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OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin (i-pop ver.)

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Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Random recheck~

[Easy]
00:43:516 (1,2,3,4) - I think this is pushing it for an easy difficulty, tbh. Can you simplify the rhythm a little bit?
00:56:785 (2,3,4) - ^
00:57:362 (4,2) - Didn't like the overlap here
01:14:285 (1,2) - ^
01:19:670 (4,2) - ^ Also a straight line is kind of dull. Maybe do a arc with the hit circles? There's some other small overlaps, if you wish to take care of those or not.
01:51:208 (1) - Aah, you have a good rhythm for this iteration of the chorus. :D

[Normal]
Looks fine. Mostly wish it had a higher slider velocity compared to easy though.

[Hard]
No breaks? At least have one in there somewhere, or go with justnobody's placement.
00:33:324 (7,8) - These feel better if they were stacked to go with how you mapped the rest of this part of the song.
00:52:555 (1,1) - Hrm, maybe have the note after the spinner be closer to the center. That or make it a bit longer after the spinner.
01:25:055 (1) - ^
01:45:055 (4) - New combo. Also so many of these jumps in a row is a bit harsh for this hard diff.
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
[quote="Garven"]Random recheck~

[Easy]
00:43:516 (1,2,3,4) - I think this is pushing it for an easy difficulty, tbh. Can you simplify the rhythm a little bit? make 1 a longer slider and killed 3
00:56:785 (2,3,4) - ^ killed 3.
00:57:362 (4,2) - Didn't like the overlap here
01:14:285 (1,2) - ^
01:19:670 (4,2) - ^ Also a straight line is kind of dull. Maybe do a arc with the hit circles? There's some other small overlaps, if you wish to take care of those or not. everything here fixed.
01:51:208 (1) - Aah, you have a good rhythm for this iteration of the chorus. :D
all fixed.
[Normal]
Looks fine. Mostly wish it had a higher slider velocity compared to easy though.
Maybe next time.

Thanks Garven for the recheck.
a bit unexpected though.
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P.S. i found that after i edited the information in first post, the star from kioukiou disappeared...
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CHAS-kun~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Rechecked.

Good enough for me.

Bubbled.

送分美

Edit :

Sorry,I didn't see CHAS' respond.

Call me back when CHAS finish rechecking.

Star for now. >_>
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
No breaks? At least have one in there somewhere, or go with justnobody's placement. I think it ok..
00:33:324 (7,8) - These feel better if they were stacked to go with how you mapped the rest of this part of the song.
00:52:555 (1,1) - Hrm, maybe have the note after the spinner be closer to the center. That or make it a bit longer after the spinner.
01:25:055 (1) - ^
01:45:055 (4) - New combo. Also so many of these jumps in a row is a bit harsh for this hard diff. fixed
thank you for mod
Sorry for my poor English.


.其實中間的那段我看不懂 怎辦 :? :? :? 就現在這樣吧...
如果不是規定..我這張beatmap不想添加Insert Break Time 如果規定必須要Insert Break Time我再進行修改 :) .



很抱歉 今回有點晚
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
GOoooooo!!!

kioukiou wrote:

送分美
how to put stress.jpg here???
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Bubbled.
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

kioukiou wrote:

Bubbled.
gogogo!!!
or stop&pop it...

waiting here is tiring...
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Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
A HAH!

I refreshed before I posted this time, kioukiou! :P

G'luck with the ranking, justnobody!
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
wait wait
please remove offset to 439 and resnap all notes (in order to line up the long white tick with music)

<CHAS' Hard>
claps in this diff sound abit random,
00:37:362 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this sounds good
01:44:670 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this sounds bad
did you find the difference, most of musics have their own claps, if you feel like to add claps
the easy way is following the BGM claps, try to listen to the music carefully, you can hear the BGM claps
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

Alace wrote:

wait wait
please remove offset to 439 and resnap all notes (in order to line up the long white tick with music)

<CHAS' Hard>
claps in this diff sound abit random,
00:37:362 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this sounds good
01:44:670 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this sounds bad
did you find the difference, most of musics have their own claps, if you feel like to add claps
the easy way is following the BGM claps, try to listen to the music carefully, you can hear the BGM claps
thank you for mod :)

這樣claps應該比較好..? 音效什麼的果然很麻煩啊~~~~~~~~~~~~~~(趴倒)
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,437 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
Hi there !

CHAS's Hard
It can seems nicely ^^
SPOILER

01:01:978 (4) - add finish
01:30:247 (3) - remove clap from the finish
01:30:824 (4) - add clap
01:32:170 (1) - remove clap, add whistle
01:32:362 (2) - add clap

Normal
00:14:477 (1) - remove clap
00:14:669 (2) - add clap at start of slider
00:16:015 (6) - add whistle at the start. Remove whistle from the end
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - make it 1/2 early , imho.

Easy
00:40:246 (4) - too hard for easy. make 1/2 later.
00:55:054 (3,4) - try to make slider at place of this notes.
01:16:977 (4) - add finish, remove whistle
01:23:900 (4) - remove clap from the finish
02:02:746 (5) - remove clap, add whistle
02:02:938 (6) - remove clap
02:31:015 (4) - remove note
02:31:208 (5) - remove note
02:31:400 (1) - start it on to 02:31:015 and finish at the 02:33:131

Uh, Star. Keep working :3
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

Aleks719 wrote:

Hi there !

CHAS's Hard
It can seems nicely ^^
SPOILER

01:01:978 (4) - add finish
01:30:247 (3) - remove clap from the finish
01:30:824 (4) - add clap
01:32:170 (1) - remove clap, add whistle
01:32:362 (2) - add clap
all fixed!~
Thank you for mod :) :)

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
Normal

00 09 092 maybe add note
01 16 785 ^
01 18 323 ^
01 18 515 maybe add clap
01 21 208 ^
01 31 785 add finish, i think
01 33 515 maybe add clap
02 02 939 add finish, i think
02 03 323 add note, i think
02 15 246 maybe add clap
02 16 592 ^
02 33 900 add finish, i think

Hard
00 09 092 maybe add clap note
00 46 208 add finish
00 58 323 add clap
01 29 092 maybe add clap note
01 49 092 maybe add finish too
01 52 201 maybe add whistle too
01 53 708 add clap

star then !
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

artpiggo wrote:

Hard
00 09 092 maybe add clap note no.
00 46 208 add finish fixed
00 58 323 add clap fixed
01 29 092 maybe add clap note no.
01 49 092 maybe add finish too no. i think clap is good
01 52 201 maybe add whistle too 1:52:201??
01 53 708 add clap no.
thank you for mod :)


最新的 :)
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

Aleks719 wrote:

Hi there !

