Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my queue :3

[Path Of Glory]

00:09:214(7,8,9,10) - It's looks ugly and slider 10 overlap with stream~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616756 This will be looks better -Fixed
00:12:214(3,4) - remove whistle from this notes -Fixed
00:14:357 - add double slider 1/2 It's better follow for music -You're sure? I have trouble seeing it. For the moment i won't change anything.
00:17:142 - add NC here -Fixed
00:20:571(1,2) - looks ugly and not playable~ Put it here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616761 and correct pattern after -Fixed
00:52:714 - add note here for better flow~ -Fixed
00:56:571 - add NC -Fixed
01:00:000(2) - add NC here -Fixed
01:12:214(3,4) - put this sliders on centre Y http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616765 -Fixed
01:18:000 - you forget add finish here -Fixed
01:27:000(6,7,1) - looks realy ugly >.< Plz fix this overlap -Fixed
01:29:142 - add NC -Fixed
01:43:285 - add nc on spin -Fixed
01:45:857 - add note here -Fixed

[Normal]

00:28:285 - remove NC -Fixed
00:30:000 - ^ -Fixed
00:34:285 (1,1,1,1) - This pattern unrankable bct start slider very overlapped and It not readable and very hard to play~ Plz change this pattern -Fixed
00:50:357 - repeat is hide~ It's unrankable too~ -Fixed

This diff is very hard for Normal~ You shoud remove all sliders on 1/4 bcz It's hard to play and correct all spacing~ -Ok, i fixed all the spacing, remap nearly all the parts with 1/4 sliders. I hope it's better now.

[Easy]

00:27:000 - very close to note plz replace this spin on notes it will be easier to play http://puu.sh/23YYt -Fixed but not the same way as you suggested.
00:32:571 - the same ^ - ^
00:41:142 - here better make so http://puu.sh/23Z9v -Fixed
00:42:857 - remove NC here -Fixed
00:46:285 - ^ -Fixed
00:53:142 - put this note on x416 y192 for smooth triangle and remove clap -Fixed
01:06:857 - better add note here~ It will be more playable for beginners -Fixed
01:20:142 - replace this spin on notes! Bcz note very close to spin for easy -Fixed
01:27:000 - ^ -Fixed
01:34:285 - remove this slider and end spin here -Fixed
01:36:428 - repeat is hide~ It's unranable fix this -Fixed


Map need more work~ I hope you can make this map much better :3 Good luck I hope too. I will work on this harder and i'll make some big changes. I'm still a beginner so i'm not used to all this. Anyway, thank you for your very helpful mod.

RikiH_ wrote:

Modding from my queue!

Easy

00:12:857 to 00:14:142
I don't like this gap, it's really odd... You should add some notes here... Fixed
00:36:000 - Remove NC like you did here in this pattern 00:29:142 Fixed
00:41:142 (1,1) - Please remove claps from slider's tails and add whistles, they sound much better! Fixed
00:42:000 - Bad overlap, please move this one grid down (ignore distance snap here) Fixed
00:52:285 (2) - Move to 252|308 where you put the previous note Fixed (but i prefered moving the other note)
01:08:571 (4) - Make this a bit better, I'm noob at sliders and I don't know how to improve it unfortunately :C Fixed.... i guess.
01:25:714 (5,1) - I don't like this overlap, try to do something Fixed
01:29:142 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
01:32:571 (5,1) - Ugly overlap Fixed
01:34:285 (1,1) - Like you did before, remove claps from slider's tails and add whistles Fixed

Normal

00:14:142 (1,2) - Try to replace claps with whistles Fixed
00:24:857 (3) - Ctrl+g on this, it flows better Indeed, fixed
00:41:571 (2,2) - Add whistles on these notes Fixed
00:54:857 - Add a note Fixed
01:07:285 (1,2) - Whistles Fixed
01:24:428 (2,4) - Put these 4 grid up Fixed (i even slightly changed the pattern)
01:34:714 (2,2) - Whistles Fixed
01:48:000 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:49:714 (1,2) - ^ Fixed

Path of glory

00:14:142 (1,2) - Wh...I think you know Let me guess... Whistles? Fixed
00:27:000 - Add a note and make an unique stream, there is a sound here! No. There is no sound here if you listen closely.
00:41:571 (2,4) - ... Hum.... Whistles? Fixed
01:00:214 (1) - I don't think MAT/BATs will approve this NC Well, it's Katty Pie who said to me to put one here.She has more ranked beatmap than you so i'll trust her/him/it on this one. Sorry.....
01:07:285 (1,2) - :V Fixed
01:20:142 - The same as before, make an unique stream The same as before, no.
01:34:714 (2,2) - Blahblahblah Fixed

Well, you need to improve Normal because I didn't like your sliders in that diff. Well.... Betxeen this map and my other map, i think i'm definitely unable to do a decent "Normal". I'll remap it. Again.....
I loved sliders in Path of glory. Really? Thank you. I wasn't really sure about them.
Star because Phoenix Wright is win.Wouah. Thank you very much, Grazie mille . Osu! needs more Phoenix Wright

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi rezoons (:3 」_)=3

From my queue m4m

[Easy]

00:12:857 (2) slider end remove finish Fixed

00:17:142 (2,3) be confusing pattern, Recommends widening the interval. It's beacause when i modified the slider i didn't make it long enough. Fixed

00:15:000 (3) remove finish Fixed.... Wait! In fact no, the finish is good.

00:15:428 (1) slider head remove finish and slider end 00:16:714 Fixed and already Fixed

00:34:285 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

00:42:000 remove new combo Fixed

00:48:000 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

00:53:357 ~ 00:59:785 The short length of the songs, And break time to put in this section is not recommended.
please add note I'll fix it... Later.

01:00:000 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

01:08:571 (4) slider end move 01:09:857 Fixed

01:11:357 (1,3) overlap this is patter change please -> http://puu.sh/2eu9n Fixed

01:27:428 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

01:35:142 (1) remove new combo Fixed


[Normal]
Well.... It's basically the same mistakes as you pointed out in the Easy Diff so i fixed everything.
00:13:714 add note?

00:27:000 remove finish

00:33:857 remove finish

00:34:285 (1) slider head add finish

00:40:714 remove finish

00:42:000 (1) remove new combo

01:00:642 (1) remove new combo

01:00:000 (1) add finish

01:06:857 add note?

01:20:142 (1) remove finish

01:27:000 (1) ^

01:27:428 (1) slider head add finish

01:33:857 (1) remove finish

01:35:142 (1) remove new combo


[Path Of Glory]

00:08:571 (5) add NC Fixed (but not here)

00:34:285 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

00:48:000 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

01:20:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) This beat is very awkward. change please -> http://puu.sh/2eurc Sorru but it's the actual beat. Listen closely.

01:27:428 (1) slider head add finish Fixed

01:43:285 ... Abrupt spin remove please and add note Fixed but with a slider instead



Good luck Thanks

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Queue~!

[General]
Consider using some custom hit sounds for parts of the song like 00:27:642 - 00:27:857 and so on. I already use custom hitsounds for these parts.
This thread might be helpful: t/15407 I didn't know this tread. Thanks for the tip ^^

[Easy]
00:10:285 (1) - Put a Finish? Fixed
00:14:142 (2,3) - Remove clap - Add Finish. Fits better with the music. Fixed
00:51:428 (1) - Remove clap, the song doesn't ask for Clap there. Fixed
01:07:285 (2,3) - Remove clap and put Finish. Fixed

[Normal]
00:27:428 (1,2,1,2) - Why this overlapping? It doesn't look nice. Something like this would help: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/648603
When sliders are not overlapping each other or their self and the player can see clearly the slider border is more enjoyable and looks beautiful. Fixed.... I guess....
00:41:571 (2,4) - Whistle + Finish. Whistle + Clap sounds bad. .-. Fixed
00:45:857 (4,1) - Slider border overlap D:< Fix this as well Fixed
00:51:428 (1) - Finish :c No clap Fixed
00:52:285 (3,5) - ^ Fixed
01:00:642 (3,4,1) - Slider border overlap. They do not look beautiful like this ~ Fixed
01:07:285 (2,3) - Whistle + Finish Fixed
01:13:714 (1,2) - Slider overlap~ Fixed
01:34:714 (2,4) - Whistle + Finish Fixed
01:37:714 (1,2,3,4) - Just few grids away from each other just to not touch each other's border. Fixed
01:44:571 (1) - Finish, No Clap~ Fixed
01:46:285 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:47:999 (1,2) - Whistle + Finish Fixed
01:49:713 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:50:784 (1) - Remove clap. Fixed


[Path to Glory]
Let me guess: Remove claps, add finishes and fix ugly overlapping...*see your mod*... Yeah! i was right .
00:06:857 (1) - Finish Fixed
00:14:142 (1,2) - Whistle + Finish Fixed
00:41:571 (2,4) - ^ Fixed
00:46:285 (1,2) - Slider border overlap~ Fix this as well, ignoring a bit the distance snap wont hurt your map Fixed
00:48:000 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
00:51:428 (1,2) - Replace Clap with FInish Fixed
00:54:857 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:56:571 (1,4) - No clap, put Finish :< Fixed
00:59:999 (1) - NC - I know it is already NC but only visible because it's after spinner. Fixed
01:07:285 (1,2) - Whistle + Finish Fixed
01:34:714 (2,2) - ^ Fixed
01:41:142 (1,2) - Slider border overlap~ Fix this as well Fixed


Besides the hitsound errors and the sliders the map is good made. Good luck! Thanks. And you discovered my two major weaknesses: the sliders and the hitsounds. I followed all your suggestions and i will take a look at your link of differents custom hitsounds.

angelfix wrote:

[Easy]
01:18:157 01:19:714 fix these two slides' shape The first one refers to nothing. Fixed for the second one.
01:03:428 usually we don't use this shape in easy Because? It's not a complicated shape. You're the first one to ever tell me that.
[Normal]
00:12:857 clap If you want.... Fixed
01:20:571 - 01:23:785 it is not recommoned to use slider's end stack with slider's head in normal Not recommended but not forbidden. In this cas since we have a 1/2 beat gap it's better to have the stack rather to have two sliders with a big overlapping.
01:34:285 - 01:35:571 too hard in normal Fixed
[Part of Glory]
00:27:000 why miss the note? Because there is no note here.
01:16:071 unrankable I have seen this pattern in other maps before but if you want i can put a NC in order for the stack to be more clear.
01:20:142 the same The same.
01:39:428 check the blanket Fixed

small tips: try to use less blanket and symmetry next time Well i don't think that i use them that much (set apart the "Easy diff"). Moreover they are very pleasant to play. But i will see what can i change when i will have the time.

Zazalng wrote:

[General]
Nothing to see!

[Easy]
00:38:142 not look good sir Move it to x:328 y:268 then fix space of next combo Fixed

[Normal]
00:17:357 Make end slide to snap last combo 2 Fixed

[Path Of Glory]
01:30:000 Don't Make it Out Grid move it inslide The playing aread isn't limited to the grid. Play it and you'll see it's good.

So I will give star for this because it Good and Impassive beatmap Thanks a lot

Verlaren wrote:

Yo. From my queue/

General:
Deselect letterbox during breaks, because you haven't a storybiard. Fixed


Path of Glory:
00:45:285(1) - reduce end of slider to one tick Fixed
00:48:000(1) - ^ Fixed
01:20:142 - add note No
01:39:428(1) - reduce end of slider to one tick Fixed
01:41:142(1) - ^ Fixed


Good luck.

