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Davichi - Sad Promise (Remix)

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lily_no_hana
138 posts
Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
lily_no_hana
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, 17 February 2011 at 12:28:24 AM

Artist: Davichi
Title: Sad Promise (Remix)
Tags: seulpeun tajim amaranth kang min kyung lee hae ri k-pop
BPM: 130
Filesize: 6752kb
Play Time: 03:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Forsaken Promise (3.03 stars, 248 notes)
  2. Shattered Promise (4.69 stars, 392 notes)
  3. Unfortunate Promise (1.05 stars, 148 notes)
Download: Davichi - Sad Promise (Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Anybody up for a storyboard making or helping with just a few general effects? xD

08/12/10 - EASY (Unfortunate) COMPLETE!!!
08/12/10 - NORMAL (Forsaken) COMPLETE!!!
14/12/10 - HARD (Shattered) COMPLETE!!!

Edits:
27/12/10 - Sandpig Mods added :)
28/12/10 - Changed note position at 01:09:339 and fixed notes at 03:04:273 for Forsaken Promise
- Moved note postions and slider lengths in a few places for all promises ;D
29/12/10 - Sallad4ever Mods added to all promises ;)
30/12/10 - Hyguys Mods added to all promises ;) I tried my best with the hook shape slider.... XD
31/12/10 - Changed tags, Done as much as I can for Weezy's and Sallad4ever's Mods :)
01/01/11 - Added lennox989's Mods, changed background picture sizes
02/01/11 - Fixed a couple of sliders and made some parts look neater for Shattered Promise
22/01/11 - wmfchris's and H-boy's mods done
23/01/11 - CrimmiSkye and artpiggo's mods added
24/01/11 - Sallad4ever mods added
27/01/11 - Wiinter's mod added
28/01/11 - Vincerio's, xierbaliti, Dusty's and thekillerhjkhjk's mods added
31/02/11 - lkp's and sonnyc's mods added
01/02/11 - DragonSparta's, theowest's, haha5957's and senaya's mods added
02/02/11 - Giorgo's, HakuNoKaemi's and winber1's mods added =]
05/02/11 - Chamelepeace710's, NatsumeRin's, ZLOdeuka's, k3nsh1n_H1mur4's, Gezoda's mods added
06/02/11 - Fixed Shattered Promise's spacing distance to 1.4x
07/02/11 - Omega's mods added
08/02/11 - Some pics added for effects ;D Sizes may not be right...?
08/02/11 - sico91212's and pieguy1372's mods added
10/02/11 - al2e10's mods added =]
14/02/11 - Hushu's and Leorda's mods added
16/02/11 - Revengexsoyah's mods added
Last edited by lily_no_hana , edited 246 times in total.
_llkey_18
199 posts
Joined September 2009
_llkey_18
BPM = 130
offset = 4,057

and resnap all notes
S h i a
397 posts
Joined December 2009
S h i a
[Overall]
1) BPM 130 .offset 350

[Easy]
change BPM and offsset first. then

00:32:196 add break time here
00:40:042 add note or push slider here
01:13:237 change this note into a slider. quite blank here.XD
01:45:580 snap to 1/3 then like this. http://puu.sh/wkB

Star (Reason : I like your song)
lily_no_hana
138 posts
Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
lily_no_hana
Wait.. which offset do I use? XD and for which level? all easy normal and hard?
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Shattered Promise

00:21:580 (7,8) - make them farther apart, so that the rhythm here is easier to recognize
00:33:350 (3) - the reversearrow shouldn't be hidden
00:42:119 (1,2) - don't use normal-sample to follow the lyric. x.x
00:47:196 (8,9) - I don't think you need this kind of arrangement and rhythm here. it makes no sence
00:53:657 (5,1) - it's no rhythm
00:57:811 (3) - end it on a white line
01:13:157 (5) - start and end it 1/4 later
01:26:426 (1,2) - I think there should be some notes on white line
01:31:503 (1,2) - make no sence. try not to follow the lyric
01:33:350 (3) - remove finish
01:37:965 (6) - you need rhythm here
02:19:850 (1) - 1/4 later
02:21:811 (1,2) - farther apart
02:29:657 (6) - end it on a red line or white line
03:04:388 (1) - it's awkward, and I think there should be a note on 03:04:273
03:13:042 (5) - end it on a red line or white line


Forsaken Promise

00:18:801 (6,1,2,3) - spacing
01:45:570 (1,2,3) - make them not touch each other
02:01:031 (1,2,3) - space them even
02:07:262 (9,10,1) - spacing
02:08:416 (1,2,3) - even
02:46:493 - consider ending this diff here?


