Aya Hirano - Hare Hare Yukai · forum

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Shohei Ohtani 2013-07-24T02:55:10+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, April 17, 2018 at 10:20:31 PM

Artist: Aya Hirano
Title: Hare Hare Yukai
Source: 涼宮ハルヒの憂鬱
Tags: Zero__wind UndeadCapulet jonathanlfj love frostmourne cheesiest reditum frostxE anime the dissapearance of haruhi suzumiya melancholy
BPM: 172
Filesize: 5255kb
Play Time: 03:30
Difficulties Available:

Collab (4.4 stars, 650 notes)
Hard (3.03 stars, 410 notes)
Insane (4.33 stars, 539 notes)
Normal (1.87 stars, 255 notes)

Download: Aya Hirano - Hare Hare Yukai
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Shohei Ohtani 2018-04-18T03:20:56+00:00, edited 55 times in total.

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cheesiest 2013-07-24T03:12:38+00:00

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cheesiest wrote:
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SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: Suzumiya_Haruhi_no_Yuuutsu_-_Hare_Hare_Yukai.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Hare Hare Yukai
TitleUnicode:Hare Hare Yukai
Artist:Hirano Aya
ArtistUnicode:Hirano Aya
Creator:CDFA
Version:Collab
Source:The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya
Tags:Zero__wind Tur00 jonathanlfj love frostmourne cheesiest
BeatmapID:281542
BeatmapSetID:106499

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
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Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2014-06-02T23:39:02+00:00

i finally finished the normal lmao

ottokaji

4 posts

Joined March 2014

ottokaji 2014-06-07T01:25:33+00:00

~~this freaking song though omg~~
(Modding for you M4M thingie)

Normal- Really good! It was a little fast around the second chorus but it wasn't fast enough to throw the entire section of the map out of whack so it was fine imo. ^^ (I really like the map though wow)

Hard- Also fine, I suck at hard maps so I had to play on no-fail (orz) but I saw no problems.

Collab- I feel like it's a little too spaced out and scatter-y throughout, (although I'm not a huge fan of intense maps so that may be a thing for intense maps I don't know?) but the timing is fine. I really like the thing you did with the slider after the chorus, great touch!

I really like the map though.

Good job! (Totally keeping it in my bm library for the normal difficulty >>; )

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2014-06-10T05:23:42+00:00

wtf alive!

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2014-06-10T05:24:08+00:00

HAPPEN

Septembre

196 posts

Joined November 2013

Septembre 2014-09-25T08:44:32+00:00

Not really important but you should add 平野綾 (Hirano Aya) in artist

And add kiai times

(no kudo)

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

JeZag 2014-10-11T22:44:30+00:00

M4M request >w<
Sorry if it doesn't help, I'm noobie

Normal

00:42:157 (1,3) - These should stack if ds is consistent...
01:02:041 (1,2) - Looks awkward... try to do some tilted symmetry?
01:12:506 (3,1) - Pretty sure constant ds for normal? Anyway feel like there is a note missing at 01:12:855
01:14:076 (2,3) - Blanket?
01:41:809 (2) - Redo this slider
01:43:204 (4,1) - Blanket?
01:51:227 (2,1) - Make it so that 01:51:227 (2) tail is blanketed
02:05:180 (4,1) - Blanket?
02:17:389 (1,2) - Looks awkward...
02:28:204 - Again with missing note and increased ds
02:29:424 (2,3) - And ofc fix this blanket a bit
02:52:797 (4,1) - Blanket?
I guess the rawness of this diff can be attributed to its age in the graveyard

Hard

00:14:599 (1,2) - Not a very good blanket
00:14:599 (1,4) - Blanket?
00:15:995 (5) - NC here for less awkward with the short combo after?
00:17:390 (1,2) - Not a very good blanket
00:17:913 (2,3) - ^^^
00:18:436 (3) - Make this into a 1/2 slider to make a note/ slider on 00:18:785?
00:29:599 (3) - Awkward and doesn't fit the music (no notes on 00:29:774 nor 00:30:123)
00:31:169 (6,1) - The looks can be improved
00:33:262 - Note here
00:33:436 - Would recommend a repeating slider here that covers 00:33:698 (4)
00:35:529 (5,6) - Blanket?
00:36:925 (1,2) - ^^^
00:42:157 (1) - 1/2 slider and a note at 00:42:506 seems better (you can make it similar to 00:42:855 (2,3) )
00:48:785 (3) - copy paste 00:48:262 (2) and blanket?
00:51:053 - Missing note and I'd like a note at 00:50:878 instead of tail
00:54:890 - Missing a note
00:56:285- ^^^
01:00:471 (3,4) - Blanket?
01:01:169 (5,6) - ^^^
01:02:739 (3,4) - ^^^
01:04:657 - Missing note
01:14:948 (1,2) - Messy blanket
01:14:948 (1,3) - Stack?
01:17:913 (3,4,5) - Messy; I'd like to see a perfect pentagon going counter clockwise maybe
01:43:029 (6,7) - Messy blanket
01:43:902 (2,3) - ^^^
01:52:971 (3,4) - Make this look better?
02:03:610 (2,3) - Blanket?
02:06:402 - Missing note
02:16:517 (5,6) - Messy blanket
02:30:296 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since this is copy paste, same comments from before
02:45:297 (1,3) - Perfect stack?
02:47:913 - Missing
02:50:704 - ^^^
02:59:948 (3,4) - Blanket?
03:28:204 (1) - Doesn't feel right; map it instead?

