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Kugimiya Rie, Horie Yui, Kitamura Eri - Orange -citrus Mix-

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KIA
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 28 октября 2009 г. at 14:47:12

Artist: Kugimiya Rie, Horie Yui, Kitamura Eri
Title: Orange -citrus mix-
Source: Toradora OST
Tags: Toradora Kugimiya Rie Horie Yui Kitamura Eri Orange OST
BPM: 140
Filesize: 16158kb
Play Time: 03:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Grapefruit (4,98 stars, 594 notes)
  2. Lime (4,38 stars, 359 notes)
  3. Mandarin (3,11 stars, 235 notes)
  4. tieff's orange (4,96 stars, 565 notes)
  5. WyndII's Citrus Mix (4,95 stars, 472 notes)
Download: Kugimiya Rie, Horie Yui, Kitamura Eri - Orange -citrus mix-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Orange -citrus mix- (Toradora ED).
Thanks a lot to all who modded my map.
IF YOU DOWNLOADED THIS MAP BEFORE >>28-10-09<<, PLEASE REDOWNLOAD.
Changelog... lost in eternity.
Last edited by KIA , edited 214 times in total.
blissfulyoshi
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I don't see any problems with the timing.
The offset might be slightly off, but I am not an expert once it is so close. You should be fine with it for now.

I guess what you mean by raw template is that the beats are not placed correctly yet and the sliders are not added yet.

The only large problems that I have with your map so far is the lack of new combos in some parts. For example: 01:28:53 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) could have a new combo at 01:29:60 (6), 01:30:46 (10), and 01:34:10 (24) (This last note is placed strangely in the timeline).

The beginning of the song seems to have some of the beats placed already. I am a little afraid about your random jumps because you seem to have many jumps that come randomly inbetween combos. I don't think this is the best way to execute jumps, but this is your song.

Nice start. I look forward to your continuation of your map.
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
hi
i ve check your map
i think u have very inconsistance spacing in some parts. when u place a note, check the timeline to see the distance in time. to make it more playable, cuz in some part turns very confusing.
like for example
01:18:892 (11,12) shouldnt be so close together.

also cut those long combos, maximum 10 imo.. there u have a 26 and 54 notes combo O.O that s too much!

01:02:178 (1,2,3,4,5) this kind of stacks for a normal, is too hard.

02:45:678 this entire combo stack, guess is too confusing

sorry for my bad english..(too lazy to babelfishing right now :P)
good luck!
cya!
KIA
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blissfulyoshi wrote:

I don't see any problems with the timing.
Me too :)

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I guess what you mean by raw template is that the beats are not placed correctly yet and the sliders are not added yet.
Yes, it is.
the lack of new combos
Work in progress :oops:
I am a little afraid about your random jumps
I think that it's not a problem for Osu! players. There is much more diffucult beatmaps.

Nice start. I look forward to your continuation of your map.
Thanks.

Lizbeth wrote:

i think u have very inconsistance spacing in some parts.
I'll try to fix it in future. :roll:
long combos
All combos corrected... Almost.. :|
KIA
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KIA
Someone plz test it. :roll:
Derekku
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*I recommend turning the difficulty/drain up. The notes fade in too slow atm and it get's clustered and confusing.
*Turn hit sounds down.
*ADD hit sounds :?

00:13:15 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Please re-distance this whole section. Spread them out so it's not so confusing.
00:16:20 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Same thing, except some are spread out too far (3,4,5). Keep time-distance the same.
00:20:92 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I recommend making these a straight line. You can barely see how many notes there are how it currently is.
00:54:35 (5,6,7,8) - Gap between 6 and 7. Fix it.
00:57:56 (5,6,7) - Fix spacing.

I stopped here. The whole song needs re-distancing. It gave me a headache while trying to mod because everything is so cluttered and messy. :/

Star'd once this is fixed. Good luck~
KIA
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Whole 1-st minute has been re-mapped :)
:idea:
Now spacing is much better.
PandaCath
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PandaCath
Modded Insane only.
Add hitsounds.
Turn the hitsound volume down a bit.

