1. Another (5 stars, 465 notes)
2. Hyper (4.89 stars, 191 notes)
3. KumaTaiko (4.89 stars, 515 notes)
4. Normal (2.78 stars, 88 notes)

gdeath wrote:

我正在法华镇路，速出来面基

• • Preview Point: 56330
  • Disable contdown since it's unused
  • Set the same "Tags" on all difficulties
  • I don't like the combo colours, why don't you use these, for example?
  
  SPOILER

  Open all .osu files and change...
  
  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 198,104,106
  Combo2 : 242,189,242
  Combo3 : 184,148,243

• • Rename this difficulty "Normal" (or "Beginner")
  • 00:39:748 (6) - Delete this circle. Start a spinner here and end it at 00:42:415
  • 00:58:748 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 01:09:415 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:17:081 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 01:18:415 (1) - ^
  • 01:33:081 (1) - ^

• • 00:03:748 (8) - Add "New Combo"
  • 00:10:081 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 00:12:581 (1) - ^
  • 00:24:581 (1) - ^
  • 01:02:915 (1) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

• • Preview Point: 56330
  • Disable contdown since it's unused
  • Set the same "Tags" on all difficulties
  • I don't like the combo colours, why don't you use these, for example?
  
  SPOILER

  Open all .osu files and change...
  
  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 198,104,106
  Combo2 : 242,189,242
  Combo3 : 184,148,243

[Easy+]

• • Rename this difficulty "Normal" (or "Beginner")
  • 00:39:748 (6) - Delete this circle. Start a spinner here and end it at 00:42:415
  • 00:58:748 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 01:09:415 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:17:081 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 01:18:415 (1) - ^
  • 01:33:081 (1) - ^

[Another]

• • 00:03:748 (8) - Add "New Combo"
  • 00:10:081 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 00:12:581 (1) - ^
  • 00:24:581 (1) - ^
  • 01:02:915 (1) - ^

[Another] it's kinda confusing, but it's not bad, after all.
Star~

yangzd88 wrote:

recheck no kd plz

[A(h)other]
00:37:915 (2) - no fin? K
00:44:248 (1,2,3,4) - 正方形不摆大丈夫..? K
01:10:415 (10) - nc K

BakaHuang wrote:

Hi shitDeen :3
just suggestions

[Beginner]
01:10:081(6)-new combo or spacing nope

[Another]
00:44:248(1,2,3,4)-这个是正四边形么 是的话(1,4)太近 k

神麻婆受我一拜！

这个音乐和排布都超爽的~赶紧rank吧<3

no kds

1. Stack Leniency too low..imo

1. 01:06:415 (3,4) - change like this? (I think it is a little strange in easier diff)
   
   
   
   
2. 01:17:081 (4,5) - ^

1. 00:17:081 (T) - delete this timing line?

karenying wrote:

Beginner
01:39:081 (4) - 這遮會被挑吧._. K
01:43:748 - spinner這里結束 K

no kds
喜歡這排列 加油

swish wrote:

All Suggestion

[General]

1. Stack Leniency too low..imo

[Beginner]

1. 01:06:415 (3,4) - change like this? (I think it is a little strange in easier diff) K
   
   
   
   
2. 01:17:081 (4,5) - ^ K

[Hyper]
fine

[Another]

1. 00:17:081 (T) - delete this timing line? K

no kds plz

nice~

qihanzhang wrote:

个人观点、、觉得改了听起来爽一点
Hyper diff.
1：13：165 （加note）nope
1：14：081 同上 nope
1：14：665 这个点出个声音很奇怪、、调小一点或者soft do some change
1：15：331 同上
最高难度不敢打||——、
总体不错
加星星~

Chacha17 wrote:

General
-err. beatmania IIDX as the source for great justice. oops fixed
-14th style Gold in the tags xD i added 14thGold so.

Beginner - Make circle size bigger nope

...nothing much here

Taiko

Confusing slowdowns @_@

Hyper -- Video offset is different in this map! make it consistent @_@ slider tick 1?

00:04:748 (4) - add whistle fixed
00:42:248 (9) - NC for jump? fixed
00:42:415 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:07:081 (1) - remove NC fixed

Another

00:05:415 (3) - remove finish, add whistle fixed
00:05:748 (1) - remove whistle fixed
00:06:248 (3) - ^ fixed

Nice map

1. Offset 1081. In case to follow the time signature.
2. BG image is 1108x768. Resize it to 1024x768.
3. In Artist name change "feat.A/I" to "feat. A/I"

1. 00:14:415 (1) - Spacing. It's too short from previous note.
2. 00:44:415 (1) - Why new combo?

1. You should remove video from this stage, and create some specific BG for it, because watching it at half of screen is a bit ugly.

1. 00:02:415 (4) - Just saying that spacing thing like this one for example are little hard to read.

ShaggoN wrote:

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General

1. Offset 1081. In case to follow the time signature. when my friend online i will discuss this with him(he is pro timing)
2. BG image is 1108x768. Resize it to 1024x768.fixed
3. In Artist name change "feat.A/I" to "feat. A/I"

check the wiki and u r right fixed

[Beginner]

1. 00:14:415 (1) - Spacing. It's too short from previous note.fixed
2. 00:44:415 (1) - Why new combo?

fixed

[Hyper]
Cool stage.