Unfortunate Promise

00:23:416 (1) - end it on a red line or a white line
lily_no_hana
138 posts
Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
lily_no_hana
Shattered Promise

00:42:119 (1,2) - don't use normal-sample to follow the lyric. x.x
01:26:426 (1,2) - I think there should be some notes on white line

Forsaken Promise

00:18:801 (6,1,2,3) - spacing
01:45:570 (1,2,3) - make them not touch each other
02:01:031 (1,2,3) - space them even
02:07:262 (9,10,1) - spacing
02:08:416 (1,2,3) - even
02:46:493 - consider ending this diff here?

The ones I left here I did change but can you re-check them if I did it right? Thanks!! :) For some of the spacing, it doesn't follow the distance snap either... is that ok?

EDIT: If I make the diff longer for the foresaken promise, is it ok to copy and paste from old sections and just flip them? Or Should I make completely new sections? XD Thank you!! ;)
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
in principle the mapper should follow the distance snap in all diff. but it is not strict in Hard and Insane , you can use jumps or more kinds of spacing distance there. for Normal and Easy it is recommanded that you have no more than 2 spacing distance and don't use different spacing distance at the same time. Jump should be avoid in Easy. I can accept little jump in Normal but only if it doesn't confuse the player and seems not so hard to reach.
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
ok let's do this!!

[General]
- set the BPM and offset of all levels/difficulties into the same number --> BPM=130 & offset=350
- always resnap all notes when changing BPM or offset. Timing-->Resnap all notes
- generally, SV (slider velocity) should increase according to the diff so, higher level should have faster SV
- press ctrl+shift+A to see any errors in the map, but it's not always right (especially spacing)
- use grid level 3 to avoid misplaced errors. View-->Grid Level-->3

[Unfortunate Promise]&[Forsaken Promise]
please change the BPM & offset of these diffs, changing timing is a very major mod so make sure to repair all of the circles and slider

[Shattered Promise]
00:59:657 (4,5,6) - not a good overlap, replace 5 & 6 so it won't be under 4
01:33:350 (3) - this very short slider doesn't sound very good, change it into a single slider or make 01:32:888 (2) into slider that last until 01:33:350
01:34:503 (3,4) - again, this sounds very weird :o
01:36:580 (4) - a circle overlapping a repeat arrow is bad~
02:12:350 (4,5) - try replace this with a slider that start from 02:12:350 to 02:12:811 and please map the break after these notes, there are too many breaks :x
02:21:811 (1,2) - uhh...I'm sure you know by now
02:59:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - kiai spam is not allowed
03:03:812 (7) - a 1/4 slider like this is not necessary here
03:16:965 - please map this break
consider mapping until the vocal is over

this is it for now, PM me back after you change the timing and I'll mod the rest

EDIT: If I make the diff longer for the foresaken promise, is it ok to copy and paste from old sections and just flip them? Or Should I make completely new sections?

Hyguys
1,272 posts
Joined May 2010
Hyguys
Hi.
Remove '','' and ''lily_no_hana'' from the tags
Add more hitsounds.

Easy
Make Rhytm (Normal , Clap , Normal , Clap , Normal , Clap)
Too much litlle kiai
00:17:888 Clap
00:19:734 ^
00:20:668 Remove clap on (3) then add on (4) then remove on (5) xD
00:25:273 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/44240 sounds better
01:00696 O.o 1/4? D:

Normal
+1 circle size

Hard
+1 Circle size , -1 Aproach Rate , -2 Overall Dificullty , -3 HP drain rate

asjdfkhlsdjklhsdf end mod
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
hai again~

[General]
- remove the audio lead-in, it won't be necessary cause there are enough time before the first note
- sad, promise, Davichi and remix are already in the title and artist box so remove them from tags, try adding the name of the girls
- set preview point in any place that you like, Timing--> Set current position as preview point. Do this for all diff
- avoid using kiai only for the fountain, place kiai on the chorus is better

[Combo]
when placing a new combo, try to make it follow a fixed pattern. For example place new combo with each stanza change or lyric change. Also the harder the diff the longer the combo count