[Insane]
00:13:207 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6) In 1/8 divisor, move all of these forward one tick on the timeline.
00:20:921 (8) New combo.
00:25:207 (11) ^
00:47:278 (5) You might want to distance snap this, not necessary I guess.
01:14:921 (4) New combo, maybe.
01:17:921 (6) I'm not sure this is an okay jump to do, even in Insane, because it's kind of random. Don't change it yet, get more feedback on this.
01:26:278 (1) (2) These two sound weird, but I guess it's fine.
01:29:278 (4) Distance snap all the way up to 01:32:707.
01:35:064 (5) Distance snap this too.
01:38:921 (7) Maybe a new combo.
01:52:421 (4) This should end at 01:53:278. It's also a bit small and cramped...
02:33:350 (8) Might want to consider a new combo.
02:35:278 (3) This should end at 2:36:350
02:37:207 (5) Ends at 2:38:064. Also consider New Combo here.
02:46:850 (5) Maybe new combo.
02:47:707 (8) ^ (?)
02:49:528 (2) (3) Either add one more beat on :635, or move (3) there.
02:51:778 (4) (5) ^
02:53:064 (1) (2) ^
02:56:492 (3) (4) ^, looks weird how it's positioned
02:59:064 (6) (7) ^, I'm going to stop listing these because there's too many xD
03:26:921 (9) New combo
03:33:778 (9) ^
03:43:850 (x) Add a beat
03:53:707 (1) From here, or maybe a bit back, turn the hitsound volume down or switch to soft instead.
04:40:421 (1) Ends weird, move to 04:42:135 or wherever as long as it doesn't sound weird

Wow, long post is long, sorry :o This is almost 5 minutes long, which is a bit long by mapping standards, plus you have a max score of about 16mil, which is a bit large (Read ranking post here). You might want to think about cutting part of the song off, because 5 minutes is very tiring to play xD unless you have a good reason to map the entire song. I like the map, I'll star it I guess ;) But PLEASE fix this stuff first.
Derekku
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Wow. MUCH better! :)

[Hard]
00:29:06 (1,2,3,4) - I would make these sliders look better. They're kind of ugly right now :/
00:47:27 (5) - Move farther away from (4). Note: Don't forget to fix distance spacing on the notes after this after moving. This goes for every suggestion like this.
01:00:99 (5) - Extend to the next red tick. Note: Don't forget to fix distance spacing on the notes after this after extending the slider. This goes for every suggestion like this.
01:07:42 (1) - Move farther away from the last note.
01:11:06 (7) - I don't like how the slider (8) overlaps this. Maybe move it to the right angling up towards the slider?
01:11:49 (8) - Extend to the white tick.
01:06:13 (2) - Extend to the red tick.
01:07:85 (3) - ^
01:17:92 (6) - Not sure what to say about this jump. It's do-able, but others might bitch about it. :P
01:28:63 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend re-distancing this entire section.
01:41:49 (1) - Move farther away from the last note.
01:42:24 (1) - I recommend having this start on the white tick after the beats before it, and then extending to the red tick afterwards. (Starts on white tick, ends 4 white ticks and 1 red tick after)
01:45:77 (1) - ^
01:49:10 (1) - ^
01:52:42 (4) - Can't tell which way the slider is going. Plus, the note it ends on is awkward and sounds bad. Make the heart shape bigger which will extend the length of it.
02:01:85 (8) - Why is this so far away? :/
02:17:06 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would h-flip this whole section so it doesn't start where the last combo ended.
02:29:49 (1) - Move farther away from the last note and extend to the white tick.
02:33:35 (8) - I usually don't combo mod, but make this a new combo.
02:33:56 (9) - Extend to the red tick.
02:34:85 (1) - Let this continue off the last combo that I said make new.
02:34:85 (1) - Move farther away from the last note.
02:35:27 (3) - Extend to the red tick.
02:36:77 (4) - New combo.
02:37:20 (5) - Move farther from (4).
02:37:20 (5) - Extend to the red tick.
02:41:38 (2,3) - If you're going to keep them, stack them.
02:41:81 (4,5) - ^
02:49:42 (2,3) - ^
02:51:77 (4,5) - ^
02:53:06 (1,2) - ^
02:56:49 (3,4) - ^ (The 4 made the triangle an ugly cluster anyway)
02:59:06 (6,7) - ^
03:00:56 (1,2) - ^
03:09:77 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make the offbeat pattern easier to see. You did it right after this.
03:26:92 (9) - New combo so the whole stream isn't up to 16 for no reason.
03:33:77 (9) - New combo or maybe even make maybe 4-beat long combos with this and the last stream instead.
03:36:77 (3,4) - Perhaps stack?
03:50:17 (1,2) - Stack
03:50:49 (3,4) - ^
03:50:81 (5,6) - ^
04:09:99 (2,3) - ^
04:16:20 (6,7) - ^
04:20:06 (1) - Shorten by two red ticks
04:23:49 (1) - ^
04:26:92 (1) - ^
04:30:35 (1) - ^
04:33:56 (4) - Don't have it overlapping (3) and extend to the white tick.
04:40:42 (4) - Move the last anchor point two *tiny* grids left.
04:43:20 (5,6) - New combo on (5) and extend these to the red ticks.
04:44:49 (1,2) - Extend to red ticks.
04:46:63 (1,2) - ^

