KuraiPettan wrote:

Ohai

[Easy]
00:26:968 (3,5) - Add whistles
00:28:506 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
00:54:275 (1) - Add finish
00:55:814 (1) - Begin this slider 1/2 earlier and add a finish at the beginning
01:08:122 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
01:36:198 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
01:55:814 (3) - Add finish
02:03:506 (5) - Move 1/2 earlier this one looks weird for me...
others are fixed.

[Normal]
01:23:698 (5) - Reduce it by 1/1
01:29:275 (1) - Finish
all fixed.

Pretty nice map, I wish see it ranked soon
Star~

KuraiPettan wrote:

[CHAS' Hard]
01:39:468 (7) - New combo
01:48:891 (7,8) - Better if you don't stack these notes
02:30:045 (8) - New combo
02:36:775 (5) - Add new combo

Vass_Bass wrote:

CHAS' Hard
good

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General
Remove letterbox (Storyboarding), it's already on your BG what? SB?

Easy
Circle size 1 (large)
01:34:660 (1) - add finish?
02:12:352 (5) - new combo
02:28:891 (3,4) - spacing how can i missed out this...
all fixed.
Normal
00:16:006 (6) - add whistle in the end point of the slider
00:17:352 (7) - remove whistle, add finish
00:18:698 (1) - remove finish, add whistle
01:37:160 (4) - add finish
all fixed.
CHAS' Hard
good

Star

kioukiou wrote:

Timing : +10 ms to all offset,don't forget resnap all notes and green lines.

[Easy]

02:02:352 (4) - Unrankable slider,fix it.
i forgot i can not use short sliders...now fixed.

[Normal]

Looks good.


[CHAS' Hard]

Fine.


Star for now.

justnobody wrote:

怎麼我總是在用英文www

yongtw123 wrote:

@@ Late recheck~

Overall:
Hitsound is overall a bit sparse and thus sounds at times random. Use hitsounds more evenly across the map?
Hitsounds are also a bit quiet. Consider volume up +1 to +2. Seemed that i messed up this option before. i don't know if i have fixed.
BG resize to 800*600 would be best.i don't want to change BG again. complete submit HURTS.

[CHAS' Hard]

Pretty good, but the consecutive spinners are still there... Anyways. (shrug)

[Normal]
00:09:670 (1) - align with (6) fixed.
00:16:016 (6) - ends at a weird beat... Consider ending on white tick?fixed, but still look strange...
01:36:016 (x) - I expected one beat here in fact i didn't expect anything here but added a note.
02:06:593 (1) - doesn't look good. Sometimes using too many points to shape a curve isn't that well.as i remember, that was a catmull slider... now split into some shorter sliders.
02:15:824 (2) - better start at 02:15:824. And actually I'd recommend not using a slider to cover up the rhythm here. For example 5 1/8 notes. can't understand, but tried to fix.
02:31:208 (1) - put a note here and delay the spinner?fixed.

[Easy]
00:40:632 (5) - I recommend either 1) add a note at 00:40:824, or 2) move (5) to 00:40:824. fixed(2)
01:29:670 (1) - align with (5)fixed.
01:38:901 (1,2,3) - down 1 grid?fixed.
01:48:324 (1,2,3,4) - excellent change of hitsound set. You should try this also on [Normal].tried on normal.
01:55:824 (3) - hitsound finish at end of slider?fixed.
02:15:055 (1) - align with (4)?fixed.
02:31:208 (1) - put a note here and delay the spinner?fixed.

Very good improvements!

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[Easy] now looks better than [Normal] lol.
But I like the improvements.
Here's a star of encouragement~
Good luck!

Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

Normal

00:55:632 - 加个圆 加了.


Easy

00:40:247 (4,5) - spacing
00:44:862 - 加个音
00:49:093 (1) - 后移1/2到白线上
00:57:170 - 加个音
02:03:324 - 加个音或者把后面的移到这个位置
all fixed.

star

Rukarioman wrote:

Sorry for the really late mod. Been very busy :3
don't mind.
General:
- Consider using some Kiai time on the chorus of the song on all the diffs. considered, but i would say no to this.

