1. maybe silence that sliderslide? it's sounds kinda jarring in a calm song.
   00:08:181 (1) - stack
   00:10:056 (6,7) - ctrl+g rhythm vocals g
   00:20:454 (5) - no beat in song here, 00:20:795 - move sliderhead here? also it's a bit hard to read things there in that section with the overlaps/stacks,
   00:32:386 (6,7) - rather see those as stacks, so it doesn't nullify the bass kick emphasize on 00:31:875 (3,4) -
   02:21:477 (6,7) - ^
   00:35:965 (2) - stack
   03:15:852 (3) - x:337 y:34, better place fr jump i used scale tool
   03:50:795 (2,3) - rather would simplfy it with 1/4, 1/2 for something vague as vocals
   04:37:585 (6,8) - overmapped
2. there are some overlaps through the whole map bothering me tht i cant just fix up with modding like 06:45:000 (1,6) -
   overlaps in the same combo are bad visually would increase quality if you try to avoid those.
   
   
   
   

zev wrote:

1. maybe silence that sliderslide? it's sounds kinda jarring in a calm song.
   I've been hearing this a lot. Added a silent soft-sliderslide.wav and normal-sliderslide.wav. Hopefully this doesn't break any regulations
   03:50:795 (2,3) - rather would simplfy it with 1/4, 1/2 for something vague as vocals
   I'm not really sure I understood what you meant here I replaced the short slider (3) with 2 hitcircles on 1/2 so it should be fine now
2. there are some overlaps through the whole map bothering me tht i cant just fix up with modding like 06:45:000 (1,6) -
   overlaps in the same combo are bad visually would increase quality if you try to avoid those.
   Some slight overlaps are intentional (though I'm sure those are pretty obvious). I fixed the part you mentioned and some others I didn't really notice before, including changing the pattern at 06:52:840 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - a bit to look better. I'll pay more attention to overlaps like these in the future.

bye
o/

zev wrote:

1. maybe silence that sliderslide? it's sounds kinda jarring in a calm song.
   00:08:181 (1) - stack hai
   00:10:056 (6,7) - ctrl+g rhythm vocals g not sure what you mean exactly, this is fine
   00:20:454 (5) - no beat in song here, 00:20:795 - move sliderhead here? also it's a bit hard to read things there in that section with the overlaps/stacks, 'tis matching the vocal
   00:32:386 (6,7) - rather see those as stacks, so it doesn't nullify the bass kick emphasize on 00:31:875 (3,4) - kinda kills the motion then
   02:21:477 (6,7) - ^ ^
   00:35:965 (2) - stack hai
   03:15:852 (3) - x:337 y:34, better place fr jump i used scale tool the jump's way too big then compared to the ones that follow
   04:37:585 (6,8) - overmapped heck yeah

bye
cheers m8

- Yoshimaro - wrote:

big mod

hi im modder c:
im new to mapping im new to modding x d, skip to the bottom of this mod before applying to read why I left a BN worthy check here lol

General

1. There are some SB elements that aren't sized properly. Also, just double check to make sure your BG is jpg and your scrolling / foreground objects are png since they are lossless.
   
   I'll look into this a bit more and ask around but the ranking criteria around storyboard images has been changed a bit since last year so this part is debatable: Criteria from last year and this year for comparison.
   I made sure all the images without transparency are in .jpg while all the images with necessary transparency are in .png (only exception being the flares)
   
2. normal-sliderslide.wav and soft-sliderslide.wav are not 100ms. This causes issues for some soundcards and is an unrankable issue, so replace those sliderslides with this muted sliderslide instead.
   Replaced, thanks a bunch!
3. normal-hitnormal.wav has a delay of over 5ms. I went ahead and cropped an acceptable version for you: https://puu.sh/vQApR/eaffe69c84.mp3
   
   Replaced this aswell, thank you! (For some reason Audacity wanted to add an extra 100ms delay when converting it from .mp3 to .wav so I had to do it with foobar2000, hopefully it didn't mess it up too much)
4. On the storyboard, maybe from 00:20:454 - 00:21:818 - there could be an effect similar to 02:31:363 - where the faded and blurry background slowly comes into focus, reaching an emphasized point on 00:21:818 - ?
   Good idea, I'll try to get it done after I fix the rest c:
5. By the way, 2 years ago I downloaded this map in the midst of a poco maro craze lol.
   I might ask you for your poco maro maps sometime later, I could use some more

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Hathz

1. 04:46:363 (1) - Maybe curve the end of it a bit? like:
   
   stylistic preference, no functionality impact here c:
   Done~ The straight end looked a bit wonky anyways

Kawa

1. 01:21:818 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you can try something like this?
   
