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OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin (i-pop ver.)

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jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
soft mod is gogo

Easy
00:11:198 (2,1) - this plays kinda odd, the repeating slider don't feel right, i advise to take one repeat off the slider, then add a note at 00:12:737 then make this note the new combo rather than the one after it

00:31:968 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:083 (1) - this slider repeating feels out of time because of the vocals, give it the same size and timing as the slider at 00:52:352 (1)
00:53:891 (3) - new combo to follow your pattern
01:05:045 (5) - new combo, this part feels odd with such a long combo, looks better to cut it down ;p
02:15:045 (1,2,3,4) - the placements on this is abit too ahrd to read for a easy, i advise to make this more easy to read

Normal
........more breaks in normal then in easy, thats.....weird

00:41:198 (1) - remove new combo, it just looks silly like that :/

(suggestion) 02:06:583 (1) - this slider is REALLY ugly, i advise you to remake this more pretty and with less sharp edges :/


CHAS's Hard
00:49:852 (1,1,1) - remove the note at 00:53:698 and give your sliders this timing


i kinda think theres too many spinners in this diff

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goodluck ;p
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

jericho2442 wrote:

CHAS's Hard
00:49:852 (1,1,1) - remove the note at 00:53:698 and give your sliders this timing no.


i kinda think theres too many spinners in this diff
thank you :)
i think it's okay :D
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
jericho's mod all fixed.
i realized my sliders are tasteless...
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123

justnobody wrote:

i realized my sliders are tasteless...
I really hope you can fix that lol
Use more geometry in both slider-shaping and your patterns.
And due to this I will only do rhythm-based modding.

Anyways, as requested:

Overall:
Ehm, let's choose a happier BG shall we? lol~

[Easy]
Use a larger distance spacing (e.g. 1.0~1.2x), it's easier (and more eye-appealing).

00:21:968 (3,1) - make (3) a slider and (1) a note; namely switch the two's positions on timeline
02:03:506 (x) - map this break? (or at least put a note 02:03:506?)
02:15:045 (1) - I suggest this:
02:30:045 (1) - spacing too close

[Normal]
Break times are somewhat strange and longer than [Easy]?

00:25:045 (4) - Hmm, how about this?
00:26:775 (1) - don't repeat that much, map some of it
00:28:506 (x) - this break is too long, map it like in [Easy]
01:05:045 (1) - end in 01:08:122? (Actually I suggest not put a spinner here, delay it and map here like in [Easy].)
01:22:737 (3) - shorten to previous white tick and add a note 01:23:314?
01:23:891 (6) - start the slider on 01:23:698 instead?
01:32:929 (x) - add a note here?
01:36:198 (7) - start slider 01:36:006?
01:38:122 (x) - consider mapping this break?

[CHAS's Hard]
Like jericho2442 said there's a bit of spinner abuse here :/

00:49:852 (1,1,1) - yep, same spot. Do consider mapping it. Rhythm goodness.
01:02:160 (1,1) - ^
01:20:621 (2) - this slider is off the rhythm, consider fixing it?
01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - place these better
02:09:083 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this part is a bit boring, have some variations?
02:17:545 (1) - meh...
02:19:083 (1) - mehhhh...


Except for CHAS's diff, please strive to make the patterns look better.
I hold back my star for now. Will recheck later.

CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

yongtw123 wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
Like jericho2442 said there's a bit of spinner abuse here :/

00:49:852 (1,1,1) - yep, same spot. Do consider mapping it. Rhythm goodness. done(?)
01:02:160 (1,1) - ^ :?
01:20:621 (2) - this slider is off the rhythm, consider fixing it? done
01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - place these better :?
02:09:083 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this part is a bit boring, have some variations? done
02:17:545 (1) - meh... :?
02:19:083 (1) - mehhhh... :?
thank you for mod :)


傳~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~送~ :)
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS's Hard].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

yongtw123 wrote:

justnobody wrote:

i realized my sliders are tasteless...
I really hope you can fix that lol
Use more geometry in both slider-shaping and your patterns.
And due to this I will only do rhythm-based modding.

Anyways, as requested:

Overall:
Ehm, let's choose a happier BG shall we? lol~

[Easy]
Use a larger distance spacing (e.g. 1.0~1.2x), it's easier (and more eye-appealing).

00:21:968 (3,1) - make (3) a slider and (1) a note; namely switch the two's positions on timeline
02:03:506 (x) - map this break? (or at least put a note 02:03:506?)
02:15:045 (1) - I suggest this:[attachment=1:4b776]sc_01.jpg[/attachment:4b776]
02:30:045 (1) - spacing too close

[Normal]
Break times are somewhat strange and longer than [Easy]?

00:25:045 (4) - Hmm, how about this? [attachment=0:4b776]sc_02.jpg[/attachment:4b776]
00:26:775 (1) - don't repeat that much, map some of it
00:28:506 (x) - this break is too long, map it like in [Easy]
01:05:045 (1) - end in 01:08:122? (Actually I suggest not put a spinner here, delay it and map here like in [Easy].)
01:22:737 (3) - shorten to previous white tick and add a note 01:23:314?
01:23:891 (6) - start the slider on 01:23:698 instead?
01:32:929 (x) - add a note here?
01:36:198 (7) - start slider 01:36:006?
01:38:122 (x) - consider mapping this break?
thanks for modding

almost all suggestions fixed.
distance snapping 1.0 will make me crazy so i didn't.
i find it dometimes difficult to make looooong sliders so i avoided most of them.
the pattern should be a bit better now (i think)
i will change the BG soon.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
I don't get CHAS's Hard when I download, try and do full submit after this (I downloaded it separately)
Make sure the preview point is the same on every difficulty
End final spinner at the same place on your difficulties?

Easy:
Stuff like 00:40:622 (2,3) might confuse beginners with small spacing like that, maybe make some of them sliders
Don't really like how the spacing looks and I would increase it, but it has been mentioned before~
Ticks look odd on alot of the sliders to me
AR -1 for Easy?
00:16:198 (1,1) - try and avoid anti jumps if possible
01:07:833 (1) - start at 01:07:929?
Map isn't too bad I just think it looks pretty clumped together in general

Normal:
Might want to tone a few of those streams down for a Normal
00:18:698 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
00:41:775 (1) - semi short for a Normal
00:56:391 (3) - add note
02:06:583 (1) - so many anchor points and could prob look slightly better~

CHAS's Hard:
Why audio lead in?
No break in a 2:30 map? I would include a least one in the middle somewhere
Don't really like the spinners one after the other
OD +1?

Maps don't look too bad
Star'ed
Roddie
osu! Alumni
1,468 posts
Joined June 2009
Roddie
Hi

Blue: Suggestions
Violet: I really think you should fix this in my opinion.
Red: Must be fixed

General:

  1. All I'm getting is Easy and Normal. =( Try to full submit with all those 3 difficulties.
  2. The bitrate for the mp3 is over 192 kbps ._. That's unrankable. =( Try to convert this at 192 or lower.
Easy:
00:49:083 (1)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
00:55:814 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider?
01:51:198 (1)-^
01:57:352 (1)-^
02:25:045 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider?


Normal:
00:49:660 (2)-Add a finish.
00:55:622 (1)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
01:51:198 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:57:352 (2)^
02:25:045 (3)-Add a finish?
02:26:583 (3)^
02:28:122 (3)-Add a finish on the end of that slider?
02:28:122 (2)-^

CHAS's Hard (I downloaded this difficulty separately, keep in mind.) :
00:43:506 (1)-Add a finish.
00:48:122 (6, 8)-Add finishes.
00:55:622 (6)Put a New combo there? And add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:01:006 (8)-^?
01:51:198 (1)-Add a finish.
01:56:391 (8)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:57:352 (3)-Add a finish.
02:08:122 (6)-^
02:25:045 (3)-^
02:26:583 (3)-^
02:28:122 (3)-^

Cool song and Hard looks promising 8-)

Good luck getting this ranked!

Star!
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
mp3 re-encoded at (VBR)141kbps. BG changed.
-------------------------------------------------------
I tried to complete submit several times, but...
i can't upload it correctly...
maybe tomorrow...
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

James2250 wrote:

CHAS's Hard:
Why audio lead in? 1000->0 done
No break in a 2:30 map? I would include a least one in the middle somewhere
Don't really like the spinners one after the other
OD +1? no.
thank you for mod :)

Roddie wrote:

CHAS's Hard (I downloaded this difficulty separately, keep in mind.) :
00:43:506 (1)-Add a finish.
00:48:122 (6, 8)-Add finishes.
00:55:622 (6)Put a New combo there? And add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:01:006 (8)-^?
01:51:198 (1)-Add a finish.
01:56:391 (8)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:57:352 (3)-Add a finish.
02:08:122 (6)-^
02:25:045 (3)-^
02:26:583 (3)-^
02:28:122 (3)-^
all fixed
thank you for mod :)




話說可能因為我audio lead in是1000所以無法上載
我改回0試試看....反正audio lead in我也不知道有什麼用途wwwwww(也不知道為什麼我會是1000wwwwww)
傳送~
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS's Hard].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

James2250 wrote:

I don't get CHAS's Hard when I download, try and do full submit after this (I downloaded it separately)
Make sure the preview point is the same on every difficulty
End final spinner at the same place on your difficulties? fixed.

