Oh LOL. This map you say?
Are you sure this map is the frist time you make SB? Oh God! It is so so greatz!! <3
Are you sure this map is the frist time you make SB? Oh God! It is so so greatz!! <3
I'm the one who made the SB actually, i think Tari meant that this is his/her (i dont know the gender D:) map to include a storyboardOyatsu wrote:
Oh LOL. This map you say?
Are you sure this map is the frist time you make SB? Oh God! It is so so greatz!! <3
http://puu.sh/53JPk.osuSekai-nyan wrote:
Yomi's Hard:
HP +1 would be great since this is a hard not normal :/ if tari increase hp in insane i will increase ithitsound is done by tari,wait for his opinion
- 00:19:245 (5) - same as i said on normal diff o3o
- 00:26:854 (4) - it'll be nice if you added a whistle on slider's head, it'll follow the melody so well ><
- 00:56:745 (5) - I think adding a 1/4 slider here is a bit too hard, maybe switch to notes instead? k
- 02:14:898 (1) - the combo here went a bit too long, adding nc here would be nice imo k,i forgot nc here xD
- 03:08:593 - why stopped mapping here? it's kiai don't make such space unmapped >< it's no fun, i suggest you to map throw this space because there are no drums here,so i give up mapping it
- 03:14:898 (3) - I think you missed a finish here, so please add it
I add my old name in tag,and change one pattern to old one,i think that is bettersmallboat wrote:
[Yomi's Hard]SPOILERblanket 都修了一下,按DS摆的不太好拉00:00:985 (1,2) - 不太好看呀,也沒blanket,(1)的滑條微調一下可變這樣
http://puu.sh/54uua.jpg
00:37:506 (1) - 這個跳應該可以跟前面再拉大一點距離,我覺得太窄了,移到(28|
244)? 没关系吧
01:14:245 (1) - 尾端是不是能加whistle? 加了 drum
01:45:115 (4) - 同00:00:985 。
01:53:158 (3,4) - 都沒blanket不好看。
02:27:724 (3,4) - (4)再上面點弄個對稱。 这边对称不好看
02:39:245 (1) - 這邊應該要跟人聲? 減少個折返放到紅線。 不太好抓時機點擊這個 好
。
02:59:245 (3) - 尾端可blanket.
02:47:724 (2) - 同00:00:985 。
03:17:071 (1) - 感覺這段太小聲,+個5~10%? 好
04:11:202 (1) - 同00:00:985 。
smallboat wrote:
Hello, Tari ,Google form req.
I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.
[General]
None.
[Normal]SPOILER01:09:245 (2,3) - Done in parallel? Because before the parallel (01:04:463
(1,2)). Not needed, you compare to wrong thing 01:04:463 (1,2) - need be same 02:24:463 (1,2) -
01:43:158 (2,4) - Do symmetry? Don't need, it already flow nice , due to there symmetrical movement
01:46:637 (2) - Notice radians.
01:55:332 (3) - The drum hitsound feel a bit strange,suggest soft whistle? Forgot there need to be clap there XD
01:56:637 (1) - Blanket.
02:45:332 (5) - If there were a regular pentagon, this slider head crooked
off.
03:23:158 (2) - DS.
03:21:854 (1,2,3) - (1)"s slider end,(2),(3) slider head,can triangular.
03:49:680 (1) - Internal recesses not symmetry.
04:02:724 (2) - DS,I think this slider should place medium. No, I stack on purpose because the beat before is
04:06:637 (4) - DS. Best average point.The patter can place good.
04:15:332 (2,3,4,5) - The pattern is bad,(3)-DS. Try this pattern?
http://puu.sh/53WQu.jpg
04:19:245 (2) - To move up a bit, with slider (1) slider do symmetry.
04:35:767 (1) - Internal recesses not symmetry.
[Yomi's Hard]SPOILER00:00:985 (1,2) - 不太好看呀,也沒blanket,(1)的滑條微調一下可變這樣
http://puu.sh/54uua.jpg
00:37:506 (1) - 這個跳應該可以跟前面再拉大一點距離,我覺得太窄了,移到(28|
244)?