This is a looooooooong song and that might hinder it's chances at getting it ranked. You might need to cut part of it off or edit part of the song out. Also, I heard ZERO hit sounds. You need some~

Phew, this is a long song. I'll look at Insane later if I have time. *star* This song now looks fun to play! :)

Don't forget kudos if this post helped you ;)
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
A lot better than last time.

Insane (this can't be ranked with a score easily over 10 mil and a low difficulty, might want to cut the song off at a point):
*turn on distance snap, the spacing feels very inconstant at many sections.

I won't go to indepth for now, but here are some problems that you might want to consider when remapping parts.

I would advise you put breaks in the sections with no notes like 00:31:20() and 00:34:74() - because those just drain your guage. Still, you might want to lower the drain one notch to make the song more forgiving, but that is all you need for drain.

00:41:06 (6) - make a vertical reflection of 5
00:41:49 (7) - make a horizontal reflection of 6
00:41:92 (8) - make a vertical reflection of 7 or make a horizontal reflection of 5 (same thing either way)

Also I would not recommend switching between mapping lyrics and instruments. Ex: 01:33:35 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:35:49 (1,2,3,4)

Fix those problems throughout the map, and I think this would be good to go.
Starrodkirby86
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There's so much stuff...Sorry if this list is long. ;-;

[Hard]:
00:14:01 (3) - Stack under the slider endpoint of (1).
00:29:06 (1) - Inherited timing section here changing the audio set to Soft, possibly?
00:29:06 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps you should make this spacing consistent.
00:42:77 (1) - And this is a good place to put the inherited timing section returning to normal sample set.
01:00:99 (5) - Make sure it ends on the red tick ahead. In other words, extend the slider's anchor points by 1/4 more... (By red tick ahead and stuff, I mean the timeline)
01:11:49 (8) - Why not make this on the white tick ahead?
01:17:92 (6) - New combo?
01:26:70 (2) - Hm...do you really need that 1/3 rhythm here?
01:28:63 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I think you should space this out like other 1/1 beats.
02:29:49 (1) - Why not make it repeat at that red tick and end at the white one?
02:33:56 (9) - Extend to the red tick ahead.
02:35:27 (3) - Extend to the red tick ahead.
02:37:20 (5) - Same as above...
02:49:52 (3) - Move onto the white tick ahead and readjust spacing? o.o I see a lot of the use of...1/3 I think. It makes it sound a bit strange, but it's up to you.
03:53:06 (1) - Soft sampleset here? (Inherited Timing Sections and all)
04:17:27 (2) - Extend to the red tick ahead.
04:33:56 (4) - Extend to the white tick ahead?
04:43:20 (5,6) - Extend both to each respective red ticks.
04:44:49 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Same...Same...

I'm not going to mod [Insane]. Yet. It's late. x[

I see a lot of rhythm issues with the use of 1/3s on sliders and such. Hopefully you can fix it.

You need to get some more hitsounds. Then again, this is a WIP so I expect them to be coming soon.

I think some breaks might need to be added or the song should get shortened. It's quite long...If it's over 10million points, we might be in trouble.
tieff
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
KIA
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All [Hard]s mod posts I'll analyse a little bit later. :roll:
KIA
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blissfulyoshi
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I am sorry for saying you had wrong spacing. I guess I made assumptions after looking at a few mistakes that tieff pointed out.

