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Tari
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Tari
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, January 19, 2014 at 11:57:02 PM

Artist: mimimemeMIMI
Title: Sentimental Love
Source: Kimi no Iru Machi
Tags: a town where you live 君のいる町 opening tsukuyomi baldrace eyecandy yuka DJNightmare
BPM: 138
Filesize: 24228kb
Play Time: 04:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 799 notes)
  2. Normal (2.43 stars, 296 notes)
  3. Yomi's Hard (4.84 stars, 587 notes)
Download: mimimemeMIMI - Sentimental Love
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
It's all complete now!
My First map with SB, I hope you like it!
Please note that the SB is based off the music video
Music Video Source : http://www.jpopsuki.tv/video/MIMI-MEME- ... cbbf8ab8e3

Watch SB using Cinema Mod for Full Experience!
Special Mentions
Tsukuyomi (Hard GD)
Mr.Nightmare (The stupendous SB!)
Last edited by Tari , edited 25 times in total.
Kinomi
1,218 posts
Joined August 2012
Kinomi
/me hugs moe Tari
11t
Elite Storyboarder
299 posts
Joined November 2012
11t
yesssssssssssssssssss
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare
I'll post some updates soon :3

Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
Oh LOL. This map you say? :o
Are you sure this map is the frist time you make SB? Oh God! It is so so greatz!! <3
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare

Oyatsu wrote:

Oh LOL. This map you say? :o
Are you sure this map is the frist time you make SB? Oh God! It is so so greatz!! <3
I'm the one who made the SB actually, i think Tari meant that this is his/her (i dont know the gender D:) map to include a storyboard :)
Tari
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Tari
Yeah, I'm going reword the sentence now :D
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
LOl. Hhahaha :D You make SB very great, Nightmare!! <3 :D
Map full ver. đàu tiên của cậu. Go! Go! Tari-chan. Không có star để give. Sorry~ <3 :D should Oyatsu's Easy =w=
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Normal:
  1. 00:04:898 (2) - I think it'll be nice blanket with next slider if you moved the last slider point 2 grids to the left, it'll look nicer imo
  2. 00:15:767 (1) - ^ but this one to the right
  3. 00:19:245 (1) - I think whistle is too soft to add it here, so i suggest you to remove it and add a finish instead, it'll sound nice owo/
  4. 00:27:941 (4) - ^
  5. 00:29:680 (1) - ^
  6. 00:41:419 (2,4) - you added too much liner sliders ></ , how about doing something like with two sliders, to make at least some changes with them o3o
    SPOILER
  7. 01:37:506 (1) - I think it'll blanket better if you moved the 2nd slider point 2 grids to the right, so the point will line up on the x-axis

Yomi's Hard:
HP +1 would be great since this is a hard not normal :/
  1. 00:19:245 (5) - same as i said on normal diff o3o
  2. 00:26:854 (4) - it'll be nice if you added a whistle on slider's head, it'll follow the melody so well ><
  3. 00:56:745 (5) - I think adding a 1/4 slider here is a bit too hard, maybe switch to notes instead?
  4. 02:14:898 (1) - the combo here went a bit too long, adding nc here would be nice imo
  5. 03:08:593 - why stopped mapping here? it's kiai don't make such space unmapped >< it's no fun, i suggest you to map throw this space
  6. 03:14:898 (3) - I think you missed a finish here, so please add it

Insane:
HP +1 it would be fun if you add some challenge to this diff o3o
I'm surprised o.o nice Insane you have there Tari <3



That's all I have found, i hope i have helped you with this :3

Good luck with it Tari, it's awesome song and sb is just great <3
Rumia-
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Joined July 2012
Rumia-
(ノ・ω・)ノ for BADASS MAGIC SB! goood luck Fav'd this
Kinomi
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Joined August 2012
Kinomi

