Thanks for modOhwow wrote:
Edit: m4m
[NaWi's Insane]
00:12:680 (1,2) - inconsistent with 00:06:862 (4) - It's intentional for differentiating the vocals at 00:06:862 - and 00:12:680 - . At 00:06:862 (4) - the vocal holds, but at 00:12:680 - it's directly released.
mapset looks pretty good. sry for bad mod. hope this helps somehow.
Thanks for moddingTheOnlyLeon wrote:
Hey, from my queue
NaWi's Insane
The first measure is really strange, You initially use slider tails as a way to map the first strum in any given three note, however in the following measures you ignore the slider tail and use 2 circles that follow the slider instead. I think this inconsistency should be cleared up, and you should pick one or the other. I'm aiming for variations here. I simplified the rhythm at the first measure that it's suitable for an intro. Then I made the rhythm later a bit complex to make sure that players are ready for the jumps ahead.
00:16:226 (6,1) - This 1/4 jump is evil, this is still the slow part of the song, and the last instance of a triplet under a slider tail was connected, while this is spaced as a jump. There's no reason for this sudden difficult pattern, the spacing is too high here. This is mainly for aesthetics, and it's actually not as evil as shown. While I prepared some triplets before, this shouldn't be that hard to hit.
00:39:044 (5,6) - This is really awkward visibly, and while the pattern itself isn't overly hard, it's the only time in the map anything like this is used, even when this exact measure is repeated in the music you mapped it completely differently, This would probably work better if 6 was flipped and moved lower to create pseudo-circular motion between notes, but that's just what I would do. Okay, changed this up, but I still want some emphasis here to the vocals so I'd create a little bit of flowbreak.
Well that's all, most of the diffs looks pretty good, This is almost certainly rankable with a couple changes here and there, GL with this set.
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Tags:Fueled by Ramen OOR Ambitions Short Ver A-Sketch William K Akitoshi Hazu- Twenty
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257,67,62680,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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