1. Difficulty settings: Why did you change Path Of Glory diff from Hard to Insane? Easy ⇒ Normal ⇒ Insane This setting does not have good balance. ( Because it does not have Hard of the middle degree of difficulty) but I think the actual setting is sufficient. since you have slightly difficult Normal. and Insane is not too difficult.
   I recommend that you hide the Insane of the Creator's Words. i mean Path Of Glory (Insane) ⇒ Path Of Glory. Because it makes diff balance look bad only by an appearance.
2. Song Setup - Artist - 「Aoi Shoudo」 Is this a Japanese? I was able to find the Romaji, too. but I was not able to find it other than it...orz
3. KIAI TIME - kia time start 00:59:999 - It is not put on the line. so better to put 01:00:000 all diff.

1. 00:06:856 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. like Insane diff. It matches song very much
2. 00:10:285 (1,2) - 00:06:856 (1,2,3) - I make these with a different flow. for ex: http://puu.sh/2n1RD It is not necessary to change this, but It is also important to entertain the people with a variety of flow.
3. 00:14:142 (2,3) - I thought soft-finish will fit better than Normal-finish. so i suggest change to Additions:Auto⇒Soft
4. 00:17:571 (3,4,1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm & flow: http://puu.sh/2n2zF http://puu.sh/2n2B2 ( I thought that the balance of the color was not so good. and 00:19:714 (2,1) - This similar flow, same as the reason above.) This is an example. When you change it, Please adjust it yourself.
   
   SPOILER

   156,144,17571,2,0,L|56:144,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   84,240,18428,2,0,L|184:240,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,308,19285,2,0,B|296:340|296:340|336:308,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   296,216,20571,6,0,P|320:168|280:128,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   208,84,21428,2,0,L|208:196,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   120,136,22285,2,8,P|96:88|136:48,2,100

5. 00:20:571~00:34:285 - during this time, I think that your original clap matches song very much but I tried a few suggestions.
   
   SPOILER

   ・00:23:571 (1,2) - I thought that there is no need of this slider tickclap
   ・00:25:285 (3) - add clap instead to finish
   ・00:25:714 (1,2) - add finish
   ・00:26:571 (3) - add finish to start of the slider and add clap to end of the slider
   ・00:31:285 (2,4) - add clap instead to finish.
   ・00:32:571 (5) - add finish to start of the slider and add clap to end of the slider
6. 00:31:285 (2,4) - remove finish and instead 00:32:571 (5) - add finish to start of the slider. I think that it is better than consecutive finish
7. 00:41:142 (1,2) - I think that finish matches end of the slider than a whistle. so i suggest add whistle to start of the slider and add whistle instead to clap to slider body, and add finish instead to whistle to end of the slider( maybe soft-finish is better? ) and 00:42:857 (3) - add finish
8. 00:48:857 (2,4) - add clap to end of the slider
9. 00:52:285 (2) - remove clap
10. 01:07:285 (2,3) - same as 00:14:142 (2,3)
11. 01:08:571 (4) - add clap to end of the slider
12. 01:13:714~01:27:428 - comment same as 00:20:571~00:34:285 my suggestion hitsound ↓
    
    SPOILER

    ・01:16:714 (1,3) - I thought that there is no need of this slider tickclap
    ・01:17:999 (3) - add clap instead to finish to end of the slider
    ・01:18:857 (1,2) - add finish
    ・01:19:714 (3) - add finish to start of the slider and add clap to end of the slider
    ・01:24:428 (2,4) - add clap instead to finish
    ・01:25:714 (5) - add finish to start of the slider and add clap to end of the slider
13. 01:32:571 (5,1) - Why did you add few jumps here? yep. Probably this will not affect the play. but This is Easy diff. You should not make such a pattern in the later half of the song. and same as 01:39:428 (1,1) - . If you want to put such a pattern, It should be made in consideration of the balance. When make it the next time, please refer to it.
14. 01:34:285 (1,2,1) - same as 00:41:142 (1,2)
15. 01:36:000 (1) - remove NC. same pattern as 00:42:857 (3) -
16. 01:39:428 (1) - ^ 00:46:285 (5) -
17. 01:41:142 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
18. 01:41:999 (2,4) - add clap to end of the slider
19. 01:44:571 (1,2,3) - I think better fit to put only finish.
20. 01:47:999 (1,2,1,2) - i suggest that these change to the slider for Easy. because Rhythm pattern for the first time at the end. so I suggested the rhythm that was easy to take 300 point for easy.
21. 01:48:641 (2,2) - ^

1. 00:06:856 (1) - same as Easy diff
2. 00:06:857~00:20:571 - less hitsound. It is quieter than Easy. I recommend that you put clap more moderately.
3. 00:09:857 (4) - remove finish. I can't recommend that you put them at the same time except when it really matches.
4. 00:12:857 (3) - i prefer this circle change to the slider, and expanded the rhythm. http://puu.sh/2n7wc
5. 00:14:142 (2,3) - hitsound same as Easy diff.
6. 00:20:571~00:34:285 - comment as 00:06:857~00:20:571. Please add hitsound refer to the Easy
7. 00:22:285 (3,1,2) - I cannot recommend such a pattern. because these are placed by the same spacing. i mean 00:22:285 (3,2) - 00:22:714 (1,2) - . but rhythm is different. actually 00:22:285 (3,1) - This spacing is correct. since it may push it with wrong rhythm. so I think that you should take the spacing that does not crowd it for Easy, Normal diff. This is that I thought.
8. 00:35:142 (2,2) - add clap to start of the slider?
9. 00:41:142 (1,2,3,4,1) - hitsound same as Easy.
10. 00:55:500 (2,4,5) - add finish
11. 00:57:428 (1) - spinner end 00:59:142. It is where the sound will begin sounding synthesizer.
12. 01:00:000~01:13:714 - comment as 00:06:857~00:20:571.
13. 01:08:571 (4) - add NC
14. 01:15:428 (3,1,2) - same as 00:22:285 (3,1,2)
15. 01:27:428 (1) - add finish to start of the slider.
16. 01:28:285 (2,2) - add clap to start of the slider.
17. 01:34:285 (1,2) - hitsound same as Easy.
18. 01:47:999 (1,2) - add finish instead to whistle
19. 01:49:713 (1,2) - remove whistle
20. 01:50:784 (1) - spinner start 01:50:571. same as 00:57:428 (1) -

• What does this diff name mean o.o? but maybe 「Path of Glory」 is better?

1. 00:06:857~00:20:571 - same comment as normal diff.
2. 00:35:142 (2,2) - add clap to start of the slider
3. 00:52:285 (2) - add NC. 00:51:428 (1,2) - 00:52:285 (2,3) - For these different rhythm but the same spacing
4. 00:53:785 (4,5,6,7,8) - Suggestion of the flow: Make a jump in this star formation. http://puu.sh/2naWk or http://puu.sh/2nb0u If you use the latter, 00:54:857 (1,2) - You should adjust these. http://puu.sh/2nb9e )
5. 00:56:571 (1) - add finish instead to clap
6. 00:57:321 (1) - remove finish
7. 01:00:214 (1) - remove NC. 00:59:999 (1) - i thought this single NC was not so good for an appearance.
8. 01:00:000~01:13:714 - same as Normal diff.
9. 01:05:999 (3) - remove whistle to end of the slider. and 01:06:321 (4,6) - add whistle?
10. 01:12:642 (x) - I think better to put a note here as well the rhythm will become good. not only follow the sound, i think It is also important that make rhythm better.
11. 01:23:142 (4) - add NC or 00:29:999 (1) - remove NC. because These are the same pattern. so better to unify it.
12. 01:26:571 (4,5) - Suggestion of the flow: Ctrl + G. will give them a little jump
13. 01:37:500 (x) - I think better to put a note here like 00:43:928 (4) - rhythm here.
14. 01:28:285 (2,2) - add clap to start of the slider
15. 01:44:571 (1,2,4) - add finish instead to clap
16. 01:45:428 (2) - same as 00:52:285 (2)
17. 01:47:999 (1) - add finish instead to clap to start of the slider
18. 01:49:714 (5,7) - ^
19. 01:50:357 (7,1) - The sound of the 01:50:571 it sounds a little unnecessary. I think that you should put a spinner just after 01:50:357 outstanding sounds. It like 00:57:214 (4,1).
20. 01:50:464 (1) - I think that 01:52:714 is enough for the end of the spinner. have a drum sound there.

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ rezoons

from my queue~

first, You forget to give kudosu to Zazalng o.o? Yeah, i completly forgeot. I hope she/he won't kill me.
If it is not helpful, you should write about it

ok. here my mod~

[General]

1. Difficulty settings: Why did you change Path Of Glory diff from Hard to Insane? Easy ⇒ Normal ⇒ Insane This setting does not have good balance. ( Because it does not have Hard of the middle degree of difficulty) but I think the actual setting is sufficient. since you have slightly difficult Normal. and Insane is not too difficult. Because i thought that it was too hard to be called a "Hard" but i rename it like you suggest.
   I recommend that you hide the Insane of the Creator's Words. i mean Path Of Glory (Insane) ⇒ Path Of Glory. Because it makes diff balance look bad only by an appearance. It will also hide the "insanity" of the Creator's words.... *Ba Dum Tish*
2. Song Setup - Artist - 「Aoi Shoudo」 Is this a Japanese? I was able to find the Romaji, too. but I was not able to find it other than it...orz It was already in the mp3 so i didn't check any further.
3. KIAI TIME - kia time start 00:59:999 - It is not put on the line. so better to put 01:00:000 all diff.Fixed

[Easy]
I'm a begginer mapper (but i think you know that) and hitsounds is one of my weekness so i thank you a lot for all your suggestions.

1. 00:06:856 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. like Insane diff. It matches song very much Fixed
2. 00:10:285 (1,2) - 00:06:856 (1,2,3) - I make these with a different flow. for ex: http://puu.sh/2n1RD It is not necessary to change this, but It is also important to entertain the people with a variety of flow. Fixed
3. 00:14:142 (2,3) - I thought soft-finish will fit better than Normal-finish. so i suggest change to Additions:Auto⇒Soft Fixed
4. 00:17:571 (3,4,1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm & flow: http://puu.sh/2n2zF http://puu.sh/2n2B2 ( I thought that the balance of the color was not so good. and 00:19:714 (2,1) - This similar flow, same as the reason above.) This is an example. When you change it, Please adjust it yourself. I really love this pattern. Thank you ^^. (btw i really love your skin too)
5. 00:20:571~00:34:285 - during this time, I think that your original clap matches song very much but I tried a few suggestions.
   