Collab

00:15:471 (4,5) - Blanket?
00:15:471 (4,5) - Seems really awkward (spacing) and if you dont reduce the ds, at least make a more neat banket?
00:17:216 - A note here instead of tail fits the music better
00:24:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - /me personally has a dislike towards stuff like this that isn't really jumps but has big ds anyway >.<
00:22:623 (6) - Have this start on 00:22:535 to match lyrics? (and stretch it a bit ofc)
00:36:925 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistencies; seems like 00:36:925 (1,2) is mapped to the base line but 00:38:146 (3,4) is for the lyrics; I would either expect a note at 00:37:797 to match lyrics or a note at 00:38:582 for the bass (tl;dr stick with one instrument?)
00:40:239 - Should be a note here instead of tail?
00:53:146 (10) - I feel that NC should be here, because musical phrase ends at 00:52:971 (9)
00:59:512 (3) - Inconsistencies; why map here when music doesn't support but skip a note on 01:01:954? :<
01:04:483 (3) - Musical phrase starts here so mapping is a bit awkward especially with patterns...
02:07:448 (1,3) - These don't blanket well (looks uneven) and the intersection looks a bit awkward
02:07:448 (1,3) - Make this look better?
These mappers mapped 5x better than how I map now x.x

So tired bc I can't mod right x.x
Good luck ranking!

streeteelf

439 posts

Joined May 2013

streeteelf 2014-10-11T23:52:25+00:00

M4M queue.

Hope it'll be helpful.

[General]

-Try Kiai eg. 00:48:088 - 01:10:413 and later in part like this.

[Normal]

-Check AIMod for mistakes, in Normal for DS too and make it constant.
-01:02:564 - Circle
-01:09:018 (3,4) - Bad looking overlap for me, try maybe:

-02:24:366 (3,4) - ^

-Try not to copy one part and later use the same but with Ctrl+H, it makes map boring.

[Hard]

-00:33:698 (4,1) - Make them parallel
-00:54:105 - Circle (?)
-01:11:809 (3,4) - Blankets each other maybe
-01:46:518 (9) - Blanket
-02:09:454 - Circle
-02:23:843 - ^
-02:27:157 (3,4) - Blankets (?)
-02:45:995 (2) - Correct blanket
-02:56:634 (2) - ^
-02:58:378 (6) - ^
-02:59:948 (3,4) - ^

Sry that I didn't mod Collab, but I'm still learning to mod 1 style, and later I'll be trying Collabs.

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2014-10-12T06:57:40+00:00

cool~ I fixed my part :3
thanks for helpful mod~

code

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433,292,20529,2,0,P|417:236|385:204,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,244,20878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,140,21053,2,0,P|359:116|384:80,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,19,21402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,33,21489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,48,21576,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,168,21838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
490,147,21925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,44,22099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,140,22274,2,0,P|252:138|216:112,1,100
40,20,22623,2,0,P|66:69|61:113,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,179,22884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,179,22971,6,0,P|42:251|100:300,1,150
184,352,23320,2,0,L|280:324,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,324,23843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,200,24018,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,276,24192,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,276,24541,5,2,0:0:0:0:
432,200,24716,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,88,24890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,10,25064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
159,14,25239,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,121,25413,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,292,25588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,359,25762,6,0,P|329:336|368:276,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,177,26111,2,0,P|303:197|273:240,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,345,26460,2,0,B|392:379|444:373,1,100
500,251,26809,1,10,0:0:0:0:
404,76,26983,2,0,L|360:52,1,50
269,12,27157,6,0,P|267:88|316:141,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,166,27506,2,0,P|163:149|132:116,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,268,27855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,200,28029,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,104,28204,1,10,0:0:0:0:
4,268,28378,2,0,L|36:308,1,50
99,348,28553,6,0,P|168:340|220:280,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,207,28902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,368,29076,1,4,0:0:0:0:
328,368,29425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,240,29599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,76,29774,2,0,P|274:49|226:49,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,135,30123,6,0,P|475:108|499:67,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,200,30471,5,2,0:0:0:0:
324,200,30559,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,200,30646,2,0,P|323:253|347:294,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,240,30995,1,10,0:0:0:0:
324,200,31169,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,192,31256,1,8,0:0:0:0:
245,189,31343,6,0,P|169:208|131:265,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,312,31692,2,0,P|81:353|124:365,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,292,32041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,200,32216,2,0,P|350:151|348:104,1,100,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,52,32564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,41,32651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,31,32738,5,2,0:0:0:0:
67,107,33000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
33,86,33087,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,12,33262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,126,33436,2,0,P|146:178|111:201,1,100
217,372,33785,2,0,P|238:320|273:297,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,303,34047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,303,34134,6,0,P|397:244|400:172,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,272,34483,2,0,L|488:344,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,340,35006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,171,35181,1,8,0:0:0:0:
350,303,35355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,368,35529,6,0,P|138:351|112:320,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,186,35878,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,108,36053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,260,36227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,133,36402,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,185,36576,1,8,0:0:0:0:
323,268,36750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
78,186,36925,6,0,P|77:100|140:32,1,179.999994506836,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,110,37797,2,0,P|349:139|358:168,1,59.9999981689454,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,23,38146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
449,127,38320,2,0,B|475:215|423:215|449:303,1,179.999994506836,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,382,39018,1,8,0:0:0:0:
346,277,39192,2,0,P|346:239|351:215,2,59.9999981689454,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,382,39716,6,0,B|311:389|271:351|271:351|204:368,1,179.999994506836,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,368,40413,2,0,P|116:304|156:271,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,157,40936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
44,224,41285,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,367,41634,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,367,41809,5,8,0:0:0:0:
332,216,42070,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,216,42157,2,0,P|364:172|372:128,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,216,42506,6,0,P|286:298|381:300,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,93,43029,2,0,P|358:124|332:216,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,314,43553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,292,43727,6,0,P|140:192|200:120,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,216,44250,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,372,44425,2,0,B|92:364|92:364|108:344|108:344|72:309|55:256|58:214,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,13,44948,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,216,45123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,216,45210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,216,45297,6,0,P|150:209|98:132,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,20,45820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,20,45907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,20,45995,2,0,L|381:64,1,100
252,216,46343,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,64,46518,5,4,0:0:0:0:
12,198,46867,1,4,0:0:0:0:
343,205,47216,1,4,0:0:0:0:
132,282,47390,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Mei 2014-10-12T07:44:14+00:00