Normal
00:14:477 (1) - remove clap
00:14:669 (2) - add clap at start of slider
00:16:015 (6) - add whistle at the start. Remove whistle from the end
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - make it 1/2 early , imho. this looks crazy for me...
others all fixed.
Easy
00:40:246 (4) - too hard for easy. make 1/2 later.
00:55:054 (3,4) - try to make slider at place of this notes.
01:16:977 (4) - add finish, remove whistle
01:23:900 (4) - remove clap from the finish
02:02:746 (5) - remove clap, add whistle
02:02:938 (6) - remove clap
02:31:015 (4) - remove note
02:31:208 (5) - remove note
02:31:400 (1) - start it on to 02:31:015 and finish at the 02:33:131
all fixed.
Uh, Star. Keep working :3
thanks for modding!

artpiggo wrote:

Normal

00 09 092 maybe add note
01 16 785 ^
01 18 323 ^
01 18 515 maybe add clap
01 21 208 ^
01 31 785 add finish, i think
01 33 515 maybe add clap
02 02 939 add finish, i think
02 03 323 add note, i think
02 15 246 maybe add clap
02 16 592 ^
02 33 900 add finish, i think
all fixed.
star then !
thanks for modding!and notes adding!
the new improved normal is more marks-giving than before.
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
้hi hi :3

[General]
bad news.... I don't agree the way you set the same slider velocity in [Easy] and [Normal] both 1.0 =3=
^ this issue may trouble you in nearly future lol
TAG : ending single

[Easy]
00:25:439(2) - make this slider straight like (3)
00:41:015 - make more rest space for beginner... start it as 00:41:400 end at 00:42:746
00:49:669(2) - move the end of this slider down 1 grid lv3
00:52:746(4) - ^ same

[Normal]
00:40:631(1,2) - a duplet like this is really fit with normal hitsound(remove whistle and reduce volume a bit)
00:41:208 - extend slider to 00:43:131 sounds nice
01:43:515(1) - remove new combo
01:44:092(5) - new combo
01:45:054 - new combo
01:48:900 - extend to 01:50:823 sounds nice

[CHAS's Hard]
00:38:900(1) - remove new combo here
00:40:054(8) - new combo here
00:40:631(1) - remove new combo
01:09:669 - extend to 01:10:439?
01:26:400(4) - new combo
01:45:054(1) - remove new combo
01:45:439(1) - new combo
01:46:592 - remove new combo
01:47:554 - new combo
01:58:515 - now combo
02:01:785 - new combo
02:15:246(5) - a bit offscreen ;w; it would be nice if you replace this one...

I really love this song x3~
*shoot kudo star*

ask me if you want my insane diff :3
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
410 posts
Joined November 2009
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
[General]

Check if ALL spinners have the "New Combo" marked.

[Easy]

AR -1

01:49:477 (5,1) - A jump ? It's an Easy one, but not for an Easy difficult. If was a Normal, could stay. Think of a change.

[Normal]

AR -1
OD -1

00:14:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern for a normal it's a little too much. Change it? For one like these 00:26:785 (1,2,3,4).
01:01:400 (1) - 2 beats instead?
01:22:169 (1) - ^
01:34:477 (1) - ^
02:01:977 (4) - A single beat instead?
02:02:362 (5) - ^
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5) and 02:05:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - A little much for a normal.
02:15:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[CHAS' Hard]

It's fine... for an Insane. Change the name of the diff is easier to change several things like AR, OD and some jumps.

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That's it.
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

vincerio wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
00:38:900(1) - remove new combo here fixed
00:40:054(8) - new combo here fixed
00:40:631(1) - remove new combo fixed
01:09:669 - extend to 01:10:439? no.
01:26:400(4) - new combo no.
01:45:054(1) - remove new combo no.
01:45:439(1) - new combo ^
01:46:592 - remove new combo ^
01:47:554 - new combo ^
01:58:515 - now combo fixed
02:01:785 - new combofixed
02:15:246(5) - a bit offscreen ;w; it would be nice if you replace this one... ok~
thank you for mod :)

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[General]

Check if ALL spinners have the "New Combo" marked. fixed......

[CHAS' Hard]

It's fine... for an Insane. Change the name of the diff is easier to change several things like AR, OD and some jumps. this diff played easy lol
thank you for mod

雖然我不知道spinner加上new combo有什麼效果 233

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

vincerio wrote:

้hi hi :3

[General]
bad news.... I don't agree the way you set the same slider velocity in [Easy] and [Normal] both 1.0 =3= tried 1.2.
^ this issue may trouble you in nearly future lol
TAG : ending single

[Easy]
00:25:439(2) - make this slider straight like (3) fixed
00:41:015 - make more rest space for beginner... start it as 00:41:400 end at 00:42:746 then the note afterwards is quite difficult.
00:49:669(2) - move the end of this slider down 1 grid lv3 fixed
00:52:746(4) - ^ same fixed?

[Normal]
00:40:631(1,2) - a duplet like this is really fit with normal hitsound(remove whistle and reduce volume a bit)
00:41:208 - extend slider to 00:43:131 sounds nice no.
01:43:515(1) - remove new combo
01:44:092(5) - new combo
01:45:054 - new combo
01:48:900 - extend to 01:50:823 sounds nice no.
others are fixed.
I really love this song x3~
*shoot kudo star*

ask me if you want my insane diff :3
what?
suddenly i thought it's time to add an insane...
as the "Hard" i can pass with an A
so thanks a loooot.
and thanks for the pink star.

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[General]

Check if ALL spinners have the "New Combo" marked.

[Easy]

AR -1

01:49:477 (5,1) - A jump ? It's an Easy one, but not for an Easy difficult. If was a Normal, could stay. Think of a change.
all fixed.
[Normal]

AR -1
OD -1

00:14:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern for a normal it's a little too much. Change it? For one like these 00:26:785 (1,2,3,4).
01:01:400 (1) - 2 beats instead?
01:22:169 (1) - ^
01:34:477 (1) - ^
02:01:977 (4) - A single beat instead?
02:02:362 (5) - ^
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5) and 02:05:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - A little much for a normal. ehh...
02:15:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
others all fixed.
That's it.
thanks for modding!
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at this time i can pass only 3 insane diffs...
so CHAS' hard must be a hard.
vincerio's insane is an insane.
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and i give a kd to CHAS by mistake....
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vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
My insane ready!~ :)

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [vincerio's Insane].osu
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS
幫我在難度名稱改成 CHAS's Hard
現在應該無誤吧...?

話說怎麼給我kd.. :?:
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

CHAS wrote:

幫我在難度名稱改成 CHAS's Hard
現在應該無誤吧...?
英文文法博大精深...
話說怎麼給我kd.. :?:
誤中了.
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
[General]

CHAS's hard rename CHAS' Hard

00:43:515 - start kiai time and finish 01:07:939

01:51:208 - start kiai time and finish 02:03:323

02:25:054 - start kiai time and finish 02:33:131

all diffs

[Easy]

00:41:400 (1) - spinner start here 00:41:208 (1)

02:31:015 (1) - finish here 02:32:939

02:26:208 (3) - Move the slider here 02:26:592 (3) and 02:26:208 (3) - add circle

[Normal]

01:45:054 (1,2,3,4) - why not make them equal and symmetrical? It looks like



[CHAS's Hard]

00:31:015 (4) - a good time to slow down - to here 00:40:055 (1)

here is not appropriate, such tricks with spinner >_>

00:49:862 (1,1,1) - (×̯×)

02:17:555 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - (×̯×)

[vincerio's Insane]

00:28:323 (7) - start spinner and finish 00:29:477

01:03:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - o.o (♥)

02:01:015 (6,7) - so game is interesting and beautiful



02:36:592 (1) - (×̯×)

I liked it :)

S T A R ~
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
update :3

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [vincerio's Insane].osu
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[General]

CHAS's hard rename CHAS' Hard .

[CHAS's Hard]

00:31:015 (4) - a good time to slow down - to here 00:40:055 (1) i think this ok.

here is not appropriate, such tricks with spinner >_> i think this ok.

