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Kuribayashi Minami - unripe hero (TV Size)

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Sarasa
40 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sarasa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月21日 at 22:51:59

Artist: Kuribayashi Minami
Title: unripe hero (TV Size)
Source: BLASSREITER
Tags: ブラスレイター GONZO Nitro+ Urobuchi Gen opening Amamiya Yuko Skystar N_E_K_O NEKO
BPM: 190
Filesize: 15025kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.99 stars, 94 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 394 notes)
  3. N E K O's Hard (4.94 stars, 248 notes)
  4. Normal (4.25 stars, 152 notes)
  5. Skystar (4.99 stars, 384 notes)
Download: Kuribayashi Minami - unripe hero (TV Size)
Download: Kuribayashi Minami - unripe hero (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1
「ブラスレイター」(BLASSREITER) OP2
栗林みな実 - unripe hero
Easy by me
Normal by me
N E K O's Hard by N E K O
Insane by me
Skystar by Akiyama Yuko Amamiya Yuko
Special Thanks to
Strawberry
popner

Modding:
RandomEffect
-Umi-
Zweib
litoluna
gideon5504
yurunneram
Hinsvar
fanzhen0019
sheela901

Star:
fanzhen0019
N E K O
sheela901
Zweib
baldrace
mtbbsben

Guest diffs:
Amamiya Yuko also thanks for hitsounding help :3 阿星什么的最喜欢啦
N E K O
Last edited by Sarasa , edited 27 times in total.
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
Σ(￣。￣ﾉ)ﾉ
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
占楼
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
8-) 囍
RandF
1,249 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
Thank you for your visit to my queue!

[Easy]
  1. For Easy, Slider-Velocity is high, I think
  2. 00:25:494 (1) - end at 00:25:810
  3. 00:26:283 (2,3) - delete notes and add a slider 00:26:125~00:26:599
  4. 00:33:073 (1) - end at 00:33:862
  5. 00:34:336 (2) - end at 00:34:810
  6. 00:46:968- add finish
  7. 01:00:547 (3,1,2,3) - a little dfficult for Easy. How about the following
    SPOILER
  8. 01:10:020- add note
  9. 01:14:125 (3,4) - I suggest the following.
    SPOILER
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:704 (1,2,3) - is it start from 00:00:547 ? I suggest this
    SPOILER
  2. 00:29:441 (6) - end at 00:29:915
[NEKO's Hard]
  1. 00:25:652- add note
[Skystar]
  1. I think NC is a lot outside Kiai-time
  2. At Kiai-Time, Combo colors are indistinguishable. I recommend to change it
  3. 00:01:810 (1,4) - stack correctly
  4. 00:30:152 (4) - it is better to horizontalize the slider
    01:22:968 (2) - this slider looks horrible. it is better to use "Slider velicity multiplier"
[Insane]
  1. 00:17:283 (1) - this slider looks horrible. it is better to use "Slider velicity multiplier"
  2. 00:19:494 (1,2,3) - it is better to increase DS
  3. 00:39:231 (5,6) - stack correctly
  4. 00:46:968 (3) - end at 00:47:599
  5. 01:23:283 (1) - it is better to increase DS. For example, this note move to x:267 y:362
~Good Luck~
Sarasa
40 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sarasa

RandomEffect wrote:

Thank you for your visit to my queue!

[Easy]
  1. For Easy, Slider-Velocity is high, I think It's ok imo cuz a lot of easy diffs use 1.00SV...
  2. 00:25:494 (1) - end at 00:25:810 fixed
  3. 00:26:283 (2,3) - delete notes and add a slider 00:26:125~00:26:599 fixed
  4. 00:33:073 (1) - end at 00:33:862 fixed
  5. 00:34:336 (2) - end at 00:34:810 fixed
  6. 00:46:968- add finish added
  7. 01:00:547 (3,1,2,3) - a little dfficult for Easy. How about the following wow that's good :) changed
    SPOILER
  8. 01:10:020- add note made 2 a slider
  9. 01:14:125 (3,4) - I suggest the following. fixed
    SPOILER
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:704 (1,2,3) - is it start from 00:00:547 ? I suggest this well I think the current one fits the music better...
    SPOILER
  2. 00:29:441 (6) - end at 00:29:915 fixed
[Insane]
  1. 00:17:283 (1) - this slider looks horrible. it is better to use "Slider velicity multiplier" made a symmetry
  2. 00:19:494 (1,2,3) - it is better to increase DS I made this intentionally and I think it's cool and readable
  3. 00:39:231 (5,6) - stack correctly fixed
  4. 00:46:968 (3) - end at 00:47:599 fixed
  5. 01:23:283 (1) - it is better to increase DS. For example, this note move to x:267 y:362 moved to the end of the previous stream and I think it looks fine :)
~Good Luck~
thx for mod!
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi
hi hi from my queue :3

let'su go !

