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Hashimoto Miyuki - Symphonic Love [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Kuro
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, April 4, 2013 at 11:15:21 PM

Artist: Hashimoto Miyuki
Title: Symphonic Love
Source: Mashiro Iro Symphony
Tags: Acl138
BPM: 144
Filesize: 25048kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Acl's Insane (5 stars, 375 notes)
  2. Easy (1.5 stars, 73 notes)
  3. Hard (4.6 stars, 159 notes)
  4. Normal (3.35 stars, 95 notes)
  5. Pure White (4.97 stars, 264 notes)
  6. Taiko Muzukashii (4.68 stars, 339 notes)
  7. Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 433 notes)


Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Symphonic Love
Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Symphonic Love (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi, everyone this is my first attempt at making a beatmap!!
Cuvelia
Light Usagi
Kokatsu
nattap
Cancel
Yuki-kun
TheVileOne
------------> That's all for now!! <-------------
Cuvelia
H i , Random Taiko modding .

These are all suggestion. If you don't like them , you could ignore .

| d = don | k = kat | D = BIG DON | K = BIG KAT | re = remove |

[ Kuro's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:12:294 (1) ==> 00:12:346 - move
  2. 00:26:721 - 00:26:930 - add d
  3. 00:27:346 (1) - D
  4. 00:40:680 (1) - D
  5. 00:46:930 - add k
  6. 00:54:013 (1) - D
  7. 00:56:513 - 00:56:930 - add k d k (1/2 rhythm)
  8. 00:59:846 - 01:00:263 - add d d k (1/2 rhythm)
     
  9. 01:33:284 (1)
    Leave at least a 1/2 beat between a note and a spinner.
    Using them on streams may be okay. Short spinners are not recommended.

[ Kuro's Taiko Oni]
  1. HP Drain 5 ~ 6 ( HP Drain 9 unrank )
     
    http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Taiko_Ranking_Criteria
     
  2. Difficulty settings and song setup
    Overall difficulty and HP drain rate should be between 4~7.

    plz check a guideline :3
     
     
  3. 00:12:294 (1) ==> 00:12:346 - move
  4. 00:40:471 (15) - k
  5. 00:40:680 (1) - D
  6. 00:47:138 (14) - k
  7. 00:47:346 (1) - D
  8. 00:54:430 (3) - K
  9. 00:57:763 (3) - K
  10. 01:01:096 (3) - K
  11. 01:20:055 (9) - d
  12. 01:20:367 (11) - k
  13. 01:20:575 (13) - re
  14. 01:27:242 (13) - re
  15. 01:27:346 (1) - D
     
  16. 01:33:284 (1) - spinner ^

 
I'm sorry for my bad English skill makes you hard to understand ... Dx
 
good luck .
Topic Starter
Kuro

Cuvelia wrote:

H i , Random Taiko modding .

These are all suggestion. If you don't like them , you could ignore .

| d = don | k = kat | D = BIG DON | K = BIG KAT | re = remove |

[ Kuro's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:12:294 (1) ==> 00:12:346 - move didn't notice fixed
  2. 00:26:721 - 00:26:930 - add d ok
  3. 00:27:346 (1) - D ok
  4. 00:40:680 (1) - D ok
  5. 00:46:930 - add k ok
  6. 00:54:013 (1) - D ok
  7. 00:56:513 - 00:56:930 - add k d k (1/2 rhythm) ok
  8. 00:59:846 - 01:00:263 - add d d k (1/2 rhythm) nope
     
  9. 01:33:284 (1) fixed
    Leave at least a 1/2 beat between a note and a spinner.
    Using them on streams may be okay. Short spinners are not recommended.

[ Kuro's Taiko Oni]
  1. HP Drain 5 ~ 6 ( HP Drain 9 unrank )
     
    http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Taiko_Ranking_Criteria
     
  2. Difficulty settings and song setup
    Overall difficulty and HP drain rate should be between 4~7. Oops, forgot to change before fixed

    plz check a guideline :3
     
     
  3. 00:12:294 (1) ==> 00:12:346 - move didn't notice ok
  4. 00:40:471 (15) - k no, sounds weird
  5. 00:40:680 (1) - D ok
  6. 00:47:138 (14) - k no, sounds weird
  7. 00:47:346 (1) - D ok
  8. 00:54:430 (3) - K ok
  9. 00:57:763 (3) - K ok
  10. 01:01:096 (3) - K ok
  11. 01:20:055 (9) - d hmm, I'll see what others think before I change it...
  12. 01:20:367 (11) - k nope (d is pitched to music)
  13. 01:20:575 (13) - re no... o_o
  14. 01:27:242 (13) - re no... o_o
  15. 01:27:346 (1) - D ok
     
  16. 01:33:284 (1) - spinner ^ fixed

 
I'm sorry for my bad English skill makes you hard to understand ... Dx Your english wasn't bad :)
 
good luck . Thanks for mod 8-)
Niko-nyan
another symphonic love o3o
Decipher
[General]
Source: Mashiroiro Symphony → Mashiro Iro Symphony ? :3

[Muzu]
00:02:346 (3,4,7,8,9,10) - d?
00:25:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - replace with slider
00:32:763 (3) - k
00:33:284 (6) - d
00:34:325 (11) - remove
00:35:055 (14) - k
00:35:263 (15) - delete
00:35:992 (5) - delete
01:00:055 ~ 01:00:263 - add d k (1/2 snap)
01:01:930 (7) - d
01:18:596 (2) - k
01:32:971 (5) - k

[Oni]
00:35:575 (2) - d
00:39:638 (12) - k?
00:51:930 (3) - k?
01:06:930 (6) - d
01:13:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - ddkdk?
01:18:075 (7) - d?
01:18:596 (2) - k
01:32:763 (7,8) - reverse?

crapmod sorry aaaaaaah QAQ
Topic Starter
Kuro

Light Usagi wrote:

[General]
Source: Mashiroiro Symphony → Mashiro Iro Symphony ? :3 Fixed! \o/

[Muzu]
00:02:346 (3,4,7,8,9,10) - d? Nope, I think kats sound better
00:25:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - replace with slider ok
00:32:763 (3) - k ok
00:33:284 (6) - d ok
00:34:325 (11) - remove ok
00:35:055 (14) - k ok
00:35:263 (15) - delete ok
00:35:992 (5) - delete ok
01:00:055 ~ 01:00:263 - add d k (1/2 snap) ok
01:01:930 (7) - d Nope, the following kats are matched to vocals
01:18:596 (2) - k ok
01:32:971 (5) - k ok

[Oni]
00:35:575 (2) - d ok
00:39:638 (12) - k? ok
00:51:930 (3) - k? ok
01:06:930 (6) - d Nope, sounds awkward to tag end with a don
01:13:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - ddkdk? Cool, ok
01:18:075 (7) - d? Nope, meant to be identical with previous dkd
01:18:596 (2) - k ok
01:32:763 (7,8) - reverse? Hey that sounds pretty awesome, nice find! :D

crapmod sorry aaaaaaah QAQ It was ok :3
Thanks for mod! 8-)
Kokatsu
Wanted to mod it yesterday, was too busy, modding it now, sorry for the short delay, orz.

General



I get Offset 672 (-8 from current), see what feels better for you.
Taiko-Backgrounds are currently unrankable, replace it with the default one or some with normal ratios.
Please use a Lead-In of 2000 in all difficulties. 3000 is too long.
Uncheck "Letterbox during breaks" in Taikodiffs, since there are no Breaks.
Source is inconsisten, please make sure to use the right and same source in all diffs.

