - change this? (only... pass;toomany) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081589
  2. 00:22:724 (3) - change rythem? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081590
    these two i think current rhythm is fine
  3. 01:19:680 (5) - remove NC, 01:19:898 (1) - NC? k
  4. 01:46:202 (1,1,1,1) - ctri+g, like 01:32:289 (1,1,1,1) - ? no,;w;
  5. 01:56:637 (1) - NC? k
  6. 02:37:724 (1,2,3,4) - like 01:19:680 (5) nope here
  7. 02:42:724 (1) - more jump? ummm i think no jump is also fine
  8. 03:04:463 (1,1,1,1) - hmm, change this. or change 00:04:463 (1,1,1,1,1) -? choice one? no,;w;
  9. 03:07:941 (3) - add one reverse? k
  10. 04:36:637 (1) - ...NC? nope

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~


[Yomi's Hard]
  1. 00:11:202 (5) - I prefer circle at 00:11:202
  2. 01:51:854- clap
  3. 03:10:115- ^
  4. 04:17:941- ^

[/list]
http://puu.sh/5aVzo.osu
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will update everything when SB gets fixed.
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supp~~
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Hi ,Tari ;)



checked lyrics :3

I found there was a mistake in that kanji.

This is the letter which is not usually used by japanese. so please change it like this

6 : いつからか " 溢れる " ようになって

Anyway, really nice SB work :D Good luck ☆

Edit : please check this green section 00:07:946 - *-*!
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I'm sorry about my mistakes.
But, Thanks alacat san T^T

I found one mistake.

↑ lyrics in SB

↓Actual lyrics


"Ah~" is not 3 times. It's 4 times.
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alacat wrote:

Hi ,Tari ;)



checked lyrics :3

I found there was a mistake in that kanji.

This is the letter which is not usually used by japanese. so please change it like this

6 : いつからか " 溢れる " ようになって

Anyway, really nice SB work :D Good luck ☆

Edit : please check this green section 00:07:946 - *-*!
Is that all the mistakes for now?

CakiP wrote:

I'm sorry about my mistakes.
But, Thanks alacat san T^T

I found one mistake.

↑ lyrics in SB

↓Actual lyrics


"Ah~" is not 3 times. It's 4 times.
From what I heard from the song, I heard only 3 D: Can we confirm to go with 4 or 3? >.<
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It's 4 ah''s from me
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