01:14:245 (1) - 尾端是不是能加whistle?
01:45:115 (4) - 同00:00:985 。
01:53:158 (3,4) - 都沒blanket不好看。
02:27:724 (3,4) - (4)再上面點弄個對稱。
02:39:245 (1) - 這邊應該要跟人聲? 減少個折返放到紅線。 不太好抓時機點擊這個
。
02:59:245 (3) - 尾端可blanket.
02:47:724 (2) - 同00:00:985 。
03:17:071 (1) - 感覺這段太小聲,+個5~10%?
04:11:202 (1) - 同00:00:985 。
[Insane]SPOILER[Other]00:19:680 (3) - Can blanket (4).
00:20:550 (6) - Move a bit , Become this http://puu.sh/54vM0.jpg. Pentagon
should be good? Nope, the three circle spacing need be same
and,00:20:984 (3) slider gap target (6)(move to (72|48)).
00:23:158 (2) - Can blanket (1) slider end. Not mean to blanket sorry
00:32:506 (4) - Rotate slider clockwise (9 angle),blanket 00:31:854 (2)
slider end.
00:35:550 (1) - Slider end should not have drum hitsound? Yes it should, so I add finish!
00:36:637 (1,2,3) - I think let this 3 sliders can be Equilateral triangle. I want to keep, 3 sliders in same time a little boring
00:42:724 (2) - Blanket
00:55:550 (3,4) - Can symmetry? I don't think so , this part feel nice with other part,
02:13:376 (5) - Blanket 02:12:724 (3) slider end.
02:31:637 (4,5) - Ctrl+g? Uhm there no jump at 00:32:506 (4) - ?
03:05:767 (4) - Blanket 03:04:898 (2) slider end. Better flow.
03:25:984 (5,6) - Should can enlarge a bit distance,select all to (308|132).
04:28:376 (4) - Ctrl+g is better flow.
04:35:767 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I feel so many "NC" unnecessarily,imo. Keep for special effect.
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
339,139,11419,5,0,1:0:0:0:
255,78,11854,1,0,1:0:0:0:
171,138,12289,1,0,1:1:0:0:
203,237,12724,1,0,1:0:0:0:
307,237,13158,1,4,0:0:0:0:
248,184,163593,5,8,0:0:0:0:
193,271,164028,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,246,164463,1,8,0:0:0:0:
85,143,164898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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344,92,245332,5,0,1:0:0:0:
464,295,245550,1,0,1:0:0:0:
281,147,245767,1,0,1:0:0:0:
504,223,245984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,228,246202,1,0,1:0:0:0:
489,143,246419,1,0,1:0:0:0:
311,297,246637,1,0,1:0:0:0:
426,91,246854,1,0,1:0:0:0:
388,324,247071,1,4,0:0:0:0:
Losertic wrote:
Hello!
From M4M.
[box=Modding]General
- First SB? nice job!, hmm, not flash effect? (disible epilepsy warning).
Normal
- 00:20:984 (4) - remove NC? no, it breaks consistency with 02:01:854 (1) -
- 00:31:419 (3) - change this? (only rythem) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081561 I don't think so it means I have to rework this 02:12:289 (3) - and I think it follows fine for a normal
- 00:47:071 (1) - change this? (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081568 or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081574 Too much remap orz, and I follow vocals
- 01:37:506 (6,7) - change this? (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081577 02:55:767 (1) - I've have to change this too and I think they both follow fine
- 01:53:158 (1) - move (196,132)? much better-
- 02:02:724 (2,3) - change this (only rythem) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081580 What? It needs to match with this rhythm 00:20:984 (1,2,3) - because they both sound the same.
- 02:04:898 (3) - move (299,18) / 02:05:332 (4) - move (300,120)??
