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Kuribayashi Minami - unripe hero (TV Size)

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Sarasa
40 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sarasa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月21日 at 22:51:59

Artist: Kuribayashi Minami
Title: unripe hero (TV Size)
Source: BLASSREITER
Tags: ブラスレイター GONZO Nitro+ Urobuchi Gen opening Amamiya Yuko Skystar N_E_K_O NEKO
BPM: 190
Filesize: 15025kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.99 stars, 94 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 394 notes)
  3. N E K O's Hard (4.94 stars, 248 notes)
  4. Normal (4.25 stars, 152 notes)
  5. Skystar (4.99 stars, 384 notes)
Download: Kuribayashi Minami - unripe hero (TV Size)
Download: Kuribayashi Minami - unripe hero (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1
「ブラスレイター」(BLASSREITER) OP2
栗林みな実 - unripe hero
Easy by me
Normal by me
N E K O's Hard by N E K O
Insane by me
Skystar by Akiyama Yuko Amamiya Yuko
Special Thanks to
Strawberry
popner

Modding:
RandomEffect
-Umi-
Zweib
litoluna
gideon5504
yurunneram
Hinsvar
fanzhen0019
sheela901

Star:
fanzhen0019
N E K O
sheela901
Zweib
baldrace
mtbbsben

Guest diffs:
Amamiya Yuko also thanks for hitsounding help :3 阿星什么的最喜欢啦
N E K O
Last edited by Sarasa , edited 27 times in total.
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
Σ(￣。￣ﾉ)ﾉ
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
占楼
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
8-) 囍
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
Thank you for your visit to my queue!

[Easy]
  1. For Easy, Slider-Velocity is high, I think
  2. 00:25:494 (1) - end at 00:25:810
  3. 00:26:283 (2,3) - delete notes and add a slider 00:26:125~00:26:599
  4. 00:33:073 (1) - end at 00:33:862
  5. 00:34:336 (2) - end at 00:34:810
  6. 00:46:968- add finish
  7. 01:00:547 (3,1,2,3) - a little dfficult for Easy. How about the following
    SPOILER
  8. 01:10:020- add note
  9. 01:14:125 (3,4) - I suggest the following.
    SPOILER
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:704 (1,2,3) - is it start from 00:00:547 ? I suggest this
    SPOILER
  2. 00:29:441 (6) - end at 00:29:915
[NEKO's Hard]
  1. 00:25:652- add note
[Skystar]
  1. I think NC is a lot outside Kiai-time
  2. At Kiai-Time, Combo colors are indistinguishable. I recommend to change it
  3. 00:01:810 (1,4) - stack correctly
  4. 00:30:152 (4) - it is better to horizontalize the slider
    01:22:968 (2) - this slider looks horrible. it is better to use "Slider velicity multiplier"
[Insane]
  1. 00:17:283 (1) - this slider looks horrible. it is better to use "Slider velicity multiplier"
  2. 00:19:494 (1,2,3) - it is better to increase DS
  3. 00:39:231 (5,6) - stack correctly
  4. 00:46:968 (3) - end at 00:47:599
  5. 01:23:283 (1) - it is better to increase DS. For example, this note move to x:267 y:362
~Good Luck~
Sarasa
40 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sarasa

RandomEffect wrote:

Thank you for your visit to my queue!

[Easy]
  1. For Easy, Slider-Velocity is high, I think It's ok imo cuz a lot of easy diffs use 1.00SV...
  2. 00:25:494 (1) - end at 00:25:810 fixed
  3. 00:26:283 (2,3) - delete notes and add a slider 00:26:125~00:26:599 fixed
  4. 00:33:073 (1) - end at 00:33:862 fixed
  5. 00:34:336 (2) - end at 00:34:810 fixed
  6. 00:46:968- add finish added
  7. 01:00:547 (3,1,2,3) - a little dfficult for Easy. How about the following wow that's good :) changed
    SPOILER
  8. 01:10:020- add note made 2 a slider
  9. 01:14:125 (3,4) - I suggest the following. fixed
    SPOILER
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:704 (1,2,3) - is it start from 00:00:547 ? I suggest this well I think the current one fits the music better...
    SPOILER
  2. 00:29:441 (6) - end at 00:29:915 fixed
[Insane]
  1. 00:17:283 (1) - this slider looks horrible. it is better to use "Slider velicity multiplier" made a symmetry
  2. 00:19:494 (1,2,3) - it is better to increase DS I made this intentionally and I think it's cool and readable
  3. 00:39:231 (5,6) - stack correctly fixed
  4. 00:46:968 (3) - end at 00:47:599 fixed
  5. 01:23:283 (1) - it is better to increase DS. For example, this note move to x:267 y:362 moved to the end of the previous stream and I think it looks fine :)
~Good Luck~
thx for mod!
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi
hi hi from my queue :3

