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General
Naming: There's only a set of diffs for one keymode here, so remove "7K" from the mania difficulties
Spread: The gap between 7K Reika's Maximum and [Shi-Ra]'s 7K Forgotten is pretty wide. Reika's diff only has a few hard parts in there, but the rest of it seems pretty easy compared to them.
Highly suggest you'd make Reika's Maximum a bit more dense in some parts (for example, the ones that only have 1/2 streams with a few chords on it can use more notes), so at least the Star Rating will be more balanced out or at least above 4, and the note count differences aren't that huge.
SVs (for mania diffs only):
01:58:758 to 02:11:558 - A long section for a higher speed change is cool, but it's a little bit much considering this isn't the part of the map that warrants such speed change, yet.
Consider reducing the SV to 1.01x to 1.02x.
02:11:558 to 02:24:358 - This part made my acc go down oop
I'd really recommend slowing the SV down to at least 1.03x to 1.04x. That way, the player will notice the speed change but still have at least enough window to accurately hit.
02:53:158 to 03:05:958 - Doesn't really warrant a speed boost here, other than this one being a pitch higher than the previous Kiai.
Consider reducing the SV to 1.00x.7K
[17VA's 7K Hyper]
[7K Reika's Maximum]
[Shi-Ra's 7K Forgotten Extra]
Well, that's all I have for the map.
Good luck!
Naming: There's only a set of diffs for one keymode here, so remove "7K" from the mania difficulties
Spread: The gap between 7K Reika's Maximum and [Shi-Ra]'s 7K Forgotten is pretty wide. Reika's diff only has a few hard parts in there, but the rest of it seems pretty easy compared to them.
Highly suggest you'd make Reika's Maximum a bit more dense in some parts (for example, the ones that only have 1/2 streams with a few chords on it can use more notes), so at least the Star Rating will be more balanced out or at least above 4, and the note count differences aren't that huge.
SVs (for mania diffs only):
01:58:758 to 02:11:558 - A long section for a higher speed change is cool, but it's a little bit much considering this isn't the part of the map that warrants such speed change, yet.
Consider reducing the SV to 1.01x to 1.02x.
02:11:558 to 02:24:358 - This part made my acc go down oop
I'd really recommend slowing the SV down to at least 1.03x to 1.04x. That way, the player will notice the speed change but still have at least enough window to accurately hit.
02:53:158 to 03:05:958 - Doesn't really warrant a speed boost here, other than this one being a pitch higher than the previous Kiai.
Consider reducing the SV to 1.00x.
7K Column:[]
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[17VA's 7K Hyper]
Mod inside
[]Change the GDer's name to Yooh since he had a name change.
00:13:188 to 00:19:588 - I'm a bit confused with the layering here. On one part, the synth wasn't fully followed, and on the next one, it is.
Fully map the synth here so players can understand what you're layering here.
00:52:788 (52788|5) - Snap LN's end up to 00:53:158 - .
00:53:158 to 00:57:958 - Add a note for every clap heard here for some chord consistency, and to keep things interesting.
01:48:158 (108158|2,108258|6) - The vocal doesn't actually change pitch mid-way, so change this to a 1/2 LN for the vocal.
02:10:558 - Add a note on 5 for the kick
02:10:958 - Same as above, but on 3
02:40:358 - Add a note here for more impact
02:58:458 (178458|4) - I think you misplaced this at 02:58:658 - if you're still following the vocal.
03:05:958 to 03:10:758 - Fully map the synth here, too, at least to be consistent with layering.
00:13:188 to 00:19:588 - I'm a bit confused with the layering here. On one part, the synth wasn't fully followed, and on the next one, it is.
Fully map the synth here so players can understand what you're layering here.
00:52:788 (52788|5) - Snap LN's end up to 00:53:158 - .
00:53:158 to 00:57:958 - Add a note for every clap heard here for some chord consistency, and to keep things interesting.