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Yomi's Hard:
HP +1 would be great since this is a hard not normal :/ if tari increase hp in insane i will increase it
  1. 00:19:245 (5) - same as i said on normal diff o3o
  2. 00:26:854 (4) - it'll be nice if you added a whistle on slider's head, it'll follow the melody so well ><
  3. 00:56:745 (5) - I think adding a 1/4 slider here is a bit too hard, maybe switch to notes instead? k
  4. 02:14:898 (1) - the combo here went a bit too long, adding nc here would be nice imo k,i forgot nc here xD
  5. 03:08:593 - why stopped mapping here? it's kiai don't make such space unmapped >< it's no fun, i suggest you to map throw this space because there are no drums here,so i give up mapping it
  6. 03:14:898 (3) - I think you missed a finish here, so please add it
hitsound is done by tari,wait for his opinion
http://puu.sh/53JPk.osu
Tari
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Topic Starter
Tari
All Change except HP~ This song is not fast enough for HP 7 IMO.

and update yomi's diff
EDIT: Update ORZ
kisata
521 posts
Joined September 2012
kisata
That SB is something else. I've only got one star, but take it. Take it all.

Where's the speedrank, BAT's pls.
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hello, Tari ,Google form req.
I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.

[General]

None.

[Normal]

SPOILER
01:09:245 (2,3) - Done in parallel? Because before the parallel (01:04:463

(1,2)).
01:43:158 (2,4) - Do symmetry?
01:46:637 (2) - Notice radians.
01:55:332 (3) - The drum hitsound feel a bit strange,suggest soft whistle?
01:56:637 (1) - Blanket.
02:45:332 (5) - If there were a regular pentagon, this slider head crooked

off.
03:23:158 (2) - DS.
03:21:854 (1,2,3) - (1)"s slider end,(2),(3) slider head,can triangular.
03:49:680 (1) - Internal recesses not symmetry.
04:02:724 (2) - DS,I think this slider should place medium.
04:06:637 (4) - DS. Best average point.The patter can place good.
04:15:332 (2,3,4,5) - The pattern is bad,(3)-DS. Try this pattern?
http://puu.sh/53WQu.jpg

04:19:245 (2) - To move up a bit, with slider (1) slider do symmetry.
04:35:767 (1) - Internal recesses not symmetry.

[Yomi's Hard]

SPOILER
00:00:985 (1,2) - 不太好看呀，也沒blanket，(1)的滑條微調一下可變這樣

http://puu.sh/54uua.jpg
00:37:506 (1) - 這個跳應該可以跟前面再拉大一點距離，我覺得太窄了，移到(28|

244)?
01:14:245 (1) - 尾端是不是能加whistle?
01:45:115 (4) - 同00:00:985 。
01:53:158 (3,4) - 都沒blanket不好看。
02:27:724 (3,4) - (4)再上面點弄個對稱。
02:39:245 (1) - 這邊應該要跟人聲? 減少個折返放到紅線。 不太好抓時機點擊這個

。
02:59:245 (3) - 尾端可blanket.
02:47:724 (2) - 同00:00:985 。
03:17:071 (1) - 感覺這段太小聲，+個5~10%?
04:11:202 (1) - 同00:00:985 。

[Insane]

SPOILER
00:19:680 (3) - Can blanket (4).
00:20:550 (6) - Move a bit , Become this http://puu.sh/54vM0.jpg. Pentagon

should be good?
and,00:20:984 (3) slider gap target (6)(move to (72|48)).

00:23:158 (2) - Can blanket (1) slider end.

00:32:506 (4) - Rotate slider clockwise (9 angle),blanket 00:31:854 (2)

slider end.
00:35:550 (1) - Slider end should not have drum hitsound?
00:36:637 (1,2,3) - I think let this 3 sliders can be Equilateral triangle.
00:42:724 (2) - Blanket
00:55:550 (3,4) - Can symmetry?
02:13:376 (5) - Blanket 02:12:724 (3) slider end.
02:31:637 (4,5) - Ctrl+g?
03:05:767 (4) - Blanket 03:04:898 (2) slider end. Better flow.
03:25:984 (5,6) - Should can enlarge a bit distance,select all to (308|132).
04:28:376 (4) - Ctrl+g is better flow.
04:35:767 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I feel so many "NC" unnecessarily,imo.
[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
Kinomi
1,218 posts
Joined August 2012
Kinomi

smallboat wrote:

[Yomi's Hard]

