I GIVE U A STAR!!!
Sallad4ever wrote:
hai again~
[General]
- remove the audio lead-in, it won't be necessary cause there are enough time before the first note This is the countdown right? XD
- sad, promise, Davichi and remix are already in the title and artist box so remove them from tags, try adding the name of the girls
- set preview point in any place that you like, Timing--> Set current position as preview point. Do this for all diff I have no idea how to do this aha XD
- avoid using kiai only for the fountain, place kiai on the chorus is better Not sure how to change the kiai to other stuff other than the fountain XD
[Combo]
when placing a new combo, try to make it follow a fixed pattern. For example place new combo with each stanza change or lyric change. Also the harder the diff the longer the combo count Oki doki, shall do
[Sad Promise]
00:50:196 (1) - too many finish, avoid finish in a succession like this (especially when the volume sample is max) it hurts. Take a look on the other places similar to this and remove them
00:59:888 (2) - lengthen this to the white tick (1/4 beat forward)
01:01:273 (3) - not a good overlap please move this
01:15:119 (1) - hmm maybe lengthen this to red tick (1/2 beat forward)
01:17:426 (x) - add a circle here
[Unfortunate Promise]
00:42:350 (7) - fix the slider, the end is not snapped to any time division
01:14:196 (1) - lengthen by 1/2 beat
01:17:426 (x) - add a circle here
01:28:042 (3) - this circle doesn't really follow anything so consider removing it
01:28:965 (1) - lengthen by 1/2 beat
01:32:196 (x) - add a circle here
02:13:273 (1) - shorten by 1/2 beat
02:16:503 (x) - add circle
02:27:811 (1) - YES!! YAY!!!
02:31:273 (x) - circle
[Forsaken Promise]
00:57:119 (1) - the spacing is too close
01:05:196 (2) - in a case like this you can ignore spacing and put this right under 01:04:734 (1) to make it more neat, same goes for 00:37:965 (3)
01:13:273 (5) - spacing is too close
01:18:811 (6) - instead of placing this under the slider you can stack it under the slider's end or place it else where
01:20:657 (4) - ^
01:28:042 (4) - consider mapping this place, maybe put a spinner?
01:37:965 (6) - spacing is close
03:22:273 (6) - doesn't look very good imo
03:25:272 (1) - an anti jump but not a good one, fix the spacing
make your pattern more neat, try increasing distance spacing to avoid crowded placement and look at this for basic on pretty slider I'll do my best >_<"
Good Luck on your first map~THANK YOU!
lennox989 wrote:
Nice song but a few things that make's me sick D
[General]
Set the hitsound at the center.
Dont use to many hitsound's... it does not fit with the music I'll have to do the hitsound stuff a bit later, been too busy lately
[Shattered Promise]
00:49:734 (7): The slider is a bit invisible D: Try to change this.. I tried to make it more visible but.... check for me? XD
03:26:888 (3): ^
03:32:196 (5): remove this beat I thought it was better not to leave a blank space there but we'll see XD
03:34:042 (5): Maybe you remove this slider and add a spinner? I shoulda done that earlier XD
Change this and i give you a star
Sorry my english is not the best It's fine Thanks for the mod ^_^
good luck.vincerio wrote:
You're Lazy mapper xD
star anyway~
This is amazing I'm learning alot from it ahaha XD THANK YOU! XDvincerio wrote:
here's hitsound example
I'm try using various of hitsound(with the same pattern)
learn from it
and ask me if you have a problem :3
[attachment=0:1ea5b]Davichi - Sad Promise (Remix) (lily_no_hana) [vincerio's hitsound lesson =w=].osu[/attachment:1ea5b]
haha5957 wrote:
[Unfortunate Promise]
00:23;426(4,1) This overlapping doesnt look good D:
01:01:273(3,1) ^
[Forsaken Promise]
00:55:734 (1,2,3,4,5) I'm thinking this is too hard for 3 star map, but not a big deal.Hmmm.......MEH XD
02:16:503(1,2,3,1,2,3,4) ^ It... graduallt gets harder during the course of the song I guess xD
[Shattered Promise]
for overlapping issues, It's not an major thing, but it doesnt look good.
