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Floxytek - Opera

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-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 23. März 2011 at 18:53:32

Artist: Floxytek
Title: Opera
Tags: OnosakiHito hardtek
BPM: 190
Filesize: 4063kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,31 stars, 62 notes)
  2. Hard (4,91 stars, 273 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 441 notes)
  4. Normal (4,06 stars, 122 notes)
  5. Ono's Taiko Oni (4,67 stars, 818 notes)
Download: Floxytek - Opera
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Evil map... evil SB... everything is EVIL

Download: Floxytek - Opera (lennox989) [AdRon Zh3Ro's Opera].osu
Last edited by -Lennox- , edited 52 times in total.
Anto
401 posts
Joined February 2010
Anto
star
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
Impossibliness done.

I just hope this get ranked or approved what so ever...

Download: Floxytek - Opera (lennox989) [AdRon Zh3Ro's Opera].osu
rrtyui
Former osu! Champion: 2014
744 posts
Joined May 2010
rrtyui
~
Scane
Scane
epic map, star~
KanbeKotori
315 posts
Joined May 2009
KanbeKotori
;)
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
Offset: 40.560 Seems better.
NoteKuroi
207 posts
Joined October 2009
NoteKuroi
Star :3"
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
If p3n is a guest mapper,add his nickname to Tags?

[Easy]
00:45:602 - Finish?
00:49:392 (2) - Too close,fix distance.
01:00:760 - Finish?
01:10:865 (1) - ^
01:20:971 - ^
01:41:181 (1) - ^
01:51:286 (1) - ^
02:06:286 (x) - Delete unused timing section.
02:06:602 (x) - ^

[Normal]
00:40:550 (1) - Finish?
01:10:865 - ^
01:21:286 - Why so long break? Could you map something here?
01:41:181 (1) - Finish?
01:51:286 - ^

[Hard]
00:45:602 (1) - Finish?
00:50:655 (3) - ^
01:00:760 (1) - ^
01:04:392 (8) - This note is hardly visible and hard to read,could you place it somewhere else?
01:10:865 (1) - Finish?
01:21:207 - Break again..
01:45:286 (7) - What's with this note? Shouldn't it be closer to (6) like all others in this combo?
01:51:286 (1) - Finish?

[Insane]
00:50:655 - Finish?
01:10:865 - ^
Impossible.

Good job,star.
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

IceBeam wrote:

If p3n is a guest mapper,add his nickname to Tags? Ahh i forgott this >.<


[Normal]
00:40:550 (1) - Finish?
01:10:865 - ^
01:21:286 - Why so long break? Could you map something here?
01:41:181 (1) - Finish?
01:51:286 - ^

[Hard]
00:45:602 (1) - Finish?
00:50:655 (3) - ^
01:00:760 (1) - ^
01:04:392 (8) - This note is hardly visible and hard to read,could you place it somewhere else?
01:10:865 (1) - Finish?
01:21:207 - Break again..
01:45:286 (7) - What's with this note? Shouldn't it be closer to (6) like all others in this combo?
01:51:286 (1) - Finish?

[Insane]
00:50:655 - Finish?
01:10:865 - ^
Impossible. hahahah then don't play Adron's guest diff xD

Good job,star.

All done. And i want do have at least one break so i don't map here..
Snowball
34 posts
Joined August 2009
Snowball
your second map... :o
impressive
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Neko_Ray
aaaa... neko-mod! :3

p3n's easy
126,286 and 126,602 timing (last two) are innecesary

00:44:339 (4): Delete wristle at finish
01:36:760 (1): Delete new combo
01:37:707 (1): ^same

Insane
01:18:602 (6): Delete new combo
01:19:865 (7): ^same
01:20:655 (1): ^ ??

Good song! lml
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
Insane
01:18:602 (6): Delete new combo
01:19:865 (7): ^same
01:20:655 (1): ^ ??