hihi

[collab]

zero_wind

00:36:053 (3,4,5,6,7) - try to creatte a polygen pattern here? i mean a pentagon
Picture
00:37:623 (2) - there's a vocal exist on red tick, it would be bettter if not miss this. try this
Picture

raiku
why there is only hitsounded in the beginning(from 00:48:088 to 00:53:669) what happened with the rest o.o
and i think your part is kinda noise. i mean maybe using soft-sampleset will be better
00:59:250 (2) - i suggest NC there
01:05:529 (3,6) - little overlap there

jonathanlfj
01:36:576 i suppose there should have a clap ._. maybe do something to make it feel better(like change the 1/1 slider to a 1/2 repeated slider, add a sliderside.wav

Love
02:21:576 (1) - ctrl+g feels better for me

[hard]

so many unsnapped slider ends ._. check aimod

00:20:006 (7) - there is a very obvious drum sound in 00:20:181, so i would suggest you try this(move the finish on long wihite tick and you can also add clap on the red tick if you like
Picture
00:28:553 (1,3) - add whistle on 1's head and 3's middle? i think that will make it sounds better
00:31:169 (6) - same as before
00:33:698 (4) - a slider from blue tick? i think this is strange.....mostly people start a slider from a white tick or red tick. maybe try this
Picture
00:42:681 i think you missed a vocal there.. maybe try this
Picture

00:48:262 (2,3,4) - maybe you can make 2 blanket for this partern, i mean this

Picture

108,128,48262,2,0,P|72:152|80:276,1,160
144,212,48785,2,0,P|155:288|101:343,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,259,49309,2,0,L|240:312,1,160
308,284,49832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,296,50006,2,0,P|404:252|340:168,1,160

00:53:669 (2,3,4) - this will be more intreresting i think
Picture
00:56:111 (1) - missed vocal in 00:56:285, try this?
Picture
01:01:692 (6,1,2,3) - this part is also weird because missed vocal in 01:02:216, try this?
Picture
01:04:483 (1) - missed vocal there ._.
02:09:017 (2,3,4) - yes same as before,it is more intrersting \:3/
Picture
02:15:819 (3,4,5) - why not make a blanket here
02:45:297 (1,2,3) - this blanket is bad ._.
03:05:093 (3) - clap there is weird, i suggest move on the slider 3
03:15:995 (1,2,3) - use clap instead finish sounds better for me

and the whistles are randomly for me.-. you have many whistles at beginning part but no much in the end. that's strange for me

good luck :3

tutuhaha

3,000 posts

Joined October 2010

tutuhaha 2014-10-12T15:14:04+00:00

...Can you cancel enable countdown ~~it just weird for all map Orz..~~
[Normal]
00:31:343 (5) - nc begin here I think
01:47:390 (3) - end at 01:47:739?
01:48:785 (1) - and then this one should end at 01:49:134
01:50:878 (1,2) - ...weird rhythm
01:52:274 (1) - end at 01:53:623
01:56:634 (4) - ...well, I think there has no rhythm on 01:56:809
01:57:855 (1,1,2,1) - ..you really want use new combo like this?...well...
02:30:645 (3) - maybe NC, I mean, follow what you do on 02:28:553 (1) -
03:15:995 (1) - I dont think there has rhythm on red line too

[Hard]
00:26:285 (2) - move to x132 y104
00:36:576 (7) - x80 y144
00:51:227 (1) - x192 y52
^I just think it is too close...and litter bit congest..
00:53:669 (2,3,4) - ..well, I think this flow is litter bit weird
01:13:204 (2) - move to x432 y204
01:18:262 (5) - ..delete please..there has no rhythm..
02:06:575 (1) - same part，you know <3
03:05:093 (3) - ..delete please
03:16:692 (3) - move to x180 y208