Easy:
Stuff like 00:40:622 (2,3) might confuse beginners with small spacing like that, maybe make some of them sliders
Don't really like how the spacing looks and I would increase it, but it has been mentioned before~
Ticks look odd on alot of the sliders to me Tried tick rate 2.
AR -1 for Easy?
00:16:198 (1,1) - try and avoid anti jumps if possible
01:07:833 (1) - start at 01:07:929?
Map isn't too bad I just think it looks pretty clumped together in general
all fixed.
Normal:
Might want to tone a few of those streams down for a Normal killed most streams.
00:18:698 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
00:41:775 (1) - semi short for a Normal it's okay i think...
00:56:391 (3) - add note
02:06:583 (1) - so many anchor points and could prob look slightly better~ oh...
others are fixed.
Maps don't look too bad
Star'ed

Roddie wrote:

Hi

Blue: Suggestions
Violet: I really think you should fix this in my opinion.
Red: Must be fixed

General:

  1. All I'm getting is Easy and Normal. =( Try to full submit with all those 3 difficulties.
  2. The bitrate for the mp3 is over 192 kbps ._. That's unrankable. =( Try to convert this at 192 or lower.
reencoded. problems should be fixed.
Easy:
00:49:083 (1)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
00:55:814 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider?
01:51:198 (1)-^
01:57:352 (1)-^
02:25:045 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider?


Normal:
00:49:660 (2)-Add a finish.
00:55:622 (1)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
01:51:198 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:57:352 (2)^
02:25:045 (3)-Add a finish?
02:26:583 (3)^
02:28:122 (3)-Add a finish on the end of that slider?
02:28:122 (2)-^
all fixed.
Cool song and Hard looks promising 8-)

Good luck getting this ranked!

Star!
Thanks for modding!
BTW, is it okay for one note to have two hitsounds together...
and...
I want to change the BG again.
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Sorry for the delays. -_-

[Easy]
00:39:660 (5,1) - These might work better as a slider - with the really low distance snap it's hard to tell the rhythm change.
00:43:506 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy. You'll probably have an easier time mapping through this instead of trying to balance it out. Newer players have a hard time realigning after a spinner.
00:49:083 (1) - End this at 00:49:660 -
00:57:160 (3,4) - I really don't like to see stacks on easy diffs - especially when there's a slider on the bottom. Please try something else.
01:07:929 (1) - Start this at 01:08:122 -
02:15:237 (2,3) - May work better as a slider
Felt kind of slow due to the really low distance snap. :/

[Normal]
Some of the shorter streams like 00:24:468 (1,2,3,4) - are kind of pushing it for a normal.
00:41:775 (1) - Kinda short of a spinner for Normal, and the note after it is still really too soon. :/
00:55:622 (1) - I kind of expected this to go until the start of the 2 slider due to the lyrics...
01:51:198 (1) - Soon after a spinner again. Try to give at least two beats after a spinner for a normal at this BPM.
02:16:006 (2) - I know it's going with the synth, but it still feels awkward to play this note.

[CHAS's Hard]
Just my opinion here, but it felt as if there were waaay too many spinners. :P
Also would have been nice to have a short break or two. 01:10:045 - to 01:14:275 - would have been a good spot
Jumps might be a bit difficult for the spread, but for the map itself they're fine.
Otherwise, this is nice~

This is pretty nice for your first map, justnobody. :D
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

Garven wrote:

Sorry for the delays. -_- i thought you ignored me...

[Easy]
00:39:660 (5,1) - These might work better as a slider - with the really low distance snap it's hard to tell the rhythm change. changed.
00:43:506 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy. You'll probably have an easier time mapping through this instead of trying to balance it out. Newer players have a hard time realigning after a spinner.shortened the slider to make it a bit easier.
00:49:083 (1) - End this at 00:49:660 - fixed.
00:57:160 (3,4) - I really don't like to see stacks on easy diffs - especially when there's a slider on the bottom. Please try something else.killed circle 00:57:160 (3).
01:07:929 (1) - Start this at 01:08:122 - fixed.
02:15:237 (2,3) - May work better as a slider fixed.
Felt kind of slow due to the really low distance snap. :/

[Normal]
Some of the shorter streams like 00:24:468 (1,2,3,4) - are kind of pushing it for a normal.
00:41:775 (1) - Kinda short of a spinner for Normal, and the note after it is still really too soon. :/ make it like the easy diff.
00:55:622 (1) - I kind of expected this to go until the start of the 2 slider due to the lyrics...fixed?
01:51:198 (1) - Soon after a spinner again. Try to give at least two beats after a spinner for a normal at this BPM.make it like the last one.
02:16:006 (2) - I know it's going with the synth, but it still feels awkward to play this note.changed it to a slider.

[CHAS's Hard]
Just my opinion here, but it felt as if there were waaay too many spinners. :P
Also would have been nice to have a short break or two. 01:10:045 - to 01:14:275 - would have been a good spot
Jumps might be a bit difficult for the spread, but for the map itself they're fine.
Otherwise, this is nice~

This is pretty nice for your first map, justnobody. :D
Thaaaaaaaaanks a lot! :)
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
Easy

[00:27:737] 4,5 稍微往左斜一点 不要垂直着下去 有点弧度最好
[00:45:622] 不要clap 要Whistle
[00:46:198] 不要Whistle 要clap
[00:52:352] 首尾全Whistle
[00:54:275] Whistle
[01:06:968] whistle

Normal

很好

CHAS's Hard

[00:12:160] no clap
[00:12:352] clap
[00:12:929] whistle
[00:13:314] whistle
[00:13:506] no clap
[00:14:083] whistle
[00:14:275] no clap
[00:14:660] clap
[00:15:045] whistle
[00:15:429] clap

star~
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss
sorry for delaying... T_T

Here's my mod...

[easy]
SPOILER
- Increase Slider Speed to 0.8, or Slider Tick to 0.5
- 00:06:198 (1) - Add Finish instead of Whistle (?)
- 00:13:122 (2) - i suggest a minimal (really minimal) fix...something like this
- 00:16:198 (1) - i suggest fix this slider like this.
- 00:40:814 (3) - why not to overlap with 00:40:622 (2) - ?
- 00:46:583 (1) - 1 grid to the left (lvl3)
- 00:57:352 (3) - 1 gid up and then 1 to the left (lvl3)
- 01:36:198 (-) - instead of that break, i suggest to put a spinner, which starts from that time mentioned to 01:38:122 and put a finish.
- 01:40:429 (1) - Remove New Combo
- 01:43:506 (1) - ^
Nothing more noticeable.

[Normal]
SPOILER
- 00:16:006 (6) - move 4 grids to left and 2 down (lvl3)
- 00:25:237 (5) - That slider is awful. Please fix it...
- 00:28:506 (-) - put a Spinner.
- 00:33:506 (2) - Move 1 grid to the right (lvl3)
- 00:35:045 (2) - Move 3 grid up (lvl3) (?)
- 00:40:237 (5) - Remove New Combo
- 00:48:122 (5,6) - Move 1 grid to the left, keeping overlap of circle 6 over 5.
- 00:57:352 (4) - fix that slider, something like this
- 01:23:698 (6) - ^ this
- 01:33:121 (5) - Move 1 grid to the left and 1 up (lvl3)
- 01:46:583 (4) - Move 1 Grid Down and 1 to left (lvl3)
- 01:54:275 (1,2,3) - Organize this pattern, like the image.
- 01:58:121 (3) - move 1 grid to te right (lvl3)
nothing more noticeable...


[CHAS's Hard]
SPOILER
- Difficulty name must be corrected. Could be "CHAS' Hard"
- 01:27:929 (3) - move 2 grids up (lvl3).
- 01:28:121 (4) - move 1 grid Left and then 2 Down (lvl3).
- 01:30:237 (3) - Make this slider curve. Fix it.
- 01:35:814 (8) - Move 2 grids down (lvl3) and 2 to the left (lvl3).
- 02:36:968 (6) - Rotate 45 degrees anticlockwise, but keep the same place (overlapped with circle 5).

Star and Good Luck!!~~ ^^
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
LKs' mod all fixed.
I'm lazy...

j35u5891221's mod:

j35u5891221 wrote:

sorry for delaying... T_T

Here's my mod...

