Advanced00:13:988 (3) - I feel like it would be fine to make this start on 00:13:888 - , and then extend the slider to 00:14:388 - . Same thing with 00:15:188 (2,3) - . Of course if you make the changes, adjust the spacing
00:14:588 - I think a circle should be placed here, as 00:16:188 (4) - has a circle as well (unless it was intentional, and here you are only following the special part of the music.) Here it just feels a bit empty/lacking with nothing here
00:16:988 (2,3) - Perhaps you could replace this with a circle and slider. The current way works, but it's awkward to play
00:19:588 (1) - Maybe you could move this a bit so an equilateral triangle forms with the tail of 00:18:788 (4) - , 00:19:388 (5) - , and the head of 00:19:588 (1) - .
00:19:988 (2,3) - and 00:21:588 (2,3) - ^ same thing with changing rhythm
00:32:388 (1) - Here her vocal changes on the red tick, so perhaps you can move the joint to there. The current position of the joint does not really serve any sounding purpose in the song
00:33:188 (3) - Appears somewhat frequently, but maybe you could still find some way to add the clap hitsound in these cases. It sounds really weird not having the claps because of some cool sliders
00:33:988 (1,2) - Similarly, I do not see the need for these two sliders with sharp joints, particularly the sharp joints. Consider just making them curvy.
00:55:358 (2) - I feel like
this would fit better to the music.
01:02:758 (1) - I hear that I triple should be here (add two circles to the head of the slider, maybe :3
01:08:158 (2) - Same thing I mentioned earlier
01:05:958 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - It's kind of clear that you just copied this, but I don't see the reason for making this 01:16:358 (2) - a curvy slider (you probably did it to change things up a bit from the previous 01:02:758 (1,2) - ), because another sharp-jointed slider would be perfect as it would fit the vocals.
01:19:158 (2,3) - Same thing about beat change (although you do it to make things simpler in this easier difficulty, I still feel the different rhythm better suited than this one
(Oh I see how you just copy pasted everything (with ctrl+h?)
01:45:958 (1,2) - Maybe you could fix this overlap without breaking the DS, because it doesn't look intentional
01:47:558 (1) - I think this would be better suited as a reverse slider with the reverse tick on 01:47:858 - . (slider end on 01:48:158 - )
01:50:758 (1) - Move to the right just a bit, the direction the slider points to is not exactly this circle
02:02:758 (3,1) - 3 looks too awkwardly close to 1, and the shape of 3 does not really fit the music. The joint doesn't have a significant emphasis on any instrument, though it looks nice. (not the close placement though)
02:05:158 (1) - Here you finish a nice triangle pattern, but there's no nice cursor flow from 02:04:358 (3) - to 02:05:158 (1) - . A way you may be able to fix this is by changing the positioning of 02:04:358 (3) - .
02:05:558 (2) - Picky, move down a bit :3 Wait that kinda ruins the upcoming blankets about a pixel, so maybe not (unless you move everything down a bit)
02:12:358 (3) - This slider doesn't fit the music at its current joint position. The sharp curve should be at the tick
02:18:758 (3) - Please fix this slider, it currently doesn't really look nice, and cursor flow isn't good, and no patterns are being made with it. The only good thing is a blanket on 02:17:158 (2) - , which I couldn't really see right away because it is a bit late of a blanket.
02:20:358 (3) - Aside from a nice looking slider, the shape literally doesn't fit into anything to look like it should be there
02:21:158 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1) - Maybe decrease HS volume a bit, I can't really even hear the music because of all these finishes xDD
For the next kiai, you've seemed to repeat that twice again, so if you applied anything above to those, do the same here
03:06:658 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This whole end section would be way to aggravating to players who are used to the level of difficulty of the rest of this advanced difficulty. I'm not too sure why this instrumental part has to be so intense (and awfully hard to read). Some examples:
03:06:658 (3,4) - I didn't see you use a slider+circle at all. Right after that, a triple 03:07:358 (5,6,1) -
03:08:258 (3,4,5) - Same thing, except trickier and harder to play/read
03:09:558 (2,3,4) - I don't think three of these connected sliders are fun to get surprised by
03:10:758 (1,2,3) - This seems all mushed up, and to be honest, I don't think I would be able to read this on my first try
03:11:558 (3) - (What is up with the end of the shape of this slider? It's blanketing nothing.. just a copy from 03:10:758 (1) -
03:14:658 (3,4,5,6) - No. lol this is hard af
03:17:158 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Not only hard to read but also a pretty unfamiliar pattern
Overall, very good difficulty~! It's amazing. The only problems I see are the copy pasting of big segments (I guess that's not really a problem, though), and most importantly, that ending segment, after the kiai. It's way too insanely hard.
Good luck :3
edit~
TaikoDon't you have to enable widescreen support since there's a storyboard?
Also, I don't know if there is a way to fix it but since there's another red point here, it has two major ticks in gameplay 00:13:188 (1) -