Hi, from my queue
[Prologue]
00:11:531 (1,3) - Fix blanket
00:12:794 (1,2) - Why did you map this as a jump when music is calm?
00:31:899 (6,7,1) - Distance is same when timegaps are different
00:37:267 (4,5,6,7) - Angle is 180 degrees which is not comfortable to play
00:41:846 (1) - Maybe remove NC to show the change in rhythm (you didin't change anything in spacing so try this)
00:52:425 (5) - Nc?
01:15:794 (5,1,2) - Distance is same when timegaps are different
01:28:820 (2,3) - Try putting NCs to show change in rhythm
01:38:925 (2,3) - ^
02:56:373 (3,4) - Blanket?
03:19:978 (2,3) - NCs?
03:21:320 (1,2,3) - Distance is same when timegaps are different
03:22:267 (1,2) - Fix blanket
03:30:478 - Fill this hole
04:40:820 (2,3) - NCs?
04:43:741 - Consider filling
04:50:925 (2,3) - NCs?
04:55:425 (9,3) - Fix overlap
Hope to help GL!
[Prologue]
00:11:531 (1,3) - Fix blanket
00:12:794 (1,2) - Why did you map this as a jump when music is calm?
00:31:899 (6,7,1) - Distance is same when timegaps are different
00:37:267 (4,5,6,7) - Angle is 180 degrees which is not comfortable to play
00:41:846 (1) - Maybe remove NC to show the change in rhythm (you didin't change anything in spacing so try this)
00:52:425 (5) - Nc?
01:15:794 (5,1,2) - Distance is same when timegaps are different
01:28:820 (2,3) - Try putting NCs to show change in rhythm
01:38:925 (2,3) - ^
02:56:373 (3,4) - Blanket?
03:19:978 (2,3) - NCs?
03:21:320 (1,2,3) - Distance is same when timegaps are different
03:22:267 (1,2) - Fix blanket
03:30:478 - Fill this hole
04:40:820 (2,3) - NCs?
04:43:741 - Consider filling
04:50:925 (2,3) - NCs?
04:55:425 (9,3) - Fix overlap
Hope to help GL!