Marika - Mizuiro Stage · forum

Momochikun

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-06-05T14:35:52+00:00

Mir wrote:
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[Mochi's Hard]
00:03:456 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - rhythm mapped is different for both instances even though the rhythm in the song is the same if you're following guitar o.O, happens consistently throughout this section and i don't really get why especially since 00:07:056 (4) - 00:04:314 (3) - are not guitar notes, they make this weird i dont see what's wrong with this one tbh
00:15:628 (1,2) - blanket tilted fixed
00:18:542 (1,2) - rhythm should be the same as 00:17:171 (1,2,3,4) since you're following the same thing, especially weird considering 00:19:228 (3) - and 00:17:856 (3) - are the same so it looks inconsistent nah
00:20:428 (3,4) - ctrl+g this rhythm would follow vocals better imo
00:30:028 (2,3) - don't get why this isn't stacked but 00:28:656 (2,3) - is, they sound pretty much the same
00:46:742 - more noticeable triple here than 00:46:828 (4) - imo maybe swap the reverse slider with 00:46:656 (3) - (ctrl+g the rhythm) fixed
00:48:714 (1) - worth 2 circles for that sweet click emphasis considering these are strong beats nah prefer sliders
01:00:028 (2) - slider sounds weird to me since there are distinct vocals you could map with 2 1/2 sliders. not only that but there are drums going on that this ignores too. i wanted to express the drums only here
01:03:114 (4,5,6,7) - err why suddenly stop mapping the 3/4 vocal you mapped at 00:56:256 (3) - 00:52:142 (3) - looks really inconsistent since they're all the same there're notes there sint
01:05:856 - might be better off clickable since 01:06:028 (3) - sounds like it should be paired up with that sound (part of the same word/phrase)
01:06:542 (3) - mehhh weird rhythm choice imo since 01:00:885 (1,2,3,4) - worked better to follow vocals, having the vocals currently on the reverse and the slider end doesn't feel very nice especially since you've been mapping to them pretty intently as well just want to chill after triplet smh
01:13:056 (4) - if you hitsounded 2 snares here might make more sense to have them both clickable no? weird to have a snare on the head but then not click the second on the tail imo. on second listen isn't 01:13:142 - also a drum? you could put a reverse here if you want to nah prefer this one
01:15:799 (6,1) - only instance of a stack you do for these sounds and all other instances are unstacked. also inconsistent. see 01:18:542 (5,1) - 00:04:314 (3,4,1) - etc well it still makes sense

Let's see how this un-formatted mod goes lol. I wanted to try it at least once.

Joe Castle wrote:
HI! im here from #modreqs, since you requested mods there!
so lts see if i can help you buddy!

Mochi Hard:

1. 00:32:599 (2,3,4,1) - for me, 00:33:285 (4,1) should have a similar spacing like 00:32:599 (2,3), it could fit pretty well. k
2. 01:06:371 (1,2,3) - it should have the same spacing like 01:05:514 (2,3,4), it could make it look more comfy to play that one has cymbal

Short mod since the rest of the diffs are awesome, but i hope it helps

Kocari wrote:
Hello from modding queue

[Mochi's Hard]
00:08:085 (2,3) - Strange to implement an overlap here as well as the sudden change in movement. It's took a different approach to be hit and it's spaced further than expected as well since it's the only one that's spaced this way changed
00:27:799 (1) - Not really a good choice of a repeat here imo it doesn't utlize the strong beat. Would've preferred it to be http://puu.sh/w7TtC/8099193338.jpg
Where both the 1/2 will be mapped into the vocal and then the strong beat is clickable just so it can match with 00:29:514 (1) - idk it already has good flow i dont think a way to change xD
00:32:942 (3,4) - I don't think this needed to be emphasized this way. It just leaves flow out of the question. Making (3) into a 1/2 slider would be better for this part. It's not really corresponding to how you previously did pauses like this. Just like this 00:41:171 (3,4) - You could've done the same thing here but you didn't i dont understand what do you mean, but i did somth
00:47:342 (1) - Skipping over valuable bass sounds with this repeat because it makes 00:48:199 (2,3) - seems so bad in comparison to what you could've mapped previously http://puu.sh/w7U07/682f5e52b6.jpg fixed
Seems good :d :d :d

Easy is okay. Good luck with the mapset seems clean to a point. Just a little more and I'll see it in ranked.

danielexus wrote:
From ma qqqq!