   SPOILER

   ・00:23:571 (1,2) - I thought that there is no need of this slider tickclap Well, i don't know.I'll let them and see if someone else suggest that i should remove them.
   ・00:25:285 (3) - add clap instead to finish Fixed
   ・00:25:714 (1,2) - add finish Fixed
   ・00:26:571 (3) - add finish to start of the slider and add clap to end of the slider Fixed
   ・00:31:285 (2,4) - add clap instead to finish. Fixed
   ・00:32:571 (5) - add finish to start of the slider and add clap to end of the slider Fixed
6. 00:31:285 (2,4) - remove finish and instead 00:32:571 (5) - add finish to start of the slider. I think that it is better than consecutive finish Fixed
7. 00:41:142 (1,2) - I think that finish matches end of the slider than a whistle. so i suggest add whistle to start of the slider and add whistle instead to clap to slider body, and add finish instead to whistle to end of the slider( maybe soft-finish is better? ) and 00:42:857 (3) - add finish Fixed
8. 00:48:857 (2,4) - add clap to end of the slider Fixed
9. 00:52:285 (2) - remove clap Fixed
10. 01:07:285 (2,3) - same as 00:14:142 (2,3) Fixed
11. 01:08:571 (4) - add clap to end of the slider Fixed
12. 01:13:714~01:27:428 - comment same as 00:20:571~00:34:285 my suggestion hitsound ↓ Same modification than before
13. 01:32:571 (5,1) - Why did you add few jumps here? yep. Probably this will not affect the play. but This is Easy diff. You should not make such a pattern in the later half of the song. and same as 01:39:428 (1,1) - . If you want to put such a pattern, It should be made in consideration of the balance. When make it the next time, please refer to it. I didn't want to add jump. The first time i think it's because i messed up with the distance snapping and the seconde time it's for the pattern. But i removed the jump in both case.
14. 01:34:285 (1,2,1) - same as 00:41:142 (1,2) Fixed
15. 01:36:000 (1) - remove NC. same pattern as 00:42:857 (3) - Fixed
16. 01:39:428 (1) - ^ 00:46:285 (5) - Fixed
17. 01:41:142 (1) - add finish to start of the slider Fixed
18. 01:41:999 (2,4) - add clap to end of the slider Fixed
19. 01:44:571 (1,2,3) - I think better fit to put only finish. Fixed
20. 01:47:999 (1,2,1,2) - i suggest that these change to the slider for Easy. because Rhythm pattern for the first time at the end. so I suggested the rhythm that was easy to take 300 point for easy. Change to one 1/2 beath-length-slider plus one note
21. 01:48:641 (2,2) - ^ ^

[Normal]

1. 00:06:856 (1) - same as Easy diff Fixed
2. 00:06:857~00:20:571 - less hitsound. It is quieter than Easy. I recommend that you put clap more moderately. Fixed
3. 00:09:857 (4) - remove finish. I can't recommend that you put them at the same time except when it really matches. Fixed
4. 00:12:857 (3) - i prefer this circle change to the slider, and expanded the rhythm. http://puu.sh/2n7wc I doesn't fit the rythm quite well but i have added a slider to fill the gap
5. 00:14:142 (2,3) - hitsound same as Easy diff. Fixed
6. 00:20:571~00:34:285 - comment as 00:06:857~00:20:571. Please add hitsound refer to the Easy Fixed
7. 00:22:285 (3,1,2) - I cannot recommend such a pattern. because these are placed by the same spacing. i mean 00:22:285 (3,2) - 00:22:714 (1,2) - . but rhythm is different. actually 00:22:285 (3,1) - This spacing is correct. since it may push it with wrong rhythm. so I think that you should take the spacing that does not crowd it for Easy, Normal diff. This is that I thought. I'm not sure if i've understood well but i think it's fixed.
8. 00:35:142 (2,2) - add clap to start of the slider? I must say i don't like it.
9. 00:41:142 (1,2,3,4,1) - hitsound same as Easy. Fixed
10. 00:55:500 (2,4,5) - add finish Fixed
11. 00:57:428 (1) - spinner end 00:59:142. It is where the sound will begin sounding synthesizer. Fixed
12. 01:00:000~01:13:714 - comment as 00:06:857~00:20:571. Fixed
13. 01:08:571 (4) - add NC Fixed
14. 01:15:428 (3,1,2) - same as 00:22:285 (3,1,2) Fixed
15. 01:27:428 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. Fixed
16. 01:28:285 (2,2) - add clap to start of the slider. No, for the same reason
17. 01:34:285 (1,2) - hitsound same as Easy. Fixed
18. 01:47:999 (1,2) - add finish instead to whistle Fixed
19. 01:49:713 (1,2) - remove whistle Fixed
20. 01:50:784 (1) - spinner start 01:50:571. same as 00:57:428 (1) - Fixed

[Path Of Glory]

• What does this diff name mean o.o? but maybe 「Path of Glory」 is better? In the Video Game it's the title of the "book" (so, Path Of Glory) made by a young fan of the Steel Samourai

1. 00:06:857~00:20:571 - same comment as normal diff. Fixed
2. 00:35:142 (2,2) - add clap to start of the slider No
3. 00:52:285 (2) - add NC. 00:51:428 (1,2) - 00:52:285 (2,3) - For these different rhythm but the same spacing Fixed
4. 00:53:785 (4,5,6,7,8) - Suggestion of the flow: Make a jump in this star formation. http://puu.sh/2naWk or http://puu.sh/2nb0u If you use the latter, 00:54:857 (1,2) - You should adjust these. http://puu.sh/2nb9e ) Fixed
5. 00:56:571 (1) - add finish instead to clap Fixed
6. 00:57:321 (1) - remove finish Fixed
7. 01:00:214 (1) - remove NC. 00:59:999 (1) - i thought this single NC was not so good for an appearance. Fixed. It was suggested by a modder with a good experience in mapping even if i had doubt but since you have an even better experience i'll trust you on this one.
8. 01:00:000~01:13:714 - same as Normal diff. Fixed
9. 01:05:999 (3) - remove whistle to end of the slider. and 01:06:321 (4,6) - add whistle? Fixed
10. 01:12:642 (x) - I think better to put a note here as well the rhythm will become good. not only follow the sound, i think It is also important that make rhythm better. Fixed
11. 01:23:142 (4) - add NC or 00:29:999 (1) - remove NC. because These are the same pattern. so better to unify it. Fixed
12. 01:26:571 (4,5) - Suggestion of the flow: Ctrl + G. will give them a little jump Fixed
13. 01:37:500 (x) - I think better to put a note here like 00:43:928 (4) - rhythm here. Fixed
14. 01:28:285 (2,2) - add clap to start of the slider No
15. 01:44:571 (1,2,4) - add finish instead to clap Fixed
16. 01:45:428 (2) - same as 00:52:285 (2) Fixed
17. 01:47:999 (1) - add finish instead to clap to start of the slider Fixed
18. 01:49:714 (5,7) - ^ Fixed
19. 01:50:357 (7,1) - The sound of the 01:50:571 it sounds a little unnecessary. I think that you should put a spinner just after 01:50:357 outstanding sounds. It like 00:57:214 (4,1). But for the pattern it's better to keep things this way.
20. 01:50:464 (1) - I think that 01:52:714 is enough for the end of the spinner. have a drum sound there. Fixed

Most of the form&rhythm does not have the problem. but I think that hitsound has to be improved more. At first, Please try how to use the same in all diff. and Please pay attention to sound more. it have various sounds there. I don't have a good ear for hitsounds so that's why i need help with them and your help is quite enough. I really owe you on this one.

Good luck~

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
From my Modding Queue.

General
Looking good!

Easy
00:17:143 (2) - Fix spacing. WTF! Should have been a missclick. Fixed
00:23:571 (1) - Remove finish on the beginning. I'll trust kosiga's hitsounds suggestions on this one. Maybe if someone else point it out but for the moment i keep it this way.
00:24:428 (2) - ^ ^
00:44:571 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm, feels kinda weird since they are following a straight line, consider moving them to improve flow. Fixed
01:08:571 (4) - New Combo. Fixed
01:15:428 (3) - Hmm, it's better not to put sliders that high on the grid, you should lower this one. It's maybe high here but in the playfield it's good.
01:16:714 (1) - Same as 00:23:571 (1). Same as 00:23:571 (1)
01:17:571 (2) - Remove finish. No, same reason.

Normal
00:23:571 (1) - Remove finish on beginning. ^
00:24:428 (2) - Remove finish. ^
00:25:714 (1) - Add finish? Clap added like in "normal"
00:32:142 (4) - I'd place this circle on x:256 y:260 to improve flow. http://puu.sh/2uomz Fixed
00:31:285 (2) - Remove Finish. No
00:32:571 (1) - Add finish. Clap added like in "normal"
00:38:142 (2) - Remove clap. ^
00:38:999 (4) - ^ ^
00:51:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as on Easy, placing them on a straight line doesn't looks fine. Fixed. In fact the pattern is now way better thanks.

Path of Glory
00:27:000 - Consider adding a note here to follow the beat. Plus it would be nice for the stream. I did that at the start but the sound is kind of awkward so i keep it like this.
01:10:285 - Why no circle here? Because i follow the music.... but it kils the flow so i will add one.
01:11:571 - ^ ^
01:20:142 - Same as 00:27:000 Same as 00:27:000
01:50:357 (7) - Consider replacing this slider for a circle, so the spin can start on a better place.http://puu.sh/2uoOd Since you're not the first one to suggest it: Fixed

Good luck!

ChivaCookie wrote:

ohai~ there. So lets begin:

I really like the song and because you requested a mod from a little Cookie you get it.

Easy

I like the map. The timing seems to be right and the notes are placed reasonable. I can only make some suggestions for your map.

00:13:285 - I think you should put a circle there. It sounds good and would fit. Without it you can clearly hear the base-drum which annoys me a bit. I follow the guitar in this diff so a circle wont do it.

00:13:714 - I wouldn't start a new combo here, but at 00:14:142 - , because the two notes after that should be exaggerated, like in the song. The same at 01:06:857. If i had had your other circle then yes i would have put a NC here but without it avoids the combo of one note.

00:39:428 - Instead of a "normal" sampleset, you should let the slider sound with "drum", this way the player could also hear the little tension, the componist used. Fixed

That's all, I think.

Normal

I can't find much. Actually it is pretty well mapped. There's only one thing that could sound better:

01:12:642 - Gou could place another hitsound there, filling the gap. There is a blank here in the song and i don't think a transition beat is needed here just for a Normal.

That's all...

Path of Glory

Again I can't find much. But I try to make some suggestions again.

00:10:928 - I would place the note somewhere else, maybe at x:256 y:200. Otherwise you'll destroy the flow. It seems absurd. Maybe you don't point the right note.....

Yeah. Nothing else.

General

Easy

Normal

Path Of Glory

Kitsuneko wrote:

Hello, rezoons.
Modding from ＼( 'ω')／Kitsuneko's Modding Queue＼('ω' )／

General

• 
  
  

1. General is OK

Easy

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. Clear

Hitsounding

1. 00:16:714 - Add clap Fixed

Mapping

1. 01:10:286 (2,1,2,3,4) - Unkind to newbie player since It's stacked three times on same point. Fixed
   
   Example of placements:
   
   img

   
2. 00:53:142 (3) - X:392 Y:220. 00:51:428 (1,2,3) - make equilateral triangle and line of 00:50:142 (4).Fixed

Normal

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. Clear

Hitsounding

1. OK

Mapping

1. 00:18:642 (1) - It has two issues. one, it's close from 00:18:214 (3) . two, it's hard to read repeat times. Fixed but in a different way.
   
   If I make that:
   
   img

   
2. 00:43:499 (3,4) - Replace to slider. Fixed

Path Of Glory

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. Set Stack Leniency over 5. 2 is too rarely case and disadvantage to rank. I can't because of 00:47:142 (2) and 00:48:857 (2).

Hitsounding

1. 00:07:285 - Add clap Fixed
2. 00:10:714 - ^ Fixed
3. 00:13:285 (3) - ^ Fixed
4. 00:16:500 (5,6) - ^, (5) is up to you. Fixed but not 5
5. 00:17:142 (1) - Remove clap Fixed
6. 00:17:571 (3) - Add clap Fixed
7. 00:52:714 (2) - Remove clap Fixed
8. 01:00:428 (3) - Add clap Fixed
9. 01:06:428 (5) - ^ Fixed
10. 01:08:999 (5) - ^ Fixed
11. 01:09:642 (1,2) - ^, (1) is up to you. Fixed but not 1
12. 01:45:857 (2) - Remove clap Fixed
13. 01:48:214 - Add whsitle Fixed
14. 01:48:642 - ^ Fixed
15. 01:49:714 - ^ Fixed
16. 01:50:357 (7) - ^ Fixed

Mapping

1. 01:16:071 (2) - DON'T USE Unreadable Slider. body of all is covered by slider. Definitely it's Unrankable.I have seen this in ranked map and the MAT below didn't said anything so, i'll keep it for the moment.

Good luck :3


Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues

Teara wrote:

Hi.

