KuraiPettan wrote:

Ohai

[Easy]
00:26:968 (3,5) - Add whistles
00:28:506 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
00:54:275 (1) - Add finish
00:55:814 (1) - Begin this slider 1/2 earlier and add a finish at the beginning
01:08:122 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
01:36:198 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
01:55:814 (3) - Add finish
02:03:506 (5) - Move 1/2 earlier this one looks weird for me...
others are fixed.

[Normal]
01:23:698 (5) - Reduce it by 1/1
01:29:275 (1) - Finish
all fixed.

Pretty nice map, I wish see it ranked soon
Star~

KuraiPettan wrote:

[CHAS' Hard]
01:39:468 (7) - New combo
01:48:891 (7,8) - Better if you don't stack these notes
02:30:045 (8) - New combo
02:36:775 (5) - Add new combo

Vass_Bass wrote:

CHAS' Hard
good

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General
Remove letterbox (Storyboarding), it's already on your BG what? SB?

Easy
Circle size 1 (large)
01:34:660 (1) - add finish?
02:12:352 (5) - new combo
02:28:891 (3,4) - spacing how can i missed out this...
all fixed.
Normal
00:16:006 (6) - add whistle in the end point of the slider
00:17:352 (7) - remove whistle, add finish
00:18:698 (1) - remove finish, add whistle
01:37:160 (4) - add finish
all fixed.
CHAS' Hard
good

Star

kioukiou wrote:

Timing : +10 ms to all offset,don't forget resnap all notes and green lines.

[Easy]

02:02:352 (4) - Unrankable slider,fix it.
i forgot i can not use short sliders...now fixed.

[Normal]

Looks good.


[CHAS' Hard]

Fine.


Star for now.

justnobody wrote:

怎麼我總是在用英文www

yongtw123 wrote:

@@ Late recheck~

Overall:
Hitsound is overall a bit sparse and thus sounds at times random. Use hitsounds more evenly across the map?
Hitsounds are also a bit quiet. Consider volume up +1 to +2. Seemed that i messed up this option before. i don't know if i have fixed.
BG resize to 800*600 would be best.i don't want to change BG again. complete submit HURTS.

[CHAS' Hard]

Pretty good, but the consecutive spinners are still there... Anyways. (shrug)

[Normal]
00:09:670 (1) - align with (6) fixed.
00:16:016 (6) - ends at a weird beat... Consider ending on white tick?fixed, but still look strange...
01:36:016 (x) - I expected one beat here in fact i didn't expect anything here but added a note.
02:06:593 (1) - doesn't look good. Sometimes using too many points to shape a curve isn't that well.as i remember, that was a catmull slider... now split into some shorter sliders.
02:15:824 (2) - better start at 02:15:824. And actually I'd recommend not using a slider to cover up the rhythm here. For example 5 1/8 notes. can't understand, but tried to fix.
02:31:208 (1) - put a note here and delay the spinner?fixed.

[Easy]
00:40:632 (5) - I recommend either 1) add a note at 00:40:824, or 2) move (5) to 00:40:824. fixed(2)
01:29:670 (1) - align with (5)fixed.
01:38:901 (1,2,3) - down 1 grid?fixed.
01:48:324 (1,2,3,4) - excellent change of hitsound set. You should try this also on [Normal].tried on normal.
01:55:824 (3) - hitsound finish at end of slider?fixed.
02:15:055 (1) - align with (4)?fixed.
02:31:208 (1) - put a note here and delay the spinner?fixed.

Very good improvements!

=====

[Easy] now looks better than [Normal] lol.
But I like the improvements.
Here's a star of encouragement~
Good luck!

Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

Normal

00:55:632 - 加个圆 加了.