[KumaTaiko]

1. You should remove video from this stage, and create some specific BG for it, because watching it at half of screen is a bit ugly.

removed the video

[Another]

1. 00:02:415 (4) - Just saying that spacing thing like this one for example are little hard to read.

>.>
Stage is fine to play, but a little overmapped imo. No more complains here.

1. BG大了点,裁剪到1024x768像素
2. [Beginner]难度可以不用audio lead-in的,不过加了也没什么问题

1. 00:39:081 (5) - 这里还是用soft hitsound加whistle感觉比较好
2. 01:09:415 (4) - 为什么这里又不加clap了

1. 00:58:415 (4-10) - 建议排成Z字型逐渐向下的,这样会好认得多,打起也更顺
   
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Breeze wrote:

傻根居然也来mod了lol

[General]

1. BG大了点,裁剪到1024x768像素 我打开PS查看了一下确实是1024*768 0.0
2. [Beginner]难度可以不用audio lead-in的,不过加了也没什么问题

fixed

[Beginner]

1. 00:39:081 (5) - 这里还是用soft hitsound加whistle感觉比较好 fixed
2. 01:09:415 (4) - 为什么这里又不加clap了

fixed

[Another]

1. 00:58:415 (4-10) - 建议排成Z字型逐渐向下的,这样会好认得多,打起也更顺 nice fixed
   
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其他没什么了
nice map
star

Breeze wrote:

No, still 1204x768, not 1024x768
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Resize please, then do a full-submit

tsuka wrote:

Beginner:
00:17:081 (1) - one grid right or 00:17:415 (2) - one grid right 大快人心
00:29:081 (1) - decrease the spinner for a beat (for nazi)大快人心
01:26:415 (1) - ^大快人心
(反正新手又不懂 等下BAT又来屌你 还不如让他们没得搞)

Hyper:
the offset of hyper is different from others dffis ,make it same as others pls大快人心

Another:
00:39:915 (1) - newcombo
01:19:248 (1) - ^

好 搞定 我怒滚

Backfire wrote:

Taiko -
This is very important.
It's noted to NOT put kiai flashes as they can be distracting and they're unrankable on taiko diffs. So all of the kiai parts that flash and stuff, remove those. In Taiko no tatsujin games, kiai equivalent is go go time. You're only allowed 3 of them.

YGOkid8 wrote:

...wow, someone went overkill with their kudosu much? o.o

General:
- There's too big of a difficulty gap between Beginner and Hyper. You need a Normal diff. no i dont think so.Hyer diff is a very balance diff imo
some challenge but not very hard and it's very fun to play so i dont add a normal diff sry

Beginner:
01:04:081 (4,5) - Spacing Fixed
00:29:081 (1,1) - Not enough spin recovery time Fixed
00:33:748 (4) - Best not to use kick sliders with more than one repeat in an Easy, unless there's nothing aftewards.Fixed
01:26:415 (1,1) - Not enough spin recover time Fixed

Hyper and Another looks fine.

I don't mod Taiko, ask lepidopodus to check.

Muya wrote:

I'll mapping this song

better BG?

SPOILER

CDFA wrote:

Modding this from #modreqs.

I modded this 11 Months ago. Now I'm back and I'll actually do a real mod.

Overall:
Your claps! Put them on 2 and 4 I LOVE TaQQQQQQQQ so i keep them

Taiko
This red timing section is different then the other diffs~
You have a lot of unsnapped notes! ;~;. Snap them >3<~
oops i got fixed all thx
Another:
00:04:415 (2) - This spacing is like really weird hmm....fixed
00:17:748 (1,2,3) - weird jump o-o 0-0
00:50:415 (3) - Stack this with (2) :3 :3 fixed
01:23:248 (14) - I'm not sure if this is a good idea seeing how there's no signification that there's a slider speed change here
it's follow the rhythm but so many peoples complain they break here i decided to change it x.x
Hyper:
Cool

Beginner:
01:23:748 (1,1) - Remove these~ fixed

skl;l;ksdfj;g it's like your lower diffs are good but once you get to the highest diff, you're trying too hard to overmap, and sometimes it works, but sometimes, it doesn't and makes the map look weird. i dont think so maybe i wil call yyy check it

SPOILER

1. 00:15:081 (2,3,4) - In play mode, (3)'s hitburst still covers your 00:17:748 (3)'s start, perhaps create symmetry like this to avoid overlap?
   