[Sad Promise]
00:50:196 (1) - too many finish, avoid finish in a succession like this (especially when the volume sample is max) it hurts. Take a look on the other places similar to this and remove them
00:59:888 (2) - lengthen this to the white tick (1/4 beat forward)
01:01:273 (3) - not a good overlap please move this
01:15:119 (1) - hmm maybe lengthen this to red tick (1/2 beat forward)
01:17:426 (x) - add a circle here

[Unfortunate Promise]
00:42:350 (7) - fix the slider, the end is not snapped to any time division
01:14:196 (1) - lengthen by 1/2 beat
01:17:426 (x) - add a circle here
01:28:042 (3) - this circle doesn't really follow anything so consider removing it
01:28:965 (1) - lengthen by 1/2 beat
01:32:196 (x) - add a circle here
02:13:273 (1) - shorten by 1/2 beat
02:16:503 (x) - add circle
02:27:811 (1) - YES!!
02:31:273 (x) - circle

[Forsaken Promise]
00:57:119 (1) - the spacing is too close
01:05:196 (2) - in a case like this you can ignore spacing and put this right under 01:04:734 (1) to make it more neat, same goes for 00:37:965 (3)
01:13:273 (5) - spacing is too close
01:18:811 (6) - instead of placing this under the slider you can stack it under the slider's end or place it else where
01:20:657 (4) - ^
01:28:042 (4) - consider mapping this place, maybe put a spinner?
01:37:965 (6) - spacing is close
03:22:273 (6) - doesn't look very good imo :o
03:25:272 (1) - an anti jump but not a good one, fix the spacing

make your pattern more neat, try increasing distance spacing to avoid crowded placement and look at this for basic on pretty slider ;)
Good Luck on your first map~
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
General
- Background image should be 800*600 or 1024*768 please fix
- All the diffs should start at the same time
- Remove "k-pop" "remix" "promise" "davichi" and "sad" from the Tags. Don't know what the others mean but I don't think they belong


Unfortunate
00:59:888 (2) Make it end at 01:00:811
01:01:273 (3) Bad placement, move it somewhere else



Forsaken
01:14:196 (1) move it to 01:14:426
01:28:042 (3) Remove and extend (2) to here
01:47:426 - 01:47:888 Don't like the kiai placement here, seems weird



Shattered
00:37:042 (1) wtf is this o_o looks bad
00:40:734 (1)^same
Lots of ugly slider choices please fix em
03:13:965 (1) make it end at 03:16:734?
lily_no_hana
138 posts
Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
lily_no_hana

Weezy wrote:

General
- Background image should be 800*600 or 1024*768 please fix
- All the diffs should start at the same time
- Remove "k-pop" "remix" "promise" "davichi" and "sad" from the Tags. Don't know what the others mean but I don't think they belong They're the korean romanizations for the song name if anybody looks them up? XD


Unfortunate
00:59:888 (2) Make it end at 01:00:811
01:01:273 (3) Bad placement, move it somewhere else



Forsaken
01:14:196 (1) move it to 01:14:426
01:28:042 (3) Remove and extend (2) to here
01:47:426 - 01:47:888 Don't like the kiai placement here, seems weird Do you want me to just take the kiai away or change the time? :o



Shattered
00:37:042 (1) wtf is this o_o looks bad
00:40:734 (1)^same
Lots of ugly slider choices please fix em
03:13:965 (1) make it end at 03:16:734?
Thanks for the mod, most of them are done... I'll try fix the ugly sliders soon >_<"
Still doing Sallad4ever mods~ I'll tell you when I've done them
S2XiaoZhuS2
1 post
Joined December 2010
S2XiaoZhuS2
I GIVE U A STAR!!!
lily_no_hana
138 posts
Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
lily_no_hana

Sallad4ever wrote:

hai again~

[General]
- remove the audio lead-in, it won't be necessary cause there are enough time before the first note This is the countdown right? XD
- sad, promise, Davichi and remix are already in the title and artist box so remove them from tags, try adding the name of the girls
- set preview point in any place that you like, Timing--> Set current position as preview point. Do this for all diff I have no idea how to do this aha XD
- avoid using kiai only for the fountain, place kiai on the chorus is better Not sure how to change the kiai to other stuff other than the fountain XD

[Combo]
when placing a new combo, try to make it follow a fixed pattern. For example place new combo with each stanza change or lyric change. Also the harder the diff the longer the combo count Oki doki, shall do