Insane:
00:24:56 (9) - put on top of 6
00:35:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - might want to make both of these have the exact same arrangement
00:41:49 (7) - make horizontal reflection of 6
00:44:06 (5,6,7,8) - the spacing between 5 and 6 and 7 and 8 is different than the spacing between 1 and 2 and 3 and 4 (flip 1,2,3,4 horizontally and compare to 5,6,7,8)
02:09:35 (8) - make vertical reflection of 7
03:10:42 (3) - put on top of 1
03:11:70 (3) - put on top of 4
03:11:92 (4) - put on top of previous combo's 3
03:21:99 (1,2) - make a horizontal reflection of the previous combo
03:25:63 (6,7) - make a horizontal reflection of 4,3 respectively
03:28:63 (5) - make a horizontal reflection of 3
03:37:63 (2) - might want to make a horizontal reflection of 1
03:44:92 (3) - align with 2
03:58:20 (5,6) - align with 2,3 respectively
04:07:42 (5) - align with 2?
04:33:35 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
04:37:20 (3,4) - " "

Sorry for my bad mod last time. Have a star.
KIA
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blissfulyoshi wrote:

I am sorry for saying you had wrong spacing. I guess I made assumptions after looking at a few mistakes that tieff pointed out.

Insane:
00:24:56 (9) - put on top of 6
00:35:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - might want to make both of these have the exact same arrangement
00:41:49 (7) - make horizontal reflection of 6
00:44:06 (5,6,7,8) - the spacing between 5 and 6 and 7 and 8 is different than the spacing between 1 and 2 and 3 and 4 (flip 1,2,3,4 horizontally and compare to 5,6,7,8)
02:09:35 (8) - make vertical reflection of 7
03:10:42 (3) - put on top of 1
03:11:70 (3) - put on top of 4
03:11:92 (4) - put on top of previous combo's 3
03:21:99 (1,2) - make a horizontal reflection of the previous combo
03:25:63 (6,7) - make a horizontal reflection of 4,3 respectively
03:28:63 (5) - make a horizontal reflection of 3
03:37:63 (2) - might want to make a horizontal reflection of 1
03:44:92 (3) - align with 2
03:58:20 (5,6) - align with 2,3 respectively
04:07:42 (5) - align with 2?
04:33:35 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
04:37:20 (3,4) - " "
All Fixed
Sorry for my bad mod last time. Have a star.
* :) *
tieff
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Вместо хлопков можешь использовать normal hitsounds, запаришься, правда, зеленые линии ставить, но есть другой способ.
Еще вместо хлопков можно свисточек заюзать.
Lokamp
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Lokamp
Amazing... A well-organized beatmap...
I'll have hard moments this time!

Hard
[00:13:200] (1, 3, 5, 6, 7) clap on 7th, finish on 1st and 3rd (all the slider), whistle the others
[00:17:700] (6, 7) finish here
[00:18:350] (1, 2, 3, 8) whistles on 1st and 2nd, clap on 3rd; plus, set soft whistles on ALL the last red slider
[00:21:770] (1, 2, 3, 9, 10) finish on the last two beats, clap on 3rd, whistle the others
[00:25:200] (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) clap on 3rd, finish on 4th and 5th, whistle the others
[00:28:950] Try to set soft sounds from here until 01:14:800 (divide the yellow series on 01:13:630 in two series 1-3, 4-9)
[00:40:630] (5, 6, 7, 8) set normal finish sounds here
[00:43:200] (3, 7) claps here
[00:46:630] (3, 6, 7, 8) claps on 3rd and 8th, whistle the others
[00:50:060] (3, 7, 3) claps here
[00:54:350] (5, 6, 7, 8) like upper, normal finish sounds here
[00:58:420] (7) clap here (I'm VERY original, I know...)
[01:00:990] (5) finish ALL this slider
[01:21:350] (1) another clap!
[01:26:270] (1, 2) this sectionis pretty tricky... turn the 1st slider into a beat (start point) and change shape of the 2nd slider (make it end at about 01:28:210)
[01:39:990] (7, 8) add sounds of your choise here (better with claps or whistles)

That's all for now!
Oh, almost forget... Star'd!
Card N'FoRcE
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So you like my Taiga Comboburst, huh? xD
Offset is late by 6 ms to me

Hard:
01:00:99 (5) - wrong spacing, it's too close to the 4
01:11:49 (8) - end this 1/4 after
01:49:10 (1) - end this 1/4 after
01:52:42 (4) - end of this slider is weird, please end this in a more suitable spot
02:35:27 (3) - end this 1/4 after
02:37:20 (5) - ^
03:39:13 (1,2,3) - i really DON'T like this: this kind of tricks to fool the player don't make sense, there are other cool ways to do it

- Insane:
01:00:99 (5) - same as Hard
01:56:17 (1) - illegal spinner, it's too short
02:35:27 (3) - end this 1/4 after
02:37:20 (5) - ^
03:39:13 (1,2,3) - same as hard


