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Log Off Now 2017-06-01T21:52:55+00:00

Kocari wrote:
Hello from modding queue

[Swimming Club]
00:06:714 (2,3,4) - Quite sudden to randomly change into 3 notes instead of following the 1/2 sliders. Just really seems like it's out there on the guitar parts you already mapped out. Unless you can explain what emphasis you were going for I'd agree with you because the same triple note drum pattern like this can be heard through the entire beginning of the song changed 3/4 into a slider
00:10:485 (1,2,3) - I like these because they didn't interfere with the guitars you had previously yee
00:11:685 (1) - Can represent the guitar somehow with a bendy slider, seems too natural to have a wave slider but the music generates a vibrato in the guitar. Up to you ehh i see what you mean, but i'd rather just keep it simple and not use overly complex shapes since thats how the rest of the map is styled
00:17:856 (3,4,5) - 00:19:056 (2,3,4) - Seems rather bland. The main part here were her vocals but it's just skipped over with the same set of rhythms. Don't you also agree that this sounds better? http://puu.sh/w7Sqz/605620fac3.jpg You can definitely keep the 2nd portion the way it is but the first one just has so much more of an impact this way. Kinda like 00:21:628 (2,3,4) - im half and half on this, i understand what you mean, but because the vocals in the next combo are extremely similar, i think changing one without changing the other doesn't really make much sense
00:26:599 (1) - Even though I do agree with how you made the vocals here with a 1/1 slider. It's better to utilize the beat at 00:26:771 - and match with 00:26:085 (3,4) - because there is a clear difference between that 1/1 slider there and one at 00:28:142 (1) - i prefer my current rhythm atm i think, it helps make this whole section feel consistent because of how i mapped it towards the end with the same vocal rhythm, the vocal change on the downbeat is barely noticeable to me, so i don't think making it clickable compared to its current rhythm would be of much benefit
00:37:571 (1) - Doesn't necessarily needs to be NC you can change that and NC at 00:38:256 (3) - It'll keep consistency with 8x8 NC and leave that stream part NC have its own thing. Also this note at 00:38:342 (4) - feels weak because the note previously just rolls over it. So the rhythm here would be 1 note then a triplet which has a stronger rhythm palette fix, nice idea on the triple, i originally made it 5 burst to cover the whole pattern, but putting more emphasis on the hihat clasp feels better to play
00:41:085 (4) - Same as ^ can be said here. You can hear the difference in the rhythm the music turns into. It was a continuous musical flow but then it changed after 00:36:371 - so representing them in a different way is better for you yea
00:43:743 (3,4,5,6) - See nice shit here : ok_hand :
00:48:541 (8) - Seems strangely placed. Could represent the bass sound by making a back and forth pattern stacked on (6) Whichever suits you cool idea
00:52:485 (4) - Seems a bit laxed. Could be 2 single notes. Compared them to 00:53:342 (3,4) -These are also mapped to vocals but (4) is the only one with a different vocal flow. Since how you made the 3/4 pattern that cuts right in between the vocals it'll just feel strange to play them out but here the difference in the music good idea, also helps emphasise the sharper way that the vocalist sings better, changed
00:56:599 (4) - Same can be said here if you did above. See the difference? 01:01:056 (1,2) -
01:03:456 (4) - This works since it holds onto her vocals ye
01:07:228 (3,4,5) - Strange to change them this way. Was a triplet but then its 3 single notes. The change here was too drastic for something seemed similiar. I preferred the single notes imo over that triplet. agreed, i wanted to put emphasis on the quick drum interjection but looking over the rest of the kiai i don't let them take over vocal priority until this point, so i've reworked it to follow vocals better
Seems good

Easy is okay. Good luck with the mapset seems clean to a point. Just a little more and I'll see it in ranked.

thanks for the mod!

