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Overall
00:00:082 - 这根红线不删吗
00:55:748 - preview放到这怎么样
00:55:748 - preview放到这怎么样
Easy+
00:05:415 - 这三根绿线不删吗
00:40:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 会被彩笔们黑死的
00:40:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 会被彩笔们黑死的
Another
我弱比啊以后别找我音效
overall - normal听起来比soft声音大这么多没问题吗
00:21:331 (4) - 音效不和谐
00:27:581 (1) - ^
00:52:915 (9) - ^
01:00:081 (5,6) - ^
01:16:748 (8) - ^
01:16:915 (1) - ^
01:36:915 (9) - ^
01:37:915 (3) - ^
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还是音效
00:11:748 (3) - finish?
00:29:081 (3) - ^
00:34:415 (11) - ^
00:39:748 (6) - ^
00:50:415 (3) - ^
01:07:748 (2) - ^
01:39:415 (1,3) - ^
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节奏
00:06:081 (2) - > 前移一格(00:05:998
01:07:748 (2,3) - ^
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排列
01:29:915 (1,2,1,2,3) - 间距这么蛋疼没问题吗
00:24:915 (2,3,4,5,6) - just wtf
00:29:248 (4,5,6,7) - also just wtf
00:44:748 (4) - .
01:00:581 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - still just wtf
01:31:748 (1,2,3) - aimod
01:33:248 (4) - aimod
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nazi
00:16:248 (1) - ^?
00:31:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 看着不和谐
01:08:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:07:748 (2,3,4,5) - 打着不和谐
01:13:081 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 衔接不和谐
01:38:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - 打着不和谐
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看不顺眼的
00:11:748 (3) - newcombo
00:45:415 (1) ~ 00:52:915 (9) - 这段绝对会被骂死的(望lzy
overall - normal听起来比soft声音大这么多没问题吗
00:21:331 (4) - 音效不和谐
00:27:581 (1) - ^
00:52:915 (9) - ^
01:00:081 (5,6) - ^
01:16:748 (8) - ^
01:16:915 (1) - ^
01:36:915 (9) - ^
01:37:915 (3) - ^
还是音效
00:11:748 (3) - finish?
00:29:081 (3) - ^
00:34:415 (11) - ^
00:39:748 (6) - ^
00:50:415 (3) - ^
01:07:748 (2) - ^
01:39:415 (1,3) - ^
节奏
00:06:081 (2) - > 前移一格(00:05:998
01:07:748 (2,3) - ^
排列
01:29:915 (1,2,1,2,3) - 间距这么蛋疼没问题吗
00:24:915 (2,3,4,5,6) - just wtf
00:29:248 (4,5,6,7) - also just wtf
00:44:748 (4) - .
01:00:581 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - still just wtf
01:31:748 (1,2,3) - aimod
01:33:248 (4) - aimod
nazi
00:16:248 (1) - ^?
00:31:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 看着不和谐
01:08:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:07:748 (2,3,4,5) - 打着不和谐
01:13:081 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 衔接不和谐
01:38:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - 打着不和谐
00:11:748 (3) - newcombo
00:45:415 (1) ~ 00:52:915 (9) - 这段绝对会被骂死的(望lzy
Hi there!!
[Easy+]:
This ain't no Easy :<. I think you should just name it a Normal. Some of the parts are a bit tough. 180BPM is fast too.
00:11:748 (1,2,3,4) - Even if this is a Normal, noobs won't be able to get the timing here. Instead, do this:
00:17:081 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:41:081 (2,3,4,5) - Just a suggestion: maybe make these notes 1 full beat each? :<
01:13:581 (2) - I think you tried to make an even slider here. Protip: You can make sliders perfect if you place the points symmetrically. Guide here.
[Hyper]:
01:01:915 (5,6,7,8,9) - Avoid doing streams like this in a Hard?
That's it o3o
I don't play any Taiko, but normally, I at least try to see if there's any weird things in the diff. It's getting late tonight, so I'll skip it this time :<
[Another]:
00:21:415 (5,6,7) - Too fast D:
00:29:581 (6,1) - Bad anti-jump. Move (1) further somewhere.