[easy]
SPOILER
- Increase Slider Speed to 0.8, or Slider Tick to 0.5 slider tick changed to 0.5
- 00:06:198 (1) - Add Finish instead of Whistle (?)
- 00:13:122 (2) - i suggest a minimal (really minimal) fix...something like this
- 00:16:198 (1) - i suggest fix this slider like this.
- 00:40:814 (3) - why not to overlap with 00:40:622 (2) - ? ...
- 00:46:583 (1) - 1 grid to the left (lvl3)
- 00:57:352 (3) - 1 gid up and then 1 to the left (lvl3)
- 01:36:198 (-) - instead of that break, i suggest to put a spinner, which starts from that time mentioned to 01:38:122 and put a finish.
- 01:40:429 (1) - Remove New Combo
- 01:43:506 (1) - ^
Nothing more noticeable.
others are all fixed.

[Normal]
SPOILER
- 00:16:006 (6) - move 4 grids to left and 2 down (lvl3)
- 00:25:237 (5) - That slider is awful. Please fix it... that's really awful. (should be) fixed.
- 00:28:506 (-) - put a Spinner.
- 00:33:506 (2) - Move 1 grid to the right (lvl3)
- 00:35:045 (2) - Move 3 grid up (lvl3) (?)
- 00:40:237 (5) - Remove New Combo
- 00:48:122 (5,6) - Move 1 grid to the left, keeping overlap of circle 6 over 5.
- 00:57:352 (4) - fix that slider, something like this
- 01:23:698 (6) - ^ this
- 01:33:121 (5) - Move 1 grid to the left and 1 up (lvl3)
- 01:46:583 (4) - Move 1 Grid Down and 1 to left (lvl3)
- 01:54:275 (1,2,3) - Organize this pattern, like the image.
- 01:58:121 (3) - move 1 grid to te right (lvl3)
nothing more noticeable...
perhaps some minor grid positioning not fixed though. i forgot some when i write this.

Star and Good Luck!!~~ ^^
thanks a lot for modding!
and told me how to make tasty sliders...
-------------------------------------------------
CHAS-kuuuuuuuuuuuuuun~~~~
Last edited by - Rche - , edited 1 time in total.
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

Garven wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
Just my opinion here, but it felt as if there were waaay too many spinners. :P lol
Also would have been nice to have a short break or two. 01:10:045 - to 01:14:275 - would have been a good spot no.
Jumps might be a bit difficult for the spread, but for the map itself they're fine.
Otherwise, this is nice~
:)

LKs wrote:

CHAS's Hard

[00:12:160] no clap
[00:12:352] clap
[00:12:929] whistle
[00:13:314] whistle
[00:13:506] no clap
[00:14:083] whistle
[00:14:275] no clap
[00:14:660] clap
[00:15:045] whistle
[00:15:429] clap
all fixed
thanks for mod :)

j35u5891221 wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
SPOILER
- Difficulty name must be corrected. Could be "CHAS' Hard"
- 01:27:929 (3) - move 2 grids up (lvl3).
- 01:28:121 (4) - move 1 grid Left and then 2 Down (lvl3).
- 01:30:237 (3) - Make this slider curve. Fix it.
- 01:35:814 (8) - Move 2 grids down (lvl3) and 2 to the left (lvl3).
- 02:36:968 (6) - Rotate 45 degrees anticlockwise, but keep the same place (overlapped with circle 5).
all fixed
thanks for mod :)





呃..這次有點晚(都怪某某遊戲吸引我過去www)
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
frost-b-spec
786 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
hi~
nicemap~

[General]
suggestion
add tags : lazy,cover

[Normal]
0:16:006(6) - spacing
2:08:698(2) - use distance snap x0.0 and off grid snap

+star
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

frost-b-spec wrote:

hi~
nicemap~

[General]
suggestion
add tags : lazy,coveradded. what's "cover"?

[Normal]
0:16:006(6) - spacing
2:08:698(2) - use distance snap x0.0 and off grid snap
all fixed.
+star
thanks for modding and star!
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,236 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Sorry for long delay...
Here my mod:
-----------------------------------------
Blue=Suggestion only
ReD=I think you should fix this
*Major issue are in bold

[General]
Use offset should be 426?You decide to change or not(Please re-snap after you change it)
(Please read my mod first and change the offset at last)

[Easy]
00:11:198(2)-Too noise..Remove whistle
00:16:198(1)-Remove new combo ...IMO.It is too unly of this slider..
00:23:506(3)-Same as 00:11:198
00:28:506(x)-add a spinner until 00:30:045
00:40:237(1)-Remove new combo
00:40:622(2.3)-It is too difficult of easy..Maybe remove (3)?
00:41:006(x)-stop at 00:43:112?
01:06:583(3.4)-It is difficult to read for newbie
01:23:891(4)-Too noise..Remove whistle
01:23:891(4)-stop at 01:26:391
02:03:506(1)-Remove new combo
02:03:891(x)-weird break
02:31:006(4)-The spinner is too close of (4)
I just want to say...The arrangement is too chaos

[Normal]
Maybe you can add more hitsound?like whistle?
00:09:275(1)-Remove new combo
00:21:968(1)-^
00:31:198(1)-Make this slider more beautiful?
00:32:737(1)-^
00:34:275(1)-^
01:23:314(4.5.6)-uneven spacing
01:29:275(1)-remove clap
02:05:045(1~5)Horizontally with 02:03:506~02:04:660
Same as easy arrangement is too chose...I just suggest you play more Osu to have look to the another rank map

CKAS' Hard
00:41:468(1~8)-I suggest it to have some diversification to these notes
00:49:852~00:52:352(x)-Remove both of spinner and map something here
01:17:352(2)-make it symmetrically with (1)
01:25:045(1)-Too close to spinner...
01:38:891(6)-New combo
02:12:352(1)-spacing.Don't tell me it is a jump because it is unreason

IMO...This diff is better than Easy and Normal
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

kanpakyin wrote:

Sorry for long delay...
Here my mod:
-----------------------------------------
Blue=Suggestion only
ReD=I think you should fix this
*Major issue are in bold

[General]
Use offset should be 426?You decide to change or not(Please re-snap after you change it)
(Please read my mod first and change the offset at last)[/color]

[Easy]
00:11:198(2)-Too noise..Remove whistle
00:16:198(1)-Remove new combo ...IMO.It is too unly of this slider..
00:23:506(3)-Same as 00:11:198
00:28:506(x)-add a spinner until 00:30:045
00:40:237(1)-Remove new combo
00:40:622(2.3)-It is too difficult of easy..Maybe remove (3)?
00:41:006(x)-stop at 00:43:112?
01:06:583(3.4)-It is difficult to read for newbie
01:23:891(4)-Too noise..Remove whistle
01:23:891(4)-stop at 01:26:391
02:03:506(1)-Remove new combo
02:03:891(x)-weird break
02:31:006(4)-The spinner is too close of (4)
I just want to say...The arrangement is too chaos
(maybe because of some bugs in editor) the distance snap in Easy is ruined. now fixed and should look better.

[Normal]
Maybe you can add more hitsound?like whistle?
00:09:275(1)-Remove new combo
00:21:968(1)-^
00:31:198(1)-Make this slider more beautiful?
00:32:737(1)-^
00:34:275(1)-^
01:23:314(4.5.6)-uneven spacing
01:29:275(1)-remove clap
02:05:045(1~5)Horizontally with 02:03:506~02:04:660
Same as easy arrangement is too chose...I just suggest you play more Osu to have look to the another rank map
it is ok though (i think) but tried to make it a bit tidier.
that hurts.
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CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

kanpakyin wrote:

CKAS' Hard
01:17:352(2)-make it symmetrically with (1)
01:38:891(6)-New combo
fixed
thank you for mod

雖然我的確是CK無誤...

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
Kurai
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7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Ohai

[Easy]
00:26:968 (3,5) - Add whistles
00:28:506 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
00:54:275 (1) - Add finish
00:55:814 (1) - Begin this slider 1/2 earlier and add a finish at the beginning
01:08:122 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
01:36:198 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
01:55:814 (3) - Add finish
02:03:506 (5) - Move 1/2 earlier

[Normal]
01:23:698 (5) - Reduce it by 1/1
01:29:275 (1) - Finish

[CHAS' Hard]
01:13:891 (8) - New combo ? :3
01:39:468 (7) - New combo
01:48:891 (7,8) - Better if you don't stack these notes
02:30:045 (8) - New combo
02:36:775 (5) - Add new combo

Pretty nice map, I wish see it ranked soon :)
Star~
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

KuraiPettan wrote:

Ohai

[Easy]
00:26:968 (3,5) - Add whistles
00:28:506 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
00:54:275 (1) - Add finish
00:55:814 (1) - Begin this slider 1/2 earlier and add a finish at the beginning
01:08:122 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
01:36:198 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier
01:55:814 (3) - Add finish
02:03:506 (5) - Move 1/2 earlier this one looks weird for me...
others are fixed.

[Normal]
01:23:698 (5) - Reduce it by 1/1
01:29:275 (1) - Finish
all fixed.