01:48:158 (108158|2,108258|6) - The vocal doesn't actually change pitch mid-way, so change this to a 1/2 LN for the vocal.
02:10:558 - Add a note on 5 for the kick
02:10:958 - Same as above, but on 3
02:40:358 - Add a note here for more impact
02:58:458 (178458|4) - I think you misplaced this at 02:58:658 - if you're still following the vocal.
03:05:958 to 03:10:758 - Fully map the synth here, too, at least to be consistent with layering.
[7K Reika's Maximum]
Mod inside
[]00:14:288 (14288|0) - Move to either 2 or 3. Most of the synths there don't have that as a minijack, so this is just for consistency.
00:25:688 (25688|4,25788|3,25888|4) - Ctrl + H and move 00:25:788 (25788|0) - to 5 for hand balance
00:27:388 (27388|6) - What's the LN for?
00:37:988 to 00:38:788 - Personally, I think this part stands out a bit too much as we're still just starting off of the song. Also somewhat of a little diff spike because of the chordstreams there. Nerf this a bit?
00:38:788 to 00:51:588 - As I said in the General section, this part could use more notes. The chord consistency is also pretty off there, as some of the chords there are single notes later on, even though they warrant enough for a 2-note or 3-note chord.
A combination of 3-note chords as kick and clap or kick and crash and 2-note chords as the kick would work wonders at this part, as it will make this section pretty consistent with the chords.
00:53:158 to 00:59:558 - Again, could use more notes here. Same suggestion as above, but try to follow the sounds here a lot more.
00:59:558 - Add a note on 2 for more impact
01:01:158 to 01:04:358 - Add a note for every kick that you hear in this part to fully follow most of the sounds heard.
01:05:958 to 01:12:358 - Same suggestion about consistency in this section. Map in more notes.
01:15:558 - Add a note here for crash impact
01:16:358 - Same as above
01:17:158 to 01:18:758 - 4-note chords during a stream might be a bit much here. Reduce to 3-note chords?
01:29:958 (89958|6,90058|6,90258|6,90458|6,90558|6,90758|6,90858|6,91058|6,91258|6,91358|6) - Spread this out more. This is rather uncomfortable to play on the right hand, especially with the notes near the jack section.
01:41:958 - Add a note on 1 for the crash
01:51:158 (111158|1,111258|1,111358|1) - What are these minijacks for? I don't think this warrants a jack, and it looks out of place for this section.
Same for these ones: 01:52:358 (112358|4,112458|4,112558|4) - and 01:53:558 (113558|5,113658|5,113758|5) -
01:58:758 to 02:09:958 - This is a good time to add more notes as we're in the Kiai. 3-note chords for the kick/clap/vocal or kick/finish/vocal and 2-note chords for the kick/vocal would be wonderful here as it'll capture the feeling of the song.
02:09:958 to 02:11:558 - This definitely needs more notes here. It feels rather unimpactful without a lot of them present, especially when we're building up to the next Kiai.
As a visual, make it similar to this one at 01:55:558 - .
02:11:558 to 02:17:958 - Also another good time to map in more notes. Again, 3-note chords for the kick/clap/vocal or kick/finish/vocal, and 2-note chords for kick/vocal.
02:17:958 to 02:21:158 - Add a note for every crash and clap that you can hear here. Also, randomize the notes more for more variety.
02:21:158 to 02:22:758 - Make the patterns here to have a better flow with each other for easier playability.
02:22:758 to 02:24:358 - Same suggestion as above, but somewhat like this for the best effect: http://puu.sh/iTPQY/06b2af2e01.png
02:24:358 to 02:30:758 - This section is less dense than 17VA's 7K Hyper, which should be the other way around. Add notes here to show some difficulty progression between diffs.
02:30:658 - Add a note here for the snare.
02:52:958 - Add a note and 02:53:058 - add a note here for the synth.
02:59:558 to 03:01:358 - The LNs here seem to be early by 1/4.
03:02:758 to 03:04:358 - Music is building up to the chordstreams, so add more notes here.