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2. 00:19:415 (x), 00:19:748 (x) - The music continues here - add a circle here and start the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 after?
3. 00:29:081 (x) - Again here, the music continues - I really recommend to add a note with finish and new combo here, and start the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 after (:
4. 00:32:081 (1) - This is too early after spinner for the easiest diff >_< - uhm, end the spinner on 00:30:915 instead? (you can add whistle there!) and add a circle on 00:31:748 (1) :3
5. 00:37:748 (5) - (optional) Would be fancy imo if you made this encircle (2) (: - also, whistle on slider's start as well for consistency?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:39:748 (1) - Same here also, add circle with finish and start spinner 1/4 or 1/2 after~
7. 00:43:748 (1) - Make this as a 1/2 slider, and put the finish on slider's end to fit the song (:
8. 00:58:415 (x) - (optional) Add circle here on ~x:345 y:364? The slight arc there is good for building flow imo :3
9. 00:59:748 (1,3) - Also try to apply this shape to these two if you want, it's fancy to build some flow~
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:02:415 (1) - Add finish here - there's clearly a finish from the song here :3
11. 01:06:415 (3) - (optional) Add a slight arc here (midpoint on ~x:144 y:304, endpoint on ~x:110 y:288)?
12. 01:07:748 (x) - Also here, please add circle with finish, the rhythm feels discontinued without it ):
13. 01:13:581 (2,4) - Is it intentional to make these two's curve unsymmetrical? If you want to keep this, I think it's best to use a slider wave instead, it gives a more distinctive copy-paste effect imo >_<
14. 01:16:248 (2,4,5) - Don't discontinue the whistle here - please add whistle on these three (especially on (4)'s start) to make the part before the break more dramatic :3
15. 01:17:081 (4) - (optional) I personally disliked how it overlaps with (5) - make it encircle (3) instead?
16. 01:18:415 (6) - Why no finish here orz ._.
17. 01:33:081 (3,4) - Hmm, is the whistle on both slider's end required? imo it's best to only use whistles on both slider's start to follow the piano~
18. 01:37:081 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) For variation here, try a slider fan for the ending pattern? Also try to gradually increase the whistles' volume, it sounds great (:
19. 01:39:748 (1) - Hmm, yep~ Add note with whistle/finish here and start spinner 1/4 or 1/2 after?

1. 00:01:748 (3) - Add whistle also to accompany the accoustic guitar? :3
2. 00:07:081 (3) - Same as above~
3. 00:09:081 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) Maybe try manual stacking like this? It'll make the map more dramatic imo xD
   
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4. 00:14:081 (x) - Add note here, as the guitar continues here? (you can just put it at ~x:281 y:260, so (4)'s end, (6)'s end, and this note forms a diagonal formation)
5. 00:19:415 (x) - Same as above, but for this one I suggest to put on x:256 y:47 so there will be a small jump (plays great before the spinner imo (: )
6. 00:25:581 (7) - (optional) Create an elbow slider here to make this slider tidier?
7. 00:31:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Select these six and move it more to the left? This is to create a diagonal movement from (3) to (1) :3
8. 00:40:748 (3) - Rather than a straight slider here, I prefer to slightly curve it like this to continue (2)'s flow:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:43:748 (4,5,6,7,8) - (optional) Create something centered on (3) instead like this? (the key here is rotating each slider by 72° xD)
   
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10. 00:57:081 (1) - CTRL+R? It can give a more unique flow imo~
11. 00:59:748 (1) - Starting from here idk your whistles sounded quite random... I think it's best to put whistles every time the vocals go high, for example (2,3)'s start, 01:01:081 (1), 01:01:581 (4)'s start, and so on :3
12. 01:02:415 (1) - Move it a bit more to the upper-left (~x:239 y:88) to give more space between this slider and (2)?
13. 01:03:748 (1,2,3) - (optional) I think for variation something like this won't hurt :3
    
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14. 01:10:415 (1) - Why no whistle on repeat as well here? The vocals' pitch even goes higher from (1)~
15. 01:12:415 (4) - CTRL+R to create a circular movement on (4,5)?
16. 01:17:331 (2,2) - (optional) imo it will play better if you moved the (2)s down a bit, (1,2,3) will form a good arc this way ^^
17. 01:37:081 (1,2,3,4) - Would be beautiful if you make the ending part more hectic by increasing the jump's distance, but of course it's not a must~

1. 00:00:915 (3,4,1) - On these three, try to use whistle only on (4) - it will be more dramatic this way imo because of the accoustic guitar's start xD
2. 00:05:415 (1) - (optional) Stack this below your previous slider's end instead? I think it will also make the map more dramatic :3 (a manual stacking like I pictured on Sprosive's Hyper is also usable~)
3. 00:13:415 (3) - Uhm, if you're following the guitar for the N soundsample, there should be N soundsample here as well >_<
4. 00:13:748 (6,7,8,9) - (optional) Create a symmetry jump here? I think it flows better:
   
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5. 00:17:832 (2,3) - Move 1/4 after and stack to (4) - the guitar's triple are there, actually :3
6. 00:21:415 (5) - The N soundsample should be on this slider's start instead of (4) xD
7. 00:26:581 (2,3) - Hmm, I think you can play around more with stacking here - I suggest to put (2)'s start stacked to your purple (3) and put 00:26:915 (3)'s end stacked to 00:27:581 (1) :3
8. 00:28:748 (2) - Uhm, isn't this should be on x:152 y:216 instead to create a perfect triangle >_<
9. 00:29:581 (6) - Please move this upper (~x:255 y:107) because in play mode, 00:28:915 (1) will cover up this note if you don't move this upper (due to stacking's nature xD)
10. 00:31:248 (1,2,3) - This clustering is really uncomfortable to read - perhaps a power jump like this would work better? ((1) is a repeating slider, stacked above your pink combo)
    