Pretty nice map, I wish see it ranked soon :)
Star~
:) thanks for modding!!
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi~

General
Remove letterbox (Storyboarding), it's already on your BG

Easy
Circle size 1 (large)
01:34:660 (1) - add finish?
02:12:352 (5) - new combo
02:28:891 (3,4) - spacing

Normal
00:16:006 (6) - add whistle in the end point of the slider
00:17:352 (7) - remove whistle, add finish
00:18:698 (1) - remove finish, add whistle
01:37:160 (4) - add finish

CHAS' Hard
good

Star
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

KuraiPettan wrote:

[CHAS' Hard]
01:39:468 (7) - New combo
01:48:891 (7,8) - Better if you don't stack these notes
02:30:045 (8) - New combo
02:36:775 (5) - Add new combo
Fixed
thank you for mod :)

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu


Vass_Bass wrote:

CHAS' Hard
good
thanks :)
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Timing : +10 ms to all offset,don't forget resnap all notes and green lines.

[Easy]

02:02:352 (4) - Unrankable slider,fix it.


[Normal]

Looks good.


[CHAS' Hard]

Fine.


Star for now.
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General
Remove letterbox (Storyboarding), it's already on your BG what? SB?

Easy
Circle size 1 (large)
01:34:660 (1) - add finish?
02:12:352 (5) - new combo
02:28:891 (3,4) - spacing how can i missed out this...
all fixed.
Normal
00:16:006 (6) - add whistle in the end point of the slider
00:17:352 (7) - remove whistle, add finish
00:18:698 (1) - remove finish, add whistle
01:37:160 (4) - add finish
all fixed.
CHAS' Hard
good

Star
Thanks for modding :)

kioukiou wrote:

Timing : +10 ms to all offset,don't forget resnap all notes and green lines.

[Easy]

02:02:352 (4) - Unrankable slider,fix it.
i forgot i can not use short sliders...now fixed.

[Normal]

Looks good.


[CHAS' Hard]

Fine.


Star for now.
thanks for the star.
and... chinese is okay...
moemoekiou
怎麼我總是在用英文www
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CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS
哦哦哦哦哦ーーーーーーーーーーーーー
QQ姉様！ :oops:











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CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

justnobody wrote:

怎麼我總是在用英文www
正常都會用英文w
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
@@ Late recheck~

Overall:
Hitsound is overall a bit sparse and thus sounds at times random. Use hitsounds more evenly across the map?
Hitsounds are also a bit quiet. Consider volume up +1 to +2.
BG resize to 800*600 would be best.

[CHAS' Hard]

Pretty good, but the consecutive spinners are still there... Anyways. (shrug)

[Normal]
00:09:670 (1) - align with (6)
00:16:016 (6) - ends at a weird beat... Consider ending on white tick?
01:36:016 (x) - I expected one beat here
02:06:593 (1) - doesn't look good. Sometimes using too many points to shape a curve isn't that well.
02:15:824 (2) - better start at 02:15:824. And actually I'd recommend not using a slider to cover up the rhythm here. For example 5 1/8 notes.
02:31:208 (1) - put a note here and delay the spinner?

[Easy]
00:40:632 (5) - I recommend either 1) add a note at 00:40:824, or 2) move (5) to 00:40:824.
01:29:670 (1) - align with (5)
01:38:901 (1,2,3) - down 1 grid?
01:48:324 (1,2,3,4) - excellent change of hitsound set. You should try this also on [Normal].
01:55:824 (3) - hitsound finish at end of slider?
02:15:055 (1) - align with (4)?
02:31:208 (1) - put a note here and delay the spinner?

Very good improvements!

=====

[Easy] now looks better than [Normal] lol.
But I like the improvements.
Here's a star of encouragement~
Good luck!
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

yongtw123 wrote:

@@ Late recheck~

Overall:
Hitsound is overall a bit sparse and thus sounds at times random. Use hitsounds more evenly across the map?
Hitsounds are also a bit quiet. Consider volume up +1 to +2. Seemed that i messed up this option before. i don't know if i have fixed.
BG resize to 800*600 would be best.i don't want to change BG again. complete submit HURTS.

[CHAS' Hard]

Pretty good, but the consecutive spinners are still there... Anyways. (shrug)

[Normal]
00:09:670 (1) - align with (6) fixed.
00:16:016 (6) - ends at a weird beat... Consider ending on white tick?fixed, but still look strange...
01:36:016 (x) - I expected one beat here in fact i didn't expect anything here but added a note.
02:06:593 (1) - doesn't look good. Sometimes using too many points to shape a curve isn't that well.as i remember, that was a catmull slider... now split into some shorter sliders.
02:15:824 (2) - better start at 02:15:824. And actually I'd recommend not using a slider to cover up the rhythm here. For example 5 1/8 notes. can't understand, but tried to fix.
02:31:208 (1) - put a note here and delay the spinner?fixed.

[Easy]
00:40:632 (5) - I recommend either 1) add a note at 00:40:824, or 2) move (5) to 00:40:824. fixed(2)
01:29:670 (1) - align with (5)fixed.
01:38:901 (1,2,3) - down 1 grid?fixed.
01:48:324 (1,2,3,4) - excellent change of hitsound set. You should try this also on [Normal].tried on normal.
01:55:824 (3) - hitsound finish at end of slider?fixed.
02:15:055 (1) - align with (4)?fixed.
02:31:208 (1) - put a note here and delay the spinner?fixed.

Very good improvements!

=====

[Easy] now looks better than [Normal] lol.
But I like the improvements.
Here's a star of encouragement~
Good luck!
thank you very much~
you are a power modder really.
........
why it's easy to find a good EASY difficulty (for copy reference) but so difficult to find a NORMAL.....
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Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


CHAS's Hard

感觉clap下得有点乱，减少一些红线上的clap

00:24:670 (9) - new combo加到这个上面把下一个上的去掉
01:16:401 (7) - remove clap
01:25:247 (2) - 这个红线上的clap太突出了
02:24:285 - 没有连续感，这里我感觉还应该加点NOTE过渡，因为前边用了一个slider，两次点击间隔快到一个小节了(或者把前边的slider换成别的什么)


Normal

00:55:632 - 加个圆


Easy

00:40:247 (4,5) - spacing
00:44:862 - 加个音
00:49:093 (1) - 后移1/2到白线上
00:57:170 - 加个音
02:03:324 - 加个音或者把后面的移到这个位置


star
Rukario
973 posts
Joined May 2009
Rukario
Sorry for the really late mod. Been very busy :3

General:
- Consider using some Kiai time on the chorus of the song on all the diffs.

Easy:
00:49:285 (1) - This beat fits better one 1/2 tick later IMO. Please don't forget to respace that part then.
00:56:401 - Add a note here?
02:18:516 (3,4) - Delete (4) and make (3) have one more repeat.
02:25:055 (2) - Remove the clap on the end.

Normal:
00:12:939 - Add a note?
00:25:247 - ^
00:48:324 - ^
01:00:632 - ^
01:20:632 - ^
01:37:362 - 01:38:708 - Please remove this break, it's too short. you can do that by putting a beat in the break and then removing it.

CHAS' Hard:
There are no breaks in this diff. Please make a break somewhere in this diff. Playing so long without a break is very tiring.
00:29:670 (9) - Remove this slider and add a note on 00:29:862 -
01:25:439 (3) - Remove this note?

Really good for a first map.
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

Sandpig wrote:

hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

Normal

00:55:632 - 加个圆 加了.


Easy

00:40:247 (4,5) - spacing
00:44:862 - 加个音
00:49:093 (1) - 后移1/2到白线上
00:57:170 - 加个音
02:03:324 - 加个音或者把后面的移到这个位置
all fixed.

star

Rukarioman wrote:

Sorry for the really late mod. Been very busy :3
don't mind.
General:
- Consider using some Kiai time on the chorus of the song on all the diffs. considered, but i would say no to this.

Easy:
00:49:285 (1) - This beat fits better one 1/2 tick later IMO. Please don't forget to respace that part then.seems that i changed something there before.
00:56:401 - Add a note here?no.
02:18:516 (3,4) - Delete (4) and make (3) have one more repeat.fixed.
02:25:055 (2) - Remove the clap on the end.fixed.

Normal:
00:12:939 - Add a note?no. but thanks for letting me know. change something here.
00:25:247 - ^noo.
00:48:324 - ^nooo.
01:00:632 - ^noooo.
01:20:632 - ^nooooo.
01:37:362 - 01:38:708 - Please remove this break, it's too short. you can do that by putting a beat in the break and then removing it.mapped this break.
i don't want loooong streams in this difficulty.

