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Generalbmin11 wrote:
I'm so jealous with this SB. Awesome work.
I suggest that you add the Sb maker's name into tags although this is not a must
You may consider exchanging your combo color 2 and 3, to split up the two blue colors and that may improve the map's readability at some particular points
About the lyric SB at 03:49:463 - ,I'm just pointing out that it doesn't sounds like a "be" in "I wanna be" , but more like a "feel" or something, but I'm really sorry I don't know what it really should be either, only a reminder here
InsaneSlider tick rate 2 should do, according to your high sv usage
00:00:985 - adjust the red line from S to SC1 cause the default sliderslide sound is too noisy for the first part00:02:071 (3,3) - maybe add whistles to their ends?
00:16:202 (4) - a whistle at its end may be nice, and some similar points foloowing, like 00:19:898 - and 00:23:376 - ... you can decide by yourself
00:16:637 (5) - according to your hitsound pattern, I think you missed a drum sample here00:30:767 (4,5,1) - feeling a bit weird jumping from 5 to 1, not a smooth moving trail
00:35:550 (1) - maybe not use clap at its reverse point, only a drum sample, like 00:41:637 (5) -
00:42:506 (1) - drum clap fits better than a drum finish as I suppose, also for points like 00:49:898 -
00:52:289 (1) - do you need a whistle on head?
00:52:941 (3) - CTRL+G flows better
00:54:463 (7) - and whistle on tail?
01:04:245 (4) - you seem to need a drum sample here
01:03:593 (2) - may try CTRL+G
and I noticed that, do you need more SC2 finish for the part from 00:50:550 - ? at 00:54:028 - or 00:57:506 - or else, you should make them consistent with your Normal diff
01:11:637 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think the flow is a little awkward when considering the transition from 456 to 781 and I suggest that you try to move in the order like 4->7->6->8->5->1. See the pic below ↓
01:14:245 (6) - without a whistle on head the slider sounds too empty01:15:550 (2,3,4,5,6) - I seem to find many points with flow like this, I don't know if this is one of preferrence or something but imo this really don't flow nicely. If you wanna keep the tripple's placement, you'd better try to move 01:16:202 (3) - to somewhere around (416,56) or if you wanna keep 3, then you may try something similar with the below ↓
01:19:028 (2,3,1) - not enough satisfying again, you should know that drawing a small triangle like this isn't a nice way to emphasisi anything. You should really try a big circle jump like ↓
or a crossing-slider jump like ↓
Yeah you may need to adjust the followig notes' arrangement a bit but I think that's not a big matter and shouldn't stop you improving flows
01:24:245 (2) - missed whistle at end01:25:332 (5) - maybe NC
01:28:158 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe you'll need drum samples or lower volume claps to at least show difference here, they're absolutely strong in the music themself
01:35:006 (7) - maybe a drum sample at this point, and similar places
01:41:637 (4) - whistle on head?
01:50:984 (4) - CTRL+G may be interesting, you may want to adjust the slider's shape a bit if you do so
01:55:767 (3) - whistle on head?
01:57:941 (5) - this placement is not suitable. Try to moive it to (372,372) to form a better flow02:37:289 (2,3) - try to rotate them clockwise by about 15° in order to make 02:37:941 (3,1) - further away from each other and the 1 would be emphasised better
02:45:984 (3) - you should add more drum sound/clap for the stream from this note on
03:09:028 (3,4,1) - maybe it's just me but I'd say the flow's a bit weird, considering 1's direction
03:20:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you really need more hitsounds to decorate you streamsw whether with whistles or with drums sounds, they are greatly in need throughout the diff
03:49:028 - drum clap here and drum finish at 03:49:245 -
04:21:202 (5) - missed an important clap hereand the NC spam at end...lol
Yomi's Hard00:07:941 - 把这条线之前的不管绿线红线全都从S改成SC1,你没觉得sliderslide巨吵么
00:11:202 (5) - 这种1/4 感觉太勉强了 这才刚开始 换成circle 00:21:854 (1) - 个人认为把这换成2个circle叠在后面头上更适合一个Hard
00:26:202 (3) - 头上好像finish更好些?
00:37:071 (5,1) - 我是暂时没看懂你NC怎么加的但是你把这一对儿slider分到2个combo里面实在是莫名
00:39:245 (1) - CTRL+G 不知道舒服多少00:46:854 (4,1) - 感觉应该互换NC,这不是很工整的一句话么 你节奏也都是一样的 感觉应该在一起,到现在都没看懂你怎么NC的 还不如长白线
00:53:593 (1) - 反正我个人不太喜欢Hard里出现这种东西 感觉太勉强 还是个下面没有E的H 00:56:745 (5) - 这还好点儿
01:00:767 (2) - 头上whistle个?
01:25:332 (3) - 第二个折返箭头被01:25:115 (2) - 的hitburst挡了 美丽可以少折返一次然后在它折返点的位置叠一个circle 或者想想别的flow
01:51:745 (4,5) - 感觉不如把4去掉让5从4那个时间就起 拖成3/4 slider
02:11:419 (1,4) - 互换NC?一上来就2个slider一组NC里不是有点太奇怪了?诶呀NC我不想再说了02:32:071 (7) - 头上是不是该clap一下 而且感觉02:31:637 (4,5,6) - 和02:32:506 (1) - 之类的狂丢鼓音
02:43:593 (4) - 这个倒是没有问题不过在前面那个改掉了的基础上我建议可以把这个做相同的处理 不然感觉有点突兀
03:08:811 - 0.0 我以为我的恶俗坏了 咦怎么突然没东西了……
03:14:898 (3) - 不finish么
03:23:593 (5) - 倒是这个finish一定是手滑了
spinner到03:31:854 - 再结束和Insane统一 break拖到03:32:180 - 再开始03:49:028 - 加drum clap然后加drum finish 03:49:245 -
03:54:898 - 这里也最好统一从这里再开始break
04:01:854 (2) - 头上finish呢04:03:593 (3) - 我觉得这个不适合3/4, 1/2好一些 或者最好你04:03:593 - 单circle后面叠一个1/1 slider
Normal00:00:985 - S->SC1, mentioned in Insane
01:19:898 (3,4) - I would really use straight sliders instead these, it's not a must though
03:25:332 (1) - a finish on head fits better03:54:898 - break should start here, like that iin your Insane
04:01:854 (1) - missed finish on headOverall you used many more whistles in this diff than Insane and I think plenty of them is nicely arranged thus I hope you could further decorate your Insane with hitsounds
Really, please please please please make this a fantastic mapset like the song and the storyboard
That's all
Good luck and have a star with my best wishes