The whole map lacks of hitsounds. Please put some or it's not so fun to play D:
Can't star T-T
KIA
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Card N'FoRcE wrote:

So you like my Taiga Comboburst, huh? xD
Offset is late by 6 ms to me

Hard:
01:00:99 (5) - wrong spacing, it's too close to the 4
01:11:49 (8) - end this 1/4 after
01:49:10 (1) - end this 1/4 after
01:52:42 (4) - end of this slider is weird, please end this in a more suitable spot
02:35:27 (3) - end this 1/4 after
02:37:20 (5) - ^
03:39:13 (1,2,3) - i really DON'T like this: this kind of tricks to fool the player don't make sense, there are other cool ways to do it

- Insane:
01:00:99 (5) - same as Hard
01:56:17 (1) - illegal spinner, it's too short
02:35:27 (3) - end this 1/4 after
02:37:20 (5) - ^
03:39:13 (1,2,3) - same as hard


The whole map lacks of hitsounds. Please put some or it's not so fun to play D:
Can't star T-T
Fixed, except offset. o_O I'm afraid to fix it :'(
Hitsounds will be a bit later. (T_T)
Andrea
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Andrea
[Timing]

BPM are ok, I got new offset : 14.924 Sounds good to me.

[Hard]

I suggest to add more sliders.

I Don't know if the lenght of the song it's rankable (04:47)

00:26:92 (1) - Finish.
00:40:63 (5) - New combo due to space change.
01:52:42 (4) - Add a break after this note.
02:08:06 (5) - New combo due to space change.

[Insane]

00:40:63 (5) - New combo due to space change.
01:21:028 - Remove this break.
01:56:921 - Replace this break.

You need to map and easy or normal for rank.
And short the lenght, please. It's unrakable.
tieff
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Еще не закончено, но я выкладываю это сдесь, т.к. я не со своего компьютера и завтра нужно будет скачать это на свой компьютер.
This isn't finish yet, but I have my reason to put it here.

Download: Kugimiya Rie & Horie Yui & Kitamura Eri - Orange - citrus mix - (KIA) [tieff's Beat].osu
Doomsday
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Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

offset: 14,898 (i see other people have suggested offsets. only use mone if it sounds better)

i don't feel like modding spacing and diff specific stuff just yet. ill do that tomorrow. stay tuned
from what i've seen of it though, it seems worthy of a star.

star'd
KIA
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Okay. All fixed...
Doomsday
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im back

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

[EASY]

01:23:46 - put something in this gap maybe? if not, put a break here

seems fine to me. good job

[NORMAL]

its all good. no problems :)

[HARD]

i'd knock the HP drain down by 2 notches, since if you miss one, its too hard to charge it back up again, especially since this is not the hardest diff

no problems that i noticed.

[INSANE]

holy shit. The max score of this is just over 16 mil. (the editor says 15.6 mil, but that is wrong). its still rankable, but it would be a good idea to put more jumps in, since i don't think this is hard enough.

also, that drain is evil. it is near impossible to charge it up if you miss one. lower it by 1 notch, maybe 2

00:13:20 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these are not bang on the ticks they are supposed to be on.


move them back a tad so they are spot on them


all else seems fine

not a bad map. im not sure what the BAT's will make of that ludicrous score for Insane, but it should be fine if you make it harder. hell, it might be fine if you leave it as is.

KIA
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Doomsday93 wrote:

im back
[EASY]

01:23:46 - put something in this gap maybe? if not, put a break here
fixed
seems fine to me. good job

[NORMAL]

its all good. no problems :)

[HARD]

i'd knock the HP drain down by 2 notches, since if you miss one, its too hard to charge it back up again, especially since this is not the hardest diff
I don't see problems with HP drain on Hard >_<
no problems that i noticed.

[INSANE]

holy shit. The max score of this is just over 16 mil. (the editor says 15.6 mil, but that is wrong). its still rankable, but it would be a good idea to put more jumps in, since i don't think this is hard enough.
Yeah! I need mooooore 2x ^^.
also, that drain is evil. it is near impossible to charge it up if you miss one. lower it by 1 notch, maybe 2
Fixed!
00:13:20 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these are not bang on the ticks they are supposed to be on.
Fixed!
all else seems fine

not a bad map. im not sure what the BAT's will make of that ludicrous score for Insane, but it should be fine if you make it harder. hell, it might be fine if you leave it as is.
Note: all hitsounds ready. 8-)
tieff
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KIA
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За кружочек спасибо ;)
Жду от тебя "сложность" :roll:
happy30
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Please think carefully before changing anything, I dont want to interfere with your beatmapping style.

