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DJ YOSHITAKA feat.A/I - CaptivAte ~Sabaki~ [Osu|Taiko]

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DeeN
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DeeN
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月10日 星期三 at 上午 12:26:01

Artist: DJ YOSHITAKA feat.A/I
Title: CaptivAte ~Sabaki~
Source: GuitarFreaks & DrumMania
Tags: kara no kyoukai sprosive TW-KUMA01 beatmania IIDX 14Gold
BPM: 180
Filesize: 12231kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (5 stars, 465 notes)
  2. Hyper (4.89 stars, 191 notes)
  3. KumaTaiko (4.89 stars, 515 notes)
  4. Normal (2.78 stars, 88 notes)
Download: DJ YOSHITAKA feat.A/I - CaptivAte ~Sabaki~
Download: DJ YOSHITAKA feat.A/I - CaptivAte ~Sabaki~ (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ALL DONE
Beginner- DeeN
Hyper-sprosive
Another-DeeN
taiko diff by TWKUMA01
2nd CaptivAte with kara no kyoukai
1st here: e-lma - CaptivAte2~Kakusei~
Last edited by DeeN , edited 70 times in total.
Shinkuu
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Shinkuu
射你一脸
rustbell
734 posts
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rustbell
我扔
LunaticSHIKI
LunaticSHIKI
shoot u 1 face
lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
lzy
鬼畜B泥壕
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
好2
Curisu
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Curisu
...这歌有点... :o

[EZ+]
01:05:581 (1) - 注意重叠
01:10:415 (1,2,3,4) - 稍微clap一下?
01:13:581 (2,4) - 这不对称...稍微有点那个
01:38:415 (3,4) - spacing.

[Hyper]
怎么一些地方缺音效..
00:30:248 - clap
00:30:581 - ^
00:31:248 - ^
00:31:748 (2,3,4,5) - 稍微下一下whistle?
00:36:581 (6,7) - clap
00:43:748 (3,4,5,6,7) - 音量渐大
00:59:581 (5) - clap?
01:00:248 (2) - whistle
01:02:248 (9) - ^
01:12:748 (5) - ctrl+r?
01:14:415 (1,2) - [nazi]拉的稍微有点怪..

[Another]
00:11:748 (3) - new combo
00:21:415 (5,6,7) - wtf!挺吵的
00:44:748 (4) - 这正方形这个角摆歪了
00:45:915 (4,5,6,7) - 额..这摆法有点...(后同
01:08:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这看不清吧..
Solity_old
46 posts
Joined March 2010
Solity_old
8-) 射
闪
Heatherfield
927 posts
Joined March 2010
Heatherfield

rustbell
734 posts
Joined January 2010
rustbell
Overall
00:00:082 - 这根红线不删吗
00:55:748 - preview放到这怎么样
Easy+
00:05:415 - 这三根绿线不删吗
00:40:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 会被彩笔们黑死的
Another
音效
overall - normal听起来比soft声音大这么多没问题吗
00:21:331 (4) - 音效不和谐
00:27:581 (1) - ^
00:52:915 (9) - ^
01:00:081 (5,6) - ^
01:16:748 (8) - ^
01:16:915 (1) - ^
01:36:915 (9) - ^
01:37:915 (3) - ^
--------------------------------------
还是音效
00:11:748 (3) - finish?
00:29:081 (3) - ^
00:34:415 (11) - ^
00:39:748 (6) - ^
00:50:415 (3) - ^
01:07:748 (2) - ^
01:39:415 (1,3) - ^
--------------------------------------
节奏
00:06:081 (2) - > 前移一格(00:05:998
01:07:748 (2,3) - ^
--------------------------------------
排列
01:29:915 (1,2,1,2,3) - 间距这么蛋疼没问题吗
00:24:915 (2,3,4,5,6) - just wtf
00:29:248 (4,5,6,7) - also just wtf
00:44:748 (4) - .
01:00:581 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - still just wtf
01:31:748 (1,2,3) - aimod
01:33:248 (4) - aimod
--------------------------------------
nazi
00:16:248 (1) - ^?
00:31:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 看着不和谐
01:08:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:07:748 (2,3,4,5) - 打着不和谐
01:13:081 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 衔接不和谐
01:38:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - 打着不和谐
--------------------------------------
看不顺眼的
00:11:748 (3) - newcombo
00:45:415 (1) ~ 00:52:915 (9) - 这段绝对会被骂死的(望lzy
我弱比啊以后别找我
DeeN
380 posts
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Topic Starter
DeeN
we love u sprosive
dNextGen
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dNextGen
hi Deen \:D/
Kitsunemimi
2,188 posts
Joined April 2009
Kitsunemimi
Hi there!!