[Collab]
00:53:669 (3) - 00:56:285 (7) - begin here, this kind or weird if you dont add clap /A\
00:59:250 (2) - NC
01:01:954 (x) - note here?
01:04:745 (x) - ^
00:59:250 (2) - 01:10:413 (1) - oh and, if you dont use clap on this part..try to delete all clap on 00:48:088 (1) - 00:53:582 (2) - ..weird
01:36:402 (3) - clap?
01:37:623 (4) - clap in the Middle？
01:48:785 (4) - ^
02:33:262 (2) - clap at the end
~~零翅膀太鬼畜不能多说~~
that's it

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-10-12T21:43:06+00:00

hello

General

I don't think that you need your SB name for your own difficulties in your own beatmap
Having the diff name as Hard / Normal is enough for us to know that you mapped them.

Kiai Time would not be a bad idea if you ask me

Tur00.png should be replaced for Raiku.png.

Artist: 平野綾

Title: ハレ晴レユカイ

Source: Suzumiya Haruhi no Yuuutsu

Tags: add Raiku and remove Tur00

more useful Tags: The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya Collab Collaboration pop jpop 涼宮ハルヒの憂鬱

Normal

Check AImod or AIBat. there is a lot of unsnapped stuff

00:31:343 (5) - new combo
00:33:436 (1) - remove nc
00:36:925 (3) - new combo
00:59:250 (2) - new combo
01:15:297 (3) - new combo
01:48:785 (1) - remove nc
01:59:076 (1) - remove nc
02:00:646 (1) - remove nc
02:14:598 (2) - new combo
02:30:645 (3) - new combo
02:53:669 (1) - remove nc
03:14:599 (1) - remove nc
03:18:436 (6) - new combo
03:19:134 (1) - remove nc
03:21:227 (5) - new combo
03:21:925 (1) - remove nc

01:11:285 (2) - This seems to be copy paste of the next combo (because the rhythm choice only works on the next, imo)
try this: http://puu.sh/c9Vmp/0bad0d1872.jpg or http://puu.sh/c9VNb/d7f1cbdc64.jpg

02:26:633 (2) - Same as above

I think that the last spinner is not that suitable. Would you consider mapping it instead?

Hard

00:16:518 (1) - remove nc
00:22:099 (1) - remove nc
00:34:134 (1) - remove nc
00:35:529 (5) - new combo (or previous note)
00:58:029 (4) - new combo
01:10:064 (6) - new combo
01:10:762 (1) - remove nc
01:31:692 (1) - remove nc
01:32:739 (3) - new combo
01:50:878 (5) - new combo (or previous note)
02:13:377 (4) - new combo
02:25:412 (6) - new combo
02:26:110 (1) - remove nc
03:14:948 (1) - remove nc
03:19:832 (1) - remove nc
03:24:541 (1) - remove nc

03:04:483 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you really want triples, this is how the rhythm should be http://puu.sh/c9ZR0/94d6957000.jpg

I think that the last spinner is not that suitable. Would you consider mapping it instead?

Collab

I don't want to bother 6 mappers about overmapping so i will skip this diff.

Didn't checked hitsounds or settings in any diff because i dont have enough free time

good luck

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2014-11-28T02:47:26+00:00

hi m4m

[general]

a easy fit the set nicely imo, your normal is too hard for newbies with all those stacks, overlaps, multi reversed sliders, composing, etc.
it's supposed to have custom hs? cuz the NC:1 etc greenlines and no custom hs on the song's folder.
i think "ur background sucks".. people'd say that cuz it's not 16:9 and quality is really low i guess, u should ask someone to improve this i suppuse (ringanting(?

[normal]