   There are multiple reasons I feel this would be to the benefit of this section. One of which, is because this is actually just before the hardest part in the map:
   
   Second, This much better emphasizes less muted beats on 01:21:818 - 01:22:500 - 01:23:181 - 01:23:863 - with distance gaps and embodies the muted bass beats with softer spacing. The patterning type I showed above would also apply to 01:23:181 (1,2,3,4) - .
   Sounds good. Also makes stuff look nicer so sure! Changed the slider patterns to match your suggestion (there were slight problems with flow at first but it should be fine now...)
2. 01:24:545 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Hardest part in the map, you can refer to the difficulty strains snapshot I linked above. First, I want to say that I actually really really like this jump sequence, I just feel its a bit too over emphasized in contrast with the rest of the map. A few suggestions on what I think could make this better represent the music:
   1. This is a build up, maybe make 01:24:545 (1,2,3,4) - less emphasized, and make 01:25:227 (1,2,3,4) - as emphasized as 01:24:545 (1,2,3,4) - currently is (I'm referring to the distances between circles when I say emphasize here)
   2. This is a foreign thought to 2017 mapping and honestly I like your jump sequence better, but if you wanted to you could embody 01:24:545 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - with obtuse angles instead, something like this:
   
   In any case, doing one or the other would work, but not doing either would still feel overdone.
   This part has been pointed out once or twice before so I guess it really is "a bit" overdone Your suggestions make sense and I decided to go with 1. Reasons being: The buildup with stronger sounds like this (in my opinion) calls for a more snapping movement rather than a single wavy motion.
   It's also more fun to play a jumpy pattern compared to a linear one. Following that, I nerfed and moved the jumps so the spacing now gradually increases in order with the buildup in the song. This pattern also flows much better into the stream following it compared to the previous one so that's a neat addition~
3. 01:30:000 (1) - The aesthetic is a bit cramped near the end of the slider end. one thing that could help free the slider from its cramped look is to place the white anchors more towards the center of the object:
   
   What fixing this will do is make the blankets on 01:30:511 (2,3) - more obvious and better looking, as well as you'll have an easier curve to blanket when adjusting the slider shapes of 01:30:681 (3,4) - .
   Fixed, also moved the slider slightly to the right. The blanket between 01:30:000 (1,4) - could still be improved a bit so I'll work on that later
4. 01:37:159 (3,4) - This is the first instance of this rhythm type being introduced. Not that this is a bad thing, but it may cause unnecessary slider end drops or even slider breaks. notice that in previous instances, the rhythm choice was to use the 01:37:414 - as a circle and give the downbeat on 01:37:500 - a clickable function. In my opinion, it makes more sense to give 01:37:500 - a clickable functionality since it's the downbeat. Anyhow, this is okay but maybe introduce this rhythm type earlier in the map?
   I'm having mixed thoughts about this since, while you're right that it's usually white ticks that should be emphasized with a slider head,
   there's actually a stronger kick on the blue tick 01:37:414 - that goes into the weaker sound on the downbeat so I felt like a slider fits the part better. I figured using a double instead of a 1/4 slider could work but I feel like it wouldn't give enough emphasis for the kick unless I increased the spacing in that case.
   On another note, the first occurrence of this rhythm in the song happens at 00:31:875 (3,4,5) - where Hathz also emphasized the blue tick more with a 1/2 slider albeit with a different pattern and less spacing between the blue and white tick. For most of these occurences in the song, he used his variation of the pattern and I used mine, which might explain the inconsistency.
5. 01:48:238 (5) - I recommend and NC
   Added NC
6. 02:34:602 (3,1) - Fix blanket.
   Fixed blanket and a weird stack I missed before
7. 02:35:454 (1) - I think this element would look nicer in unison with 02:35:454 (1) - as a standard blanket, but that's purely a stylistic choice C:Can a slider blanket itself? 🤔 I'll poke you in-game about this cause I'm not sure what exactly you meant
8. 03:39:545 (1,4) - Very nice overlap, good stuff.
   Thanks! It wasn't easy
9. 04:21:818 (1) - If you liked the slider recommendation earlier, consider applying a bit of a touch up here as well?
   Fixed it (I think). I kinda suck at this blanketing business...
   