General

- Inconsistent combo color in Skystar diff.

Easy

- 00:00:704 (1,2,3) - what about this ?
SPOILER
- 00:05:599 (1) - delete one reverse, it could be confused for new players, add a note instead.
- 00:09:389 (3) - move the end point to x:264,y:336 and then ..
- 00:10:652 (1) - stack with 00:08:757 (2) -
- 00:20:441 (1,1) - same reason as 00:05:599 (1) -
- 00:33:073 (1) - this shape is it intentional ?
SPOILER
- 00:48:547 (2,3) - something like that ?
SPOILER
- 00:52:968 (1) - you know why :)
- 01:03:073 (1,2,3) - better
SPOILER
- 01:20:757 (2) - make a curve
SPOILER

Normal

- 00:03:862 (3) - hard to read move somewhere else
- 00:41:283 (2,3,4) - same here change the pattern
- 01:18:704 (5) - remove finish

NEKO's Hard

- 00:01:968 (2,4) - put them at the middle of (1) end (3)
- 00:28:020 (5) - move to x:408,y:44
- 00:32:757 (5) - ^ x:432,y:368
- 00:56:441 (2) - same as 00:01:968 (2,4)

Insane

- 00:02:283 (3,4,5) - put them on the same position or more spaced
- 00:43:810 (1,2,3,4) - make a lozenge
SPOILER
- 01:17:757 (1,2,3,4) - better to make 2 reverse slider instead.
- 01:15:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - like that ?
SPOILER

Skystar

- 00:01:810 (1,2,4,5) - i think it's better to stack perfectly
- 00:28:178 (11,7) - stack ?
- 01:22:968 (2) - same as random effect said this slide pretty horrible '-' maybe search for another shape

that's all, poor mod sorry, but good mapset :3 good luck ! ;)
Sarasa
40 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sarasa

-Umi- wrote:

hi hi from my queue :3

let'su go !

Easy

- 00:00:704 (1,2,3) - what about this ? fixed
SPOILER
- 00:05:599 (1) - delete one reverse, it could be confused for new players, add a note instead. fixed
- 00:09:389 (3) - move the end point to x:264,y:336 and then ..
- 00:10:652 (1) - stack with 00:08:757 (2) - fixed
- 00:20:441 (1,1) - same reason as 00:05:599 (1) - fixed
- 00:33:073 (1) - this shape is it intentional ? fixed
SPOILER
- 00:48:547 (2,3) - something like that ? fixed
SPOILER
- 00:52:968 (1) - you know why :) yes xD redone this part and i think it looks fine now
- 01:03:073 (1,2,3) - better fixed
SPOILER
- 01:20:757 (2) - make a curve fixed
SPOILER

Normal

- 00:03:862 (3) - hard to read move somewhere else fixed
- 00:41:283 (2,3,4) - same here change the pattern fixed
- 01:18:704 (5) - remove finish fixed

Insane

- 00:02:283 (3,4,5) - put them on the same position or more spaced made each one 2 grids more spaced
- 00:43:810 (1,2,3,4) - make a lozenge fixed
SPOILER
- 01:17:757 (1,2,3,4) - better to make 2 reverse slider instead. well i think the current one is more fun
- 01:15:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - like that ? fixed
SPOILER

that's all, poor mod sorry, but good mapset :3 good luck ! ;)
thank you! :3
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib
Blue = highly recommended
Black = Personal suggestions

[Easy]
00:26:125 (2,3) - AImod写这里有个spacing
00:33:073 (1,2) - 这里拆成一个note + 1 slider怎么样？跟后面一句对的上
SPOILER
00:48:547 (2) - 据说进kiai时候的note要NC，我不是很确定
总体上看很多note下在红线上，节奏比较稀疏（按vocal下节奏好像挺难打的orz），音效也没办法加全。不如前面就不要加clap了，只给kiai段24clap? slider跨过的2/4白线都可以用slidertick替代clap音效。

[Normal]
不清楚音效是故意这样做的还是有遗漏啊ww我随便写一点凑字数了
00:54:704 (5) - 尾巴clap
00:55:810 (7) - ^
00:48:547 (2) - 同easy

[N E K O's Hard]
00:24:704 (1) - remove NC?
00:58:968 (1) - ^
01:08:757 (2) - 据说进kiai时候的note要NC，我不是很确定
01:10:336 (1) - remove NC
01:26:915 (2) - 尾巴clap?
01:28:652 (9) - ^

[Skystar]
基本没什么好说的orz
打了一下就觉得这两个地方不怎么舒服
(spacing上看是先减速再加速再减速= =)
00:30:862 (1,1,2) -
00:38:441 (1,1,2,3,4) -

[Insane]
上次更新好像多了点nazi出来，比如
00:32:599 (1) - (333,307)
00:32:757 (2) - (243,272)应该不要紧吧 :?

