All [Hard]s mod posts I'll analyse a little bit later.
blissfulyoshi wrote:
I am sorry for saying you had wrong spacing. I guess I made assumptions after looking at a few mistakes that tieff pointed out.
Insane:
00:24:56 (9) - put on top of 6
00:35:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - might want to make both of these have the exact same arrangement
00:41:49 (7) - make horizontal reflection of 6
00:44:06 (5,6,7,8) - the spacing between 5 and 6 and 7 and 8 is different than the spacing between 1 and 2 and 3 and 4 (flip 1,2,3,4 horizontally and compare to 5,6,7,8)
02:09:35 (8) - make vertical reflection of 7
03:10:42 (3) - put on top of 1
03:11:70 (3) - put on top of 4
03:11:92 (4) - put on top of previous combo's 3
03:21:99 (1,2) - make a horizontal reflection of the previous combo
03:25:63 (6,7) - make a horizontal reflection of 4,3 respectively
03:28:63 (5) - make a horizontal reflection of 3
03:37:63 (2) - might want to make a horizontal reflection of 1
03:44:92 (3) - align with 2
03:58:20 (5,6) - align with 2,3 respectively
04:07:42 (5) - align with 2?
04:33:35 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
04:37:20 (3,4) - " "
All Fixed
Sorry for my bad mod last time. Have a star.
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Fixed, except offset. o_O I'm afraid to fix it :'(Card N'FoRcE wrote:
So you like my Taiga Comboburst, huh? xD
Offset is late by 6 ms to me
Hard:
01:00:99 (5) - wrong spacing, it's too close to the 4
01:11:49 (8) - end this 1/4 after
01:49:10 (1) - end this 1/4 after
01:52:42 (4) - end of this slider is weird, please end this in a more suitable spot
02:35:27 (3) - end this 1/4 after
02:37:20 (5) - ^
03:39:13 (1,2,3) - i really DON'T like this: this kind of tricks to fool the player don't make sense, there are other cool ways to do it
- Insane:
01:00:99 (5) - same as Hard
01:56:17 (1) - illegal spinner, it's too short
02:35:27 (3) - end this 1/4 after
02:37:20 (5) - ^
03:39:13 (1,2,3) - same as hard
The whole map lacks of hitsounds. Please put some or it's not so fun to play D:
Can't star T-T
Note: all hitsounds ready.Doomsday93 wrote:
im back
[EASY]
01:23:46 - put something in this gap maybe? if not, put a break here
fixed
seems fine to me. good job
[NORMAL]
its all good. no problems
[HARD]
i'd knock the HP drain down by 2 notches, since if you miss one, its too hard to charge it back up again, especially since this is not the hardest diff
I don't see problems with HP drain on Hard >_<
no problems that i noticed.
[INSANE]
holy shit. The max score of this is just over 16 mil. (the editor says 15.6 mil, but that is wrong). its still rankable, but it would be a good idea to put more jumps in, since i don't think this is hard enough.
Yeah! I need mooooore 2x ^^.
also, that drain is evil. it is near impossible to charge it up if you miss one. lower it by 1 notch, maybe 2
Fixed!
00:13:20 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these are not bang on the ticks they are supposed to be on.
Fixed!
all else seems fine
not a bad map. im not sure what the BAT's will make of that ludicrous score for Insane, but it should be fine if you make it harder. hell, it might be fine if you leave it as is.
happy30 wrote:
Please think carefully before changing anything, I dont want to interfere with your beatmapping style.
I love the hitcircles <33
[Easy]
00:33:75 (3) - 1/2 back if u were following the vocal
fixed
Perhaps remove the small breaks. they aren't really needed because of low hp drain
fixed
01:42:32 (1) - Start 1/4 later
01:45:75 (1) - ^
01:49:18 (1) - ^
Hmmm..... After all thinkings... FIXED >_<
02:35:25 (3) - Snap end to white tick
fixed
02:36:75 (4) - End is supposed to have volume off? its on atm ^^
Yes
3:49 - remove break
rofl
[Normal]
Perhaps remove the small breaks. they aren't really needed because of low hp drain
fixed
01:42:32 (1) - Start 1/4 later
01:45:75 (1) - ^
01:49:18 (1) - ^
02:35:25 (3) - Snap end to white tick
02:36:75 (4) - End is supposed to have volume off? its on atm ^^
3:49 - remove break
lol, mod post looks almost the same as for [Easy]
Same... fixed
[Hard]
01:26:25 (1) - Supposed to have volume off?