- 04:03:593 (3) - like 01:37:506 or how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081587 I don't see the problem, Circle makes you more alert as you get to kiai and signals it
- 04:21:854 (5) - move (199,37) middle point (258,22) tail point (315,39)??
Yomi's Hard
- 00:19:245 (5,1) - change this? (
only... pass;toomany) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081589- 00:22:724 (3) - change rythem? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081590
- 01:19:680 (5) - remove NC, 01:19:898 (1) - NC?
- 01:46:202 (1,1,1,1) - ctri+g, like 01:32:289 (1,1,1,1) - ?
- 01:56:637 (1) - NC?
- 02:37:724 (1,2,3,4) - like 01:19:680 (5)
- 02:42:724 (1) - more jump? ummm
- 03:04:463 (1,1,1,1) - hmm, change this. or change 00:04:463 (1,1,1,1,1) -? choice one?
- 03:07:941 (3) - add one reverse?
- 04:36:637 (1) - ...NC?
Insane
- 00:46:202 (2) - perpect blanket. ex) 00:46:202 (2) - move (144,256) middle point (199,236) tail point (255,254), 00:46:637 (3) - move (201,340)
- 01:54:898 (1) - uh, move another way? (this can be off-screen in 4:3 resolutions.).....maybe?... i don't know.
- 03:51:637 (1) - OMG, It's really pretty! <3
- 04:14:028 (1) - ctrl+g? Too big of a jump lol
RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
[General][Normal]
- Title: "センチメンタルラブ"
- For SB, the image's size more than 800x600 is not rankable? ( from Ranking Criteria )
[Yomi's Hard]
- 00:09:245 (2) - move to x:336 y:132 (blanket correctly)
- 00:11:419 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about regular pentagon?
SPOILER339,139,11419,5,0,1:0:0:0:
255,78,11854,1,0,1:0:0:0:
171,138,12289,1,0,1:1:0:0:
203,237,12724,1,0,1:0:0:0:
307,237,13158,1,4,0:0:0:0:- 00:14:028 (1) - I prefer slider: 00:14:028~00:14:898
- 00:54:028 (1) - move to x:460 y:120 (blanket correctly)
- 01:20:767 (4,1) - DS 0.9x
- 01:56:637 (1) - curve more and blanket correctly
- 02:43:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about regular pentagon?
SPOILER248,184,163593,5,8,0:0:0:0:
193,271,164028,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,246,164463,1,8,0:0:0:0:
85,143,164898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
181,104,165332,2,0,P|264:30|359:75,1,230,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 03:51:637 (1) - start at 03:51:419? No change, spinner start at vocal
- 04:16:637 (5) - move to x:328 y:220 ( make 04:15:332 (2,3,4,5) - symmetric)
- 04:21:854 (5) - make horizontal
- 04:22:724- kiai-time end?
- 04:29:245- clap Nope break inconsistency
[Insane]
- 00:11:202 (5) - I prefer circle at 00:11:202
- 01:51:854- clap
- 03:10:115- ^
- 04:17:941- ^
How great SB is!
- 00:46:202 (2) - blanket 00:46:637 (3) - correctly
- 00:51:419 (3,4,5,6) - it is better to uniform DS
- 01:25:550- i prefer to remove whistle
- 01:25:984- ^
- 01:26:419- ^
- 01:26:854- ^
- 02:06:202 (5,3) - stack slider's heads correctly
- 02:43:811- i prefer to remove whistle
- 02:44:245- ^
- 02:44:680- ^
- 02:45:115- ^
- 03:24:898 (6) - clap? Whistle is here and fits better because of harp~
- 03:28:811 (1) - awkward...
- 03:51:637 (1) - Good~ <3
- 04:05:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - how about uniform DS like this?