Good mapset. But it lacks a decent Hard. It's Easy -> Normal -> Insane at the moment. Get a Hard then a few mods and call me back for a re-check & possible bubble. That's why i change it's name but yeah, i'll mod a Hard. I just don't know how long it will take but thanks for your proposition. ^^

[Easy]

00:41:142 (1) - Add a whistle and remove the clap on the entire slider. Fixed
00:42:000 (2) - Add a whistle and remove the clap on the entire slider. Fixed
01:34:285 (1) - Add a whistle and remove the clap on the entire slider. Fixed
01:35:142 (2) - Add a whistle and remove the clap on the entire slider. Fixed
01:43:285 (4) - Remove the clap on repeat 1 (at 01:43:713). Fixed

[Normal]

01:46:285 (5,1) - this is slightly hidden, and makes its very hard (for a normal). Consider the same type of spacing you used earlier. Fixed but in another way.

That is all I could see.

Good job.

[Path of Glory]

Any reason Stack Leniency is 2? I'd suggest you make it 3, since 2 is rarely used and some BAT's might have an issue with it. That's because of 00:47:142 (2) and 00:48:857 (2) with a higher SL they would move a little bit and it would get ugly while playing. So that's either that or change the positions of the notes.

00:27:107 (5,6) - These two stacks are really hard to hit while playing. So, here is my suggestion to improve it while keeping the effect the same. You know what? You're the only one in 15 mod to show me a good way to fix this without changing the effect. Thank you.Fixed

Delete 4 & 5 and make it a slider.



01:20:249 (5,6) - ^ same idea as above. Fixed

Rest looks good.

PortalLife wrote:

Mod queue

Easy
01:32:142: (4) I think that you should put this circle here rather than putting it where (1) was. Not a bad idea but i would have to move everything in order to keep the DS and it would cause 01:43:285 (4) to be too high.

SPOILER

Normal

00:41:571: (2) I don't like the circle under silder here. Put it at the end of the silder? Yeah, why not.
00:42:428: (4) ^ ^

Path of Glory
00:15:535: (2) I don't hear anything here, so why is the 1/4 here? I suggest you delete it. There are three note of the guitar separate by 1/4 beat.
00:25:714: (1,2,3, 1,2,3, 1,2,3,4) Some of these 1/4's are again mapped to nothing, or you have a beat on no sounds. I listened in and this is what I got on the timeline. I suggest you restructure this based on the picture: There are notes of.... whatever this instriument is. I assure you

SPOILER

How you pattern this is up to you
01:01:607: (2) Same thing as 00:15 Same thing
01:03:750: (3) ^ ^
01:06:964: (2) ^ ^
01:08:678: (2) ^ ^
01:08:892: (4) ^ ^
01:18:857: (1, 2, 3, 1 ,2, 3, 1. 2, 3, 4, 5, 6) Same kind of deal as 00:25. Heres what I suggest to make it sound nicest. Same thing

SPOILER

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Good luck with ranking.

rezoons wrote:

1. 01:16:071 (2) - DON'T USE Unreadable Slider. body of all is covered by slider. Definitely it's Unrankable.I have seen this in ranked map and the MAT below didn't said anything so, i'll keep it for the moment.

Teara wrote:

Just to verify, this is rankable, I can see it fine with new default skin, and because it has a different combo color, it doesn't feel hidden.

Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end.

Cobra wrote:

Hi! M4M
You said for me to mod only the hard and path of glory diff, but my mods are kind of short too, so i'll mod normal too Well... Thank you ^^

Hard
00:16:071 (4) - move this so it isnt touching (3) Fixed. I changed the CS at the last minute so that's why they touched.
00:19:285 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:26:571 (1) - short multi-reverse sliders with notes quickly after arent fun D: I know but i didn't find anything else for this pattern. Just a slider is too easy and i can't do the same thing that i've done in Insane.
00:43:928 (3) - create some sort of blanket over (1)? That's what i did. But over the whole slider and note just the beggining.
00:56:571 (5) - move this a little higher Fixed

Path of Glory
00:44:571 (1) - move 1 unit right to line up with end of previous slider, sorry if its nazi but im a perfectionist plus you have a lot of perfect stuff in here already Fixed. And don't worry i'm a perfectionist too.
01:12:642 (4) - move 8 units down? I prefer when it's centered and with AR 8 we can't see that it's not stacked with the slider.
01:43:500 (6) - try it like this, this is how i do mine and i think it looks nice (symmetrical points btw): http://puu.sh/2xdcj (you don't have to put it in the spot i made it in) That's much better. Thank you ^^

Normal
It's definitely a little crowded in here, i think its okay to use distance snap 1.1x if this ever happens. obviously it would need remapping, so, up to you. (or maybe 1.1x is bad, dont listen to me adsgdfhjkh) Well it's just the limit allowing the note to don't overlap so i'll keep it like this.
01:21:428 (1,2) - these sliders dont line up perfectly in the middle Fixed
01:22:285 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:46:928 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - too hard for normal i think ._. Maybe.... I'll see with a MAT but for the moment i'l keep it like this.

I would mod easy but I found nothing.
You have a very beautiful clean mapping style, I like it! Thank you ^^. Your mapping style is different but i like it too.
Sorry if this is a short/bad mod, I think it's better than some mods I've seen out there though ._. There is always worse and always better. But the important is that your mod was helpful.
Nice map, good luck! Thanks for M4M.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi o/
Summoned here via ~ ★ Dake's and Irre's Modding Queue ★ ~
I loved this case when I played Ace Attorney :3
Here I go.

[General]
This is a quite oldish style map, but it's still a nice one. Thanks ^^. I like old style. Even if it has a low reputation because of all the poor map which have been mapped like this.
Maybe add Nintendo to tags ;3 I don't think it's really useful. In fact, PW is from capcom and has no link with nintendo. XD

[Easy]
Nice diff, I'll give you some suggestions in aesthetics, that I think it's the weak point of this map, should be better after this. One of the first diff i ever mapped and at the time i hadn't any experience in mapping so... well it's kinda flawed.
00:19:285 (5) - I don't like how this sharp slider looks, try making a nice soft curve that matches wit the next sliders, maybe like this.

SPOILER

Fixed
00:23:571 - 00:27:428 - Maybe return to the normal sampleset in this part, the claps as sliderticks don't fit too much here in my opinion. I'm not sure but i think someone else also pointed this so... Fixed.
00:37:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - This looked a bit weird for me while playing as it's a bit stretch pattern, you can make a near regular pentagon, Fixed but my pattern is slightly diffrent from the one you suggested.

SPOILER

(1) and (5) keep their placement
00:38:142 (2) - x:196 y:296
00:38:571 (3) - x:108 y:244
00:38:999 (4) - x:128 y:148

01:03:428 (1) - Make this a bezier slider instead a sharp one. Fixed

SPOILER

I'll put you the coordinates for the nodes. Fixed. And thank you, you're the first modder i know to do that ^^.
1st x:244 y:48
2nd (red) x:344 y:48
3rd x:360 y:48
4th x:436 y:56
5th x:444 y:136
6th (red) x:444 y:152
7th x:444 y:196

01:05:142 (2) - If you do what I said above, remember to fix the spacing for this object, and maybe you will want to re-arrange the next two circles too. Fixed
01:16:714 - 01:20:571 - Maybe return to the normal sampleset in this part, the claps as sliderticks don't fit too much here in my opinion. Fixed
01:41:142 (1) - I think you forgot to put a clap in the end of this slider. Fixed
01:41:999 (2) - If I was right above, you put an extra clap in the beginning of this, remove it. Fixed (well... i missplaced it)

Somehow nazi stuff below, little aesthetical things that don't have any noticeable effect in gameplay, but may add a nice look to the map, feel free to follow or ignore.
00:15:428 (1) - Move the last node 2 grid to the right, and the 3rd and 4th nodes (the ones at the right side) 1 grid to the right, and we have a nice perfect symmetrical slider. Fixed. It's perfect now.
01:39:428 (5) - As above, the result will be a nice symmetrical slider and not look so close to the previous slider. Move the bottom nodes 1 grid down and the upper ones 1 grid up, then move the whole slider 1 grid left. Tada~ Fixed. It's perfect now.
[Normal]
To be honest, this is a quite fast Normal, I recommend to lower the Slider Velocity to around 1.30-1.40, it would be more friendly to the players that are still improving in the game, but well, you have some nice patterns here that might be destroyed if you do this, so feel free to keep your actual SV. It was intended to be a normal + diff. It was when i thought to make only 3 diff. But well now i have a hard so i have to call it normal.
00:23:571 - 00:27:428 - As I mentioned in Easy, return to Normal sampleset in this part. Fixed
00:27:428 (1,2,1,2) - All this would play better as 1/1 sliders, Due to the SV you use it may be a bit hard to handle. Indeed. But it's not bad either with these slider.
00:41:142 (1,2) - I think it would be better if these is joint into a 1/1 slider, following the guitar is nice for this one. Fixed (with an arrow)
00:42:000 (3,4) - As above. ^
00:42:857 (1,2,3,4) - If you follow the ones I pointed above, let's keep following guitar and make this. Well, not this time. I think what i've done is good enough for this part.

00:53:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A lot of circles in 1/2, it's nice to play, but it may be too much for a Normal, though you can keep your short repeating for (1). Well it kinda makes sense in a normal+ diff but since it's a normal..... I don't know i'll see later if it's a probleme or not with a Mat or a Bat. But i keep your suggestion in mind.

01:15:428 (3) - I think you're missing a clap here. Fixed
01:20:571 (1,2,1,2) - As I said in 00:27:428. As I said in 00:27:428.
01:35:999 (1,2,3,4) - As I said in 00:42:857. As I said in 00:42:857.
01:46:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - As in 00:53:357. As in 00:53:357.
[Hard]
The best diff in this mapset in my opinion, there are some jumpy parts but the way the objects are placed makes easy to read them.
Maybe you should increase the Circle Size to 4, all will look a lot cleaner. Seriously? I completly rushed it in two days because MAT said that i needed one. Well it means i'm getting better at this ^^..... maybe.
00:26:571 (1,2,3) - I loved this part, the way you use syncopation it's very nice, good job, but you should unstack (2,3), by this you will make this part less confusing, as it may be hit as it was 1/4 beat after the slider and not 1/2. ....... Well, i learned a new word XD. As we say in france: je me coucherai moins bête ce soir (i'll sleep less stupid tonight). Anyway, i agree with you. Fixed.
01:14:571 (2) - Remove the finish in the end of the slider, doesn't fit at all. How did it get here? Fixed.
01:20:250 (2,3) - As I said a bit above, unstack it. Fixed
[Path of Glory]
Just one thing, if you could make the triples less spaced it will be a nice diff, any value for Distance Snapping between 0.6x and 0.8x would work for that. I mapped with a DS of 1x so if the DS of triples were lower it would force the player to slow down. My insane being very fast i think it would kill the flow.
00:26:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part would play better as only circles, all this call for be tapped while playing, the slider is only making things a bit annoying in my opinion (I know it's an Insane, but it still has to be nice to play ;3). AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *hum* sorry for the outburst. But i will explain. Since the start everybody tell me to change it and whatever the change i made there is still someone to tell me anything else. So, i think that whatever i'll choose it won't please everybody. So, i'll do by instinct and use my old 4+2 notes.
00:27:428 (1,2,3) - This sliders are somehow consistent in all diffs, so no need to change, but it would be more fun if you follow the bass for this part, maybe something like this. Maybe. Unfortunately i won't change it.

00:43:928 (4) - I don't like so much sharp sliders, you could make a nice curve for this, maybe a circular slider would fit very nice here. Fixed.
01:02:357 (6) - Make this sliders as a curved one, too sharp in my opinion. I understand you ahte them. But one sharp slider form time to time doesn't hurt anyone. ^^
01:19:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - As I said first, this would be a lot more better and more fun if all here are only circles. Fixed my own way.
01:20:571 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:27:428. Same as 00:27:428.
01:16:714 (1) - Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. This can be easily read as a circle instead as an slider, or unless you have a very sharp eye, I noticed until checking in editor it was an slider. An alternative way to keep your flow could be something like this: MAT said it was OK. But wel, since everyone is bithcin complaining about it i will change (but differently from what you suggested.