Yes
01:42:32 (1) - Start 1/4 later
01:45:75 (1) - ^
01:49:18 (1) - ^
fixedddd
02:36:75 (4) - Supposed to have volume off?
Yes
Insane
01:40:39 (4) - Change this, it sounds off when the ball hits the repeat arrow.
i.e. add clap?
01:42:32 (1) - Start 1/4 later
01:45:75 (1) - ^
01:49:18 (1) - ^
Fixed
This map is.. well.. insane, lol
Hmm... May be xD
Understood now).happy30 wrote:
"01:40:39 (4) - Change this, it sounds off when the ball hits the repeat arrow."
I meant the timing of the repeat, try this:
blissfulyoshi wrote:
The hitcircles are great.
Thanks, I like it too. xD
Easy:
00:24:54 (5) - I don't like how the end of this slider is covered up by the previous slider
I think other way. Here is nothing difficult for player.
01:07:82 (2) - I don't like how the start of this is covered by the previous combo 2
Agree. Fixed.
01:16:82 (1,2) - this does not belong in an easy
True. Fixed.
I don't like how your sliders overlap, but it is your map. I probably won't comment on it for the rest of the maps unless I think something needs to be changed
Normal:
00:56:89 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
01:03:75 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2 (I would advise you move 3 1 notch(3) down)
01:05:25 (7) - make the same distance from 6 that 5 is
01:38:46 (6) - the ending of this would be covered by a 300
All Fixed.
Some parts feel very similar to easy, some parts are exact replicas with smaller notes. I would want to make the difficulty is a little more unique
Hard:
01:02:46 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
01:14:46 (3) - make a horizontal reflection of 2
01:24:54 (5,6,1) - 01:24:54 (5,6) - make parallel to 3,4
All Fixed.
01:29:46 (1) - make it have the negative slope of the the slider of the combo before it
Changed its' position.(i.e. Fixed... probably )
01:33:32 (1) - stack on top of the blue 2
Fixed
02:08:04 (1) - might want to make this a horizontal reflection of the orange 1
No =) .
02:09:32 (4) - make a vertical reflection of 3
02:31:82 (3,4) - make a horizontal reflection of 1,2
All Fixed
03:07:82 (5) - make a horizontal reflection of 4
Changed.
03:37:61 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of 1
03:41:89 (1) - align with pink 3?
03:47:89 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of 1
All repositioned
03:57:96 (4,5,6) - might want to make this a copy of 1,2,3 (compare 2,3 relative to 1 and 5,6 relative to 4)
Yeah. Fixed.
04:09:32 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - make these 3 set parallel
Fixed
04:37:18 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
Fixed
Looks a lot like normal at times.
NO. Normal looks like Hard & Easy looks like normal sometime.
Insane (I know it is still a WIP):
It looks like you are on the right direction for jumps. The jumps are definitely difficult. The problem I have in this area is the beats are too small for me to see where the jumps are going.
Also, I do not advise a 2x bpm section. Currently, your slider speed is very slow to begin with. Truthfully, the 2x bpm does not make the song any harder. I would probably stick with the jumps, and if you want an increase slider speed, change the slider velocity of the whole song.
That offset sound a bit weird 4 me. I'll accept 14926.Sir Minelli wrote:
I believe this to be your first map, and i have found many mistakes concerning timing, rhythm, spacing etc.
Here i will leave you a link where you can find many useful information about how to start a map and to make it right.
http://osu.ppy.sh/?p=faq&n=5
I will leave you now with the correct Offset because yours was wrong. Work with this: 14.930
Good luck. I hope you fix this as soon as possible for a future rank