lots of unsnapped objects according to aimod..u should check that i guess
Aesthetics arent really good, u should take care of atleast the transitions between the objects and make them smoother imo (specially if u dont add a easy). For example, 00:15:297 (2,3) - (3) should be more to the right.. 00:19:309 (4,1) - (1) more to the right.. etc
00:32:564 (7,1,2) - u shall not overlap. plz. Rotate (2) or something maybe
00:33:436 (1) - is it 3/4 repeated even needed? I think just as a 1/1 slider would work much better. cuz the vocals u follow here, are just ignored on severals others places where the vocal is the same.
00:42:506 (2) - this reversed doesnt sound right to me.. try something different like this maybe >http://puu.sh/d89Cc/6a4cc8d154.jpg
00:46:518 (1) - DS pls ?
00:53:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - would be nice if these 3 sliders have the same distance. I mean, "visually" the distance between 2 to 4 is bigger than 4 to 6, something like this i suppuse >https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2286190 (the same with the others chorous)
01:09:018 (3,4) - as i said, transitions can be improved and this one on specific should be improved >< just rotate 4 a bit i guess >http://puu.sh/d89Su/83e0550d55.jpg it has the same effect u want to make but it's easier to read.. there's a bunch of similar cases too
01:13:204 (1) - dat jump tho
01:56:634 (4) - i'd suggest to not curved it that much lol. it doesn't play well most of time
02:00:995 (1,1) - i dont know that much about the spinner recovery time thing, is it fine?
02:28:552 (1) - dat jump.. ctrl g (?
02:52:099 (3) - DS?
From 02:56:460 - ; this part is very tricky imo, mostly cuz the stacks.. u've been using only 1/1 stacks and these 1/2 would make people kill u. In addition, your DS is broken, i thought you were using 1.0 but from there u changed to 0.9 and such. dunno if it's cuz your sliders end arent snapped, anyways u should look at it
03:05:355 (2,3) - anyways, dont stack these ;w; i thought it was almost a rule to not stack sliders tail on normal lol
03:24:192 (1) - move it to 03:23:843 - and add reverse? >http://puu.sh/d8cuM/21694dccf5.jpg to keep more constancy with the others 2 similar parts where there's not such a big gap in blank
00:31:343 (5) - add NC and cancel on 00:34:134 (2) - so it keeps the constancy with the previous combo(? (2-2-3-1 measure)
00:36:925 (3) - Add NC, for the same pattern reason ^ (also will fit the vocals imo as u start nc'ng vocals from that point i guess. Althou i dont know why u just nc vocals all the time instead of sometimes vocals sometimes consistency lol)
01:15:297 (3) - 02:30:645 (3) - maybe add NC?
01:48:785 (1) - cancel NC(?.. constancy? vocals? etc?
01:59:076 (1) - cancel NC? or add to 00:43:902 (3) -
02:00:646 (1) - cancel or add 00:45:297 (5) - i guess
02:50:529 (1,2,3,4,1) - aaaaaaa consistency pls
03:04:832 (1,4) - these NC should be swapped for consistency i guess
still being a weird nc'ng imo

[hard]

00:22:274 (2,4) - would be nice if u stack those tails :3
00:33:698 (4) - same as normal, it's very weird to use a 3/4 slider when ur whole map is 1/2 .-. . Just as a 1/2 slider work perfectly imo
^it's as weird as this lonely jump 00:34:657 (2) - lol
00:42:157 (1,2) - if ur following vocals this part break it; maybe try something like this in that case >http://puu.sh/d8efu/72e0d93615.jpg. same on the others similar part
00:50:529 (7,1) - this part is also a bit weird imo.. maybe add reverse to 00:50:529 (7) - and delete (1) ?
01:18:088 (4,5,6) - i cry everytime ;w; (dont overlap this pplspls)
01:40:936 (7,1) - stack? cuz 00:25:588 (7,1) -
01:48:088 - add note? otherwise check 01:48:262 (3) - DS
01:48:785 (4) - is it just to change a bit the rhythm? otherwise i don't find a good reason to use this
03:05:006 (2,3,4) - random triple? just dont use it if u dont plan to add on others similar places i think ><
03:26:460 (4,1) - the transition between these 2 isn't dat good imo, as u used zig zag thing from 03:25:936 (1) - it'd be nice if u do the same with it, some thing like this or similar i guess >http://puu.sh/d8fg5/eebc989021.jpg
i wont go over NCs as i think they are pretty broken already lol

[collab]

who can play this map with ar 8? lol Higher ar would be nicer as this map has a lot of overlaps, in addition that zero and raiku used a lot of jumps (those jumps make the map unbalance tho.. i dunno)
it'd have been much better to use one hitsound style imo.. Raiku used a weird clap pattern while love used the 2-4 thing and cheesiest doesnt have any etc, i dont know about collabs.. aaaaaaa
zero__wind:
00:19:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this part looks pretty odd, i guess it is the auto stack. so stack it manually for better gameplay :3
00:41:809 (1,3) - swap NC?
raiku:
01:18:436 (1) - is this kind of sliders rankable now?lol
NCs are badly placed imo.. and arent even consistent with the rest of the map
jonathan:
01:34:832 (1) - 01:51:576 (1) - 02:02:739 (1) - cancel NC? it's readable enough without it
01:36:925 (5,1) - swap nc cuz constancy etc
love:
02:32:739 (6,1) - swap nc and also cancel on 02:33:611 (1) - ?
frostmourde:
02:34:134 (1,2) - why no triple as u did with 02:39:716 (1,2,3) - and similar
NCs arent consistent sometimes ><
cheesiest:
03:11:111 (4,5) - i was surprised that u didnt intent to do some oval flow or similar o.o. Ur mapping is based on such flow so try to do that on that part, specially cuz the vocals are stronger and u dont jump
03:15:123 (6,7,8) - this part break the rhythm imo, as sliders may work better or even add note on 03:15:646 - (?
03:19:309 (2,2,2) - the same happen on those parts but i guess it's ok.. it's weird cuz the way the rest of the map is mapped.
nc'ing is also broken

i cant really mod insanes lol. especially this, where there are some weird spacing and overmap..
glgl <3

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2015-08-03T02:48:42+00:00

are you fucking serious did the description of this map really become ironic

Anyways, I'm gonna revive this. You know the speed that I get shit ranked, so uhhh. . . yeah.