00:58:652 (5) - 一样的是否NC的问题
00:55:810 (6) - clap？
00:46:968 (3) - 这个slider不够舒展，可能会被吐槽w

好吧我就是来骗kudos的!
Sarasa
40 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sarasa

Zweib wrote:

Blue = highly recommended
Black = Personal suggestions

[Easy]
00:26:125 (2,3) - AImod写这里有个spacing 咦为啥会这样。。改了
00:33:073 (1,2) - 这里拆成一个note + 1 slider怎么样？跟后面一句对的上 改了
SPOILER
00:48:547 (2) - 据说进kiai时候的note要NC，我不是很确定 管他是不是改了再说xD
总体上看很多note下在红线上，节奏比较稀疏（按vocal下节奏好像挺难打的orz），音效也没办法加全。不如前面就不要加clap了，只给kiai段24clap? slider跨过的2/4白线都可以用slidertick替代clap音效。去掉了几个clap，听着还行。。就这样吧。

[Normal]
不清楚音效是故意这样做的还是有遗漏啊ww我随便写一点凑字数了
00:54:704 (5) - 尾巴clap 咦为啥会漏。。加了
00:55:810 (7) - ^ ^
00:48:547 (2) - 同easy 改了

[Insane]
上次更新好像多了点nazi出来，比如
00:32:599 (1) - (333,307) 这个不知道为啥改了后退出再进edit又变成原来的了，不管了
00:32:757 (2) - (243,272)应该不要紧吧 :? 改了

00:58:652 (5) - 一样的是否NC的问题 的确NC好点，改了
00:55:810 (6) - clap？ 为啥又漏了。。改了
00:46:968 (3) - 这个slider不够舒展，可能会被吐槽w 这个形状故意的，和主角脸上那个伤口形状颜色一样，我的三个diff都有。。先放着吧

好吧我就是来骗kudos的!
为啥都是点莫名其妙的弱智失误这都能骗kd感谢自慰棒哥哥！
Last edited by Sarasa , edited 1 time in total.
litoluna
1,074 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna
hi~
sorry i'm poor english
[Easy]
  1. 00:40:652 (1) - remove note　reason: near the 00:38:125 (1) -
    距離が近いので間隔を広くした方がいいと思うからです。
  2. 00:03:992 (3,4,5) - Maybe something like that?
    SPOILER
  3. 01:21:389 (3) - reverse?
    should refer to　Rankedmap
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:494 (1) - Maybe something like that?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:28:652 (4,5) - stack
  3. 00:51:073 (7) - NC
  4. 00:58:652 - not snap green line(KIAI TIME)

    should refer to　Rankedmap
[N E K O's Hard]
  1. 00:31:810 (2) - remove　whistle
  2. 00:53:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i think this arrangement　difficult for Hard diff
[Skystar]

  • looks so fine
[Insane]
  1. 00:57:862 (1,1,1) - remove NC
  2. 01:08:283 (1,1,1) - ^
Good Luck! :)
Sarasa
40 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sarasa

litoluna wrote:

hi~
sorry i'm poor english
[Easy]
  1. 00:40:652 (1) - remove note　reason: near the 00:38:125 (1) - removed
    距離が近いので間隔を広くした方がいいと思うからです。
  2. 00:03:992 (3,4,5) - Maybe something like that? sorry no idea where it is... mistaken timeline or sth?
    SPOILER
  3. 01:21:389 (3) - reverse? fixed
    should refer to　Rankedmap
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:494 (1) - Maybe something like that? fixed
    SPOILER
  2. 00:28:652 (4,5) - stack maybe will be confusing for new players? just leave it for now
  3. 00:51:073 (7) - NC added
  4. 00:58:652 - not snap green line(KIAI TIME) changed 5 to slider+circle

    should refer to　Rankedmap
[Insane]
  1. 00:57:862 (1,1,1) - remove NC
  2. 01:08:283 (1,1,1) - ^ looks better with NC imo...
Good Luck! :)
thx! :)
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
Mods' reply
SPOILER
RandomEffect‘s mod
[NEKO's Hard]
00:25:652- add note