Easy

00:40:247 (4,5) - spacing
00:44:862 - 加个音
00:49:093 (1) - 后移1/2到白线上
00:57:170 - 加个音
02:03:324 - 加个音或者把后面的移到这个位置
all fixed.

star

Rukarioman wrote:

Sorry for the really late mod. Been very busy :3
don't mind.
General:
- Consider using some Kiai time on the chorus of the song on all the diffs. considered, but i would say no to this.

Easy:
00:49:285 (1) - This beat fits better one 1/2 tick later IMO. Please don't forget to respace that part then.seems that i changed something there before.
00:56:401 - Add a note here?no.
02:18:516 (3,4) - Delete (4) and make (3) have one more repeat.fixed.
02:25:055 (2) - Remove the clap on the end.fixed.

Normal:
00:12:939 - Add a note?no. but thanks for letting me know. change something here.
00:25:247 - ^noo.
00:48:324 - ^nooo.
01:00:632 - ^noooo.
01:20:632 - ^nooooo.
01:37:362 - 01:38:708 - Please remove this break, it's too short. you can do that by putting a beat in the break and then removing it.mapped this break.
i don't want loooong streams in this difficulty.

Really good for a first map.

Sandpig wrote:

CHAS's Hard

00:24:670 (9) - new combo加到这个上面把下一个上的去掉
01:16:401 (7) - remove clap
01:25:247 (2) - 这个红线上的clap太突出了
02:24:285 - 没有连续感，这里我感觉还应该加点NOTE过渡，因为前边用了一个slider，两次点击间隔快到一个小节了(或者把前边的slider换成别的什么)

Rukarioman wrote:

CHAS' Hard:
There are no breaks in this diff. Please make a break somewhere in this diff. Playing so long without a break is very tiring. no.
00:29:670 (9) - Remove this slider and add a note on 00:29:862 - fixed
01:25:439 (3) - Remove this note? fixed

justnobody wrote:

突然覺得這圖很送分...

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
No breaks? At least have one in there somewhere, or go with justnobody's placement. I think it ok..
00:33:324 (7,8) - These feel better if they were stacked to go with how you mapped the rest of this part of the song.
00:52:555 (1,1) - Hrm, maybe have the note after the spinner be closer to the center. That or make it a bit longer after the spinner.
01:25:055 (1) - ^
01:45:055 (4) - New combo. Also so many of these jumps in a row is a bit harsh for this hard diff. fixed

其實中間的那段我看不懂 怎辦 就現在這樣吧...
如果不是規定..我這張beatmap不想添加Insert Break Time 如果規定必須要Insert Break Time我再進行修改

kioukiou wrote:

送分美

kioukiou wrote:

Bubbled.

Alace wrote:

wait wait
please remove offset to 439 and resnap all notes (in order to line up the long white tick with music)

<CHAS' Hard>
claps in this diff sound abit random,
00:37:362 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this sounds good
01:44:670 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this sounds bad
did you find the difference, most of musics have their own claps, if you feel like to add claps
the easy way is following the BGM claps, try to listen to the music carefully, you can hear the BGM claps

Aleks719 wrote:

Hi there !

CHAS's Hard
It can seems nicely ^^

SPOILER

01:01:978 (4) - add finish
01:30:247 (3) - remove clap from the finish
01:30:824 (4) - add clap
01:32:170 (1) - remove clap, add whistle
01:32:362 (2) - add clap

artpiggo wrote:

Hard
00 09 092 maybe add clap note no.
00 46 208 add finish fixed
00 58 323 add clap fixed
01 29 092 maybe add clap note no.
01 49 092 maybe add finish too no. i think clap is good
01 52 201 maybe add whistle too 1:52:201??
01 53 708 add clap no.

Aleks719 wrote:

Hi there !