   
   
   
10. 04:11:335 - The い is on this beat I think?
11. 04:17:727 (1,3) - Unnecessary overlap, can easily be resolved by moving 04:16:704 (2,3,4,1) - up just a couple pixels, and maybe 04:18:409 (3,4,5) - down a couple pixels.
    These two aren't my parts, I'll poke the person responsible for this

Jokes aside, I've had this map for 2 years. I don't know how much effort you've put into this after these 2 years have passed, but I seriously want you to rank this because since this maps discovery, I've regularly listened to this song outside of osu! and I've grown very fond of it, it's such an emotionally calming song. Not to mention, the SB production is amazing. Not ranking that work of art would be an injustice, honestly.
Thank you very much! I'm really glad to hear this since one of my goals was to promote songs like this with mapping. I'll try not to let all the effort go to waste~

GL

Thanks a ton for the very detailed and helpful mod! I really appreciate it

- Yoshimaro - wrote:

hi im modder c: hi c:

SPOILER

Hathz

1. 00:32:727 - Starting here, you switch to much more passive rhythm which seemed strange while playing. Compare 00:25:738 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:36:818 (1,2,3,4,5) - . What I mean by passive is that you switch from capturing mostly every element in the music to capturing the minimum to maintain the flow. I'm not sure if it's that big of a problem, will leave it for now.
2. 00:42:975 (3) - This slider is snapped wrong and doesn't show up on the AImod, weird. See below
3. 00:43:678 (4) - This circle is also off snapped. Listening to it in 25%, you may want to check the wave file of the song to double check these are timed right. Additionally, if they are timed right, I highly suggest making 00:42:975 (3,4) - one combined slider, whether it be a reverse slider or not, to avoid players having trouble reading this. As far as timing goes on these, the song kinda slows down a bit and I tried my best to time it without adding more timing points. It's just snapped to 1/16.
4. 00:46:363 - I think it would make more sense to let the break occur immediately following 00:43:678 (4) - because that's when there are important storyboard elements being shown. Also, there is no gap up to 00:57:272 - so it's just inconsistent. Fair enough
5. 01:56:420 (3) - Maybe Ctrl + J and rotate 10 degrees, then blanket 01:56:250 (2) - ? this could be synergistic with 01:55:909 (1) - as well, since it can be blanketed by it. I think I prefer it the way it is now, also there's not much space to fiddle around there and I don't wanna break everything >w<
6. 03:15:000 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Yooooo this was really beautiful... Ayy
7. 03:31:875 - OMG and a shooting star jeez I really love this storyboard lol. I'm just here to get the praise for Kawa's work~
8. 04:46:363 (1) - Maybe curve the end of it a bit? stylistic preference, no functionality impact here c: Uh, wrong link? ^^
9. 05:04:090 (1,1,2) - For OCD, can we make this a triangle or a 90 degree angle also wow, I'm really loving these flourishes at the end of kiai, good job on those. Fixed position of a circle slightly!
10. 07:00:511 (2,3) - If you alter the shape of 07:00:511 (2) - just a bit more, you can blanket both 07:01:022 (3) - and 07:01:363 (1) - in a more synergistic way.

Rizen wrote:

personally not fond of the cymbal crash hitsound for normal-hitfinish and soft-hitfinish. I suggset something softer like this. I think would compliment the song nicer
Thank you, this is perfect! Swapped both normal- and soft-hitfinish with your sample

any way to make the storyboard compatible with 4:3 resolution users? Just have to move the collaber names at the bottom right a little more to the left so it doesn't get cut
I've previously aligned the lyrics to 4:3 resolution, not sure why it didn't cross my mind to do the same for the collab names. Fixed!

Endless

1. 01:08:693 (2) - sounds like you're making your own rhythm here, which isn't a very good idea for a rhythm game... I can't really hear any audible beats on the red tick but I do hear something on the white tick.
2. 01:09:375 (4) - sounds overmapped, no sound in the music to support this circle. applies to next couple of ones too since it appears you're reusing the rhythm pattern
3. 01:15:000 (1,2) - ^ a 1/1 slider would fit better imo
   These three points make a lot of sense and made me rethink my view on the section between 01:05:454 - and 01:21:818 - . So I remapped it into a simpler rhythm that follows the background beats while still applying what you mentioned.
4. 01:25:056 (4) - I see an 'increasing spacing' concept here but the increase isn't very consistent. Try moving this somewhere like x:272 y:68 to smooth it out
   Seems fair, moved to the same position as 01:26:931 (2) -
5. 01:44:232 - perhaps add a circle here for consistency with 01:38:778 (3) - ?
   I suppose having a 1/2 gap there feels a bit off, added a circle

Any points not mentioned here will be checked by Hathz once he comes online~

very lovely storyboard, song, and map. I wish you good luck on getting this ranked!