[Sad Promise]
00:50:196 (1) - too many finish, avoid finish in a succession like this (especially when the volume sample is max) it hurts. Take a look on the other places similar to this and remove them
00:59:888 (2) - lengthen this to the white tick (1/4 beat forward)
01:01:273 (3) - not a good overlap please move this
01:15:119 (1) - hmm maybe lengthen this to red tick (1/2 beat forward)
01:17:426 (x) - add a circle here

[Unfortunate Promise]
00:42:350 (7) - fix the slider, the end is not snapped to any time division
01:14:196 (1) - lengthen by 1/2 beat
01:17:426 (x) - add a circle here
01:28:042 (3) - this circle doesn't really follow anything so consider removing it
01:28:965 (1) - lengthen by 1/2 beat
01:32:196 (x) - add a circle here
02:13:273 (1) - shorten by 1/2 beat
02:16:503 (x) - add circle
02:27:811 (1) - YES!! YAY!!! :)
02:31:273 (x) - circle

[Forsaken Promise]
00:57:119 (1) - the spacing is too close
01:05:196 (2) - in a case like this you can ignore spacing and put this right under 01:04:734 (1) to make it more neat, same goes for 00:37:965 (3)
01:13:273 (5) - spacing is too close
01:18:811 (6) - instead of placing this under the slider you can stack it under the slider's end or place it else where
01:20:657 (4) - ^
01:28:042 (4) - consider mapping this place, maybe put a spinner?
01:37:965 (6) - spacing is close
03:22:273 (6) - doesn't look very good imo :o
03:25:272 (1) - an anti jump but not a good one, fix the spacing

make your pattern more neat, try increasing distance spacing to avoid crowded placement and look at this for basic on pretty slider ;) I'll do my best >_<"
Good Luck on your first map~THANK YOU! :)
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
-Lennox-
Nice song but a few things that make's me sick D :o
[General]

Set the hitsound at the center.
Dont use to many hitsound's... it does not fit with the music

[Shattered Promise]

00:49:734 (7): The slider is a bit invisible D: Try to change this..
03:26:888 (3): ^
03:32:196 (5): remove this beat
03:34:042 (5): Maybe you remove this slider and add a spinner?

Change this and i give you a star ;)



Sorry my english is not the best :P
lily_no_hana
138 posts
Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
lily_no_hana

lennox989 wrote:

Nice song but a few things that make's me sick D :o
[General]

Set the hitsound at the center.
Dont use to many hitsound's... it does not fit with the music I'll have to do the hitsound stuff a bit later, been too busy lately

[Shattered Promise]

00:49:734 (7): The slider is a bit invisible D: Try to change this.. I tried to make it more visible but.... check for me? XD
03:26:888 (3): ^
03:32:196 (5): remove this beat I thought it was better not to leave a blank space there but we'll see XD
03:34:042 (5): Maybe you remove this slider and add a spinner? I shoulda done that earlier XD

Change this and i give you a star ;)



Sorry my english is not the best :P It's fine :) Thanks for the mod ^_^
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
-Lennox-
Here we go~

Star
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
[Shalon]
Good luck ;)
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[General]
I don't see BG image in the edit mode. Try to full sub. again.
Make some variation on loudless of hitsound, it's generally quite now currently, also soft hitsound may be better :/
Too much kiai fountain?

[Shattered promise]
00:19:734 (10) - up 1 grid
00:26:657 (4) - ^
00:34:503 (1) - 1/2 backwards, adjust the NC and the spacing
01:00:580 (11,12) - adjust the spacing a bit
01:19:273 (7,8,9) - uneven spacing
01:21:350 (2~6) - ^
01:25:042 (3,6) - (3) up 1 grid, (6) down 1 grid
01:36:350 (3,4,5) - ^
03:23:119 (9,10) - (9) up 1 grid, (10) left 1 grid
03:25:502 (2) - down 1 grid
03:36:350 (s) - lower th sound
better check with spacings

[Forshaken promise]
02:05:888 (10) - NC?
Too many kiai fountain.