SPOILER
00:00:985 (1,2) - 不太好看呀，也沒blanket，(1)的滑條微調一下可變這樣

http://puu.sh/54uua.jpg
00:37:506 (1) - 這個跳應該可以跟前面再拉大一點距離，我覺得太窄了，移到(28|

244)? 没关系吧
01:14:245 (1) - 尾端是不是能加whistle? 加了 drum
01:45:115 (4) - 同00:00:985 。
01:53:158 (3,4) - 都沒blanket不好看。
02:27:724 (3,4) - (4)再上面點弄個對稱。 这边对称不好看
02:39:245 (1) - 這邊應該要跟人聲? 減少個折返放到紅線。 不太好抓時機點擊這個 好

。
02:59:245 (3) - 尾端可blanket.
02:47:724 (2) - 同00:00:985 。
03:17:071 (1) - 感覺這段太小聲，+個5~10%? 好
04:11:202 (1) - 同00:00:985 。
blanket 都修了一下，按DS摆的不太好拉
I add my old name in tag,and change one pattern to old one,i think that is better
and your file is bigger than 24m,is that ok?

edit:http://puu.sh/56fJs.osu
Last edited by Kinomi , edited 1 time in total.
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare
Interesting fact, the SB was done under 8 hours without breaks (excluding lunch and dinner times haha)
And it was done manually (Done without scripting and through osu!) except for the stars rising up. (SO MUCH PARTICLES, HOW TO DO IT ALL [For those curious, its a software called osu!dots])
Tari
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Topic Starter
Tari
smallboat

smallboat wrote:

Hello, Tari ,Google form req.
I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.

[General]

None.

[Normal]

SPOILER
01:09:245 (2,3) - Done in parallel? Because before the parallel (01:04:463

(1,2)). Not needed, you compare to wrong thing 01:04:463 (1,2) - need be same 02:24:463 (1,2) -
01:43:158 (2,4) - Do symmetry? Don't need, it already flow nice , due to there symmetrical movement
01:46:637 (2) - Notice radians.
01:55:332 (3) - The drum hitsound feel a bit strange,suggest soft whistle? Forgot there need to be clap there XD
01:56:637 (1) - Blanket.
02:45:332 (5) - If there were a regular pentagon, this slider head crooked

off.
03:23:158 (2) - DS.
03:21:854 (1,2,3) - (1)"s slider end,(2),(3) slider head,can triangular.
03:49:680 (1) - Internal recesses not symmetry.
04:02:724 (2) - DS,I think this slider should place medium. No, I stack on purpose because the beat before is
04:06:637 (4) - DS. Best average point.The patter can place good.
04:15:332 (2,3,4,5) - The pattern is bad,(3)-DS. Try this pattern?
http://puu.sh/53WQu.jpg

04:19:245 (2) - To move up a bit, with slider (1) slider do symmetry.
04:35:767 (1) - Internal recesses not symmetry.

[Yomi's Hard]

SPOILER
00:00:985 (1,2) - 不太好看呀，也沒blanket，(1)的滑條微調一下可變這樣

http://puu.sh/54uua.jpg
00:37:506 (1) - 這個跳應該可以跟前面再拉大一點距離，我覺得太窄了，移到(28|

244)?
01:14:245 (1) - 尾端是不是能加whistle?
01:45:115 (4) - 同00:00:985 。
01:53:158 (3,4) - 都沒blanket不好看。
02:27:724 (3,4) - (4)再上面點弄個對稱。
02:39:245 (1) - 這邊應該要跟人聲? 減少個折返放到紅線。 不太好抓時機點擊這個

。
02:59:245 (3) - 尾端可blanket.
02:47:724 (2) - 同00:00:985 。
03:17:071 (1) - 感覺這段太小聲，+個5~10%?
04:11:202 (1) - 同00:00:985 。

[Insane]

SPOILER
00:19:680 (3) - Can blanket (4).
00:20:550 (6) - Move a bit , Become this http://puu.sh/54vM0.jpg. Pentagon

should be good? Nope, the three circle spacing need be same
and,00:20:984 (3) slider gap target (6)(move to (72|48)).