Rieri

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Joined December 2014

Rieri 2017-06-01T22:58:02+00:00

Kocari wrote:
Hello from modding queue

[Ezreal's Normal]
00:03:285 - No reason to skip this. Could make a 1/2 slider for this part sure
00:10:999 - Should be clickable to match with the same strong guitar sound as 00:11:342 (5) - Would be strange to just have one note that represented the guitar but the other one is underwhelmed by a slider true
00:14:942 (2,3,4) - Rhythm seems improper here. How about? http://puu.sh/w7UnA/5a686cc016.jpg Represent the vocal more and fill in that other vocal area as well
00:20:428 (2,3,4) - Same as ^ could be done here fixed
00:24:028 (5) - NC for stronger utilization of rhythms here cool
00:26:085 (2,3) - I like it compared to the repeat same
00:27:456 (5,3) - Can somehow give this more spacing. Seems too close aesthetically as a mapper plus it'll be cleaner if it's moved. Ex: http://puu.sh/w7UuM/db8ae86632.jpg fixeeeddd
Clean

Mir wrote:
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[Ezreal's Normal]
00:26:256 (3) - could be a reverse since snare is skipped here? uh.. probably not, doesn't fit the song and sounds weird
00:33:971 - are you sure you don't want these clickable, you can edit this rhythm to make them clickable fairly easily if you just start with a circle on 00:33:628 - (would get rid of the held vocal but imo these sounds are more important) up to you in the end I do understand your point here, but I've followed the vocals the whole time and it would be sorta awkward to switch to percussion here
00:56:256 (2,3,4) - inconsistent rhythm with 00:52:142 (5). skips a sound mapped before so maybe adjust this a bit... 01:03:114 (5) - and here you skip it completely it's really inconsistent considering you mapped it once with one rhythm, and then skipped it twice using a different rhythm for both of those times ye true, nice catch

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Bekko

423 posts

Joined September 2014

Bekko 2017-06-02T18:07:59+00:00

From ma qqqq!

Easy

01:15:799 (2,3,4,5) - This is kind of weird

Ezreal's Normal

00:20:942 (3,4) - Small blanket
00:41:856 (1,4) - ^
00:51:799 (4,5) - ^
01:13:399 (1,2,3,4) - All of these sounds are the same, why is 01:13:399 (1) - 90 degrees? Or maybe its going up because that was the highest note? idk

Mochi's Hard

00:16:142 (2) - Blanket xd
00:17:171 (1,3) - Why aren't these the same slider shape? I would recommend copying 00:17:171 (1) - and rotate it
00:30:885 (3,1) - I don't really like this overlap
00:51:114 (3) - tiiny blanket (srry im nitpicking now xd)
00:51:799 (2,1) - blanket

Swimming Club

00:15:114 (4,1) - This looks kind of weird in my opinion. Could you tell me why you did such overlap?
00:20:256 (2,3,4,5) - I think the pattern is off. try to copy 00:20:428 (3,4) - and flip it
00:42:199 (2,7) - overlap
00:51:285 (1,3) - i'm not sure about this

GOOD LUCK!

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-06-02T19:40:39+00:00

danielexus wrote:
From ma qqqq!

Easy
01:15:799 (2,3,4,5) - This is kind of weird why? i do this near the start of the map aswell and it follows the guitar, idk whats wrong with it lolo

Swimming Club
00:15:114 (4,1) - This looks kind of weird in my opinion. Could you tell me why you did such overlap? moved 4 so it looks less stupid lol
00:20:256 (2,3,4,5) - I think the pattern is off. try to copy 00:20:428 (3,4) - and flip it yea
00:42:199 (2,7) - overlap not visible in game
00:51:285 (1,3) - i'm not sure about this why?