Really good for a first map.
thanks Sandpig and Rukarioman for modding~
~~~~~~~
突然覺得這圖很送分...

EDIT:1L的甚麼資料都不準的...orz.
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CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

Sandpig wrote:

CHAS's Hard

00:24:670 (9) - new combo加到这个上面把下一个上的去掉
01:16:401 (7) - remove clap
01:25:247 (2) - 这个红线上的clap太突出了
02:24:285 - 没有连续感，这里我感觉还应该加点NOTE过渡，因为前边用了一个slider，两次点击间隔快到一个小节了(或者把前边的slider换成别的什么)
fixed~
thanks for mod~ :D
至於音效方面...求指導

Rukarioman wrote:

CHAS' Hard:
There are no breaks in this diff. Please make a break somewhere in this diff. Playing so long without a break is very tiring. no.
00:29:670 (9) - Remove this slider and add a note on 00:29:862 - fixed
01:25:439 (3) - Remove this note? fixed
:!:
Rukarioman is observing.
Thank you for mod. :)

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu

justnobody wrote:

突然覺得這圖很送分...
送分不好麼lol?
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Random recheck~

[Easy]
00:43:516 (1,2,3,4) - I think this is pushing it for an easy difficulty, tbh. Can you simplify the rhythm a little bit?
00:56:785 (2,3,4) - ^
00:57:362 (4,2) - Didn't like the overlap here
01:14:285 (1,2) - ^
01:19:670 (4,2) - ^ Also a straight line is kind of dull. Maybe do a arc with the hit circles? There's some other small overlaps, if you wish to take care of those or not.
01:51:208 (1) - Aah, you have a good rhythm for this iteration of the chorus. :D

[Normal]
Looks fine. Mostly wish it had a higher slider velocity compared to easy though.

[Hard]
No breaks? At least have one in there somewhere, or go with justnobody's placement.
00:33:324 (7,8) - These feel better if they were stacked to go with how you mapped the rest of this part of the song.
00:52:555 (1,1) - Hrm, maybe have the note after the spinner be closer to the center. That or make it a bit longer after the spinner.
01:25:055 (1) - ^
01:45:055 (4) - New combo. Also so many of these jumps in a row is a bit harsh for this hard diff.
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
[quote="Garven"]Random recheck~

[Easy]
00:43:516 (1,2,3,4) - I think this is pushing it for an easy difficulty, tbh. Can you simplify the rhythm a little bit? make 1 a longer slider and killed 3
00:56:785 (2,3,4) - ^ killed 3.
00:57:362 (4,2) - Didn't like the overlap here
01:14:285 (1,2) - ^
01:19:670 (4,2) - ^ Also a straight line is kind of dull. Maybe do a arc with the hit circles? There's some other small overlaps, if you wish to take care of those or not. everything here fixed.
01:51:208 (1) - Aah, you have a good rhythm for this iteration of the chorus. :D
all fixed.
[Normal]
Looks fine. Mostly wish it had a higher slider velocity compared to easy though.
Maybe next time.

Thanks Garven for the recheck.
a bit unexpected though.
---------------------------------------
P.S. i found that after i edited the information in first post, the star from kioukiou disappeared...
---------------------------------------
CHAS-kun~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Rechecked.

Good enough for me.

Bubbled.

送分美

Edit :

Sorry,I didn't see CHAS' respond.

Call me back when CHAS finish rechecking.

Star for now. >_>
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
No breaks? At least have one in there somewhere, or go with justnobody's placement. I think it ok..
00:33:324 (7,8) - These feel better if they were stacked to go with how you mapped the rest of this part of the song.
00:52:555 (1,1) - Hrm, maybe have the note after the spinner be closer to the center. That or make it a bit longer after the spinner.
01:25:055 (1) - ^
01:45:055 (4) - New combo. Also so many of these jumps in a row is a bit harsh for this hard diff. fixed
thank you for mod
Sorry for my poor English.


.其實中間的那段我看不懂 怎辦 :? :? :? 就現在這樣吧...
如果不是規定..我這張beatmap不想添加Insert Break Time 如果規定必須要Insert Break Time我再進行修改 :) .



很抱歉 今回有點晚
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- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
GOoooooo!!!

kioukiou wrote:

送分美
how to put stress.jpg here???
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Bubbled.
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

kioukiou wrote:

Bubbled.
gogogo!!!
or stop&pop it...

waiting here is tiring...
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Garven
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2010
Garven
A HAH!

I refreshed before I posted this time, kioukiou! :P

G'luck with the ranking, justnobody!
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
wait wait
please remove offset to 439 and resnap all notes (in order to line up the long white tick with music)

<CHAS' Hard>
claps in this diff sound abit random,
00:37:362 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this sounds good
01:44:670 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this sounds bad
did you find the difference, most of musics have their own claps, if you feel like to add claps
the easy way is following the BGM claps, try to listen to the music carefully, you can hear the BGM claps
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

Alace wrote:

wait wait
please remove offset to 439 and resnap all notes (in order to line up the long white tick with music)

<CHAS' Hard>
claps in this diff sound abit random,
00:37:362 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this sounds good
01:44:670 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this sounds bad
did you find the difference, most of musics have their own claps, if you feel like to add claps
the easy way is following the BGM claps, try to listen to the music carefully, you can hear the BGM claps
thank you for mod :)

這樣claps應該比較好..? 音效什麼的果然很麻煩啊~~~~~~~~~~~~~~(趴倒)
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,437 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
Hi there !

CHAS's Hard
It can seems nicely ^^
SPOILER

01:01:978 (4) - add finish
01:30:247 (3) - remove clap from the finish
01:30:824 (4) - add clap
01:32:170 (1) - remove clap, add whistle
01:32:362 (2) - add clap

Normal
00:14:477 (1) - remove clap
00:14:669 (2) - add clap at start of slider
00:16:015 (6) - add whistle at the start. Remove whistle from the end
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - make it 1/2 early , imho.

Easy
00:40:246 (4) - too hard for easy. make 1/2 later.
00:55:054 (3,4) - try to make slider at place of this notes.
01:16:977 (4) - add finish, remove whistle
01:23:900 (4) - remove clap from the finish
02:02:746 (5) - remove clap, add whistle
02:02:938 (6) - remove clap
02:31:015 (4) - remove note
02:31:208 (5) - remove note
02:31:400 (1) - start it on to 02:31:015 and finish at the 02:33:131

Uh, Star. Keep working :3
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

Aleks719 wrote:

Hi there !

CHAS's Hard
It can seems nicely ^^
SPOILER

01:01:978 (4) - add finish
01:30:247 (3) - remove clap from the finish
01:30:824 (4) - add clap
01:32:170 (1) - remove clap, add whistle
01:32:362 (2) - add clap
all fixed!~
Thank you for mod :) :)

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
Normal

00 09 092 maybe add note
01 16 785 ^
01 18 323 ^
01 18 515 maybe add clap
01 21 208 ^
01 31 785 add finish, i think
01 33 515 maybe add clap
02 02 939 add finish, i think
02 03 323 add note, i think
02 15 246 maybe add clap
02 16 592 ^
02 33 900 add finish, i think

Hard
00 09 092 maybe add clap note
00 46 208 add finish
00 58 323 add clap
01 29 092 maybe add clap note
01 49 092 maybe add finish too
01 52 201 maybe add whistle too
01 53 708 add clap

star then !
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

artpiggo wrote:

Hard
00 09 092 maybe add clap note no.
00 46 208 add finish fixed
00 58 323 add clap fixed
01 29 092 maybe add clap note no.
01 49 092 maybe add finish too no. i think clap is good
01 52 201 maybe add whistle too 1:52:201??
01 53 708 add clap no.
thank you for mod :)


最新的 :)
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

Aleks719 wrote:

Hi there !

Normal
00:14:477 (1) - remove clap
00:14:669 (2) - add clap at start of slider
00:16:015 (6) - add whistle at the start. Remove whistle from the end
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - make it 1/2 early , imho. this looks crazy for me...
others all fixed.
Easy
00:40:246 (4) - too hard for easy. make 1/2 later.
00:55:054 (3,4) - try to make slider at place of this notes.
01:16:977 (4) - add finish, remove whistle
01:23:900 (4) - remove clap from the finish
02:02:746 (5) - remove clap, add whistle
02:02:938 (6) - remove clap
02:31:015 (4) - remove note
02:31:208 (5) - remove note
02:31:400 (1) - start it on to 02:31:015 and finish at the 02:33:131
all fixed.
Uh, Star. Keep working :3
thanks for modding!

artpiggo wrote:

Normal

00 09 092 maybe add note
01 16 785 ^
01 18 323 ^
01 18 515 maybe add clap
01 21 208 ^
01 31 785 add finish, i think
01 33 515 maybe add clap
02 02 939 add finish, i think
02 03 323 add note, i think
02 15 246 maybe add clap
02 16 592 ^
02 33 900 add finish, i think
all fixed.
star then !
thanks for modding!and notes adding!
the new improved normal is more marks-giving than before.
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
้hi hi :3

[General]
bad news.... I don't agree the way you set the same slider velocity in [Easy] and [Normal] both 1.0 =3=
^ this issue may trouble you in nearly future lol
TAG : ending single

[Easy]
00:25:439(2) - make this slider straight like (3)
00:41:015 - make more rest space for beginner... start it as 00:41:400 end at 00:42:746
00:49:669(2) - move the end of this slider down 1 grid lv3
00:52:746(4) - ^ same

[Normal]
00:40:631(1,2) - a duplet like this is really fit with normal hitsound(remove whistle and reduce volume a bit)
00:41:208 - extend slider to 00:43:131 sounds nice
01:43:515(1) - remove new combo
01:44:092(5) - new combo
01:45:054 - new combo
01:48:900 - extend to 01:50:823 sounds nice

[CHAS's Hard]
00:38:900(1) - remove new combo here
00:40:054(8) - new combo here
00:40:631(1) - remove new combo
01:09:669 - extend to 01:10:439?
01:26:400(4) - new combo