SPOILER

That's all from my part, nice job so far, keep improving, good luck ;3

Posting my records for actual state because I managed to pass all in a random play ;3

Easy: http://puu.sh/2xMFO
Normal: http://puu.sh/2xMLd
Hard: http://puu.sh/2xMPL
Path of Glory: http://puu.sh/2xMTX

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi~ From My M4M Queues~

[Easy]

• Mapping
  Modding is for slider shape or pattern

1. 00:14:999 (3) - Try This? Sorry, i prefer my way in this case.
   
2. 00:19:285 (5) - Do You like this Slider? Already fixed thanks to DakeDekaane but thnaks anyway ^^
   
   
3. 00:25:714 (1) - Remove NC? I follow the guitar then the... i don't know which instrument it is but it's not the guitar so NC.
4. 01:47:142 - Add Note? It follows nothing. It's just for filling the gap.
   
   
   Hitsound
   hitsound on suggestions
5. 00:10:285 (1) - End Whistle? Why not
6. 00:14:142 (2) - Remove Finish Seems good to me.

[Normal]

• Mapping
  Modding is for slider shape or pattern

1. Why Normal Dff Hard?? Ar-1 Please Becaue it was supposed to be a Normal + diff but MAT said that i should map a HArd anyway so... yeah. But i applied your change.
   
2. 00:08:357 (1) - Remove NC? Nope!
3. 00:25:714 (1) - No Spinner!! Fix Please!! Fixed
4. 00:32:571 (1) - ^ Fixed
5. 00:39:428 (1) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:50:357 (5) - Anti Jump?? Where? It's not a jump at all.
7. 01:25:285 (4) - Try This? Sorry but i prefer my way here.
   
   
8. 01:32:571 (1) - No Spinner!! Fix Please!! Fixed
9. 01:44:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm.. Seating arrangement .. I'm more than Fix look differently What?
10. 01:49:285 (2) - Remove? Turned into a slider.

Ok~ Good Map~ Star~ Really?!?! And two satrs btw?!?! You looked like quite the ooposite in your mod but well thank you ^^
Good Luck~~!!

Dolphin wrote:

Hello from the Modding Queue!
Thanks for M4M! :3

Bold - Should be fixed!
Dark Red - Unrankable
Normal - Suggestion

[General]

This is from Phoenix Wright! I loved this turnabout. It was fun.
Also this is probably one of my favourite songs in Ace Attorney. Yeah! Me too. ^^
You should add "Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney" to the source. That is where the song is from. In fact it's not the original song but a remix (more metal and less 8 bit XD) so i think it should be in the tag but not in the source.
Also I will mod all the diffs because I like the song and the song is short! Woah! Then, thank you very much.

[Easy]

This diff is good for beginners. I wouldn't change much.

• 00:14:142 (2,3) - Please don't stack on easy. Newbie might have trouble reading or understanding it. I agree with you but in this case the difference between the two notes is 2 beat (nearly one second). So, i don't think it's too much trouble because they have the time to see the second one coming.
  00:46:285 (5) - This slider doesn't look so nice... Try changing it so that it has more waves. Fixed

[Normal]

Please set AR down 1 tick. The notes appear a bit fast for a normal. Fixed
Please consider renaming this to Normal+, since its a bit fast paced for a Normal difficulty. :p It was intended to be a Normal+ and path of glory to be a hard+ but MAT said that it's an insane and i should map a Hard in order to have a better balance of the diff so if i rename it Normal+ i'm afraid it will also destroy this balance. So i keep the name Normal to give the illusion of it's well balanced (even if i agree with you it's a Normal +)

• 00:13:714 (1,2) - This stack is a bit hard to read for newer people.Fixed

[Hard]

I like the neat patterns!
Please use new combo when changing snapping or you're using a different rhythm (like switching from 1/2 to 1/1) It makes the map easier to read.I prefer when the combo follow the music instead of the map. But i did a recheck of my combo and change some of them trying to follow the music and your suggestion.

• 00:27:107 (2,3) - Please move these two hitcircles away from the slider, it looks like they continue the slider's 1/4 stream. Not really. All the stream are made with a DS of 0.5x and the two notes are away with a DS of 1x and since there are 1/2 beats of difference between these two notes and the slider, and 1/4 beat in the stream that menas there are 4 times further from the slider than they would be if they would continue the stream. So, they can't really look loke continuing the stream.
  00:25:714 (6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2) - Use Whistle Hitsound please! It fits better with the music! Fixed
  01:18:857 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Please use the Whistle Hitsound here as well please! color=#80BF00]Fixed[/color]
  01:20:250 (2,3) - Please move these hitcircles in the same fashion as 00:27:107 (2,3) same explanation
  01:26:035 (6,7) - Move these hitcircles so that it's easier to see that it's continuing stream. The AR is high enough to see that. I also add a NC in order to help seeing this.
  01:46:607 (8,1) - Awkward Combo Change. Also please move them in the same way as above. Fixed (the combo)

[Path Of Glory]

I love this difficulty! It has awesome patterns and it looks pretty! Thanks you. It's the one where i put the more effort so i'm glad you like it.

• 00:25:714 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Please use Whistle Hitsound! Fits nicely to the song. Fixed
  01:18:857 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Same as above. Fixed

This song is deffo one of my favourites! Well, it's one of my favourtie remix of PW song. That's why i mapped it. And maybe i'll map other song like this one later.
You should have someone map a Taiko for it I nearly never play taiko so i don't really know how Taiko GD works but if someone ask me i will gladly accept.
If you have any questions, PM me in-game!
Good Luck!

Here, take my star~ <3 Thanks ^^

JauiPlaY wrote:

Hi~
Just some suggestions:

[General]
BG was kinda frightening. Seriously?

[Easy]
00:53:142 - Can't understand why you set such a break here...imo it's unnecessary. Because i've been told that easy needed breaks and i didn't know where to put one except here.
01:50:784 (1) - Move the beginning to 01:50:464. Fixed

[Normal]
DS 1.0 makes this diff kinda awkward... Maybe.... But i won't remap it (anyway nobody cares about the normal diff)
00:28:285 (2,2) - Unperfect stacking. Fixed
00:32:571 (5) - Imo it should ends on 00:33:428. Fixed
00:53:142 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Too difficult for a normal... Since everybody tell me that i think i will change it (but i don't know how yet)
00:57:428 (1) - Move the beginning to 00:57:321. Fixed
01:46:285 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Difficult and confusing. Same thing
01:50:571 (1) - Move the beginning to 01:50:464. Fixed

[Hard]
00:57:428 (1) - Move the beginning to 00:57:321. Fixed
01:47:357 (5) - New combo. No
01:50:571 (1) - Move the beginning to 01:50:464. Fixed

[Path Of Glory]
00:09:214 (6,7) - Weird shape...the shape of 00:11:357 (7) is much better than this. Fixed
00:14:999 (3,1,2,3) - Unperfect stacking. Fixed
00:43:928 (4) - 1/4 longer? Fixed but i made it 1/4 shorter (and completly chnaged the pattern)
00:57:428 (1) - Move the beginning to 00:57:321. Fixed
01:50:571 (1) - Move the beginning to 01:50:464. Fixed

Well, the map was pretty fine to me. However, I think still it's not interesting enough. Well, since it's one of my first beatmap "pretty fine" is good for me. I'll try to making thing more interesting in the future when i'll be more experimented.
Good luck.

Laurier wrote:

mod4mod

Path Of Glory
00:09:214 (6,7) - move this ? and make better flow http://puu.sh/2zgsL Fixed
00:15:000 (3,1) - stack miss ? Fixed
00:22:285 (3) - make a curve ? http://puu.sh/2zijb Good idea ^^ . Fixed
00:25:714 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - use this rythm ? http://puu.sh/2zim1 Well, since everybody suggest me something different about this part of the song i've decided to keep what i've done and don't change anything.
01:11:035 - add note ? I don't ear any note here and it would kill the pattern.
01:20:250 (5) - move 1 tick left Fixed

Hard
00:08:571 (7) - NC Fixed (but on the 5)
00:19:607 - add note ? I don't ear any note here and it would kill the pattern.
00:37:714 (5) - NC No need here.
01:18:857 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - use this rythm ? http://puu.sh/2zivw Same as before.

Thats all

Kokatsu wrote:

Randommod.~

General

You should look for a BG in 16:9 resolution (1336x768 preferred). Sorry, i couldn't find one.
Offset is too early, try 10 (resnap all timelines and notes!) I don't see the difference but i trust you on this one.
Your Combocolours seem rather..random? I don't know, I disliked them, so here's a suggestion: Dark blue for the evil Magistrate, Pink for the Pink Princess, Red for the steel samuraï and yellow because...... because.

SPOILER

If you want to use them, copy this lines into your .osu-file:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 149,149,255
Combo2 : 215,215,215
Combo3 : 255,147,201
Combo4 : 239,141,75

Easy

AR+1? Why not.

00:14:152 (2,3) - Do not use stacks on Easydiffs, players won't be able to read timesnap by visually reading, especially when it's not following the previous rhythm. Unstack these. They have 1 whole seconde to anticipate the second circle. I think it let them enough time even if they are begonners.
00:15:438 (1,2) - Remove NC from (1), add NC on (2).Fixed
00:48:867 (2,4) - The claps here are really unfitting, I'd suggest to just remove them. Fixed
01:18:009 (3) - I miss a finish on the sliderend here. I prefer the clap.

Normal

First of all, while playing this was the hardest diff (harder than Hard and Insane), because it was just so unintuitive to play. This combined with that super-low AR lead to me missing so much notes because it was just a cluster somtimes. I know this map is weak. I havn't change anything besides the AR+2 and change it to NORMAL+ becuase everyone ask me to do that but some day i will remap it considering all your suggestion but for the moment i havn't change anything. But all your suggestions are good ^^

AR+1~2, I'd say +2 since the Diff is actually pretty dense for a Normal, but it's up to you.

00:07:500 (3) - Just about the Slider, it starts on a red tick and ends on a white one. This is generally confusing in terms of rhythm/music, especially for new players, since you use this often, you often get confused. It would be better if you change all these sliders to circle + slider, like this:


00:12:214 (2,3,4) - Stuff like this can be really confusing, because it's all so close together. To ensure that people don't misread stuff and to make it look nicer, just delete the blanket of (2).


00:15:428 (1,2,3,4) - It's basically the same. If you want to create circular movement, don't use this "spiral" movement, but something like this:


00:49:499 (2,3,4) - This is another no-go. The space between these and the previous note is unpredictable, since it's too long to read by eye and isn't indicated in any other ways.Adding a note at 00:49:285 would solve the problem. Moreover, the pattern of these three notes with (5) also looks weird, maybe change that.
00:53:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This is just too crowded, preferrably don't set the last (1) inside the hexagon.
00:54:857 (1,2) - This stack is more guessing than actually playing, please space them.
01:04:928 (1,2,3,4) - This again looks clustered, having more space between all notes will make it much easier to read, since this diff is supposed to be easy to play.
01:42:642 (2,3,4,5) - Same as above.
01:46:928 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - As above.

Hard

I enjoyed this diff, was fun to play.~ But.... I totally rushed it because a MAT tell me to do one.... It wasn't supposed to be a good diff......

HP and OD+1 Why not.

00:26:571 (1) - How should the player know that there is another repeat after the first one? There is no indicator that this would be a kickslider (no stream, no intense music, etc.), so please refrain from using one here. Split it up into two 1/4 Slider or 4 single notes? Fixed
01:19:714 (1) - ^ Fixed

Path Of Glory

Rename this to "Path of Glory"? The capitalized "O" looks weird IMO. It's the title of a bokk and the correct title is Path Of Glory so.... no change.
Why is StackLeniency set to 2? That destroys some stacks and makes some parts really unpleasent to read, set it back to default. Because it would destroy some pattern. I don't have the choice.