Taiko Muzukashii



Please remove "Kuro's" from the Diffname, it's your mapset so why should you mention your name again in the diffs? Same goes for Oni.

Use HP and OD of 5, they match the song/map better.

Please make sure to only use same-coloured streams, so basically only ddd and kkk (and the 5note versions, ofc). I won't mention every stream again, so please go over that on your own.

00:25:680 (9) - Reduce length by 1/2 and add a note (don) at the current end.
00:36:721 (8,9) - Make (8) kat and delete (9), because with the (9), the combo gets too long. Muzukashii diffs are still for newer players.
00:48:388 (6) - Delete, since the combo gets too long.
00:50:055 (6) - ^
00:51:930 (3,4) - Basically, the same as above: make (3) kat and delete (4) to keep the combo short.
01:04:221 (2,4) - Delete, to keep the combo short.
01:06:721 (5) - Don? Fits the vocals better.
01:11:721 (7) - Delete, you know why.
01:13:805 (6) - ^
01:17:763 (5) - ^
01:20:055 (9) - ^
01:24:430 (5) - ^
01:25:263 (1) - ^
01:27:138 (17) - ^
01:31:096 (5) - ^
01:31:930 (10) - If you deleted the notes corrosponding to the same music earlier in the song, you should delete this for consistency.

Taiko Oni



01:20:653 - Kiaiflashes are unrankable, so please remove it.

00:19:743 (5) - Fits better at 00:20:575, so maybe move it?
00:24:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The building-up noise is here in the background, you could amphesize that with only dons.
00:26:409 (8,9,10,11) - Delete (8) to shorten the stream, then delete (11) (the notes makes no real sense, there is nothing kat-like in the music, so leave it out). Turn (9) to kat then. So basically keep the same pattern, just 1/2 earlier, where it fits better.
00:32:346 (1,2,3,4,5) - dddkd feels better here.
00:45:575 - Add a don here.
00:53:180 (13,14) - Make both don?
01:06:721 (5) - Don? (Same as in Muzu)
01:20:263 (10,11,12,13,1) - It is not allowed to have a finishing note at the end of a non-basic stream (check rankingcriteria for allowed patterns). However, having bit notes at the end of a stream is not recommended. Please use a small note here or - if you really want to keep that big note - change the prev. notes to be more simple.
01:27:138 (12,13,1) - Here, you should use a small note, there is really no need for the big don.

That's it for now, however, the map needs more mods.

Good luck for now.~
Topic Starter
Kuro

Kokatsu wrote:

Wanted to mod it yesterday, was too busy, modding it now, sorry for the short delay, orz. It's cool, I'm just glad you decided to mod it 8-)

General



I get Offset 672 (-8 from current), see what feels better for you. Hmm.. Compromise at 676
Taiko-Backgrounds are currently unrankable, replace it with the default one or some with normal ratios. Will be replaced soon
Please use a Lead-In of 2000 in all difficulties. 3000 is too long. Fixed
Uncheck "Letterbox during breaks" in Taikodiffs, since there are no Breaks. Fixed
Source is inconsisten, please make sure to use the right and same source in all diffs. Fixed

Taiko Muzukashii



Please remove "Kuro's" from the Diffname, it's your mapset so why should you mention your name again in the diffs? Same goes for Oni. Fixed

Use HP and OD of 5, they match the song/map better. Fixed

Please make sure to only use same-coloured streams, so basically only ddd and kkk (and the 5note versions, ofc). I won't mention every stream again, so please go over that on your own. Fixed all of them

00:25:680 (9) - Reduce length by 1/2 and add a note (don) at the current end. fixed
00:36:721 (8,9) - Make (8) kat and delete (9), because with the (9), the combo gets too long. Muzukashii diffs are still for newer players. fixed
00:48:388 (6) - Delete, since the combo gets too long. fixed
00:50:055 (6) - ^ fixed
00:51:930 (3,4) - Basically, the same as above: make (3) kat and delete (4) to keep the combo short. fixed
01:04:221 (2,4) - Delete, to keep the combo short. fixed
01:06:721 (5) - Don? Fits the vocals better. fixed
01:11:721 (7) - Delete, you know why. fixed
01:13:805 (6) - ^ fixed
01:17:763 (5) - ^ fixed
01:20:055 (9) - ^ fixed
01:24:430 (5) - ^ fixed
01:25:263 (1) - ^ fixed
01:27:138 (17) - ^ fixed
01:31:096 (5) - ^ fixed
01:31:930 (10) - If you deleted the notes corrosponding to the same music earlier in the song, you should delete this for consistency. fixed

Taiko Oni



01:20:653 - Kiaiflashes are unrankable, so please remove it. fixed

00:19:743 (5) - Fits better at 00:20:575, so maybe move it? fixed
00:24:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The building-up noise is here in the background, you could amphesize that with only dons. Hmm.. ok
00:26:409 (8,9,10,11) - Delete (8) to shorten the stream, then delete (11) (the notes makes no real sense, there is nothing kat-like in the music, so leave it out). Turn (9) to kat then. So basically keep the same pattern, just 1/2 earlier, where it fits better. Did a slight variation on that
00:32:346 (1,2,3,4,5) - dddkd feels better here. fixed
00:45:575 - Add a don here. ok
00:53:180 (13,14) - Make both don? Nah, I think it sounds better as is
01:06:721 (5) - Don? (Same as in Muzu) fixed
01:20:263 (10,11,12,13,1) - It is not allowed to have a finishing note at the end of a non-basic stream (check rankingcriteria for allowed patterns). However, having bit notes at the end of a stream is not recommended. Please use a small note here or - if you really want to keep that big note - change the prev. notes to be more simple. Used a small note
01:27:138 (12,13,1) - Here, you should use a small note, there is really no need for the big don. fixed

That's it for now, however, the map needs more mods.

Good luck for now.~ Thx for mod /o/ :)
nattap_old
Hi, sorry for late mod

[Easy]
01:19:423 (1,1) - It's looks like hitcircle appear the same time as spinner better change spinner to something else
I think 1.4 SV is too fast
I think this diff's flow is too straight

[Normal]
00:14:839 (3,4) - It's not flow better http://puu.sh/1TpEQ
00:35:673 (4) - NC?
00:34:006 (1,2,3) and 00:35:673 (4,5,6) should be apart
00:37:548 (7) - NC?
00:52:339 (1) - Too loud
01:19:839 (6) - ^
during early kiai there are too less slider

[Hard]
00:09:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Better place somewhere else not back and forth
00:12:339 (9) - last part is too loud.
00:14:006 (1) - Finish?
00:27:342 - 00:33:176 why leave it a break

[Pure White]
00:12:342 (9) - last part is too loud.
00:14:008 (1) - Finish?
01:00:675 (10) - NC?
01:05:675 (3) - I think It's better to make it like 00:12:342 (9) (crescendo).
01:25:675 (7) - try split them not just repeat.