03:04:358 to 03:05:958 - This should be like a mirrored version of 02:51:558 to 02:53:158 - to show off some variety here.
03:11:158 - Add 2 notes here for the kick and clap.
03:15:558 to 03:18:658 - I think this ending isn't really impactful enough. There's a mappable 1/4 stream there which suits the ending and it'll give a better feeling off of it. Add a 1/4 stream in between, but be sure to avoid any minijacks for maximum comfortability.
00:25:688 (25688|4,25788|3,25888|4) - Ctrl + H and move 00:25:788 (25788|0) - to 5 for hand balance
00:27:388 (27388|6) - What's the LN for?
00:37:988 to 00:38:788 - Personally, I think this part stands out a bit too much as we're still just starting off of the song. Also somewhat of a little diff spike because of the chordstreams there. Nerf this a bit?
00:38:788 to 00:51:588 - As I said in the General section, this part could use more notes. The chord consistency is also pretty off there, as some of the chords there are single notes later on, even though they warrant enough for a 2-note or 3-note chord.
A combination of 3-note chords as kick and clap or kick and crash and 2-note chords as the kick would work wonders at this part, as it will make this section pretty consistent with the chords.
00:53:158 to 00:59:558 - Again, could use more notes here. Same suggestion as above, but try to follow the sounds here a lot more.
00:59:558 - Add a note on 2 for more impact
01:01:158 to 01:04:358 - Add a note for every kick that you hear in this part to fully follow most of the sounds heard.
01:05:958 to 01:12:358 - Same suggestion about consistency in this section. Map in more notes.
01:15:558 - Add a note here for crash impact
01:16:358 - Same as above
01:17:158 to 01:18:758 - 4-note chords during a stream might be a bit much here. Reduce to 3-note chords?
01:29:958 (89958|6,90058|6,90258|6,90458|6,90558|6,90758|6,90858|6,91058|6,91258|6,91358|6) - Spread this out more. This is rather uncomfortable to play on the right hand, especially with the notes near the jack section.
01:41:958 - Add a note on 1 for the crash
01:51:158 (111158|1,111258|1,111358|1) - What are these minijacks for? I don't think this warrants a jack, and it looks out of place for this section.
Same for these ones: 01:52:358 (112358|4,112458|4,112558|4) - and 01:53:558 (113558|5,113658|5,113758|5) -
01:58:758 to 02:09:958 - This is a good time to add more notes as we're in the Kiai. 3-note chords for the kick/clap/vocal or kick/finish/vocal and 2-note chords for the kick/vocal would be wonderful here as it'll capture the feeling of the song.
02:09:958 to 02:11:558 - This definitely needs more notes here. It feels rather unimpactful without a lot of them present, especially when we're building up to the next Kiai.
As a visual, make it similar to this one at 01:55:558 - .
02:11:558 to 02:17:958 - Also another good time to map in more notes. Again, 3-note chords for the kick/clap/vocal or kick/finish/vocal, and 2-note chords for kick/vocal.
02:17:958 to 02:21:158 - Add a note for every crash and clap that you can hear here. Also, randomize the notes more for more variety.
02:21:158 to 02:22:758 - Make the patterns here to have a better flow with each other for easier playability.
02:22:758 to 02:24:358 - Same suggestion as above, but somewhat like this for the best effect: http://puu.sh/iTPQY/06b2af2e01.png
02:24:358 to 02:30:758 - This section is less dense than 17VA's 7K Hyper, which should be the other way around. Add notes here to show some difficulty progression between diffs.
02:30:658 - Add a note here for the snare.
02:52:958 - Add a note and 02:53:058 - add a note here for the synth.
02:59:558 to 03:01:358 - The LNs here seem to be early by 1/4.
03:02:758 to 03:04:358 - Music is building up to the chordstreams, so add more notes here.
03:04:358 to 03:05:958 - This should be like a mirrored version of 02:51:558 to 02:53:158 - to show off some variety here.