HP +1. Why not.
OD +1 at least, hardest Diff and I got nearly 100% on my first try. Why not.

00:13:071 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+g feels better here, I have no idea why. Same feeling.
00:15:000 (3,1,2,3) - This is one of the stacks mentioned earlier. It's INSANE! Thay can deal with this.
00:23:571 (1,2,3,4) - The slidershape doesn't fit the pattern very well, straight sliders - or just slightly curved ones - would do much better here. I like my curved one.
00:27:107 (5,6) - With all previous streams being spaced, I don't get why this one isn't. Not really important here.
00:30:857 (1,2,3,4,) - As above. As above.
00:51:428 (7,1) - Add NC on (7), remove NC from (1). Fixed
01:04:071 (5,6) - I really thought these were on 1/4 on my first try. Having a bit higher spacing here (and for the rest of the pattern) would also stress the jumps more. More difficulty? All the way!!!!!!

01:09:642 (1,2,3,4) - If the NC on (1) is just for the higher-pitched music, you should set a NC on (4). Otherwise, remove it from (1) and set it on (4) anyways. Fixed
01:44:571 (7,1) - As above. As above

Good luck.~

tutuhaha wrote:

[Path Of Glory]
00:09:642 (7) - move to x328 y220 will looks more better Fixed
00:17:785 (4,5,1) - spacing Fixed
00:57:321 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - maybe will litter bit hard to read Not really.
01:10:285 (4) - NC？ Fixed
01:13:714 (1) - move to x256 y192 will looks more better Fixed

[Hard]
00:11:142 (6) - maybe move to x292 y164，or move 00:10:500 (2,3,4) - to x292 y164 is also ok too I prefer this way.
00:26:571 (1) - move to x256 y224 will looks more better Fixed
00:49:714 (5) - NC? Fixed
00:57:321 (1,1) - too close in hard diff I think...... No, not really. (Besides, for a spinner, the longer, the easier)

[Normal]
AR+1 Fixed
00:49:285 (x) - add note will be more easy to play...I think =_= I will completly remapped it later because this diff is bad. So i'll this at this moment if i follow your suggestion or not.

then that‘s all
sorry for wait long time ... I don't even remember asking you for a mod. XD

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue

EASY

00:26:153 (2) - fix spacing Fixed. It killed the symmetry a little but i have enough symmetry in this diff.
good diff, not much to say u.u

NORMAL

00:14:142 (2) - maybe move it to x:228 y:332 and move the upper note 00:14:999 (3) - in a way to allign it with the previous one. Fixed
00:49:285 - hm... I'll say to add a note here, I always fail the rithm at this point. Well, a gap of 1.5 beat is tricky so yeah i add one.
01:04:071 (3) - to make this symmetric move it to x:284 y:108 Fixed
01:37:071 (4) - maybe delete this note and add a slider from here 01:37:071 - to here 01:37:500 - it sounds better in my opinion Changed the pattern completly.
01:42:428 - add a note here, if you did at 00:49:285 - Fixed

HARD

00:41:581 (2) - move it 2 grid right if you want to allign it with the previous Fixed
00:42:439 (2) - the same but at left Fixed
00:49:938 (2) - maybe move the second point of this slider to x:384-y256 and the last point at x:469-y:256 in this way if you want the slider will be more symmetric... in my opinion it is better to see, but you can also leave it as it is, it's just a suggestion. I think there is a mistake in the coordonate of the second point but i think i know what you meant and i prefer my way.
00:55:938 (3) - maybe delete this note and make the previous slider longer to 00:55:938 - I think it betters follow the song my way.
01:31:724 (3) - move this one grid up to make this at the same high as 01:30:867 (1) - Fixed

PATH OF GLORY

00:18:652 (1) - maybe move this 2 grid down? Fixed
00:53:367 (1,2,3) - maybe try to make a better line between 00:52:724 (3,4) - . move 00:53:367 (1) - one grid down and one right 00:53:474 (2) - at x:164-y:260 and 00:53:581 (3) - x:204-y:232 Fixed

that's all! the map is good and I especially like your patterns! I love ace attorney and this song, the map is good, so I'll give you a star :3 Thank you for the mod and the star. I really aprecciate it ^^

Deadlyneliel wrote:

Hi there...

this is my mod for your m4m that u made for my map.

I am extremely sorry that it comes so late, but I've been busy. In fact i don't even remember you XD. Thanks anyway. ^^

Well let's see how I can help here.

First you should check every Green timing section. They are unsnapped. ( In every diff ) Fixed. I forgot to do so when i have changed the offset.

Easy

Stuff AiBat told me : Well, it's bean a long time i havn't checked it. I should have did it

00:17:152 (1) - Unsnapped Circle Fixed
01:10:295 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:49:726 (1) - ^ slider Fixed


01:39:439 (5,1) - The Distance snap seems to be inconsistent here. http://puu.sh/2PnnB.png I had to stretch it a little for the pattern. Yes it's a mistake but i prefer letting like this for the pattern.
01:45:439 (2,3) - ^ Euh... No, there isn't any here.
01:48:011 (1) - ^ ^

I think this dif is really nice to play. Good work. Thanks ^^


Normal+

00:54:654 (6) - Unsnapped Fixed
01:41:154 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:47:154 (3) - ^ Fixed
01:47:797 (6) - ^ Fixed



00:07:510 (3) - Move the last point of this slider to : x:184 and y :324 ... I think it looks better Fixed
00:39:439 (1) - ^ to : x:200 y:100 I think it looks better and its better to play Fixed
00:53:153 (5) - what happened with the distance snap here whoops... Fixed
00:57:225 (5) - Check the distance snap ... I am not sure if every note has to be around the same Distance snap in a normal. But I think so. It's a normal+ so it can be strectched but in this case i didn't want to so: Fixed
01:13:725 (1) - ^ No, for the pattern.

Nothing much to say here, too.


Hard

It plays already well. I think you should replace some triplets with 1/4 one-time-repeated sliders. Fixed for some of them
Like those 01:18:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3) to this : http://puu.sh/2Pomf.jpg http://puu.sh/2PomO.jpg
Well I liked the patterns and jumps here. But I think some of the triplets don't fit the song. Maybe I am just stupid right now, D: Well... I hate the people who had a lot of 1/4 which doesn't fit the song just to had difficulty and kill the accuracy so i can assure you that if i had paut a 1/4 it's because it fits the song ^^
Nothing more to say.


Path of Glory

01:00:009 (1) - You should add NC here Fixed

Nothing more to say.

I really like your Mapping style. It fits the song well and it is fun to play your BM. Thank you ^^
Well. Its not much. But I hope I could help you.
And again I have to say that I am really sorry that this mod comes so late. Since i forgot it never pissed me off. On the contrary i was gladly suprised to see anew mod i didn't expect.
The mod for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/71542 will be done in 1-3 days. ( Depends on how much time I got ) About that one! The map is in WIP because of a timing issue so one of the diff hasn't the same timing than others so please ignore it when you'll mod it.

Deadlyneliel

Sonnyc wrote:

Hi. From a promised mod during may-june.

Easy:

00:10:296 (1) - I think there is no point to put a Whistle at the end. Fixed
00:15:439 (2) - NC Fixed
00:38:153 (2,4) - Delete Claps here? nope.
00:42:868 (3) - Whistle rather fits than a Finish. Fixed
00:48:868 (2) - Also here, delete Whistle. Fixed
01:19:296 (2) - Delete Finish i like the finish.
01:36:011 (3) - Whistle Fixed

Normal+:

-- This kind of diff name isn't used these days. Rename to <Normal>, and also since this can be considered a normal. A lot of people said that it was harder than a normal and that i had to rename it Normal+. But i will do what i thought at the start. Name it "Normal" and only rename it if a BAT tell me.

00:07:082 (2) - Add clap at the end. Fixed
00:10:511 (2) - ^ Fixed
00:15:010 (3) - ..? This should be Finish imo Fixed
00:41:153 (1,2) - Add Finish at the end. Fixed
01:01:511 (4) - Delete Clap at the end. Fixed
01:25:725 (1) - Delete Finish Fixed

Hard:

00:11:367 (7) - Delete Whistle at the end.nope
00:17:152 (4) - Since spacing gets larger, NC for readability. Fixed
00:36:010 (3) - Delete Finishi like it.
00:41:581 (2,2) - These mini jump doesn't seem well,, Well, the music is really intense here so i think it's needed here.
00:55:938 (3) - Delete Whislte Fixed
00:56:581 (5) - NC Fixed
00:57:331 (1) - End at 00:59:581. Fixed

Path of Glory:

00:13:724 (5,1) - Start combo from (5), and NC at 00:14:367 (2). Fixed
00:15:010 (3) - Soft-Finish Fixed
00:16:724 (6) - 2 Grids right 1 grid right
00:37:724 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+H plz. The jump from 00:36:867 (2,1) looks weird. Fixed
00:39:438 (1) - Delete Finish. Fixed
01:32:581 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:50:474 (1) - Make the Addition Auto.Fixed

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3 m4m from my queue

Insane
00:13:295 (3) - clap ? Fixed
00:26:152 (1,2,3) - maybe move them together to stack 00:26:152 (1) - under 00:25:295 (5) - 's tail Fixed, good idea.
00:34:081 (7) - move it to (304,208) and it'll be on 00:34:295 (1) - which would looks better ? No, i don't really like it....
00:36:867 (2,2) - maybe avoid this tiny overlap Fixed
00:45:867 (4,1) - this anti-jump don't feel good. I suggest that you make 00:44:581 (1,2,3,4) - to go with a new order of 2-->3-->4-->1-->00:46:295 (1) - And it wou;d feels much better~ Well... You have a keen eye, i completly agree with you ^^. Fixed
01:15:438 (3,1) - exchange NC ? Fixed

Hard
oops, not neeccessary to use CS3, I suppose 4 is ok because big notes make the map kind of cluttered Well, CS4 looks more like an Insane than CS3 so i prefer keeping CS4. Especially for the jump >2x
00:15:652 (3) - clap ad end ? Fixed
00:23:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - a bit difficult in a Hard, as the overlapping pattern is a bit hard to recogonize for hard-level players, though it's ok for you to keep, while I think moving them out to elsewhere like forming blanckets would also be fine Fixed. Moreover the jumps are now less insane-like. It's x2.5 instead of 2.8 and the map has a better flow.
00:51:438 (4) - you used finish instead of clap in Insane for this point, maybe consider to keep them consistent Fixed

already don't have much problem
good luck~

Hollow Wings wrote:

hi, I'm a newbie modder here giving some noob suggestion, most of them are given as a player :3

sry for modding in English, i can't do French~ D:

Normal

00:30:868 (1) - almost touch the slider, maybe u can move it a little, then it looks better... (same to 00:32:153 (4) - i think :3 The key word is "almost" but i moved other notes which touched the slider.
01:01:939 (5,6) - ds didn't snaped? thou they looks better Fixed

hmm... all of notes and sliders in this diff seem to have a little touch each other, maybe that's ur style, but why not just try distance like 01:01:939 (5,6) - with a new ds? this is also a just suggestion That's why i don't really like this diff but it's a littl bit too late to change but i completly agree with you.