Same problem with the easy diff. It seems that it's quite abused...
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Tags:do not use a comma

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Davichi Sad Promise.jpg"

But your bg.jpg is 1691031fhr4.jpg

Unfortunate Promise

i think you need to reduce volume by 10%-20%(it's due to the song)

00:32:196 this break time is useless

00:52:965(6) - remove clap
01:01:273(7) - spacing

Forsaken Promise

some sections need to reduce volume

you use too many finish hitsounds,try deleting some

00:16:734(3) - remove clap
00:22:734(5) - remove finish
00:34:042(3) - ^
00:34:965(6) - ^
00:51:811(6) - ^
00:53:657(9) - remove finish at the beginning and end
01:04:734(5) - ^
01:21:119(1) - remove all finish which on the slider
01:23:888(4) - remove finish at the beginning and end

Shattered Promise

02:16:042 the inheriting section is useless

some sections need to reduce volume

is that a hard diff?

i think it is,so you might change your rate



too many kiai time....triplet kiai do not make your map shine


starrrrr
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

Your spacing is quite a bit messy but i'mma go and polish your map a bit:

[General]

Set a preview point i suggest 01:31:503 should suffice? :)

Unfortunate Promise :

00:42:811 (4) - Align with (2).
00:57:119 (1) - Add a whistle?
01:40:965 (1) - New Combo.
01:37:273 (6) - Remove finish.
01:46:965 (5) - Remove finish.
00:59:426 (5) - New Combo?
01:43:734 (1) Remove whistle from the slider path.

Forsaken Promise :

00:37:273 (9) - New Combo?
00:40:965 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing and make it symmetrical.
00:42:350 (4) - Align with (3).
00:44:657 (6) - New Combo?
00:52:042 (7) - ^
00:55:734 (2) - ^
00:59:426 (8) - ^
01:03:119 (2) -^
01:04:042 (4) - Align with (2)
01:05:196 - That spacing is kind of irksome so do it like i did it for you here --------->http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/50988
01:06:811 (8) - New Combo?
01:09:580 (2) - Fix that slider it looks ugly imo.
01:20:196 (5) - Remove Finish.
01:25:503 (1) - New Combo?
01:34:042 (6) - Place properly under (5)
01:36:350 (11) - New Combo.
02:09:580 (7) - new Combo.

Shattered Promise :

00:51:811 (9) - New Combo.
00:59:657 (1) - ^
01:05:214 (2) - place under (1) correctly
02:16:965 (2) - ^
02:23:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Fix this spacing it's all clustered up.

Ok i gotta admit it's kinda messy i'm sure you'll improve better by the day :)

Here's a star and from one noob mapper to another, good luck!! :D
artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
Normal
00 18 119 new combo ?
00 37 273 ^
00 59 426 ^
00 23 196 maybe flip vertical
00 24 119 finish sound, maybe

Hard
00 21 580 new combo
00 21 811 finish sound
00 24 350 ^
00 40 503 ^
00 49 965 I can't see this slider when playing
00 52 273 clap
00 53 888 finish sound
02 53 888 ^
03 20 426 clap
03 23 657 finish sound
03 24 814 ^

Star
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Hi again2 lily sorry for the late reply

[General]
- remove the audio lead-in for all diff
- the preview point is still not there, 01:31:042 is a good place for that
- see this, it give you a basic in making good slider shape
- the common hitsound pattern are 1/1 (clap or whistle in every white tick) or 2/1 (clap or whistle in white tick with 1 beat interval) depends on the song

[Unfortunate Promise]
01:01:273 (3) - still not a good place for a kiai, I suggest to put kiai in the chorus like in 01:17:888 & 01:32:657

[Forsaken Promise]
increase CS by 1
01:40:965 (1,1,1) - kiai abuse like this is not good, it's preferable to make them into 1 section

[Shattered Promise]
there are many misaligned issue like in 02:04:503 (4) - the slider end doesn't perfectly aligned to 1, disable the snap to grid to make the neat
01:20:888 (1) - move this so it won't be under 01:19:734 (9)
01:47:426 (5) - there's a break after this so kiai time in here doesn't look good
03:25:272 (1) - spacing is too close from 10, place this further up

that's all I guess~
Good Luck
lily_no_hana
138 posts
Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
lily_no_hana
Thanks for all the mods so far! Please keep them coming! I wanna get better ;D
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
Hey ^_^

Unfortunate Promise
Remove the timing sections you have after the end of the map.
00:59:888 (2) - you could make this shape fit the previous bit better D: like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/52034 (i suck at slider art orz)

Forsaken Promise
Uhh, if this is supposed to be a normal I'd reduce by one tick the Approach Rate.
00:21:811 (x) - add a note here?
00:51:811 (6) - start new combo here instead of doing it at 00:52:042 (1). Follows the rhythm better imo
00:54:350 (1) - remove new combo D: If you wanna keep it for this part, add it on 00:53:657 (3), but I think it's unecessary ><
01:40:965 - why kiai here? D:
02:24:580 (2) - bad spacing ;.; I suggest something like this http://puu.sh/Ntr

Shattered Promise
01:46:503 (4) - add another repeat here
02:32:888 (6) - new combo
02:45:580 (4) - add another repeat here

Nice map, star'd.
supabow12
5 posts
Joined December 2008
supabow12
Love it! Hope it all goes well since it looks as though you've been working really hard ^_^.