GOOD LUCK!

thanks for the mod

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2017-06-03T00:09:09+00:00

late mod :d
[Easy]
• 00:03:456 (1,2) - Seems like this is the only place where you use this pattern instead of a 3/2 reverse slider. Any special reason? Because to me the rhythm and everything sounds the same
• 00:09:971 (2,3) - 2/1 slider maybe? From the beginning you didn't map the claps like in 00:10:314 - but you do now, and looks like you're following the guitar instead so this might be inconsistent for the pattern (and a tiny bit of overmap too)
• So here's what I'm thinking, changing 00:21:971 (3) - to 2 circles, then making 00:22:656 (1,2,3) - these into 2 sliders? You're following the vocal, and then you skip 00:23:342 - which included both vocal and guitar, it's kinda confusing to me. Same goes for the next part
• 00:54:885 (4,1,2) - The (2) appears really quick http://puu.sh/w97XL/4a5688fe0d.jpg so either less or much players will easily get confused by if they should go left or go right and it's like a 50/50 bet. You should put on yourself a thought that not many newcomers can easily read the AR or read the number on the circles you know what I mean?
• 01:11:342 (1,2,1) - I believe NCing this way may be a better idea lul http://puu.sh/w985v/fd1b9f267e.jpg
[Normal]
• 00:15:799 (4,5) - is this an intentional non-blanket?
[Hard]
• 00:48:714 (1,2) - hmm, why not this? http://puu.sh/w98s2/ec2601cbd4.jpg
[Swimsuit Scenary]
• 00:01:571 (2) - try to make them straight with 00:00:713 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/w98zK/e745f07c7f.jpg that way the aesthetics would be improved and the spacing to 00:01:742 (3) - would be emphasized better
• 00:48:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't see this jumps expressed anything, neither the vocal and the guitar. Any reason for this jumps?
• 01:17:428 (4) - Spacing is kinda big compare to 00:06:114 (4) - so you might wanna check it out

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-06-03T00:22:54+00:00

Yamicchi wrote:
late mod :d
[Easy]
• 00:03:456 (1,2) - Seems like this is the only place where you use this pattern instead of a 3/2 reverse slider. Any special reason? Because to me the rhythm and everything sounds the same this is because of the note on the white tick instead of just on the red tick like all of the other ones, if you listen closely their is a second guitar hit on the first bar of the intro here 00:03:971 -
• 00:09:971 (2,3) - 2/1 slider maybe? From the beginning you didn't map the claps like in 00:10:314 - but you do now, and looks like you're following the guitar instead so this might be inconsistent for the pattern (and a tiny bit of overmap too) this was done to help keep a consistent clicking rhythm on the downbeat for this section whilst also staying true to the guitar rhythm, although i guess i could change this if more people point it out
• So here's what I'm thinking, changing 00:21:971 (3) - to 2 circles, then making 00:22:656 (1,2,3) - these into 2 sliders? You're following the vocal, and then you skip 00:23:342 - which included both vocal and guitar, it's kinda confusing to me. Same goes for the next part made the vocal a slider because i wanted to put lots of emphasis on the cymbals, + the break is also helpful for noobs
• 00:54:885 (4,1,2) - The (2) appears really quick http://puu.sh/w97XL/4a5688fe0d.jpg so either less or much players will easily get confused by if they should go left or go right and it's like a 50/50 bet. You should put on yourself a thought that not many newcomers can easily read the AR or read the number on the circles you know what I mean? i kinda see what you mean, but i think because (4) curves towards (1) i think the implied motion should be strong enough, although if not then i'll change this pattern
• 01:11:342 (1,2,1) - I believe NCing this way may be a better idea lul http://puu.sh/w985v/fd1b9f267e.jpg but then i have a 1 note combo in the middle of the song which is even weirder imo xd

[Swimsuit Scenary]
• 00:01:571 (2) - try to make them straight with 00:00:713 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/w98zK/e745f07c7f.jpg that way the aesthetics would be improved and the spacing to 00:01:742 (3) - would be emphasized better yea, also fixed a visual spacing thing here
• 00:48:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't see this jumps expressed anything, neither the vocal and the guitar. Any reason for this jumps? they emphasise on that strange sound that appears where i placed finish hitsounds, thats why 1-2/3-4/5-6 all have much bigger jumps compared to 2-3/4-5
• 01:17:428 (4) - Spacing is kinda big compare to 00:06:114 (4) - so you might wanna check it out yea

thanks for the mod!