01:45:054(1) - remove new combo
01:45:439(1) - new combo
01:46:592 - remove new combo
01:47:554 - new combo
01:58:515 - now combo
02:01:785 - new combo
02:15:246(5) - a bit offscreen ;w; it would be nice if you replace this one...

I really love this song x3~
*shoot kudo star*

ask me if you want my insane diff :3
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
410 posts
Joined November 2009
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
[General]

Check if ALL spinners have the "New Combo" marked.

[Easy]

AR -1

01:49:477 (5,1) - A jump ? It's an Easy one, but not for an Easy difficult. If was a Normal, could stay. Think of a change.

[Normal]

AR -1
OD -1

00:14:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern for a normal it's a little too much. Change it? For one like these 00:26:785 (1,2,3,4).
01:01:400 (1) - 2 beats instead?
01:22:169 (1) - ^
01:34:477 (1) - ^
02:01:977 (4) - A single beat instead?
02:02:362 (5) - ^
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5) and 02:05:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - A little much for a normal.
02:15:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[CHAS' Hard]

It's fine... for an Insane. Change the name of the diff is easier to change several things like AR, OD and some jumps.

---------------------------------------------------

That's it.
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

vincerio wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
00:38:900(1) - remove new combo here fixed
00:40:054(8) - new combo here fixed
00:40:631(1) - remove new combo fixed
01:09:669 - extend to 01:10:439? no.
01:26:400(4) - new combo no.
01:45:054(1) - remove new combo no.
01:45:439(1) - new combo ^
01:46:592 - remove new combo ^
01:47:554 - new combo ^
01:58:515 - now combo fixed
02:01:785 - new combofixed
02:15:246(5) - a bit offscreen ;w; it would be nice if you replace this one... ok~
thank you for mod :)

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[General]

Check if ALL spinners have the "New Combo" marked. fixed......

[CHAS' Hard]

It's fine... for an Insane. Change the name of the diff is easier to change several things like AR, OD and some jumps. this diff played easy lol
thank you for mod

雖然我不知道spinner加上new combo有什麼效果 233

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

vincerio wrote:

้hi hi :3

[General]
bad news.... I don't agree the way you set the same slider velocity in [Easy] and [Normal] both 1.0 =3= tried 1.2.
^ this issue may trouble you in nearly future lol
TAG : ending single

[Easy]
00:25:439(2) - make this slider straight like (3) fixed
00:41:015 - make more rest space for beginner... start it as 00:41:400 end at 00:42:746 then the note afterwards is quite difficult.
00:49:669(2) - move the end of this slider down 1 grid lv3 fixed
00:52:746(4) - ^ same fixed?

[Normal]
00:40:631(1,2) - a duplet like this is really fit with normal hitsound(remove whistle and reduce volume a bit)
00:41:208 - extend slider to 00:43:131 sounds nice no.
01:43:515(1) - remove new combo
01:44:092(5) - new combo
01:45:054 - new combo
01:48:900 - extend to 01:50:823 sounds nice no.
others are fixed.
I really love this song x3~
*shoot kudo star*

ask me if you want my insane diff :3
what?
suddenly i thought it's time to add an insane...
as the "Hard" i can pass with an A
so thanks a loooot.
and thanks for the pink star.

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[General]

Check if ALL spinners have the "New Combo" marked.

[Easy]

AR -1

01:49:477 (5,1) - A jump ? It's an Easy one, but not for an Easy difficult. If was a Normal, could stay. Think of a change.
all fixed.
[Normal]

AR -1
OD -1

00:14:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern for a normal it's a little too much. Change it? For one like these 00:26:785 (1,2,3,4).
01:01:400 (1) - 2 beats instead?
01:22:169 (1) - ^
01:34:477 (1) - ^
02:01:977 (4) - A single beat instead?
02:02:362 (5) - ^
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5) and 02:05:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - A little much for a normal. ehh...
02:15:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
others all fixed.
That's it.
thanks for modding!
--------------------------------------
at this time i can pass only 3 insane diffs...
so CHAS' hard must be a hard.
vincerio's insane is an insane.
--------------------------------------
and i give a kd to CHAS by mistake....
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vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
My insane ready!~ :)

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [vincerio's Insane].osu
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS
幫我在難度名稱改成 CHAS's Hard
現在應該無誤吧...?

話說怎麼給我kd.. :?:
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

CHAS wrote:

幫我在難度名稱改成 CHAS's Hard
現在應該無誤吧...?
英文文法博大精深...
話說怎麼給我kd.. :?:
誤中了.
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
[General]

CHAS's hard rename CHAS' Hard

00:43:515 - start kiai time and finish 01:07:939

01:51:208 - start kiai time and finish 02:03:323

02:25:054 - start kiai time and finish 02:33:131

all diffs

[Easy]

00:41:400 (1) - spinner start here 00:41:208 (1)

02:31:015 (1) - finish here 02:32:939

02:26:208 (3) - Move the slider here 02:26:592 (3) and 02:26:208 (3) - add circle

[Normal]

01:45:054 (1,2,3,4) - why not make them equal and symmetrical? It looks like



[CHAS's Hard]

00:31:015 (4) - a good time to slow down - to here 00:40:055 (1)

here is not appropriate, such tricks with spinner >_>

00:49:862 (1,1,1) - (×̯×)

02:17:555 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - (×̯×)

[vincerio's Insane]

00:28:323 (7) - start spinner and finish 00:29:477

01:03:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - o.o (♥)

02:01:015 (6,7) - so game is interesting and beautiful



02:36:592 (1) - (×̯×)

I liked it :)

S T A R ~
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
update :3

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [vincerio's Insane].osu
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[General]

CHAS's hard rename CHAS' Hard .

[CHAS's Hard]

00:31:015 (4) - a good time to slow down - to here 00:40:055 (1) i think this ok.

here is not appropriate, such tricks with spinner >_> i think this ok.

00:49:862 (1,1,1) - (×̯×)

02:17:555 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - (×̯×)
:) Thank you



justnobody你打算加kiai time麼?也有人討厭kiai time的說 我先不加kiai time 看看你意向 :)

話說為什麼我的是CHAS' Hard...
究竟何時加s 何時不加s chas表示完全不明白(打滾)
麻煩了你了 justnobody..幫我再改回CHAS' Hard.......
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[General]

CHAS's hard rename CHAS' Hard got it.

00:43:515 - start kiai time and finish 01:07:939

01:51:208 - start kiai time and finish 02:03:323

02:25:054 - start kiai time and finish 02:33:131

all diffs

[Easy]

00:41:400 (1) - spinner start here 00:41:208 (1)

02:31:015 (1) - finish here 02:32:939

02:26:208 (3) - Move the slider here 02:26:592 (3) and 02:26:208 (3) - add circle
all fixed.
[Normal]

01:45:054 (1,2,3,4) - why not make them equal and symmetrical? It looks like



no, but copied from something in 00m3Xs

I liked it :)

S T A R ~
thanks for modding!

CHAS wrote:

justnobody你打算加kiai time麼?也有人討厭kiai time的說 我先不加kiai time 看看你意向 :)

話說為什麼我的是CHAS' Hard...
究竟何時加s 何時不加s chas表示完全不明白(打滾)
麻煩了你了 justnobody..幫我再改回CHAS' Hard.......
kiai我這邊沒打算加哦
CHAS' Hard這個...呃...
大概是CHA"S"的關係
好像是s尾的都該這樣
例如 friend's 和 friends' 這樣
話說這變成英文文法課了...
還有我又一次覺得我的id很沒品味...
Xeno_old
120 posts
Joined June 2009
Xeno_old
Good job! -.-
Star!!

[Normal]
00:09:092 (6) - Add clap :>
00:21:400 (5) - Add clap
00:57:362 (5) - End on red tick then repeat once?

[CHA's Hard]
00:41:785 (4) - New combo

[vincerio's Insane]
00:25:054 (1) - Remove New combo
00:32:362 (3) - add clap
00:32:362 (3) - Add clap
00:35:439 (4) - Add clap
00:36:977 (1) - Add clap
00:37:746 (3) - Add clap at start of slider
00:38:515 (5) - Add clap at start of slider
00:39:285 (7) - Add clap at start of slider
00:40:054 (3) - Add clap
00:40:631 (5,6,7,8) - Add claps
00:42:169 (1,2,3,4) - Add claps
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS

Xeno32 wrote:

[CHA's Hard]
00:41:785 (4) - New combo no.
thank you ~ :)







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我的名稱變成CHA了lol~~
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

Xeno32 wrote:

Good job! -.-
Star!!

[Normal]
00:09:092 (6) - Add clap :> fixed.
00:21:400 (5) - Add clap fixed.
00:57:362 (5) - End on red tick then repeat once? repeat once looks odd to me but tried repeat twice.
thanks you very much!
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
[vincerio's Insane]
00:25:054 (1) - Remove New combo
00:32:362 (3) - add clap
00:32:362 (3) - Add clap
00:35:439 (4) - Add clap
00:36:977 (1) - Add clap
00:37:746 (3) - Add clap at start of slider
00:38:515 (5) - Add clap at start of slider
00:39:285 (7) - Add clap at start of slider
00:40:054 (3) - Add clap
00:40:631 (5,6,7,8) - Add claps
00:42:169 (1,2,3,4) - Add claps
no thank you
Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
sorry for late mod reply.. ;/

There's just my suggestions, cuz I think the beatmap is already very nice ^^

Easy:
02:18:515 (1) maybe give here the same slider and note as in 02:16:977?
02:31:015 end this spinner at 02:33:131

Normal:
00:22:939 (3) 1 grid up
01:02:169 (5) maybe make thiss lider look nicer?
01:03:701 (4) ^
02:31:208 same as in Easy diff?

Hard:
01:28:131 (4) 2 grids up, 1 grid right
01:28:323 (5) 2 grids up, 2 grids right
01:40:054 maybe add finish hitsound? it sounds nice^^
01:41:592 ^
01:43:131 ^
01:44:669 ^

vincerio's Insane:

:OO grid lvl 4 ;OO im not so good at it but I try :D :)

00:05:246 (2,3,4) 1 grid right on grid lvl 4?
00:46:015 (10,11) 1 grid up?
02:14:669 (3) 1 grid down?
02:14:862 (4,5,6) 1 grid down?
02:15:150 (6) 1 grid left?

star! :))
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

ShiroKitty wrote:

sorry for late mod reply.. ;/

There's just my suggestions, cuz I think the beatmap is already very nice ^^

Easy:
02:18:515 (1) maybe give here the same slider and note as in 02:16:977?
02:31:015 end this spinner at 02:33:131

Normal:
00:22:939 (3) 1 grid up
01:02:169 (5) maybe make thiss lider look nicer?
01:03:701 (4) ^
02:31:208 same as in Easy diff?

star! :))
all fixed.
thanks a lot...
-----------------------------------
happy chinese new year.
i'll be out for two or three days.
mod post below will be checked at 05/02/2011.
-----------------------------------
next post is 100th.
winber1
4,519 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
General

--sometimes there are random claps in the middle of a whistle sections (speaking of normal and easy, didn't pay that much attention to hitsounds in hard and insane). In my opinion, claps should be used in systematic pattern (even if it's some extremely long, almost incomprehensible pattern). I do realize that you use claps in a specific phrase (like when you have two 1/2 notes together), but other times it's just a clap (or a few claps) in a whistle pattern section. At least that's what it strikes me as. Maybe I'm just not paying enough attention. 00:13:515 in easy would be one example I have.


Vincero's Insane

00:01:977(1) - 1 grid left
00:03:515(1,2,3,4) - makes notes line up vertically? or make all other 1,2,3,4 patterns slant slightly like this one
00:05:054(1) - 1 grid left
00:18:900(x) - add a note
00:31:592(6) - new combo, then remove new combo at 00:31:785
00:52:362(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - accelerated spacing doesn't make much sense here. The music is not reaching a climax at this point in time. It IS reaching somewhat of a climax at 00:54:285 to 00:55:823
01:47:939(4) - i don't know about you, but I would put this farther away from the new combo. I guess it's fine tho
02:06:015(x) - i would really recommend putting a note here. If you do not want to add a note, then please consider making the slider at 02:05:246 start at 02:05:054
02:36:400(1) - i would move this note probably somewhere in the middle to make another jump at the end.


CHAS' Hard

00:18:708(4,1,2,3) - is there any reason why the spacing is larger than the rest of the section? I don't mind the spacing at all, but i just can't help but notice the difference in spacing.
00:53:515(spinner) - i would not silence this, but it's still your decision
01:04:285(spinner) - i would end the spinner here with a finish
02:19:862(spinner) - spinner ends in awkward spot.

Normal

00:14:285(4) - start the new combo here
02:19:669(break) - umm.. very awkward break in my opinion. You don't have to have notes for that echo, but i think at least put some notes starting at 02:21:400

Easy

00:13:515(2...etc) - either get rid of these claps or add claps from 00:25:823 to the spinner
00:30:439(spinner) - end spinner here
02:21:400(break) - same as in normal, maybe add some notes starting here

Nice map. :D

Star~
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

winber1 wrote:

General

--sometimes there are random claps in the middle of a whistle sections (speaking of normal and easy, didn't pay that much attention to hitsounds in hard and insane). In my opinion, claps should be used in systematic pattern (even if it's some extremely long, almost incomprehensible pattern). I do realize that you use claps in a specific phrase (like when you have two 1/2 notes together), but other times it's just a clap (or a few claps) in a whistle pattern section. At least that's what it strikes me as. Maybe I'm just not paying enough attention. 00:13:515 in easy would be one example I have.

that's why i think the claps there looks strange...
but sometimes i would feel bored when the hitsounds are like "don don don clap don don don clap ....."
that's why i tried to make it different...
anyway it does look strange and i've fixed them.

Normal

00:14:285(4) - start the new combo here
02:19:669(break) - umm.. very awkward break in my opinion. You don't have to have notes for that echo, but i think at least put some notes starting at 02:21:400

Easy

00:13:515(2...etc) - either get rid of these claps or add claps from 00:25:823 to the spinner
00:30:439(spinner) - end spinner here
02:21:400(break) - same as in normal, maybe add some notes starting here

Nice map. :D

Star~
all fixed.
thanks for the advice for hitsounds.
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CHAS-san~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
vincerio-san~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
nothing changed...
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
i've been killing the ugly slider left in the normal.

now this is probably the final version.
or maybe some more modding...
now rush.
i suddenly want 70sp.
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
554 posts
Joined March 2010
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
找不出客观的问题哎，纯支持下。
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Aaah, what happened?

[General]
I'm not seeing a reason for "lazy" to be in the tags.
Also remove ending and single from tags.

[Easy]
01:51:208 (1) - I'd rather not see a stack like this in an easy. It may be difficult to discern the rhythm like this.
02:15:823 (2) - Finish on start?
02:25:054 (2,4) - ^ There are a bunch of others, if you feel that they work with the general hit sound pattern you've used.

[Normal]
01:25:054 - Surprised you didn't go with the "だめだめ" again

[CHAS' Hard]
Wish there was a break (01:10:054 - would be a good place for one), but otherwise fine.

Edit: Ah hell, didn't notice the new difficulty. I'll mod it later and let you know. >_>
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- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
thanks kissfly for checking.
and...

Garven wrote:

Aaah, what happened?

[General]
I'm not seeing a reason for "lazy" to be in the tags.not removed.
Also remove ending and single from tags. removed.

on post #49:

frost-b-spec wrote:

[General]
suggestion
add tags : lazy,cover
as i know this song is somewhat an old song in japan.
see: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VyQkccOwWrc
if this is not a reason then i will remove it.



[Easy]
01:51:208 (1) - I'd rather not see a stack like this in an easy. It may be difficult to discern the rhythm like this. fixed.
02:15:823 (2) - Finish on start?fixed.
02:25:054 (2,4) - ^ There are a bunch of others, if you feel that they work with the general hit sound pattern you've used. probably fixed...but i sometimes think that they are a bit noisy.

[Normal]
01:25:054 - Surprised you didn't go with the "だめだめ" again oh my fault. fixed.
:)
and you probably have forgot to check vincerio's insane.
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Bleh, I'll just make a new post.

[vincerio's Insane]
00:01:977 (1) - Move left one grid, or 2, 3, and 4 right one grid
00:03:515 (1,2,3,4) - Aaah, these all sliding left on purpose?
00:05:054 (1) - Move left one grid, or 2, 3, and 4 right one grid
02:03:323 (1) - I'm surprised that the intensity of the mapping didn't go down very much compared to the music. :/
02:15:054 (6) - This placed right?
02:28:900 (3,4) - I think it'd be better to go with the vocals instead of the beat here...
02:36:592 (1) - Eh. Doesn't fit imo. Just two beats with the "Thank you!" would be better.
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
vincerio-san~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
..............

and kds are not easy to earn.
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
>.< Wish I modded this earlier :U
found nothing wrong and good luck getting this ranked :D
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Easy

Nice

00:32:362(3) - it may move 1 gird left(lv4)
00:32:362~00:40:823 - i think that those claps might be reduced velume by 15%

here you are

timing

SPOILER
32265,-100,4,2,0,84,0,0
32458,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
33804,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
33996,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
35342,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
35535,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
36881,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
37073,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
37746,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
37842,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
38515,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
38612,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
39189,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
39381,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
40054,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
40150,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
40727,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
40919,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

01:38:900~01:47:939 - same with 00:32:362~00:40:823

timing

SPOILER
100054,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
100150,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
101592,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
101689,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
103131,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
103227,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
104669,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
104765,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
105342,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
105535,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
106112,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
106304,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
106881,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
107073,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
107650,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
107842,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
108131,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
110631,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

02:23:515(5) - change the shape of the slider

Normal