[Acl's Insane]
00:14:009 - a note here?
01:07:967 (4) - I think let it a circle is better
01:08:801 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I don't think It's a good idea
01:17:967 (10) - NC?
01:21:926 (8) - NC?
Work on more hitsound

[General]
Inheriting timing section is not snapped
Preview time I like 01:07:342
Hitsound is too loud
I think this map's flow is going too straight

[Skin]
I think user's perference skin is better
No "section-fail" ? better find one

If you want a guest-diff tell me
Akateko

nattap wrote:

[Acl's Insane]
00:14:009 - a note here? -yes :3
01:07:967 (4) - I think let it a circle is better -changed
01:08:801 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I don't think It's a good idea -revised
01:17:967 (10) - NC? -wha ??
01:21:926 (8) - NC? -wha ??
Work on more hitsound -done and revised
i like it but ... whats NC :D XD sry im new lol also i dont think ill change 01:08:801 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) (to much)
Topic Starter
Kuro

Acl138 wrote:

nattap wrote:

[Acl's Insane]
00:14:009 - a note here? -yes :3
01:07:967 (4) - I think let it a circle is better -changed
01:08:801 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I don't think It's a good idea -revised
01:17:967 (10) - NC? -wha ??
01:21:926 (8) - NC? -wha ??
Work on more hitsound -done and revised
i like it but ... whats NC :D XD sry im new lol also i dont think ill change 01:08:801 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) (to much)
lol, NC is new combo :P
and don't forget to link me the updated map's .osu so I can update the current map
Cancel
Hi. Since you are my friend, you could've asked me In-Game, but oh well...

From my [url]Modding queue[/url=https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/114151/start=45]!

General

Put in original song title: シンフォニック・ラブ <-- I think that this is the official song title.
Higher quality video here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rdof4xbOU4g <-- Convert with this site. It downloads high quality mp3's from youtube : http://www.listentoyoutube.com/
Correctly snap the green lines!
00:14:013 - Add bookmark
Offset = 670

Easy

00:45:670 (1) - The spinner is too fast for easy.
00:50:667 (1) - ^
00:57:333 (1) - Too fast after spinner
01:00:670 (1) - ^
01:01:711 (1) - Fill up that break please! (a spinner will do)
01:14:000 (4) - Add NC
01:15:667 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:667 (1) - Too fast after spinner
01:33:170 - End spinner here

Normal

Please change Circle Size to 3
00:21:093 (2) - Snap correctly to slider
00:35:677 (4,5,6) - Please correctly Distance Snap this! This will bring a lot of confusion to the player.
00:52:343 (1) - Please do like 00:25:677 (10) -
01:01:718 (1) - Please fill in this break
01:33:170 - End spinner here

Hard

Please change Circle Size to 3

Insane

Please change Circle Size to 3

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Kuro

nattap wrote:

Hi, sorry for late mod

[Easy]
01:19:423 (1,1) - It's looks like hitcircle appear the same time as spinner better change spinner to something else Removed it instead
I think 1.4 SV is too fast Changed to 1.0 SV
I think this diff's flow is too straight I was shooting for simple and easy

[Normal]
00:14:839 (3,4) - It's not flow better http://puu.sh/1TpEQ That link is broken
00:35:673 (4) - NC? Ok
00:34:006 (1,2,3) and 00:35:673 (4,5,6) should be apart Changed
00:37:548 (7) - NC? Ok
00:52:339 (1) - Too loud Ok, it's down to 50%
01:19:839 (6) - ^ Also, down to 50%
during early kiai there are too less slider Changed some circles to sliders

[Hard]
00:09:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Better place somewhere else not back and forth Changed to a cirlce
00:12:339 (9) - last part is too loud. Softened crescendo
00:14:006 (1) - Finish? Ok
00:27:342 - 00:33:176 why leave it a break It's common to all diffs and only unique to Pure White

[Pure White]
00:12:342 (9) - last part is too loud. Softened crescendo
00:14:008 (1) - Finish? Ok
01:00:675 (10) - NC? Ok
01:05:675 (3) - I think It's better to make it like 00:12:342 (9) (crescendo). It's intuitive, the background music is the crescendo
01:25:675 (7) - try split them not just repeat. What? The slider and the claps? If so, then ok

[General]
Inheriting timing section is not snapped Check again, most are snapped in 1/8
Preview time I like 01:07:342 Ok, changed
Hitsound is too loud Most hitsounds reduced by 1/5 and others are changed to be no louder than 80%
I think this map's flow is going too straight I tried my best and its my 1st beatmap so there's not much to expect. I never was good at mapping standard diffs anyway. :|

[Skin]
I think user's perference skin is better Nah, I skinned most of the items except "section-fail" and the scorebar so "scorebar-colour" is misaligned if players use a unique scorebar.
No "section-fail" ? better find one I was going to make one but folder size is at max :P

If you want a guest-diff tell me
Topic Starter
Kuro

Cancel wrote:

Hi. Since you are my friend, you could've asked me In-Game, but oh well... Aww, I didnt know :(

From my [url]Modding queue[/url=https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/114151/start=45]! lol it should be
Modding queue

General

Put in original song title: シンフォニック・ラブ <-- I think that this is the official song title. Added to tags, can't change to title because I'm pretty sure it should be in english. Edit: I didn't know you could add non-english titles in the metadata. Fixed title! :o
Higher quality video here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rdof4xbOU4g <-- Convert with this site. It downloads high quality mp3's from youtube : http://www.listentoyoutube.com/ When video is up-scaled to widescreen the quality is basically the same so no change.
Correctly snap the green lines! Most are snapped in 1/8 and are unevenly distributed to deal with offset changes.
00:14:013 - Add bookmark Wha-?
Offset = 670 I think current offset is fine

Easy

00:45:670 (1) - The spinner is too fast for easy. Spinner is already slow enough.
00:50:667 (1) - ^ ^
00:57:333 (1) - Too fast after spinner ^
01:00:670 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:711 (1) - Fill up that break please! (a spinner will do) Made spinner before it longer
01:14:000 (4) - Add NC Ok
01:15:667 (1) - Remove NC Ok
01:20:667 (1) - Too fast after spinner Spinner was removed already in previous mod :P
01:33:170 - End spinner here Ok

Normal

Please change Circle Size to 3 I think current size is fine.
00:21:093 (2) - Snap correctly to slider Ok
00:35:677 (4,5,6) - Please correctly Distance Snap this! This will bring a lot of confusion to the player. Changed in previous mod
00:52:343 (1) - Please do like 00:25:677 (10) - Ok
01:01:718 (1) - Please fill in this break Ok
01:33:170 - End spinner here Ok

Hard

Please change Circle Size to 3 Current size is fine.

Insane

Please change Circle Size to 3 Current size is fine.

Good Luck! Thanks for mod! 8-)
Yuki-kun
Hi~

M4M~

> General <
+ Why all your diff contain a red timing offset at 00:00:000 ? Remove that please. It's useless.
+ Please end all your diff at same time.
+ Inconsistency in combo colours:


- [Acl's Insane] :
Combo1 : 0,128,0
Combo2 : 0,45,221
Combo3 : 210,21,0
Combo4 : 255,255,255

- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 15,15,255
Combo3 : 112,196,193

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 15,15,255
Combo3 : 112,196,193

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 15,15,255
Combo3 : 112,196,193

- [Pure White] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 15,15,255
Combo3 : 112,196,193

+ Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Acl's Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:013, ends on 00:27:346
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:346, ends on 01:33:232

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:010, ends on 00:27:347
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:340, ends on 01:32:333

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:010, ends on 00:27:347
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:343, ends on 01:32:333

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:010, ends on 00:27:347
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:343, ends on 01:32:333

- [Pure White] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:010, ends on 00:26:822
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:343, ends on 01:32:333

- [Taiko Muzukashii] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:013, ends on 00:27:346
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:346, ends on 01:33:232

- [Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:013, ends on 00:27:346
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:346, ends on 01:33:232

+ Tags
+ Consider adding "Acl" to all of your tags



> My mod <

[Acl's Insane]

Non-Downbeat Kiai Times
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:013, ends on 00:27:346
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:346, ends on 01:33:232

00:14:013 - snap to 00:14:009
00:27:346 - snap to 00:27:342
01:07:346 - snap to 01:07:342
01:33:232 - snap to 01:33:228

- Remove 00:00:000 red timing
- Timing > Resnap all notes.