00:49:862 (1,1,1) - (×̯×)

02:17:555 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - (×̯×)
:) Thank you



justnobody你打算加kiai time麼?也有人討厭kiai time的說 我先不加kiai time 看看你意向 :)

話說為什麼我的是CHAS' Hard...
究竟何時加s 何時不加s chas表示完全不明白(打滾)
麻煩了你了 justnobody..幫我再改回CHAS' Hard.......
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[General]

CHAS's hard rename CHAS' Hard got it.

00:43:515 - start kiai time and finish 01:07:939

01:51:208 - start kiai time and finish 02:03:323

02:25:054 - start kiai time and finish 02:33:131

all diffs

[Easy]

00:41:400 (1) - spinner start here 00:41:208 (1)

02:31:015 (1) - finish here 02:32:939

02:26:208 (3) - Move the slider here 02:26:592 (3) and 02:26:208 (3) - add circle
all fixed.
[Normal]

01:45:054 (1,2,3,4) - why not make them equal and symmetrical? It looks like



no, but copied from something in 00m3Xs

I liked it :)

S T A R ~
thanks for modding!

CHAS wrote:

justnobody你打算加kiai time麼?也有人討厭kiai time的說 我先不加kiai time 看看你意向 :)

話說為什麼我的是CHAS' Hard...
究竟何時加s 何時不加s chas表示完全不明白(打滾)
麻煩了你了 justnobody..幫我再改回CHAS' Hard.......
kiai我這邊沒打算加哦
CHAS' Hard這個...呃...
大概是CHA"S"的關係
好像是s尾的都該這樣
例如 friend's 和 friends' 這樣
話說這變成英文文法課了...
還有我又一次覺得我的id很沒品味...
Xeno_old
120 posts
Joined June 2009
Xeno_old
Good job! -.-
Star!!

[Normal]
00:09:092 (6) - Add clap :>
00:21:400 (5) - Add clap
00:57:362 (5) - End on red tick then repeat once?

[CHA's Hard]
00:41:785 (4) - New combo

[vincerio's Insane]
00:25:054 (1) - Remove New combo
00:32:362 (3) - add clap
00:32:362 (3) - Add clap
00:35:439 (4) - Add clap
00:36:977 (1) - Add clap
00:37:746 (3) - Add clap at start of slider
00:38:515 (5) - Add clap at start of slider
00:39:285 (7) - Add clap at start of slider
00:40:054 (3) - Add clap
00:40:631 (5,6,7,8) - Add claps
00:42:169 (1,2,3,4) - Add claps
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

Xeno32 wrote:

[CHA's Hard]
00:41:785 (4) - New combo no.
thank you ~ :)







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我的名稱變成CHA了lol~~
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

Xeno32 wrote:

Good job! -.-
Star!!

[Normal]
00:09:092 (6) - Add clap :> fixed.
00:21:400 (5) - Add clap fixed.
00:57:362 (5) - End on red tick then repeat once? repeat once looks odd to me but tried repeat twice.
thanks you very much!
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
[vincerio's Insane]
00:25:054 (1) - Remove New combo
00:32:362 (3) - add clap
00:32:362 (3) - Add clap
00:35:439 (4) - Add clap
00:36:977 (1) - Add clap
00:37:746 (3) - Add clap at start of slider
00:38:515 (5) - Add clap at start of slider
00:39:285 (7) - Add clap at start of slider
00:40:054 (3) - Add clap
00:40:631 (5,6,7,8) - Add claps
00:42:169 (1,2,3,4) - Add claps
no thank you
Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
sorry for late mod reply.. ;/

There's just my suggestions, cuz I think the beatmap is already very nice ^^

Easy:
02:18:515 (1) maybe give here the same slider and note as in 02:16:977?
02:31:015 end this spinner at 02:33:131

Normal:
00:22:939 (3) 1 grid up
01:02:169 (5) maybe make thiss lider look nicer?
01:03:701 (4) ^
02:31:208 same as in Easy diff?

Hard:
01:28:131 (4) 2 grids up, 1 grid right
01:28:323 (5) 2 grids up, 2 grids right
01:40:054 maybe add finish hitsound? it sounds nice^^
01:41:592 ^
01:43:131 ^
01:44:669 ^

vincerio's Insane:

:OO grid lvl 4 ;OO im not so good at it but I try :D :)

00:05:246 (2,3,4) 1 grid right on grid lvl 4?
00:46:015 (10,11) 1 grid up?
02:14:669 (3) 1 grid down?
02:14:862 (4,5,6) 1 grid down?
02:15:150 (6) 1 grid left?

star! :))
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

ShiroKitty wrote:

sorry for late mod reply.. ;/

There's just my suggestions, cuz I think the beatmap is already very nice ^^

Easy:
02:18:515 (1) maybe give here the same slider and note as in 02:16:977?
02:31:015 end this spinner at 02:33:131

Normal:
00:22:939 (3) 1 grid up
01:02:169 (5) maybe make thiss lider look nicer?
01:03:701 (4) ^
02:31:208 same as in Easy diff?

star! :))
all fixed.
thanks a lot...
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happy chinese new year.
i'll be out for two or three days.
mod post below will be checked at 05/02/2011.
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next post is 100th.
winber1
4,519 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
General

--sometimes there are random claps in the middle of a whistle sections (speaking of normal and easy, didn't pay that much attention to hitsounds in hard and insane). In my opinion, claps should be used in systematic pattern (even if it's some extremely long, almost incomprehensible pattern). I do realize that you use claps in a specific phrase (like when you have two 1/2 notes together), but other times it's just a clap (or a few claps) in a whistle pattern section. At least that's what it strikes me as. Maybe I'm just not paying enough attention. 00:13:515 in easy would be one example I have.


Vincero's Insane

00:01:977(1) - 1 grid left
00:03:515(1,2,3,4) - makes notes line up vertically? or make all other 1,2,3,4 patterns slant slightly like this one
00:05:054(1) - 1 grid left
00:18:900(x) - add a note
00:31:592(6) - new combo, then remove new combo at 00:31:785
00:52:362(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - accelerated spacing doesn't make much sense here. The music is not reaching a climax at this point in time. It IS reaching somewhat of a climax at 00:54:285 to 00:55:823
01:47:939(4) - i don't know about you, but I would put this farther away from the new combo. I guess it's fine tho
02:06:015(x) - i would really recommend putting a note here. If you do not want to add a note, then please consider making the slider at 02:05:246 start at 02:05:054
02:36:400(1) - i would move this note probably somewhere in the middle to make another jump at the end.


CHAS' Hard

00:18:708(4,1,2,3) - is there any reason why the spacing is larger than the rest of the section? I don't mind the spacing at all, but i just can't help but notice the difference in spacing.
00:53:515(spinner) - i would not silence this, but it's still your decision
01:04:285(spinner) - i would end the spinner here with a finish
02:19:862(spinner) - spinner ends in awkward spot.

