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OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin (i-pop ver.)

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- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年7月22日 at 0:47:05

Artist: OToGi 8
Title: Akazukin-chan Goyoujin (i-pop ver.)
Source: Ookami-san to Shichinin no Nakama-tachi
Tags: CHAS vincerio lazy
BPM: 156
Filesize: 2966kb
Play Time: 02:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. CHAS' Hard (4.82 stars, 385 notes)
  2. Easy (2.57 stars, 165 notes)
  3. Normal (4.34 stars, 302 notes)
  4. vincerio's Insane (4.99 stars, 508 notes)
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin (i-pop ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Sorry for my poor English.
This is my very first beatmap.

I found that nobody mapped it so I tried it once.
It is the full ver. of the ending of the 12th episode of anime "Ookami-san to Shichinin no Nakama-tachi".
It was an old song performed by a group called "LAZY".

Normal - Finished
Hard - Remapping
CHAS's Hard - Finished
vincerio's insane - Finished

I'm a newbie mapper only.
I give kds generously so please mod it generously.
and...
if you download it before 2011/04/07 please re-download it because of change in difficulty name.
Last edited by - Rche - , edited 28 times in total.
digiaria
257 posts
Joined October 2008
digiaria
offset不准确

offset:3,135
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS
嗨!~ 我是路過的lol

easy & normal 的insert break time 好像太短了..? 如果想避免note重疊可以增加Distance spacing/Slider Velocity 當然要重新整理已放置的note ;)

distance spacing的位置(需要按著鍵盤上Ait鍵才會出現)
SPOILER

厄....Artist: OToGi 8->OToGi8 (?)

[easy]
00:40:657 (1) distance
00:41:234 (1) ^
00:48:734 (7) 向左移一格(?)
00:49:695 (1) distance
00:55:849 (1) ^
01:00:465 (7,8) ^
01:03:157 (2,3) ^(?)

[Normal]
00:12:195 (1) distance
00:24:503 (1) ^
00:41:234 (1) ^
00:55:080 (5) ^
00:58:926 (1) ^

嗯 這是你第一張beatmap 加油哦~~~~
如果你不介意 我能否幫你添加一個Hard難度?
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

digiaria wrote:

offset不准确

offset:3,135
Offset 465 --> 3135 changed
thanks for help

CHAS wrote:

厄....Artist: OToGi 8->OToGi8 (?) 這個無誤

[easy]
00:40:657 (1) distance
00:41:234 (1) ^
00:48:734 (7) 向左移一格(?)
00:49:695 (1) distance
00:55:849 (1) ^
01:00:465 (7,8) ^
01:03:157 (2,3) ^(?)

[Normal]
00:12:195 (1) distance
00:24:503 (1) ^
00:41:234 (1) ^
00:55:080 (5) ^
00:58:926 (1) ^

^^all fixed(大概吧...)

嗯 這是你第一張beatmap 加油哦~~~~
如果你不介意 我能否幫你添加一個Hard難度? 這個就勞煩前輩了
thanks a lot!
要繼續上路了.
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS
[Hard]完成
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin[i-pop ver] (justnobody) [CHAS's H].osu
我也是製圖新手
可能很糟糕 :oops:
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
全部完成!
也不錯啦...
只是殺人spinner有點可怕...
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
[General]
1) 把檔案裏的.osb file 刪除，然後重新full submission
2) 把"CHAS"加到3個難度的tag裏
3) 把preview time 改作00:43:519 會否較好?

[Easy]
00:11:596 (2,1) - spacing不一樣
00:22:365 (1) - 對稱會較好看?
00:58:904 (4) - new combo~?