00:03:332 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - Press K on keyboard to move up 1/8 beat. It's out of rhythm.
00:04:009 (7) - NC.
00:14:009 (8,1) - Add a break between these 2 note.
00:19:217 (1) - NC follow vocal will better in this part.
00:20:259 (1) - Remove NC.
00:20:884 (6) - NC.
00:22:968 (1) - NC, since you use hidden note here so i think NC is better.
00:23:801 (1) - Remove NC.
00:24:009 (2) - NC here.
00:31:300 (6) - NC. Another hidden note at 00:31:509 (8) -
00:38:800 (1) - NC.
00:41:092 (1,2) - Those stream look bad. Why don't you use new osu! feature? Use only 1 point to make curve like this?
00:44:426 (5,6) - Same as above.
00:47:342 (8) - NC.
00:47:967 (1) - Remove NC.
00:48:384 (4) - NC.
00:48:801 (7) - NC
00:49:217 (10) - NC.
00:49:634 (1) - Remove NC.
00:50:676 (9) - NC
00:55:051 (5) - NC.
00:55:676 (1) - Remove NC.
01:00:467 (1) - Remove NC.
01:00:676 (2) - NC here.
01:03:384 (1) - Remove NC.
01:03:801 (1) - Start at 01:04:009 is better.
01:08:801 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - LoL strange pattern.
01:12:342 (6) - NC here.
01:13:176 (10,1) - Add some note between these note to follow vocal or music. Don't make it so empty.
01:15:467 (9) - NC here.
01:15:884 (1) - Remove NC.
01:17:967 (7) - NC.
01:18:800 (7) - NC.
01:24:634 (7) - NC.
01:28:800 (10) - NC.
01:29:425 (1) - Remove NC.
01:29:634 (2) - NC here.
01:30:467 (7) - NC here.

[Easy]
First: Remove the red timing at 00:00:000
Next: Timing > Resnap all notes
Because you have red timing at 00:00:000, that make all you note/green timing become unsnapped.


Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:27:347 - snap to 00:27:342
00:40:687 - snap to 00:40:676
00:45:687 - snap to 00:45:676
00:47:353 - snap to 00:47:342
00:50:680 - snap to 00:50:676
00:52:347 - snap to 00:52:342
00:55:055 - snap to 00:55:051
00:57:347 - snap to 00:57:342
00:58:389 - snap to 00:58:384
01:00:680 - snap to 01:00:676
01:01:722 - snap to 01:01:717
01:07:340 - snap to 01:07:342
01:19:416 - snap to 01:19:426
01:20:666 - snap to 01:20:676
01:32:333 - snap to 01:32:342

00:19:426 (1) - Do not use short spinner in easy map.
00:23:175 (5) - NC.
00:27:342 - You can start break here instead of 00:26:926
00:39:426 (1) - Another short spinner.
00:47:342 (1) - Add finish?
01:17:342 (5) - NC.
01:30:675 (5) - NC.

[Hard]
First: Remove the red timing at 00:00:000
Next: Timing > Resnap all notes
Because you have red timing at 00:00:000, that make all you note/green timing become unsnapped.
- Drain -1, Circle Size -2. Note too small.

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:09:240 - snap to 00:09:217
00:27:347 - snap to 00:27:342
00:40:687 - snap to 00:40:676
00:45:687 - snap to 00:45:676
00:47:353 - snap to 00:47:342
00:50:680 - snap to 00:50:676
00:52:347 - snap to 00:52:342
00:55:055 - snap to 00:55:051
00:57:347 - snap to 00:57:342
00:58:389 - snap to 00:58:384
01:00:680 - snap to 01:00:676
01:01:722 - snap to 01:01:717
01:03:180 - snap to 01:03:176
01:20:666 - snap to 01:20:676
01:32:333 - snap to 01:32:342

00:19:217 (1,2,3,4) - The distance between those is so random.
00:21:092 (1) - Move to x: 144, y: 36
00:24:009 (6) - NC.
00:47:342 (1) - Finish sound on start of slider.
01:19:842 (3,1,2,3,1) - So weird. This part should be fix by following vocal or music.
01:23:384 (1) - Remove NC.
01:23:801 (1) - NC here.
01:25:676 (7) - So much repeat is boring.

[Normal]
Error red timing like those diff above.

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:27:347 - snap to 00:27:342
00:40:687 - snap to 00:40:676
00:45:687 - snap to 00:45:676
00:47:353 - snap to 00:47:342
00:50:680 - snap to 00:50:676
00:55:055 - snap to 00:55:051
00:57:347 - snap to 00:57:342
00:58:389 - snap to 00:58:384
01:00:680 - snap to 01:00:676
01:01:722 - snap to 01:01:717
01:03:180 - snap to 01:03:176
01:20:666 - snap to 01:20:676
01:32:333 - snap to 01:32:342

00:20:675 (1) - Finish hitsound.
00:23:175 (1) - NC.
00:47:342 (1) - Finish hitsound.
00:49:009 (5) - NC.
00:54:009 (2) - NC.
01:00:676 (1,2,3,4) - Do not use stack like 00:54:009 (1,2,3,4) - . Try to make it better.
01:17:134 (1,2,1,2) - Please notice this kind of pattern is not recommend on easy/normal diff.
01:30:675 (6) - NC.

[Pure White]

Error timing and unsnapped same as above.
Please notice that Circle size 6 with AR 9 is NOT recommend. Circle size 4~5 is better than.
In my opinion, this diff you only use almost square note. Why don't you try to move it to another place? xD
You can make it better than.

00:17:342 (5) - NC.
00:27:342 (3) - Add finish hitsound.
01:05:676 (3) - Useless without hitsound or anything.

Well, Good luck :D
Akateko

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~

[Acl's Insane]

Non-Downbeat Kiai Times
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:013, ends on 00:27:346
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:346, ends on 01:33:232
I do not now what you are saying by "downbeat"

00:14:013 - snap to 00:14:009 nice catch
00:27:346 - snap to 00:27:342 nice catch
01:07:346 - snap to 01:07:342 nice catch
01:33:232 - snap to 01:33:228 nice catch