Normal

00:14:285(4) - start the new combo here
02:19:669(break) - umm.. very awkward break in my opinion. You don't have to have notes for that echo, but i think at least put some notes starting at 02:21:400

Easy

00:13:515(2...etc) - either get rid of these claps or add claps from 00:25:823 to the spinner
00:30:439(spinner) - end spinner here
02:21:400(break) - same as in normal, maybe add some notes starting here

Nice map. :D

Star~
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

winber1 wrote:

General

--sometimes there are random claps in the middle of a whistle sections (speaking of normal and easy, didn't pay that much attention to hitsounds in hard and insane). In my opinion, claps should be used in systematic pattern (even if it's some extremely long, almost incomprehensible pattern). I do realize that you use claps in a specific phrase (like when you have two 1/2 notes together), but other times it's just a clap (or a few claps) in a whistle pattern section. At least that's what it strikes me as. Maybe I'm just not paying enough attention. 00:13:515 in easy would be one example I have.

that's why i think the claps there looks strange...
but sometimes i would feel bored when the hitsounds are like "don don don clap don don don clap ....."
that's why i tried to make it different...
anyway it does look strange and i've fixed them.

Normal

00:14:285(4) - start the new combo here
02:19:669(break) - umm.. very awkward break in my opinion. You don't have to have notes for that echo, but i think at least put some notes starting at 02:21:400

Easy

00:13:515(2...etc) - either get rid of these claps or add claps from 00:25:823 to the spinner
00:30:439(spinner) - end spinner here
02:21:400(break) - same as in normal, maybe add some notes starting here

Nice map. :D

Star~
all fixed.
thanks for the advice for hitsounds.
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CHAS-san~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
vincerio-san~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
nothing changed...
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
i've been killing the ugly slider left in the normal.

now this is probably the final version.
or maybe some more modding...
now rush.
i suddenly want 70sp.
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
554 posts
Joined March 2010
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
找不出客观的问题哎，纯支持下。
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Aaah, what happened?

[General]
I'm not seeing a reason for "lazy" to be in the tags.
Also remove ending and single from tags.

[Easy]
01:51:208 (1) - I'd rather not see a stack like this in an easy. It may be difficult to discern the rhythm like this.
02:15:823 (2) - Finish on start?
02:25:054 (2,4) - ^ There are a bunch of others, if you feel that they work with the general hit sound pattern you've used.

[Normal]
01:25:054 - Surprised you didn't go with the "だめだめ" again

[CHAS' Hard]
Wish there was a break (01:10:054 - would be a good place for one), but otherwise fine.

Edit: Ah hell, didn't notice the new difficulty. I'll mod it later and let you know. >_>
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- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
thanks kissfly for checking.
and...

Garven wrote:

Aaah, what happened?

[General]
I'm not seeing a reason for "lazy" to be in the tags.not removed.
Also remove ending and single from tags. removed.

on post #49:

frost-b-spec wrote:

[General]
suggestion
add tags : lazy,cover
as i know this song is somewhat an old song in japan.
see: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VyQkccOwWrc
if this is not a reason then i will remove it.



[Easy]
01:51:208 (1) - I'd rather not see a stack like this in an easy. It may be difficult to discern the rhythm like this. fixed.
02:15:823 (2) - Finish on start?fixed.
02:25:054 (2,4) - ^ There are a bunch of others, if you feel that they work with the general hit sound pattern you've used. probably fixed...but i sometimes think that they are a bit noisy.

[Normal]
01:25:054 - Surprised you didn't go with the "だめだめ" again oh my fault. fixed.
:)
and you probably have forgot to check vincerio's insane.
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Bleh, I'll just make a new post.

[vincerio's Insane]
00:01:977 (1) - Move left one grid, or 2, 3, and 4 right one grid
00:03:515 (1,2,3,4) - Aaah, these all sliding left on purpose?
00:05:054 (1) - Move left one grid, or 2, 3, and 4 right one grid
02:03:323 (1) - I'm surprised that the intensity of the mapping didn't go down very much compared to the music. :/
02:15:054 (6) - This placed right?
02:28:900 (3,4) - I think it'd be better to go with the vocals instead of the beat here...
02:36:592 (1) - Eh. Doesn't fit imo. Just two beats with the "Thank you!" would be better.
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
vincerio-san~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
..............

and kds are not easy to earn.
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
>.< Wish I modded this earlier :U
found nothing wrong and good luck getting this ranked :D
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Easy

Nice

00:32:362(3) - it may move 1 gird left(lv4)
00:32:362~00:40:823 - i think that those claps might be reduced velume by 15%

here you are

timing

SPOILER
32265,-100,4,2,0,84,0,0
32458,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
33804,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
33996,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
35342,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
35535,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
36881,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
37073,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
37746,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
37842,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
38515,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
38612,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
39189,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
39381,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
40054,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
40150,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
40727,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
40919,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

01:38:900~01:47:939 - same with 00:32:362~00:40:823

timing

SPOILER
100054,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
100150,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
101592,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
101689,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
103131,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
103227,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
104669,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
104765,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
105342,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
105535,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
106112,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
106304,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
106881,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
107073,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
107650,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
107842,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
108131,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
110631,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

02:23:515(5) - change the shape of the slider

Normal

00:32:362~00:40:823 and 01:38:900~01:47:939

i think you need to reduce the volume by 10% or 15% in those sections.

CHAS' Hard

nice

so many spinners =w=

vincerio's Insane

fine~

star...
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
fun map 8-)
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Easy

Nice

00:32:362(3) - it may move 1 gird left(lv4)
00:32:362~00:40:823 - i think that those claps might be reduced velume by 15%

here you are

timing

SPOILER
32265,-100,4,2,0,84,0,0
32458,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
33804,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
33996,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
35342,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
35535,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
36881,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
37073,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
37746,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
37842,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
38515,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
38612,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
39189,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
39381,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
40054,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
40150,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
40727,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
40919,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

01:38:900~01:47:939 - same with 00:32:362~00:40:823

timing

SPOILER
100054,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
100150,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
101592,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
101689,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
103131,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
103227,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
104669,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
104765,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
105342,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
105535,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
106112,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
106304,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
106881,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
107073,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
107650,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
107842,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
108131,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
110631,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

02:23:515(5) - change the shape of the slider

Normal

00:32:362~00:40:823 and 01:38:900~01:47:939

i think you need to reduce the volume by 10% or 15% in those sections.

star...
everything will fixed.
i have to change the codes....
(feeling dizzy)

oh thanks for the star regenz.
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orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[vincerio's Insane] หมันไส้เจ้าของดีพนี้ ว่าจะไม่ม็อดแมพนี้ให้และ =3=
01:35:439 (6) - new combo
02:36:592 (1) - end this spinner at 02:37:746? sound better, imo

other things look fine to me
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
fixed!!

Thanks Garven and onionorioncomet for modding :3

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [vincerio's Insane].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
probably i'm a bit late.
everything updated.
and push a pink star.
*sigh*
taNa_Coppola
169 posts
Joined August 2009
taNa_Coppola
:oops:
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS
SPOILER

Garven wrote:

[CHAS' Hard]
Wish there was a break (01:10:054 - would be a good place for one) no. , but otherwise fine. :)

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Easy

CHAS' Hard

nice

so many spinners =w= 8-) :D
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
val0108
ya o/

[Easy]
01:55:054 (2) - 3grid up.if changes this, please regulate next spacing.