00:23:158 (2) - Can blanket (1) slider end. Not mean to blanket sorry

00:32:506 (4) - Rotate slider clockwise (9 angle),blanket 00:31:854 (2)

slider end.
00:35:550 (1) - Slider end should not have drum hitsound? Yes it should, so I add finish!
00:36:637 (1,2,3) - I think let this 3 sliders can be Equilateral triangle. I want to keep, 3 sliders in same time a little boring
00:42:724 (2) - Blanket
00:55:550 (3,4) - Can symmetry? I don't think so , this part feel nice with other part,
02:13:376 (5) - Blanket 02:12:724 (3) slider end.
02:31:637 (4,5) - Ctrl+g? Uhm there no jump at 00:32:506 (4) - ?
03:05:767 (4) - Blanket 03:04:898 (2) slider end. Better flow.
03:25:984 (5,6) - Should can enlarge a bit distance,select all to (308|132).
04:28:376 (4) - Ctrl+g is better flow.
04:35:767 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I feel so many "NC" unnecessarily,imo. Keep for special effect.
[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Blue / no reply = fixed red = no change and reason

Thanks for your mod!
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare


Just got official permission to use chamooi's artwork for this map!~
We are good to go with Storyboard now!~
Lust
osu! Alumni
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Lust
go go go!
Raging Bull
2,785 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
holy shit. Kimi no iru machi.
Losertic
461 posts
Joined May 2012
Losertic
Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

  1. First SB? nice job!, hmm, not flash effect? (disible epilepsy warning).

Normal

  1. 00:20:984 (4) - remove NC?
  2. 00:31:419 (3) - change this? (only rythem) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081561
  3. 00:47:071 (1) - change this? (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081568 or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081574
  4. 01:37:506 (6,7) - change this? (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081577
  5. 01:53:158 (1) - move (196,132)? much better-
  6. 02:02:724 (2,3) - change this (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081580
  7. 02:04:898 (3) - move (299,18) / 02:05:332 (4) - move (300,120)??
  8. 04:03:593 (3) - like 01:37:506 or how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081587
  9. 04:21:854 (5) - move (199,37) middle point (258,22) tail point (315,39)??

Yomi's Hard

  1. 00:19:245 (5,1) - change this? (only... pass;toomany) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081589
  2. 00:22:724 (3) - change rythem? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081590
  3. 01:19:680 (5) - remove NC, 01:19:898 (1) - NC?
  4. 01:46:202 (1,1,1,1) - ctri+g, like 01:32:289 (1,1,1,1) - ?
  5. 01:56:637 (1) - NC?
  6. 02:37:724 (1,2,3,4) - like 01:19:680 (5)
  7. 02:42:724 (1) - more jump? ummm
  8. 03:04:463 (1,1,1,1) - hmm, change this. or change 00:04:463 (1,1,1,1,1) -? choice one?
  9. 03:07:941 (3) - add one reverse?
  10. 04:36:637 (1) - ...NC?

Insane

  1. 00:46:202 (2) - perpect blanket. ex) 00:46:202 (2) - move (144,256) middle point (199,236) tail point (255,254), 00:46:637 (3) - move (201,340)
  2. 01:54:898 (1) - uh, move another way? (this can be off-screen in 4:3 resolutions.).....maybe?... i don't know.
  3. 03:51:637 (1) - OMG, It's really pretty! <3
  4. 04:14:028 (1) - ctrl+g?

Take my star! ;)
RandF
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Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. Title: "センチメンタルラブ"
  2. For SB, the image's size more than 800x600 is not rankable? ( from Ranking Criteria )
[Normal]
  1. 00:09:245 (2) - move to x:336 y:132 (blanket correctly)
  2. 00:11:419 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about regular pentagon?
    SPOILER

    339,139,11419,5,0,1:0:0:0:
    255,78,11854,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    171,138,12289,1,0,1:1:0:0:
    203,237,12724,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    307,237,13158,1,4,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:14:028 (1) - I prefer slider: 00:14:028~00:14:898
  4. 00:54:028 (1) - move to x:460 y:120 (blanket correctly)
  5. 01:20:767 (4,1) - DS 0.9x
  6. 01:56:637 (1) - curve more and blanket correctly
    SPOILER
  7. 02:43:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about regular pentagon?
    SPOILER