Each map must use at least two different custom combo colors unless the default skin is forced. The combo colors must not blend with the map's background/storyboard/video in any case. This is so hit objects are always visible to the player and custom skin's combo colors do not blend with the background accidentally.

Sidetail wrote:

[general]
for blur.jpg, and mblur.jpg why don't you try 80% jpg compression with programs like paint.net. current adds up to 800kb while converted files can be at around 200kb.
Good point! Used 85% jpg compression to decrease total filesize of the two from 779kb to 147kb with no noticeable loss in quality.

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01:09:886 (4,5) - would be better off using 01:07:159 (2) - imo for simplicity
I went with your suggestion for now because it's better than what I did (it fixes the previous 3/4 gaps between objects) but it now feels rather monotonous. Will leave it like this unless I come up with something better soon.
01:20:795 (4,5) - ^ Same as above
01:37:414 (4) - two clickable would be nicer to play as just a note before 01:36:477 (5,6,1) - was same. works better with circles from my perspective. also though suddenly introducing 1/4 slider like that seemed out of place. As a comparison 06:21:051 (2) - this one also uses 1/4 like current but has hi-hat sound which is just more than a single beat like kick, thus they are different.
This part has been brought up before but you make a valid point. Changed the 1/4 slider into 2 circles and changed the pattern a bit
03:35:795 (1) - start spinner at 03:35:539 - since there isn't really distinctive sound that current spinner is mapped to. Might as well give players more time to spin
Sounds fair, changed~
04:24:204 (4,5) - stack feels better with this
Changed the entire pattern before it (04:22:840 (5,6,1,2,3) - ) a bit and stacked 4,5
05:21:839 (1) - unsnapped? if on purpose, use red tick for better control rather than let it hang on static bpm
I'm.... not sure how that was unsnapped... Fixed!
05:25:546 (1,1) - ^
I'll leave this the way it is for now because I'm not entirely sure whether all the parts using these exact 3 notes following the same sound are snapped right at all but I'll ask around and hopefully get it fixed soon.


Overall, it is very well made, including SB. however it would be nicer if you used a combo colour that doesn't blend in with bg.
as an example, that blends in to well with bg and I have hard time viewing it. (I am colourblind) and rule states that:

Each map must use at least two different custom combo colors unless the default skin is forced. The combo colors must not blend with the map's background/storyboard/video in any case. This is so hit objects are always visible to the player and custom skin's combo colors do not blend with the background accidentally.

Decreased the color luminosity on all combo colors a bit so they're slightly darker. I generally prefer to use a tad lighter colors since the majority of the player-base plays with a fully dimmed background. If you plan on rechecking this, let me know if the colors are any better now or if they still need adjusting~

Hope that helps. Sure did!

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.
Hiya! Sorry 'bout my late reply...

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  Kawa

1. 01:09:545 (3) - here i don't get why the distance after and before this circle is different. The distance is higher before. But it's the other way around with 01:12:273 (4) - when the sound which is introduced, so 01:12:614 - and 01:09:886 - is the same. The spacing here looks a little messy i guess, it would be better if you make things consistent = the same kind of emphasis = higheror equal distance before or after for both cases.
   That was a spacing mistake on my part, normalized spacing on several notes. The fixed circles now have consistent 1.32x spacing before and after them
   
2. 01:20:795 (4,5) - same case as ^, you used the same spacing for 01:07:159 (2,3) - and 01:09:886 (4,5) - which is 1.70, and the same spacing for 01:12:614 (5,6) - and 01:18:068 (5,6) - which is 2.0, but you reduce the spacing for 01:20:795 (4,5) - , if the spacing for these notes was supposed to increase each 2 times, the distance between 01:20:795 (4,5) - should be higher.
   I hope I understood this correctly... changed the spacing on all these slider->circle repetitions to roughly 1.72x. It wasn't meant to be gradually increasing
   
