[Kuriossiti's Jungle Karnage]
- 00:27:654 - 00:31:454 - 00:32:054 - 00:33:054 - As for consistency, I think you need double notes for these points to represent the vocal sounds.
- 00:36:654 (36654|1,36654|2,37054|0,37054|2,37054|3,37254|3,37254|1,37454|2,37454|0,37654|3,37654|1) - Actually I would prefer you to make them into single so you can keep your focus rather on the vocals throughout this part, which adds to consistency here.-
- 00:37:854 - 00:38:054 - 00:38:454 - 00:39:054 - Then for these points, you can have double notes for vocal.
- 00:39:254 - And you don't need double here.
- 00:43:254 - 00:46:654 - 00:51:654 - 00:52:054 - More places to make things into double notes for vocal.
- 00:52:454 (52454|3,52454|0,52520|2) - I think the snap here should not be like that if you use double for vocal. Instead, the double should be placed on 00:52:587 - , 1/6 snap, where the vocal really starts, so I would suggest you try this pattern: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10854556
- 00:56:954 (56954|2,57054|1,57154|2,57254|1,57354|2,57454|1) - 00:58:554 (58554|1,58654|2,58754|1,58854|2,58854|0,58954|1,58954|3) - I don't really think you need such stacks at the beginning part of this map. Try to rearrange them a bit.
- 01:05:054 (65054|3,65354|3) - LN end on 1/8 makes less sense than ending them to 1/4 as they are the right place where the sounds stop. 01:05:654 (65654|3) - For this you can have some difference but I'd prefer 1/4 for simplification.
- 01:06:254 (66254|1,66354|1) - Move to col[1] so you can use each column for a jack for once in this bar.
- Better change 01:09:854 - to 01:09:854 - to the same patterns as 01:11:454 - to 01:12:254 - for more variation but not random since you are using different patterns each for twice.
- As you can see, from 01:15:454 - you are first using rolls to the left, and then 01:15:854 - right, so I would suggest 01:16:254 - here to use left roll and then 01:16:654 - right roll for balance.
- 01:18:654 - Some general problem for me starts from here. As I go through this buildup part, the patterns are rather too repetitive for me. As you can see, those continuous jacks are already very challenging, so I wonder if you really can rearrange a bit to mix more patterns into it, like you can move 01:18:954 (78954|1,78954|0) - this kind of double notes to col[2][3], or you can do them to col[1][4]. It is better for you to use patterns that repeats for twice but not four times to actually reduce a bit on the pressure about the original patterns and have more varieties into your map.It continues until 01:37:454 -
- 01:43:054 (103054|3,103104|1) - ctrl+h so that from 01:43:054 - to 01:43:454 - you can have all your notes rolling to the right.
- 01:43:754 (103754|0,103804|1) - Also, ctrl+g so that you can then have notes rolling to the left for the next interval between white lines. Maybe then you can move 01:43:604 (103604|1) - to col[1] for consistency.
- 01:44:254 - This whole kiai has some similar problems with 01:18:654 -, as the stacks are repeated for a bit too many times that really add unnecessary pressure to the players. I think you can do something similar as before too, like mixing more patterns and making them repeating for twice each.
- 01:50:654 - Double note fits better here as no C sound is present.
- 02:03:454 - Same as above. You can delete this LN 02:03:454 (123454|0) - instead.
- 02:06:654 - Something similar as previous rolls. Better making them rolling to one direction between one interval formed by white lines, and then to the inverse for the next.
- 02:35:454 - Still similar problem as before. Non-kiai is even much harder than kiai.02:35:554 (155554|1,155954|2,156354|1,156754|2,157154|1,157554|3,158754|2,159154|1,159554|2,159954|1,160754|0,161554|1,161954|2,162354|3,162754|1,163154|3,163554|2,163954|0,165154|0,165554|2,165954|1,166354|2,167154|0,167954|1) - These notes first can be deleted as they are not the major part of the music here. Besides, you don't need those double stacks at all in my opinion, as the drums here don't have such big impact that requires emphasis from the stacks. This ends at 02:48:254 -
- 03:04:254 - 03:07:454 - 03:11:454 - 03:13:854 - 03:14:654 - 03:17:054 - 03:17:854 - 03:20:254 - 03:21:054 - 03:21:854 - 03:22:654 - 03:23:454 - 03:24:254 - 03:25:054 - If you really wanna emphasize, double notes are enough.
- 03:26:387 (206387|1,206454|2) - How about moving these notes to col[1] and col[2] and then 03:26:254 (206254|2) - make this into a LN that ends at 03:26:654 - ? It resembles what you did for 00:52:654 (52654|1) -
I will continue my check later. I think the map really needs some improvements in its variety and hand balance Since it is a very challenging map, you have to always consider about these elements and mix basic patterns to avoid overly repetitive parts. Good luck!