[Normal]
00:14:288 (6) - del這個note，然後把00:12:942 (5) 結束在這裏?
00:17:365 (5) 取消clap
00:18:904 (1) - 把這slider在00:18:711 開始，為slider加一個reverse，並在開始的位置加一個clap?
00:25:250 (5,6) -在slider尾和(6)加clap
00:40:635 (1,1) - 把clap改作whistle
00:41:788 (1) - 加whistle
00:57:375 (5) - 對稱較好看?
01:02:760 (3,4,5) - ^
02:03:529 至02:06:221 - 這一段開始是一個很突兀的轉接，因為之前你在跟歌詞，但現在突然跟節奏，玩家難以觸摸。 或變回跟歌詞，但以hitsound 強調節奏?
( 即跟據歌詞下note，但在現有slider的位置上加hitsound，建議(1)的頭尾和(2)的頭用whistle, 2的尾用clap)
02:08:711 (2,1) - 在(2)的尾和(1)加finish (若覺得太吵，則把(2)尾的finish轉作whistle)
02:14:673 (5) - 在02:15:827 終止?
02:25:250 (4,1) - 在(4)尾和(1) 加whistle?
02:31:211 (1) - 在02:33:135終止?

不知怎的，加了hitsound後總覺得offset有點偏離 <_<

[CHAS's H]
1) 把H改做Hard 囧?
2) timing point 請置於note前面，不要與note重疊，避免誤打而失去效用。
00:09:865 (3) - 多餘的clap?
00:11:404 (7) - ^
00:12:558 (3) - ^
00:12:173 (1) - 加clap
00:14:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 把這段所有clap變finish?
00:18:904 (1) - new combo
00:19:096 (2,2) - 多餘的clap
00:20:058 (2) - 加clap
00:20:442 (4) - 取消clap
00:22:173 (2,3) - ^
00:28:135 (5,6,7,8,9) - 將clap全變whistle?
感覺上，用得太多clap了(再加上default soft-clap聽來有點古怪，是offset的問題? 還是hitsound不合歌?)，試試多採用whistle，finish等其他hitsound。
00:30:058 (1) - 加finish
00:30:442 (2,3) - whistle
00:31:981 - 這一段較靜，用whistle來代替clap打拍子會否較好?
00:56:211 (8,9) - 取消clap
00:56:788 (1) - 在頭加clap
01:57:558 (4) - ^ ?
01:58:519 (5,6) - 加whistle
01:59:096 加clap
02:00:058 (1,2) - 將hitsound變whistle
02:00:634 (4) - 頭加clap?
02:03:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這一段較靜，用whislte 和finish的配搭較clap 好?
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

Vikon wrote:

[CHAS's H]
1) 把H改做Hard 囧? wwwwww... 好吧wwwwww
2) timing point 請置於note前面，不要與note重疊，避免誤打而失去效用。 咦咦...原來我放了在note上www
音效大部份上已修改 :) thanks vikon!~


justnobody請接收 :D (不用給kd了)
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin[i-pop ver] (justnobody) [CHAS's Hard].osu


啊 貌似幫我修改好了
不過我沒什麼所謂 :D
用不用由你決定啦 :)
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
簽收了.
這下才是完全修好呢.
offset 465 --> 3135 --> 3110
該準了吧...
offset很難搞的說...
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
有没用到的.osb文件，删掉重新full submit。
BG尺寸应为4比3，即800*600或1024*768
offset:+12

[Easy]
slider tick rate:1。因为速度慢，所以tick的密度比应有的高了。
AR+1/+2, OD+1.
00:36:956 (3,1) - spacing.
00:40:033 (6) - new combo，和后面维持统一（其实最好排列也统一）]
01:00:417 (5,6) - 和前面的区别不够明显，于是建议换slider.
01:02:340 (1) - remove new combo

[Normal]
AR+1
00:40:610 (1,1) - 这种出现节奏变化的地方不要都叠，建议挪出去，还有，new combo请有规律的放，别这样。
00:48:686 (1,2) - spacing.
00:55:033 (5,1) - ^
00:56:379 - 加拍。
01:48:302 (1,2) - 挪出去。。
01:56:379 (2,1) - spacing.
02:14:263 (4,5) - ^

[CHAS's Hard]
AR+1, OD+2.
00:49:840 (1,1) - 这里开始的圆圈带circle。。。如果你不在意低rating和负面评价的话无妨。。。否则建议你改
01:47:917 (1,1,2) - 仍然是。。。把后面的两个circle去掉，spinner延长到2的位置怎么样？以及之后的一个spinner换finish.
02:01:763 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这种换节奏的地方建议不要叠，可以的话换种排列。
除了spinner后面跟note太快以外没什么问题，是个好难度。
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS
Thanks NatsumeRin :)





spinner混circle我本身還滿喜歡的說 :oops: (望向Emerald Sword)






Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin[i-pop ver] (justnobody) [CHAS's Hard].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
offset 465-->3135 -->3110 --> 3122...
真的很難搞的說...
ar/od改了.
.osb應該處理掉了.
其他的都算是處理了.
...
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
xBubu
CHAS 的很好..