let'su go !

General

- Inconsistent combo color in Skystar diff.

Easy

- 00:00:704 (1,2,3) - what about this ?
SPOILER
- 00:05:599 (1) - delete one reverse, it could be confused for new players, add a note instead.
- 00:09:389 (3) - move the end point to x:264,y:336 and then ..
- 00:10:652 (1) - stack with 00:08:757 (2) -
- 00:20:441 (1,1) - same reason as 00:05:599 (1) -
- 00:33:073 (1) - this shape is it intentional ?
SPOILER
- 00:48:547 (2,3) - something like that ?
SPOILER
- 00:52:968 (1) - you know why :)
- 01:03:073 (1,2,3) - better
SPOILER
- 01:20:757 (2) - make a curve
SPOILER

Normal

- 00:03:862 (3) - hard to read move somewhere else
- 00:41:283 (2,3,4) - same here change the pattern
- 01:18:704 (5) - remove finish

NEKO's Hard

- 00:01:968 (2,4) - put them at the middle of (1) end (3)
- 00:28:020 (5) - move to x:408,y:44
- 00:32:757 (5) - ^ x:432,y:368
- 00:56:441 (2) - same as 00:01:968 (2,4)

Insane

- 00:02:283 (3,4,5) - put them on the same position or more spaced
- 00:43:810 (1,2,3,4) - make a lozenge
SPOILER
- 01:17:757 (1,2,3,4) - better to make 2 reverse slider instead.
- 01:15:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - like that ?
SPOILER

Skystar

- 00:01:810 (1,2,4,5) - i think it's better to stack perfectly
- 00:28:178 (11,7) - stack ?
- 01:22:968 (2) - same as random effect said this slide pretty horrible '-' maybe search for another shape

that's all, poor mod sorry, but good mapset :3 good luck ! ;)
Sarasa
40 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sarasa

-Umi- wrote:

hi hi from my queue :3

let'su go !

Easy

- 00:00:704 (1,2,3) - what about this ? fixed
SPOILER
- 00:05:599 (1) - delete one reverse, it could be confused for new players, add a note instead. fixed
- 00:09:389 (3) - move the end point to x:264,y:336 and then ..
- 00:10:652 (1) - stack with 00:08:757 (2) - fixed
- 00:20:441 (1,1) - same reason as 00:05:599 (1) - fixed
- 00:33:073 (1) - this shape is it intentional ? fixed
SPOILER
- 00:48:547 (2,3) - something like that ? fixed
SPOILER
- 00:52:968 (1) - you know why :) yes xD redone this part and i think it looks fine now
- 01:03:073 (1,2,3) - better fixed
SPOILER
- 01:20:757 (2) - make a curve fixed
SPOILER

Normal

- 00:03:862 (3) - hard to read move somewhere else fixed
- 00:41:283 (2,3,4) - same here change the pattern fixed
- 01:18:704 (5) - remove finish fixed

Insane

- 00:02:283 (3,4,5) - put them on the same position or more spaced made each one 2 grids more spaced
- 00:43:810 (1,2,3,4) - make a lozenge fixed
SPOILER
- 01:17:757 (1,2,3,4) - better to make 2 reverse slider instead. well i think the current one is more fun
- 01:15:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - like that ? fixed
SPOILER

that's all, poor mod sorry, but good mapset :3 good luck ! ;)
thank you! :3
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib
Blue = highly recommended
Black = Personal suggestions