-Umi-'s mod
[NEKO's Hard]
- 00:01:968 (2,4) - put them at the middle of (1) end (3) ---all right
- 00:28:020 (5) - move to x:408,y:44 ---okay
- 00:32:757 (5) - ^ x:432,y:368 ----fixed
- 00:56:441 (2) - same as 00:01:968 (2,4)---fixed

紫薇棒的谋得
[N E K O's Hard]
00:24:704 (1) - remove NC?
00:58:968 (1) - ^
01:08:757 (2) - 据说进kiai时候的note要NC，我不是很确定
01:10:336 (1) - remove NC
01:26:915 (2) - 尾巴clap?
01:28:652 (9) - ^
--all fixed

litoluna's mod
[N E K O's Hard]
  1. 00:31:810 (2) - remove　whistle
  2. 00:53:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i think this arrangement　difficult for Hard diff
    ---okay,i agree,changed.

code
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 01 - OP theme2_unripe hero (TV size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48231
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:unripe hero (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:unripe hero (TV Size)
Artist:Kuribayashi Minami
ArtistUnicode:栗林みな実
Creator:Totori
Version:N E K O's Hard
Source:BLASSREITER
Tags:ブラスレイター GONZO Nitro+ Urobuchi Gen opening Amamiya Yuko Skystar N_E_K_O NEKO
BeatmapID:266305
BeatmapSetID:97911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.42
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,10852,12428
2,13378,14954
2,15904,17481
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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68757,-90.9090909090909,4,1,1,70,0,1
82652,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 225,151,173
Combo2 : 30,12,248
Combo3 : 176,9,9
Combo4 : 225,225,225

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64,224,26757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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228,72,27389,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,44,27547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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408,44,28020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,184,28336,6,0,P|460:236|412:264,1,113.6,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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264,124,29915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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148,224,30862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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432,368,32757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,33073,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,48073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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76,168,53283,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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76,264,54547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,120,54862,2,0,P|64:120|100:140,1,71
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332,244,58020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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340,276,63704,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,276,64020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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172,180,73494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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228,232,74599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,260,74757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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140,208,76020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,168,82968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,296,83915,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,280,84073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,84231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,332,84389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,212,88020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
Easy:
~01:11:283 (5) - Add one more reverse arrow for beginners to catch the next note on top.
~Nothing more.

Normal:
~00:31:178 (3,4) - Replace them with a slider for Normal diff reasons.
~00:44:915 - Align them instead for Normal diff. --> http://puu.sh/3r27h.jpg
~01:10:652 (4) - NC.Combo exceeds 8.

NEKO'S Hard:
~00:00:704 - Game play doesn't really flow here.I suggest something new and not to follow every single bass sound.We need a steady intro.
~00:26:915 - Add a circle,because you made us single tap a lot and it doesn't feel right here.
~01:14:204 - I suggest a this pattern --> http://puu.sh/3r2lf.jpg because game play doesn't really feel right with one pair of stacked 1/2 beat circles.

Skystar:
~00:05:599 - It's hard to read those till the break,try something less.
~00:19:494 - 00:48:231 - ^It's quite messy here.Save all the fancy stuff for the chorus.
~00:48:547 - Your combo colour is too similar,try another one.
~01:22:968 (2) - NC for velocity change.
~Overall this diff was a bit messy and hard to read,so try something less.

Insane:
~00:11:757 (1,1,1)- Dun stack them together,it's hard to read them as sliders if you cover them up.
~00:31:336 - 00:47:599 - Too much for a bridge,it doesn't sound nice and it's hard to follow ur crazy fast notes.
~00:53:757 - Move the notes above further down for us to read easily.
~00:56:441 - Arrange the circles to side to side pattern,it's too hard to read as it is now.
~Make sure to check the notes being too hard to read.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
EASY

The Slider Velocity is quite high for Easy diff but if you can't change it then it's ok. Though I strongly recommend you to since your map is relatively new.

00:10:652 (1,1,1,1) - I would spread them out if I was you o.o

00:22:494 (3) - This kind of rhythm is hard to hit for easy. I say you change it. 00:25:020 (3) as well

The general difficulty of this diff was too high for easy. Don't trust star diff. A lot of people don't and it's rather inaccurate. Also, approach rate should be lower.

NORMAL

00:10:652 (1,1,1,1) - Same like Easy

HARD

00:54:231 (3) - Flip the head and end?