3. 01:42:102 (6,1) - I'd suggest you to unstack here. Stacking objects as you did here is kind of slowdown on a section which is played with a "linear" flow, by linear i mean there is no stacked objects before as you did for 01:42:102 (6,1) - . This would give a better impression if you avoid it.
   Good point, unstacked and reworked pattern to keep the same circular flow
   
4. 02:42:784 (3,4,5) - A person (if she's still alive) would tell you her theory about this kind of issue here. Well, to resume, one of the strongest notes of what i mentioned is 02:43:295 (6) - which is supposed to have the clap hitsound is currently followed by a sliderend, and it should be played by a sliderstart or a circle to make it emphasized better. It doesn't really sound right in everything if the clap hitsound is played by a sliderend, it's something which applies to everything. Well, just to say, instead of using a slider for 02:43:125 (5) - , use 2 circles.
   Sounds about right, changed the pattern a bit, terminated the slider and replaced it with 2 circles
   
5. 03:04:602 (4) - I can say the same thing with this reversed slider. The note on the blue tick is really strong and it sounds weird to skip it or just make it followed by a reverse arrow. It will be better if you put a triple, instead of a reversed slider here.
   I figured a reverse slider would add more diversity but I suppose proper emphasis takes priority
   
6. 03:43:636 (1,2) - I find it a little weird that the distance between them looks the same as 03:44:318 (3,4) - visually, but the gap is different (1/4 and 1/2) and that could be a little confusing, when everything before was not that difficult to read. Consider increasing the distance between 03:44:318 (3,4) - or reducing the spacing between 03:43:636 (1,2) - to make things better to read and not that ambiguous.
   Reduced the spacing between 03:43:636 (1,2) - since it was too high for a 1/4 gap for a non-intense part
   
7. 04:26:761 (7,1) - Concerning aesthetics, you should try to avoid weird and ugly overlaps when you can do it easily without breaking the current structure of your patterns. So your patterns will look more cute and neat if you move this objects 04:27:272 (1) - (and maybe 2-3 other objects after) on the left.
   Moved 04:27:272 (1,2,3,4) - to the left and rotated slightly but I'm afraid I can't do much about the overlap between 04:27:272 (1,3) - without either breaking the spacing or changing the pattern/flow too much.

Good Luck ~

Cherry Blossom wrote:

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1. 00:25:738 (5,6,1) - The slider (1) is straight, so it would be better for visual if these objects 00:25:738 (5,6,1) - are straight and not curved. Well, it's just my opinion. Fixed
2. 00:31:022 (4) - I don't really find that it is a good idea to stack the sliderend and 00:31:278 (5,1) - . Visually this looks same as 00:24:545 (1,2) - but there is a circle between these sliders. Maybe confusing ? not really, but concerning the style, it would be better to unstack 00:31:278 (5,1) - from 00:31:022 (4) - . You still can make them overlapped. Sure makes sense
3. 01:59:829 (6,1) - this should not be an antijump here, because the note on 02:00:000 - is really strong and deserves to be emphasized better, so using a higher distance between 02:00:000 (1) - instead of a lower is more suitable, as you did for 02:02:386 (5) - for example. Fixed
4. 02:11:931 (6,7,1) - this kind of motion could be improved if you reduce the angle between them (move 02:12:272 (1) - upward) to create a lower angle and make this motion more comfortable to play. Fixed
5. 02:30:681 (1,2,3) - i don't really get what you tried to follow here, this looks snapped to a beat time divisor which must be avoided to follow things that sound offbeat. Plus 02:30:823 (2) - doesn't follow anything actually, there's no clear note in the song to allow you to use 1/12 to follow something that is snapped to nothing. So 02:30:823 (2) - must be deleted. A 3/4 slider (starts on white and end on blue after the red tick) suits better than the 3 circles. if you need help, just try this instead
   SPOILER

   
   Sure, thanks
6. 03:07:840 (4,5,1) - This kind of motion could be improved too. The current direction of 03:07:840 (4) - is the opposite of the next patterns, and it fits better if you reverse it like
   SPOILER

   
   Aye
7. 06:21:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I find it a little weird that this pattern doesn't contain any jump, compared to previous and next patterns. It would give a better impression if you try to make things consistent, so if you keep the difficulty consistent. This pattern should have some jump between sliders or circles.:thinking:

Reazen wrote:

BNs? Where are BNs?? wtf.
Great map I am playing this everyday idk why xD
Playable storyboard <333333
+kudos ( Kudos matters right?.. right?..)