[Easy]
00:26:125 (2,3) - AImod写这里有个spacing
00:33:073 (1,2) - 这里拆成一个note + 1 slider怎么样？跟后面一句对的上
SPOILER
00:48:547 (2) - 据说进kiai时候的note要NC，我不是很确定
总体上看很多note下在红线上，节奏比较稀疏（按vocal下节奏好像挺难打的orz），音效也没办法加全。不如前面就不要加clap了，只给kiai段24clap? slider跨过的2/4白线都可以用slidertick替代clap音效。

[Normal]
不清楚音效是故意这样做的还是有遗漏啊ww我随便写一点凑字数了
00:54:704 (5) - 尾巴clap
00:55:810 (7) - ^
00:48:547 (2) - 同easy

[N E K O's Hard]
00:24:704 (1) - remove NC?
00:58:968 (1) - ^
01:08:757 (2) - 据说进kiai时候的note要NC，我不是很确定
01:10:336 (1) - remove NC
01:26:915 (2) - 尾巴clap?
01:28:652 (9) - ^

[Skystar]
基本没什么好说的orz
打了一下就觉得这两个地方不怎么舒服
(spacing上看是先减速再加速再减速= =)
00:30:862 (1,1,2) -
00:38:441 (1,1,2,3,4) -

[Insane]
上次更新好像多了点nazi出来，比如
00:32:599 (1) - (333,307)
00:32:757 (2) - (243,272)应该不要紧吧 :?

00:58:652 (5) - 一样的是否NC的问题
00:55:810 (6) - clap？
00:46:968 (3) - 这个slider不够舒展，可能会被吐槽w

好吧我就是来骗kudos的!
Sarasa
40 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sarasa

Zweib wrote:

Blue = highly recommended
Black = Personal suggestions

[Easy]
00:26:125 (2,3) - AImod写这里有个spacing 咦为啥会这样。。改了
00:33:073 (1,2) - 这里拆成一个note + 1 slider怎么样？跟后面一句对的上 改了
SPOILER
00:48:547 (2) - 据说进kiai时候的note要NC，我不是很确定 管他是不是改了再说xD
总体上看很多note下在红线上，节奏比较稀疏（按vocal下节奏好像挺难打的orz），音效也没办法加全。不如前面就不要加clap了，只给kiai段24clap? slider跨过的2/4白线都可以用slidertick替代clap音效。去掉了几个clap，听着还行。。就这样吧。

[Normal]
不清楚音效是故意这样做的还是有遗漏啊ww我随便写一点凑字数了
00:54:704 (5) - 尾巴clap 咦为啥会漏。。加了
00:55:810 (7) - ^ ^
00:48:547 (2) - 同easy 改了

[Insane]
上次更新好像多了点nazi出来，比如
00:32:599 (1) - (333,307) 这个不知道为啥改了后退出再进edit又变成原来的了，不管了
00:32:757 (2) - (243,272)应该不要紧吧 :? 改了

00:58:652 (5) - 一样的是否NC的问题 的确NC好点，改了
00:55:810 (6) - clap？ 为啥又漏了。。改了
00:46:968 (3) - 这个slider不够舒展，可能会被吐槽w 这个形状故意的，和主角脸上那个伤口形状颜色一样，我的三个diff都有。。先放着吧

好吧我就是来骗kudos的!
为啥都是点莫名其妙的弱智失误这都能骗kd感谢自慰棒哥哥！
Last edited by Sarasa , edited 1 time in total.
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna
hi~
sorry i'm poor english
[Easy]
  1. 00:40:652 (1) - remove note　reason: near the 00:38:125 (1) -
    距離が近いので間隔を広くした方がいいと思うからです。
  2. 00:03:992 (3,4,5) - Maybe something like that?
    SPOILER
  3. 01:21:389 (3) - reverse?
    should refer to　Rankedmap
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:494 (1) - Maybe something like that?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:28:652 (4,5) - stack
  3. 00:51:073 (7) - NC
  4. 00:58:652 - not snap green line(KIAI TIME)

    should refer to　Rankedmap
[N E K O's Hard]
  1. 00:31:810 (2) - remove　whistle
  2. 00:53:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i think this arrangement　difficult for Hard diff
[Skystar]

