banvi wrote:

[General]
combo1と4の色が似過ぎなのでcombo4を消すか他の色とあまり似ていない色にするとよいです

[Easy]
01:03:347 (1) remove new combo
01:34:315 (1) ^
01:39:476 (1) ^

[Normal]
01:03:347 (1) remove new combo
01:26:573 (1) ^

[Hard]
00:56:734 (7) new combo? このcomboは長すぎると思いました
01:44:638 (7) ^

[Insane]
00:56:734 (8) new combo?
01:04:154 (1) これも重ねないように(2,3)みたいにしてはどうでしょうか
01:32:379 (1) これも重ねないように(2)みたいにしてはどうでしょうか、ちょっと見やすくなると思います
この下から二つはただの提案ですorz

見るとこあまりなかったです＞＜
god

KSHR wrote:

modding

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Easy
特に指摘箇所がなかったので、全dif共通の提案を2つ書いておきます

01:27:702 (1) - 01:29:476まで短くする ＜スピンの音量：5%→50%~60%＞
02:09:960 (2) - remove finish at beginning


Normal
サビが終わったあと、最後の部分しかfinishが付いていないので
足してみてはどうでしょうか？


Hard
00:34:476 (4) - 1grid up
00:41:089 (7) - 1grid down
00:42:218 (3,4,5) - スぺーシングをみて少し、ん？となりましたが、
他の人に指摘されない限りは修正なしで大丈夫だと思います～

01:08:509 (1) - add whistle at beginning ?
01:09:476 (4) - add whistle at end ?
02:03:670 (4) - add whistle at beginning, remove whistle at end


Insane
00:35:605 (6) - 1grid down & right
00:41:896 (2) - 1grid down
01:08:509 (1) - add whistle at beginning ?
01:09:476 (4) - add whistle at end ?
01:50:121 (2) - x:260 y:204

fight~

Suzully wrote:

毎度どうも！(・ω・)ﾉ

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Easy

• 
  fine

Normal

1. 00:52:702 (2,3,4) - 前の00:50:444 (3,4,5,6)がひし形でこちらが直線的なのが少しぎこちない感じなので、こんな風に置いてみてはどうでしょう？
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Hard

1. 02:02:541 (4) - (1,2,3)とスペーシングを揃えた方が見栄えが良いかなと思います。

Insane

1. 00:28:508 (1,2,3,4) - ちょっとNormalサウンドだと音が浮いている気がするので、ボリューム80%でSoftサウンドを使ってみてはどうでしょう？他のdiffも同様に。
2. 00:45:283 (4,5,6,7) - ボリュームを30%，40%，50%，60%と上げていくとメリハリがついて良さそうに思います。
3. 01:03:186 (4) - 始端にfinish？
4. 01:24:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ctrl+Shift+Rで-4度回転させるとこんな感じです。
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   (2,5)の位置がズレているので、整えてからまた4度回転させてみてください。
5. 01:29:799 (3,4) - softのfinishを加えてみてはどうでしょう？

いやぁ、連打がなくて個人的には嬉しいです笑

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最近ひなくるさんの譜面は見るところが少ないです
素晴らしい譜面です！(`・ω・´)

Leorda wrote:

Konnchiwa

Easy
* Since you have a fewer notes, try avoiding to put clap at 2nd and 4th white tick. Put the clap at 3rd tick only
* Approach Rate +1?

00:46:573 (1) - End at 00:48:508 seems odd for me. Try end it at 00:49:154?
02:09:960 (2) - This slider was too short for easy diff...

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Normal
* Approach Rate +1? Pretty slow for me
* In my opinions, the spacing is too large for average player.....

00:39:799 (4,5) - Having do it like this is kinda difficult for average player. Try make a slider stack with a circle
01:21:089 (4,5) - ^
01:23:670 (3,4) - ^
01:23:831 (4) - Can you make this slider more wavy? I think this slider is just like a parallel slider....

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Hard
00:42:541 (4) - IMO, if the player on the rush, they think this is a slider, can you unstack that?
01:24:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You use star pattern right? Why not let (6) put in the center in the pattern?

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Insane
00:40:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You use star pattern right? Why not let (6) put in the center in the pattern?

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Oyasumi~

Hinacle wrote:

>KanaRin

This song no taiko diff~><www

Krisom wrote:

Hello!

General-
·Correct source seems to be "Love Kami", separated by a space and with mayus on the "K" Done.
·Offset 28499 works much better for me, try that? Done.


All Diffs-
00:28:508 (1,2,3,4) - Make these 4 notes soft hitsounded. (Easy just has 2 notes, but make them soft too ) Done.
00:49:154 to 01:04:638 - I think softer hitsounds would fit better this place, the drums are kinda loud for this soft section on the song.No Done.I like normal hitsound;-; but,I reduced volume


Insane-
01:34:638 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These stacks kinda destroy the fast flow you've set up for the chorus.
Well, this is EXTREMELY fun. Great work! No Done;-;

Hard-
01:39:799 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These stacks kinda destroy the fast flow you've set up for the chorus.
Same as insane, 9/10! (it's not 10/10 because I kiiiinda disagree with placing those 1/4 notes on a Hard, when the BPM is so high, but that has to do with taste, so I'll leave it up to you ;D) Done



Normal-
It's kinda sad that you only use 1/1/1/1 beats here (not counting some exeptions), but map is solid othersiwe. I'd make the slidertickrate 1 though, those 2/1 sliders felt empty. Done.slidertickrate1



Easy-
Same as normal, I'd set tickrate to 1. Done.




Amazing. Call me back for a bubble when you think you're done. And I expect to see you in the charts.

Krisom wrote:

One final issue-
Insane-
02:03:015 (2,4) - (4) is totally hidden by (2), and you can't tell if it is a slider or a circle while playing. You will have to move these somewhere else

Sorry I didn't notice those before, let me know when you've fixed them and I'll bubble. No kudosu on this.

Krisom wrote:

Good luck!

Krisom wrote:

Bubble repair (and a veeeery tiny spacing repair)

jericho2442 wrote:

timing is abit out, offset should be 28,507 (+8ms)Done.

Easy
01:33:015 (3) - put a newcombo here than remove the one at 01:34:305 (1) , this way it follows the pattern you use better and also flows better with the musicDone.

Hard
01:11:966 (4) - having 1/4 aint really needed here, it dont really suit the style of your map either, most of the map is a nice flowing beat, then these come and speed it up, just felt odd imo, i really advise to remove this note so it makes it 1/2No Done.
01:17:128 (4) - same againNo Done.
(suggestion) 01:24:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i really didnt like the sudden jump in difficulty here, also the final 2 notes of this pattern was also hard to read due to blindness of the notes before them, its fine i guess, just it felt abit out of place difficulty wiseNo Done.
01:31:321 (5) - same comment as the other 1/4 notes i pointed out, this really aint needed and flows much better without iDone.
01:36:482 (5) - sameDone.
01:50:111 (5) - need a new combo here to break the vocal lines up ;pDone.

Insane
01:04:466 (3,1) - really really bad spacing change here, due to the increasing spacing in the part before this, it makes the (3,1) extremely ugly to read and hard to notice, i constantly got thrown off and i really do advise to space these more apart so they have the same spacing as the two notes before them
Done.
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well popping bubble for the timing and the one red criteria (which bugs me an extreme amount)

check out the mod, fix up and i will rebubble i guess ;p

jericho2442 wrote:

well all looks fine now, so have your floaty thing back

James2250 wrote:

All looks good

Ranked~