pingal1ty

153 posts

Joined April 2014

pingal1ty 2017-06-04T03:24:31+00:00

irc mod

04:54 Log Off Now: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/594772 this is the map
04:59 pingal1ty: 00:02:256 (4) -
04:59 pingal1ty: Is this right in the red tick?
04:59 pingal1ty: Easy difficulty
04:59 Log Off Now: yea
04:59 pingal1ty: Sure?
04:59 Log Off Now: yes
05:00 pingal1ty: then the slider doesn't start on the white tick
05:00 pingal1ty: it felt really odd while playing but k if you say
05:00 Log Off Now: yes thats intentional
05:00 Log Off Now: its because of the guitar/cymbal pattern
05:07 pingal1ty: 00:22:656 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - flow here ?
05:07 pingal1ty: in mochi's hard
05:07 Log Off Now: not my difficulty :p
05:07 Log Off Now: i can't do anything about it
05:08 pingal1ty: but is right or wrong?
05:08 Log Off Now: i dont know
05:08 pingal1ty: check it perhaps?

05:08 Log Off Now: i didnt map it lol
05:08 Log Off Now: mapping is subjective
05:09 Log Off Now: it looks intentional to me
05:10 Log Off Now: the guy that made the normal difficulty is online now
05:11 pingal1ty: swimming pool is yours?
05:11 Log Off Now: if you want me to tell him what you've pointed out
05:11 Log Off Now: swimming is mine yeah
05:11 pingal1ty: No, I told you about Mochi's Hard
05:11 pingal1ty: not Ezreal's Normal
05:11 Log Off Now: yeah ik
05:12 Log Off Now: but if you find anything i can tell him straight away
05:13 pingal1ty: 00:43:056 (7) -
05:13 pingal1ty: is that intentional too?
05:14 pingal1ty: 00:56:599 (4,5,1) - blanket or whatever is called?
05:14 Log Off Now: no
05:14 Log Off Now: i moved it slightly to fix ugly overlap
05:15 Log Off Now: thats not meant to be a blanket lol
05:15 pingal1ty: but you know the simmetry thingy
05:16 pingal1ty: I mean shouldn't you move 00:56:942 (1) - to make it simmetric with 00:56:599 (4,5) - ?
05:17 Log Off Now: i could but that would ruin my distance spacing
05:17 pingal1ty: kk
05:18 pingal1ty: so idk, I think I found nothing then
05:19 Log Off Now: actually no
05:19 Log Off Now: i will do the symmetry thing
05:20 Log Off Now: idk but ill do something there lol
05:20 Log Off Now: although that still shits on my distance spacing
05:21 Log Off Now: i did a thing

Rieri

905 posts

Joined December 2014

Rieri 2017-06-04T04:23:23+00:00

danielexus wrote:
From ma qqqq!
Ezreal's Normal
00:20:942 (3,4) - Small blanket
00:41:856 (1,4) - ^
00:51:799 (4,5) - ^ fixed all
01:13:399 (1,2,3,4) - All of these sounds are the same, why is 01:13:399 (1) - 90 degrees? Or maybe its going up because that was the highest note? idk probably so

GOOD LUCK!