03:11:158 - Add 2 notes here for the kick and clap.
03:15:558 to 03:18:658 - I think this ending isn't really impactful enough. There's a mappable 1/4 stream there which suits the ending and it'll give a better feeling off of it. Add a 1/4 stream in between, but be sure to avoid any minijacks for maximum comfortability.
[Shi-Ra's 7K Forgotten Extra]
Mod inside
00:13:158 (13158|2,13158|0,13158|4,13158|6) - Snap the notes up to 00:13:188 - , including 00:12:358 (12358|3) - this LN's end up to the same time. That's when the crash actually happens.
00:14:388 (14388|3,14988|2) - Move both notes one column to the left for easier playability
00:25:088 - Add a note at 5 for the synth
00:27:988 (27988|3) - Move to 5 for easier play
00:28:388 (28388|3) - Move to 3, same reason as above
00:28:788 (28788|4) - Move to 6, same reason
00:32:788 - Make this part have a simple triplet instead of the notes going into the right-hand LNs for easier readability
Somewhat like this: http://puu.sh/iTBzx/c8e6588c4a.png
00:34:588 - Same as above, making the pattern easier to read will make this easier to do. http://puu.sh/iTBDk/3b75fa95ce.png
00:52:788 (52788|1) - Snap LN's end up to 00:53:158 -
00:54:758 (54758|6,55158|3) - Combine these LNs as the synth doesn't actually change its pitch
00:59:958 (59958|4) - Move to 6 for easier play
01:03:558 (63558|2) - Move to 4, same reason as above
01:10:358 (70358|1,70458|3,70558|6) - Rearrange to 2,3,4, same reason
01:13:558 - Add another note here for more impact
01:15:558 (75558|2) - Move to 4 for a more comfortable approach
01:21:358 (81358|3,81958|2) - Ctrl + J. Both for easier play and reading.
01:31:558 (91558|6) - Move to 4 to avoid minijack
02:27:558 (147558|3) - Remove to prevent minijack?
02:47:758 (167758|4,167958|1,168058|2,168158|3) - Move all notes one column to the left for easier play
02:54:158 (174158|6) - Move to either 4 or 5, same reason as above
02:59:258 (179258|4,179358|3,179458|2) - Move all notes one column to the left, same reason.
00:14:388 (14388|3,14988|2) - Move both notes one column to the left for easier playability
00:25:088 - Add a note at 5 for the synth
00:27:988 (27988|3) - Move to 5 for easier play
00:28:388 (28388|3) - Move to 3, same reason as above
00:28:788 (28788|4) - Move to 6, same reason
00:32:788 - Make this part have a simple triplet instead of the notes going into the right-hand LNs for easier readability
Somewhat like this: http://puu.sh/iTBzx/c8e6588c4a.png
00:34:588 - Same as above, making the pattern easier to read will make this easier to do. http://puu.sh/iTBDk/3b75fa95ce.png
00:52:788 (52788|1) - Snap LN's end up to 00:53:158 -
00:54:758 (54758|6,55158|3) - Combine these LNs as the synth doesn't actually change its pitch
00:59:958 (59958|4) - Move to 6 for easier play
01:03:558 (63558|2) - Move to 4, same reason as above
01:10:358 (70358|1,70458|3,70558|6) - Rearrange to 2,3,4, same reason
01:13:558 - Add another note here for more impact
01:15:558 (75558|2) - Move to 4 for a more comfortable approach
01:21:358 (81358|3,81958|2) - Ctrl + J. Both for easier play and reading.
01:31:558 (91558|6) - Move to 4 to avoid minijack
02:27:558 (147558|3) - Remove to prevent minijack?
02:47:758 (167758|4,167958|1,168058|2,168158|3) - Move all notes one column to the left for easier play
02:54:158 (174158|6) - Move to either 4 or 5, same reason as above
02:59:258 (179258|4,179358|3,179458|2) - Move all notes one column to the left, same reason.
Well, that's all I have for the map.
Good luck!