Normal
00:14:477 (1) - remove clap
00:14:669 (2) - add clap at start of slider
00:16:015 (6) - add whistle at the start. Remove whistle from the end
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - make it 1/2 early , imho. this looks crazy for me...
others all fixed.
Easy
00:40:246 (4) - too hard for easy. make 1/2 later.
00:55:054 (3,4) - try to make slider at place of this notes.
01:16:977 (4) - add finish, remove whistle
01:23:900 (4) - remove clap from the finish
02:02:746 (5) - remove clap, add whistle
02:02:938 (6) - remove clap
02:31:015 (4) - remove note
02:31:208 (5) - remove note
02:31:400 (1) - start it on to 02:31:015 and finish at the 02:33:131
all fixed.
Uh, Star. Keep working :3

artpiggo wrote:

Normal

00 09 092 maybe add note
01 16 785 ^
01 18 323 ^
01 18 515 maybe add clap
01 21 208 ^
01 31 785 add finish, i think
01 33 515 maybe add clap
02 02 939 add finish, i think
02 03 323 add note, i think
02 15 246 maybe add clap
02 16 592 ^
02 33 900 add finish, i think
all fixed.
star then !

vincerio wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
00:38:900(1) - remove new combo here fixed
00:40:054(8) - new combo here fixed
00:40:631(1) - remove new combo fixed
01:09:669 - extend to 01:10:439? no.
01:26:400(4) - new combo no.
01:45:054(1) - remove new combo no.
01:45:439(1) - new combo ^
01:46:592 - remove new combo ^
01:47:554 - new combo ^
01:58:515 - now combo fixed
02:01:785 - new combofixed
02:15:246(5) - a bit offscreen ;w; it would be nice if you replace this one... ok~

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[General]

Check if ALL spinners have the "New Combo" marked. fixed......

[CHAS' Hard]

It's fine... for an Insane. Change the name of the diff is easier to change several things like AR, OD and some jumps. this diff played easy lol

vincerio wrote:

้hi hi :3

[General]
bad news.... I don't agree the way you set the same slider velocity in [Easy] and [Normal] both 1.0 =3= tried 1.2.
^ this issue may trouble you in nearly future lol
TAG : ending single

[Easy]
00:25:439(2) - make this slider straight like (3) fixed
00:41:015 - make more rest space for beginner... start it as 00:41:400 end at 00:42:746 then the note afterwards is quite difficult.
00:49:669(2) - move the end of this slider down 1 grid lv3 fixed
00:52:746(4) - ^ same fixed?

[Normal]
00:40:631(1,2) - a duplet like this is really fit with normal hitsound(remove whistle and reduce volume a bit)
00:41:208 - extend slider to 00:43:131 sounds nice no.
01:43:515(1) - remove new combo
01:44:092(5) - new combo
01:45:054 - new combo
01:48:900 - extend to 01:50:823 sounds nice no.
others are fixed.
I really love this song x3~
*shoot kudo star*

ask me if you want my insane diff :3

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[General]

Check if ALL spinners have the "New Combo" marked.

[Easy]

AR -1

01:49:477 (5,1) - A jump ? It's an Easy one, but not for an Easy difficult. If was a Normal, could stay. Think of a change.
all fixed.
[Normal]

AR -1
OD -1

00:14:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern for a normal it's a little too much. Change it? For one like these 00:26:785 (1,2,3,4).
01:01:400 (1) - 2 beats instead?
01:22:169 (1) - ^
01:34:477 (1) - ^
02:01:977 (4) - A single beat instead?
02:02:362 (5) - ^
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5) and 02:05:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - A little much for a normal. ehh...
02:15:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
others all fixed.
That's it.

CHAS wrote:

幫我在難度名稱改成 CHAS's Hard
現在應該無誤吧...?
英文文法博大精深...
話說怎麼給我kd..
誤中了.

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[General]

CHAS's hard rename CHAS' Hard .

[CHAS's Hard]

00:31:015 (4) - a good time to slow down - to here 00:40:055 (1) i think this ok.

here is not appropriate, such tricks with spinner >_> i think this ok.

00:49:862 (1,1,1) - (×̯×)

02:17:555 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - (×̯×)

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[General]

CHAS's hard rename CHAS' Hard got it.