SPOILER344,92,245332,5,0,1:0:0:0:
464,295,245550,1,0,1:0:0:0:
281,147,245767,1,0,1:0:0:0:
504,223,245984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,228,246202,1,0,1:0:0:0:
489,143,246419,1,0,1:0:0:0:
311,297,246637,1,0,1:0:0:0:
426,91,246854,1,0,1:0:0:0:
388,324,247071,1,4,0:0:0:0:
Star~☆
~Good Luck~
Losertic wrote:
Yomi's Hard
- 00:19:245 (5,1) - change this? (
only... pass;toomany) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081589- 00:22:724 (3) - change rythem? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081590
these two i think current rhythm is fine- 01:19:680 (5) - remove NC, 01:19:898 (1) - NC? k
- 01:46:202 (1,1,1,1) - ctri+g, like 01:32:289 (1,1,1,1) - ? no,;w;
- 01:56:637 (1) - NC? k
- 02:37:724 (1,2,3,4) - like 01:19:680 (5) nope here
- 02:42:724 (1) - more jump? ummm i think no jump is also fine
- 03:04:463 (1,1,1,1) - hmm, change this. or change 00:04:463 (1,1,1,1,1) -? choice one? no,;w;
- 03:07:941 (3) - add one reverse? k
- 04:36:637 (1) - ...NC? nope
RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
[Yomi's Hard][/list]
- 00:11:202 (5) - I prefer circle at 00:11:202
- 01:51:854- clap
- 03:10:115- ^
- 04:17:941- ^
Is that all the mistakes for now?alacat wrote:
Hi ,Tari
checked lyrics :3
I found there was a mistake in that kanji.
This is the letter which is not usually used by japanese. so please change it like this
6 : いつからか " 溢れる " ようになって
Anyway, really nice SB work Good luck ☆
Edit : please check this green section 00:07:946 - *-*!
From what I heard from the song, I heard only 3 D: Can we confirm to go with 4 or 3? >.<CakiP wrote:
I'm sorry about my mistakes.
But, Thanks alacat san T^T
I found one mistake.
I suggest that you add the Sb maker's name into tags although this is not a mustbmin11 wrote:
I'm so jealous with this SB. Awesome work.
So do I write it as " いつからかようになって"alacart wrote:
I found there was a mistake in that kanji.
This is the letter which is not usually used by japanese. so please change it like this
6 : いつからか " 溢れる " ようになって
Zero__wind wrote:
Yomi's Hard
00:07:941 - 把这条线之前的不管绿线红线全都从S改成SC1,你没觉得sliderslide巨吵么
00:11:202 (5) - 这种1/4 感觉太勉强了 这才刚开始 换成circle [/color] 之前改掉了没传
00:21:854 (1) - 个人认为把这换成2个circle叠在后面头上更适合一个Hard 不好
00:26:202 (3) - 头上好像finish更好些? 没加。。
00:37:071 (5,1) - 我是暂时没看懂你NC怎么加的但是你把这一对儿slider分到2个combo里面实在是莫名 随便啦
00:39:245 (1) - CTRL+G 不知道舒服多少 好棒
00:46:854 (4,1) - 感觉应该互换NC,这不是很工整的一句话么 你节奏也都是一样的 感觉应该在一起,到现在都没看懂你怎么NC的 还不如长白线 随便啦
00:53:593 (1) - 反正我个人不太喜欢Hard里出现这种东西 感觉太勉强 还是个下面没有E的H 00:56:745 (5) - 这还好点儿 这个不改啦
01:00:767 (2) - 头上whistle个? 好
01:25:332 (3) - 第二个折返箭头被01:25:115 (2) - 的hitburst挡了 美丽可以少折返一次然后在它折返点的位置叠一个circle 或者想想别的flow 改掉了
01:51:745 (4,5) - 感觉不如把4去掉让5从4那个时间就起 拖成3/4 slider 漏了白线不好吧
02:11:419 (1,4) - 互换NC?一上来就2个slider一组NC里不是有点太奇怪了?诶呀NC我不想再说了 随便啦
02:32:071 (7) - 头上是不是该clap一下 而且感觉02:31:637 (4,5,6) - 和02:32:506 (1) - 之类的狂丢鼓音 音效是tari加的,老实说没怎么研究
02:43:593 (4) - 这个倒是没有问题不过在前面那个改掉了的基础上我建议可以把这个做相同的处理 不然感觉有点突兀
03:08:811 - 0.0 我以为我的恶俗坏了 咦怎么突然没东西了…… 前面已经改了
03:14:898 (3) - 不finish么
03:23:593 (5) - 倒是这个finish一定是手滑了 去掉了
spinner到03:31:854 - 再结束和Insane统一 break拖到03:32:180 - 再开始[/color] 好
03:49:028 - 加drum clap然后加drum finish 03:49:245 - 好好好
03:54:898 - 这里也最好统一从这里再开始break
04:01:854 (2) - 头上finish呢[/color] 好
04:03:593 (3) - 我觉得这个不适合3/4, 1/2好一些 或者最好你04:03:593 - 单circle后面叠一个1/1 slider 改了
Zero__wind wrote:
Hi, mod from popner's modding team
Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions
GeneralI suggest that you add the Sb maker's name into tags although this is not a mustbmin11 wrote:
I'm so jealous with this SB. Awesome work.