00:55:494 (7) - Move to x164 y156 then resnap 00:55:810 (8)

Not a bad diff :3

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
http://puu.sh/3uLrA.osu
thanks for modding! <3
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,804 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Hi; modding by Zweib's request.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Easy
  1. 00:29:441 (6) - Add a finish here with a lowered volume? I think it fits well.
  2. 01:18:862 (3,1) - Swap NC? Follows the song better, actually...
  3. 01:27:704 (1) - To be honest, I think this slider is shaped kinda randomly.
>Normal
  1. 00:02:283 (5) - Make this into a 1/2 slider that repeats once instead to follow the sound at 00:02:441? Plays far better that way IMO. Feels weird if you skip that sound.
  2. 00:04:810 (5) - ^
  3. 00:48:547 (1) - This shape also looks kinda random for me, but it should be fine.
  4. 00:57:073 - Finish? I'm sure enough I heard a cymbal sound here.
  5. 01:04:178 (4) - Wouldn't it be better if you end this at 01:04:810 and add a finish there to follow that cymbal?
  6. 01:12:231 (10,1) - Umm, what's with the spacing inconsistency here?
>N E K O's Hard
  1. 00:04:652 (3,4) - Why is the spacing suddenly different here? I find it a bit weird...
  2. 00:06:547 (3) - Suddenly using ~1,1x from here? Why not ~1,0x as usual?
  3. 00:21:389 (3,4) - Combine them into a 1/2 slider that repeats once to follow the vocal more accurately?
  4. 00:23:915 (3) - Move to (216,20) so the design will be neater?
  5. 00:26:915 - I think you should map this spot too, since there's some vocal here that "demands" to be mapped...
  6. 00:29:441 - Finish to follow the instrument?
  7. 00:30:862 (2) - ^
  8. 00:33:389 - ^
  9. 00:37:652 (3) - Remove this since there's nothing on the song itself? And maybe combine 00:37:494 (2,4) into a slider?
  10. 00:44:757 (1,2) - What's with the spacing here? Using 1.0x should be possible, right?
  11. 00:46:968 (3) - Finish?
  12. 00:48:547 - ^
  13. 00:49:810 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ...I don't know what are you following here. The rhythm feels so messed up and awkward to play.
  14. 00:54:231 (3,4) - This rhythm also feels very weird... This should work better.
  15. 01:01:494 (2,3,4) - ^
  16. 01:04:178 (3,4,5) - ...Huh? What's with the spacing again?
  17. 01:12:231 (3,1) - ^
  18. 01:18:862 (5) - Did you forgot to NC this?
  19. 01:25:020 (1,2) - They slightly touch each other.
  20. 01:26:125 (6) - This makes the stream-ish pattern better, IMO.
>Insane
  1. Actually, I think this diff plays really strange because of the objects' rhythm. Most of the objects don't suit well with the song. Probably just me though.
  2. 00:11:757 (1,1,1) - Uh, I don't recommend you to do this. They're just really weird to play.
And I didn't found anything worth mentioning in Skystar, so there you go :P

Good luck on the way 8-)
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
Thanks for mods :3
SPOILER
gideon5504's mod

NEKO'S Hard:
~00:00:704 - Game play doesn't really flow here.I suggest something new and not to

follow every single bass sound.We need a steady intro. ---I don't really follow

what you mean maybe you can send me an forum pm in chinese to discuss about it.
~00:26:915 - Add a circle,because you made us single tap a lot and it doesn't feel

right here. ---kay
~01:14:204 - I suggest a this pattern --> http://puu.sh/3r2lf.jpg because game play

doesn't really feel right with one pair of stacked 1/2 beat circles. ---no,i'll keep my opinion.

yurunneram's mod

HARD

00:54:231 (3) - Flip the head and end? --oops,changed

00:55:494 (7) - Move to x164 y156 then resnap 00:55:810 (8) --kay

Hinsvar's mod
N E K O's Hard
00:04:652 (3,4) - Why is the spacing suddenly different here? I find it a bit weird... ---to avoid the stacking of two sliders' side.

00:06:547 (3) - Suddenly using ~1,1x from here? Why not ~1,0x as usual? --changed

ds
00:21:389 (3,4) - Combine them into a 1/2 slider that repeats once to follow the vocal more accurately? umm,keep my opinion.

00:23:915 (3) - Move to (216,20) so the design will be neater? ---changed
00:26:915 - I think you should map this spot too, since there's some vocal here that "demands" to be mapped... ---kay
00:29:441 - Finish to follow the instrument? --kay

00:30:862 (2) - ^ --kay

00:33:389 - ^ --kay

00:37:652 (3) - Remove this since there's nothing on the song itself? And maybe combine 00:37:494 (2,4) into a slider? --nope it makes me feel like a gap of the flow.maybe see other modder's suggestion.