    248,184,163593,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    193,271,164028,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    92,246,164463,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    85,143,164898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    181,104,165332,2,0,P|264:30|359:75,1,230,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  8. 03:51:637 (1) - start at 03:51:419?
  9. 04:16:637 (5) - move to x:328 y:220 ( make 04:15:332 (2,3,4,5) - symmetric)
  10. 04:21:854 (5) - make horizontal
  11. 04:22:724- kiai-time end?
  12. 04:29:245- clap
[Yomi's Hard]
  1. 00:11:202 (5) - I prefer circle at 00:11:202
  2. 01:51:854- clap
  3. 03:10:115- ^
  4. 04:17:941- ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:46:202 (2) - blanket 00:46:637 (3) - correctly
  2. 00:51:419 (3,4,5,6) - it is better to uniform DS
  3. 01:25:550- i prefer to remove whistle
  4. 01:25:984- ^
  5. 01:26:419- ^
  6. 01:26:854- ^
  7. 02:06:202 (5,3) - stack slider's heads correctly
  8. 02:43:811- i prefer to remove whistle
  9. 02:44:245- ^
  10. 02:44:680- ^
  11. 02:45:115- ^
  12. 03:24:898 (6) - clap?
  13. 03:28:811 (1) - awkward...
  14. 03:51:637 (1) - Good~ <3
  15. 04:05:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - how about uniform DS like this?
    SPOILER

    344,92,245332,5,0,1:0:0:0:
    464,295,245550,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    281,147,245767,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    504,223,245984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    268,228,246202,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    489,143,246419,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    311,297,246637,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    426,91,246854,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    388,324,247071,1,4,0:0:0:0:
How great SB is!
Star~☆
~Good Luck~
Tari
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Tari
Losertic

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From M4M.

[box=Modding]

General

  1. First SB? nice job!, hmm, not flash effect? (disible epilepsy warning).

Normal

  1. 00:20:984 (4) - remove NC? no, it breaks consistency with 02:01:854 (1) -
  2. 00:31:419 (3) - change this? (only rythem) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081561 I don't think so it means I have to rework this 02:12:289 (3) - and I think it follows fine for a normal
  3. 00:47:071 (1) - change this? (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081568 or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081574 Too much remap orz, and I follow vocals
  4. 01:37:506 (6,7) - change this? (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081577 02:55:767 (1) - I've have to change this too and I think they both follow fine
  5. 01:53:158 (1) - move (196,132)? much better-
  6. 02:02:724 (2,3) - change this (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081580 What? It needs to match with this rhythm 00:20:984 (1,2,3) - because they both sound the same.
  7. 02:04:898 (3) - move (299,18) / 02:05:332 (4) - move (300,120)??
  8. 04:03:593 (3) - like 01:37:506 or how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081587 I don't see the problem, Circle makes you more alert as you get to kiai and signals it
  9. 04:21:854 (5) - move (199,37) middle point (258,22) tail point (315,39)??

Yomi's Hard

  1. 00:19:245 (5,1) - change this? (only... pass;toomany) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081589
  2. 00:22:724 (3) - change rythem? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081590
  3. 01:19:680 (5) - remove NC, 01:19:898 (1) - NC?
  4. 01:46:202 (1,1,1,1) - ctri+g, like 01:32:289 (1,1,1,1) - ?
  5. 01:56:637 (1) - NC?
  6. 02:37:724 (1,2,3,4) - like 01:19:680 (5)
  7. 02:42:724 (1) - more jump? ummm
  8. 03:04:463 (1,1,1,1) - hmm, change this. or change 00:04:463 (1,1,1,1,1) -? choice one?
  9. 03:07:941 (3) - add one reverse?
  10. 04:36:637 (1) - ...NC?

Insane

  1. 00:46:202 (2) - perpect blanket. ex) 00:46:202 (2) - move (144,256) middle point (199,236) tail point (255,254), 00:46:637 (3) - move (201,340)
  2. 01:54:898 (1) - uh, move another way? (this can be off-screen in 4:3 resolutions.).....maybe?... i don't know.
  3. 03:51:637 (1) - OMG, It's really pretty! <3
  4. 04:14:028 (1) - ctrl+g? Too big of a jump lol



RandomEffort

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. Title: "センチメンタルラブ"
  2. For SB, the image's size more than 800x600 is not rankable? ( from Ranking Criteria )
[Normal]
  1. 00:09:245 (2) - move to x:336 y:132 (blanket correctly)
  2. 00:11:419 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about regular pentagon?
    SPOILER

