hihi
[collab]
zero_wind
- 00:36:053 (3,4,5,6,7) - try to creatte a polygen pattern here? i mean a pentagon
- 00:37:623 (2) - there's a vocal exist on red tick, it would be bettter if not miss this. try this
raiku
why there is only hitsounded in the beginning(from 00:48:088 to 00:53:669) what happened with the rest o.o
and i think your part is kinda noise. i mean maybe using soft-sampleset will be better
- 00:59:250 (2) - i suggest NC there
- 01:05:529 (3,6) - little overlap there
jonathanlfj
- 01:36:576 i suppose there should have a clap ._. maybe do something to make it feel better(like change the 1/1 slider to a 1/2 repeated slider, add a sliderside.wav
Love
- 02:21:576 (1) - ctrl+g feels better for me
[hard]
good luck :3
so many unsnapped slider ends ._. check aimod
- 00:20:006 (7) - there is a very obvious drum sound in 00:20:181, so i would suggest you try this(move the finish on long wihite tick and you can also add clap on the red tick if you like
- 00:28:553 (1,3) - add whistle on 1's head and 3's middle? i think that will make it sounds better
- 00:31:169 (6) - same as before
- 00:33:698 (4) - a slider from blue tick? i think this is strange.....mostly people start a slider from a white tick or red tick. maybe try this
- 00:42:681 i think you missed a vocal there.. maybe try this
- 00:48:262 (2,3,4) - maybe you can make 2 blanket for this partern, i mean this
108,128,48262,2,0,P|72:152|80:276,1,160
144,212,48785,2,0,P|155:288|101:343,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,259,49309,2,0,L|240:312,1,160
308,284,49832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,296,50006,2,0,P|404:252|340:168,1,160 - 00:53:669 (2,3,4) - this will be more intreresting i think
- 00:56:111 (1) - missed vocal in 00:56:285, try this?
- 01:01:692 (6,1,2,3) - this part is also weird because missed vocal in 01:02:216, try this?
- 01:04:483 (1) - missed vocal there ._.
- 02:09:017 (2,3,4) - yes same as before,it is more intrersting \:3/
- 02:15:819 (3,4,5) - why not make a blanket here
- 02:45:297 (1,2,3) - this blanket is bad ._.
- 03:05:093 (3) - clap there is weird, i suggest move on the slider 3
- 03:15:995 (1,2,3) - use clap instead finish sounds better for me
and the whistles are randomly for me.-. you have many whistles at beginning part but no much in the end. that's strange for me