Easy和Normal的排版有點太擠

還有文件裏的.osb檔案請刪除後重新Full上傳
以後上傳時也請注意 除非你有搞sb


基本沒大問題~音樂很棒 STAR
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
Easy
SPOILER
00:31:968 New Combo
00:32:737 Remove new combo
00:33:506 New Combo
00:34:275 Remove new combo
00:35:045 New Combo
00:35:814 Remove new combo
00:36:583 New Combo
00:46:968 ^^
It's too short and dull, make it longer and spice it up :D

Normal
SPOILER
00:12:929 Use Linear Slider
00:25:237 ^^
Nice difficulty.

CHAS's Hard
SPOILER
00:49:852 through 00:54:275
I know these are perfectly allowed, but I hate the crap out of them.
01:02:160 through 01:05:045
^^
01:20:429 New combo
01:21:968 Remove new combo
01:20:622 Use Linear Slider
02:15:622 ^^
02:21:391 ^^
02:23:314 ^^
02:25:237 ^^
02:26:775 ^^
02:36:968 ^^
Nice Difficulty.

Nice map, star.
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

Charles445 wrote:

CHAS's Hard
SPOILER
00:49:852 through 00:54:275
I know these are perfectly allowed, but I hate the crap out of them.
01:02:160 through 01:05:045
^^
01:20:429 New combo
01:21:968 Remove new combo
01:20:622 Use Linear Slider
02:15:622 ^^
02:21:391 ^^
02:23:314 ^^
02:25:237 ^^
02:26:775 ^^
02:36:968 ^^
Nice Difficulty.

Nice map, star.
Thank you


Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin[i-pop ver] (justnobody) [CHAS's Hard].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

Charles445 wrote:

Easy ALL FIXED.
SPOILER
00:31:968 New Combo
00:32:737 Remove new combo
00:33:506 New Combo
00:34:275 Remove new combo
00:35:045 New Combo
00:35:814 Remove new combo
00:36:583 New Combo
00:46:968 ^^
It's too short and dull, make it longer and spice it up :D
I adimit that it is dull and I will try to spice it up. But I won't make it longer...

Normal ALL FIXED.
SPOILER
00:12:929 Use Linear Slider
00:25:237 ^^
Nice difficulty.

Nice map, star.
Thanks for star. And thanks for modding.
Cuuuuri
315 posts
Joined April 2009
Cuuuuri
nice mapp!★
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
Thanks for stars, Qrool.
----------------------------
我把EASY很多的地方都重作了一遍了.
應該不會dull了...

I re-mapped most of the easy difficulty.
now it shouldn't be dull...
Last edited by - Rche - , edited 1 time in total.
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69
Heya there o/

I'm really sorry for delay orz...

[General]

Damn ! You need to reencode your mp3 (320 kbit/s)
Try asking someone about that :/
Look this topic : viewtopic.php?f=60&t=36657&start=0

[Easy]

Circles are a bit too close between them IMO
Exemple : 00:55:814 (1,2,3,4), a bit hard to read

00:09:660 (4) - New combo
00:18:891 (1) - This note appear too fast after the spinner for an Easy !
00:40:045 (1,1,1) - I don't understand these new combo... :/
00:43:506 (1) - ^

[Normal]

00:37:352 (1,2,3,4) - Try to do a nice pattern like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31832
00:46:583 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not really fan about jumps on a Normal... :/
01:14:275 (1) - Remove new combo
01:45:045 (2,3,4,5) - Same thing about jumps here

[CHAS's Hard]

Fine, but you should add some break ! >.<

~Star
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

Fight69 wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]

Fine, but you should add some break ! >.<
Thank you :)
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