[Easy+]:
This ain't no Easy :<. I think you should just name it a Normal. Some of the parts are a bit tough. 180BPM is fast too.
00:11:748 (1,2,3,4) - Even if this is a Normal, noobs won't be able to get the timing here. Instead, do this:
00:17:081 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:41:081 (2,3,4,5) - Just a suggestion: maybe make these notes 1 full beat each? :<
01:13:581 (2) - I think you tried to make an even slider here. Protip: You can make sliders perfect if you place the points symmetrically. Guide here.

[Hyper]:
01:01:915 (5,6,7,8,9) - Avoid doing streams like this in a Hard?
That's it o3o

I don't play any Taiko, but normally, I at least try to see if there's any weird things in the diff. It's getting late tonight, so I'll skip it this time :<

[Another]:
00:21:415 (5,6,7) - Too fast D:
00:29:581 (6,1) - Bad anti-jump. Move (1) further somewhere.
00:46:415 (7,1) - Really hard jump. Nobody will get it on the first try. Move it closer.
00:49:915 (5,1) - Maybe move a liiiittle closer? It's not a very intuitive jump.
01:12:415 (1,2,3,4) - Might be too far.
01:27:748 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - Really tricky. You should make these sliders.
This diff has a lot of tricky jumps and streams... so maybe you should use large hit circles.

But other than that, really nice map!~ Here's a star~
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
soulfear
建議你圈大一點...這SPACE...
Another:
00:46:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 離前面近點,要點起來也感覺太遠了.
00:51:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 前面一直單點,這裡很難反應過來是連打,你想點辦法.
其他打起來感覺還不錯.
miku
186 posts
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miku
:)
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
DeeN
hmm maybe i will remap another after my test finished
gdeath
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gdeath
我正在法华镇路，速出来面基 8-)
DeeN
380 posts
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Topic Starter
DeeN

gdeath wrote:

我正在法华镇路，速出来面基 8-)
.............................................................................................
rrtyui
Former osu! Champion: 2014
744 posts
Joined May 2010
rrtyui
star~ =v=
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[General]

  • • Preview Point: 56330
    • Disable contdown since it's unused
    • Set the same "Tags" on all difficulties
    • I don't like the combo colours, why don't you use these, for example?
    SPOILER
    Open all .osu files and change...

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 198,104,106
    Combo2 : 242,189,242
    Combo3 : 184,148,243
[Easy+]

  • • Rename this difficulty "Normal" (or "Beginner")
    • 00:39:748 (6) - Delete this circle. Start a spinner here and end it at 00:42:415
    • 00:58:748 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
    • 01:09:415 (x) - Add a circle
    • 01:17:081 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
    • 01:18:415 (1) - ^
    • 01:33:081 (1) - ^
[Another]

  • • 00:03:748 (8) - Add "New Combo"
    • 00:10:081 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
    • 00:12:581 (1) - ^
    • 00:24:581 (1) - ^
    • 01:02:915 (1) - ^

[Another] it's kinda confusing, but it's not bad, after all.
Star~
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
DeeN

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

  • • Preview Point: 56330
    • Disable contdown since it's unused
    • Set the same "Tags" on all difficulties
    • I don't like the combo colours, why don't you use these, for example?
    SPOILER
    Open all .osu files and change...

