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Harada Hitomi - Haruiro (Short Ver.)

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Hinacle
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月21日 at 13:15:24

Artist: Harada Hitomi
Title: Haruiro (Short Ver.)
Source: Love Kami
BPM: 186
Filesize: 15816kb
Play Time: 02:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.87 stars, 111 notes)
  2. Hard (4.95 stars, 316 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 340 notes)
  4. Normal (4.22 stars, 192 notes)
Download: Harada Hitomi - Haruiro (Short Ver.)
Download: Harada Hitomi - Haruiro (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 5th Beatmap.
PC Game 『恋神 -ラブカミ-』

Mapset:
[Easy]-Done.
[Normal]-Done.
[Hard]-Done.
[Insane]-Done.
swish
o/
fumis
star~
LouiseSaya
goot!! :)
Mapper 31
Taiko diff つくっていいですか?
Topic Starter
Hinacle

samiljul wrote:

Taiko diff つくっていいですか?
sorry

I do not need the Taiko diff :( :(
Suzully
恋神でラブカミとはまた良いセンスしとるでほんま 8-)
DeadAlready
>w</ nice map~

edit: timing advice on irc :3
Topic Starter
Hinacle

quintitem wrote:

>w</ nice map~

edit: timing advice on irc :3
Thank you timing help~!!

>swish fumis LouiseSaya Suzully quintitem

Thank you for star~!!
S o r d a
o/
Mercurius
8-)
KanaRin
Taiko diff= =+ wwwwwwww
banvi
[General]
combo1と4の色が似過ぎなのでcombo4を消すか他の色とあまり似ていない色にするとよいです

[Easy]
01:03:347 (1) remove new combo
01:34:315 (1) ^
01:39:476 (1) ^

[Normal]
01:03:347 (1) remove new combo
01:26:573 (1) ^

[Hard]
00:56:734 (7) new combo? このcomboは長すぎると思いました
01:44:638 (7) ^

[Insane]
00:56:734 (8) new combo?
01:04:154 (1) これも重ねないように(2,3)みたいにしてはどうでしょうか
01:32:379 (1) これも重ねないように(2)みたいにしてはどうでしょうか、ちょっと見やすくなると思います
この下から二つはただの提案ですorz

見るとこあまりなかったです><
:oops: god :oops:
Topic Starter
Hinacle

banvi wrote:

[General]
combo1と4の色が似過ぎなのでcombo4を消すか他の色とあまり似ていない色にするとよいです

[Easy]
01:03:347 (1) remove new combo
01:34:315 (1) ^
01:39:476 (1) ^

[Normal]
01:03:347 (1) remove new combo
01:26:573 (1) ^

[Hard]
00:56:734 (7) new combo? このcomboは長すぎると思いました
01:44:638 (7) ^

[Insane]
00:56:734 (8) new combo?
01:04:154 (1) これも重ねないように(2,3)みたいにしてはどうでしょうか
01:32:379 (1) これも重ねないように(2)みたいにしてはどうでしょうか、ちょっと見やすくなると思います
この下から二つはただの提案ですorz

見るとこあまりなかったです><
:oops: god :oops:
modありがとうございます!!


>KanaRin

This song no taiko diff~><www
kanpakyin
Gal song mapper indeed = =+
Rare
:oops:
KSHR
modding ;)


SPOILER
Easy
特に指摘箇所がなかったので、全dif共通の提案を2つ書いておきます

01:27:702 (1) - 01:29:476まで短くする <スピンの音量:5%→50%~60%>
02:09:960 (2) - remove finish at beginning


Normal
サビが終わったあと、最後の部分しかfinishが付いていないので
足してみてはどうでしょうか?


Hard
00:34:476 (4) - 1grid up
00:41:089 (7) - 1grid down
00:42:218 (3,4,5) - スぺーシングをみて少し、ん?となりましたが、
他の人に指摘されない限りは修正なしで大丈夫だと思います~

01:08:509 (1) - add whistle at beginning ?
01:09:476 (4) - add whistle at end ?
02:03:670 (4) - add whistle at beginning, remove whistle at end


Insane
00:35:605 (6) - 1grid down & right
00:41:896 (2) - 1grid down
01:08:509 (1) - add whistle at beginning ?
01:09:476 (4) - add whistle at end ?
01:50:121 (2) - x:260 y:204

fight~ :)
Topic Starter
Hinacle

KSHR wrote:

modding ;)


SPOILER
Easy
特に指摘箇所がなかったので、全dif共通の提案を2つ書いておきます

01:27:702 (1) - 01:29:476まで短くする <スピンの音量:5%→50%~60%>
02:09:960 (2) - remove finish at beginning


Normal
サビが終わったあと、最後の部分しかfinishが付いていないので
足してみてはどうでしょうか?