Yamicchi wrote:
late mod :d
[Normal]
• 00:15:799 (4,5) - is this an intentional non-blanket? moved it up for your sake jeez xd

blanket fixes only leeleleleleleleleleleleelel kms

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Momochikun

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Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-06-05T14:35:52+00:00

Mir wrote:
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[Mochi's Hard]
00:03:456 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - rhythm mapped is different for both instances even though the rhythm in the song is the same if you're following guitar o.O, happens consistently throughout this section and i don't really get why especially since 00:07:056 (4) - 00:04:314 (3) - are not guitar notes, they make this weird i dont see what's wrong with this one tbh
00:15:628 (1,2) - blanket tilted fixed
00:18:542 (1,2) - rhythm should be the same as 00:17:171 (1,2,3,4) since you're following the same thing, especially weird considering 00:19:228 (3) - and 00:17:856 (3) - are the same so it looks inconsistent nah
00:20:428 (3,4) - ctrl+g this rhythm would follow vocals better imo
00:30:028 (2,3) - don't get why this isn't stacked but 00:28:656 (2,3) - is, they sound pretty much the same
00:46:742 - more noticeable triple here than 00:46:828 (4) - imo maybe swap the reverse slider with 00:46:656 (3) - (ctrl+g the rhythm) fixed
00:48:714 (1) - worth 2 circles for that sweet click emphasis considering these are strong beats nah prefer sliders
01:00:028 (2) - slider sounds weird to me since there are distinct vocals you could map with 2 1/2 sliders. not only that but there are drums going on that this ignores too. i wanted to express the drums only here
01:03:114 (4,5,6,7) - err why suddenly stop mapping the 3/4 vocal you mapped at 00:56:256 (3) - 00:52:142 (3) - looks really inconsistent since they're all the same there're notes there sint
01:05:856 - might be better off clickable since 01:06:028 (3) - sounds like it should be paired up with that sound (part of the same word/phrase)
01:06:542 (3) - mehhh weird rhythm choice imo since 01:00:885 (1,2,3,4) - worked better to follow vocals, having the vocals currently on the reverse and the slider end doesn't feel very nice especially since you've been mapping to them pretty intently as well just want to chill after triplet smh
01:13:056 (4) - if you hitsounded 2 snares here might make more sense to have them both clickable no? weird to have a snare on the head but then not click the second on the tail imo. on second listen isn't 01:13:142 - also a drum? you could put a reverse here if you want to nah prefer this one
01:15:799 (6,1) - only instance of a stack you do for these sounds and all other instances are unstacked. also inconsistent. see 01:18:542 (5,1) - 00:04:314 (3,4,1) - etc well it still makes sense

Let's see how this un-formatted mod goes lol. I wanted to try it at least once.

Joe Castle wrote:
HI! im here from #modreqs, since you requested mods there!
so lts see if i can help you buddy!

Mochi Hard:

1. 00:32:599 (2,3,4,1) - for me, 00:33:285 (4,1) should have a similar spacing like 00:32:599 (2,3), it could fit pretty well. k
2. 01:06:371 (1,2,3) - it should have the same spacing like 01:05:514 (2,3,4), it could make it look more comfy to play that one has cymbal

Short mod since the rest of the diffs are awesome, but i hope it helps

Kocari wrote:
Hello from modding queue

[Mochi's Hard]
00:08:085 (2,3) - Strange to implement an overlap here as well as the sudden change in movement. It's took a different approach to be hit and it's spaced further than expected as well since it's the only one that's spaced this way changed
00:27:799 (1) - Not really a good choice of a repeat here imo it doesn't utlize the strong beat. Would've preferred it to be http://puu.sh/w7TtC/8099193338.jpg
Where both the 1/2 will be mapped into the vocal and then the strong beat is clickable just so it can match with 00:29:514 (1) - idk it already has good flow i dont think a way to change xD
00:32:942 (3,4) - I don't think this needed to be emphasized this way. It just leaves flow out of the question. Making (3) into a 1/2 slider would be better for this part. It's not really corresponding to how you previously did pauses like this. Just like this 00:41:171 (3,4) - You could've done the same thing here but you didn't i dont understand what do you mean, but i did somth
00:47:342 (1) - Skipping over valuable bass sounds with this repeat because it makes 00:48:199 (2,3) - seems so bad in comparison to what you could've mapped previously http://puu.sh/w7U07/682f5e52b6.jpg fixed
Seems good :d :d :d

Easy is okay. Good luck with the mapset seems clean to a point. Just a little more and I'll see it in ranked.

danielexus wrote:
From ma qqqq!