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11. 00:39:081 (6) - Hmm, I don't think putting a soft-hitfinish this early after your previous one is a good idea, if you want to use a soft-hitfinish here perhaps try to remove the one on here and add soft-hitfinishes on 00:39:248 (1,3,4,6) ?
12. 00:40:581 (1,1) - (optional) Personally I don't think facing these two downward flows good, I prefer to put the endpoint of 00:40:581 (1) to ~x:480 y:73 and the endpoint of 00:41:248 (1) to ~x:102 y:79 :3
13. 00:46:415 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uhm, create a star jump here (few adjustments with CTRL+R will do) to keep it moving? (because your previous (1,2,3,4,5) is a moving flow~)
14. 00:49:331 (3) - Move 1/4 earlier - the bass appears 1/4 earlier :3
15. 00:59:748 (2) - Stack to (9) instead to make this tidier?
16. 01:02:415 (1) - Add finish on slider's start here as there's a cymbal from the song~
17. 01:07:915 (3,5) - (optional) Add a slight curve on these two (to the right for (3) and the left for (5)) to improve flow here?
18. 01:10:081 (9) - Arrange like this, so (1) will continue the direction given from (9)?
    
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19. 01:18:415 (2,4) - Put finish on (2) as there's a cymbal there. Also, (optional) move (2) and (4) further from (6) so there will be a progressive fan pattern here? xD
20. 01:25:498 (8,10,12) - Also on these three, move these three a bit so the stream will be zig-zag? Will be fancier this way imo :3
21. 01:33:415 (1,2,3,4) - Another fancy thing that you can do here, CTRL+R one by one to improve the circular movement here~
22. 01:35:248 (1) - Personally I disliked the cluster with your brown (1) here... Moving this to x:80 to avoid cluster isn't that hard, though (:

Niva wrote:

Hi DeeN~
Random mod, I love DJ YOSHITAKA's songs :3

[General]

-> There is no space between "feat." and "A/I" - look at this bmIIDX14 CS screenshot:

SPOILER

-> The most critical error imo is the offset - the offset should be on 00:01:081 to make the metronome sounds correctly >_<
-> Set lead-in time manually for all diffs (except beginner) to 1500? (currently is 1511)
-> Yes, this song comes first from GuitarFreaks & DrumMania, so source should be "GuitarFreaks & DrumMania" ("beatmania IIDX" should be in tags)
-> As this song shares a connectivity to this map, add that map's link in creator's words? (:
-> And finally, not a must but it would be nice if you create a lyrics storyboard for this xD (especially on 01:19:081 and so on, it goes really dramatic together with the video... I know some words are "Have you ever heard of two people of the time?" and so on :3)

[Beginner]

-> About the difficulty gap... Hmm, yeah, I feel it too, however I think it's best to make this diff harder (around ~2.75 in star rating, so the diff spread will be N-I-I instead of E-I-I, current Hyper is great already imo) - to start with it, AR and OD +1? (I'll give suggestions how to make this diff harder in this mod, don't worry ^^)

1. 00:15:081 (2,3,4) - In play mode, (3)'s hitburst still covers your 00:17:748 (3)'s start, perhaps create symmetry like this to avoid overlap?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:19:415 (x), 00:19:748 (x) - The music continues here - add a circle here and start the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 after?
3. 00:29:081 (x) - Again here, the music continues - I really recommend to add a note with finish and new combo here, and start the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 after (:
4. 00:32:081 (1) - This is too early after spinner for the easiest diff >_< - uhm, end the spinner on 00:30:915 instead? (you can add whistle there!) and add a circle on 00:31:748 (1) :3
5. 00:37:748 (5) - (optional) Would be fancy imo if you made this encircle (2) (: - also, whistle on slider's start as well for consistency?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:39:748 (1) - Same here also, add circle with finish and start spinner 1/4 or 1/2 after~
7. 00:43:748 (1) - Make this as a 1/2 slider, and put the finish on slider's end to fit the song (:
8. 00:58:415 (x) - (optional) Add circle here on ~x:345 y:364? The slight arc there is good for building flow imo :3
9. 00:59:748 (1,3) - Also try to apply this shape to these two if you want, it's fancy to build some flow~
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:02:415 (1) - Add finish here - there's clearly a finish from the song here :3
11. 01:06:415 (3) - (optional) Add a slight arc here (midpoint on ~x:144 y:304, endpoint on ~x:110 y:288)?
12. 01:07:748 (x) - Also here, please add circle with finish, the rhythm feels discontinued without it ):
13. 01:13:581 (2,4) - Is it intentional to make these two's curve unsymmetrical? If you want to keep this, I think it's best to use a slider wave instead, it gives a more distinctive copy-paste effect imo >_<
14. 01:16:248 (2,4,5) - Don't discontinue the whistle here - please add whistle on these three (especially on (4)'s start) to make the part before the break more dramatic :3
15. 01:17:081 (4) - (optional) I personally disliked how it overlaps with (5) - make it encircle (3) instead?
16. 01:18:415 (6) - Why no finish here orz ._.
17. 01:33:081 (3,4) - Hmm, is the whistle on both slider's end required? imo it's best to only use whistles on both slider's start to follow the piano~
18. 01:37:081 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) For variation here, try a slider fan for the ending pattern? Also try to gradually increase the whistles' volume, it sounds great (:
19. 01:39:748 (1) - Hmm, yep~ Add note with whistle/finish here and start spinner 1/4 or 1/2 after?