[Normal]
fine

[CHAS's Hard]
fine

[vincerio's Insane]
00:23:515 (10) - new combo
00:24:477 (1) - Remove new combo
00:49:285 (2) - add finish 00:49:669
00:57:169 (9) - new combo?
01:01:977 (3) - add finish
01:56:977 (2) - add finish 01:57:362

nice map~:3
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
val0108's mod
my part all fixed.
waiting for vincerio's response...
*sigh*
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
sorry for late respone :(

I'm now extremely busy...

nothing is changed...

thx!
Saten
Global Moderator
3,871 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Ookami~~

General:
This is some Combo Color suggestions :3
[Colours]
Combo1 : 157,242,121
Combo2 : 255,51,51
Combo3 : 216,81,255
Combo4 : 83,83,255

[Normal]
00:10:246 (2) - Spacing
00:10:631 (3,4) - ^ Also, (3) is overlapping the following (1)
Make it to something like this?
SPOILER
00:12:169 (1,2,3,4) - spacing, due to previous slider
00:13:131 (1) - 1 grid right
00:14:669 (3) - add clap?
00:15:054 (5) - remove clap?
00:22:938 (3) - overlapping (4)
SPOILER
00:25:438 (5) - Add clap at the beginning and at the second repeat
00:26:785 (1,2,3,4) - placement suggestion:
SPOILER
00:53:900 (3) - Whistle
01:20:054 (2) - clap
01:20:823 (5) - Clap at the beginning and at the second repeat, Also remove the clap on the first repeat
01:33:131 (5) - swap the hitsounds on this slider
01:34:669 (2) - whistle

That's for now~
I could probably help you more, but I'm not sure if you like it.
If you do, PM me (probably faster reply if you PM in-game :P)

Starr~
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
My Lazy Post:
Colours all fixed.
Normal (should be) all fixed?

That's more than helpful.
I will call you "Saten-Senpai"!! :P
Saten
Global Moderator
3,871 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Tip: I don't know if you know this but holding Ctrl and left-clicking will create a new curve section on an existing slider :3

Easy
00:15:823 (6) - shape it like this?
SPOILER

[Normal]
00:09:669 (1,2) - place them like this?
SPOILER
00:10:631 (3) - 1 grid right
00:11:785 (4) - you forgot to stack this one
00:21:977 (1) - place it like this
SPOILER
00:34:285 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern suggestion~
SPOILER
00:45:054 (2) - like this?
SPOILER
00:46:592 (1,3) - Make them abit curvy?
SPOILER
01:16:785 (6,7) - spacing
01:17:362 (1) - change it to something like this?
SPOILER
01:41:977 (1,2,3,4) - just like 00:34:285 but mirrored instead
SPOILER


No kudosu for this since I could've posted this on my previous post :P
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
Saten-sama~

oh god i 'm gatting lazier and lazier...

should be all fixed.
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
Hi.Here comes my mod.
The words with Red color means You must fix it.
The words with Blue color means You'd better do it.
The words with Purple color means Just suggetstion.

[General]
BG is 1024X768.Please make it 800X600.
[Vincerio]
00:22:939 (6) new combo color?
00:57:169 (7) new combo color?
00:49:669 (2) add finish?
00:55:823 (2) ^
01:01:977 (3) ^
01:57:362 (2) ^
02:09:669 (3) ^

[CHAS]
00:12:874 useless green line.Delete it.
00:15:951 ^
00:23:035 ^
00:24:958 ^
00:29:958 ur....I think Normal hitsound fits this part.
01:38:804 ^

[Normal]
Increase AR By 1~2?
00:28:515 insert breaktime

[Easy]
Fine.

Nice map.Star~
Saten
Global Moderator
3,871 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten

Mystica wrote:

[General]
BG is 1024X768.Please make it 800X600.
1024x768 is acceptable.
galvenize
919 posts
Joined June 2010
galvenize
[Insane]
Nothing much to point out.
A suggestion:
02:21:400 (7) - Would be so much better if you removed one return and fill the blank with a note at 02:21:977 (x). I kinda slider break because I thought that return slider was identical to the previous two.

[Hard]

Suggestion:
01:58:900 (3) - Make it start at the next red tick at 01:59:092 (x) and fill the newly empty spot with a note at 01:58:900 (x). Flows slightly better since it will play like 01:57:362 (3,4) and 02:00:439 (3,4).
before:
SPOILER
after:
SPOILER

[Normal]

Insert break at 00:28:515?

That's about it.
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
@Mystica: AR+1 and break added.
@galvenize: break added.

thanks for modding
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!

[Easy]
00:18:515 (1) - This note just dont fit to anything, move it on a red tick or remove it
00:31:208 (1) - Move one tick earlier or make a slider from 00:31:015 to 00:31:592
02:23:515 (5) - start 1 tick earlier

[Normal]
00:14:477 (2) - Start New combo here and remove new combo at (1) fits better to the music imo

[CHAS' Hard]
00:07:555 (5) - New Combo
00:10:632 (5) - ^
00:49:862 (1,1,1) - I hate you
02:17:554 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - Run away or i'll kill you!

[vincerio's Insane]
00:49:862 (3) - move the last slider-point 1 grid left
01:02:169 (4) - last slider-point 1 grid right >.>
02:15:054 (6) - 1 grid left
nazi mods are amazing right?

Great map, i think it's ready to get ranked ^^
Have a Star~
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

KillerRind wrote:

Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!

[Easy]
00:18:515 (1) - This note just dont fit to anything, move it on a red tick or remove it don't think so imo.
00:31:208 (1) - Move one tick earlier or make a slider from 00:31:015 to 00:31:592 fixed.
02:23:515 (5) - start 1 tick earlier got it.

[Normal]
00:14:477 (2) - Start New combo here and remove new combo at (1) fits better to the music imo my fault. fixed

Great map, i think it's ready to get ranked ^^
Have a Star~
thank you very much.
don't mind nazy moddings.
---------------------------------------------
CHAS-kun~~~~~~~
vincerio-san~~~~~~~~
..................
no response?
---------------------------------------------
CHAS' diff updated.
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CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS
Thank you

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,858 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Here's my mod~

[Easy]

01:21:977 (5) - 1 grid down (to make symmetrical the notes 01:20:439 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
02:03:515 (8) - Delete this note

[Normal]

01:14:477 - Add a note
01:32:746 (4) - Move this 1 grid up

[CHAS' Hard]

Good.

[vincerio's Insane]

00:18:900 - Add a note

Like the map and song,star!
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
Why are there "lazy" and "cover" in tags ?
Your mp3 has 256kbps bitrate. Compress it to 192.
The diffs don't have the same ending points...

Easy
I find this to be rather hard for an Easy (because of all the 1/2, the long streams of note, and some of the rhythms used).
01:21:977 (5,1,2) - It's a bit nazi, but can you space them perfectly ? It will look a lot better.

Normal
This is too hard for a Normal. It plays more like a Hard.

CHAS' Hard
Seems fine... despite the many 1/2 beats that were added and that hardly make any sense.

vincerio's Insane
Why doesn't this start at the same point as the other diffs ?
The difficulty feels forced here...
Saten
Global Moderator
3,871 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten

Odaril wrote:

Your mp3 has 256kbps bitrate. Compress it to 192. Make sure to double check the offset afterwards~

Normal
This is too hard for a Normal. It plays more like a Hard. Plays like a Hard? No way~
You should keep it imo~.
Sorry if I sounded selfish :P
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
kevincela's mod:
my part all fixed.

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General
Why are there "lazy" and "cover" in tags ?
about the "lazy"as i know this song is somewhat an old song in japan.
see: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VyQkccOwWrc
if this is not a reason then i will remove it.
about the "cover" : removed.