  • looks so fine
[Insane]
  1. 00:57:862 (1,1,1) - remove NC
  2. 01:08:283 (1,1,1) - ^
Good Luck! :)
Sarasa
40 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sarasa

litoluna wrote:

hi~
sorry i'm poor english
[Easy]
  1. 00:40:652 (1) - remove note　reason: near the 00:38:125 (1) - removed
    距離が近いので間隔を広くした方がいいと思うからです。
  2. 00:03:992 (3,4,5) - Maybe something like that? sorry no idea where it is... mistaken timeline or sth?
    SPOILER
  3. 01:21:389 (3) - reverse? fixed
    should refer to　Rankedmap
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:494 (1) - Maybe something like that? fixed
    SPOILER
  2. 00:28:652 (4,5) - stack maybe will be confusing for new players? just leave it for now
  3. 00:51:073 (7) - NC added
  4. 00:58:652 - not snap green line(KIAI TIME) changed 5 to slider+circle

    should refer to　Rankedmap
[Insane]
  1. 00:57:862 (1,1,1) - remove NC
  2. 01:08:283 (1,1,1) - ^ looks better with NC imo...
Good Luck! :)
thx! :)
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
Mods' reply
SPOILER
RandomEffect‘s mod
[NEKO's Hard]
00:25:652- add note

-Umi-'s mod
[NEKO's Hard]
- 00:01:968 (2,4) - put them at the middle of (1) end (3) ---all right
- 00:28:020 (5) - move to x:408,y:44 ---okay
- 00:32:757 (5) - ^ x:432,y:368 ----fixed
- 00:56:441 (2) - same as 00:01:968 (2,4)---fixed

紫薇棒的谋得
[N E K O's Hard]
00:24:704 (1) - remove NC?
00:58:968 (1) - ^
01:08:757 (2) - 据说进kiai时候的note要NC，我不是很确定
01:10:336 (1) - remove NC
01:26:915 (2) - 尾巴clap?
01:28:652 (9) - ^
--all fixed

litoluna's mod
[N E K O's Hard]
  1. 00:31:810 (2) - remove　whistle
  2. 00:53:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i think this arrangement　difficult for Hard diff
    ---okay,i agree,changed.

code
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 01 - OP theme2_unripe hero (TV size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48231
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:unripe hero (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:unripe hero (TV Size)
Artist:Kuribayashi Minami
ArtistUnicode:栗林みな実
Creator:Totori
Version:N E K O's Hard
Source:BLASSREITER
Tags:ブラスレイター GONZO Nitro+ Urobuchi Gen opening Amamiya Yuko Skystar N_E_K_O NEKO
BeatmapID:266305
BeatmapSetID:97911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.42
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,10852,12428
2,13378,14954
2,15904,17481
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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68757,-90.9090909090909,4,1,1,70,0,1
82652,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 225,151,173
Combo2 : 30,12,248
Combo3 : 176,9,9
Combo4 : 225,225,225

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64,224,26757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,76,27073,6,0,L|164:48,1,71
228,72,27389,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,44,27547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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408,44,28020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,184,28336,6,0,P|460:236|412:264,1,113.6,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,240,28810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,124,29915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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148,224,30862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,184,31178,6,0,P|104:128|168:120,1,142,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,180,31810,2,0,L|360:160,1,71,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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432,368,32757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,33073,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,324,33389,2,0,P|188:288|152:224,1,142,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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232,244,36547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,96,41599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,176,41915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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320,280,42704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,252,44125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,48073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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76,168,53283,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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76,264,54547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,120,54862,2,0,P|64:120|100:140,1,71
48,192,55178,2,0,P|80:208|120:208,1,71,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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228,224,55810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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332,244,57862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,244,58020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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140,148,59599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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340,276,63704,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,276,64020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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100,168,72862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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172,180,73494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,260,73810,6,0,P|340:240|360:200,1,78.1000023834229,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,74125,2,0,P|300:156|284:196,1,78.1000023834229,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,232,74441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,232,74599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,260,74757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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140,208,76020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,81231,12,0,82336,0:0:0:0:
256,104,82652,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,136,82810,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,168,82968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,296,83915,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,280,84073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,84231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,332,84389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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492,192,85020,6,0,P|456:164|448:140,1,71
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264,212,88020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
Easy:
~01:11:283 (5) - Add one more reverse arrow for beginners to catch the next note on top.
~Nothing more.