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 198,104,106
    Combo2 : 242,189,242
    Combo3 : 184,148,243
[Easy+]

  • • Rename this difficulty "Normal" (or "Beginner")
    • 00:39:748 (6) - Delete this circle. Start a spinner here and end it at 00:42:415
    • 00:58:748 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
    • 01:09:415 (x) - Add a circle
    • 01:17:081 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
    • 01:18:415 (1) - ^
    • 01:33:081 (1) - ^
[Another]

  • • 00:03:748 (8) - Add "New Combo"
    • 00:10:081 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
    • 00:12:581 (1) - ^
    • 00:24:581 (1) - ^
    • 01:02:915 (1) - ^

[Another] it's kinda confusing, but it's not bad, after all.
Star~
FIXED THX >~<

and everypeople modded my map~~~~
Caami
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Caami
:)
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
554 posts
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Lucy_Heartfilia_old
Nice map。考好试来看 :)
Curisu
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Joined January 2010
Curisu
recheck no kd plz :D

[A(h)other]
00:37:915 (2) - no fin?
00:44:248 (1,2,3,4) - 正方形不摆大丈夫..?
01:10:415 (10) - nc

:P
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
Hi shitDeen :3
just suggestions

[Beginner]
01:10:081(6)-new combo or spacing

[Another]
00:44:248(1,2,3,4)-这个是正四边形么 是的话(1,4)太近

神麻婆受我一拜！

这个音乐和排布都超爽的~赶紧rank吧<3

no kds
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
DeeN

yangzd88 wrote:

recheck no kd plz :D

[A(h)other]
00:37:915 (2) - no fin? K
00:44:248 (1,2,3,4) - 正方形不摆大丈夫..? K
01:10:415 (10) - nc K

:P
fixed thanks
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
DeeN

BakaHuang wrote:

Hi shitDeen :3
just suggestions

[Beginner]
01:10:081(6)-new combo or spacing nope

[Another]
00:44:248(1,2,3,4)-这个是正四边形么 是的话(1,4)太近 k

神麻婆受我一拜！

这个音乐和排布都超爽的~赶紧rank吧<3

no kds
bakahuang > <
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
Beginner
01:39:081 (4) - 這遮會被挑吧._.
01:43:748 - spinner這里結束

no kds
喜歡這排列 加油
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
All Suggestion

[General]
  1. Stack Leniency too low..imo
[Beginner]
  1. 01:06:415 (3,4) - change like this? (I think it is a little strange in easier diff)



  2. 01:17:081 (4,5) - ^

[Hyper]
fine

[Another]
  1. 00:17:081 (T) - delete this timing line?
no kds plz

nice~ :)
Banana
794 posts
Joined October 2010
Banana
个人观点、、觉得改了听起来爽一点
Hyper diff.
1：13：165 （加note）
1：14：081 同上
1：14：665 这个点出个声音很奇怪、、调小一点或者soft
1：15：331 同上
最高难度不敢打||——、
总体不错
加星星~
DeeN
380 posts
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Topic Starter
DeeN

karenying wrote:

Beginner
01:39:081 (4) - 這遮會被挑吧._. K
01:43:748 - spinner這里結束 K

no kds
喜歡這排列 加油
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
DeeN

swish wrote:

All Suggestion

[General]
  1. Stack Leniency too low..imo
[Beginner]
  1. 01:06:415 (3,4) - change like this? (I think it is a little strange in easier diff) K



  2. 01:17:081 (4,5) - ^ K

[Hyper]
fine

[Another]
  1. 00:17:081 (T) - delete this timing line? K
no kds plz

nice~ :)
DeeN
380 posts
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Topic Starter
DeeN

qihanzhang wrote:

个人观点、、觉得改了听起来爽一点
Hyper diff.
1：13：165 （加note）nope
1：14：081 同上 nope
1：14：665 这个点出个声音很奇怪、、调小一点或者soft do some change
1：15：331 同上
最高难度不敢打||——、
总体不错
加星星~
Ania chan_old
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Ania chan_old
I like
platina_davis
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platina_davis
:)
mooai
91 posts
Joined April 2010
mooai
:)
Faust
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2009
Faust
Why haven't I starred this yet.

☆ﾐ ~

Hyper is probably my favorite difficulty. It's very balanced, it has just the right amount. :)
Chacha17
501 posts
Joined April 2009
Chacha17
General
-err. beatmania IIDX as the source for great justice.
-14th style Gold in the tags xD

Beginner - Make circle size bigger

...nothing much here

Taiko

Confusing slowdowns @_@

Hyper -- Video offset is different in this map! make it consistent @_@ slider tick 1?