P.S I love this song
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
[General]
don't forget to delete .OSB file and then full-submitting
the way you add hitsound is abit random (just follow your feeling or vocal) it's not reliable xD
polish you hitsound with patterns.
to add clap hitsound is just the same way you do when you clap your hand through the song

delete all off your kiai timing section line in all diff and then set it like this....
Start : 01:17:888, 02:31:734, 03:03:119
End : 01:47:426, 02:46:503, 03:36:350
^ add finish hitsound here too..

[Unfortunate Promise]
Hp Drain rate -1
Overall difficult -1
map thorugh its end for more fair to play D:

[Forsaken Promise]
Hp drain rate -1
Approach rate -1
Overall difficult -2 (why is same as Shattered Promise)
map thorugh its end for more fair to play D:

[Shatterd Promise]
00:20:426(2,3,4,5,6) - wrong spacing (too near)
00:40:734(8) - new combo
01:06:580(5) - new combo
02:30:811 - add note
02:31:734(2) - make it completly snap with the end of (1)
03:10:042 - the way you stack note in a slider tip is abit ugly - disble grid snap first and the re-arrange it
03:13:503(11) - make it symestry
follow the same distance snap for 3:30 mins is a bit bored =3= huh~

You're Lazy mapper xD
star anyway~
xierbaliti
osu! Alumni
999 posts
Joined August 2008
xierbaliti
-Unfortunate Promise-
Kiai Time: 01:17:888~01:47:426 will be better. or at least you should set a green line for end Kiai Time in the end.
map is fine.

-Forsaken Promise-
map to the end plz..

-Shattered Promise-
Kiai Time:03:03:119~03:34:503(just suggestion)
00:28:273~00:32:196 - add notes plz. the music is good too, why not only following the lrc not following the music? it's bad.
just add some notes here for you. for example:
SPOILER

01:05:426 (3) - 1 grid right
01:45:926 (2) - move this circle to 01:45:888 (1/6)
01:46:273 (3) - move this circle to 01:46:196 (1/6)
02:45:003 (2) - move this circle to 02:44:965 (1/6)
02:45:350 (3) - move this circle to 02:45:273 (1/6)
03:26:427 (4) - 1 grid right

-hitsounds-
random hitsounds you added. >_> sounds bad :<
soft-hitclap is really doesn't fit this song.please use whistle, finish and normal hitsounds instead. or you may need a custom one.

vincerio wrote:

You're Lazy mapper xD
star anyway~
good luck.
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Well...Time to mod..
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[Mod Info]
BluE=Suggestion only
ReD=Minor issue
Black Bold=Major issue...Must fix this

[General]
Seems fine

[Unfortunate Promise]
Map to the end please
00:22:503(6.1)-swap New combo
00:27:580(x)-Map this break or Remove the spinner in 00:29:888
00:57:119(4)-[Nazi]The slider is quite ugly..
01:02:196(4)-New combo
Chaos hitsound arrangement

[Forsaken Promise]
Circle size +1?
00:44:657(1)-Ugly slider
00:51:811(1.2)-New combo on(2) and remove bnew combo on (1)
01:03:580(2.3)-2 grid bown
01:12:350(4.5.6)-inconsistent spacing..
01:19:273(3.4.5)-^
01:22:965(2.3.4)-
01:45:580(1~4)-Make players confuse,because your spacing and your rhythm is not the same..please follow the distance sanp here..
02:17:657(3)-1 grid left
02:44:657(1~4)-Same as 01:45:580
02:46:965~(x)-Map to the end please
Chaos hitsound arrangement

[Shattered Promise]
Chaos hitsound arrangement
00:36:350(11)-Move to 00:36:119?
00:40:734(8)-New combo
00:48:350(1~7)-inconsistent spacing
00:55:734(1~7)-^
01:08:196(11)-Be honest..it is really ugly..please draw it again
01:12:119(4.5)-^
02:16:273(1)-Remove New combo and put a new combo at 02:16:965
02:19:965(1)-Spacing error
02:06:888(11)-1 grid left
02:43:503(5)-I think this slider should end at 02:43:965
02:46:503(x)-Please stop the Kiai here
03:03:119(x)-Start the Kiai again
03:36:350(x)-Please use a green line to stop the kiai here
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Forsaken Promise]
next time map the circles so they're farther apart, it's easier to read that way :<
00:28:753 - There's a break here in the other diffs