Normal:
~00:31:178 (3,4) - Replace them with a slider for Normal diff reasons.
~00:44:915 - Align them instead for Normal diff. --> http://puu.sh/3r27h.jpg
~01:10:652 (4) - NC.Combo exceeds 8.

NEKO'S Hard:
~00:00:704 - Game play doesn't really flow here.I suggest something new and not to follow every single bass sound.We need a steady intro.
~00:26:915 - Add a circle,because you made us single tap a lot and it doesn't feel right here.
~01:14:204 - I suggest a this pattern --> http://puu.sh/3r2lf.jpg because game play doesn't really feel right with one pair of stacked 1/2 beat circles.

Skystar:
~00:05:599 - It's hard to read those till the break,try something less.
~00:19:494 - 00:48:231 - ^It's quite messy here.Save all the fancy stuff for the chorus.
~00:48:547 - Your combo colour is too similar,try another one.
~01:22:968 (2) - NC for velocity change.
~Overall this diff was a bit messy and hard to read,so try something less.

Insane:
~00:11:757 (1,1,1)- Dun stack them together,it's hard to read them as sliders if you cover them up.
~00:31:336 - 00:47:599 - Too much for a bridge,it doesn't sound nice and it's hard to follow ur crazy fast notes.
~00:53:757 - Move the notes above further down for us to read easily.
~00:56:441 - Arrange the circles to side to side pattern,it's too hard to read as it is now.
~Make sure to check the notes being too hard to read.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
EASY

The Slider Velocity is quite high for Easy diff but if you can't change it then it's ok. Though I strongly recommend you to since your map is relatively new.

00:10:652 (1,1,1,1) - I would spread them out if I was you o.o

00:22:494 (3) - This kind of rhythm is hard to hit for easy. I say you change it. 00:25:020 (3) as well

The general difficulty of this diff was too high for easy. Don't trust star diff. A lot of people don't and it's rather inaccurate. Also, approach rate should be lower.

NORMAL

00:10:652 (1,1,1,1) - Same like Easy

HARD

00:54:231 (3) - Flip the head and end?

00:55:494 (7) - Move to x164 y156 then resnap 00:55:810 (8)

Not a bad diff :3

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
http://puu.sh/3uLrA.osu
thanks for modding! <3
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,789 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Hi; modding by Zweib's request.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Easy
  1. 00:29:441 (6) - Add a finish here with a lowered volume? I think it fits well.
  2. 01:18:862 (3,1) - Swap NC? Follows the song better, actually...
  3. 01:27:704 (1) - To be honest, I think this slider is shaped kinda randomly.
>Normal
  1. 00:02:283 (5) - Make this into a 1/2 slider that repeats once instead to follow the sound at 00:02:441? Plays far better that way IMO. Feels weird if you skip that sound.
  2. 00:04:810 (5) - ^
  3. 00:48:547 (1) - This shape also looks kinda random for me, but it should be fine.
  4. 00:57:073 - Finish? I'm sure enough I heard a cymbal sound here.
  5. 01:04:178 (4) - Wouldn't it be better if you end this at 01:04:810 and add a finish there to follow that cymbal?
  6. 01:12:231 (10,1) - Umm, what's with the spacing inconsistency here?
>N E K O's Hard
  1. 00:04:652 (3,4) - Why is the spacing suddenly different here? I find it a bit weird...
  2. 00:06:547 (3) - Suddenly using ~1,1x from here? Why not ~1,0x as usual?
  3. 00:21:389 (3,4) - Combine them into a 1/2 slider that repeats once to follow the vocal more accurately?
  4. 00:23:915 (3) - Move to (216,20) so the design will be neater?
  5. 00:26:915 - I think you should map this spot too, since there's some vocal here that "demands" to be mapped...
  6. 00:29:441 - Finish to follow the instrument?
  7. 00:30:862 (2) - ^
  8. 00:33:389 - ^
  9. 00:37:652 (3) - Remove this since there's nothing on the song itself? And maybe combine 00:37:494 (2,4) into a slider?
  10. 00:44:757 (1,2) - What's with the spacing here? Using 1.0x should be possible, right?
  11. 00:46:968 (3) - Finish?
  12. 00:48:547 - ^
  13. 00:49:810 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ...I don't know what are you following here. The rhythm feels so messed up and awkward to play.
  14. 00:54:231 (3,4) - This rhythm also feels very weird... This should work better.
  15. 01:01:494 (2,3,4) - ^
  16. 01:04:178 (3,4,5) - ...Huh? What's with the spacing again?
  17. 01:12:231 (3,1) - ^
  18. 01:18:862 (5) - Did you forgot to NC this?
  19. 01:25:020 (1,2) - They slightly touch each other.
  20. 01:26:125 (6) - This makes the stream-ish pattern better, IMO.
>Insane
  1. Actually, I think this diff plays really strange because of the objects' rhythm. Most of the objects don't suit well with the song. Probably just me though.
  2. 00:11:757 (1,1,1) - Uh, I don't recommend you to do this. They're just really weird to play.
And I didn't found anything worth mentioning in Skystar, so there you go :P