    339,139,11419,5,0,1:0:0:0:
    255,78,11854,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    171,138,12289,1,0,1:1:0:0:
    203,237,12724,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    307,237,13158,1,4,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:14:028 (1) - I prefer slider: 00:14:028~00:14:898
  4. 00:54:028 (1) - move to x:460 y:120 (blanket correctly)
  5. 01:20:767 (4,1) - DS 0.9x
  6. 01:56:637 (1) - curve more and blanket correctly
    SPOILER
  7. 02:43:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about regular pentagon?
    SPOILER

    248,184,163593,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    193,271,164028,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    92,246,164463,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    85,143,164898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    181,104,165332,2,0,P|264:30|359:75,1,230,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  8. 03:51:637 (1) - start at 03:51:419? No change, spinner start at vocal
  9. 04:16:637 (5) - move to x:328 y:220 ( make 04:15:332 (2,3,4,5) - symmetric)
  10. 04:21:854 (5) - make horizontal
  11. 04:22:724- kiai-time end?
  12. 04:29:245- clap Nope break inconsistency
[Yomi's Hard]
  1. 00:11:202 (5) - I prefer circle at 00:11:202
  2. 01:51:854- clap
  3. 03:10:115- ^
  4. 04:17:941- ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:46:202 (2) - blanket 00:46:637 (3) - correctly
  2. 00:51:419 (3,4,5,6) - it is better to uniform DS
  3. 01:25:550- i prefer to remove whistle
  4. 01:25:984- ^
  5. 01:26:419- ^
  6. 01:26:854- ^
  7. 02:06:202 (5,3) - stack slider's heads correctly
  8. 02:43:811- i prefer to remove whistle
  9. 02:44:245- ^
  10. 02:44:680- ^
  11. 02:45:115- ^
  12. 03:24:898 (6) - clap? Whistle is here and fits better because of harp~
  13. 03:28:811 (1) - awkward...
  14. 03:51:637 (1) - Good~ <3
  15. 04:05:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - how about uniform DS like this?
    SPOILER

    344,92,245332,5,0,1:0:0:0:
    464,295,245550,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    281,147,245767,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    504,223,245984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    268,228,246202,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    489,143,246419,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    311,297,246637,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    426,91,246854,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    388,324,247071,1,4,0:0:0:0:
How great SB is!
Star~☆
~Good Luck~

Thanks for mods~ no replies are fixed.

Also, you remind me about SB image limit orz, It should be fixed soon but not now~
Kinomi
1,218 posts
Joined August 2012
Kinomi
SPOILER

Losertic wrote:

Yomi's Hard

  1. 00:19:245 (5,1) - change this? (only... pass;toomany) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081589
  2. 00:22:724 (3) - change rythem? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081590
    these two i think current rhythm is fine
  3. 01:19:680 (5) - remove NC, 01:19:898 (1) - NC? k
  4. 01:46:202 (1,1,1,1) - ctri+g, like 01:32:289 (1,1,1,1) - ? no,;w;
  5. 01:56:637 (1) - NC? k
  6. 02:37:724 (1,2,3,4) - like 01:19:680 (5) nope here
  7. 02:42:724 (1) - more jump? ummm i think no jump is also fine
  8. 03:04:463 (1,1,1,1) - hmm, change this. or change 00:04:463 (1,1,1,1,1) -? choice one? no,;w;
  9. 03:07:941 (3) - add one reverse? k
  10. 04:36:637 (1) - ...NC? nope

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~


[Yomi's Hard]
  1. 00:11:202 (5) - I prefer circle at 00:11:202
  2. 01:51:854- clap
  3. 03:10:115- ^
  4. 04:17:941- ^
[/list]

http://puu.sh/5aVzo.osu
Tari
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Tari
will update everything when SB gets fixed.
CakiP
384 posts
Joined February 2012
CakiP
supp~~
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hi ,Tari ;)

from

checked lyrics :3

I found there was a mistake in that kanji.