Hard

00:18:867 (3,4) - get too closed? maybe u can change their shapes a little, same to 00:09:010 (5) - and 00:09:652 (7) - and so on. they'll look better if u get them a larger distance. :3 Fixed but not by changing their shape
00:36:010 (3) - overlap? idk... i prefer an other pattern (just suggestion Well , i like it.
01:47:795 (7,1) - make them fit? Fixed

Path Of Glory

00:06:867 (1) - move this note to the center of 00:07:724 (3) -'s curve ? just like http://puu.sh/3duZH.jpg. And u need to move slider(2) together to keep ds, maybe rorate it to make a better shape. Fixed
00:23:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think these sliders are too bent to give a good impression to players, most sliders after as well, maybe it's one of ur map style, didn't used in most of maps thou... I know u surposed to do slider and notes like this, but they do well in easy and normal, or even hard diff, but not in this diff... (if u do these sliders on purpose, and tend to fit objs in a very small distance, then just ignore my suggestions here~ D: Fixed and for others slider in my diff but not all.
01:12:867 (5) - reverse? and arrange positon... coz it didn't flow well... Well, ithink it fits good like this imo.
01:19:724 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this partten is just good, maybe u can do 00:26:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the same to these. Well, i like both of them. ^^
01:36:652 (3,4) - didn't fit well coz both of them are the slider style i mentioned before D: Well, when playing i don't see the problem so... maybe it's just me.....

Easy

00:06:867 (1) - see the 1st suggestion in Path Of Glory diff, maybe u can change the slider's shape to keep ds. if that's ur style, ignore me. Same remark as the Normal diff XD
00:10:296 (1) - ^
00:20:582 (1,2,3) - see the 2nd suggestion in Path Of Glory diff, ignore me if this is ur style as well
00:45:868 (4,5) - thou have a correct ds, maybe they are too close? change the silder's shape? u did really well at 01:32:153 (4,5) - (just suggestion Fixed but not by changing it's shape.
01:08:582 (1,2) - i know what u want to do with them, but maybe u can do better by changing the slider's shape. Well, slider shape isn't really my speciality. I agree with you but i can't do it. Sry
01:48:010 (1) - ds unsnaped? thou have a tiny break before... idk... It's because of this break that the DS is unsnapped

interesting Jp song, and jumps in ur maps :3
good luck

1. 01:08:582 (1) - nazi, move the 4th point 2 grid to right?
2. 01:12:868 (3) - i think change into soft curve more better instead sharp curve. look weird since 01:12:011 (2) - and 01:13:724 (1) - soft curve
3. 01:18:010 (3) - change clap in the end into finish and change 01:19:296 (2) - into clap, then in 01:20:582 (1) - add finish in beginning?
4. 01:25:725 (5) - move this 1 grid left
5. 01:39:439 (5) - move the 1st point 2 grid left. look more symmetry i guess. also, if do this, move 1 grid down for 01:38:153 (2,3,4) -
6. 01:43:296 (4) - spacing error

1. 00:32:582 (5) - add new combo in here. too long orz
2. 00:35:153 (2,2) - maybe clap in beginning? add something in there to follow drum in music ;A;
3. 00:49:295 (2,3,4,5,6) - dunno why these rhythm make me a bit confuse, especially between (5) and (6). maybe try the others?
4. 01:04:296 (4,1) - clap in (4)'s end is weird in here. that should be in 01:04:724 - so, add reverse in (4) and add clap in there, then del (1) and add a circle in 01:05:152 -
5. 01:05:368 (2) - try add clap in beginning and reverse? also, remove clap in (3), and add clap again in (4)'s reverse :3
6. 01:07:296 (2,3) - use soft finish like you did in easy? oh, remove whistle in (3) too
7. 01:21:439 (2,1,2) - I think stacked like this will confuse the player.. use normal spacing?
8. 01:42:438 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:49:295 (2,3,4,5,6) -

1. 00:27:117 (3,4) - change into slider is more easier since in blue tick imo
2. 00:33:224 (4,5,6,7,8) - i think in hard diff, jump like this little confusing..
3. 00:35:152 (2,4) - same as normal, add clap in beginning
4. 00:54:224 (6) - new combo for jump?
5. 01:10:938 (5) - ^
6. 01:20:260 (3,4) - same as 00:27:117 (3,4) -
7. 01:26:795 (5) - new combo too?
8. nice, but I think the triplets are too much in here

1. 00:07:724 (3) - maybe change into reverse slider just like (2) more fit with music imo
2. 00:35:152 (2,2) - same here add clap in beginning?
3. 00:56:152 (5) - I think add whistle in beginning sounds nice too. combinated with (4)
4. 01:09:224 (6) - add new combo
5. 01:11:367 (6) - start new combo in here and remove combo in next note. just make the 01:10:295 (1,2,3,4,5) - combo same with 01:09:224 (1,2,3,4,5) -
6. 01:20:260 (5,6) - stack these like you did at 00:27:117 (5,6) - ?
7. 01:27:438 (1) - I like this
8. 01:49:295 (4) - add whistle in beginning too. though that similar with 00:56:152 (5) -

Yasora wrote:

yo there

Easy

1. 01:08:582 (1) - nazi, move the 4th point 2 grid to right? Fixed
2. 01:12:868 (3) - i think change into soft curve more better instead sharp curve. look weird since 01:12:011 (2) - and 01:13:724 (1) - soft curve Well, that's the point. I want more diversity and not only soft curve.
3. 01:18:010 (3) - change clap in the end into finish and change 01:19:296 (2) - into clap, then in 01:20:582 (1) - add finish in beginning? No for the first and the last but yes for the clap.
4. 01:25:725 (5) - move this 1 grid left Fixed
5. 01:39:439 (5) - move the 1st point 2 grid left. look more symmetry i guess. also, if do this, move 1 grid down for 01:38:153 (2,3,4) - Fixed
6. 01:43:296 (4) - spacing errorFixed

Normal

1. 00:32:582 (5) - add new combo in here. too long orz Fixed
2. 00:35:153 (2,2) - maybe clap in beginning? add something in there to follow drum in music ;A; I really don't like it. Sorry.
3. 00:49:295 (2,3,4,5,6) - dunno why these rhythm make me a bit confuse, especially between (5) and (6). maybe try the others? I'll remap it.
4. 01:04:296 (4,1) - clap in (4)'s end is weird in here. that should be in 01:04:724 - so, add reverse in (4) and add clap in there, then del (1) and add a circle in 01:05:152 - Fixed
5. 01:05:368 (2) - try add clap in beginning and reverse? also, remove clap in (3), and add clap again in (4)'s reverse :3 Fixed
6. 01:07:296 (2,3) - use soft finish like you did in easy? oh, remove whistle in (3) too Fixed
7. 01:21:439 (2,1,2) - I think stacked like this will confuse the player.. use normal spacing? Don't know yet. I'll see.
8. 01:42:438 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:49:295 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same.

Hard

1. 00:27:117 (3,4) - change into slider is more easier since in blue tick imo Fixed
2. 00:33:224 (4,5,6,7,8) - i think in hard diff, jump like this little confusing.. imo i don't think so.
3. 00:35:152 (2,4) - same as normal, add clap in beginning Fixed
4. 00:54:224 (6) - new combo for jump? nope
5. 01:10:938 (5) - ^ Fixed
6. 01:20:260 (3,4) - same as 00:27:117 (3,4) - Fixed
7. 01:26:795 (5) - new combo too? Fixed
8. nice, but I think the triplets are too much in here Thank you ^^ I'll see if i can remove some of them.

Path of glory

1. 00:07:724 (3) - maybe change into reverse slider just like (2) more fit with music imo I prefer this way. Sorry.
2. 00:35:152 (2,2) - same here add clap in beginning? nope
3. 00:56:152 (5) - I think add whistle in beginning sounds nice too. combinated with (4) Fixed
4. 01:09:224 (6) - add new combo Fixed
5. 01:11:367 (6) - start new combo in here and remove combo in next note. just make the 01:10:295 (1,2,3,4,5) - combo same with 01:09:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice ^^ Fixed
6. 01:20:260 (5,6) - stack these like you did at 00:27:117 (5,6) - ? I don't really want them stacked.
7. 01:27:438 (1) - I like this Seriously? Well, thanks.
8. 01:49:295 (4) - add whistle in beginning too. though that similar with 00:56:152 (5) Fixed

that's all~

Smoothie wrote:

Heya~
mod from my queue


[Path Of Glory]
00:06:867 (1) - Move to x:256 y:160 Fixed but another way.
00:19:295 (3) - Move to x:360 y:104 Fixed
00:36:010 (1) - Ctrl+G? Fixed
00:43:938 (4) - Add a reverse? Fixed
00:49:724 (4) - Remove this note and add a reverse on 00:49:938 (5) instead. Fits better to the music imo. Fixed
01:42:867 (4,5) - Remove this notes and add a slider on 01:42:867 with a repeater instead. Fixed
01:47:581 (7) - Move to x:320 y:284 Fixed

[Hard]
00:08:367 (1,2,3) - Consider making a reverse slider instead Fixed
00:49:724 (1) - Delete and add a reverse on 00:49:938 (2)? Same reason like i mentioned on "Path Of Glory" In this case i don't think it's needed
00:52:724 (2) - Delete? Nope
01:03:652 (2,3,4) - Stack them? Slider instead
01:42:867 (5) - Delete and add a reverse on 01:43:081 (5) like i mentioned above. Like i mentioned above

[Normal]
00:27:439 (1,2,1,2) - Can you blanket them better? Fixed
00:49:510 (3) - Remove? No?
00:50:152 - Add note here if you removed the one i've mentioned above. So, no.
01:42:653 (3) - Same as above. Remove this note and add one here: 01:43:295 if you did so Same as above
01:49:725 (4) - NC Fixed

[Easy]
00:27:439 (1,2,3,4) - How about makeing them curvy? I already have a lot of curvy one.
01:10:295 (2) - Move to x:260 y:144 Fixed
01:18:010 (3) - Add finish on the slider end~ I prefer the clap

That's all
Good luck!

Xinely wrote:

ohai ~
from m4m in my queue

[General]
remove osb? There isn't any.....

[Easy]
00:15:439 (1) - 1 grid down to avoid spacing 1,06x? Fixed
00:25:725 (1) - remove NC for consistency This NC seems good to me.
00:27:439 (1,2,3,4) - it's better if you make square shape like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/808517 I prefer my shape. sry.
01:10:295 (2) - 280,124 Fixed
01:12:868 (3) - it's better if curved with whitle node (not red) Since everybody ask me to do it.... Fixed
01:41:153 (1) - don't make unconsistency spacing although to make branket Fixed
01:48:011 (1) - finish head Fixed
01:49:724 (1) - finish head too Fixed

[Normal]
00:22:296 (3,1) - swap NC? Fixed
00:24:868 (3) - ctrl+g for better flow? Fixed
00:32:582 (5) - NC for consistency Fixed
00:46:296 (1) - 105,139 for avoid spacing issue Fixed
00:49:725 (4) - NC consistency Fixed
01:00:653 (3,4,5) - actually i don't like saw them touched together Fixed
01:01:939 (5) - NC Fixed but one note earlier.
01:02:796 (6,7) - 188,244, bad to this not stacked in 01:00:653 (3) - , so better if its moved imo I prefer this way.

[Hard]
00:07:617 - add note? follow music Actually, i'm following the guitar,so no.
00:19:617 - ^ ^
00:21:438 (2) - 1 grid down? to avoid almost touched with previous But, they don't touch... at all.
00:22:295 (3) - it's better if you stacked with 00:20:581 (1) - 's head Fixed
00:26:581 (1,2) - spacing 0,5x same as previous? The slider are 1x speed.
00:31:295 (2) - 264,280. avoid almost touched with 00:30:652 (8) - Fixed but another way.
00:33:652 (6) - NC? Nope.
00:42:867 - until 00:51:224 - why no hitsound? it's make boring imo Tried to do some.
01:19:295 (1) - no need NC imo They are here for consistency
01:27:438 (1,2,3,4) - give whistle in all's head I prefer the pattenr Finish/Blank
01:39:438 (1) - remove NC for consistency I don't think this one needs to be removed.