00:04:748 (4) - add whistle
00:42:248 (9) - NC for jump?
00:42:415 (1) - remove NC
01:07:081 (1) - remove NC

Another

00:05:415 (3) - remove finish, add whistle
00:05:748 (1) - remove whistle
00:06:248 (3) - ^

Nice map :D
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
DeeN

Chacha17 wrote:

General
-err. beatmania IIDX as the source for great justice. oops fixed
-14th style Gold in the tags xD i added 14thGold so.

Beginner - Make circle size bigger nope

...nothing much here

Taiko

Confusing slowdowns @_@

Hyper -- Video offset is different in this map! make it consistent @_@ slider tick 1?

00:04:748 (4) - add whistle fixed
00:42:248 (9) - NC for jump? fixed
00:42:415 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:07:081 (1) - remove NC fixed

Another

00:05:415 (3) - remove finish, add whistle fixed
00:05:748 (1) - remove whistle fixed
00:06:248 (3) - ^ fixed

Nice map :D
thank u~~~~
Waryas
Waryas
Well here's a star!
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tsuka
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Joined May 2009
tsuka
先射了再说 .
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Only thing I can say is that you should probably put more hitsounds in the beginning of Hyper.

Since I made you wait for so long without anything but a silly mod post, he is a kudosu star for you. yaay.
ShaggoN
689 posts
Joined September 2008
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General
  1. Offset 1081. In case to follow the time signature.
  2. BG image is 1108x768. Resize it to 1024x768.
  3. In Artist name change "feat.A/I" to "feat. A/I"
[Beginner]
  1. 00:14:415 (1) - Spacing. It's too short from previous note.
  2. 00:44:415 (1) - Why new combo?
[Hyper]
Cool stage.

[KumaTaiko]
  1. You should remove video from this stage, and create some specific BG for it, because watching it at half of screen is a bit ugly.
[Another]
  1. 00:02:415 (4) - Just saying that spacing thing like this one for example are little hard to read.
Stage is fine to play, but a little overmapped imo. No more complains here.
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
DeeN

ShaggoN wrote:

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General
  1. Offset 1081. In case to follow the time signature. when my friend online i will discuss this with him(he is pro timing)
  2. BG image is 1108x768. Resize it to 1024x768.fixed
  3. In Artist name change "feat.A/I" to "feat. A/I"
check the wiki and u r right fixed

[Beginner]
  1. 00:14:415 (1) - Spacing. It's too short from previous note.fixed
  2. 00:44:415 (1) - Why new combo?
fixed

[Hyper]
Cool stage.

[KumaTaiko]
  1. You should remove video from this stage, and create some specific BG for it, because watching it at half of screen is a bit ugly.
removed the video

[Another]
  1. 00:02:415 (4) - Just saying that spacing thing like this one for example are little hard to read.
>.>
Stage is fine to play, but a little overmapped imo. No more complains here.
thank u for modding! > <
Breeze
osu! Alumni
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Breeze
傻根居然也来mod了lol

[General]
  1. BG大了点,裁剪到1024x768像素
  2. [Beginner]难度可以不用audio lead-in的,不过加了也没什么问题
[Beginner]
  1. 00:39:081 (5) - 这里还是用soft hitsound加whistle感觉比较好
  2. 01:09:415 (4) - 为什么这里又不加clap了
[Another]
  1. 00:58:415 (4-10) - 建议排成Z字型逐渐向下的,这样会好认得多,打起也更顺
    SPOILER
其他没什么了
nice map
star
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
DeeN

Breeze wrote:

傻根居然也来mod了lol

[General]
  1. BG大了点,裁剪到1024x768像素 我打开PS查看了一下确实是1024*768 0.0
  2. [Beginner]难度可以不用audio lead-in的,不过加了也没什么问题
fixed

[Beginner]
  1. 00:39:081 (5) - 这里还是用soft hitsound加whistle感觉比较好 fixed
  2. 01:09:415 (4) - 为什么这里又不加clap了
fixed

[Another]
  1. 00:58:415 (4-10) - 建议排成Z字型逐渐向下的,这样会好认得多,打起也更顺 nice fixed
    SPOILER
    [attachment=0:d7b40]0.jpg[/attachment:d7b40]
其他没什么了
nice map
star
thank u for mod and congrats become a new MAT :)
Breeze
osu! Alumni
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Breeze
No, still 1204x768, not 1024x768

Resize please, then do a full-submit
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
DeeN

Breeze wrote:

No, still 1204x768, not 1024x768
[attachment=0:0ea26]0.jpg[/attachment:0ea26]
Resize please, then do a full-submit
oooooooooooops something wrong with my eyes

really thank u for recheck
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
Beginner:
00:17:081 (1) - one grid right or 00:17:415 (2) - one grid right
00:29:081 (1) - decrease the spinner for a beat (for nazi)
01:26:415 (1) - ^
(反正新手又不懂 等下BAT又来屌你 还不如让他们没得搞)

Hyper:
the offset of hyper is different from others dffis ,make it same as others pls

Another:
00:39:915 (1) - newcombo
01:19:248 (1) - ^

好 搞定 我怒滚
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
DeeN

tsuka wrote:

Beginner:
00:17:081 (1) - one grid right or 00:17:415 (2) - one grid right 大快人心
00:29:081 (1) - decrease the spinner for a beat (for nazi)大快人心
01:26:415 (1) - ^大快人心
(反正新手又不懂 等下BAT又来屌你 还不如让他们没得搞)

Hyper:
the offset of hyper is different from others dffis ,make it same as others pls大快人心

Another:
00:39:915 (1) - newcombo
01:19:248 (1) - ^

好 搞定 我怒滚
TW-KUMA01
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2011
273 posts
Joined January 2010
TW-KUMA01
2貨太鼓 :o :o :o :o :o :o
fixed something

SPOILER
Your message is too short.Your message is too short.

Download: DJ YOSHITAKA feat. AI - CaptivAte ~Sabaki~ (DeeN) [KumaTaiko].osu
Backfire
3,208 posts
Joined February 2010
Backfire
Taiko -
This is very important.
It's noted to NOT put kiai flashes as they can be distracting and they're unrankable on taiko diffs. So all of the kiai parts that flash and stuff, remove those. In Taiko no tatsujin games, kiai equivalent is go go time. You're only allowed 3 of them.

As for everything else, I only found a couple things.

00:10:414 - D? :D
00:34:414 (1) - ^
01:06:081 (1,1,2,3) - move the second 1 and 2 over to the left to connect with 1 so that its a stream
01:06:414 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make these all finishes?
01:16:997 - remove this?
01:17:080 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - Make these all finishes?

Thats all.
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested

- You are reminded that changing BPM to change SV is prohibited in both solo AND taiko.
- As backfire said the flashing kiai is NOT recommended.

00:21:414 - I suggest to put the last note before slider.
01:00:747 - the vocal is going down so kdkdd would be better.
01:39:080 - same as 0:21.

The rest would be fine for me, would hv been nice if the above things are fixed.

7/10
aabc271
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Joined August 2009
aabc271

Backfire wrote:

Taiko -
This is very important.
It's noted to NOT put kiai flashes as they can be distracting and they're unrankable on taiko diffs. So all of the kiai parts that flash and stuff, remove those. In Taiko no tatsujin games, kiai equivalent is go go time. You're only allowed 3 of them.
For me, I accept kiai flashes if they do not cause distractions in gameplay.
( Not in this case though, so I oppose them in this map. )

But from what I know, there's actually no ranking criteria for Taiko diffs.
So we can't say flashes are unrankable, but only discouraged...?

Also, for the limit of 3 kiai parts, I disagree with this.
Because most of the songs included in authentic Taiko are less than 3 mins, while many Taiko diffs in Osu have 3 mins +.
Longer songs usually have more kiai times.
Using this stricter limit may suit well in authentic Taiko, but not Osu Taiko.

Well, just my own thoughts :3
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Anyway, I'll mod the Taiko diff too. Here's my mod ~

Mod request by Wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[KumaTaiko]

The two "1/6 + sliders + kiai flashes" parts make players miss easily. I suggest removing all 1/6 and flashes except the last one.

Also, please leave at least a 1/4 gap between streams and sliders, or players may hit nothing in the sliders due to a system bug.

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:19:747 - ( 1 ~ 2, 1 ~ 13 ) ooooooooooooooo ?

00:54:413 - ( 4 ) Red note ?

01:00:747 - ( 2 ~ 6, 1 ) ooooo ?

The diff is fine overall :)

Changing those 1/6 parts will be better, though ~

Rating : 8/10

Star and good luck ~ ;)
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