1. 03:44:318 (3) - hmm, skipping 03:44:659 - this sound seems not a good idea. how about use same beats at 03:38:693 (2,3,4,5,6) - here?
2. 03:48:068 (2) - same as above. u can hear sounds at 03:48:323 - here too. maybe u can use 3circle stream at here
3. 03:50:795 (2) - following vocal seems bad idea. cuz only there used 1/3. and u didn't used 1/3 at 03:52:159 - here even this point has same vocal beat
4. 04:11:420 (3,4,1) - that also weird. pretty weird. at first, 04:11:590 - you skipped here even it has vocal and hi-hat sounds. and you should know 04:11:420 (3,4) - these part isn't same as like 04:13:977 (2,3) - here. and 04:12:102 - here also have hi-hat. how about just use simple 1/2 beats?
5. 04:29:147 (4,5) - this should be 1/1 slider like 04:23:693 (3) - this?

Kawashiro wrote:

hello there! glad to meet u! i am kawa too :3
Hello there fellow Kawa person o3o/ Just so we're clear here, I'm the real Kawa!
random

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1. Cool mod

btw did u make this sb? i rly luv it XD
I did! I'm glad you like it~
GL ></

Kawashiro wrote:

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1. 04:11:420 (3,4,1) - that also weird. pretty weird. at first, 04:11:590 - you skipped here even it has vocal and hi-hat sounds. and you should know 04:11:420 (3,4) - these part isn't same as like 04:13:977 (2,3) - here. and 04:12:102 - here also have hi-hat. how about just use simple 1/2 beats? Changed slightly.

Renumi wrote:

that storyboard is so beautiful, i really hope you get this to approval sometime ;o;7

Kawashiro wrote:

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1. 03:44:318 (3) - hmm, skipping 03:44:659 - this sound seems not a good idea. how about use same beats at 03:38:693 (2,3,4,5,6) - here?
   At first I used a return slider there because I had trouble coming up with a decent pattern and because I thought it added some variation to the rhythm. Changed the return slider to single circle -> triple rhythm to stay consistent with the rest
2. 03:48:068 (2) - same as above. u can hear sounds at 03:48:323 - here too. maybe u can use 3circle stream at here
   While I agree changing this return slider to the same rhythm as before could work, I decided to keep it as it is now because I believe using a simpler pattern/rhythm right before the 1/4 jump pattern 03:48:750 (4,5,1) - feels more comfortable to play.
3. 03:50:795 (2) - following vocal seems bad idea. cuz only there used 1/3. and u didn't used 1/3 at 03:52:159 - here even this point has same vocal beat
   Improvised some 1/3 rhythm in the section from 03:51:818 - to 03:52:840 - to stay consistent with the 1/3 section before it but I could really use more feedback on this change
4. 04:29:147 (4,5) - this should be 1/1 slider like 04:23:693 (3) - this?
   I prefer to keep it this way. 04:23:693 (3) - I used a 1/1 slider here as a lead-in for the "sleepy vocals" and the slider pattern following right after it 04:24:545 (1,2,3) - while I kept 04:29:147 (4,5) - as a 1/2 slider + circle because the increased note density after the first section. Using a slower 1/1 slider here while everything else aside from the emphasized stronger downbeats uses 1/2 would feel inconsistent and awkward.

Thank you again for modding and I'm sorry it took me so long to get back and reply!

Secretpipe wrote:

when qualified

Kibbleru wrote:

wow a moddingv1 lol
It's an old mep <w<;

06:48:409 (5,1) - ^
I honestly have no idea how I could let that pass... Reworked the pattern a bit to look more visually appealing
05:16:406 (3,2) - ^
Fixed by snapping the sliders 05:16:406 (3) - and 05:19:119 (2) - to the dominant white ticks before them. While the sound they follow seems a tiny bit delayed, I believe it would be impossible to notice mid-gameplay and would be better to stay consistent with the rest of the map rather than making separate timing points for each sound, especially in sections such as 05:15:681 - where the player would normally assume the gap between all 3 objects is the same
01:37:159 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i'd recommend something similar to what hathz did instead 00:31:875 (3,4,5) -
Sounds good, changed the pattern & rhythm by swapping around some sliders and circles to match it while still flowing well into the next part.

metadata n stuff

1. Song announcement
2. Official m-flo channel

1. This is the closest thing I could find

Kibbleru wrote:

SPOILER

00:21:136 (2,3) - a bit nazi but i would put some more space here to make it look more visually consistent ok
06:48:409 (5,1) - ^
00:42:975 (3,4) - is my osu broken or something or is every1 just making these obscene snappings to snap stuff to vocals now? add more timing points instead. ok
00:54:588 (2) - 05:05:497 (1) -
yeah please don't do this, its not good practice, if u really need add timing points instead i really need
01:56:420 (3) - try this? ok
02:15:852 - i recommend mapping this out here, it would give some more contrast to the symmetry stuff ur doing next measure ok
02:49:772 (3,1) - can u make this overlap look..nicer? i guess
04:11:420 (3,4,5) - this is.. kind of weird, please just map the drums here fine
04:36:392 (4,5) - why is this stacked so weirdly becaused otherwise osu will auto-stack the 2nd circle in the opposite direction of the slider which is not what i want
07:05:454 (1,5) - this is kinda unecessary, u really dont need to perfect stack here, try something else please changed slightly..

qqqant wrote:

move to pending? lol

Kawa wrote:

omg i love you

qqqant wrote:

move to pending? lol

-Mo- wrote:

Storyboard
- 03:16:363 - 05:05:496 - Stars in a night sky are static, so they should move across the sky at the same speed. But for some reason you have some stars moving faster and overtaking other stars which is eehh.
Good point. I went with variable speeds at first since I felt like it gave the scene a more 3D feel. Didn't think for a second about sticking to realism. Changed appropriately~

- blur2.jpg and mblur2.jpg usused.
Eeeeh how did those get in there. Replaced blur.jpg and mblur.jpg with their lower filesize clones and removed unused ones.

Hathz Applied by Hathz
- 00:19:602 (2,3,4) - I guess I understand why the stacks are different, but I still can't help but feel that it looks weird aesthetically. I think you could get away with stacking them the same since it's early in the map and it's still possible to read based on approach circles, or you could just change the pattern to avoid doing this altogether. changed this one, the one after left the same cause i feel like it fits well with the music
- 01:51:818 (1) - Emphasis on the head of this seems underwhelming since low spacing and previous slider points staight into it. Easiest fix is Ctrl+H and increase spacing, but do whatever. kay
- 02:29:999 - Lower SV would've been cool for this section but I guess it's fine if you don't want to change. keeping as it is, that section is really short and it seems better to keep it same SV
- 04:16:704 (2,4,1) - Stacks are doing weird thinigs here. Turn on View -> Stacking and make it so first two sliders are neatly stacked. fixed
- 06:24:545 (1) - Similar to before, emphasis is kinda lacking because spacing and previous slider flipped dat
- 06:55:568 (5) - Could Ctrl+H so overlap is avoided. sure
- 06:57:272 (1) - Linear slider like this just seems really out of place since most of this section is using regular curve sliders. Something like this I could see as being more suitable fixed
- 07:06:477 (5) - Off blanket, might as well fix. fixed

Kawa
- 01:36:732 (6) - Stack is broken.
Good eye, fixed!
- 04:23:181 (1,3) - Could avoid this overlap if you wanted.
The overlap was intentional and I'd prefer to keep it like that since I think it looks okay
- 04:25:908 (1) - This sort of slider just seems kinda weird to use especially for a 1/2 without any significant sound on it. I would just keep it a regular shape pointing leftwards.
I was aiming for a shape that prevents the risk of a sliderbreak when doing the sharp 04:25:908 (1,2) - movement and that seemed like the best option (albeit not the best looking one). I've changed the slider into a single curve that should still leave enough room for the sharp jump without risking a missed slider end.
- 04:31:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Would be cooler if the 1/4 spacing was consistent through this.
Sounds fair, unified spacing on all 1/4 stacks to 0.20x
- 05:33:068 (2,3) - Reducing spacing for this thing all of a sudden seems kinda odd.
Reshaped the slider and moved it a bit to stay consistent with the spacing compared to the rest
- 06:50:625 (2) - I think there are better choices than doing an overlap like this. For example, this could be stacked on the tail, and then you could move 06:50:454 (1) to stack with 06:49:772 (3).
That was my initial idea but I tried the half overlaps because I was afraid of the readability aspect. Stacked the notes as suggested~

Pop is for timing concerns, happy to rebubble when that's resolved.

hi-mei wrote:

hey

00:38:181 - 00:27:272 - forgot to emphasize this in SB? reference: 00:32:727 - 00:21:818 - 01:32:726 - etc