[Glory]
00:07:617 - add note Same as before.
00:32:581 (5,1) - swap NC due stanza What?
00:35:152 (2) - you forgot finish in head Fixed
00:36:867 (2) - ^ Fixed Fixed
i'm suck mod insane =w= We are more free on these diff so there are less to mod XD

GL ~_~

• • Are you sure Aoi Shoudo is the correct artist? Shouldn't it be Masakazu Sugimori since he composed the music? Also, since Aoi Shoudo is a japanese name don't forget to translate it in kanji.
  • Kiai doesn't really fit with this song imo, remove it. (or just add some kiai fountains at 00:41:581/01:34:724, 00:42:438/01:35:581 and 00:42:867/01:36:010.

• • 00:17:582 (2) - Move this slider at x:204 y:152 for a better flow.
  • 00:20:582 (1) - You forgot to add a finish on start.
  • 01:10:295 (2) - Add a new combo here and remove the one on the next slider.
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:582.
  • 01:30:008 (4) - Check AIMod, this slider is unsnapped, fix it.
  • 01:48:652 (2) - Delete this circle, then start a slider here and end it at 01:49:295.

• • HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty 4 to keep a consistency with the other diffs.
  • 00:07:510 (3) - I don't understand what this slider is following, try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:10:938 (3) - ^
  • 00:20:582 (1) - Finish on start.
  • 00:30:008 (2) - Unsnapped slider, fix it.
  • 00:41:153 (1) - Reverse this slider (Ctrl + g) for a better flow.
  • 01:00:653 (3) - Same as 00:07:510.
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:582.
  • 01:18:868 (1) - Why a spinner here? Delete it and map this part like you did before. (00:25:724 ~ 00:27:438)
  • 01:25:724 (1) - ^

• • 00:20:581 (1) - Finish on start.
  • 00:26:152 (1) and 00:26:581 (1) - Remove these new combo, they're useless imo.
  • 00:54:867 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't like the rhythm you used here, try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:581.
  • 01:19:295 (1) and 01:19:724 (1) - Same as 00:26:152.
  • 01:48:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 00:54:867.

• • Stack leniency: 3
  • 00:07:724 (3) - Delete this slider and try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:15:652 (3) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a repeat.
  • 00:20:581 (1) - Finish on start.
  • 00:26:152 (1) and 00:26:581 (1) - Remove these new combo.
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:581.
  • 01:19:295 (1) and 01:19:724 (1) - Same as 00:26:152.

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• • Are you sure Aoi Shoudo is the correct artist? Shouldn't it be Masakazu Sugimori since he composed the music? Also, since Aoi Shoudo is a japanese name don't forget to translate it in kanji. It's a remix which comes from a project called the GSAP ans i took the mp3 directly at them. So i think it's the name of the one who did this remix.
  • Kiai doesn't really fit with this song imo, remove it. (or just add some kiai fountains at 00:41:581/01:34:724, 00:42:438/01:35:581 and 00:42:867/01:36:010.

Well, i think this kiai is fine. Besides, it's the only thing still here after 33 mod and nobody said anything about it so i think it's cool.


Easy

• • 00:17:582 (2) - Move this slider at x:204 y:152 for a better flow. Fixed
  • 00:20:582 (1) - You forgot to add a finish on start. Fixed
  • 01:10:295 (2) - Add a new combo here and remove the one on the next slider. Fixed
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:582. Fixed
  • 01:30:008 (4) - Check AIMod, this slider is unsnapped, fix it. Fixed
  • 01:48:652 (2) - Delete this circle, then start a slider here and end it at 01:49:295. Fixed but i did another thing.

Normal

• • HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty 4 to keep a consistency with the other diffs. No, this diff is harder than a Normal
  • 00:07:510 (3) - I don't understand what this slider is following, try this: Fixed
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:10:938 (3) - ^ Fixed
  • 00:20:582 (1) - Finish on start. Fixed
  • 00:30:008 (2) - Unsnapped slider, fix it. Fixed
  • 00:41:153 (1) - Reverse this slider (Ctrl + g) for a better flow. Fixed
  • 01:00:653 (3) - Same as 00:07:510. Fixed
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:582. Fixed
  • 01:18:868 (1) - Why a spinner here? Delete it and map this part like you did before. (00:25:724 ~ 00:27:438) Fixed
  • 01:25:724 (1) - ^ Fixed

Hard

• • 00:20:581 (1) - Finish on start.Fixed
  • 00:26:152 (1) and 00:26:581 (1) - Remove these new combo, they're useless imo. I think they are good.
  • 00:54:867 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't like the rhythm you used here, try this: This time, i don't agree. Sorry but i prefer my rythm
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:581. Fixed
  • 01:19:295 (1) and 01:19:724 (1) - Same as 00:26:152. Same
  • 01:48:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 00:54:867.Same

Path of Glory

• • Stack leniency: 3 It would kill a stack
  • 00:07:724 (3) - Delete this slider and try this: Well, no
  • 00:15:652 (3) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a repeat. Fixed
  • 00:20:581 (1) - Finish on start. Fixed
  • 00:26:152 (1) and 00:26:581 (1) - Remove these new combo. Nope
  • 01:13:724 (1) - Same as 00:20:581. Fixed
  • 01:19:295 (1) and 01:19:724 (1) - Same as 00:26:152.Nope

Ayu wrote:

M4M. Hard and Path Of Glory difficulty as requested.

Hard
00:21:438 (2) - I think this pattern could be more awesome, by letting it blanket around the bobble of (1). Do something like my example. Fixed

SPOILER

Note: The same happens 01:14:581 (2) - here. Fixed
00:27:117 (3) - This looked pretty confusing to me, atleast when using for example Hidden and Doubletime But, when you play it normally it's ok....
01:04:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The overlaps here look pretty messy, I suggest to just either increase the spacing here so it won't overlap anymore or use another pattern. Fixed
01:21:438 (3) - I guess you're missing a clap here. Fixed
01:43:510 (7) - Could be a nice blanket over the sliderend of (6) Fixed

Path Of Glory
00:11:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Just as in Hard, these overlaps look pretty messy. I'd increase the spacing here to prevent them. Fixed
Note: The same happens 00:32:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here. Fixed
00:20:581 (1) - Blanket this around (2), then fix (2) accordingly. Fixed
00:47:795 (3) - Would fit better on the sliderend to keep a nice flow. The flow is still good this way
Note: The same happens 00:49:510 (3) - here.^
01:02:367 (6) - Sliders like these look pretty horrible, especially how it's used here as the middle point doesn't emphasize the music. Fixed
01:13:724 (1) - Could make a nicer blanket over (2) Fixed
01:27:438 (1,1) - I don't really suggest to use sliders like these unless they would emphasize the music, but it doesn't here. I want some slider a little bit original....

Good luck with your map.

CDFA wrote:

wtf every map I'm mod4modding is a phoenix wright map Wait... I'm not the only one mapping PW? Cool ^^

Insane:
00:07:081 (2) - Possibly rotate this more so the slider goes right into the next note? fixed
00:22:295 (3) - Maybe re-organize it like this so it flows a little bit better while still making pretty patterns? owo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/813373 Actually.... That's a good idea ^^
01:18:438 (5) - Make this slider fit into the pattern. Even if it's like in the same place as (3). Or maybe make a five-point shape? Sorry, i prefer like this.
01:20:581 (1) - CTRL + G? Well, the jump is a little bit exagerated so... i'll try to do something.

Hard:
01:20:581 (1) - This might just be a me thing, but slidertrains usually don't play or look nice I agree. But i have no idea how to change this. Sry
01:19:724 (1,2) - ^ ^

Normal:
00:21:439 (2) - Would it be possible to make this a kawaii pattern with (1)? I did my best.
00:57:331 (1) - Add finish on end of spiner? No, the finish is for the note right after.

Easy:
Tick Rate 1? The maximum combo is already small enough XD
01:32:582 (5) - Make this slider like you made the others, the curviness of this just makes it look not kawaii D: I don't now what you mean by "like the others" but i smoothened the curves and now it's 20% kawaiier ^^

Sorry for the really short mod D:. It's a pretty cool map :3. Sorry it took so long, my internet has been unstable.*cough* and you get silenced 42h *cough*

Jemmmmy wrote:

Normal
01:02:152 (3) -

Fixed

Hard
00:27:117 (3) - Nope, listen better.
01:20:260 (3) - ^ ^


Path Of Glory
00:13:724 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g? Fixed
00:44:581 (1,2,3,4) - - change shape I like this shape.
01:08:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - move to x:240 Fixed


really good mapset. good luck

Teara wrote:

Wow, I'm really impressed.

I already thought this was well mapped when I first modded it, but you went the extra mile and made it even better!

Good job!

Take this well deserved bubble.

rezoons wrote:

Teara wrote:

Wow, I'm really impressed.

I already thought this was well mapped when I first modded it, but you went the extra mile and made it even better!

Good job!

Take this well deserved bubble.

Well, i've changed Easy with a lesser SV for better blanket and Normal with a Higher SV for the same reason. I mapped a Hard like you suggested to me. And worked hard to find mod so i' really hoped it was good enough. XD

Anyway, thank you for checking my map despite my harrasment by PM and thank you for the bubble .

P.S. Should i give you kudos for checking my map? I don't know what to do in this case?

Teara wrote:

No kudosu in this case, since, in my eyes, the map is perfect and ready for rank. I didn't add anything constructive this time around.

Good luck with the rank!

Gabe wrote:

Ça n'as pas pris de temps, LOL.

rezoons wrote:

Gabe wrote:

Ça n'as pas pris de temps, LOL.

Désolé, je pensais pas que ça marcherait. XD

Gabe wrote:

C'est bon, t'inquiète! Je ne suis pas fâché. C'est quand même pas toi qui a décidé d'avoir une bulle ou non :3

rezoons wrote:

Gabe wrote:

C'est bon, t'inquiète! Je ne suis pas fâché. C'est quand même pas toi qui a décidé d'avoir une bulle ou non :3

Merci ^^. Bon je sais pas trop ce que je suis censé faire quand j'ai une map en bubble mais maintenant je peux me concentrer un peux plus sur mes autres maps en pending et ma modding queue.

Gabe wrote:

Tu demandes à un BAT de rank o:

rezoons wrote:

Gabe wrote:

Tu demandes à un BAT de rank o:

Gabe, tu veux bien la rank stp XD

Gabe wrote:

Je ne suis pas BAT

Teara wrote:

Bubble restored.

(He updated NC on Normal/Hard and didn't realize it would pop the bubble.)

NoHitter wrote:

Good mapset Thank you

[General]
Remove Gyakuten Saiban Appellate Project from the Source and add it to the Tags since it's the remix album where you got the song.
Go add Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney or Gyakuten Saiban to the Source instead. (Don't forget to remove the redundant tags i.e. words in the tags that are already in the source) I don't understand, the source is where the song come from so it's the album name? Anyway, i trust you and did what you say. Fixed.

[Easy]
- 00:14:153 (2) - The overlap with the slider doesn't look quite neat IMO. Fixed by rotating it 45°
- 00:51:439 (1,2,3) - Might as well make this into a perfect triangle? http://puu.sh/3n4nn.jpg Fixed
- 01:42:010 (2) - I don't recommend placing a slider underneath another slider especially on an Easy. It may be confusing. Fixed

[Normal]
- 00:24:868 (3) - Why not mirror 00:23:582 (1) instead for a more symmetrical combo?I don't think even more symmetry is needed here

Katty Pie wrote:

Map need more work~ I hope you can make this map much better :3 Good luck

Teara wrote:

I already thought this was well mapped when I first modded it, but you went the extra mile and made it even better!

Good job!

Demmon wrote:

Gratz !

-Umi- wrote:

GRATZ rezooons !!! :3 enfin ahah

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Congrats

Cobra wrote:

Good luck man

Konei wrote:

Hey, congratz on your first rank!