Good song! lml[/quote]

Yea done~



Thx~

Also thx Snowball for the star
p3n
Global Moderator
947 posts
Joined June 2009
p3n

Neko_Ray wrote:

p3n's easy
126,286 and 126,602 timing (last two) are innecesary fixed

00:44:339 (4): Delete wristle at finish think it's personal taste but fixed 2
01:36:760 (1): Delete new combo fixed
01:37:707 (1): ^same fixed
Download: Floxytek - Opera (-Lennox-) [p3n's Easy].osu
LuPiiTa
371 posts
Joined June 2010
LuPiiTa
ok star ☆
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,814 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
Hey~
Darf ich versuchen eine Taiko guest diff. für das Projekt zu erstellen?
Scheint interessant werden zu können. :D
Xeno_old
120 posts
Joined June 2009
Xeno_old
Epic song ;)

Pink Star for Awesome Map
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,814 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
Here is my Taiko guest diff. :)
Thank you for accepting it~
Hope it's okay if you add also my name into the TAG's. :3

I guess it is a 9☆ map.

Download: 25985 Floxytek - Opera.zip
Fabi
1,130 posts
Joined September 2009
Fabi
Here is a star for you, nice done!
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Yo,
hers my mod (finally) ^^

[Storyobard]
SB Load goes very high at 01:00:760

[p3n's Easy]
fine ^^

[Normal]
irc mod~
looks good ^^

[Hard]
irc mod~
01:03:918 (7) - this slider looks kinda weird but ok~
nice~

[Insane]
Very nice :p

Have a Star~
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

KillerRind wrote:

Yo,
hers my mod (finally) ^^

[Storyobard]
SB Load goes very high at 01:00:760
Well i dunno but i guess it's ok.
[p3n's Easy]
fine ^^

[Normal]
irc mod~
looks good ^^

[Hard]
irc mod~
01:03:918 (7) - this slider looks kinda weird but ok~
nice~
It's the super-high-speed-slider of death and destruction.. noe srsly it's fine imo.
[Insane]
Very nice :p

Have a Star~
Thx
ziin
2,632 posts
Joined January 2010
ziin
[storyboard]
please use this loop which is better in time
L,60760,16
F,1,0,158,0.4,0
S,1,0,158,1,1.2
F,1,158,316,0.4,0
S,1,158,316,1,1.2
F,1,316,474,0.4,0
S,1,316,474,1,1.2
F,1,474,632,0.4,0
S,1,474,632,1,1.2
F,1,632,789,0.4,0
S,1,632,789,1,1.2
F,1,789,947,0.4,0
S,1,789,947,1,1.2
F,1,947,1105,0.4,0
S,1,947,1105,1,1.2
F,1,1105,1263,0.4,0
S,1,1105,1263,1,1.2
Or just change it to 158. Unless you want it off time for some reason. Also, there's no reason to have "pulse.jpg" doing the same thing as "eye.jpg".

[general]
the break in the middle is pretty big, You could probably map it on all difficulties, as the song is less than 1.5 minutes long.
It's good practice to make all the difficulties the same lengths, so I would either get rid of the last section on insane, or map the ending on the rest of the maps. Seriously, easy has more draining time than insane...

The only thing left is nazi spacing and maybe some hitsound fixes.

[eazy]
some parts aren't snapped to grid?

[normal]
the clap pattern is 2,4 for like one or two measures, then immediately switches to 1,3.

[hard]
you keep a 2,4 clap pattern most of the way, then go to a 1,3 in the middle.
01:20:023 - claps here sound terrible.
This is pretty difficult for a hard. I think it would be better suited as an insane or hard+.

[insane]
same as before with the clap pattern, but this doesn't sound as bad since you randomly put in in claps.
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

ziin wrote:

[storyboard]
please use this loop which is better in time
L,60760,16
F,1,0,158,0.4,0
S,1,0,158,1,1.2
F,1,158,316,0.4,0
S,1,158,316,1,1.2
F,1,316,474,0.4,0
S,1,316,474,1,1.2
F,1,474,632,0.4,0
S,1,474,632,1,1.2
F,1,632,789,0.4,0
S,1,632,789,1,1.2
F,1,789,947,0.4,0
S,1,789,947,1,1.2
F,1,947,1105,0.4,0
S,1,947,1105,1,1.2
F,1,1105,1263,0.4,0
S,1,1105,1263,1,1.2

Or just change it to 158. Unless you want it off time for some reason. Also, there's no reason to have "pulse.jpg" doing the same thing as "eye.jpg". yes, i need the "pulse.jpg" for this 00:49:234 :D

[general]
the break in the middle is pretty big, You could probably map it on all difficulties, as the song is less than 1.5 minutes long.
It's good practice to make all the difficulties the same lengths, so I would either get rid of the last section on insane, or map the ending on the rest of the maps. Seriously, easy has more draining time than insane...