00:43:515 - start kiai time and finish 01:07:939

01:51:208 - start kiai time and finish 02:03:323

02:25:054 - start kiai time and finish 02:33:131

all diffs

[Easy]

00:41:400 (1) - spinner start here 00:41:208 (1)

02:31:015 (1) - finish here 02:32:939

02:26:208 (3) - Move the slider here 02:26:592 (3) and 02:26:208 (3) - add circle
all fixed.
[Normal]

01:45:054 (1,2,3,4) - why not make them equal and symmetrical? It looks like



no, but copied from something in 00m3Xs

I liked it

S T A R ~

CHAS wrote:

justnobody你打算加kiai time麼?也有人討厭kiai time的說 我先不加kiai time 看看你意向

話說為什麼我的是CHAS' Hard...
究竟何時加s 何時不加s chas表示完全不明白(打滾)
麻煩了你了 justnobody..幫我再改回CHAS' Hard.......

Xeno32 wrote:

[CHA's Hard]
00:41:785 (4) - New combo no.

Xeno32 wrote:

Good job! -.-
Star!!

[Normal]
00:09:092 (6) - Add clap :> fixed.
00:21:400 (5) - Add clap fixed.
00:57:362 (5) - End on red tick then repeat once? repeat once looks odd to me but tried repeat twice.

[vincerio's Insane]
00:25:054 (1) - Remove New combo
00:32:362 (3) - add clap
00:32:362 (3) - Add clap
00:35:439 (4) - Add clap
00:36:977 (1) - Add clap
00:37:746 (3) - Add clap at start of slider
00:38:515 (5) - Add clap at start of slider
00:39:285 (7) - Add clap at start of slider
00:40:054 (3) - Add clap
00:40:631 (5,6,7,8) - Add claps
00:42:169 (1,2,3,4) - Add claps

ShiroKitty wrote:

sorry for late mod reply.. ;/

There's just my suggestions, cuz I think the beatmap is already very nice ^^

Easy:
02:18:515 (1) maybe give here the same slider and note as in 02:16:977?
02:31:015 end this spinner at 02:33:131

Normal:
00:22:939 (3) 1 grid up
01:02:169 (5) maybe make thiss lider look nicer?
01:03:701 (4) ^
02:31:208 same as in Easy diff?

star! )

winber1 wrote:

General

--sometimes there are random claps in the middle of a whistle sections (speaking of normal and easy, didn't pay that much attention to hitsounds in hard and insane). In my opinion, claps should be used in systematic pattern (even if it's some extremely long, almost incomprehensible pattern). I do realize that you use claps in a specific phrase (like when you have two 1/2 notes together), but other times it's just a clap (or a few claps) in a whistle pattern section. At least that's what it strikes me as. Maybe I'm just not paying enough attention. 00:13:515 in easy would be one example I have.

that's why i think the claps there looks strange...
but sometimes i would feel bored when the hitsounds are like "don don don clap don don don clap ....."
that's why i tried to make it different...
anyway it does look strange and i've fixed them.

Normal

00:14:285(4) - start the new combo here
02:19:669(break) - umm.. very awkward break in my opinion. You don't have to have notes for that echo, but i think at least put some notes starting at 02:21:400

Easy

00:13:515(2...etc) - either get rid of these claps or add claps from 00:25:823 to the spinner
00:30:439(spinner) - end spinner here
02:21:400(break) - same as in normal, maybe add some notes starting here

Nice map.

Star~

Garven wrote:

Aaah, what happened?

[General]
I'm not seeing a reason for "lazy" to be in the tags.not removed.
Also remove ending and single from tags. removed.

on post #49:

frost-b-spec wrote:

[General]
suggestion
add tags : lazy,cover

as i know this song is somewhat an old song in japan.
see: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VyQkccOwWrc
if this is not a reason then i will remove it.