- Remove 00:00:000 red timingsure
- Timing > Resnap all notes.yes

00:03:332 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - Press K on keyboard to move up 1/8 beat. It's out of rhythm. nice catch :)
00:04:009 (7) - NC. yes
00:14:009 (8,1) - Add a break between these 2 note. revised :D
00:19:217 (1) - NC follow vocal will better in this part.no
00:20:259 (1) - Remove NC.no
00:20:884 (6) - NC.no
00:22:968 (1) - NC, since you use hidden note here so i think NC is better.yes
00:23:801 (1) - Remove NC.no
00:24:009 (2) - NC here.no
00:31:300 (6) - NC. Another hidden note at 00:31:509 (8) - no its fine
00:38:800 (1) - NC.yes
00:41:092 (1,2) - Those stream look bad. Why don't you use new osu! feature? Use only 1 point to make curve like this?no its fine
00:44:426 (5,6) - Same as above.no its fine
00:47:342 (8) - NC.no
00:47:967 (1) - Remove NC.no
00:48:384 (4) - NC.no
00:48:801 (7) - NCno
00:49:217 (10) - NC.no
00:49:634 (1) - Remove NC.no
00:50:676 (9) - NCno
00:55:051 (5) - NC.yes
00:55:676 (1) - Remove NC.yes
01:00:467 (1) - Remove NC.yes
01:00:676 (2) - NC here.yes
01:03:384 (1) - Remove NC.yes
01:03:801 (1) - Start at 01:04:009 is better.its meant to go with the vocals even though you cant hear it XD
01:08:801 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - LoL strange pattern. i know :3
01:12:342 (6) - NC here. added at 01:12:134 instead
01:13:176 (10,1) - Add some note between these note to follow vocal or music. Don't make it so empty.no its fine
01:15:467 (9) - NC here.no
01:15:884 (1) - Remove NC.no
01:17:967 (7) - NC.no
01:18:800 (7) - NC.no
01:24:634 (7) - NC.removed NC at 01:23:384 and added NC at 01:23:801
01:28:800 (10) - NC.no
01:29:425 (1) - Remove NC.no
01:29:634 (2) - NC here.no
01:30:467 (7) - NC here.no
Thank you for the mod :) also my maps NC flow is more on the pattern of the notes rather then the music :D
TheVileOne
Mod as requested

(If I ask a question, it doesn't necessarily mean it's an issue, but rather asking you if you consider it an issue).

General

The standard difficulties all have a red line before the song starts. There's no point to this line and the taiko modes do not have it so it's unrankable anyways.
If you're not using 1/8th don't have it selected. Check your green lines, there are unsnapped lines you should fix.
01:20:666 - There are two green lines really close together. Most of the time there isn't anything mapped here, and there's a break right after.
fail-background and pause-overlay are too large.Ii'm not entirely sure if it's unrankable, but these sizes seem excessive to me.
That combo burst is huge. You mustn't go over default dimensions for combo bursts (500 x 767)

Your backgrounds are all different sizes. that's not a terribly big deal, but the ideal background size for a 4:3 background is 1024x768, and several of your backgrounds are 1023x768. your other ones are slightly larger. The last you could do is resize the 1023 to 1024. I talked with Charles and he says your above dimension bgs are probably fine since widescreen increased the max dimensions. Don't need to change the other ones, but I'm not sure how they will appear in widescreen. I would check to see how they convert to widescreen.

Easy

Lots of snapping errors. Most of your notes and green lines are unsnapped.

00:19:426 (1) - Doesn't really fit. The place where it ends is not meaningful and gives little time to hit the notes after. This is not the place for a spinner of such size should be, certainly not in an Easy. You need to do something about this IMO.
00:47:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why did you stop hitsounding? The beat has stopped since the sliders. It's not absolutely necessary, but I would like to know why.
00:52:339 (1,2) - You should stack the ends of these if you're going to have this pattern. Personally I think it would be better if they weren't stacked at all.
01:07:339 (1,2,3) - Spacing.IMO you should have 0.60 here. You can keep 0.56 for the rest of the pattern. The gap would be less noticeable.
01:07:342 - Why do you not have a finish here?
01:27:342 - ^
01:07:339 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Your combos are inconsistent.

Normal
There's not a lot of hitsounds that aren't finishes. Some claps in choice areas would be well suited.

Still unsnapped green lines to be handled
01:30:675 (6) - Unsnapped

00:14:009 (1,2,3) - Improve this curve. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611267 < I adjusted with grid snap off, and I rotated your slider to be more vertical. Perhaps it would be better to make the slider symmetrical since you're going right into square patterns right after.
00:16:092 (1,2) - Make straight? Lower the entire combo to fix.
00:26:509 - It sounds better if the repeats stopped before this and a new object was introduced, like a slider.
00:37:550 (1,2) - Consider soft whistles on the end on one or both of these? It's so quiet.
00:40:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You had a clap pattern in the Easy. I suggest you have one here as well.
00:47:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you did anything with the Easy here, apply it here to be consistent.
01:07:342 (1,2,3) - Gaps do not flow nearly as well at 0.40 as your note streams. I do not think you should space these so close. My observation is that the transition from 2 to 3 isn't that bad since its prominence in the beat is more clear, but the transition between the two repeat sliders doesn't fit the song. I suggest using at least 0.6 snap between those sliders and IMO it doesn't look that great with both sliders positioned exactly the same and those sliders are a poor representation of the beat since the hitsound tones are unmapped.

Options:

1. Increase the distance of these sliders. The closer to 1.00 they are the more naturally they play.
2. Fill that gap in between the sliders. The problem with this is that it makes the gap at 2,3 feel unnatural. If you want this route you would probably need to either map that gap as well (not recommended) or increase the spacing of 2,3.

01:11:092 (4,2) - doesn't sound bad if you had claps here.
01:16:509 (4,1) - Personally I prefer 0.6 here to your current spacing, but I'm dealing with some lag delay. It's hard to tell if that's affecting my opinion.
01:20:676 - Why do you not have a finish here?
01:22:342 - Why aren't there hitsounds through here? It's like you ignore hitsounding the actual beat.

Hard
Sounds like your hitsounds are a WIP.

Unsnapped slider ends and green lines (Check aimod)

00:14:009 (1,2,3) - I have similar feelings to this as in the Normal.
00:16:092 (1,2) - Same issue as Normal
00:17:759 (4,5,6) - I feel this is imbalanced. The pattern in Normal was slightly imbalanced as well, but this has shifted the notes in a more inconsistent way. Instead of having the notes go out slightly like in Normal, the note is shifted inward. In Normal 00:19:009 (6) - was 2 units right of the end of the previous slider. At least have it vertical or 1 unit forward. The transition here 00:17:759 (4,5) - in Normal was straight vertical, and in Hard the slider is one unit forward. That doesn't matter so much, as long as the part after it looks remotely balanced.
00:19:009 (6,1,2) - Take care of this spacing.
00:21:092 (1,2) - This wasn't manually stacked in the Normal. Stack behavior shouldn't be different between difficulties, so why are you stacking differently? (00:22:342 (3,4) - isn't manually stacked and shouldn't be. Just fix the stack)
00:25:676 (9) - Similar thoughts as in Normal, but instead of a single slider you could have a compressed triple. http://puu.sh/22aiV
00:35:051 (4) - I suggest a whistle here to break up the silence. The silence is quite bothersome. Do the same for the other pattern.
00:37:551 (1,2) - Same opinion as the normal with the whistles
00:37:551 (1,2,1) - I don't like this transition. I think this just needs to not overlap at all, especially going into that next combo. The spacing could use an increase between 1,2, and perhaps set it up so that the next combo starts in the middle of the two sliders.
00:39:009 (3) - OMG use hitsounds, this is just bad to have a slider with this many repeats have no beat indicators. It makes it seem like i'm not following the beat at all. Please consider breaking that slider up for a more interesting beat and add hitsounds to it. Not optional in my opinion.
00:40:675 (1,2) - Flow is awkward. don't use 0.53 spacing on jump sounds. The rest of the combo is 0.8 and even that's disappointing, but at least playable. Also hitsounds, add them. Don't space 2,3 different than the other slider transitions.
00:47:342 - So quiet through here. The less hitsound notes you skip over the more necessary it is to add hitsounds to those notes.
00:49:842 (10,11,12) - Any reason why this is higher than the other tiers in this pattern?
00:52:342 (1,2) - I don't care for this angle really. Not a great transition.
00:54:009 (2,3,4) - spacing?
01:01:717 (1) - End on the green line?
01:07:342 (1,2,3,4) - Make spacing consistent here.
01:09:634 (5) - Use this slider? http://puu.sh/22bon
Coordinates
x 208 y 208
x 236 y 232
x 248 y 184
x 276 y 208

01:11:717 (4) - Maybe move up 1 unit to make the part more readable with that stack leaning near it.
01:17:759 (4,1) - Stack is affecting this spacing.
01:19:842 (3) - This should end on the downbeat.
01:32:342 (1) - Why is this spinner longer than the one in Normal and Easy?