This is the letter which is not usually used by japanese. so please change it like this

6 : いつからか " 溢れる " ようになって

Anyway, really nice SB work :D Good luck ☆

Edit : please check this green section 00:07:946 - *-*!
CakiP
384 posts
Joined February 2012
CakiP
I'm sorry about my mistakes.
But, Thanks alacat san T^T

I found one mistake.

↑ lyrics in SB

↓Actual lyrics


"Ah~" is not 3 times. It's 4 times.
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare

alacat wrote:

Hi ,Tari ;)

from

checked lyrics :3

I found there was a mistake in that kanji.

This is the letter which is not usually used by japanese. so please change it like this

6 : いつからか " 溢れる " ようになって

Anyway, really nice SB work :D Good luck ☆

Edit : please check this green section 00:07:946 - *-*!
Is that all the mistakes for now?

CakiP wrote:

I'm sorry about my mistakes.
But, Thanks alacat san T^T

I found one mistake.

↑ lyrics in SB

↓Actual lyrics


"Ah~" is not 3 times. It's 4 times.
From what I heard from the song, I heard only 3 D: Can we confirm to go with 4 or 3? >.<
Tari
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Tari
It's 4 ah''s from me
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
I'm so jealous with this SB. Awesome work.
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
Hi, mod from popner's modding team

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General

bmin11 wrote:

I'm so jealous with this SB. Awesome work.
I suggest that you add the Sb maker's name into tags although this is not a must
You may consider exchanging your combo color 2 and 3, to split up the two blue colors and that may improve the map's readability at some particular points
About the lyric SB at 03:49:463 - ,I'm just pointing out that it doesn't sounds like a "be" in "I wanna be" , but more like a "feel" or something, but I'm really sorry I don't know what it really should be either, only a reminder here

Insane
Slider tick rate 2 should do, according to your high sv usage
00:00:985 - adjust the red line from S to SC1 cause the default sliderslide sound is too noisy for the first part
00:02:071 (3,3) - maybe add whistles to their ends?
00:16:202 (4) - a whistle at its end may be nice, and some similar points foloowing, like 00:19:898 - and 00:23:376 - ... you can decide by yourself
00:16:637 (5) - according to your hitsound pattern, I think you missed a drum sample here
00:30:767 (4,5,1) - feeling a bit weird jumping from 5 to 1, not a smooth moving trail
00:35:550 (1) - maybe not use clap at its reverse point, only a drum sample, like 00:41:637 (5) -
00:42:506 (1) - drum clap fits better than a drum finish as I suppose, also for points like 00:49:898 -
00:52:289 (1) - do you need a whistle on head?
00:52:941 (3) - CTRL+G flows better
00:54:463 (7) - and whistle on tail?
01:04:245 (4) - you seem to need a drum sample here
01:03:593 (2) - may try CTRL+G
and I noticed that, do you need more SC2 finish for the part from 00:50:550 - ? at 00:54:028 - or 00:57:506 - or else, you should make them consistent with your Normal diff
01:11:637 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think the flow is a little awkward when considering the transition from 456 to 781 and I suggest that you try to move in the order like 4->7->6->8->5->1. See the pic below ↓
SPOILER
01:14:245 (6) - without a whistle on head the slider sounds too empty
01:15:550 (2,3,4,5,6) - I seem to find many points with flow like this, I don't know if this is one of preferrence or something but imo this really don't flow nicely. If you wanna keep the tripple's placement, you'd better try to move 01:16:202 (3) - to somewhere around (416,56) or if you wanna keep 3, then you may try something similar with the below ↓
SPOILER
[img]puu.sh/5ozzr.jpg[/img]