[Shattered Promise]
00:57:119 (7) - When you have the circles placed like this, it's hard to see that this is a slider
02:50:196 - You have kiai time going through a break, it's weird, end the kiai time before the break starts?
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
[shattered promise]

00:32:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - remove some claps please

00:48:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - remove claps on 2, 5 and 6 please

00:56:657 (5,6) - remove these two claps

01:08:196 (11) - please make this a better shape

01:12:119 (4,5) - same with these... i suggest making the loop smaller so the end tail can stick out a bit more

01:45:580 (1,2,3) - snap these with 1/3 beat snap divisor, not 1/4

01:45:580 (1,2,3,4) - after this^ space these out more evenly

02:44:657 (1,2,3,4) - repeat the previous two mods on this

03:10:041 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the stacking on the sliders is hard to see, and im not sure it's rankable... please change

[forsaken promise]

ok

[unfortunate promise]

fine


i suggest you rename one of your diffs [broken promise]... but thats up to you

star!
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
here's hitsound example
I'm try using various of hitsound(with the same pattern)

learn from it
and ask me if you have a problem :3

Download: Davichi - Sad Promise (Remix) (lily_no_hana) [vincerio's hitsound lesson =w=].osu
lily_no_hana
138 posts
Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
lily_no_hana

vincerio wrote:

here's hitsound example
I'm try using various of hitsound(with the same pattern)

learn from it
and ask me if you have a problem :3

[attachment=0:1ea5b]Davichi - Sad Promise (Remix) (lily_no_hana) [vincerio's hitsound lesson =w=].osu[/attachment:1ea5b]
This is amazing I'm learning alot from it ahaha XD THANK YOU! XD
lkp
270 posts
Joined May 2010
lkp
[Unfortunate Promise]
00:20:657 (4) - new combo.
00:22:503 (1) - remove new combo.
00:25:273 (3) - new combo.
00:37:273 (4) - ^
00:40:042 (1) - remove new combo.
00:40:965 (2) - new combo.
00:44:657 (5) - ^
00:52:042 (5) - ^
01:15:119 (1) - ^
01:21:119 (6) - ^
01:28:734 (1) - ^
01:35:888 (3) - ^
01:43:734 (4) - ^
**just combo fix :)

[Forsaken Promise]
00:44:657 (6) - new combo.
00:47:426 (11) - ^
00:53:426 (x) - sound would be better if you add note here...
01:14:196 (1) - new combo
01:17:426 (1,2) - spacing,too far.
01:20:657 (6) - add note?
01:28:965 (1) - new combo.
02:13:273 (1) - ^
02:19:965 (6) - add note here?
02:27:811 (1) - new combo.
02:31:273 (1,2) - too close.
*end of kiai time in 02:46:513
**nice :)

[Shatted Promise]
00:48:811 (3,4) - too close
00:49:734 (7,8) - ^
00:56:196 (3,4) - oh,i know what are you doing.However,those notes have spacing wrong,too close.make those notes same spacing in this combo...
00:56:888 (6,7) - ^
00:57:580 (x) - sound would be better if you add note here.
01:02:657 (2,3,4) - 1 grid up?(lv.3)
01:13:273 (6) - try to extend this slider in 01:14:196,sound would be better if you do this.
01:17:657 (4,5) - too close.
01:17:888 (5,6) - ^
01:19:273 (7,8,9,10) - ^
01:35:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make it same spacing in this combo?
01:47:426 (5) - 1 grid up?
02:06:580 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing,too close.
02:13:273 (x) - add note?
02:16:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i don't know what spacing do you use,but plz make all notes same spacing in this combo-_-.
02:26:888 (11) - 1 grid left??
02:43:273 (4,5) - too close.
02:46:503 (5) - 1 grid down?
just sound set and spacing fix.you should find more sound set and spacing problem.
and you should add all spinner new combo.

good map^^
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Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
General:

-- Well, the BG's korean word in the right doesn't match with this title, but maybe it'll be OK because it is the same album. Consider deleting.
-- How about re-kiaing in 01:32:657 ??