You may consider exchanging your combo color 2 and 3, to split up the two blue colors and that may improve the map's readability at some particular points
About the lyric SB at 03:49:463 - ,I'm just pointing out that it doesn't sounds like a "be" in "I wanna be" , but more like a "feel" or something, but I'm really sorry I don't know what it really should be either, only a reminder here
Insane
Slider tick rate 2 should do, according to your high sv usage
00:00:985 - adjust the red line from S to SC1 cause the default sliderslide sound is too noisy for the first part
00:02:071 (3,3) - maybe add whistles to their ends? too much whistle orz
00:16:202 (4) - a whistle at its end may be nice, and some similar points foloowing, like 00:19:898 - and 00:23:376 - ... you can decide by yourself same as above
00:16:637 (5) - according to your hitsound pattern, I think you missed a drum sample here your right fixed.
00:30:767 (4,5,1) - feeling a bit weird jumping from 5 to 1, not a smooth moving trail ok fixed it, by curving it
00:35:550 (1) - maybe not use clap at its reverse point, only a drum sample, like 00:41:637 (5) - Ok
00:42:506 (1) - drum clap fits better than a drum finish as I suppose, also for points like 00:49:898 - fixed.
00:52:289 (1) - do you need a whistle on head? thanks for spotting my mistake.
00:52:941 (3) - CTRL+G flows better k, but reduce spacing for better blanket pattern.
00:54:463 (7) - and whistle on tail? k
01:04:245 (4) - you seem to need a drum sample here good.
01:03:593 (2) - may try CTRL+G do different change.
and I noticed that, do you need more SC2 finish for the part from 00:50:550 - ? at 00:54:028 - or 00:57:506 - or else, you should make them consistent with your Normal diff yup, but only missed one SC:2 finish
01:11:637 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think the flow is a little awkward when considering the transition from 456 to 781 and I suggest that you try to move in the order like 4->7->6->8->5->1. See the pic below ↓
01:14:245 (6) - without a whistle on head the slider sounds too empty fixed, but decrease volue
01:15:550 (2,3,4,5,6) - I seem to find many points with flow like this, I don't know if this is one of preferrence or something but imo this really don't flow nicely. If you wanna keep the tripple's placement, you'd better try to move 01:16:202 (3) - to somewhere around (416,56) or if you wanna keep 3, then you may try something similar with the below ↓SPOILERokay, your right.[img]puu.sh/5ozzr.jpg[/img]
01:19:028 (2,3,1) - not enough satisfying again, you should know that drawing a small triangle like this isn't a nice way to emphasisi anything. You should really try a big circle jump like ↓
or a crossing-slider jump like ↓ ok, but I want to keep the triangle pattern but I increase spacing to put more emphasis
Yeah you may need to adjust the followig notes' arrangement a bit but I think that's not a big matter and shouldn't stop you improving flows
01:24:245 (2) - missed whistle at end
01:25:332 (5) - maybe NC k
01:28:158 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe you'll need drum samples or lower volume claps to at least show difference here, they're absolutely strong in the music themself
01:35:006 (7) - maybe a drum sample at this point, and similar places not here sorry.