Good luck on the way 8-)
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
Thanks for mods :3
SPOILER
gideon5504's mod

NEKO'S Hard:
~00:00:704 - Game play doesn't really flow here.I suggest something new and not to

follow every single bass sound.We need a steady intro. ---I don't really follow

what you mean maybe you can send me an forum pm in chinese to discuss about it.
~00:26:915 - Add a circle,because you made us single tap a lot and it doesn't feel

right here. ---kay
~01:14:204 - I suggest a this pattern --> http://puu.sh/3r2lf.jpg because game play

doesn't really feel right with one pair of stacked 1/2 beat circles. ---no,i'll keep my opinion.

yurunneram's mod

HARD

00:54:231 (3) - Flip the head and end? --oops,changed

00:55:494 (7) - Move to x164 y156 then resnap 00:55:810 (8) --kay

Hinsvar's mod
N E K O's Hard
00:04:652 (3,4) - Why is the spacing suddenly different here? I find it a bit weird... ---to avoid the stacking of two sliders' side.

00:06:547 (3) - Suddenly using ~1,1x from here? Why not ~1,0x as usual? --changed

ds
00:21:389 (3,4) - Combine them into a 1/2 slider that repeats once to follow the vocal more accurately? umm,keep my opinion.

00:23:915 (3) - Move to (216,20) so the design will be neater? ---changed
00:26:915 - I think you should map this spot too, since there's some vocal here that "demands" to be mapped... ---kay
00:29:441 - Finish to follow the instrument? --kay

00:30:862 (2) - ^ --kay

00:33:389 - ^ --kay

00:37:652 (3) - Remove this since there's nothing on the song itself? And maybe combine 00:37:494 (2,4) into a slider? --nope it makes me feel like a gap of the flow.maybe see other modder's suggestion.

00:44:757 (1,2) - What's with the spacing here? Using 1.0x should be possible, right? ---changed a little.
00:46:968 (3) - Finish? --kay
00:48:547 - ^ --kay
00:49:810 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ...I don't know what are you following here. The rhythm feels so messed up and awkward to play. i'm following the drum.And i deleted (5) to make a change due to your suggestion.
00:54:231 (3,4) - This rhythm also feels very weird... This should work better. --keep mine.
01:01:494 (2,3,4) - ^--keep mine.
01:04:178 (3,4,5) - ...Huh? What's with the spacing again? --I don't really follow you.
01:12:231 (3,1) - ^ ---fixed
01:18:862 (5) - Did you forgot to NC this? ---fixed
01:25:020 (1,2) - They slightly touch each other. --fixed
01:26:125 (6) - This makes the stream-ish pattern better, IMO. ---changed.
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Title:unripe hero (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:unripe hero (TV Size)
Artist:Kuribayashi Minami
ArtistUnicode:栗林みな実
Creator:Totori
Version:N E K O's Hard
Source:BLASSREITER
Tags:ブラスレイター GONZO Nitro+ Urobuchi Gen opening Amamiya Yuko Skystar N_E_K_O NEKO
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fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
Hi :3 From skystar's req.