Mochi's Hard
00:16:142 (2) - Blanket xd
00:17:171 (1,3) - Why aren't these the same slider shape? I would recommend copying 00:17:171 (1) - and rotate it changed
00:30:885 (3,1) - I don't really like this overlap sure fixed
00:51:114 (3) - tiiny blanket (srry im nitpicking now xd)
00:51:799 (2,1) - blanket nah no blanket here

GOOD LUCK!

Yamicchi wrote:
late mod :d
[Hard]
• 00:48:714 (1,2) - hmm, why not this? http://puu.sh/w98s2/ec2601cbd4.jpg prefer current rhythm

Thanks for mod

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_orange

440 posts

Joined September 2015

_orange 2017-06-06T16:16:23+00:00

hello

[Easy]

00:39:799 (3) - Touching the HP bar
00:44:599 (1) - (minor issue) Also touching the HP bar on 4:3 resolutions
01:18:885 (5) - Slightly touching the HP bar
00:26:085 (2,3) - The flow here isn't really similar to other parts like 00:15:114 (2,3) - this or 00:31:571 (2,3) - this

[Ezreal's Normal]

nice diff didn't find anything

[Mochi's Hard]

00:06:114 (1,2) - Swap NC?
00:07:056 (4) - Why do youu emphasize and stack this but not for 00:04:314 (3,4) - 00:05:685 (3,4) - these?
00:19:228 (3) - Move this a little further from 1 to make the spacing even

a

01:04:314 (2) - I think this shouldn't be emphasized as much, not an important sound imo
01:20:771 (4,1) - The jump here is also quite big, compared to 01:20:256 (3,4) - this spacing

[Swimming Club]

00:22:656 (1) - Slightly touching HP bar
00:43:056 (7,1) - Big jump for a normal vocal sound imo
00:48:714 (1,2,4,6) - You could emphasize these more for the big sound on them
01:20:256 (1,2,3) - It would be nice if you made this into a perfect triangle
01:20:771 (3,4,5) - Here too
01:21:285 (5,1,2,3,4) - 01:22:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - It'd also look better if you made a pentagon with the create polygon circles tool
01:21:971 (3,4,5) - You don't have a lot of flat angles in your map, but this might be hard to fix
Really nice diff! Good aesthetics and didn't find much problems on spacing or flow

GL!

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-06-06T18:21:53+00:00

_orange wrote:
hello

[Easy]

00:39:799 (3) - Touching the HP bar o
00:44:599 (1) - (minor issue) Also touching the HP bar on 4:3 resolutions o
01:18:885 (5) - Slightly touching the HP bar o
00:26:085 (2,3) - The flow here isn't really similar to other parts like 00:15:114 (2,3) - this or 00:31:571 (2,3) - this i think its ok since its still visually similar to those parts you mentioned and its just a slight variation on rotation, i fixed a blanket here tho

[Swimming Club]

00:22:656 (1) - Slightly touching HP bar o
00:43:056 (7,1) - Big jump for a normal vocal sound imo made it a bit smaller
00:48:714 (1,2,4,6) - You could emphasize these more for the big sound on them ok lol i made these even bigger
01:20:256 (1,2,3) - It would be nice if you made this into a perfect triangle yea
01:20:771 (3,4,5) - Here too yea
01:21:285 (5,1,2,3,4) - 01:22:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - It'd also look better if you made a pentagon with the create polygon circles tool maybe, but i really like how this jump pattern plays and i don't really wanna sacrifice playability for a nicer shape here
01:21:971 (3,4,5) - You don't have a lot of flat angles in your map, but this might be hard to fix eh i think it plays ok anyway
Really nice diff! Good aesthetics and didn't find much problems on spacing or flow

GL!

thanks for the mod!