Your mp3 has 256kbps bitrate. Compress it to 192.
arrrgh this is a VBR with average 141 kbps so it should be fine.
The diffs don't have the same ending points...
i will map my part to the end...


Easy
I find this to be rather hard for an Easy (because of all the 1/2, the long streams of note, and some of the rhythms used).
01:21:977 (5,1,2) - It's a bit nazi, but can you space them perfectly ? It will look a lot better.
...
Normal
This is too hard for a Normal. It plays more like a Hard.
....
mastering in IELTS don't mean mastering everyday english.
i'm full of mis-understanding...

wow i was ninja'd by Saten-sama.
I will talk to Odaril later.
vincerio
687 posts
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vincerio

Odaril wrote:

vincerio's Insane
Why doesn't this start at the same point as the other diffs ?
The difficulty feels forced here...
Seriously? I'm just following the song rhythm... Owo
Why Starting and Ending point should be the same for all difficulties? as long as its look fine, that wasn't a problems at all.
Don't say it's unrankable or unacceptable. Im used to deal with it.
Thanks for understanding :3
Shiro
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Shiro

vincerio wrote:

Odaril wrote:

vincerio's Insane
Why doesn't this start at the same point as the other diffs ?
The difficulty feels forced here...
Seriously? I'm just following the song rhythm... Owo
Why Starting and Ending point should be the same for all difficulties? as long as its look fine, that wasn't a problems at all.
Don't say it's unrankable or unacceptable. Im used to deal with it.
Thanks for understanding :3
The starting points being different is perfectly acceptable, but I think it's always better to have all the diffs start at the same point and end at the same point :P
Also, the difficulty feels forced because most of the patterns felt like they were put there for the sake of placing them here (I said nothing about beat placement as I thought it's fine). That's only my personal view anyway.
- Rche -
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Topic Starter
- Rche -
now i have changed the diff names.
Normal-->Hard
Easy-->Normal
...
兩個hard無問題嗎...
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS
大丈夫だ、問題ない
loveFantasy
526 posts
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loveFantasy
hi

[Normal]
<00:18:515> sounds weird, add notes on <00:17:746> and <00:18:131> and move finish to (2)
<01:18:515> (2) move to x:360 y:320
<01:21:977> (5) new combo here instead

[Hard]
<01:16:977> (7) clap instead
<01:22:746> (4) a 1/2 slider repeating 2 times play better here
<01:26:592..> (1..) change all finishes in this section into clap?
<01:38:900> (1) whistle instead

[CHAS' Hard]
<00:57:939> (6) remove clap and clap on (7)
<01:05:823> (4) x (5) clap, same for (6,7); (8,9) clap clap, spinner finish
<01:19:092> wierd finish
<01:30:631> ^
<02:36:978> nice,

[vincerio's Insane]
<01:02:169> (4) make it straight?
- note placement could be further optimized but since it's insane and it's good...nevermind

you don't have to worry about 2 Hard issue, since they have completely different mapping style and played out well imo, also very nice score spread!

star
- Rche -
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Topic Starter
- Rche -

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

[Normal]
<00:18:515> sounds weird, add notes on <00:17:746> and <00:18:131> and move finish to (2)
<01:18:515> (2) move to x:360 y:320
<01:21:977> (5) new combo here instead
all fixed.
[Hard]
<01:16:977> (7) clap instead
<01:22:746> (4) a 1/2 slider repeating 2 times play better here Fixed.
<01:26:592..> (1..) change all finishes in this section into clap?
<01:38:900> (1) whistle instead
others are not fixed...i think the hitsounds here are okay.

you don't have to worry about 2 Hard issue, since they have completely different mapping style and played out well imo, also very nice score spread!

star
thanks for modding.
still a bit worried.

EDIT: CHAS' diff updated.
vincerio did you check the mod posts in the last page?
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CHAS
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CHAS

loveFantasy wrote:

[CHAS' Hard]
<00:57:939> (6) remove clap and clap on (7)
<01:05:823> (4) x (5) clap, same for (6,7); (8,9) clap clap, spinner finish
<01:19:092> wierd finish
<01:30:631> ^
<02:36:978> nice,
thank you

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. tags: lazy 这个是什么 0.0
[CHAS's Hard]:
  1. 00:17:939 (2,3) - finish
  2. 00:49:862 (1,1,1) - 这样使用spinner会突然丢失节奏感 后面也有类似情况
  3. 总体上是好diff 只是应该更多注重下pattern的使用 有一段貌似在摆方框或者拉长蛇
[vincerio's Insane]:
  • 00:31:208 (5) - normal-hitnormal here
  1. 01:38:900 (5) - ^
  2. 00:40:246 (4) - finish
  3. 00:41:785 (9) - ^
  4. 01:08:227 ~ 01:09:669 (T) - spinner here, mute the end
  5. 01:25:246 (1,1,1,1) - finish
  6. 01:47:938 (4) - ^
  7. 01:49:477 (5) - ^
  8. 01:56:977 (2,3) - spacing
  9. hitsounds are nicely done, use more soft sliders instead of liner ones could fit the song much better imo, current spacing is fun to play btw
[Normal]:
  1. AR +2 OD+1
  2. hitsounds比较混乱, 通常情况选定一个whistle/clap来跟音乐打节拍在重音处下 另一个用来点缀 这个曲子有清楚的鼓点 应该不会很难 部分地方下的合格 但是整体看会发现很乱 大概是mapping前后时间跨度较长的原因 请注重以下整体性
[Hard]:
  1. 要把这个说成一个Hard很难... 156bpm的SV(slider velocity)只有1.2 而且常用spacing snap只有x0.8 如果想要做一个Hard的话 不妨试试SV1.6 spacing snap放到x1.2? 目前的情况和Normal的难度比起 我感觉仅仅是圈小了而已. (星数什么的可以忽略) 另外欢快的曲子可以试试把slider做成有点微弧度. 直来直去的话太硬气了 orz
另外这个帖子标题上的ver后面的点别忘了加 :P
- Rche -
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Topic Starter
- Rche -

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. tags: lazy 这个是什么 0.0
我又漏寫了某些東西了

[Normal]:
  1. AR +2 OD+1
  2. hitsounds比较混乱, 通常情况选定一个whistle/clap来跟音乐打节拍在重音处下 另一个用来点缀 这个曲子有清楚的鼓点 应该不会很难 部分地方下的合格 但是整体看会发现很乱 大概是mapping前后时间跨度较长的原因 请注重以下整体性
也是呢...畢竟是花了很久才搞定的呢...
[Hard]:
  1. 要把这个说成一个Hard很难... 156bpm的SV(slider velocity)只有1.2 而且常用spacing snap只有x0.8 如果想要做一个Hard的话 不妨试试SV1.6 spacing snap放到x1.2? 目前的情况和Normal的难度比起 我感觉仅仅是圈小了而已. (星数什么的可以忽略) 另外欢快的曲子可以试试把slider做成有点微弧度. 直来直去的话太硬气了 orz
也是呢...畢竟是從normal改名過來的呢...砍掉重練中...
另外这个帖子标题上的ver后面的点别忘了加 :P加了.
and...
Hard2 是remap中的hard 恐怕會變成很兇的五星吧...
浪費各位時間真的很對不起!!
sorry for wasting everyone's time here.