...now the difficulty spread should be more balanced (especially if you followed the spinners' suggestion xD) - rename to Normal also if you want (:

[Hyper]

-> Why drain rate so low o.o

1. 00:01:748 (3) - Add whistle also to accompany the accoustic guitar? :3
2. 00:07:081 (3) - Same as above~
3. 00:09:081 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) Maybe try manual stacking like this? It'll make the map more dramatic imo xD
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:14:081 (x) - Add note here, as the guitar continues here? (you can just put it at ~x:281 y:260, so (4)'s end, (6)'s end, and this note forms a diagonal formation)
5. 00:19:415 (x) - Same as above, but for this one I suggest to put on x:256 y:47 so there will be a small jump (plays great before the spinner imo (: )
6. 00:25:581 (7) - (optional) Create an elbow slider here to make this slider tidier?
7. 00:31:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Select these six and move it more to the left? This is to create a diagonal movement from (3) to (1) :3
8. 00:40:748 (3) - Rather than a straight slider here, I prefer to slightly curve it like this to continue (2)'s flow:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:43:748 (4,5,6,7,8) - (optional) Create something centered on (3) instead like this? (the key here is rotating each slider by 72° xD)
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:57:081 (1) - CTRL+R? It can give a more unique flow imo~
11. 00:59:748 (1) - Starting from here idk your whistles sounded quite random... I think it's best to put whistles every time the vocals go high, for example (2,3)'s start, 01:01:081 (1), 01:01:581 (4)'s start, and so on :3
12. 01:02:415 (1) - Move it a bit more to the upper-left (~x:239 y:88) to give more space between this slider and (2)?
13. 01:03:748 (1,2,3) - (optional) I think for variation something like this won't hurt :3
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:10:415 (1) - Why no whistle on repeat as well here? The vocals' pitch even goes higher from (1)~
15. 01:12:415 (4) - CTRL+R to create a circular movement on (4,5)?
16. 01:17:331 (2,2) - (optional) imo it will play better if you moved the (2)s down a bit, (1,2,3) will form a good arc this way ^^
17. 01:37:081 (1,2,3,4) - Would be beautiful if you make the ending part more hectic by increasing the jump's distance, but of course it's not a must~

[Another]

1. 00:00:915 (3,4,1) - On these three, try to use whistle only on (4) - it will be more dramatic this way imo because of the accoustic guitar's start xD
2. 00:05:415 (1) - (optional) Stack this below your previous slider's end instead? I think it will also make the map more dramatic :3 (a manual stacking like I pictured on Sprosive's Hyper is also usable~)
3. 00:13:415 (3) - Uhm, if you're following the guitar for the N soundsample, there should be N soundsample here as well >_<
4. 00:13:748 (6,7,8,9) - (optional) Create a symmetry jump here? I think it flows better:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:17:832 (2,3) - Move 1/4 after and stack to (4) - the guitar's triple are there, actually :3
6. 00:21:415 (5) - The N soundsample should be on this slider's start instead of (4) xD
7. 00:26:581 (2,3) - Hmm, I think you can play around more with stacking here - I suggest to put (2)'s start stacked to your purple (3) and put 00:26:915 (3)'s end stacked to 00:27:581 (1) :3
8. 00:28:748 (2) - Uhm, isn't this should be on x:152 y:216 instead to create a perfect triangle >_<
9. 00:29:581 (6) - Please move this upper (~x:255 y:107) because in play mode, 00:28:915 (1) will cover up this note if you don't move this upper (due to stacking's nature xD)
10. 00:31:248 (1,2,3) - This clustering is really uncomfortable to read - perhaps a power jump like this would work better? ((1) is a repeating slider, stacked above your pink combo)
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:39:081 (6) - Hmm, I don't think putting a soft-hitfinish this early after your previous one is a good idea, if you want to use a soft-hitfinish here perhaps try to remove the one on here and add soft-hitfinishes on 00:39:248 (1,3,4,6) ?
12. 00:40:581 (1,1) - (optional) Personally I don't think facing these two downward flows good, I prefer to put the endpoint of 00:40:581 (1) to ~x:480 y:73 and the endpoint of 00:41:248 (1) to ~x:102 y:79 :3
13. 00:46:415 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uhm, create a star jump here (few adjustments with CTRL+R will do) to keep it moving? (because your previous (1,2,3,4,5) is a moving flow~)
14. 00:49:331 (3) - Move 1/4 earlier - the bass appears 1/4 earlier :3
15. 00:59:748 (2) - Stack to (9) instead to make this tidier?
16. 01:02:415 (1) - Add finish on slider's start here as there's a cymbal from the song~
17. 01:07:915 (3,5) - (optional) Add a slight curve on these two (to the right for (3) and the left for (5)) to improve flow here?
18. 01:10:081 (9) - Arrange like this, so (1) will continue the direction given from (9)?
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 01:18:415 (2,4) - Put finish on (2) as there's a cymbal there. Also, (optional) move (2) and (4) further from (6) so there will be a progressive fan pattern here? xD
20. 01:25:498 (8,10,12) - Also on these three, move these three a bit so the stream will be zig-zag? Will be fancier this way imo :3
21. 01:33:415 (1,2,3,4) - Another fancy thing that you can do here, CTRL+R one by one to improve the circular movement here~
22. 01:35:248 (1) - Personally I disliked the cluster with your brown (1) here... Moving this to x:80 to avoid cluster isn't that hard, though (:

Sprosive's Hyper is amazing >_< (I'm a fan of his mapping style, to be honest :3) - I can't mod taiko, but I've tested it in AutoPlay and KumaTaiko seems fine~

But I agree with CDFA here about the highest diff kinda looks weird, imo the weirdness comes from the hitsound (which is being quite random) - I didn't mod Another's hitsound much here, well if you need reference you can just see how Sprosive hitsounded his diff ^^

Good luck DeeN (:

1. 00:17:081 (1) -
2. 00:23:748 (1) -
3. 00:39:748 (6) -
4. 00:57:081 (5) -
5. 01:05:081 (4) -
6. 01:10:415 (1) -
7. 01:11:748 (2) - slider end
8. 01:21:581 (4) -
9. 01:23:748 (3) -
10. 01:26:415 (1) - slider start
11. 01:26:998 (3) -
12. 01:33:248 (4) -
13. 01:34:415 (4) - slider start

1. 00:56:415 (1,2,3,4,5) - There are few alternatives here:
   
   1. Add whistles on everything except (3) and (5)'s end,
   2. Add whistles on everything except (1), (2) and (5)'s end, and
   3. Add whistles on everything except (5)'s end
   Additionally, if you choose the last option, you can to use a gradual volume increase as well (: (20 -> 30 -> 40 -> 50 -> 60)
2. 00:58:081 (1) -
3. 00:58:415 (4) -
4. 00:58:915 (7) -
5. 00:59:415 (10) -
6. 00:59:748 (2) -
7. 01:00:248 (6) -
8. 01:00:748 (10) -
9. 01:01:081 (11) - slider start, with sliderwhistle
10. 01:01:581 (12) - slider start
11. 01:02:081 (2) -
12. 01:02:415 (1) - slider start
13. 01:02:915 (2) -
14. 01:03:415 (1) - slider start
15. 01:03:748 (3) -
16. 01:04:248 (7) - slider start, with sliderwhistle
17. 01:04:748 (2) -
18. 01:05:081 (4) -
19. 01:05:581 (7) -
20. 01:06:248 (1) -
21. 01:07:081 (7) - remove whistle here
22. 01:07:415 (11) -

• Put whistles only on these following places - remove your other whistles

1. 01:18:748 (4) -
2. 01:19:081 (6) -
3. 01:19:248 (7) - slider start
4. 01:19:581 (8) - slider start
5. 01:19:915 (9) - slider start
6. 01:20:248 (10) -
7. 01:20:581 (13) - (if you want)
8. 01:20:748 (14) - slider start
9. 01:21:415 (3) -
10. 01:21:748 (5) - slider start and end
11. 01:22:081 (6) - slider end
12. 01:22:581 (3) -
13. 01:22:915 (6) -
14. 01:23:247 (8) -
15. 01:23:415 (9) -
16. 01:24:081 (2) -
17. 01:22:581 (3) - slider start and end
18. 01:24:748 (5) - slider end
19. 01:25:081 (6) - slider end
20. 01:25:581 (9) -
21. 01:26:081 (14) -

Niva wrote:

Hehe, I've told you before, I love DJ YOSHITAKA songs~ This one is a such fun map to mod, actually xD

Hmm, I think to fix the hitsounds on Another, first, it's best to put finishes on the following places:

1. 00:17:081 (1) -
2. 00:23:748 (1) -
3. 00:39:748 (6) -
4. 00:57:081 (5) -
5. 01:05:081 (4) -
6. 01:10:415 (1) -
7. 01:11:748 (2) - slider end
8. 01:21:581 (4) -
9. 01:23:748 (3) -
10. 01:26:415 (1) - slider start
11. 01:26:998 (3) -
12. 01:33:248 (4) -
13. 01:34:415 (4) - slider start

To follow this song's cymbals (:

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For the whistles (I think it's the most random one in the map), especially normal whistles, it's best to use it on parts where the vocals/instruments hits high note (Sprosive already did it in Hyper :3) - for example, I'll take from that "sabakareru~" part:

1. 00:56:415 (1,2,3,4,5) - There are few alternatives here:
   