Pure White
This difficulty is in by far the worst shape out of all of them that I have modded. I'm going to wait on the last difficulty because it's taken way too long just to mod these difficulties.

Unsnapped slider ends, and green lines. Check ai mod

00:00:676 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Highly recommend these be lined up.
00:10:833 - There's no reason for this green line.
00:10:937 - ^
00:10:675 (1,2,3) - 40-45 % sounds nice here. Actually my suggestion is to raise volume on the important beats and lower it on the non important beats. So increase volume for 00:10:675 (1) - , 00:11:091 (3,4) - < at least 3. 00:11:716 (6,7) - < 35%
00:12:341 (9) - Very first part of this should have normal hitsound 35%, because soft 5% does not match the sound.
00:14:009 - (The sliders through here screw with the flow. Each time one of those long sliders appeared it slowed down the pace making it easier to screw up after the slider. It would probably be better if the sliders were a little faster if you're going to have sliders that long, but unsure how that will affect your shorter sliders since those play fine. It might just be my computer lagging making it seem like they are slow, so don't change anything unless you feel it is necessary)
00:15:883 (8,1,2,3) - Square isn't perfect.
00:20:676 - Finish?
00:25:258 (6,7) - Align with the end of 5?
00:28:383 (10,11,1) - I really don't think you should increase spacing to 1.3 and then immediately bring it back down to 1.2. You should change 1.3 spacing to 1.2.
00:33:383 (3,4,1,2,3) - I suggest this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611494 What do you think?
00:37:550 (6) - Shouldn't this have a clap on the end?
00:39:841 (4,5) - I'm getting the feeling that this would be better as an anti jump. Maybe I'm wrong, it just is weird. My opinion right now isn't that reliable. I'm getting tired.
00:44:841 (11,1) - Plays bad. Fix.
00:45:466 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure you should be ignoring the hitsound pattern here.
00:51:508 (2) - Maybe position a bit closer to 1? For some reason it feels weird to hit it. I'm not sure though.
00:52:341 (1) - Perhaps end here 00:53:176 - and have a note here 00:53:384 - and 00:53:592 -
00:54:008 (1) - Start with finish.
00:54:008 (1,2) - Spacing should be larger. This is an Insane level difficulty you know.
00:54:009 - Instead of having no hitsounds through here, use soft whistles.
01:05:728 - Do not mute this slider. Have the volumes properly match the song.
01:09:216 (4) - Same opinion as in Hard mode. also I don't think you should have so many repeats. you could make a more interesting pattern if you broke it up.
01:20:675 (1) - Start with finish?
01:23:176 - Do not skip this sound. It's weird without it.
01:31:925 (1,2) - Just have one slider here.
01:32:341 (1) - If you're going to end there, perhaps do some volume adjusting?

Conclusion

It will take at least a recheck from me. I'll mod the last difficulty when I'm rechecking.
Topic Starter
Kuro

Acl138 wrote:

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~

[Acl's Insane]

Non-Downbeat Kiai Times
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:013, ends on 00:27:346
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:346, ends on 01:33:232
I do not now what you are saying by "downbeat" I fixed both of them for you ;)

00:14:013 - snap to 00:14:009 nice catch
00:27:346 - snap to 00:27:342 nice catch
01:07:346 - snap to 01:07:342 nice catch
01:33:232 - snap to 01:33:228 nice catch

- Remove 00:00:000 red timingsure
- Timing > Resnap all notes.yes

00:03:332 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - Press K on keyboard to move up 1/8 beat. It's out of rhythm. nice catch :)
00:04:009 (7) - NC. yes
00:14:009 (8,1) - Add a break between these 2 note. revised :D
00:19:217 (1) - NC follow vocal will better in this part.no
00:20:259 (1) - Remove NC.no
00:20:884 (6) - NC.no
00:22:968 (1) - NC, since you use hidden note here so i think NC is better.yes
00:23:801 (1) - Remove NC.no
00:24:009 (2) - NC here.no
00:31:300 (6) - NC. Another hidden note at 00:31:509 (8) - no its fine
00:38:800 (1) - NC.yes
00:41:092 (1,2) - Those stream look bad. Why don't you use new osu! feature? Use only 1 point to make curve like this?no its fine
00:44:426 (5,6) - Same as above.no its fine
00:47:342 (8) - NC.no
00:47:967 (1) - Remove NC.no
00:48:384 (4) - NC.no
00:48:801 (7) - NCno
00:49:217 (10) - NC.no
00:49:634 (1) - Remove NC.no
00:50:676 (9) - NCno
00:55:051 (5) - NC.yes
00:55:676 (1) - Remove NC.yes
01:00:467 (1) - Remove NC.yes
01:00:676 (2) - NC here.yes
01:03:384 (1) - Remove NC.yes
01:03:801 (1) - Start at 01:04:009 is better.its meant to go with the vocals even though you cant hear it XD
01:08:801 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - LoL strange pattern. i know :3
01:12:342 (6) - NC here. added at 01:12:134 instead
01:13:176 (10,1) - Add some note between these note to follow vocal or music. Don't make it so empty.no its fine
01:15:467 (9) - NC here.no
01:15:884 (1) - Remove NC.no
01:17:967 (7) - NC.no
01:18:800 (7) - NC.no
01:24:634 (7) - NC.removed NC at 01:23:384 and added NC at 01:23:801
01:28:800 (10) - NC.no
01:29:425 (1) - Remove NC.no
01:29:634 (2) - NC here.no
01:30:467 (7) - NC here.no
Thank you for the mod :) also my maps NC flow is more on the pattern of the notes rather then the music :D
Updated ~
Topic Starter
Kuro

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~

M4M~

> General <
+ Why all your diff contain a red timing offset at 00:00:000 ? Remove that please. It's useless. Fixed
+ Please end all your diff at same time. Umm.. I fixed it but the times are still a second apart, there's nothing more i can do about that
+ Inconsistency in combo colours: Fixed

- [Acl's Insane] :
Combo1 : 0,128,0
Combo2 : 0,45,221
Combo3 : 210,21,0
Combo4 : 255,255,255

- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 15,15,255
Combo3 : 112,196,193

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 15,15,255
Combo3 : 112,196,193

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 15,15,255
Combo3 : 112,196,193

- [Pure White] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 15,15,255
Combo3 : 112,196,193

+ Inconsistency in Kiai Times: Fixed

- [Acl's Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:013, ends on 00:27:346
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:346, ends on 01:33:232

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:010, ends on 00:27:347
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:340, ends on 01:32:333

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:010, ends on 00:27:347
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:343, ends on 01:32:333

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:010, ends on 00:27:347
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:343, ends on 01:32:333

- [Pure White] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:010, ends on 00:26:822
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:343, ends on 01:32:333

- [Taiko Muzukashii] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:013, ends on 00:27:346
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:346, ends on 01:33:232

- [Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:14:013, ends on 00:27:346
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:346, ends on 01:33:232

+ Tags
+ Consider adding "Acl" to all of your tags
I already have "Acl138" in tags

[Easy]
First: Remove the red timing at 00:00:000 Fixed
Next: Timing > Resnap all notes Fixed
Because you have red timing at 00:00:000, that make all you note/green timing become unsnapped.