Mochi's Hard
00:16:142 (2) - Blanket xd
00:17:171 (1,3) - Why aren't these the same slider shape? I would recommend copying 00:17:171 (1) - and rotate it changed
00:30:885 (3,1) - I don't really like this overlap sure fixed
00:51:114 (3) - tiiny blanket (srry im nitpicking now xd)
00:51:799 (2,1) - blanket nah no blanket here

GOOD LUCK!

Yamicchi wrote:
late mod :d
[Hard]
• 00:48:714 (1,2) - hmm, why not this? http://puu.sh/w98s2/ec2601cbd4.jpg prefer current rhythm

Thanks for mod

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_orange

440 posts

Joined September 2015

_orange 2017-06-06T16:16:23+00:00

hello

[Easy]

00:39:799 (3) - Touching the HP bar
00:44:599 (1) - (minor issue) Also touching the HP bar on 4:3 resolutions
01:18:885 (5) - Slightly touching the HP bar
00:26:085 (2,3) - The flow here isn't really similar to other parts like 00:15:114 (2,3) - this or 00:31:571 (2,3) - this

[Ezreal's Normal]

nice diff didn't find anything

[Mochi's Hard]

00:06:114 (1,2) - Swap NC?
00:07:056 (4) - Why do youu emphasize and stack this but not for 00:04:314 (3,4) - 00:05:685 (3,4) - these?
00:19:228 (3) - Move this a little further from 1 to make the spacing even

a

01:04:314 (2) - I think this shouldn't be emphasized as much, not an important sound imo
01:20:771 (4,1) - The jump here is also quite big, compared to 01:20:256 (3,4) - this spacing

[Swimming Club]

00:22:656 (1) - Slightly touching HP bar
00:43:056 (7,1) - Big jump for a normal vocal sound imo
00:48:714 (1,2,4,6) - You could emphasize these more for the big sound on them
01:20:256 (1,2,3) - It would be nice if you made this into a perfect triangle
01:20:771 (3,4,5) - Here too
01:21:285 (5,1,2,3,4) - 01:22:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - It'd also look better if you made a pentagon with the create polygon circles tool
01:21:971 (3,4,5) - You don't have a lot of flat angles in your map, but this might be hard to fix
Really nice diff! Good aesthetics and didn't find much problems on spacing or flow

GL!

Log Off Now

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-06-06T18:21:53+00:00

_orange wrote:
hello

[Easy]

00:39:799 (3) - Touching the HP bar o
00:44:599 (1) - (minor issue) Also touching the HP bar on 4:3 resolutions o
01:18:885 (5) - Slightly touching the HP bar o
00:26:085 (2,3) - The flow here isn't really similar to other parts like 00:15:114 (2,3) - this or 00:31:571 (2,3) - this i think its ok since its still visually similar to those parts you mentioned and its just a slight variation on rotation, i fixed a blanket here tho

[Swimming Club]

00:22:656 (1) - Slightly touching HP bar o
00:43:056 (7,1) - Big jump for a normal vocal sound imo made it a bit smaller
00:48:714 (1,2,4,6) - You could emphasize these more for the big sound on them ok lol i made these even bigger
01:20:256 (1,2,3) - It would be nice if you made this into a perfect triangle yea
01:20:771 (3,4,5) - Here too yea
01:21:285 (5,1,2,3,4) - 01:22:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - It'd also look better if you made a pentagon with the create polygon circles tool maybe, but i really like how this jump pattern plays and i don't really wanna sacrifice playability for a nicer shape here
01:21:971 (3,4,5) - You don't have a lot of flat angles in your map, but this might be hard to fix eh i think it plays ok anyway
Really nice diff! Good aesthetics and didn't find much problems on spacing or flow

GL!

thanks for the mod!