General
  • Clear!!

Easy

Hitsounds
  1. 00:52:020 - clap
  2. 00:53:599 (2) - finish
  3. 01:13:810 (2) - finish
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:40:968 (1) - 漏了个New Combo
  2. 01:07:336 - 这根绿线插这里吧01:08:441 -

Normal

Hitsounds
  • 没啥挑的>.>
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:10:020 (5,1) - 间距和前面不一样 虽然没啥不过我建议对齐
    Img
  2. 00:52:652 - 建议此处放个circle加clap
  3. 01:02:757 - 同上
  4. 01:12:862 - ^
  5. 01:07:336 - 绿线和Easy一样的建议

N E K O's Hard

Hitsounds
  1. 00:30:862 (2) - finish
  2. 00:33:389 - finish
  3. 00:35:915 - finish
  4. 00:38:441 - finish
  5. 00:43:494 - finish
  6. 00:54:231 - 这clap挪了放这啊00:54:547 (4) -
  7. 00:58:020 (3) - 建议clap
Arrangement & Design
  • 这间距有点尴尬啊 有的地方没挨着有的地方挨着
  1. 00:24:704 (2,3) - 这两一起挪开 2被1包的太严实啦
  2. 00:36:389 (2,3,4) - 摆成条直线吧
  3. 00:39:073 (3,4) - 碰到啦
  4. 00:44:757 (1,2) - 会怀孕的
  5. 01:04:178 (3,4) - 万一有孩子了怎么办
  6. 01:26:125 (6) - 挪一下顺便重新拉 和前面对上 (x92 y204
    Img

Insane

Hitsounds
  1. 00:57:547 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - 这段clap下这样未尝不可 但是略微平淡了一点 你可以参考一下星神的clap下法
  2. 01:07:968 - clap吧 可以考虑一下01:08:047 - (clap) 放个note叠在01:08:125 (1) - 上面
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:19:494 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 歪了
  2. 00:24:704 (8) - Ctrl+G试试看?
  3. 01:23:283 (1) - 何不放远点

社科院

Hitsounds
  1. 00:19:810 (5) - 用soft finish吧
  2. 00:58:494 (10) - 比较介意这个 感觉clap放slider头部比尾部听着顺
  3. 01:22:178 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这段你愣是一个clap都没放
Arrangement & Design
  • Nothing to point out

Nice.
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
反震's mod
有几个之前的mod已经改过了= =
SPOILER
N E K O's Hard
Hitsounds
  1. 00:30:862 (2) - finish
  2. 00:33:389 - finish
  3. 00:35:915 - finish
  4. 00:38:441 - finish
  5. 00:43:494 - finish
  6. 00:54:231 - 这clap挪了放这啊00:54:547 (4) -
  7. 00:58:020 (3) - 建议clap
---hitsound fixed.
Arrangement & Design
  • 这间距有点尴尬啊 有的地方没挨着有的地方挨着
  1. 00:24:704 (2,3) - 这两一起挪开 2被1包的太严实啦
  2. 00:36:389 (2,3,4) - 摆成条直线吧
  3. 00:39:073 (3,4) - 碰到啦
  4. 00:44:757 (1,2) - 会怀孕的
  5. 01:04:178 (3,4) - 万一有孩子了怎么办
  6. 01:26:125 (6) - 挪一下顺便重新拉 和前面对上 (x92 y204
    Img
    --all fixed
妈蛋看完MOD我觉得我该去新兴医院查查是不是怀了
Thanks for modding.

code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 01 - OP theme2_unripe hero (TV size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48231
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:unripe hero (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:unripe hero (TV Size)
Artist:Kuribayashi Minami
ArtistUnicode:栗林みな実
Creator:Totori
Version:N E K O's Hard
Source:BLASSREITER
Tags:ブラスレイター GONZO Nitro+ Urobuchi Gen opening Amamiya Yuko Skystar N_E_K_O NEKO
BeatmapID:266305
BeatmapSetID:97911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.42
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,10852,12428
2,13378,14954
2,15904,17481
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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