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:27:347 - snap to 00:27:342 Fixed
00:40:687 - snap to 00:40:676 Fixed
00:45:687 - snap to 00:45:676 Fixed
00:47:353 - snap to 00:47:342 Fixed
00:50:680 - snap to 00:50:676 Fixed
00:52:347 - snap to 00:52:342 Fixed
00:55:055 - snap to 00:55:051 Fixed
00:57:347 - snap to 00:57:342 Fixed
00:58:389 - snap to 00:58:384 Fixed
01:00:680 - snap to 01:00:676 Fixed
01:01:722 - snap to 01:01:717 Fixed
01:07:340 - snap to 01:07:342 Fixed
01:19:416 - snap to 01:19:426 Fixed
01:20:666 - snap to 01:20:676 Fixed
01:32:333 - snap to 01:32:342 Fixed

00:19:426 (1) - Do not use short spinner in easy map. That spinner isn't too hard for an easy
00:23:175 (5) - NC. Ok
00:27:342 - You can start break here instead of 00:26:926 Nope, I would have to add another note to make it start there and that would be kind of random to have that note there
00:39:426 (1) - Another short spinner. Same as previous
00:47:342 (1) - Add finish? Ok
01:17:342 (5) - NC. Ok
01:30:675 (5) - NC. Ok

[Hard]
First: Remove the red timing at 00:00:000 Fixed
Next: Timing > Resnap all notes Fixed
Because you have red timing at 00:00:000, that make all you note/green timing become unsnapped.
- Drain -1, Circle Size -2. Note too small. Fixed

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:09:240 - snap to 00:09:217 Fixed
00:27:347 - snap to 00:27:342 Fixed
00:40:687 - snap to 00:40:676 Fixed
00:45:687 - snap to 00:45:676 Fixed
00:47:353 - snap to 00:47:342 Fixed
00:50:680 - snap to 00:50:676 Fixed
00:52:347 - snap to 00:52:342 Fixed
00:55:055 - snap to 00:55:051 Fixed
00:57:347 - snap to 00:57:342 Fixed
00:58:389 - snap to 00:58:384 Fixed
01:00:680 - snap to 01:00:676 Fixed
01:01:722 - snap to 01:01:717 Fixed
01:03:180 - snap to 01:03:176 Fixed
01:20:666 - snap to 01:20:676 Fixed
01:32:333 - snap to 01:32:342 Fixed

00:19:217 (1,2,3,4) - The distance between those is so random. Fixed
00:21:092 (1) - Move to x: 144, y: 36 Fixed
00:24:009 (6) - NC. Ok
00:47:342 (1) - Finish sound on start of slider. Ok
01:19:842 (3,1,2,3,1) - So weird. This part should be fix by following vocal or music. Fixed, decided to follow vocals
01:23:384 (1) - Remove NC. Ok
01:23:801 (1) - NC here. Ok
01:25:676 (7) - So much repeat is boring. Fixed, removed two repeats and added two circles with claps.

[Normal]
Error red timing like those diff above. Fixed

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:27:347 - snap to 00:27:342 Fixed
00:40:687 - snap to 00:40:676 Fixed
00:45:687 - snap to 00:45:676 Fixed
00:47:353 - snap to 00:47:342 Fixed
00:50:680 - snap to 00:50:676 Fixed
00:55:055 - snap to 00:55:051 Fixed
00:57:347 - snap to 00:57:342 Fixed
00:58:389 - snap to 00:58:384 Fixed
01:00:680 - snap to 01:00:676 Fixed
01:01:722 - snap to 01:01:717 Fixed
01:03:180 - snap to 01:03:176 Fixed
01:20:666 - snap to 01:20:676 Fixed
01:32:333 - snap to 01:32:342 Fixed

00:20:675 (1) - Finish hitsound. Ok
00:23:175 (1) - NC. Ok
00:47:342 (1) - Finish hitsound. Ok
00:49:009 (5) - NC. Ok
00:54:009 (2) - NC. Ok
01:00:676 (1,2,3,4) - Do not use stack like 00:54:009 (1,2,3,4) - . Try to make it better. Ok, I changed it a bit
01:17:134 (1,2,1,2) - Please notice this kind of pattern is not recommend on easy/normal diff. Fixed
01:30:675 (6) - NC. Ok

[Pure White]

Error timing and unsnapped same as above. Timing problem fixed but I've still got lots of green lines to snap.
Please notice that Circle size 6 with AR 9 is NOT recommend. Circle size 4~5 is better than. Lowered it to 5. 4 makes the ones that are closer overlap too much.
In my opinion, this diff you only use almost square note. Why don't you try to move it to another place? xD
You can make it better than. I doubt it, I suck at mapping standard.

00:17:342 (5) - NC. Ok
00:27:342 (3) - Add finish hitsound. Ok
01:05:676 (3) - Useless without hitsound or anything. The downbeat is a finish and the rest of the slider runs on the bgmfx of the music. I think it's cool. :P

Well, Good luck :DThanks for mod, I still haven't modded yours yet but I'll get to it after I finish a few important things.
BSS won't let me submit anything without crashing osu! for some reason.. :roll:
So I'll check TVO's mod tomorrow.
Topic Starter
Kuro

TheVileOne wrote:

Mod as requested

(If I ask a question, it doesn't necessarily mean it's an issue, but rather asking you if you consider it an issue).

General

The standard difficulties all have a red line before the song starts. There's no point to this line and the taiko modes do not have it so it's unrankable anyways. Already removed them
If you're not using 1/8th don't have it selected. Check your green lines, there are unsnapped lines you should fix. Since I made this beatmap before the new hitsounding system, I used a shitload of green lines while mapping the hitsounds. I went ahead and adjusted to the new way of hitsounding instead of resnapping everything and of course I resnapped anything left over.
01:20:666 - There are two green lines really close together. Most of the time there isn't anything mapped here, and there's a break right after. Is that so? Fixed
fail-background and pause-overlay are too large.Ii'm not entirely sure if it's unrankable, but these sizes seem excessive to me. Resized them to 1366x768
That combo burst is huge. You mustn't go over default dimensions for combo bursts (500 x 767) Tried to resize them a bit but the way their shaped, it isn't possible to reach default dimensions without loosing something.