[Easy]
01:51:208 (1) - I'd rather not see a stack like this in an easy. It may be difficult to discern the rhythm like this. fixed.
02:15:823 (2) - Finish on start?fixed.
02:25:054 (2,4) - ^ There are a bunch of others, if you feel that they work with the general hit sound pattern you've used. probably fixed...but i sometimes think that they are a bit noisy.

[Normal]
01:25:054 - Surprised you didn't go with the "だめだめ" again oh my fault. fixed.

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Easy

Nice

00:32:362(3) - it may move 1 gird left(lv4)
00:32:362~00:40:823 - i think that those claps might be reduced velume by 15%

here you are

timing

SPOILER

32265,-100,4,2,0,84,0,0
32458,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
33804,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
33996,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
35342,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
35535,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
36881,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
37073,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
37746,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
37842,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
38515,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
38612,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
39189,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
39381,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
40054,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
40150,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
40727,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
40919,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

01:38:900~01:47:939 - same with 00:32:362~00:40:823

timing

SPOILER

100054,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
100150,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
101592,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
101689,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
103131,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
103227,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
104669,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
104765,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
105342,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
105535,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
106112,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
106304,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
106881,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
107073,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
107650,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
107842,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
108131,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
110631,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

02:23:515(5) - change the shape of the slider

Normal

00:32:362~00:40:823 and 01:38:900~01:47:939

i think you need to reduce the volume by 10% or 15% in those sections.

star...

[Colours]
Combo1 : 157,242,121
Combo2 : 255,51,51
Combo3 : 216,81,255
Combo4 : 83,83,255

SPOILER

SPOILER

SPOILER

Mystica wrote:

[General]
BG is 1024X768.Please make it 800X600.

KillerRind wrote:

Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!

[Easy]
00:18:515 (1) - This note just dont fit to anything, move it on a red tick or remove it don't think so imo.
00:31:208 (1) - Move one tick earlier or make a slider from 00:31:015 to 00:31:592 fixed.
02:23:515 (5) - start 1 tick earlier got it.

[Normal]
00:14:477 (2) - Start New combo here and remove new combo at (1) fits better to the music imo my fault. fixed

Great map, i think it's ready to get ranked ^^
Have a Star~

Odaril wrote:

Your mp3 has 256kbps bitrate. Compress it to 192. Make sure to double check the offset afterwards~

Normal
This is too hard for a Normal. It plays more like a Hard. Plays like a Hard? No way~
You should keep it imo~.

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General
Why are there "lazy" and "cover" in tags ?
about the "lazy"as i know this song is somewhat an old song in japan.
see: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VyQkccOwWrc
if this is not a reason then i will remove it.
about the "cover" : removed.

Your mp3 has 256kbps bitrate. Compress it to 192.
arrrgh this is a VBR with average 141 kbps so it should be fine.
The diffs don't have the same ending points...
i will map my part to the end...


Easy
I find this to be rather hard for an Easy (because of all the 1/2, the long streams of note, and some of the rhythms used).
01:21:977 (5,1,2) - It's a bit nazi, but can you space them perfectly ? It will look a lot better.
...
Normal
This is too hard for a Normal. It plays more like a Hard.
....

Odaril wrote:

vincerio's Insane
Why doesn't this start at the same point as the other diffs ?
The difficulty feels forced here...

vincerio wrote:

Odaril wrote:

vincerio's Insane
Why doesn't this start at the same point as the other diffs ?
The difficulty feels forced here...