I barely see Zero__wind, Raiku is only on a little, jonathanlfj is hype, Love still wants nothing to do with me, Frosty is lmao, and cheesiest i don't know if he exists or not its kinda weird

Let's hope nothing terrible goes wrong

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2015-08-03T15:43:46+00:00

I'm still active enough to chech a few mods for a collab diff though

CDFnyA wrote:
Frosty is lmao

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2015-08-04T01:56:47+00:00

wow i dont even remember mapping this LOL
i do want to remap it my 2013 style is kinda meh using standards today

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2015-08-04T04:24:44+00:00

Lmao its a cdfa map who gives a fuck

But youre free to do re-maps and stuff.

I talked with BeatofIke about the spread. Hes like "collab is too hard for current spread"

Ill get more opinions and mor specifics on where the diff spread ossues happen (because im 99% sure cheesiests part isnt too hard, lmao), but yeah

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2015-08-30T09:08:03+00:00

So I made an insane that hopefully should fix spread problems (Maybe some of the jumps in insane are too big, but I can adjust those)

I'm really hoping the normal can stand on its own as a lower diff, but it shouldn't be too hard to make an easy if I need to

This map isn't dying lmao

Toyosaki

102 posts

Joined May 2013

Toyosaki 2015-09-03T06:01:19+00:00

Hi, as requested in my queue!

General

A lot of notes are unsnapped in Normal and Insane diff.

Normal

00:40:413 (3)- Maybe try improve that slider? early tail 84;256, mid tail 172;280, end tail 204;364.
Anyway, the whole diff is looking good, i'll try to figure out.
00:51:576 (2)- Curve it a little bit more?
01:41:809 (2)- Moves south tail to the north?
01:43:902 (1)- Blanket?
03:10:413 (1)- More curved?

Insane

00:37:099- missing a note? here 02:46:518- and also here 01:31:518-
00:42:157 (3)- Less curved? so it have a better blanket with previous slider~ mid tail 296;96, end tail 292;148.
01:18:785 (7)- Stack properly.
03:24:018- Add a note?

Same thing in Collab as in Insane, triple issues, don't know if that's intentional, but it's like you guys just forget to put one more note or something.. Vocally it sounds not good.

Anyway very well mapped, good luck for ranking and.. Yataii!

Akiyama Mizuki

2,710 posts

Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2015-09-05T05:58:54+00:00

Metadata not in Japanese?

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2015-09-05T06:41:00+00:00

Oh shit.

Synpoo

616 posts

Joined August 2013

Synpoo 2015-09-05T11:20:33+00:00

hi based cdfa, as you requested from my q

where da f is the sikh kiai time xd (not that it's needed i'm just wondering why you didn't use kiai)

Insane

AIMod is taking a shit everywhere (unsnapped stuffs)

00:22:274 (7) - NC
00:25:762 (8) - Ok so this might be a subjective opinion but imo the NC should be on this and not 00:26:111 (1) - , I get that with your current comboing it follows when the vocal starts but rhythmically, a NC on 8 would make more sense (especially since it isn't even consistent with 01:41:111 (1,2) - )
00:29:076 (2,5) - Nazi but uh 5 isn't perfectly under the body of 2, but maybe this was intended who knows xd
00:30:995 (10) - FeelsBadMan having this as a repeat instead circles/a triplet finisher, not enough emphasis is provided with this slider
00:37:274 - So this part feels and plays the same as the earlier part despite the tempo (not the correct word i think?? but you know what i mean) slowing down here, possibly the lack of a change in SV which imo is necessary for such a drastic change in pace of the music (same with the other slower parts of this song)
00:38:320 (6) - Why isn't this a 1/1 instead of (7)
00:54:890 - Note pleaasees, there's literally no pause in anything here
01:18:785 (7) - I think you meant to stack this like 02:34:133 (7) - cuz u know, they're flipped... xdddd
01:39:367 (6) - Rather have two circles here, something clickable on the red like you did in the previous section like this
01:39:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Why not use increasing spacing like before? The decrease felt awkward to play as I gained momentum through 1->5 but had to slow down for the rest
01:50:704 - Circle
01:54:541 - ^ (am i missing the reason that you're skipping notable vocals/instruments)
02:03:436 - Jesus did you really just flip the entire first chorus horizontally wtf at least i don't have to mod it then xd
02:26:809 - lol this change in volume scared me, if you're really gonna keep this at least make it consistent with the other similar parts 01:11:460 - 03:20:006
03:03:262 - Circle
03:06:750 (3) - I prefer what you did in the other chorus, have something clickable on the other red tick as well (or you know just move this there and place a 1/2 here)
03:28:204 (1) - Idk man this spinner really doesn't represent the music properly here, but that's just my opinion and if you wanna keep it (since it's a spinner in every diff of yours) that's fine

Hard

Lmao the first thing I did was check if you copy pasted the first chorus and well you did so i'm kinda sad about that but w/e, at least it's consistent through all the diffs! xd xd xd (not a fan of this and seems like complete laziness to me, you might as well have just cut the fkin song if you didn't want to map it all)