I love the hitcircles <33

[Easy]

00:33:75 (3) - 1/2 back if u were following the vocal

Perhaps remove the small breaks. they aren't really needed because of low hp drain

01:42:32 (1) - Start 1/4 later
01:45:75 (1) - ^
01:49:18 (1) - ^
02:35:25 (3) - Snap end to white tick
02:36:75 (4) - End is supposed to have volume off? its on atm ^^

3:49 - remove break

[Normal]

Perhaps remove the small breaks. they aren't really needed because of low hp drain

01:42:32 (1) - Start 1/4 later
01:45:75 (1) - ^
01:49:18 (1) - ^
02:35:25 (3) - Snap end to white tick
02:36:75 (4) - End is supposed to have volume off? its on atm ^^

3:49 - remove break

lol, mod post looks almost the same as for [Easy]

[Hard]

01:26:25 (1) - Supposed to have volume off?
01:42:32 (1) - Start 1/4 later
01:45:75 (1) - ^
01:49:18 (1) - ^
02:36:75 (4) - Supposed to have volume off?

Insane

01:40:39 (4) - Change this, it sounds off when the ball hits the repeat arrow.
01:42:32 (1) - Start 1/4 later
01:45:75 (1) - ^
01:49:18 (1) - ^
This map is.. well.. insane, lol
KIA
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happy30 wrote:

Please think carefully before changing anything, I dont want to interfere with your beatmapping style.

I love the hitcircles <33

[Easy]

00:33:75 (3) - 1/2 back if u were following the vocal
fixed
Perhaps remove the small breaks. they aren't really needed because of low hp drain
fixed
01:42:32 (1) - Start 1/4 later
01:45:75 (1) - ^
01:49:18 (1) - ^
Hmmm..... After all thinkings... FIXED >_<
02:35:25 (3) - Snap end to white tick
fixed
02:36:75 (4) - End is supposed to have volume off? its on atm ^^
Yes
3:49 - remove break
rofl :lol:
[Normal]

Perhaps remove the small breaks. they aren't really needed because of low hp drain
fixed
01:42:32 (1) - Start 1/4 later
01:45:75 (1) - ^
01:49:18 (1) - ^
02:35:25 (3) - Snap end to white tick
02:36:75 (4) - End is supposed to have volume off? its on atm ^^

3:49 - remove break

lol, mod post looks almost the same as for [Easy]
Same... fixed

[Hard]

01:26:25 (1) - Supposed to have volume off?
Yes
01:42:32 (1) - Start 1/4 later
01:45:75 (1) - ^
01:49:18 (1) - ^
fixedddd
02:36:75 (4) - Supposed to have volume off?
Yes

Insane

01:40:39 (4) - Change this, it sounds off when the ball hits the repeat arrow.
i.e. add clap?
01:42:32 (1) - Start 1/4 later
01:45:75 (1) - ^
01:49:18 (1) - ^
Fixed
This map is.. well.. insane, lol
Hmm... May be xD
happy30
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"01:40:39 (4) - Change this, it sounds off when the ball hits the repeat arrow."

I meant the timing of the repeat, try this:

KIA
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happy30 wrote:

"01:40:39 (4) - Change this, it sounds off when the ball hits the repeat arrow."

I meant the timing of the repeat, try this:
Understood now).
blissfulyoshi
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The hitcircles are great.

Easy:
00:24:54 (5) - I don't like how the end of this slider is covered up by the previous slider
01:07:82 (2) - I don't like how the start of this is covered by the previous combo 2
01:16:82 (1,2) - this does not belong in an easy

I don't like how your sliders overlap, but it is your map. I probably won't comment on it for the rest of the maps unless I think something needs to be changed

Normal:
00:56:89 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
01:03:75 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2 (I would advise you move 3 1 notch(3) down)
01:05:25 (7) - make the same distance from 6 that 5 is
01:38:46 (6) - the ending of this would be covered by a 300

Some parts feel very similar to easy, some parts are exact replicas with smaller notes. I would want to make the difficulty is a little more unique

Hard:
01:02:46 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
01:14:46 (3) - make a horizontal reflection of 2
01:24:54 (5,6,1) - 01:24:54 (5,6) - make parallel to 3,4
01:29:46 (1) - make it have the negative slope of the the slider of the combo before it
01:33:32 (1) - stack on top of the blue 2
02:08:04 (1) - might want to make this a horizontal reflection of the orange 1
02:09:32 (4) - make a vertical reflection of 3
02:31:82 (3,4) - make a horizontal reflection of 1,2
03:07:82 (5) - make a horizontal reflection of 4
03:37:61 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of 1
03:41:89 (1) - align with pink 3?
03:47:89 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of 1
03:57:96 (4,5,6) - might want to make this a copy of 1,2,3 (compare 2,3 relative to 1 and 5,6 relative to 4)
04:09:32 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - make these 3 set parallel
04:37:18 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2

Looks a lot like normal at times.