The only thing left is nazi spacing and maybe some hitsound fixes.

[eazy]
some parts aren't snapped to grid?

[normal]
the clap pattern is 2,4 for like one or two measures, then immediately switches to 1,3.

[hard]
you keep a 2,4 clap pattern most of the way, then go to a 1,3 in the middle.
01:20:023 - claps here sound terrible.
This is pretty difficult for a hard. I think it would be better suited as an insane or hard+.

[insane]
same as before with the clap pattern, but this doesn't sound as bad since you randomly put in in claps.
Well, i think it's fine now.. ( I Don't want to map the part between 01:21:129 - 01:37:392 i'm sorry D: )
Keksi
987 posts
Joined April 2009
Keksi
Keksi's Mod:
Blau : kannst du ändern
Rot : solltest du ändern


[p3n's easy]

00:50:012 : zu viele whistle :s
01:10:090 : ^


Other diffs: IRC mod~
ShaggoN
689 posts
Joined September 2008
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General
  1. Offset +8...at least.
  2. A little overused Kiai imo hmm.
[p3n's Easy]
  1. 00:46:865 (1,2,3) - Spacing hmm.
[Normal]
Everything looks fine :3

[Ono's Taiko Oni]
Everything look fine for me here.

[Hard]
It's too hard compare to regular Hards, but it's very good anyways.

[Insane]
Aaaaand another great stage.

Star from me. Very good map.
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
well done,

I have nothing to say

starrr
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
Thx ShaggoN and T*12
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
Srry can't do a full mod atm due to the mad lag im getting from the SB (on a shitty computer right now)

General
- Remove "techno" from the tags. It will be added to the genera once this gets ranked.

Easy
00:50:031 Remove new combo

Normal
HP AR and OD +2

Also map the breaks, they are WAY too long
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
evil map!! :o
[General]
That sb crashed osu! :O
[Easy]

00:46:873 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - spacing
i suggest to change that break time, it is too long. you can map it from here 01:28:558 by adding a spinner that ends here 01:31:084, after that you can add notes.. :)
let the newbie players play more.

[Normal]
map that break time like in easy

[Hard]
nice diff
just map that break time and everythings fine imo.

[Insane]
00:48:926 (4,5) - spacing
again that break time...
end that final spinner here 02:16:400

overall this map is great, it didn't have major problems.
From me you have a Star.
Good job 8-)
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
SPOILER

Tonoicutzu wrote:

evil map!! :o
[General]
That sb crashed osu! :O :D
[Easy]

00:46:873 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - spacing fixed
i suggest to change that break time, it is too long. you can map it from here 01:28:558 by adding a spinner that ends here 01:31:084, after that you can add notes.. :)
let the newbie players play more.

[Normal]
map that break time like in easy

[Hard]
nice diff
just map that break time and everythings fine imo.

[Insane]
00:48:926 (4,5) - spacing It's a jump :o
again that break time...
end that final spinner here 02:16:400 sounds horrible sorry x.x

overall this map is great, it didn't have major problems.
From me you have a Star.
Good job 8-)
SPOILER
Srry can't do a full mod atm due to the mad lag im getting from the SB (on a shitty computer right now)

General
- Remove "techno" from the tags. It will be added to the genera once this gets ranked. k

Easy
00:50:031 Remove new combo k

Normal
HP AR and OD +2 thats good thx

Also map the breaks, they are WAY too long


Fine.. the breaks are mapped.. Thx guy's
MoonShade
487 posts
Joined February 2010
MoonShade
Star :3
Magicphoenix
2,142 posts
Joined April 2010
Magicphoenix
dieses SB freakt meine Nerven aus oO
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-
@ MoonShade: Danke für'n Stern