00:46:415 (7,1) - Really hard jump. Nobody will get it on the first try. Move it closer.
00:49:915 (5,1) - Maybe move a liiiittle closer? It's not a very intuitive jump.
01:12:415 (1,2,3,4) - Might be too far.
01:27:748 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - Really tricky. You should make these sliders.
This diff has a lot of tricky jumps and streams... so maybe you should use large hit circles.
But other than that, really nice map!~ Here's a star~
[Easy+]:
This ain't no Easy :<. I think you should just name it a Normal. Some of the parts are a bit tough. 180BPM is fast too.
00:11:748 (1,2,3,4) - Even if this is a Normal, noobs won't be able to get the timing here. Instead, do this:
00:41:081 (2,3,4,5) - Just a suggestion: maybe make these notes 1 full beat each? :<
01:13:581 (2) - I think you tried to make an even slider here. Protip: You can make sliders perfect if you place the points symmetrically. Guide here.
[Hyper]:
01:01:915 (5,6,7,8,9) - Avoid doing streams like this in a Hard?
That's it o3o
I don't play any Taiko, but normally, I at least try to see if there's any weird things in the diff. It's getting late tonight, so I'll skip it this time :<
[Another]:
00:21:415 (5,6,7) - Too fast D:
00:29:581 (6,1) - Bad anti-jump. Move (1) further somewhere.
00:46:415 (7,1) - Really hard jump. Nobody will get it on the first try. Move it closer.
00:49:915 (5,1) - Maybe move a liiiittle closer? It's not a very intuitive jump.
01:12:415 (1,2,3,4) - Might be too far.
01:27:748 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - Really tricky. You should make these sliders.
This diff has a lot of tricky jumps and streams... so maybe you should use large hit circles.
But other than that, really nice map!~ Here's a star~
建議你圈大一點...這SPACE...
Another:
00:46:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 離前面近點,要點起來也感覺太遠了.
00:51:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 前面一直單點,這裡很難反應過來是連打,你想點辦法.
其他打起來感覺還不錯.
Another:
00:46:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 離前面近點,要點起來也感覺太遠了.
00:51:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 前面一直單點,這裡很難反應過來是連打,你想點辦法.
其他打起來感覺還不錯.
Topic Starter
hmm maybe i will remap another after my test finished
我正在法华镇路，速出来面基
Topic Starter
.............................................................................................gdeath wrote:
我正在法华镇路，速出来面基
[General]
[Another] it's kinda confusing, but it's not bad, after all.
Star~
- • Preview Point: 56330
• Disable contdown since it's unused
• Set the same "Tags" on all difficulties
• I don't like the combo colours, why don't you use these, for example?SPOILEROpen all .osu files and change...
[Colours]
Combo1 : 198,104,106
Combo2 : 242,189,242
Combo3 : 184,148,243
- • Rename this difficulty "Normal" (or "Beginner")
• 00:39:748 (6) - Delete this circle. Start a spinner here and end it at 00:42:415
• 00:58:748 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
• 01:09:415 (x) - Add a circle
• 01:17:081 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
• 01:18:415 (1) - ^
• 01:33:081 (1) - ^
- • 00:03:748 (8) - Add "New Combo"
• 00:10:081 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
• 00:12:581 (1) - ^
• 00:24:581 (1) - ^
• 01:02:915 (1) - ^
[Another] it's kinda confusing, but it's not bad, after all.
Star~
Topic Starter
FIXED THX >~<xxheroxx wrote:
[General][Easy+]
- • Preview Point: 56330
• Disable contdown since it's unused
• Set the same "Tags" on all difficulties
• I don't like the combo colours, why don't you use these, for example?SPOILEROpen all .osu files and change...
[Colours]
Combo1 : 198,104,106
Combo2 : 242,189,242
Combo3 : 184,148,243[Another]
- • Rename this difficulty "Normal" (or "Beginner")
• 00:39:748 (6) - Delete this circle. Start a spinner here and end it at 00:42:415
• 00:58:748 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
• 01:09:415 (x) - Add a circle
• 01:17:081 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
• 01:18:415 (1) - ^
• 01:33:081 (1) - ^
- • 00:03:748 (8) - Add "New Combo"
• 00:10:081 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
• 00:12:581 (1) - ^
• 00:24:581 (1) - ^
• 01:02:915 (1) - ^
[Another] it's kinda confusing, but it's not bad, after all.