00:44:757 (1,2) - What's with the spacing here? Using 1.0x should be possible, right? ---changed a little.
00:46:968 (3) - Finish? --kay
00:48:547 - ^ --kay
00:49:810 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ...I don't know what are you following here. The rhythm feels so messed up and awkward to play. i'm following the drum.And i deleted (5) to make a change due to your suggestion.
00:54:231 (3,4) - This rhythm also feels very weird... This should work better. --keep mine.
01:01:494 (2,3,4) - ^--keep mine.
01:04:178 (3,4,5) - ...Huh? What's with the spacing again? --I don't really follow you.
01:12:231 (3,1) - ^ ---fixed
01:18:862 (5) - Did you forgot to NC this? ---fixed
01:25:020 (1,2) - They slightly touch each other. --fixed
01:26:125 (6) - This makes the stream-ish pattern better, IMO. ---changed.
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Title:unripe hero (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:unripe hero (TV Size)
Artist:Kuribayashi Minami
ArtistUnicode:栗林みな実
Creator:Totori
Version:N E K O's Hard
Source:BLASSREITER
Tags:ブラスレイター GONZO Nitro+ Urobuchi Gen opening Amamiya Yuko Skystar N_E_K_O NEKO
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fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
Hi :3 From skystar's req.

General
  • Clear!!

Easy

Hitsounds
  1. 00:52:020 - clap
  2. 00:53:599 (2) - finish
  3. 01:13:810 (2) - finish
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:40:968 (1) - 漏了个New Combo
  2. 01:07:336 - 这根绿线插这里吧01:08:441 -

Normal

Hitsounds
  • 没啥挑的>.>
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:10:020 (5,1) - 间距和前面不一样 虽然没啥不过我建议对齐
    Img
  2. 00:52:652 - 建议此处放个circle加clap
  3. 01:02:757 - 同上
  4. 01:12:862 - ^
  5. 01:07:336 - 绿线和Easy一样的建议

N E K O's Hard

Hitsounds
  1. 00:30:862 (2) - finish
  2. 00:33:389 - finish
  3. 00:35:915 - finish
  4. 00:38:441 - finish
  5. 00:43:494 - finish
  6. 00:54:231 - 这clap挪了放这啊00:54:547 (4) -
  7. 00:58:020 (3) - 建议clap
Arrangement & Design
  • 这间距有点尴尬啊 有的地方没挨着有的地方挨着
  1. 00:24:704 (2,3) - 这两一起挪开 2被1包的太严实啦
  2. 00:36:389 (2,3,4) - 摆成条直线吧
  3. 00:39:073 (3,4) - 碰到啦
  4. 00:44:757 (1,2) - 会怀孕的
  5. 01:04:178 (3,4) - 万一有孩子了怎么办
  6. 01:26:125 (6) - 挪一下顺便重新拉 和前面对上 (x92 y204
    Img

Insane

Hitsounds
  1. 00:57:547 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - 这段clap下这样未尝不可 但是略微平淡了一点 你可以参考一下星神的clap下法
  2. 01:07:968 - clap吧 可以考虑一下01:08:047 - (clap) 放个note叠在01:08:125 (1) - 上面
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:19:494 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 歪了
  2. 00:24:704 (8) - Ctrl+G试试看?
  3. 01:23:283 (1) - 何不放远点

社科院

Hitsounds
  1. 00:19:810 (5) - 用soft finish吧
  2. 00:58:494 (10) - 比较介意这个 感觉clap放slider头部比尾部听着顺
  3. 01:22:178 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这段你愣是一个clap都没放
Arrangement & Design
  • Nothing to point out

Nice.
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
反震's mod
有几个之前的mod已经改过了= =
SPOILER
N E K O's Hard
Hitsounds
  1. 00:30:862 (2) - finish
  2. 00:33:389 - finish
  3. 00:35:915 - finish
  4. 00:38:441 - finish
  5. 00:43:494 - finish
  6. 00:54:231 - 这clap挪了放这啊00:54:547 (4) -
  7. 00:58:020 (3) - 建议clap
---hitsound fixed.
Arrangement & Design
  • 这间距有点尴尬啊 有的地方没挨着有的地方挨着
  1. 00:24:704 (2,3) - 这两一起挪开 2被1包的太严实啦
  2. 00:36:389 (2,3,4) - 摆成条直线吧
  3. 00:39:073 (3,4) - 碰到啦
  4. 00:44:757 (1,2) - 会怀孕的
  5. 01:04:178 (3,4) - 万一有孩子了怎么办
  6. 01:26:125 (6) - 挪一下顺便重新拉 和前面对上 (x92 y204
    Img
    --all fixed
妈蛋看完MOD我觉得我该去新兴医院查查是不是怀了
Thanks for modding.