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-06-09T16:47:42+00:00

swim
ar could be lower imo, maybe give 8.7 as try?
my main issue with this diff is how the chorus simplifies the 3/4 rhythms too much
00:52:142 (3,4,5) - could at least be something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/YtDJDtEn.jpg
00:54:885 (3,4,5) - triples like that are tilt when song emphasizes blue tick with snare. something more like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jOlbHOzy.jpg could make sense
00:56:256 (3,4,5) - etc => same as first point
00:57:456 (2,3,4) - similar issue, if you want to keep polarity something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/L1xsajM3.jpg would be nice

00:22:656 (1,2) - 00:23:342 (1,2) - sounds like the same thing but mapped so differently? would be better to make first one spaced cause all other times you do it, like 00:33:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
00:14:428 - part overall seems to lack whistles, could be used for guitar/vocal emphasis for example
like 00:19:914 - 00:30:885 (1) - whistles etc

00:34:914 - would make this clickable for drum transition/snare
00:34:914 - similar to chorus, the rhythm here makes no sense, most important thing is middle of a triple
actually I think this could even be used to somehow introduce 3/4 rhythms with something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/rKQJCcYX.jpg, then 00:39:627 - could be mapped the same way or even http://lasse.s-ul.eu/zTZW5Du6.jpg
same happens a lot on spots like 00:42:456 (4) -

mochi
00:36:885 (2) - kinda similar issue as top diff, clicking the least important thing here and passively mapping the main layers is also quite questionable
for this and other similar ones in this part
01:03:114 (3,4,5,6) - think what you did at 00:52:142 (3,4,5,1) - represented 3/4 rhythm much better
01:19:742 (3) - weird rhythm, slider starts on weak drums and then ends on melody you followed before. think a rhythm like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/i5Ri6v51.jpg works better here

ezreal
00:15:456 (3) - would move this to next red tick cause you followed vocals before and after, so http://lasse.s-ul.eu/uNROs3gi.jpg makes more sense
00:20:942 (3) - ^
01:08:599 - rhythm like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/2kqPCmbI.jpg would make more sense tapping wise with emphasis of the song
01:22:142 - ignores most of the song, why not something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jIvdPRVI.jpg or similar?
01:26:085 (1) - make this start at least 1/2 earlier so it feels actually connected to the sound it maps

easy
00:06:199 - would nc to keep it similar to nc usage over the whole map // 01:17:514 (4) - same
01:09:285 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - seems like your 2 measure nc pattern got broken somewhere around here

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2017-06-09T17:55:18+00:00

clothes is changed like your favour
ENGRISH

Rieri

905 posts

Joined December 2014

Rieri 2017-06-13T01:35:26+00:00

Lasse wrote:
ezreal
00:15:456 (3) - would move this to next red tick cause you followed vocals before and after, so http://lasse.s-ul.eu/uNROs3gi.jpg makes more sense
00:20:942 (3) - ^
01:08:599 - rhythm like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/2kqPCmbI.jpg would make more sense tapping wise with emphasis of the song
01:22:142 - ignores most of the song, why not something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jIvdPRVI.jpg or similar? i think having a little rest here from tapping is okay to have
01:26:085 (1) - make this start at least 1/2 earlier so it feels actually connected to the sound it maps

Thanks for modding!

u p d a t e

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Log Off Now 2017-06-21T13:06:45+00:00

Lasse wrote:
swim
ar could be lower imo, maybe give 8.7 as try? did 8.8 instead
my main issue with this diff is how the chorus simplifies the 3/4 rhythms too much
00:52:142 (3,4,5) - could at least be something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/YtDJDtEn.jpg yea
00:54:885 (3,4,5) - triples like that are tilt when song emphasizes blue tick with snare. something more like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jOlbHOzy.jpg could make sense tbh i kinda like how it plays, and introducing a double here when it's not been done previously in the map feels a bit weird imo
00:56:256 (3,4,5) - etc => same as first point yea
00:57:456 (2,3,4) - similar issue, if you want to keep polarity something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/L1xsajM3.jpg would be nice yea