Star~
and everypeople modded my map~~~~
Nice map。考好试来看 
recheck no kd plz 
[A(h)other]
00:37:915 (2) - no fin?
00:44:248 (1,2,3,4) - 正方形不摆大丈夫..?
01:10:415 (10) - nc
[A(h)other]
00:37:915 (2) - no fin?
00:44:248 (1,2,3,4) - 正方形不摆大丈夫..?
01:10:415 (10) - nc
Hi shitDeen :3
just suggestions
[Beginner]
01:10:081(6)-new combo or spacing
[Another]
00:44:248(1,2,3,4)-这个是正四边形么 是的话(1,4)太近
神麻婆受我一拜！
这个音乐和排布都超爽的~赶紧rank吧<3
no kds
just suggestions
[Beginner]
01:10:081(6)-new combo or spacing
[Another]
00:44:248(1,2,3,4)-这个是正四边形么 是的话(1,4)太近
神麻婆受我一拜！
这个音乐和排布都超爽的~赶紧rank吧<3
no kds
Topic Starter
fixed thanksyangzd88 wrote:
recheck no kd plz
[A(h)other]
00:37:915 (2) - no fin? K
00:44:248 (1,2,3,4) - 正方形不摆大丈夫..? K
01:10:415 (10) - nc K
Topic Starter
bakahuang > <BakaHuang wrote:
Hi shitDeen :3
just suggestions
[Beginner]
01:10:081(6)-new combo or spacing nope
[Another]
00:44:248(1,2,3,4)-这个是正四边形么 是的话(1,4)太近 k
神麻婆受我一拜！
这个音乐和排布都超爽的~赶紧rank吧<3
no kds
Beginner
01:39:081 (4) - 這遮會被挑吧._.
01:43:748 - spinner這里結束
no kds
喜歡這排列 加油
01:39:081 (4) - 這遮會被挑吧._.
01:43:748 - spinner這里結束
no kds
喜歡這排列 加油
All Suggestion
[General]
[Hyper]
fine
[Another]
nice~
[General]
- Stack Leniency too low..imo
- 01:06:415 (3,4) - change like this? (I think it is a little strange in easier diff)
- 01:17:081 (4,5) - ^
[Hyper]
fine
[Another]
- 00:17:081 (T) - delete this timing line?
nice~
个人观点、、觉得改了听起来爽一点
Hyper diff.
1：13：165 （加note）
1：14：081 同上
1：14：665 这个点出个声音很奇怪、、调小一点或者soft
1：15：331 同上
最高难度不敢打||——、
总体不错
加星星~
Hyper diff.
1：13：165 （加note）
1：14：081 同上
1：14：665 这个点出个声音很奇怪、、调小一点或者soft
1：15：331 同上
最高难度不敢打||——、
总体不错
加星星~
Topic Starter
karenying wrote:
Beginner
01:39:081 (4) - 這遮會被挑吧._. K
01:43:748 - spinner這里結束 K
no kds
喜歡這排列 加油
Topic Starter
swish wrote:
All Suggestion
[General][Beginner]
- Stack Leniency too low..imo
- 01:06:415 (3,4) - change like this? (I think it is a little strange in easier diff) K
- 01:17:081 (4,5) - ^ K
[Hyper]
fine
[Another]no kds plz
- 00:17:081 (T) - delete this timing line? K
nice~
Topic Starter
qihanzhang wrote:
个人观点、、觉得改了听起来爽一点
Hyper diff.
1：13：165 （加note）nope
1：14：081 同上 nope
1：14：665 这个点出个声音很奇怪、、调小一点或者soft do some change
1：15：331 同上
最高难度不敢打||——、
总体不错
加星星~
I like
Why haven't I starred this yet.
☆ﾐ ~
Hyper is probably my favorite difficulty. It's very balanced, it has just the right amount.
☆ﾐ ~
Hyper is probably my favorite difficulty. It's very balanced, it has just the right amount.