Insane (I know it is still a WIP):
It looks like you are on the right direction for jumps. The jumps are definitely difficult. The problem I have in this area is the beats are too small for me to see where the jumps are going.
Also, I do not advise a 2x bpm section. Currently, your slider speed is very slow to begin with. Truthfully, the 2x bpm does not make the song any harder. I would probably stick with the jumps, and if you want an increase slider speed, change the slider velocity of the whole song.
KIA
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blissfulyoshi wrote:

The hitcircles are great.
Thanks, I like it too. xD
Easy:
00:24:54 (5) - I don't like how the end of this slider is covered up by the previous slider
I think other way. :) Here is nothing difficult for player.
01:07:82 (2) - I don't like how the start of this is covered by the previous combo 2
Agree. Fixed.
01:16:82 (1,2) - this does not belong in an easy
True. :roll: Fixed.

I don't like how your sliders overlap, but it is your map. I probably won't comment on it for the rest of the maps unless I think something needs to be changed

Normal:
00:56:89 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
01:03:75 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2 (I would advise you move 3 1 notch(3) down)
01:05:25 (7) - make the same distance from 6 that 5 is
01:38:46 (6) - the ending of this would be covered by a 300
All Fixed.
Some parts feel very similar to easy, some parts are exact replicas with smaller notes. I would want to make the difficulty is a little more unique

Hard:
01:02:46 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
01:14:46 (3) - make a horizontal reflection of 2
01:24:54 (5,6,1) - 01:24:54 (5,6) - make parallel to 3,4
All Fixed.
01:29:46 (1) - make it have the negative slope of the the slider of the combo before it
Changed its' position.(i.e. Fixed... probably :D)
01:33:32 (1) - stack on top of the blue 2
Fixed
02:08:04 (1) - might want to make this a horizontal reflection of the orange 1
No =) .
02:09:32 (4) - make a vertical reflection of 3
02:31:82 (3,4) - make a horizontal reflection of 1,2
All Fixed
03:07:82 (5) - make a horizontal reflection of 4
Changed.
03:37:61 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of 1
03:41:89 (1) - align with pink 3?
03:47:89 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of 1
All repositioned
03:57:96 (4,5,6) - might want to make this a copy of 1,2,3 (compare 2,3 relative to 1 and 5,6 relative to 4)
Yeah. :P Fixed.
04:09:32 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - make these 3 set parallel
Fixed
04:37:18 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
Fixed

Looks a lot like normal at times.
NO. Normal looks like Hard & Easy looks like normal sometime. :roll:
Insane (I know it is still a WIP):
It looks like you are on the right direction for jumps. The jumps are definitely difficult. The problem I have in this area is the beats are too small for me to see where the jumps are going.
Also, I do not advise a 2x bpm section. Currently, your slider speed is very slow to begin with. Truthfully, the 2x bpm does not make the song any harder. I would probably stick with the jumps, and if you want an increase slider speed, change the slider velocity of the whole song.
tieff
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Finished.

Download: Kugimiya Rie & Horie Yui & Kitamura Eri - Orange - citrus mix - (KIA) [tieff's Beat].osu
Zodiark1020
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Zodiark1020
Hey, I start telling i don't like long beatmaps, but I will mod it, and maybe I'll ask to shorten at leas easy and normal...

<Easy>
00:29:04 (1,2) - same distance of 3 and 4 (timing and spacing matter)
00:32:46 (1,2) - ^
01:26:25 (1) - 1/4 or 3/4 earlier, it's only an easy
01:39:96 (2,3) - I'd tell you to change it but i dunno how to replace it...so i highlight it but I leave free choice of the replacement
01:45:75 (1) - 2/4 later or on next white tick (4/4 later)
01:49:18 (1) - 2/4 later
01:53:46 (1) - finish...
02:36:75 (4) - shorten by 1/4
You can end this at 03:13:076, easy which are too long...are really boring in my opinion

<Normal>
Here, the only problem is it's too similiar to Easy...i'd suggest use something more original...
And..maybe too long this too...now i'm thinking you can end this at 03:13:076 and easy before...