00:22:656 (1,2) - 00:23:342 (1,2) - sounds like the same thing but mapped so differently? would be better to make first one spaced cause all other times you do it, like 00:33:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - yea
00:14:428 - part overall seems to lack whistles, could be used for guitar/vocal emphasis for example
like 00:19:914 - 00:30:885 (1) - whistles etc yea

00:34:914 - would make this clickable for drum transition/snare yea
00:34:914 - similar to chorus, the rhythm here makes no sense, most important thing is middle of a triple
actually I think this could even be used to somehow introduce 3/4 rhythms with something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/rKQJCcYX.jpg, then 00:39:627 - could be mapped the same way or even http://lasse.s-ul.eu/zTZW5Du6.jpg idk what you mean xd, you used the same timestamp altho i think ik which part you mean
same happens a lot on spots like 00:42:456 (4) -

easy
00:06:199 - would nc to keep it similar to nc usage over the whole map // 01:17:514 (4) - same yea
01:09:285 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - seems like your 2 measure nc pattern got broken somewhere around here yea

srry for the super slow reply, ty for the mod. gonna do a lot of work in the top diff later on but i can't atm because no pc

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Log Off Now 2017-10-04T01:01:18+00:00

revive fixing lasse's mod and fixing a few visual spacing/weird overlap issues

Lasse

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Lasse 2017-10-18T21:12:31+00:00

00:36:371 - why is this part not hitsounded

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Lasse wrote:
00:36:371 - why is this part not hitsounded

im an idiot (also fixed some hitsound errors in proez/mochi's diffs)

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Lasse 2017-10-19T10:30:51+00:00

bubbled

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Mir 2017-10-19T15:37:23+00:00

Swimming Club
- 00:15:114 (4,1) - Would be cute to stack this on the slider tail but.. really minor lol.
- 00:38:428 (3) - Ooo there's a blue tick thing here if you wanna make a reverse 1/4 to capture it? Kinda similar rhythm to 00:41:171 (4,5,6) -
- 00:48:714 (1,2) - SPACE MORE WHERE IS THE EMPHASIS HERE
- 00:49:228 (4,5) - SPACE 5 LESS WHERE IS THE SETUP HERE
- 01:21:285 (5,1,2,3,4) - You can try to make a nicer star here?

Mochi's Hard
- 00:48:714 (1,2) - Owww I wish you'd emphasize the red ticks more here. This rhythm might work? https://i.imgur.com/AKXG1nG.png

Easy
- 00:18:542 (2,2) - This overlap is kinda visible ingame, try to stack the reverse arrow of the later 2 with the previous 2? https://i.imgur.com/LwZHwkL.jpg

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Log Off Now 2017-10-19T15:53:01+00:00

Mir wrote:
Swimming Club
- 00:15:114 (4,1) - Would be cute to stack this on the slider tail but.. really minor lol. ok lol, also fixed some minor visual spacing things in the pattern afterwards
- 00:38:428 (3) - Ooo there's a blue tick thing here if you wanna make a reverse 1/4 to capture it? Kinda similar rhythm to 00:41:171 (4,5,6) - cool idea
- 00:48:714 (1,2) - SPACE MORE WHERE IS THE EMPHASIS HERE i got it
- 00:49:228 (4,5) - SPACE 5 LESS WHERE IS THE SETUP HERE MATE I GOT IT
- 01:21:285 (5,1,2,3,4) - You can try to make a nicer star here? i tried

Easy
- 00:18:542 (2,2) - This overlap is kinda visible ingame, try to stack the reverse arrow of the later 2 with the previous 2? https://i.imgur.com/LwZHwkL.jpg fixed

Solid. Call me for qualification in 18 hours.

thanks!

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Momochikun 2017-10-20T00:20:28+00:00

Alright fixed

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