hello, from my nm queue
this song is cool
00:03:162 (3,4) - you should space these out more for time-distance equality, otherwise its confusing to read
00:09:004 (2) - you should map this with a circle and a slider or just circles bc there is a stronger sound playing where the reverse lands than where the slider head is
00:11:531 (1) - i think this would look better if it were more wavy
00:16:899 (1) - its better if this slider was straight like the ones after it for more accurate grouping
00:21:004 (1) - i dont think theres a point for this nc, so put it here 00:20:373 (5)
also, emphasize this sound with spacing, its strong 00:20:373 (5)
00:31:267 (4) - you should replace this with circles and move it to the next white tick, where the sound is stronger
00:31:899 (7,8) - the sounds here are sharp, so maybe make the slider shape sharp as well
00:32:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - its better if the stream was spaced the same throughout, or if it got smaller at the end since the piano is descending
00:34:110 (1) - the big white tick has a loud drum sound, so map that sound with a circle or sliderhead, but not a sliderend. if not, the rhythm is confusing
00:36:636 (1) - ^^^
00:38:689 (5) - shorten the slider to where you can put a circle on the big tick, because a strong sound plays on it (maybe shorten it to where the sliderend is on the blue tick, or the red tick before the big tick)
00:42:004 (2) - i think its better to map this with 2 circles where the guitar sound plays, or a 3/4 slider with a circle at the end
00:47:373 (3) - hitsound this differently, it makes it sound like a snare when its not
00:48:794 (2) - maybe rotate by 60 degrees since it doesnt look the best
00:51:794 (1) - make this a sharp slider for the sharp sound. same goes for the other sliders in this transition part
00:57:557 (5) - i dont here a sound here, so remove this plzz
01:01:425 (5) - it would be more intense if mapped with just 1/2 circles
01:22:899 (3) - make the last node more curved, it looks awkward
01:46:267 (1) - i get that youre mapping to the vocals, but the drum beats call for a more intense rhythm, so map those
01:47:531 (1) - ^^
02:06:952 (3) - make this less sharp, it doesnt make sense since its not a very very sharp sound
02:33:636 (1) - this whole section up to 02:51:952 (1) is very heavy and i think it would be best to map with sliders that are sharp
and maybe higher sv
03:02:057 (1) - blanket this with 03:01:741 (5)
03:19:741 (1,2) - this spacing makes this seem like a 1/2 gap, but its not, so make spacing smaller so its easier to read (or put a slider)
03:54:004 (3,4) - i dont see why these shouldnt be triples since the whole section was triples. to differentiate it, try making the triples close together
05:51:320 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the song's over so i wouldve mapped with a spinner, but this is fine too.
pretty solid map, didnt see too many problems. most of the stuff above were suggestions. i like the streams