<Hard>
Increase circle size by 1 tick
Good difficulty this one :P
Shorten it...and make full only insane difficulty...

<Insane>
Increase circle size by 1 or 2 tick
I like this too ;)

I won't mod tieff's difficulty cause i'm too tired, but I trust him and i'm sure there are few errors (if there's any! xD)

If I find something else, I'll tell you!

Oops! Was forgetting star! :)
KIA
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Some fixed.
XepherX3
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XepherX3
Love it :D

call Harder Hardstyle

starred
KIA
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Some changes on [harder] diff.
Renaming difficulties.
I need mods for [Hardstyle] & [Jumping style]
tieff
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sir Minelli
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KIA
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Sir Minelli wrote:

I believe this to be your first map, and i have found many mistakes concerning timing, rhythm, spacing etc.
Here i will leave you a link where you can find many useful information about how to start a map and to make it right.
http://osu.ppy.sh/?p=faq&n=5


I will leave you now with the correct Offset because yours was wrong. Work with this: 14.930

Good luck. I hope you fix this as soon as possible for a future rank ;)
That offset sound a bit weird 4 me. I'll accept 14926.
Yes, that was my first beatmap, i workin' over it almost 1 mouth, and I've read that info 'bout editor.
Well, how can I fix map mitakes if you're not posted them here... Strange position.

General Info:
Normal, Jumping style based on LYRICS generally.
Hardstyle & Tieff's Beat based on Music (most) and Lyrics (less).
In nearest future I'll recheck all that diff's and I hope somebody wiil help me with that.
WolfCoder
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WolfCoder
[Normal]
It's only slightly too hard (only needs to be made slightly easier) to be Normal.

Actually, every other difficulty is insane and out of my skills. Normal probably only needs very slight work done, what this beatmap could use is an easy. Here's a star~
[DBF]
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Dartmir
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kerensa
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Kerensa
AHHHHHH!!! i love this beat map ^^ it's so cute ><

the jumping one is fun ^^
fartownik
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fartownik
Here is my tiny useless mod.

  • [Normal]
    02:07:410 - Clap here.

    [Jumping Style]
    It's fine.

    [Hardstyle]
    01:02:914 - I prefer Finish here.
    02:45:235 - Delete Clap.

    [tieff's beat]
    02:16:629 (1) - Delete new combo
    02:16:843 (2)- Add new combo
    02:20:272 (7)- Add new combo
    02:20:486 (1)- Delete new combo
    02:55:736 - Add a note [?]
Really great beatmap. Good job :) Starr'd.
KIA
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Thanks for modding :P
EEeee
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EEeee
Easy
01:28:415 - The Kiai time, start it 1/2 forward, on the white tick
01:41:91 (2) - add finish at the end of this slider
01:42:34 (1) - end 1/2 forward, or back to make it look like the following spinners
01:53:48 (1) - within this spinner, are those timing sections being used
02:05:05 (4) - move 1/2 back and then snap it, also add a new combo to 3
02:11:91 (4) - move 1/2 back, sounds better to me
03:22:987 - here to the end of the mp3, remove all the unused timing points

Normal
03:12:985 - just fix this break
remove all the unused timing points at the end and then I think this diff is okay for now

jumping Style
00:31:200 - fix break, slightly off, and just so I don't have to post all of them, just make sure all the breaks are fixed, cause some are actually off

Hard Style
Looks great
Oh wait nooooo, almost perfect
01:53:485 - Fix this break
04:40:41 (1) - can't see where it ends and starts, move slider end point so the u can see where it ends and starts


00:41:49 (1) - Remove new combo
00:47:06 (5,6) - add whistles?
01:13:10 (1) - make this spinner start at 01:13:629, then add a note on 01:12:986 and 01:13:200 with finishes, it will be awesome, also make it go along with the previous pattern(01:11:06 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - )
Okay that is all, but maybe u can map and have a better ending, where it ends now looks Bland, maybe this was in other diffs, but I noticed it in this one, maybe end the whole map at a better spot

tieff
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Here we go!

Download: Kugimiya Rie & Horie Yui & Kitamura Eri - Orange - citrus mix - (KIA) [tieff's Beat].osu
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