Seriously? I'm just following the song rhythm... Owo
Why Starting and Ending point should be the same for all difficulties? as long as its look fine, that wasn't a problems at all.
Don't say it's unrankable or unacceptable. Im used to deal with it.
Thanks for understanding :3

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

[Normal]
<00:18:515> sounds weird, add notes on <00:17:746> and <00:18:131> and move finish to (2)
<01:18:515> (2) move to x:360 y:320
<01:21:977> (5) new combo here instead
all fixed.
[Hard]
<01:16:977> (7) clap instead
<01:22:746> (4) a 1/2 slider repeating 2 times play better here Fixed.
<01:26:592..> (1..) change all finishes in this section into clap?
<01:38:900> (1) whistle instead
others are not fixed...i think the hitsounds here are okay.

you don't have to worry about 2 Hard issue, since they have completely different mapping style and played out well imo, also very nice score spread!

star

loveFantasy wrote:

[CHAS' Hard]
<00:57:939> (6) remove clap and clap on (7)
<01:05:823> (4) x (5) clap, same for (6,7); (8,9) clap clap, spinner finish
<01:19:092> wierd finish
<01:30:631> ^
<02:36:978> nice,

1. tags: lazy 这个是什么 0.0

1. 00:17:939 (2,3) - finish
2. 00:49:862 (1,1,1) - 这样使用spinner会突然丢失节奏感 后面也有类似情况
3. 总体上是好diff 只是应该更多注重下pattern的使用 有一段貌似在摆方框或者拉长蛇

• 00:31:208 (5) - normal-hitnormal here

1. 01:38:900 (5) - ^
2. 00:40:246 (4) - finish
3. 00:41:785 (9) - ^
4. 01:08:227 ~ 01:09:669 (T) - spinner here, mute the end
5. 01:25:246 (1,1,1,1) - finish
6. 01:47:938 (4) - ^
7. 01:49:477 (5) - ^
8. 01:56:977 (2,3) - spacing
9. hitsounds are nicely done, use more soft sliders instead of liner ones could fit the song much better imo, current spacing is fun to play btw

1. AR +2 OD+1
2. hitsounds比较混乱, 通常情况选定一个whistle/clap来跟音乐打节拍在重音处下 另一个用来点缀 这个曲子有清楚的鼓点 应该不会很难 部分地方下的合格 但是整体看会发现很乱 大概是mapping前后时间跨度较长的原因 请注重以下整体性

1. 要把这个说成一个Hard很难... 156bpm的SV(slider velocity)只有1.2 而且常用spacing snap只有x0.8 如果想要做一个Hard的话 不妨试试SV1.6 spacing snap放到x1.2? 目前的情况和Normal的难度比起 我感觉仅仅是圈小了而已. (星数什么的可以忽略) 另外欢快的曲子可以试试把slider做成有点微弧度. 直来直去的话太硬气了 orz

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. tags: lazy 这个是什么 0.0

我又漏寫了某些東西了

[Normal]:

1. AR +2 OD+1
2. hitsounds比较混乱, 通常情况选定一个whistle/clap来跟音乐打节拍在重音处下 另一个用来点缀 这个曲子有清楚的鼓点 应该不会很难 部分地方下的合格 但是整体看会发现很乱 大概是mapping前后时间跨度较长的原因 请注重以下整体性

也是呢...畢竟是花了很久才搞定的呢...
[Hard]:

1. 要把这个说成一个Hard很难... 156bpm的SV(slider velocity)只有1.2 而且常用spacing snap只有x0.8 如果想要做一个Hard的话 不妨试试SV1.6 spacing snap放到x1.2? 目前的情况和Normal的难度比起 我感觉仅仅是圈小了而已. (星数什么的可以忽略) 另外欢快的曲子可以试试把slider做成有点微弧度. 直来直去的话太硬气了 orz

也是呢...畢竟是從normal改名過來的呢...砍掉重練中...
另外这个帖子标题上的ver后面的点别忘了加 加了.

Colin Hou wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]:

1. 00:17:939 (2,3) - finish
2. 00:49:862 (1,1,1) - 这样使用spinner会突然丢失节奏感 后面也有类似情况
3. 总体上是好diff 只是应该更多注重下pattern的使用 有一段貌似在摆方框或者拉长蛇