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(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)
Shattered Promise
00:21:580 (7,8) - make them farther apart, so that the rhythm here is easier to recognize
00:33:350 (3) - the reversearrow shouldn't be hidden
00:42:119 (1,2) - don't use normal-sample to follow the lyric. x.x
00:47:196 (8,9) - I don't think you need this kind of arrangement and rhythm here. it makes no sence
00:53:657 (5,1) - it's no rhythm
00:57:811 (3) - end it on a white line
01:13:157 (5) - start and end it 1/4 later
01:26:426 (1,2) - I think there should be some notes on white line
01:31:503 (1,2) - make no sence. try not to follow the lyric
01:33:350 (3) - remove finish
01:37:965 (6) - you need rhythm here
02:19:850 (1) - 1/4 later
02:21:811 (1,2) - farther apart
02:29:657 (6) - end it on a red line or white line
03:04:388 (1) - it's awkward, and I think there should be a note on 03:04:273
03:13:042 (5) - end it on a red line or white line
Forsaken Promise
00:18:801 (6,1,2,3) - spacing
01:45:570 (1,2,3) - make them not touch each other
02:01:031 (1,2,3) - space them even
02:07:262 (9,10,1) - spacing
02:08:416 (1,2,3) - even
02:46:493 - consider ending this diff here?
Unfortunate Promise
00:23:416 (1) - end it on a red line or a white line
(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)
Shattered Promise
00:21:580 (7,8) - make them farther apart, so that the rhythm here is easier to recognize
00:33:350 (3) - the reversearrow shouldn't be hidden
00:42:119 (1,2) - don't use normal-sample to follow the lyric. x.x
00:47:196 (8,9) - I don't think you need this kind of arrangement and rhythm here. it makes no sence
00:53:657 (5,1) - it's no rhythm
00:57:811 (3) - end it on a white line
01:13:157 (5) - start and end it 1/4 later
01:26:426 (1,2) - I think there should be some notes on white line
01:31:503 (1,2) - make no sence. try not to follow the lyric
01:33:350 (3) - remove finish
01:37:965 (6) - you need rhythm here
02:19:850 (1) - 1/4 later
02:21:811 (1,2) - farther apart
02:29:657 (6) - end it on a red line or white line
03:04:388 (1) - it's awkward, and I think there should be a note on 03:04:273
03:13:042 (5) - end it on a red line or white line
Forsaken Promise
00:18:801 (6,1,2,3) - spacing
01:45:570 (1,2,3) - make them not touch each other
02:01:031 (1,2,3) - space them even
02:07:262 (9,10,1) - spacing
02:08:416 (1,2,3) - even
02:46:493 - consider ending this diff here?
Unfortunate Promise
00:23:416 (1) - end it on a red line or a white line