General
-err. beatmania IIDX as the source for great justice.
-14th style Gold in the tags xD
Beginner - Make circle size bigger
...nothing much here
Taiko
Confusing slowdowns @_@
Hyper -- Video offset is different in this map! make it consistent @_@ slider tick 1?
00:04:748 (4) - add whistle
00:42:248 (9) - NC for jump?
00:42:415 (1) - remove NC
01:07:081 (1) - remove NC
Another
00:05:415 (3) - remove finish, add whistle
00:05:748 (1) - remove whistle
00:06:248 (3) - ^
Nice map
-err. beatmania IIDX as the source for great justice.
-14th style Gold in the tags xD
Beginner - Make circle size bigger
...nothing much here
Taiko
Confusing slowdowns @_@
Hyper -- Video offset is different in this map! make it consistent @_@ slider tick 1?
00:04:748 (4) - add whistle
00:42:248 (9) - NC for jump?
00:42:415 (1) - remove NC
01:07:081 (1) - remove NC
Another
00:05:415 (3) - remove finish, add whistle
00:05:748 (1) - remove whistle
00:06:248 (3) - ^
Nice map
Topic Starter
thank u~~~~Chacha17 wrote:
General
-err. beatmania IIDX as the source for great justice. oops fixed
-14th style Gold in the tags xD i added 14thGold so.
Beginner - Make circle size bigger nope
...nothing much here
Taiko
Confusing slowdowns @_@
Hyper -- Video offset is different in this map! make it consistent @_@ slider tick 1?
00:04:748 (4) - add whistle fixed
00:42:248 (9) - NC for jump? fixed
00:42:415 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:07:081 (1) - remove NC fixed
Another
00:05:415 (3) - remove finish, add whistle fixed
00:05:748 (1) - remove whistle fixed
00:06:248 (3) - ^ fixed
Nice map
Waryas
先射了再说 .
Shohei Ohtani
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.
General
Cool stage.
[KumaTaiko]
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.
General
- Offset 1081. In case to follow the time signature.
- BG image is 1108x768. Resize it to 1024x768.
- In Artist name change "feat.A/I" to "feat. A/I"
- 00:14:415 (1) - Spacing. It's too short from previous note.
- 00:44:415 (1) - Why new combo?
Cool stage.
[KumaTaiko]
- You should remove video from this stage, and create some specific BG for it, because watching it at half of screen is a bit ugly.
- 00:02:415 (4) - Just saying that spacing thing like this one for example are little hard to read.
Topic Starter
thank u for modding! > <ShaggoN wrote:
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.
Generalcheck the wiki and u r right fixed
- Offset 1081. In case to follow the time signature. when my friend online i will discuss this with him(he is pro timing)
- BG image is 1108x768. Resize it to 1024x768.fixed
- In Artist name change "feat.A/I" to "feat. A/I"
[Beginner]fixed
- 00:14:415 (1) - Spacing. It's too short from previous note.fixed
- 00:44:415 (1) - Why new combo?
[Hyper]
Cool stage.
[KumaTaiko]removed the video
- You should remove video from this stage, and create some specific BG for it, because watching it at half of screen is a bit ugly.
[Another]>.>
- 00:02:415 (4) - Just saying that spacing thing like this one for example are little hard to read.
Stage is fine to play, but a little overmapped imo. No more complains here.
Topic Starter
thank u for mod and congrats become a new MATBreeze wrote:
傻根居然也来mod了lol
[General]fixed
- BG大了点,裁剪到1024x768像素 我打开PS查看了一下确实是1024*768 0.0
- [Beginner]难度可以不用audio lead-in的,不过加了也没什么问题
[Beginner]fixed
- 00:39:081 (5) - 这里还是用soft hitsound加whistle感觉比较好 fixed
- 01:09:415 (4) - 为什么这里又不加clap了
[Another]其他没什么了
- 00:58:415 (4-10) - 建议排成Z字型逐渐向下的,这样会好认得多,打起也更顺 nice fixed
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nice map
star
No, still 1204x768, not 1024x768
Resize please, then do a full-submit
Resize please, then do a full-submit