Hard
00:34:476 (4) - 1grid up
00:41:089 (7) - 1grid down
00:42:218 (3,4,5) - スぺーシングをみて少し、ん?となりましたが、
他の人に指摘されない限りは修正なしで大丈夫だと思います~

01:08:509 (1) - add whistle at beginning ?
01:09:476 (4) - add whistle at end ?
02:03:670 (4) - add whistle at beginning, remove whistle at end


Insane
00:35:605 (6) - 1grid down & right
00:41:896 (2) - 1grid down
01:08:509 (1) - add whistle at beginning ?
01:09:476 (4) - add whistle at end ?
01:50:121 (2) - x:260 y:204

fight~ :)
ありがとー!
Suzully
毎度どうも!(・ω・)ノ
SPOILER
Easy

  • fine
Normal
  1. 00:52:702 (2,3,4) - 前の00:50:444 (3,4,5,6)がひし形でこちらが直線的なのが少しぎこちない感じなので、こんな風に置いてみてはどうでしょう?
Hard
  1. 02:02:541 (4) - (1,2,3)とスペーシングを揃えた方が見栄えが良いかなと思います。
Insane
  1. 00:28:508 (1,2,3,4) - ちょっとNormalサウンドだと音が浮いている気がするので、ボリューム80%でSoftサウンドを使ってみてはどうでしょう?他のdiffも同様に。
  2. 00:45:283 (4,5,6,7) - ボリュームを30%,40%,50%,60%と上げていくとメリハリがついて良さそうに思います。
  3. 01:03:186 (4) - 始端にfinish?
  4. 01:24:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ctrl+Shift+Rで-4度回転させるとこんな感じです。

    (2,5)の位置がズレているので、整えてからまた4度回転させてみてください。
  5. 01:29:799 (3,4) - softのfinishを加えてみてはどうでしょう?
いやぁ、連打がなくて個人的には嬉しいです笑
最近ひなくるさんの譜面は見るところが少ないです :cry:
素晴らしい譜面です!(`・ω・´)


Topic Starter
Hinacle

Suzully wrote:

毎度どうも!(・ω・)ノ
SPOILER
Easy

  • fine
Normal
  1. 00:52:702 (2,3,4) - 前の00:50:444 (3,4,5,6)がひし形でこちらが直線的なのが少しぎこちない感じなので、こんな風に置いてみてはどうでしょう?
    [attachment=2:d4890]screenshot094.jpg[/attachment:d4890]
Hard
  1. 02:02:541 (4) - (1,2,3)とスペーシングを揃えた方が見栄えが良いかなと思います。
Insane
  1. 00:28:508 (1,2,3,4) - ちょっとNormalサウンドだと音が浮いている気がするので、ボリューム80%でSoftサウンドを使ってみてはどうでしょう?他のdiffも同様に。
  2. 00:45:283 (4,5,6,7) - ボリュームを30%,40%,50%,60%と上げていくとメリハリがついて良さそうに思います。
  3. 01:03:186 (4) - 始端にfinish?
  4. 01:24:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ctrl+Shift+Rで-4度回転させるとこんな感じです。
    [attachment=1:d4890]screenshot093.jpg[/attachment:d4890]
    (2,5)の位置がズレているので、整えてからまた4度回転させてみてください。
  5. 01:29:799 (3,4) - softのfinishを加えてみてはどうでしょう?
いやぁ、連打がなくて個人的には嬉しいです笑
SPOILER
[attachment=0:d4890]screenshot092.jpg[/attachment:d4890]
最近ひなくるさんの譜面は見るところが少ないです :cry:
素晴らしい譜面です!(`・ω・´)
ありがとー!!
Patchouli
Looks Nice:>
fine to me.XD
Leorda
Konnchiwa

Easy
* Since you have a fewer notes, try avoiding to put clap at 2nd and 4th white tick. Put the clap at 3rd tick only
* Approach Rate +1?

00:46:573 (1) - End at 00:48:508 seems odd for me. Try end it at 00:49:154?
02:09:960 (2) - This slider was too short for easy diff...

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Normal
* Approach Rate +1? Pretty slow for me
* In my opinions, the spacing is too large for average player.....