EDIT: change in title
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CHAS
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CHAS

Colin Hou wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]:
  1. 00:17:939 (2,3) - finish
  2. 00:49:862 (1,1,1) - 这样使用spinner会突然丢失节奏感 后面也有类似情况
  3. 总体上是好diff 只是应该更多注重下pattern的使用 有一段貌似在摆方框或者拉长蛇
多謝 :)
不過我還是很希望保留spinner :P


Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
DerekMcD
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*Star*
- Rche -
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- Rche -
hard2還是留來玩好了...
原normal該算normal+嗎...
原easy還是要remap....
.
還有vincerio's insane又該怎麼辦...

EDIT:
easy remap100%
normal remap80%樽頸了.100%.
will upload on 12:30AM.
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Alace
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revived
- Rche -
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- Rche -
finally completed?
the easy is really slightly easier than before.
but the normal is just...
i just keep making it harder maybe.
-----------------------------------------------
still don't know if the easy should be called a normal
and if the normal should be hard or someting like normal+.
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modders below don't mod the insane plz.
CHAS
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CHAS
把難度名稱改成 "easy+"/"normal+"之後就沒人吐槽了www(貌似是wwwwww)
XD~繼續支持 :)
- Rche -
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Topic Starter
- Rche -
不過我在別的地方看過會變UNRANKABLE的...
所以暫時不敢改.

SPOILER
21:26 <justnobody> : the question is "is 'normal+' and 'easy+' rankaple now?"
21:26 <justnobody> : rankable
21:27 <Garven> : They are, but they're discouraged
21:27 <Garven> : It's best to try and go for a smooth difficulty curve
21:27 <Garven> : So as you progress from Easy -> Normal -> Hard -> Insane, there shouldn't be a big gap in difficulty
21:27 <Garven> : So as long as what you create fits within that curve and still fits in the general criteria for that type of difficulty
21:27 <Garven> : (e.g. easy, normal etc.) then you should be fine
所以應該是可以的...
spboxer3
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spboxer3
[General]
為什麼沒有kiai呢?這首歌聽起來是應該要有kiai的

[Easy]
00:15:823 (1) - 結尾對齊
00:43:515 (1) - finish 還有這邊該加個kiai
01:51:208 - kiai
02:12:746 (2,4) - stack

[Normal]
00:28:515 - 不要break time!
01:20:631 - 少了什麼的感覺
01:23:323 - ^
01:32:939 - ^

[CHAS' Hard]
kiai照Easy
00:21:015 (6,7) -別用finish阿
01:36:015 - 應該用note. spinner加在後面

[vincerio's Insane]
kiai照Easy
00:18:708 (1,2) - 2連不適合 (用3連?)
01:04:285 (5,7) - stack
02:12:746 (1,4) - 讓他堆疊起來吧

star~ ;)
- Rche -
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- Rche -

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]
為什麼沒有kiai呢?這首歌聽起來是應該要有kiai的

[Easy]
00:15:823 (1) - 結尾對齊
00:43:515 (1) - finish 還有這邊該加個kiai
01:51:208 - kiai
02:12:746 (2,4) - stack

[Normal]
00:28:515 - 不要break time!
01:20:631 - 少了什麼的感覺
01:23:323 - ^
01:32:939 - ^

star~ ;)
應該all fixed了.
insane在本人來以前我可不會亂碰(除了kiai或unrankable的問題)

還有...
hard結尾的那個slider現在好像不能rank了.
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
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wcx19911123
from my que

[General]
fine

[Easy]
01:22:746 (2,4) - 这里叠起来有点不好看
01:47:746 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里太难了，换成slider
02:02:746 (5,6,7,8) - ^
02:22:746 (3,4) - 这里只有一组，不算太难，不过还是建议叠起来简单点
02:28:900 (3,4,2,3) - 这两个就换成slider吧，免得让人结束的时候miss

[Normal]
00:18:708 (1) - 少一次折返，然后在00:18:900开始
00:19:477 (2,4) - 最好别这样挡住
00:22:554 (2,4) - ^
00:25:246 (5) - 试试弄个好玩的shape然后结束在00:26:400？

[CHAS' Hard]
00:12:939 (5) - change to 3 sliders is better imo , back too many times is counfusing
00:16:016 (9) - ^
00:38:132 (3,4,5,6,7) - try this : http://puu.sh/3HnX
01:25:055 (1) - too far from the spinner
01:27:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - pentagon?
02:21:401 (1) - too far

[vincerio's Insane]
00:18:900 - add circle
00:49:862 (3) - seem it is not vertical
00:57:939 (12,13) - this spacing is confusing , make it 1.5x?
01:02:169 (4) - vertical
02:21:400 (7) - repeat 1 time less , follow the sliders before it , and circle at 02:21:977

nice song
Nymph
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I love this song ;)
- Rche -
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- Rche -
\wcx/

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
fine

[Easy]
01:22:746 (2,4) - 这里叠起来有点不好看
01:47:746 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里太难了，换成slider
02:02:746 (5,6,7,8) - ^
02:22:746 (3,4) - 这里只有一组，不算太难，不过还是建议叠起来简单点
02:28:900 (3,4,2,3) - 这两个就换成slider吧，免得让人结束的时候miss
因為N個post前garven說過1/2 slider很不好所以還是算了.
我把1/2都stack了.
其他明天再搞了.
[Normal]
00:18:708 (1) - 少一次折返，然后在00:18:900开始
00:19:477 (2,4) - 最好别这样挡住
00:22:554 (2,4) - ^
00:25:246 (5) - 试试弄个好玩的shape然后结束在00:26:400？我明天再想...
其他fixed.
nice song
多謝wcx粉星&指導+妮姆芙的star.
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]
[CHAS' Hard]
kiai照Easy 能不裝kiai嗎 :?
00:21:015 (6,7) -別用finish阿 換成whistle怎麼樣lol
01:36:015 - 應該用note. spinner加在後面 完成.
thank you :)

wcx19911123 wrote:

[CHAS' Hard]
00:12:939 (5) - change to 3 sliders is better imo , back too many times is counfusing 改良了
00:16:016 (9) - ^ ^
00:38:132 (3,4,5,6,7) - try this : http://puu.sh/3HnX 改良了~部分完成
01:25:055 (1) - too far from the spinner 這樣就好了...
01:27:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - pentagon? 就現在這樣吧 :P
02:21:401 (1) - too far 這樣就好了...
抱歉 我不太會英文 :? (所以使用中文)
thank you! :D

更新~
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin (i-pop ver.) (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu



justnobody wrote:

還有...
hard結尾的那個slider現在好像不能rank了.
咦咦!????
是指2:36:785~2:37:362這裡麼 囧
- Rche -
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Topic Starter
- Rche -

CHAS wrote:

justnobody wrote:
還有...
hard結尾的那個slider現在好像不能rank了.

咦咦!????
是指2:36:785~2:37:362這裡麼 囧
好像而已
因為看見別的map因為這種slider而被攔住了
不過還是等下一位mat/bat到來時才算吧...
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin

justnobody wrote:

CHAS wrote:

justnobody wrote:
還有...
hard結尾的那個slider現在好像不能rank了.

咦咦!????
是指2:36:785~2:37:362這裡麼 囧
好像而已
因為看見別的map因為這種slider而被攔住了
不過還是等下一位mat/bat到來時才算吧...
這種還是能Rank的..如果怕的話還是改改好了
poisonchan
257 posts
Joined January 2010
poisonchan
Modding your map as your request. Hope it helps :3

[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion.

