[General]
[Cup]
Good luck~
- Unused files:
- Yuiko Ohara - Hoshi wo Tadoreba (Yumeno Himiko).bak
- 00:00:244 (1,3) - Looks unnecessarily cramped imo, it's like you're trying to force a pattern aesthetically, but actually you don't have to right? Just some symmetric stuff like 00:07:572 (1,2) - would already do just fine.
- 00:11:236 (3) - NC?
- 00:22:229 (1,2) - 00:29:557 (1,2,3) - The rhythm density on these places shouldn't be too different considering the vocal on these places are similar.
- 00:47:877 - 01:05:282 - Use whistle instead? Pretty sure the sound here isn't the same as 00:48:336 .
- 00:49:252 - Normal sampleset instead?
- 01:00:702 - Shouldn't this have the same hitsounding as 00:46:045 ?
- 01:15:358 - Continuous 1/2 slider patterns are too intense for a Normal as the easiest diff in the mapset, would be better if you change from 1/2 to 1/1 sliders (if you apply this, you can change 01:20:855 (1,2,3) - to a 1/2 slider pattern too if you want)
- 00:13:755 (2,3,4) - Aren't these supposed to be on 1/6 snaps?
- 00:17:419 (2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythms are too complicated for Hard imo, would be more intuitive in gameplay if 00:17:648 (4) was changed to 2 circles.
- 00:54:290 (4,1) - Overlapping the reverse arrow is strongly discouraged.
- 00:29:557 - 1/4 rhythms should be added more in this part considering what you used in the earlier part 00:14:900 is a lot more noticeable despite having similar intensity.
[Cup]
- 00:09:404 (4,5) - Use a slider instead? Since they're mapped on the same sound as 00:07:572 (1) .
- 00:57:496 - Shouldn't be skipped imo, how about ending the slider there and add a circle on 00:57:725 instead?
- 00:59:328 (4,5,1) - Could've used a denser rhythm on this imo, considering this is the transition to the later half of kiai so the rhythm used here should be more dense/prominent than other parts.
- 00:17:992 (4) - This is probably the only place in this section where you put in a 1/4 rhythm, so it looks unnecessarily stand out. Probably would be better if you use 1/4 rhythms more regularly in calmer parts or don't at all.
- 00:30:244 - Just a circle here is also fine too if you want to make this consistent with 00:33:221 (1,2) .
- 00:59:786 (3,4,1) - Same as Cup, though I really recommend to do something with this to keep up with the difficulty spread, the rhythm density on this part between Salad and Magic is too different.
- 00:02:076 (3) - Is the same sound as 00:00:244 (1) but the movement required on these sliders are so different.
- 00:10:320 - If you're using 5% volume on this then isn't it better to skip this in the first place? (00:10:091 is a lot more prominent to start a slider too) With 5% volume, this can be a borderline of not being rankable since it's not really audible in gameplay.
- 00:16:045 (6,1) - Make this a dash? Since you did a dash on almost every downbeat in this section so might as well do it here too.
- 00:17:992 - Add something here? Like what you did in Salad, since having 3 sliders 00:17:648 (4,5,1) in a row seems dull atm.
- 00:40:320 (5,1) - The hyperdash should be here instead of 00:40:549 (1,2) imo since the rhythm changes at 00:40:549 .
- 01:15:129 (5,1) - Add a hyperdash could work too since the rhythm changes here, and you already have a hyperdash on 01:22:458 (7,1) so why not this one?
Good luck~