00:21:925 - Circle
00:33:088 (3,4) - This is a pretty awkward rhythm esp with that slider on the blue, here's something a lil betta
SPOILER
00:51:053 - Why skip this clear vocal
01:02:216 - This too
01:12:855 (1,2,3) - Equalize the spacing between the bodies
01:18:088 (4,5) - Maybe a 1/2 to better represent the vocals you've been so faithfully mapping
01:37:623 (5,6) - Could be parallel
01:48:088 - wow so disrespectful to mr. downbeat, maybe just give (2) a repeat and do other stuff to fix this somewhat awkward emptiness
01:57:855 (1,2) - Is this overlap intended? Either make it overlap more or split
02:03:436 - Well since it's the same as the first chorus u know what to do if u did it before
02:52:797 (7,10) - This slider blanket is quite off (fk maybe it's intended since a lot of the blankets you make aren't what i personally like aesthetically but this really bothered me xd)
03:03:088 (4,6) - These look dumb as fk together, do something else
03:05:093 (3) - Why's this here

Normal

AIMod is pissed here too

00:40:413 (3) - Plays better as 1/1+circle
00:59:250 (2) - NC
01:12:506 (3,1) - wat the spacing
01:12:855 - 1/2 slider?
02:03:436 - Same stuff u knowww xd ^
02:50:878 (2,3) - Spacing
03:06:402 (4,1) - bleh overlap

so I didn't mod the collab and idk if i should (are the mappers active enough xd) but if you want me to just let me know
gl dad

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2015-09-06T06:07:06+00:00

not gonna mod this again fku apply previous mods u lazy *
k

normal
-00:24:192 (1,2) - flow is really bad and plays bad. do something easier to follow
-00:43:902 (3) - should start from 00:43:727 - or change the rhythm accoring to that, 00:44:425 - same. cymbals>everything. 01:39:541 -
-00:46:518 (1) - 1.0 or riot 01:13:204 (1) -
-00:57:681 (1) - for your easiest diff, it's pretty ugh tbh. same with overlaps that may be missleading like 01:09:018 (3,4) -
-01:15:297 (3) - try http://puu.sh/k1xVE/eb8fd073c4.jpg instead, sounds weird as is cuz the variant rhythms
-01:45:123 (3) - sounds better if i start from 01:45:123 - instead. As you're ignoring the most prominent sound but mapping the softer
-01:52:971 (2,3) - u could overlap less here. looks kinda ugly as is. 02:06:924 (2,3) -
-01:58:727 - this gap is kinda random.. would've better if u mapped this to fill the gap. also 1 object NC is meh
-02:56:460 (1,2) - dont use different kind of stacking at this level. Stick with 1/1 stacking or 1/2 stacking. also 03:05:355 (2,3) - stacking on tail is a nono

hard
-dont use tail for very strong beats or downbeats when u can use better rhythm. ex. 00:42:157 (1) - (here u could just ctrl g 00:42:157 (1,2) - lmao), there are so many plzlol
-01:15:646 - feel really empty by not mapping this;W; as u map the same sound afterwards if awkward that you dont do the same here
-01:46:692 - dun ignore downbeat, 2014-2015 rule

insane
-00:23:669 (12,1) - increase distance xd emphasis is important now bae. 00:42:157 (3,1) - 00:59:250 (1,2) - 01:01:692 (8,1) - etc
-00:29:599 (3,4,5) - flow is kinda bad.. like just follow the cursor and how weird you have to move it due to your slidershape
-00:36:925 (9,1) - ehh polarity thing is really unnatural to play. The sound you're mapping on (1) is really low that should be there for the sake of smooth gameplay
-00:41:809 - weird that you ignore this even tho you map it most of the time
-00:46:692 - random gap... you map it on others diffs so it feels just awkward..
-01:17:041 (4,5,6) - uhm shouldn't this be a slider cuz vocals and also cuz the "fast" part starts from 01:17:390 -
-01:33:960 - 01:34:309 - dont ignore these.. it sounds so bad with the current rhythm
-02:46:518 - vocals start from here actually, not from the blue tick.. not sure why that rhythm choice
-also same comment about tail on strong beats

i dont see the point on modding collab.. like some mappers may want to remap or whatever (are they even alive?).

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2015-09-06T07:28:59+00:00

wtf mod collab like even if the mappers aren't active I'll still update their shit like that's what I've done with literally every collab lmao

I'll update this eventually

Shoga

232 posts

Joined January 2015

Shoga 2016-01-30T17:50:38+00:00

Reditum wrote:
wtf mod collab like even if the mappers aren't active I'll still update their shit like that's what I've done with literally every collab lmao

I'll update this eventually

Plz do. I love this map so much!!
Literally the first map set I download in the game!!

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2018-01-18T08:36:14+00:00

oh shit I didn't give these guys kds oh well.

Also I'm reviving this lmao uhhh literally every collaber quit osu! so uhhh M E M O R I A L M A P or something idk

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2018-01-18T08:40:12+00:00

wth is happening

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2018-01-18T08:40:49+00:00

Rank is happening

Prepare yourself

Love

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Joined August 2010

Love 2018-01-18T18:11:57+00:00

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Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2018-01-22T07:11:03+00:00

i did it finally

Yuuya_ke

251 posts

Joined May 2015

Yuuya_ke 2018-01-22T07:30:20+00:00

is cdfa an acronym

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2018-01-22T23:42:10+00:00

Tryna make my ass think I got a mod lmao checked my e-mail "oh man one more step closer to ranking" and then you post this stuff.

Love

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Love 2018-01-23T06:53:12+00:00

You are one step closer to completing your beatmap!