Unfortunate Promise:

-- I think you need to have many symmetric sliders

00:40:042 (1) : Remove Newcombo, Remove Clap
00:40:965 (2) : New combo if you accepted ^
00:52:042 (1) : New combo
01:15:119 (1) : Consider ending at 01:16:965
01:26:196 (2) : Symmetry

Forsaken Promise:

00:44:657 (6) : New combo
00:50:196 (5) : Symmetry
01:10:965 (3) : ^
01:35:196 (8) : New combo

Shatted Promise:

-- It would be better if you had an 1.0 Distance.
-- +1 to all difficulties (except for circle size)
-- 01:42:580 : Make a time line with 0.5, ending at 01:43:042

00:20:657 (3) : Add Clap
00:23:888 (2) : ^
00:26:657 (7) : ^
00:40:042 (7) : Remove Clap
00:42:119 (4) : Symmetry, or make like 00:44:426 (1)
00:43:503 (5) : Add Finish
00:55:965 (2) : Remove Clap
00:56:196 (3) : ^
00:57:580 (x) : Add Note
01:03:580 (5) : Add Clap
01:26:426 (7) : New combo
01:28:042 (x) : Add Slider at somewhere.
01:36:580 (4) : Move 1 Grid Left
01:36:811 (5) : Move 1 Grid Up
01:40:503 (2) : Move 1 Grid Right
02:03:811 (1) : Place at end of (4)
02:04:042 (2) : Remove Clap
02:06:119 (3) : Place at end of (5)
02:21:811 (6) : New combo
02:26:426 (10) : Place at end of (9)
03:12:580 (10) : ^
02:26:888 (11) : Add Finish
02:28:042 (2) : Add Clap
02:31:734 (3) : ^
02:33:580 (2) : ^
02:35:426 (2,4) : ^
03:34:042 (1) : End at 03:37:042, Remove Finish
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
Unfortunate Promise
HP Drain, Overall Diff and Approach Rate -1
01:05:426 (4) - New combo
Map until the end?

Forsaken Promise
Circle Size -2
00:33:580 (1) - Add finish
00:53:436 (4) - This note overlaps with 2 and 3
02:03:580 (5) - New combo
02:32:888 (5) - Not snapped

Unfortunate Promise
HP Drain +2 and Circle Size +1
01:47:926 (5) - Are you placing a jump here?
02:16:273 (1) - Remove new combo
02:16:965 (1) - Not really under the previous note
03:37:042 (1) - No volume here please...
theowest
osu! Alumni
6,891 posts
Joined January 2009
theowest
Hello there~!

Unfortunate Promise:
Move the first beat to 00:16:503 and add a finish to it. Maybe move it to 00:16:503 but at least add a finish.
I'd remove 00:40:042 if I were you.
00:50:196 clap
00:50:657 finish
00:51:119 clap
00:51:580 finish
You might not know this but you can add hitsounds on every place on the slider when it makes a sound! Just click on the end or start of the slider to change the hitsound!
00:57:580 clap
01:00:811 clap
01:30:811 finish
01:32:657 finish
01:40:042 finish

The hitsounds are pretty random and doesn't follow a specific pattern but I guess that's okay. :)

Forsaken Promise:
Nice that you have longer diffs depending on difficulty!
00:40:965 finish
00:48:350 whistle + finish
00:50:657 clap
00:51:119 finish
01:16:965 finish
01:17:888 finish
That's about it I think.

Shattered Promise:
00:15:811 finish.. maybe
00:16:965 finish
00:29:888 finish
00:30:503 finish
00:30:811 finish
00:31:734 finish
Don't forget that you can add different hitsounds in a slider. Whistles and claps would be good to have more of in them. ;D
01:30:811 finish, if you can hear a finish in the song then add a finish on the beatmap! ALWAYS.
01:32:657 finish
01:45:580 finish
01:46:196 finish
01:47:426 finish
02:02:196 finish.. oh gawd there's a lot of finishes to be added.. xD
02:15:119 finish
02:15:734 finish
02:16:042 finish
02:16:965 finish
02:31:734 finish
02:44:657 finish
02:45:273 finish
02:45:580 finish
02:59:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Finish them! xD
03:03:119 finish
03:17:888 finish
03:30:811 finish
03:31:426 finish
03:32:657 same ^

yeah.. That's about it. I'm sorry I couldn't mod more. I usually spend 1 hour more than just this but I'm in a hurry. I have a dentist appointment soon! D:

Great first beatmap! :D
STAR!!
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