Easy:
00:49:285 (1) - This beat fits better one 1/2 tick later IMO. Please don't forget to respace that part then.seems that i changed something there before.
00:56:401 - Add a note here?no.
02:18:516 (3,4) - Delete (4) and make (3) have one more repeat.fixed.
02:25:055 (2) - Remove the clap on the end.fixed.

Normal:
00:12:939 - Add a note?no. but thanks for letting me know. change something here.
00:25:247 - ^noo.
00:48:324 - ^nooo.
01:00:632 - ^noooo.
01:20:632 - ^nooooo.
01:37:362 - 01:38:708 - Please remove this break, it's too short. you can do that by putting a beat in the break and then removing it.mapped this break.
i don't want loooong streams in this difficulty.

Really good for a first map.

Sandpig wrote:

CHAS's Hard

00:24:670 (9) - new combo加到这个上面把下一个上的去掉
01:16:401 (7) - remove clap
01:25:247 (2) - 这个红线上的clap太突出了
02:24:285 - 没有连续感，这里我感觉还应该加点NOTE过渡，因为前边用了一个slider，两次点击间隔快到一个小节了(或者把前边的slider换成别的什么)

Rukarioman wrote:

CHAS' Hard:
There are no breaks in this diff. Please make a break somewhere in this diff. Playing so long without a break is very tiring. no.
00:29:670 (9) - Remove this slider and add a note on 00:29:862 - fixed
01:25:439 (3) - Remove this note? fixed

justnobody wrote:

突然覺得這圖很送分...

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
No breaks? At least have one in there somewhere, or go with justnobody's placement. I think it ok..
00:33:324 (7,8) - These feel better if they were stacked to go with how you mapped the rest of this part of the song.
00:52:555 (1,1) - Hrm, maybe have the note after the spinner be closer to the center. That or make it a bit longer after the spinner.
01:25:055 (1) - ^
01:45:055 (4) - New combo. Also so many of these jumps in a row is a bit harsh for this hard diff. fixed

其實中間的那段我看不懂 怎辦 就現在這樣吧...
如果不是規定..我這張beatmap不想添加Insert Break Time 如果規定必須要Insert Break Time我再進行修改

kioukiou wrote:

送分美

kioukiou wrote:

Bubbled.

Alace wrote:

wait wait
please remove offset to 439 and resnap all notes (in order to line up the long white tick with music)

<CHAS' Hard>
claps in this diff sound abit random,
00:37:362 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this sounds good
01:44:670 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this sounds bad
did you find the difference, most of musics have their own claps, if you feel like to add claps
the easy way is following the BGM claps, try to listen to the music carefully, you can hear the BGM claps

Aleks719 wrote:

Hi there !

CHAS's Hard
It can seems nicely ^^

SPOILER

01:01:978 (4) - add finish
01:30:247 (3) - remove clap from the finish
01:30:824 (4) - add clap
01:32:170 (1) - remove clap, add whistle
01:32:362 (2) - add clap

artpiggo wrote:

Hard
00 09 092 maybe add clap note no.
00 46 208 add finish fixed
00 58 323 add clap fixed
01 29 092 maybe add clap note no.
01 49 092 maybe add finish too no. i think clap is good
01 52 201 maybe add whistle too 1:52:201??
01 53 708 add clap no.

Aleks719 wrote:

Hi there !

Normal
00:14:477 (1) - remove clap
00:14:669 (2) - add clap at start of slider
00:16:015 (6) - add whistle at the start. Remove whistle from the end
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - make it 1/2 early , imho. this looks crazy for me...
others all fixed.
Easy
00:40:246 (4) - too hard for easy. make 1/2 later.
00:55:054 (3,4) - try to make slider at place of this notes.
01:16:977 (4) - add finish, remove whistle
01:23:900 (4) - remove clap from the finish
02:02:746 (5) - remove clap, add whistle
02:02:938 (6) - remove clap
02:31:015 (4) - remove note
02:31:208 (5) - remove note
02:31:400 (1) - start it on to 02:31:015 and finish at the 02:33:131
all fixed.
Uh, Star. Keep working :3

artpiggo wrote:

Normal

00 09 092 maybe add note
01 16 785 ^
01 18 323 ^
01 18 515 maybe add clap
01 21 208 ^
01 31 785 add finish, i think
01 33 515 maybe add clap
02 02 939 add finish, i think
02 03 323 add note, i think
02 15 246 maybe add clap
02 16 592 ^
02 33 900 add finish, i think
all fixed.
star then !

vincerio wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
00:38:900(1) - remove new combo here fixed
00:40:054(8) - new combo here fixed
00:40:631(1) - remove new combo fixed
01:09:669 - extend to 01:10:439? no.
01:26:400(4) - new combo no.
01:45:054(1) - remove new combo no.
01:45:439(1) - new combo ^
01:46:592 - remove new combo ^
01:47:554 - new combo ^
01:58:515 - now combo fixed
02:01:785 - new combofixed
02:15:246(5) - a bit offscreen ;w; it would be nice if you replace this one... ok~

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[General]

Check if ALL spinners have the "New Combo" marked. fixed......

[CHAS' Hard]

It's fine... for an Insane. Change the name of the diff is easier to change several things like AR, OD and some jumps. this diff played easy lol

vincerio wrote:

้hi hi :3

[General]
bad news.... I don't agree the way you set the same slider velocity in [Easy] and [Normal] both 1.0 =3= tried 1.2.
^ this issue may trouble you in nearly future lol
TAG : ending single

[Easy]
00:25:439(2) - make this slider straight like (3) fixed
00:41:015 - make more rest space for beginner... start it as 00:41:400 end at 00:42:746 then the note afterwards is quite difficult.
00:49:669(2) - move the end of this slider down 1 grid lv3 fixed
00:52:746(4) - ^ same fixed?

[Normal]
00:40:631(1,2) - a duplet like this is really fit with normal hitsound(remove whistle and reduce volume a bit)
00:41:208 - extend slider to 00:43:131 sounds nice no.
01:43:515(1) - remove new combo
01:44:092(5) - new combo
01:45:054 - new combo
01:48:900 - extend to 01:50:823 sounds nice no.
others are fixed.
I really love this song x3~
*shoot kudo star*

ask me if you want my insane diff :3

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[General]

Check if ALL spinners have the "New Combo" marked.

[Easy]

AR -1

01:49:477 (5,1) - A jump ? It's an Easy one, but not for an Easy difficult. If was a Normal, could stay. Think of a change.
all fixed.
[Normal]

AR -1
OD -1

00:14:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern for a normal it's a little too much. Change it? For one like these 00:26:785 (1,2,3,4).
01:01:400 (1) - 2 beats instead?
01:22:169 (1) - ^
01:34:477 (1) - ^
02:01:977 (4) - A single beat instead?
02:02:362 (5) - ^
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5) and 02:05:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - A little much for a normal. ehh...
02:15:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
others all fixed.
That's it.

CHAS wrote:

幫我在難度名稱改成 CHAS's Hard
現在應該無誤吧...?
英文文法博大精深...
話說怎麼給我kd..
誤中了.

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[General]

CHAS's hard rename CHAS' Hard .

[CHAS's Hard]

00:31:015 (4) - a good time to slow down - to here 00:40:055 (1) i think this ok.

here is not appropriate, such tricks with spinner >_> i think this ok.

00:49:862 (1,1,1) - (×̯×)

02:17:555 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - (×̯×)

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[General]

CHAS's hard rename CHAS' Hard got it.

00:43:515 - start kiai time and finish 01:07:939

01:51:208 - start kiai time and finish 02:03:323

02:25:054 - start kiai time and finish 02:33:131

all diffs

[Easy]

00:41:400 (1) - spinner start here 00:41:208 (1)

02:31:015 (1) - finish here 02:32:939

02:26:208 (3) - Move the slider here 02:26:592 (3) and 02:26:208 (3) - add circle
all fixed.
[Normal]

01:45:054 (1,2,3,4) - why not make them equal and symmetrical? It looks like



no, but copied from something in 00m3Xs

I liked it

S T A R ~

CHAS wrote:

justnobody你打算加kiai time麼?也有人討厭kiai time的說 我先不加kiai time 看看你意向

話說為什麼我的是CHAS' Hard...
究竟何時加s 何時不加s chas表示完全不明白(打滾)
麻煩了你了 justnobody..幫我再改回CHAS' Hard.......