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-06-09T16:47:42+00:00

swim
ar could be lower imo, maybe give 8.7 as try?
my main issue with this diff is how the chorus simplifies the 3/4 rhythms too much
00:52:142 (3,4,5) - could at least be something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/YtDJDtEn.jpg
00:54:885 (3,4,5) - triples like that are tilt when song emphasizes blue tick with snare. something more like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jOlbHOzy.jpg could make sense
00:56:256 (3,4,5) - etc => same as first point
00:57:456 (2,3,4) - similar issue, if you want to keep polarity something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/L1xsajM3.jpg would be nice

00:22:656 (1,2) - 00:23:342 (1,2) - sounds like the same thing but mapped so differently? would be better to make first one spaced cause all other times you do it, like 00:33:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
00:14:428 - part overall seems to lack whistles, could be used for guitar/vocal emphasis for example
like 00:19:914 - 00:30:885 (1) - whistles etc

00:34:914 - would make this clickable for drum transition/snare
00:34:914 - similar to chorus, the rhythm here makes no sense, most important thing is middle of a triple
actually I think this could even be used to somehow introduce 3/4 rhythms with something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/rKQJCcYX.jpg, then 00:39:627 - could be mapped the same way or even http://lasse.s-ul.eu/zTZW5Du6.jpg
same happens a lot on spots like 00:42:456 (4) -

mochi
00:36:885 (2) - kinda similar issue as top diff, clicking the least important thing here and passively mapping the main layers is also quite questionable
for this and other similar ones in this part
01:03:114 (3,4,5,6) - think what you did at 00:52:142 (3,4,5,1) - represented 3/4 rhythm much better
01:19:742 (3) - weird rhythm, slider starts on weak drums and then ends on melody you followed before. think a rhythm like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/i5Ri6v51.jpg works better here

ezreal
00:15:456 (3) - would move this to next red tick cause you followed vocals before and after, so http://lasse.s-ul.eu/uNROs3gi.jpg makes more sense
00:20:942 (3) - ^
01:08:599 - rhythm like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/2kqPCmbI.jpg would make more sense tapping wise with emphasis of the song
01:22:142 - ignores most of the song, why not something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jIvdPRVI.jpg or similar?
01:26:085 (1) - make this start at least 1/2 earlier so it feels actually connected to the sound it maps

easy
00:06:199 - would nc to keep it similar to nc usage over the whole map // 01:17:514 (4) - same
01:09:285 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - seems like your 2 measure nc pattern got broken somewhere around here

_Meep_

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_Meep_ 2017-06-09T17:55:18+00:00

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Rieri

905 posts

Joined December 2014

Rieri 2017-06-13T01:35:26+00:00

Lasse wrote:
ezreal
00:15:456 (3) - would move this to next red tick cause you followed vocals before and after, so http://lasse.s-ul.eu/uNROs3gi.jpg makes more sense
00:20:942 (3) - ^
01:08:599 - rhythm like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/2kqPCmbI.jpg would make more sense tapping wise with emphasis of the song
01:22:142 - ignores most of the song, why not something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jIvdPRVI.jpg or similar? i think having a little rest here from tapping is okay to have
01:26:085 (1) - make this start at least 1/2 earlier so it feels actually connected to the sound it maps

Thanks for modding!

u p d a t e

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Log Off Now 2017-06-21T13:06:45+00:00

Lasse wrote:
swim
ar could be lower imo, maybe give 8.7 as try? did 8.8 instead
my main issue with this diff is how the chorus simplifies the 3/4 rhythms too much
00:52:142 (3,4,5) - could at least be something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/YtDJDtEn.jpg yea
00:54:885 (3,4,5) - triples like that are tilt when song emphasizes blue tick with snare. something more like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jOlbHOzy.jpg could make sense tbh i kinda like how it plays, and introducing a double here when it's not been done previously in the map feels a bit weird imo
00:56:256 (3,4,5) - etc => same as first point yea
00:57:456 (2,3,4) - similar issue, if you want to keep polarity something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/L1xsajM3.jpg would be nice yea