01:19:028 (2,3,1) - not enough satisfying again, you should know that drawing a small triangle like this isn't a nice way to emphasisi anything. You should really try a big circle jump like ↓
SPOILER
or a crossing-slider jump like ↓
SPOILER
Yeah you may need to adjust the followig notes' arrangement a bit but I think that's not a big matter and shouldn't stop you improving flows
01:24:245 (2) - missed whistle at end
01:25:332 (5) - maybe NC
01:28:158 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe you'll need drum samples or lower volume claps to at least show difference here, they're absolutely strong in the music themself
01:35:006 (7) - maybe a drum sample at this point, and similar places
01:41:637 (4) - whistle on head?
01:50:984 (4) - CTRL+G may be interesting, you may want to adjust the slider's shape a bit if you do so
01:55:767 (3) - whistle on head？
01:57:941 (5) - this placement is not suitable. Try to moive it to (372,372) to form a better flow
02:37:289 (2,3) - try to rotate them clockwise by about 15° in order to make 02:37:941 (3,1) - further away from each other and the 1 would be emphasised better
02:45:984 (3) - you should add more drum sound/clap for the stream from this note on
03:09:028 (3,4,1) - maybe it's just me but I'd say the flow's a bit weird, considering 1's direction
03:20:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you really need more hitsounds to decorate you streamsw whether with whistles or with drums sounds, they are greatly in need throughout the diff
03:49:028 - drum clap here and drum finish at 03:49:245 -
04:21:202 (5) - missed an important clap here
and the NC spam at end...lol

Yomi's Hard
00:07:941 - 把这条线之前的不管绿线红线全都从S改成SC1，你没觉得sliderslide巨吵么
00:11:202 (5) - 这种1/4 感觉太勉强了 这才刚开始 换成circle
00:21:854 (1) - 个人认为把这换成2个circle叠在后面头上更适合一个Hard
00:26:202 (3) - 头上好像finish更好些？
00:37:071 (5,1) - 我是暂时没看懂你NC怎么加的但是你把这一对儿slider分到2个combo里面实在是莫名
00:39:245 (1) - CTRL+G 不知道舒服多少
00:46:854 (4,1) - 感觉应该互换NC，这不是很工整的一句话么 你节奏也都是一样的 感觉应该在一起，到现在都没看懂你怎么NC的 还不如长白线
00:53:593 (1) - 反正我个人不太喜欢Hard里出现这种东西 感觉太勉强 还是个下面没有E的H 00:56:745 (5) - 这还好点儿
01:00:767 (2) - 头上whistle个？
01:25:332 (3) - 第二个折返箭头被01:25:115 (2) - 的hitburst挡了 美丽可以少折返一次然后在它折返点的位置叠一个circle 或者想想别的flow
01:51:745 (4,5) - 感觉不如把4去掉让5从4那个时间就起 拖成3/4 slider
02:11:419 (1,4) - 互换NC？一上来就2个slider一组NC里不是有点太奇怪了？诶呀NC我不想再说了
02:32:071 (7) - 头上是不是该clap一下 而且感觉02:31:637 (4,5,6) - 和02:32:506 (1) - 之类的狂丢鼓音
02:43:593 (4) - 这个倒是没有问题不过在前面那个改掉了的基础上我建议可以把这个做相同的处理 不然感觉有点突兀
03:08:811 - 0.0 我以为我的恶俗坏了 咦怎么突然没东西了……
03:14:898 (3) - 不finish么
03:23:593 (5) - 倒是这个finish一定是手滑了
spinner到03:31:854 - 再结束和Insane统一 break拖到03:32:180 - 再开始
03:49:028 - 加drum clap然后加drum finish 03:49:245 -
03:54:898 - 这里也最好统一从这里再开始break
04:01:854 (2) - 头上finish呢
04:03:593 (3) - 我觉得这个不适合3/4， 1/2好一些 或者最好你04:03:593 - 单circle后面叠一个1/1 slider

Normal
00:00:985 - S->SC1, mentioned in Insane
01:19:898 (3,4) - I would really use straight sliders instead these, it's not a must though
03:25:332 (1) - a finish on head fits better
03:54:898 - break should start here, like that iin your Insane
04:01:854 (1) - missed finish on head
Overall you used many more whistles in this diff than Insane and I think plenty of them is nicely arranged thus I hope you could further decorate your Insane with hitsounds
Really, please please please please make this a fantastic mapset like the song and the storyboard

That's all
Good luck and have a star with my best wishes
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare
"About the lyric SB at 03:49:463 - ,I'm just pointing out that it doesn't sounds like a "be" in "I wanna be" , but more like a "feel" or something, but I'm really sorry I don't know what it really should be either, only a reminder here"

From the music video and the lyrics I have searched for, they all have I wanna be, With you instead of any other words. I agree this is confusing but I guess the singer is trying to emphasize in a way that is pronounced differently? Just a though. If Tari wants to keep it or change it, i'll change it depending on his/her perspective
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