00:14:288 (14288|0) - Move to either 2 or 3. Most of the synths there don't have that as a minijack, so this is just for consistency.
moved00:25:688 (25688|4,25788|3,25888|4) - Ctrl + H and move 00:25:788 (25788|0) - to 5 for hand balance
it doesn't make a difference between your suggestion and my pattern, but this change doesn't wrong to change too. changed00:27:388 (27388|6) - What's the LN for?
changed to normal note00:37:988 to 00:38:788 - Personally, I think this part stands out a bit too much as we're still just starting off of the song. Also somewhat of a little diff spike because of the chordstreams there. Nerf this a bit?
why need to nerf if it can be readjust to be more comfortable00:38:788 to 00:51:588 - As I said in the General section, this part could use more notes. The chord consistency is also pretty off there, as some of the chords there are single notes later on, even though they warrant enough for a 2-note or 3-note chord.
A combination of 3-note chords as kick and clap or kick and crash and 2-note chords as the kick would work wonders at this part, as it will make this section pretty consistent with the chords.
i wanted to add them, but i feel like it if i just reworked the full 1/4 pattern00:53:158 to 00:59:558 - Again, could use more notes here. Same suggestion as above, but try to follow the sounds here a lot more.
same with before00:59:558 - Add a note on 2 for more impact
added01:01:158 to 01:04:358 - Add a note for every kick that you hear in this part to fully follow most of the sounds heard.
added01:05:958 to 01:12:358 - Same suggestion about consistency in this section. Map in more notes.
i feel more focusing on the snare & 01:15:558 - Add a note here for crash impact
added01:16:358 - Same as above
added01:17:158 to 01:18:758 - 4-note chords during a stream might be a bit much here. Reduce to 3-note chords?
i don't think so01:29:958 (89958|6,90058|6,90258|6,90458|6,90558|6,90758|6,90858|6,91058|6,91258|6,91358|6) - Spread this out more. This is rather uncomfortable to play on the right hand, especially with the notes near the jack section.
arranged01:41:958 - Add a note on 1 for the crash
added01:51:158 (111158|1,111258|1,111358|1) - What are these minijacks for? I don't think this warrants a jack, and it looks out of place for this section.
Same for these ones: 01:52:358 (112358|4,112458|4,112558|4) - and 01:53:558 (113558|5,113658|5,113758|5) -
fixed all01:58:758 to 02:09:958 - This is a good time to add more notes as we're in the Kiai. 3-note chords for the kick/clap/vocal or kick/finish/vocal and 2-note chords for the kick/vocal would be wonderful here as it'll capture the feeling of the song.
working on them02:09:958 to 02:11:558 - This definitely needs more notes here. It feels rather unimpactful without a lot of them present, especially when we're building up to the next Kiai.
As a visual, make it similar to this one at 01:55:558 - .
will added note soon02:11:558 to 02:17:958 - Also another good time to map in more notes. Again, 3-note chords for the kick/clap/vocal or kick/finish/vocal, and 2-note chords for kick/vocal.
changed02:17:958 to 02:21:158 - Add a note for every crash and clap that you can hear here. Also, randomize the notes more for more variety.
added note02:21:158 to 02:22:758 - Make the patterns here to have a better flow with each other for easier playability.
prefer like this02:22:758 to 02:24:358 - Same suggestion as above, but somewhat like this for the best effect:
http://puu.sh/iTPQY/06b2af2e01.png same02:24:358 to 02:30:758 - This section is less dense than 17VA's 7K Hyper, which should be the other way around. Add notes here to show some difficulty progression between diffs.
02:30:658 - Add a note here for the snare.
added02:52:958 - Add a note and 02:53:058 - add a note here for the synth.
added02:59:558 to 03:01:358 - The LNs here seem to be early by 1/4.
removed03:02:758 to 03:04:358 - Music is building up to the chordstreams, so add more notes here.
added03:04:358 to 03:05:958 - This should be like a mirrored version of 02:51:558 to 02:53:158 - to show off some variety here.
i don't really want to change this :/03:11:158 - Add 2 notes here for the kick and clap.
added03:15:558 to 03:18:658 - I think this ending isn't really impactful enough. There's a mappable 1/4 stream there which suits the ending and it'll give a better feeling off of it. Add a 1/4 stream in between, but be sure to avoid any minijacks for maximum comfortability.
i think it doesn't really needed, but i added full 1/4 at the end part