   1. Add whistles on everything except (3) and (5)'s end,
   2. Add whistles on everything except (1), (2) and (5)'s end, and
   3. Add whistles on everything except (5)'s end
   Additionally, if you choose the last option, you can to use a gradual volume increase as well (: (20 -> 30 -> 40 -> 50 -> 60)
2. 00:58:081 (1) -
3. 00:58:415 (4) -
4. 00:58:915 (7) -
5. 00:59:415 (10) -
6. 00:59:748 (2) -
7. 01:00:248 (6) -
8. 01:00:748 (10) -
9. 01:01:081 (11) - slider start, with sliderwhistle
10. 01:01:581 (12) - slider start
11. 01:02:081 (2) -
12. 01:02:415 (1) - slider start
13. 01:02:915 (2) -
14. 01:03:415 (1) - slider start
15. 01:03:748 (3) -
16. 01:04:248 (7) - slider start, with sliderwhistle
17. 01:04:748 (2) -
18. 01:05:081 (4) -
19. 01:05:581 (7) -
20. 01:06:248 (1) -
21. 01:07:081 (7) - remove whistle here
22. 01:07:415 (11) -

...and so on - for the instrument part, I'll take the guitar chorus (01:18:414 and so on) for example:

• Put whistles only on these following places - remove your other whistles

1. 01:18:748 (4) -
2. 01:19:081 (6) -
3. 01:19:248 (7) - slider start
4. 01:19:581 (8) - slider start
5. 01:19:915 (9) - slider start
6. 01:20:248 (10) -
7. 01:20:581 (13) - (if you want)
8. 01:20:748 (14) - slider start
9. 01:21:415 (3) -
10. 01:21:748 (5) - slider start and end
11. 01:22:081 (6) - slider end
12. 01:22:581 (3) -
13. 01:22:915 (6) -
14. 01:23:247 (8) -
15. 01:23:415 (9) -
16. 01:24:081 (2) -
17. 01:22:581 (3) - slider start and end
18. 01:24:748 (5) - slider end
19. 01:25:081 (6) - slider end
20. 01:25:581 (9) -
21. 01:26:081 (14) -

...and so on~ Remember, while placing whistles like this, slider whistles in a correct place can make the song much more dramatic (as I've said many times, Sprosive's Hyper is a good example of this technique's usage :3)

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Uhm, about the claps... It's good already imo, could be more consistent (like 00:41:915 (1) for example, putting a clap on blue tick is quite weird because there's barely something from the song there) but I've looked to your SigSig map and your clapping style is fine for me~
The mass amount of finishes are also cleverly placed for me, could be tidier but I'll let others look for it :3

Overall needs some more work imo >_<
I'll shoot star for now, though - I really enjoyed your movie and the song itself, and of course that Sprosive's lovely Hyper ^^

XK2238 wrote:

Found this song, and... Almost broke in tears because of the vocal lol
Taiko mod only, can't do std .-.

[KumaTaiko]

At first I'm confused with the 1/6 snapping... But it's really excellent. <3

01:39:415 (228) - I suggest changing this slider to 'D d K', like this:
fixed

01:39:914 - Maybe add a spinner? Ending can be either at 01:42:414 or 01:45:080 nope

That's all, good luck \:D/

1. 00:14:415 (1) - I prefer to remove the whistle here, as the piano doesn't go too distinctive here ._.
2. 00:19:414 (1,2) - Space it more from (3)'s end with distance snap on (as this is a Normal difficulty, don't create anti-jump here >_<)
3. 00:33:748 (5,6) - This also, please space it out correctly with proper distance spacing (you can arrange like this for example, (6) is stacked to your next (4) ^^
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:34:415 (6,1) - Hum, also with this note, put new combo on (6) instead of (1)?
5. 00:39:747 (6) - Space it more from (5) with proper distance spacing, also new combo here? :3
6. 00:44:414 (1) - Finish on slider's end please, you're missing it ._.
7. 01:10:415 (1,2,3,4) - The whistles spam here doesn't sound really good, maybe use whistles only on every slider's start?
8. 01:37:080 (5) - Should be a new combo here, obvious enough >_<

1. 00:14:080 (7) - Uhm, is this spacing intentional? Because 00:18:748 (4,5) is a jump I think it would be more intuitive if this is a jump as well (instead of anti-jump):
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:31:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you can please move it more to the bottom-left, I just don't want (5)'s repeat overlaps with your next (2) here >_<
3. 00:43:748 (4,5,6,7,8) - My suggestion remains the same about the star-shaped jump, if you're having trouble creating it here's the code:
   
   

   292,150,43581,1,0
   372,166,43748,2,0,B|444:182,1,70
   297,228,44080,2,0,B|304:301,1,70
   215,176,44414,2,0,B|147:205,1,70
   239,82,44747,2,0,B|190:26,1,70
   335,76,45080,1,0

   
   ...uhm, because Sprosive's whistles are following the vocals, I think it can be improved:
   
4. 00:58:081 (6) - Whistle on slider's start and end?
5. 00:58:915 (2) - Whistle on slider's start?
6. 01:01:581 (4) - Whistle on slider's start?
7. 01:02:081 (7) - Whistle here?
8. 01:02:415 (1) - Finish here on slider's start (along with the whistle)?
9. 01:02:748 (2) - Whistle on slider's end?
10. 01:05:081 (1) - Whistle on slider's start?
11. 01:05:581 (3) - Whistle here?
12. 01:09:248 (7,8) - Put whistle on (7)'s end, remove whistle on (8)
13. 01:12:748 (5) - Put the whistle on slider's start (instead of slider's end)