@Magiphoenix: Haha ja xD Auch dir danke für den stern

:)
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
UGUU~

Kowai yo~

General
Hmm.. der SB strobe is doch n bissl schnell. N bissl weniger wär... weniger furchteinflößend.
Oder am besten du entfernst den strobe komplett und setzt dem BG n paar pulsierende Augen.
Kiai richtig snappen für ALLE diffs, Kiai Anfang bei 01:00:768 , Ende is OK. 2tes Kiai Anfang 01:41:189 - , Ende 02:01:400 -

Insane
Bissl overmapped. Viele Triplets machen ÜBERHAUPT keinen Sinn, IMO.
z.b
00:47:821 (4,5,6) -
00:48:452 (1,2,3) -
00:52:558 (4,5,6) -
00:53:031 (8,9,10) -
usw.
Die müssen nicht sein... Passt net zur "Musik" ... hört sich besser an wenn du daraus einfach 1/2 Noten machst. Ist aber nur meine Meinung.

Naja, mal zurück zum modden.

00:49:715 (6,7,8) - Claps weg, volume ca. -5% und Finishes da hin.
00:52:637 (5) - remove clap
00:53:031 (8,9) - ^
00:53:189 (10) - add clap
00:53:347 (1) - remove clap
00:53:505 (2) - add clap
00:53:663 (3) - der clap gehört eher aufm slidertick, also remove clap am anfang + ende
00:57:137 (2,4,6) - remove clap
01:13:084 (4) - die triplets von hier an sind OK. Jedoch würde ich die, die davor kommen, entfernen.

Hard
00:50:031 (6) - remove clap am ende
00:50:821 (2) - ^
00:55:084 (1) - remove clap am repeat + ende
01:03:926 (7) - warum ist der slider 1,5x speed? weg damit. also die 2 green lines
01:07:400 (4,5) - remove clap am ende + circle
01:55:558 (8) - (Nazi) den Slidermittelpunkt 1 grid hoch

Normal
00:44:347 (3) - remove clap am ende
00:45:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bewege alle claps um einen weißen tick nach vorne + add clap bei (1)
01:08:110 - weg mit den Greenlines für 1.5x speed
01:08:663 (1) - mach den spinner 3 white ticks kürzer und lass ihn ab 01:09:610 - starten. und setz 3 neue noten.
01:28:637 (1) - starte den ab 01:28:558 - oder eher, warum ist der länger als in Hard+Insane?
01:46:558 (5) - New combo + remove clap
01:46:558 (2) - add clap to end
01:47:505 (1) - remove new combo + remove clap
01:47:821 (4) - add clap to end
01:48:768 (5,7) - remove clap
01:49:084 (6) - add clap
01:49:715 (1) - ^ , remove at end

Easy

-Stellenweise viel zu Einfach, und dann mal viel zu schwer.
-Notenmangel am Anfang. Da kann man noch gut ne weitere Note hinpacken, bei
00:41:189 -
00:42:452 -
00:43:715 - usw.
- 00:49:400 (2,3,4,5,1) - solche Patterns sind nicht sehr Empfehlenswert für ne Easy diff. Man muss hier Approach circles lesen können, was die meisten Nubs natürlich nicht können. Vereinfache dieses Pattern.
- Ab der Kiai Time wirds dann richtig schwer.
01:06:452 (1,2,3,4,5) - overlapping patterns, das selbe wie oben

Map ist ganz OK, aber nocht net ganz reif >w<
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
-Lennox-

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

UGUU~

Kowai yo~

General
Hmm.. der SB strobe is doch n bissl schnell. N bissl weniger wär... weniger furchteinflößend.
Oder am besten du entfernst den strobe komplett und setzt dem BG n paar pulsierende Augen.
Kiai richtig snappen für ALLE diffs, Kiai Anfang bei 01:00:768 , Ende is OK. 2tes Kiai Anfang 01:41:189 - , Ende 02:01:400 -

Insane
Bissl overmapped. Viele Triplets machen ÜBERHAUPT keinen Sinn, IMO.
z.b
00:47:821 (4,5,6) -
00:48:452 (1,2,3) -
00:52:558 (4,5,6) -
00:53:031 (8,9,10) -
usw.
Die müssen nicht sein... Passt net zur "Musik" ... hört sich besser an wenn du daraus einfach 1/2 Noten machst. Ist aber nur meine Meinung.