00:39:799 (4,5) - Having do it like this is kinda difficult for average player. Try make a slider stack with a circle
01:21:089 (4,5) - ^
01:23:670 (3,4) - ^
01:23:831 (4) - Can you make this slider more wavy? I think this slider is just like a parallel slider....

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Hard
00:42:541 (4) - IMO, if the player on the rush, they think this is a slider, can you unstack that?
01:24:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You use star pattern right? Why not let (6) put in the center in the pattern?

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Insane

00:40:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You use star pattern right? Why not let (6) put in the center in the pattern?

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Oyasumi~
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Leorda wrote:

Konnchiwa

Easy
* Since you have a fewer notes, try avoiding to put clap at 2nd and 4th white tick. Put the clap at 3rd tick only
* Approach Rate +1?

00:46:573 (1) - End at 00:48:508 seems odd for me. Try end it at 00:49:154?
02:09:960 (2) - This slider was too short for easy diff...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Normal
* Approach Rate +1? Pretty slow for me
* In my opinions, the spacing is too large for average player.....

00:39:799 (4,5) - Having do it like this is kinda difficult for average player. Try make a slider stack with a circle
01:21:089 (4,5) - ^
01:23:670 (3,4) - ^
01:23:831 (4) - Can you make this slider more wavy? I think this slider is just like a parallel slider....

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Hard
00:42:541 (4) - IMO, if the player on the rush, they think this is a slider, can you unstack that?
01:24:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You use star pattern right? Why not let (6) put in the center in the pattern?

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Insane

00:40:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You use star pattern right? Why not let (6) put in the center in the pattern?

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Oyasumi~
Thank you mod~
KanaRin

Hinacle wrote:

>KanaRin

This song no taiko diff~><www
baka!
Krisom
Hello!

General-
·Correct source seems to be "Love Kami", separated by a space and with mayus on the "K"
·Offset 28499 works much better for me, try that?


All Diffs-
00:28:508 (1,2,3,4) - Make these 4 notes soft hitsounded. (Easy just has 2 notes, but make them soft too :P)
00:49:154 to 01:04:638 - I think softer hitsounds would fit better this place, the drums are kinda loud for this soft section on the song.

Insane-
01:34:638 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These stacks kinda destroy the fast flow you've set up for the chorus.
Well, this is EXTREMELY fun. Great work!

Hard-
01:39:799 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These stacks kinda destroy the fast flow you've set up for the chorus.
Same as insane, 9/10! (it's not 10/10 because I kiiiinda disagree with placing those 1/4 notes on a Hard, when the BPM is so high, but that has to do with taste, so I'll leave it up to you ;D)

Normal-
It's kinda sad that you only use 1/1/1/1 beats here (not counting some exeptions), but map is solid othersiwe. I'd make the slidertickrate 1 though, those 2/1 sliders felt empty.

Easy-
Same as normal, I'd set tickrate to 1.


Amazing. Call me back for a bubble when you think you're done. And I expect to see you in the charts.
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Krisom wrote:

Hello!

General-
·Correct source seems to be "Love Kami", separated by a space and with mayus on the "K" Done.
·Offset 28499 works much better for me, try that? Done.


All Diffs-
00:28:508 (1,2,3,4) - Make these 4 notes soft hitsounded. (Easy just has 2 notes, but make them soft too :P) Done.
00:49:154 to 01:04:638 - I think softer hitsounds would fit better this place, the drums are kinda loud for this soft section on the song.No Done.I like normal hitsound;-; but,I reduced volume


Insane-
01:34:638 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These stacks kinda destroy the fast flow you've set up for the chorus.
Well, this is EXTREMELY fun. Great work! No Done;-;

Hard-
01:39:799 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These stacks kinda destroy the fast flow you've set up for the chorus.
Same as insane, 9/10! (it's not 10/10 because I kiiiinda disagree with placing those 1/4 notes on a Hard, when the BPM is so high, but that has to do with taste, so I'll leave it up to you ;D) Done



Normal-
It's kinda sad that you only use 1/1/1/1 beats here (not counting some exeptions), but map is solid othersiwe. I'd make the slidertickrate 1 though, those 2/1 sliders felt empty. Done.slidertickrate1



Easy-
Same as normal, I'd set tickrate to 1. Done.