00:32:362~00:40:823 and 01:38:900~01:47:939

i think you need to reduce the volume by 10% or 15% in those sections.

CHAS' Hard

nice

so many spinners =w=

vincerio's Insane

fine~

star...
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
fun map 8-)
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Easy

Nice

00:32:362(3) - it may move 1 gird left(lv4)
00:32:362~00:40:823 - i think that those claps might be reduced velume by 15%

here you are

timing

SPOILER
32265,-100,4,2,0,84,0,0
32458,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
33804,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
33996,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
35342,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
35535,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
36881,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
37073,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
37746,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
37842,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
38515,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
38612,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
39189,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
39381,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
40054,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
40150,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
40727,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
40919,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

01:38:900~01:47:939 - same with 00:32:362~00:40:823

timing

SPOILER
100054,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
100150,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
101592,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
101689,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
103131,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
103227,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
104669,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
104765,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
105342,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
105535,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
106112,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
106304,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
106881,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
107073,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
107650,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
107842,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
108131,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
110631,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

02:23:515(5) - change the shape of the slider

Normal

00:32:362~00:40:823 and 01:38:900~01:47:939

i think you need to reduce the volume by 10% or 15% in those sections.

star...
everything will fixed.
i have to change the codes....
(feeling dizzy)

oh thanks for the star regenz.
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orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[vincerio's Insane] หมันไส้เจ้าของดีพนี้ ว่าจะไม่ม็อดแมพนี้ให้และ =3=
01:35:439 (6) - new combo
02:36:592 (1) - end this spinner at 02:37:746? sound better, imo

other things look fine to me
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
fixed!!

Thanks Garven and onionorioncomet for modding :3

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin [i-pop ver.] (justnobody) [vincerio's Insane].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
probably i'm a bit late.
everything updated.
and push a pink star.
*sigh*
taNa_Coppola
169 posts
Joined August 2009
taNa_Coppola
:oops:
CHAS
97 posts
Joined March 2009
CHAS
SPOILER

Garven wrote:

[CHAS' Hard]
Wish there was a break (01:10:054 - would be a good place for one) no. , but otherwise fine. :)

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Easy

CHAS' Hard

nice

so many spinners =w= 8-) :D
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
val0108
ya o/

[Easy]
01:55:054 (2) - 3grid up.if changes this, please regulate next spacing.

[Normal]
fine

[CHAS's Hard]
fine

[vincerio's Insane]
00:23:515 (10) - new combo
00:24:477 (1) - Remove new combo
00:49:285 (2) - add finish 00:49:669
00:57:169 (9) - new combo?
01:01:977 (3) - add finish
01:56:977 (2) - add finish 01:57:362

nice map~:3
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
val0108's mod
my part all fixed.
waiting for vincerio's response...
*sigh*
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
sorry for late respone :(

I'm now extremely busy...

nothing is changed...

thx!
Saten
Global Moderator
3,871 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Ookami~~

General:
This is some Combo Color suggestions :3
[Colours]
Combo1 : 157,242,121
Combo2 : 255,51,51
Combo3 : 216,81,255
Combo4 : 83,83,255

[Normal]
00:10:246 (2) - Spacing
00:10:631 (3,4) - ^ Also, (3) is overlapping the following (1)
Make it to something like this?
SPOILER
00:12:169 (1,2,3,4) - spacing, due to previous slider
00:13:131 (1) - 1 grid right
00:14:669 (3) - add clap?
00:15:054 (5) - remove clap?
00:22:938 (3) - overlapping (4)
SPOILER
00:25:438 (5) - Add clap at the beginning and at the second repeat
00:26:785 (1,2,3,4) - placement suggestion:
SPOILER
00:53:900 (3) - Whistle
01:20:054 (2) - clap
01:20:823 (5) - Clap at the beginning and at the second repeat, Also remove the clap on the first repeat
01:33:131 (5) - swap the hitsounds on this slider
01:34:669 (2) - whistle

That's for now~
I could probably help you more, but I'm not sure if you like it.
If you do, PM me (probably faster reply if you PM in-game :P)

Starr~
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
My Lazy Post:
Colours all fixed.
Normal (should be) all fixed?

That's more than helpful.
I will call you "Saten-Senpai"!! :P
Saten
Global Moderator
3,871 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Tip: I don't know if you know this but holding Ctrl and left-clicking will create a new curve section on an existing slider :3

Easy
00:15:823 (6) - shape it like this?
SPOILER

[Normal]
00:09:669 (1,2) - place them like this?
SPOILER
00:10:631 (3) - 1 grid right
00:11:785 (4) - you forgot to stack this one
00:21:977 (1) - place it like this
SPOILER
00:34:285 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern suggestion~
SPOILER
00:45:054 (2) - like this?
SPOILER
00:46:592 (1,3) - Make them abit curvy?
SPOILER
01:16:785 (6,7) - spacing
01:17:362 (1) - change it to something like this?
SPOILER
01:41:977 (1,2,3,4) - just like 00:34:285 but mirrored instead
SPOILER


No kudosu for this since I could've posted this on my previous post :P
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
Saten-sama~

oh god i 'm gatting lazier and lazier...

should be all fixed.
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
Hi.Here comes my mod.
The words with Red color means You must fix it.
The words with Blue color means You'd better do it.
The words with Purple color means Just suggetstion.

[General]
BG is 1024X768.Please make it 800X600.
[Vincerio]
00:22:939 (6) new combo color?
00:57:169 (7) new combo color?
00:49:669 (2) add finish?
00:55:823 (2) ^
01:01:977 (3) ^
01:57:362 (2) ^
02:09:669 (3) ^

[CHAS]
00:12:874 useless green line.Delete it.
00:15:951 ^
00:23:035 ^
00:24:958 ^
00:29:958 ur....I think Normal hitsound fits this part.
01:38:804 ^

[Normal]
Increase AR By 1~2?
00:28:515 insert breaktime

[Easy]
Fine.

Nice map.Star~
Saten
Global Moderator
3,871 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten

Mystica wrote:

[General]
BG is 1024X768.Please make it 800X600.
1024x768 is acceptable.
galvenize
919 posts
Joined June 2010
galvenize
[Insane]
Nothing much to point out.
A suggestion:
02:21:400 (7) - Would be so much better if you removed one return and fill the blank with a note at 02:21:977 (x). I kinda slider break because I thought that return slider was identical to the previous two.

[Hard]

Suggestion:
01:58:900 (3) - Make it start at the next red tick at 01:59:092 (x) and fill the newly empty spot with a note at 01:58:900 (x). Flows slightly better since it will play like 01:57:362 (3,4) and 02:00:439 (3,4).
before:
SPOILER
after:
SPOILER

[Normal]

Insert break at 00:28:515?

That's about it.
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -
@Mystica: AR+1 and break added.
@galvenize: break added.

thanks for modding
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!

[Easy]
00:18:515 (1) - This note just dont fit to anything, move it on a red tick or remove it
00:31:208 (1) - Move one tick earlier or make a slider from 00:31:015 to 00:31:592
02:23:515 (5) - start 1 tick earlier

[Normal]
00:14:477 (2) - Start New combo here and remove new combo at (1) fits better to the music imo

[CHAS' Hard]
00:07:555 (5) - New Combo
00:10:632 (5) - ^
00:49:862 (1,1,1) - I hate you
02:17:554 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - Run away or i'll kill you!

[vincerio's Insane]
00:49:862 (3) - move the last slider-point 1 grid left
01:02:169 (4) - last slider-point 1 grid right >.>
02:15:054 (6) - 1 grid left
nazi mods are amazing right?

Great map, i think it's ready to get ranked ^^
Have a Star~
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
- Rche -

KillerRind wrote:

Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!

[Easy]
00:18:515 (1) - This note just dont fit to anything, move it on a red tick or remove it don't think so imo.
00:31:208 (1) - Move one tick earlier or make a slider from 00:31:015 to 00:31:592 fixed.
02:23:515 (5) - start 1 tick earlier got it.

[Normal]
00:14:477 (2) - Start New combo here and remove new combo at (1) fits better to the music imo my fault. fixed

Great map, i think it's ready to get ranked ^^
Have a Star~
thank you very much.
don't mind nazy moddings.
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CHAS-kun~~~~~~~
vincerio-san~~~~~~~~
..................
no response?
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CHAS' diff updated.
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