code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 01 - OP theme2_unripe hero (TV size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48231
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:unripe hero (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:unripe hero (TV Size)
Artist:Kuribayashi Minami
ArtistUnicode:栗林みな実
Creator:Totori
Version:N E K O's Hard
Source:BLASSREITER
Tags:ブラスレイター GONZO Nitro+ Urobuchi Gen opening Amamiya Yuko Skystar N_E_K_O NEKO
BeatmapID:266305
BeatmapSetID:97911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.42
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,10852,12428
2,13378,14954
2,15904,17481
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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336,132,74125,2,0,P|296:156|280:196,1,78.1000023834229,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,232,74441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,232,74599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,260,74757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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92,104,75389,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,80,75704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,208,76020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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420,140,76652,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,40,76968,2,0,L|228:84,1,78.1000023834229
230,82,77283,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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148,212,78231,2,0,P|152:249|136:288,2,78.1000023834229,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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200,144,79494,2,0,L|124:172,1,78.1000023834229
128,172,79810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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212,132,85810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,156,85968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,212,88020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Sarasa
40 posts
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Topic Starter
Sarasa
sorry for the delay... kinda busy these days :(
gideon5504
Easy:
~01:11:283 (5) - Add one more reverse arrow for beginners to catch the next note on top. ok
~Nothing more.

Normal:
~00:31:178 (3,4) - Replace them with a slider for Normal diff reasons. changed
~00:44:915 - Align them instead for Normal diff. --> http://puu.sh/3r27h.jpg not essential i guess?
~01:10:652 (4) - NC.Combo exceeds 8. fixed

Insane:
~00:11:757 (1,1,1)- Dun stack them together,it's hard to read them as sliders if you cover them up. replaced with circles
~00:31:336 - 00:47:599 - Too much for a bridge,it doesn't sound nice and it's hard to follow ur crazy fast notes. uhh... it's fine imo though
~00:53:757 - Move the notes above further down for us to read easily. not that hard to read i guess?
~00:56:441 - Arrange the circles to side to side pattern,it's too hard to read as it is now. same as above
~Make sure to check the notes being too hard to read.
yurunneram
EASY

The Slider Velocity is quite high for Easy diff but if you can't change it then it's ok. Though I strongly recommend you to since your map is relatively new. just leave it for now

00:10:652 (1,1,1,1) - I would spread them out if I was you o.o i think it's ok...

00:22:494 (3) - This kind of rhythm is hard to hit for easy. I say you change it. 00:25:020 (3) as well changed to sliders

The general difficulty of this diff was too high for easy. Don't trust star diff. A lot of people don't and it's rather inaccurate. Also, approach rate should be lower. hmm just leave it for now

NORMAL

00:10:652 (1,1,1,1) - Same like Easy same...
Hinsvar
>Easy
  1. 00:29:441 (6) - Add a finish here with a lowered volume? I think it fits well. ok
  2. 01:18:862 (3,1) - Swap NC? Follows the song better, actually... the current one is better imo...
  3. 01:27:704 (1) - To be honest, I think this slider is shaped kinda randomly. it's intentional... same shape as the scar on hero's face
>Normal
  1. 00:02:283 (5) - Make this into a 1/2 slider that repeats once instead to follow the sound at 00:02:441? Plays far better that way IMO. Feels weird if you skip that sound.
  2. 00:04:810 (5) - ^ all fixed
  3. 00:48:547 (1) - This shape also looks kinda random for me, but it should be fine. same as easy :)
  4. 00:57:073 - Finish? I'm sure enough I heard a cymbal sound here. added
  5. 01:04:178 (4) - Wouldn't it be better if you end this at 01:04:810 and add a finish there to follow that cymbal? fixed
  6. 01:12:231 (10,1) - Umm, what's with the spacing inconsistency here? my fault :(
>Insane
  1. Actually, I think this diff plays really strange because of the objects' rhythm. Most of the objects don't suit well with the song. Probably just me though.
  2. 00:11:757 (1,1,1) - Uh, I don't recommend you to do this. They're just really weird to play. changed to circles
fanzhen0019
General
  • Clear!!