Amazing. Call me back for a bubble when you think you're done. And I expect to see you in the charts.
Thank you mod~!!
Fixed!!
m i z u k i
:oops:
Krisom
One final issue-
Insane-
02:03:015 (2,4) - (4) is totally hidden by (2), and you can't tell if it is a slider or a circle while playing. You will have to move these somewhere else :x

Sorry I didn't notice those before, let me know when you've fixed them and I'll bubble. No kudosu on this.
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Krisom wrote:

One final issue-
Insane-
02:03:015 (2,4) - (4) is totally hidden by (2), and you can't tell if it is a slider or a circle while playing. You will have to move these somewhere else :x

Sorry I didn't notice those before, let me know when you've fixed them and I'll bubble. No kudosu on this.
Thank you recheck and mod~!!
Fixed!!
Krisom
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Krisom wrote:

Good luck!
Thank you Bubbled!!
So_Ra
nice!
Krisom
Bubble repair (and a veeeery tiny spacing repair)
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Krisom wrote:

Bubble repair (and a veeeery tiny spacing repair)
Thank you TwT
jericho2442
timing is abit out, offset should be 28,507 (+8ms)

Easy
01:33:015 (3) - put a newcombo here than remove the one at 01:34:305 (1) , this way it follows the pattern you use better and also flows better with the music

Hard
01:11:966 (4) - having 1/4 aint really needed here, it dont really suit the style of your map either, most of the map is a nice flowing beat, then these come and speed it up, just felt odd imo, i really advise to remove this note so it makes it 1/2
01:17:128 (4) - same again
(suggestion) 01:24:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i really didnt like the sudden jump in difficulty here, also the final 2 notes of this pattern was also hard to read due to blindness of the notes before them, its fine i guess, just it felt abit out of place difficulty wise
01:31:321 (5) - same comment as the other 1/4 notes i pointed out, this really aint needed and flows much better without it
01:36:482 (5) - same
01:50:111 (5) - need a new combo here to break the vocal lines up ;p

Insane
01:04:466 (3,1) - really really bad spacing change here, due to the increasing spacing in the part before this, it makes the (3,1) extremely ugly to read and hard to notice, i constantly got thrown off and i really do advise to space these more apart so they have the same spacing as the two notes before them

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well popping bubble for the timing and the one red criteria (which bugs me an extreme amount)

check out the mod, fix up and i will rebubble i guess ;p
Topic Starter
Hinacle

jericho2442 wrote:

timing is abit out, offset should be 28,507 (+8ms)Done.

Easy
01:33:015 (3) - put a newcombo here than remove the one at 01:34:305 (1) , this way it follows the pattern you use better and also flows better with the musicDone.

Hard
01:11:966 (4) - having 1/4 aint really needed here, it dont really suit the style of your map either, most of the map is a nice flowing beat, then these come and speed it up, just felt odd imo, i really advise to remove this note so it makes it 1/2No Done.
01:17:128 (4) - same againNo Done.
(suggestion) 01:24:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i really didnt like the sudden jump in difficulty here, also the final 2 notes of this pattern was also hard to read due to blindness of the notes before them, its fine i guess, just it felt abit out of place difficulty wiseNo Done.
01:31:321 (5) - same comment as the other 1/4 notes i pointed out, this really aint needed and flows much better without iDone.
01:36:482 (5) - sameDone.
01:50:111 (5) - need a new combo here to break the vocal lines up ;pDone.

Insane
01:04:466 (3,1) - really really bad spacing change here, due to the increasing spacing in the part before this, it makes the (3,1) extremely ugly to read and hard to notice, i constantly got thrown off and i really do advise to space these more apart so they have the same spacing as the two notes before them
Done.
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well popping bubble for the timing and the one red criteria (which bugs me an extreme amount)

check out the mod, fix up and i will rebubble i guess ;p
Thank you mod~
Fixed!!
jericho2442
well all looks fine now, so have your floaty thing back
Topic Starter
Hinacle

jericho2442 wrote:

well all looks fine now, so have your floaty thing back
Thank you bubble!! :)
James2250
All looks good

Ranked~
DarkRingSystem
8-) Good job ~
KanaRin
Komeiji Yuki
Congra Hinacle :3
Topic Starter
Hinacle

James2250 wrote:

All looks good

Ranked~
Thank you Ranked~!!
Sure
Hmm... This map is pretty good.
I can't understand those troll votes. :(
Almost maps have 1 votes, but it occurred too fast.
KanaRin
本当に、ひどいだね!
でも大丈夫w 
Ratingはバカだw
kanpakyin
Vote10 desu ><
Topic Starter
Hinacle
>all

very very Thank you~!! :(
The next makes better map :)
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