01:41:637 (4) - whistle on head? nope , too noisy and not fitting
01:50:984 (4) - CTRL+G may be interesting, you may want to adjust the slider's shape a bit if you do so alright, CTRL+G and change placement little
01:55:767 (3) - whistle on head?naaah that part is so soft
01:57:941 (5) - this placement is not suitable. Try to moive it to (372,372) to form a better flow k.
02:37:289 (2,3) - try to rotate them clockwise by about 15° in order to make 02:37:941 (3,1) - further away from each other and the 1 would be emphasised better ok
02:45:984 (3) - you should add more drum sound/clap for the stream from this note on did something else previously
03:09:028 (3,4,1) - maybe it's just me but I'd say the flow's a bit weird, considering 1's direction It's pretty fine really probably just slider shaped weird
03:20:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you really need more hitsounds to decorate you streamsw whether with whistles or with drums sounds, they are greatly in need throughout the diff more drums
03:49:028 - drum clap here and drum finish at 03:49:245 -
04:21:202 (5) - missed an important clap here k
and the NC spam at end...lol
Normal
00:00:985 - S->SC1, mentioned in Insane
01:19:898 (3,4) - I would really use straight sliders instead these, it's not a must though No, that'll ruin pattern
03:25:332 (1) - a finish on head fits better
03:54:898 - break should start here, like that iin your Insane
04:01:854 (1) - missed finish on head
Overall you used many more whistles in this diff than Insane and I think plenty of them is nicely arranged thus I hope you could further decorate your Insane with hitsounds
Really, please please please please make this a fantastic mapset like the song and the storyboard
That's all
Good luck and have a star with my best wishes
10crystalmask01 wrote:
http://puu.sh/5qwQh
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\Album3.jpg",320,240or
R,0,7941,,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG1.png",320,240which have totally no effect.
M,0,129680,,320,240
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BG\BG11.jpg",320,240
F,0,28811,29680,0,1
M,0,28811,48705,280,240,352,241
S,0,29680,,0.7334796
F,0,29680,49680,1
M,0,48705,50550,352,241,360,242
F,0,49680,50550,1,0 //change the easing to 2, or keep it as 1, or increase the end value to 0.5
_C,0,1000,5000,240,0,0,120,0,0
Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~ storyboard check for you request
[Storyboard & Skin]Great work!
- Remove the redundant code like
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\Album3.jpg",320,240or
R,0,7941,,0Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG1.png",320,240which have totally no effect. Done
M,0,129680,,320,240- 00:49:680 - the black background appears when you switch bg here. Made the previous bg appear longer until the end of the opactiy animation for the next bg
check out the codeSprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BG\BG11.jpg",320,240
F,0,28811,29680,0,1
M,0,28811,48705,280,240,352,241
S,0,29680,,0.7334796
F,0,29680,49680,1
M,0,48705,50550,352,241,360,242
F,0,49680,50550,1,0 //change the easing to 2, or keep it as 1, or increase the end value to 0.5- 01:14:463 - this section the lyric colour maybe not a good choice i may suggest to add some shining effect. also the kiai section Fixed
- 01:43:158 - the first pulse effect when kiai start is perfect, but i suppose this one could be improved like the prev one Fixed
- 02:10:115 - also black background appears. Fixed
- 03:54:245 - i suppose it's better to fade out the "with you" here , earlier than your current fade out point. Fixed
- 03:55:332 - pulse effect in this section, i'd like to add a colour effect as well to change the colour each time it's pulsed ! Done!~ (First scripting, so except some mistakes easily ._.)
the colour code cannot be generated in editor directly. Instead, you should write them by hand. The syntax is
_C,easing,start_time,end_time,start_RGB,end_RGB
for example_C,0,1000,5000,240,0,0,120,0,0