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2018-01-23T06:53:43+00:00

NICE!

_Epreus

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Joined October 2015

_Epreus 2018-01-23T09:35:14+00:00

Source : 涼宮ハルヒの憂鬱
Song name : ハレ晴レユカイ
Artist : 平野綾

if you need japanese information about this song to insult. i think its needed

insane

00:40:413 (6) - how about stack to 00:39:541 (3) ?

00:54:890 - i would use circle here too. this sound is missing

01:06:053 - ^

01:07:273 (3) - move this circle to another position. it would curse player to miss reading and 01:07:448 (4) - here has pretty strong sound so there should be some distance

01:15:646 - if you are following instrument 01:15:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) . here should be a note too.

01:18:785 (7) - not perfectly stacked to 01:18:262 (5)

01:31:605 (1) - stack to 01:30:646 (4) - its sliderhead for better visuality?

01:39:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here sounds gets more bigger. can you make this jump to get more distance in process of time?

02:22:621 (3) - ^^^^^

collab

00:21:838 (2,3) - how about using triple? I feel like 00:21:750 - this sound is missed

00:33:000 (2,3) - ^

00:44:425 (3) - good idea :3

00:51:925 (5) - try not to use repeat slider here. 00:52:274 - expressing here with sliderend isnt that good idea I think since here has pretty strong sound (and its on while line)

00:57:506 (4) - nc? because you nced on every 3 notes 00:56:460 (1,2,3) - here

01:18:436 (1) - isnt it unrankable? owo..

03:07:099 (4,5,6,7,8) - I would stack one of these notes to 03:06:053 (1) - this. It looks better I guess owo

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2018-01-23T17:14:40+00:00

What do you mean to insult

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2018-01-23T17:22:00+00:00

stop insulting CDFA pls thanks

the ranking process is just a click away

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2018-01-23T23:38:16+00:00

_Epreus wrote:
01:07:273 (3) - move this circle to another position. it would curse player to miss reading and 01:07:448 (4) - here has pretty strong sound so there should be some distance

In a lower diff I'd say yes but insane players hopefully shouldn't suck at stacks lol. I'll get more opinions though.

collab

00:21:838 (2,3) - how about using triple? I feel like 00:21:750 - this sound is missed
00:33:000 (2,3) - ^

There's more of a kick-drum sound here rather than a triple kind of sound, plus you're just coming out of a triple, so variability is pretty cool

00:57:506 (4) - nc? because you nced on every 3 notes 00:56:460 (1,2,3) - here

Technically the grouping isn't even in 3 lmao but it works better with the pattern, as well as not creating TOO many NCs since the next pattern has NCs

If I didn't reply I changed it.

I'm gonna try not to change parts for people who still exist (which essentially is Love and maybe Zero__Wind)

Everyone else I'm going to use my fairest judgement within the style of their mapping (ie. The way that I'll apply mods to Raiku's part is different than cheesiest's part)

UndeadCapulet

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UndeadCapulet 2018-01-30T06:45:22+00:00

chekk:

general
add colours
maybe some kiai as well would be nice

your diffs have entire sections that were copypasted and flipped, which is really dull to play and not seen as rankable by any bn nowadays. please remap the second choruses with arranges that even a little bit differ from the first choruses, i unfortunately can't help you until this happens

collab
use soft normal for lfj's part bc jesus
same for 02:45:297 to 02:54:890 or so
^this applies to all diffs i guess

and maybe tone down the normalwhistle in love's part since the other choruses don't have that much

uh maybe nc the 00:18:611 (6) - , 00:29:774 (6) - sliders since it's the same synth as the next 2 spammed nc's

00:49:134 (5) - remove whistle?

prob nc 00:59:250 (2) - since it's the start of the next hypermeasure, or nc 00:59:599 (4) - since it's kinda the stronger thing there idk

01:03:436 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these squares are a big diffspike compared to the rest of this kiai

01:33:960 (4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1) - all the actual synth beats are on red ticks here, putting the sliderheads on white ticks is a weird clicking rhythm for this part of the song, rly think you should redo this rhythm

mapping the 03:24:018 - beat would be lovely

w/ev

you can call me back after you've fixed your second choruses and i'll come check your diffs again proper, i'd like to help push this forward but my hands are tied atm

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2018-01-31T06:31:14+00:00

Yeah lmfao I'll do that at some point.

It was okay in maps in the past but as I'm sort of getting on people for doing that kind of shit in their current maps, I have to update my maps to match the times.

I've been so god damn busy but I can probably squeeze it in tomorrow

thx 4 moddin tho I'll fix it up asap

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2018-02-01T05:12:39+00:00

before anyone says anything the diff spread doesn't suck lmfao it's essentially equidistant from 1.86 - 3.01 - 4.17 it just looks really huge because the Hard has an extra star because of the .01 lmao

Fixed everything the cap master said except jonathanlfj's part which he was like "ya whatever lmao" and the whistles which he was also like "yeah it's fine"

UndeadCapulet

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UndeadCapulet 2018-02-01T05:33:43+00:00

what year is it

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2018-02-01T05:41:10+00:00

Not necessary to have cdfa in tags, but reditum should be there.

Shohei Ohtani