Some looks nice, but some are not.
I'd suggest to fix those beats.
00:16:503(3,4,5) circles overlap slider badly.. (these patterns repeats)
00:18:811(8,9) overlapping.
00:57:580 (7,8,9) bad overlapping..
I see no major errors, but there are some not-looking-good overlappings. Shall fix if i see anymore xD
other then that, I loved your map! thank you for mapping korean song Davichi! <3 Their voices are so awesome but they're too underrated D;
nice work with sound! STAR of course! YAY Thanks!
Hope my mod helped.Its made it look better ;D
senaya wrote:
Suggestions time
[Unfortunate Promise]
00:37:273 (1) - change it's shape to this http://puu.sh/QhD ? You gotta tell me how you post these pictures XD (I'm that nooby)
[Forsaken Promise]
00:27:119 (4) - move this to 00:26:888 and finish it at 00:27:580 like this http://puu.sh/QhJ ?
00:49:734 (4) - clap instead of finish?
01:05:426 (5) - this note it not exactly under the slider end. Use grid level 4 to move it 1 grid down (and 01:05:888 (6) too after that)
[Shattered Promise]
Looks ok to me.
That's all I noticed, good luck Thanks !!!
Giorgos wrote:
Unfortunate Promise:
Well,I don't know what to say here - for me here is all right. Just a little advice - it is TOO easy,maybe you should add some circles in some moments of the song? Ok, its made just the tinsy bit harder XD
Well,what else can I say..actually,I don't like some of your sliders..for example this slider on Shattered Promise difficulty - 03:25:734. You have a lot of such sliders during this song. Maybe you should change them? Yeah, no one likes my sliders unless they're straight D; (But thats boring! XD) I'll do my best to change some
Anyway,nice song Star! THANKS! ;D
HakuNoKaemi wrote:
[Unfortunate Promise]
It's a Beginner ? if not make it a little harder adding some hit circle in between other like in 00:20:657 (1,2,3) - you could add a hit in 00:21:119 and 00:22:042 Done ;D
[Forsaken Promise]
Many of these mods I didn't really follow... and kinda turned into something else I'm sorry XD If nobody likes it the way it is now I guess I'll try change it again....
map it to the end? I've said this... too many times... SOON! XD (When I'm not too busy) XD
Thank you all for your stars and mods and thanks to all who just come to give a star XDwinber1 wrote:
Shattered
00:37:042(1) - idk about you, but I would follow the vocals and place three 1/4 beats here Yup, sounds better now thanks ;D
00:57:811(9) - there is no vibrato here (there is a tiny vibrato in the song at 00:58:503) in the song and this just runs over many vocal beats. I don't think it fits very well. I changed it a bit but if you still don't like it, I'll change it again to something else XD
01:16:734(1) - at this point in time, the backgroun music seems more important musically than the vocals. In my opinion, it's a little hard to hit this note at the right time when there's this weird 1/3 business going on. Uhh... *sweats* >_<"
03:37:042(spinner) - i'd make this silence completely, and i would get rid of the finish I get sooo many opinions on how to end this O_O"
nicely made beatmap.
star~ THANKS! ;D
HAHAHA XD A star is great! Thanks! XD You probably may have found heaps of things if I put myself in your queue earlier, this beatmap has changed quite a bit XDShiroKitty wrote:
!! )
I'm trying to mod this beatmpap but something is telling me that I won't find anything, hih )
Unfortunate Promise:
Nice^^
Forsaken Promise:
Nothing found
Shattered Promise:
Ymmm.. Great
Yhh, I told Ya.. xDDD No Kudosu pls ^^
Star! ^^