Your backgrounds are all different sizes. that's not a terribly big deal, but the ideal background size for a 4:3 background is 1024x768, and several of your backgrounds are 1023x768. your other ones are slightly larger. The last you could do is resize the 1023 to 1024. I talked with Charles and he says your above dimension bgs are probably fine since widescreen increased the max dimensions. Don't need to change the other ones, but I'm not sure how they will appear in widescreen. I would check to see how they convert to widescreen. Yeah I checked they look fine \o/

Easy

Lots of snapping errors. Most of your notes and green lines are unsnapped. Fixed

00:19:426 (1) - Doesn't really fit. The place where it ends is not meaningful and gives little time to hit the notes after. This is not the place for a spinner of such size should be, certainly not in an Easy. You need to do something about this IMO. Ok, I changed it
00:47:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why did you stop hitsounding? The beat has stopped since the sliders. It's not absolutely necessary, but I would like to know why. Added claps on 2,4,6, and 8
00:52:339 (1,2) - You should stack the ends of these if you're going to have this pattern. Personally I think it would be better if they weren't stacked at all. Ok, I changed it a bit
01:07:339 (1,2,3) - Spacing.IMO you should have 0.60 here. You can keep 0.56 for the rest of the pattern. The gap would be less noticeable. I fixed it.. I think..
01:07:342 - Why do you not have a finish here? Added finish
01:27:342 - ^ Added finish
01:07:339 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Your combos are inconsistent. Fixed

Normal
There's not a lot of hitsounds that aren't finishes. Some claps in choice areas would be well suited. Went back through and hitsounded more

Still unsnapped green lines to be handled Fixed
01:30:675 (6) - Unsnapped Fixed

00:14:009 (1,2,3) - Improve this curve. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611267 < I adjusted with grid snap off, and I rotated your slider to be more vertical. Perhaps it would be better to make the slider symmetrical since you're going right into square patterns right after. fixed?
00:16:092 (1,2) - Make straight? Lower the entire combo to fix. fixed? Not sure if you meant the grid coordinates?
00:26:509 - It sounds better if the repeats stopped before this and a new object was introduced, like a slider. Like so? http://puu.sh/22G3w
00:37:550 (1,2) - Consider soft whistles on the end on one or both of these? It's so quiet. Added to end of 1st slider
00:40:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You had a clap pattern in the Easy. I suggest you have one here as well. Ok
00:47:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you did anything with the Easy here, apply it here to be consistent. Ok
01:07:342 (1,2,3) - Gaps do not flow nearly as well at 0.40 as your note streams. I do not think you should space these so close. My observation is that the transition from 2 to 3 isn't that bad since its prominence in the beat is more clear, but the transition between the two repeat sliders doesn't fit the song. I suggest using at least 0.6 snap between those sliders and IMO it doesn't look that great with both sliders positioned exactly the same and those sliders are a poor representation of the beat since the hitsound tones are unmapped. Revented a bit with them and mapped hitsounds.

Options:

1. Increase the distance of these sliders. The closer to 1.00 they are the more naturally they play.
2. Fill that gap in between the sliders. The problem with this is that it makes the gap at 2,3 feel unnatural. If you want this route you would probably need to either map that gap as well (not recommended) or increase the spacing of 2,3.

01:11:092 (4,2) - doesn't sound bad if you had claps here. Ok
01:16:509 (4,1) - Personally I prefer 0.6 here to your current spacing, but I'm dealing with some lag delay. It's hard to tell if that's affecting my opinion. Hmm...
01:20:676 - Why do you not have a finish here? It didn't end on the downbeat at first so I extended it to 1 of the next beat and added a finish to the end of the slider.
01:22:342 - Why aren't there hitsounds through here? It's like you ignore hitsounding the actual beat. I didn't originally consider placing hitsounds there but I placed claps from there to the end so it should be fine now.

Hard
Sounds like your hitsounds are a WIP. Went ahead and took care of that.

Unsnapped slider ends and green lines (Check aimod) Fixed

00:14:009 (1,2,3) - I have similar feelings to this as in the Normal. fixed?
00:16:092 (1,2) - Same issue as Normal I still don't know what you meant, so I tried something different. Let me know which one of those is close to it, if at all.
00:17:759 (4,5,6) - I feel this is imbalanced. The pattern in Normal was slightly imbalanced as well, but this has shifted the notes in a more inconsistent way. Instead of having the notes go out slightly like in Normal, the note is shifted inward. In Normal 00:19:009 (6) - was 2 units right of the end of the previous slider. At least have it vertical or 1 unit forward. The transition here 00:17:759 (4,5) - in Normal was straight vertical, and in Hard the slider is one unit forward. That doesn't matter so much, as long as the part after it looks remotely balanced. I think I fixed it
00:19:009 (6,1,2) - Take care of this spacing. I used 0.6 throughout those.
00:21:092 (1,2) - This wasn't manually stacked in the Normal. Stack behavior shouldn't be different between difficulties, so why are you stacking differently? (00:22:342 (3,4) - isn't manually stacked and shouldn't be. Just fix the stack) I don't see a difference between either one so I'm not sure. :?
00:25:676 (9) - Similar thoughts as in Normal, but instead of a single slider you could have a compressed triple. http://puu.sh/22aiV Like so? http://puu.sh/22M6J
00:35:051 (4) - I suggest a whistle here to break up the silence. The silence is quite bothersome. Do the same for the other pattern. Ok
00:37:551 (1,2) - Same opinion as the normal with the whistles Ok
00:37:551 (1,2,1) - I don't like this transition. I think this just needs to not overlap at all, especially going into that next combo. The spacing could use an increase between 1,2, and perhaps set it up so that the next combo starts in the middle of the two sliders. Ok, I fixed them
00:39:009 (3) - OMG use hitsounds, this is just bad to have a slider with this many repeats have no beat indicators. It makes it seem like i'm not following the beat at all. Please consider breaking that slider up for a more interesting beat and add hitsounds to it. Not optional in my opinion. Reinvented a bit
00:40:675 (1,2) - Flow is awkward. don't use 0.53 spacing on jump sounds. The rest of the combo is 0.8 and even that's disappointing, but at least playable. Also hitsounds, add them. Don't space 2,3 different than the other slider transitions. Ok
00:47:342 - So quiet through here. The less hitsound notes you skip over the more necessary it is to add hitsounds to those notes. Ok
00:49:842 (10,11,12) - Any reason why this is higher than the other tiers in this pattern? Fixed
00:52:342 (1,2) - I don't care for this angle really. Not a great transition. angle? what angle?
00:54:009 (2,3,4) - spacing? I think I fixed that when I was checking the previous mod.
01:01:717 (1) - End on the green line? All of the spinners at that point, in all the diffs, were changed in previous mod and there is no longer a green line there.
01:07:342 (1,2,3,4) - Make spacing consistent here. Fixed
01:09:634 (5) - Use this slider? http://puu.sh/22bon Fixed
Coordinates
x 208 y 208
x 236 y 232
x 248 y 184
x 276 y 208

01:11:717 (4) - Maybe move up 1 unit to make the part more readable with that stack leaning near it. Fixed
01:17:759 (4,1) - Stack is affecting this spacing. Fixed
01:19:842 (3) - This should end on the downbeat. I can't remember what was there previously but it's just a circle now so... yeah... moving on...
01:32:342 (1) - Why is this spinner longer than the one in Normal and Easy? Fixed

Pure White
This difficulty is in by far the worst shape out of all of them that I have modded. I'm going to wait on the last difficulty because it's taken way too long just to mod these difficulties. Sorry, I've never been good at this... This'll probably be the only set with a full diff. spread by me.

Unsnapped slider ends, and green lines. Check ai mod Fixed

To be continued...

Taking a break, I've been at this all day....
Niko-nyan
hi there here's my mod (for random or maybe M4M)

General
:?: i think taiko bg is unranked maybe just change it
:!: you forgot to uncheck letter box during breaks

Taiko Muzukashii
00:53:384 - you can add a note in here
00:53:592 - ^
01:32:134 - ^

Taiko Oni
can't see anything to mod :)

Easy~
i suggest use CS3


just that i can mod for you :)
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