Easy

Hitsounds
  1. 00:52:020 - clap
  2. 00:53:599 (2) - finish
  3. 01:13:810 (2) - finish 都加啦
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:40:968 (1) - 漏了个New Combo 加了
  2. 01:07:336 - 这根绿线插这里吧01:08:441 - 好像kiai必须一致？搞不懂啦

Normal

Hitsounds
  • 没啥挑的>.>
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:10:020 (5,1) - 间距和前面不一样 虽然没啥不过我建议对齐 疏忽了。改了
  2. 00:52:652 - 建议此处放个circle加clap 加circle可能对新手来说略难打，改成slider了
  3. 01:02:757 - 同上 ^
  4. 01:12:862 - ^ ^
  5. 01:07:336 - 绿线和Easy一样的建议 一样搞不懂啦

Insane

Hitsounds
  1. 00:57:547 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - 这段clap下这样未尝不可 但是略微平淡了一点 你可以参考一下星神的clap下法 学不会啊QAQ 先这样吧
  2. 01:07:968 - clap吧 可以考虑一下01:08:047 - (clap) 放个note叠在01:08:125 (1) - 上面 前面的clap加了，后面的估计会不好打吧还是算了。。
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:19:494 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 歪了 改了
  2. 00:24:704 (8) - Ctrl+G试试看? 改了
  3. 01:23:283 (1) - 何不放远点 好的呀
thx all for modding!
Skystar
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Joined May 2011
Skystar

fanzhen0019 wrote:

社科院

Hitsounds
  1. 00:19:810 (5) - 用soft finish吧 h
  2. 00:58:494 (10) - 比较介意这个 感觉clap放slider头部比尾部听着顺 有理 remove了
  3. 01:22:178 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这段你愣是一个clap都没放 h
Arrangement & Design
  • Nothing to point out
http://puu.sh/3E6qI.osu
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
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Joined October 2010
Strawberry
Discussed with the mappers about timing issue (offset +6) and arrangements can be optimized, I deem the map has been ready.

Bubbled~!
Skystar
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Joined May 2011
Skystar
我操
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

我操
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
:o
来射一个
Last edited by Koiyuki , edited 1 time in total.
sammy711
207 posts
Joined November 2012
sammy711
congrtz for bubbled
感觉瞎了
Kinomi
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Joined August 2012
Kinomi
来射射
popner
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2011
popner
Missing video in [N E K O's Hard].

[Insane]
01:08:131 (1,1,1,1) - try ctrl+g to every slider, flows better here

[Skystar]
00:19:500 (2) - NC?
01:08:447 (7,8,1) - a spacing that has never been used in other parts
Sarasa
40 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sarasa

popner wrote:

Missing video in [N E K O's Hard]. omg... my fault, fixed.

[Insane]
01:08:131 (1,1,1,1) - try ctrl+g to every slider, flows better here fixed
thx!
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hi! From my queue~ Sorry for the late mod. Like really....

[General]
- The 2nd kiai time should end at 01:08:131?

[Normal]
00:34:342 (1) - For me, it looks weird with the song. Replace the slider to two circles

[Skystar]
01:22:658 (1) - Move the start of the slider to the down 4 grids

Sorry if it's not enough. Good Luck and star!
Sarasa
40 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sarasa

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~ Sorry for the late mod. Like really....

[General]
- The 2nd kiai time should end at 01:08:131? well the current one fits insane diff better imo...

[Normal]
00:34:342 (1) - For me, it looks weird with the song. Replace the slider to two circles i think it should be fine

Sorry if it's not enough. Good Luck and star!
sorry for no change... still thx for modding!
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
[N E K O's Hard]
00:20:289 (3) - miss once repeat?

Do not make any other change.

Edit: asked skystar to change a NC in his diff.
Sarasa
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Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sarasa

popner wrote:

[N E K O's Hard]
00:20:289 (3) - miss once repeat?

Do not make any other change.
fixed!
popner
osu! Alumni
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popner
Ranked!
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
Wow, Congratz for first ranked! ^^
val0108
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Joined January 2010
val0108
tick rate1 >_>
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Akiyama Yuko <3
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
Gratz!
Kinomi
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Joined August 2012
Kinomi
skystar and totori \o/
sammy711
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Joined November 2012
sammy711
Totori~
Sarasa
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Topic Starter
Sarasa

popner wrote:

Ranked!
/stress 好感动QAQ 感谢！
and thx all!! :3
Love
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Love

val0108 wrote:

tick rate1 >_>
Aqo
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Aqo

val0108 wrote:

tick rate1 >_>
Strawberry
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Strawberry
omgomgomg
12ed12ose
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12ed12ose
can you make an Sad Rain, wish for the star, etc pls? :(
Kisaragi_Shin
Kisaragi_Shin
Good map
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