00:22:656 (1,2) - 00:23:342 (1,2) - sounds like the same thing but mapped so differently? would be better to make first one spaced cause all other times you do it, like 00:33:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - yea
00:14:428 - part overall seems to lack whistles, could be used for guitar/vocal emphasis for example
like 00:19:914 - 00:30:885 (1) - whistles etc yea

00:34:914 - would make this clickable for drum transition/snare yea
00:34:914 - similar to chorus, the rhythm here makes no sense, most important thing is middle of a triple
actually I think this could even be used to somehow introduce 3/4 rhythms with something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/rKQJCcYX.jpg, then 00:39:627 - could be mapped the same way or even http://lasse.s-ul.eu/zTZW5Du6.jpg idk what you mean xd, you used the same timestamp altho i think ik which part you mean
same happens a lot on spots like 00:42:456 (4) -

easy
00:06:199 - would nc to keep it similar to nc usage over the whole map // 01:17:514 (4) - same yea
01:09:285 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - seems like your 2 measure nc pattern got broken somewhere around here yea

srry for the super slow reply, ty for the mod. gonna do a lot of work in the top diff later on but i can't atm because no pc

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Log Off Now 2017-10-04T01:01:18+00:00

revive fixing lasse's mod and fixing a few visual spacing/weird overlap issues

Lasse

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Lasse 2017-10-18T21:12:31+00:00

00:36:371 - why is this part not hitsounded

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Lasse wrote:
00:36:371 - why is this part not hitsounded

im an idiot (also fixed some hitsound errors in proez/mochi's diffs)

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Lasse 2017-10-19T10:30:51+00:00

bubbled

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Mir 2017-10-19T15:37:23+00:00

Swimming Club
- 00:15:114 (4,1) - Would be cute to stack this on the slider tail but.. really minor lol.
- 00:38:428 (3) - Ooo there's a blue tick thing here if you wanna make a reverse 1/4 to capture it? Kinda similar rhythm to 00:41:171 (4,5,6) -
- 00:48:714 (1,2) - SPACE MORE WHERE IS THE EMPHASIS HERE
- 00:49:228 (4,5) - SPACE 5 LESS WHERE IS THE SETUP HERE
- 01:21:285 (5,1,2,3,4) - You can try to make a nicer star here?

Mochi's Hard
- 00:48:714 (1,2) - Owww I wish you'd emphasize the red ticks more here. This rhythm might work? https://i.imgur.com/AKXG1nG.png

Easy
- 00:18:542 (2,2) - This overlap is kinda visible ingame, try to stack the reverse arrow of the later 2 with the previous 2? https://i.imgur.com/LwZHwkL.jpg

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Mir wrote:
Swimming Club
- 00:15:114 (4,1) - Would be cute to stack this on the slider tail but.. really minor lol. ok lol, also fixed some minor visual spacing things in the pattern afterwards
- 00:38:428 (3) - Ooo there's a blue tick thing here if you wanna make a reverse 1/4 to capture it? Kinda similar rhythm to 00:41:171 (4,5,6) - cool idea
- 00:48:714 (1,2) - SPACE MORE WHERE IS THE EMPHASIS HERE i got it
- 00:49:228 (4,5) - SPACE 5 LESS WHERE IS THE SETUP HERE MATE I GOT IT
- 01:21:285 (5,1,2,3,4) - You can try to make a nicer star here? i tried

Easy
- 00:18:542 (2,2) - This overlap is kinda visible ingame, try to stack the reverse arrow of the later 2 with the previous 2? https://i.imgur.com/LwZHwkL.jpg fixed

Solid. Call me for qualification in 18 hours.

thanks!

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Momochikun 2017-10-20T00:20:28+00:00

Alright fixed

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