[Easy]
00:06:592 (2) - New combo ?
00:18:515 (1) - Remove this note ? (I don't feel much sense on it, once that doesn't follow the rhythm nor the vocal)
00:31:208 (1) - Start this slider at: 00:31:015, to follow the vocal
00:32:746 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:823 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:54:285 (1) - Remove new combo ?
02:00:438 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:01:592 (2) - New combo.
02:15:054 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Normal]
00:06:208 (1) - New combo ?
00:44:862 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:00:439 (7) - New combo.
01:13:900 (1) - New combo.
01:29:285 (1) - New combo ?
01:35:631 (5) - New combo.
01:36:208 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:43:515 (4) - New combo.
01:44:092 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:58:515 (5) - New combo.
01:58:900 (1) - Remove new combo

[CHAS's Hard]
00:06:208 (1) - New combo ?
00:24:668 (1,2) - Consider unstacking it, once that the combo looks kind blind and force an anti-jump.

Opinion:Too many forced jumps, consider changing it.

[vincerio's Insane]
00:18:804 (2) - This beat in the blue tick sounds really weird, move it to: 00:18:900.
00:21:785 (10) - I can't see the meaning of this note. Remove it cause it doesn't follow the rhythm, makes the flow odd and the spacing is also weird.
00:31:592 (6) - New combo.
00:31:785 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:33:900 (7) - New combo.
00:34:285 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:39:669 (1,2,3,4) - Change the spacing? (2) is hidden because of the overlap on the previous slider, looks odd. Blind pattern.
00:40:631 (5) - New combo.
00:41:785 (9) - New combo ?
01:34:285 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:34:669 (2) - New combo.
01:39:284 (6) - New combo.
01:39:477 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:41:592 (7) - New combo.

Opinion:Too many forced jumps, consider changing it. Also, you change in a weird way from the voice to the beats. It can make the map confusing. Still, it's a good map.
- Rche -
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- Rche -
pchan's mod:
i can't remember which new combo i have done but should be about 90%...

@vincerio: that's so late...
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CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

poisonchan wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
00:06:208 (1) - New combo ?
00:24:668 (1,2) - Consider unstacking it, once that the combo looks kind blind and force an anti-jump.

Opinion:Too many forced jumps, consider changing it.
Thank you. :)


就現在這樣就好了
vincerio
687 posts
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vincerio

Colin Hou wrote:

[vincerio's Insane]:
  • 00:31:208 (5) - normal-hitnormal here
  1. 01:38:900 (5) - ^
  2. 00:40:246 (4) - finish
  3. 00:41:785 (9) - ^
  4. 01:08:227 ~ 01:09:669 (T) - spinner here, mute the end
  5. 01:25:246 (1,1,1,1) - finish
  6. 01:47:938 (4) - ^
  7. 01:49:477 (5) - ^
  8. 01:56:977 (2,3) - spacing
  9. hitsounds are nicely done, use more soft sliders instead of liner ones could fit the song much better imo, current spacing is fun to play btw
[
All fixed!

Thank you so much Colin Hou~ :)

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin (i-pop ver.) (justnobody) [vincerio's Insane].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
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Topic Starter
- Rche -
now late update.
it's difficult to get mod now.
...words.
it's difficult to post now.
pieguyn
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pieguyn
Easy:

00:13:131 (1) - Remove NC?
00:21:977 (1) - (nazi) this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130485
00:52:746 (4) - New combo?
02:00:438 (5) - New combo, then put one on 02:01:592 (1) and remove NC from 02:02:746 (4)?
02:12:362 (1) - Add clap
02:12:746 (2,3,4,1) - Add claps on the end
02:18:131 (2,3,4) - (nazi) Move 1 level 3 grid down?

Normal:

00:43:515 ~ 01:10:823 - Add Kiai?
01:51:208 ~ 02:03:515 - ^

00:50:823 (1,2,3) - Not evenly spaced
00:52:746 (5) - New combo?
00:53:515 (1) - Remove NC?
00:54:285 (5) - New combo?
01:04:669 (1,2,3) - Not evenly spaced
01:06:977 (7) - New combo?
01:23:515 (5) - New combo?
01:23:708 (6) - This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130487
02:23:900 (7) - New combo?

CHAS' Hard:

00:43:515 ~ 01:10:823 - Add Kiai?
01:51:208 ~ 02:03:515 - ^

00:12:939 (5) - I'm not sure I like this slider, I think you could do something more interesting here
00:16:016 (9) - ^
00:49:862 (1,1,1) - I think you could do something more interesting instead of these spinners~ (This one plays all right though, so if you want you can keep it)
01:02:170 (1,1) - ^
01:20:631 (2) - Same as 00:12:939 (5)
01:29:285 (7) - This note seems confusing, I thought it was 1/2 earlier. Perhaps move it 1/2 earlier and add a note at 01:29:477? Alternatively, you could unstack it~
01:32:939 (5) - Same as 00:12:939 (5)
01:29:285 (7) - Unstack it?
01:57:555 (4) - This slider plays all right, but I think you could make this part more interesting instead of putting just a slider
01:59:092 (4) - ^
02:00:631 (4) - ^

vincerio's Insane:

00:43:515 ~ 01:10:823 - Add Kiai?
01:51:208 ~ 02:03:515 - ^

00:25:054 (1) - This slider doesn't really fit the music and I think you could make this part a bit more interesting, instead of putting this slider
00:42:746 (4) - (nazi) move 1 level 4 grid right?
00:57:362 (10) - New combo
01:27:939 (7) - New combo? (Also, I'm not really sure this jump fits, but maybe it's just me :? )
01:41:977 (8) - New combo? (Then, remove it from (1))
02:05:054 (10) - New combo
02:14:669 (3) - Move 1 level 4 grid down
02:15:054 (6) - Move 1 level 4 grid left
02:21:208 (6) - New combo? (Then remove it from 02:22:169 (1)~)
02:35:246 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Perhaps space this evenly? It plays fine either way so :?

Nice map~ :) (ノﾟωﾟ)ノ☆
- Rche -
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- Rche -
fast mod fast mod!
and 2kds!!

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

00:13:131 (1) - Remove NC?
00:21:977 (1) - (nazi) this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130485
00:52:746 (4) - New combo?
02:00:438 (5) - New combo, then put one on 02:01:592 (1) and remove NC from 02:02:746 (4)? can't get this...but i re-placed the new combo here
02:12:362 (1) - Add clap
02:12:746 (2,3,4,1) - Add claps on the end
02:18:131 (2,3,4) - (nazi) Move 1 level 3 grid down?

Normal:

00:43:515 ~ 01:10:823 - Add Kiai?
01:51:208 ~ 02:03:515 - ^

00:50:823 (1,2,3) - Not evenly spaced
00:52:746 (5) - New combo?
00:53:515 (1) - Remove NC?
00:54:285 (5) - New combo?
01:04:669 (1,2,3) - Not evenly spaced
01:06:977 (7) - New combo?
01:23:515 (5) - New combo?
01:23:708 (6) - This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130487
02:23:900 (7) - New combo?

Nice map~ :) (ノﾟωﾟ)ノ☆
should be all fixed except that one in easy.
thank you so much!
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