Naja, mal zurück zum modden.

00:49:715 (6,7,8) - Claps weg, volume ca. -5% und Finishes da hin.
00:52:637 (5) - remove clap
00:53:031 (8,9) - ^
00:53:189 (10) - add clap
00:53:347 (1) - remove clap
00:53:505 (2) - add clap
00:53:663 (3) - der clap gehört eher aufm slidertick, also remove clap am anfang + ende
00:57:137 (2,4,6) - remove clap
01:13:084 (4) - die triplets von hier an sind OK. Jedoch würde ich die, die davor kommen, entfernen.

Hard
00:50:031 (6) - remove clap am ende
00:50:821 (2) - ^
00:55:084 (1) - remove clap am repeat + ende
01:03:926 (7) - warum ist der slider 1,5x speed? weg damit. also die 2 green lines
01:07:400 (4,5) - remove clap am ende + circle
01:55:558 (8) - (Nazi) den Slidermittelpunkt 1 grid hoch

Normal
00:44:347 (3) - remove clap am ende
00:45:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bewege alle claps um einen weißen tick nach vorne + add clap bei (1)
01:08:110 - weg mit den Greenlines für 1.5x speed
01:08:663 (1) - mach den spinner 3 white ticks kürzer und lass ihn ab 01:09:610 - starten. und setz 3 neue noten.
01:28:637 (1) - starte den ab 01:28:558 - oder eher, warum ist der länger als in Hard+Insane?
01:46:558 (5) - New combo + remove clap
01:46:558 (2) - add clap to end
01:47:505 (1) - remove new combo + remove clap
01:47:821 (4) - add clap to end
01:48:768 (5,7) - remove clap
01:49:084 (6) - add clap
01:49:715 (1) - ^ , remove at end

Easy

-Stellenweise viel zu Einfach, und dann mal viel zu schwer.
-Notenmangel am Anfang. Da kann man noch gut ne weitere Note hinpacken, bei
00:41:189 -
00:42:452 -
00:43:715 - usw.
- 00:49:400 (2,3,4,5,1) - solche Patterns sind nicht sehr Empfehlenswert für ne Easy diff. Man muss hier Approach circles lesen können, was die meisten Nubs natürlich nicht können. Vereinfache dieses Pattern.
- Ab der Kiai Time wirds dann richtig schwer.
01:06:452 (1,2,3,4,5) - overlapping patterns, das selbe wie oben

Map ist ganz OK, aber nocht net ganz reif >w<

Einige dinge geändert, einige nicht.. nein ich remove die triples in insane nicht. Ja ich remape Easy und entferne p3n's. Eionige deiner hitsounds find ich nich so toll.. Man sagt anfänger und nicht "nubs". Und achja, ich änder & verkleiner w/e nichts beim SB das bleibt schön so evil. :3 Danke das du dir Zeit genommen hast
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hello~

Storyboard mod!!

Thoughts and Suggestions
- Very evil storyboard indeed xP
- I wonder why is the storyboard inside the .osu's when it's the same in all diffs o-o;

Issues and Adjustments
- Are the scalings in black really necessary? You're only going to see the part of the image that is within the margins of the editor, and this image is just a whole black image, it isn't like it's something we're gonna miss, so the scalings are totally unnnecessary.

01:00:768 - black keeps appearing from here but it suddenly stops at 01:01:715. Is this supposed to be like this? Or is it supposed to finish at 01:00:768?
01:20:347 - eye and pulse stop here. Aren't they supposed to stop at 01:20:979? Remember that spinners in CTB mode aren't opaque and the storyboard will be visible~
02:00:137 - Same problem here with eye and pulse. They should finish at 02:01:400.

Map is nice overall, [Normal] feels pretty hard to be a Normal (all those repeating slider streams aren't that easy xP), but at least you have an easier diff...

Also, you should really move the offset to 2031 ms, the Taiko diff starts way earlier than the offset you have, and it's recommended to not to have notes before the offset =x

Good luck with this!!
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