1. 00:01:414 (2) - I prefer removing the whistle here because the guitar isn't that strong here >_<
2. 00:04:414 (2) - Move the whistle from slider's start to slider's end?
3. 00:41:914 (1) - Do you really need the clap on 00:42:164 (blue tick) here? imo it's better without it (so the last clap will be emphasized) orz >_<
4. 00:56:414 (1,2,3) - I just got this idea recently, try to create a bigger jump here so (4) can be placed tidily in the middle like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:07:414 (11) - Considering you're following the synth here for whistles, please add a whistle here as well, feels discontinued without it :3
6. 01:13:081 (5) - Uhm, the new combo should be here instead on your next (1) ^^
7. 01:35:747 (5) - Also here, please put the new combo here so your new combo pattern will be consistent with your previous (1,2,3,4)

Niva wrote:

Wow, this has improved a lot now ^^~

Don't kudosu this post~
(this is just a recheck)

[Normal]

1. 00:14:415 (1) - I prefer to remove the whistle here, as the piano doesn't go too distinctive here ._.
2. 00:19:414 (1,2) - Space it more from (3)'s end with distance snap on (as this is a Normal difficulty, don't create anti-jump here >_<)
3. 00:33:748 (5,6) - This also, please space it out correctly with proper distance spacing (you can arrange like this for example, (6) is stacked to your next (4) ^^
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:34:415 (6,1) - Hum, also with this note, put new combo on (6) instead of (1)?
5. 00:39:747 (6) - Space it more from (5) with proper distance spacing, also new combo here? :3
6. 00:44:414 (1) - Finish on slider's end please, you're missing it ._.
7. 01:10:415 (1,2,3,4) - The whistles spam here doesn't sound really good, maybe use whistles only on every slider's start?
8. 01:37:080 (5) - Should be a new combo here, obvious enough >_<

[Hyper]

1. 00:14:080 (7) - Uhm, is this spacing intentional? Because 00:18:748 (4,5) is a jump I think it would be more intuitive if this is a jump as well (instead of anti-jump):
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:31:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you can please move it more to the bottom-left, I just don't want (5)'s repeat overlaps with your next (2) here >_<
3. 00:43:748 (4,5,6,7,8) - My suggestion remains the same about the star-shaped jump, if you're having trouble creating it here's the code:
   
   

   292,150,43581,1,0
   372,166,43748,2,0,B|444:182,1,70
   297,228,44080,2,0,B|304:301,1,70
   215,176,44414,2,0,B|147:205,1,70
   239,82,44747,2,0,B|190:26,1,70
   335,76,45080,1,0

   
   ...uhm, because Sprosive's whistles are following the vocals, I think it can be improved:
   
4. 00:58:081 (6) - Whistle on slider's start and end?
5. 00:58:915 (2) - Whistle on slider's start?
6. 01:01:581 (4) - Whistle on slider's start?
7. 01:02:081 (7) - Whistle here?
8. 01:02:415 (1) - Finish here on slider's start (along with the whistle)?
9. 01:02:748 (2) - Whistle on slider's end?
10. 01:05:081 (1) - Whistle on slider's start?
11. 01:05:581 (3) - Whistle here?
12. 01:09:248 (7,8) - Put whistle on (7)'s end, remove whistle on (8)
13. 01:12:748 (5) - Put the whistle on slider's start (instead of slider's end)

[Another]

1. 00:01:414 (2) - I prefer removing the whistle here because the guitar isn't that strong here >_<
2. 00:04:414 (2) - Move the whistle from slider's start to slider's end?
3. 00:41:914 (1) - Do you really need the clap on 00:42:164 (blue tick) here? imo it's better without it (so the last clap will be emphasized) orz >_<
4. 00:56:414 (1,2,3) - I just got this idea recently, try to create a bigger jump here so (4) can be placed tidily in the middle like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:07:414 (11) - Considering you're following the synth here for whistles, please add a whistle here as well, feels discontinued without it :3
6. 01:13:081 (5) - Uhm, the new combo should be here instead on your next (1) ^^
7. 01:35:747 (5) - Also here, please put the new combo here so your new combo pattern will be consistent with your previous (1,2,3,4)

(:

1. I know the title is a bit different with Muya's ranked ver. of this song, but I've looked around and found this:
   
   1. CaptivAte Compilation refers the song as CaptivAte ~Sabaki~ instead of CaptivAte~Sabaki~
   2. I have this song's BMS file in my Lunatic Rave 2, and it's named CaptivAte -SABAKI- [Another14].bme instead of CaptivAte-SABAKI- [Another14].bme
   3. This site wrote "Sabaki" with space for the romaji
2. About DeeN's clap usage, it might be quite random but I fully understand he got the inspiration for it from another DJ YOSHITAKA songs (CaptivAte～裁き～(SUBLIME TECHNO MIX) and Contract) - it doesn't end up abrupt though, now it ends up in an unique clapping imo~
   
3. The 1/6s in Taiko are also fine imo (as I asked XK2238 himself to mod it, and he loved it, plus I saw some taiko mods in page 3-4 and no major complaints about it (:
   
4. The video might not be related to beatmania IIDX, but as this is the continuation of this ranked map I suppose it's fine (the video matches anyway xD)