General
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Kyumi's Easy
- 00:26:364 - I don't think leaving a gap here is necessary. The vocals are still playing here, and you may aswell keep gaps consistent to when there's no lyrics like 00:30:809.
- 02:07:105 (2) - Missing clap.
- 02:42:290 - Should be a whistle.
- 02:44:513 (4) - 03:11:179 (5) - Missing NC.
- 03:34:513 (3) - Not sure if this is intended to be a whistle or not. The other objects seem to imply this should be a clap.
- 03:39:513 (1) - I don't think placing an extra NC is necessary here, and it seems kinda spammy so I'd remove it.
Umi's Normal
- 00:09:324 (6) - Removing the whistle would sound and fit better I feel.
- 01:17:661 - Adding a clap here would be cool.
- 01:20:439 - 02:58:957 (6) - 03:31:550 - Missing clap.
Advanced
- 00:12:472 - I feel making this final note in the guitar melody a clickable beat would emphasise it much better than using a slider, so I would rather aim to do that intead.
- 00:13:772 - Should be a clap.
- 00:18:401 (5) - The synth(?) notes here are significantly louder so I feel it would be better to map these to two circles than a slider.
- 02:07:476 (5) - I feel like this would be cool if it was curved the same way as 02:06:735 (3).
- 02:39:883 (1,1,1) - I almost feel like the NCing is kinda spammy here too. Personally I would remove the one on 02:40:994 but it's up to you.
- 03:00:994 (5) - I'd say you might as well keep this a curve so it's consistent with 02:59:883 (2,3,4).
- 03:08:216 - NC should be here.
Hard
- 01:09:327 - I feel like you might as well map this note. There's not really a significant reason to leave this blank.
- 02:17:105 (1,2,3,4) - I feel there should be a neater way of arranging these four notes than how they are currently. I don't really like how it's not really one smooth shape, where either 1 or 4 is the odd one out depending on how you look at it. I'd try mess around with this, but here's what I came up with: - 02:35:068 (1) - I think it would be better shortening this like you did in Advanced so that 02:35:624 is active.
- 02:39:883 (10,1,1) - And now for some reason this is a different NC pattern than you did in Advanced, huh.
- 02:42:290 - Should be a whistle.
Umi's Insane
- 00:00:806 (1,2) - I don't think it feels appropriate to start the map off with a larger spacing like this. I'd at least keep it consistently small for the first combo.
- 01:10:809 (6,7) - This stack seems unecessary since everything else in the kiai is spaced out, and killing the momentum here just feels very out of place.
- 01:20:439 - Missing clap.
- 01:25:624 (5) - Not sure if this clap is asccidently placed here, or this section is missing claps.
- 02:42:290 (3,4) - Similar thing, but I guess this one is less noticable if for some reason you really want to keep this one.
- 03:17:105 (1) - This could be a straight slider to match with 03:17:476 (2,3) better for neatness.
- 03:31:550 - Should be a clap.
litoluna's Insane
- 00:28:124 - It may be worth silencing this slider end just so it doesn't stick out as much on the silent beat.
- 00:30:346 - I feel like this is an appropriate place for a triple for the guitar strum (the diffs below this have done this).
- 01:05:068 (1) - This is unrankable under the new RC. It's a nice effect though, so my suggestion is to just offset it slightly.
- 03:23:031 - Ideally this should also be clickable for the same reasons, plus the music begins to change its style a little here anyway.
- 03:25:901 - May be worth silencing.
- 03:26:364 - You could also consider reducing the volume of these slider ticks to match with the background guitar.
- 03:35:253 (4) - Should be a clap.
Call me back.
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Kyumi's Easy
- 00:26:364 - I don't think leaving a gap here is necessary. The vocals are still playing here, and you may aswell keep gaps consistent to when there's no lyrics like 00:30:809.
- 02:07:105 (2) - Missing clap.
- 02:42:290 - Should be a whistle.
- 02:44:513 (4) - 03:11:179 (5) - Missing NC.
- 03:34:513 (3) - Not sure if this is intended to be a whistle or not. The other objects seem to imply this should be a clap.
- 03:39:513 (1) - I don't think placing an extra NC is necessary here, and it seems kinda spammy so I'd remove it.
Umi's Normal
- 00:09:324 (6) - Removing the whistle would sound and fit better I feel.
- 01:17:661 - Adding a clap here would be cool.
- 01:20:439 - 02:58:957 (6) - 03:31:550 - Missing clap.
Advanced
- 00:12:472 - I feel making this final note in the guitar melody a clickable beat would emphasise it much better than using a slider, so I would rather aim to do that intead.
- 00:13:772 - Should be a clap.
- 00:18:401 (5) - The synth(?) notes here are significantly louder so I feel it would be better to map these to two circles than a slider.
- 02:07:476 (5) - I feel like this would be cool if it was curved the same way as 02:06:735 (3).
- 02:39:883 (1,1,1) - I almost feel like the NCing is kinda spammy here too. Personally I would remove the one on 02:40:994 but it's up to you.
- 03:00:994 (5) - I'd say you might as well keep this a curve so it's consistent with 02:59:883 (2,3,4).
- 03:08:216 - NC should be here.
Hard
- 01:09:327 - I feel like you might as well map this note. There's not really a significant reason to leave this blank.
- 02:17:105 (1,2,3,4) - I feel there should be a neater way of arranging these four notes than how they are currently. I don't really like how it's not really one smooth shape, where either 1 or 4 is the odd one out depending on how you look at it. I'd try mess around with this, but here's what I came up with: - 02:35:068 (1) - I think it would be better shortening this like you did in Advanced so that 02:35:624 is active.
- 02:39:883 (10,1,1) - And now for some reason this is a different NC pattern than you did in Advanced, huh.
- 02:42:290 - Should be a whistle.
Umi's Insane
- 00:00:806 (1,2) - I don't think it feels appropriate to start the map off with a larger spacing like this. I'd at least keep it consistently small for the first combo.
- 01:10:809 (6,7) - This stack seems unecessary since everything else in the kiai is spaced out, and killing the momentum here just feels very out of place.
- 01:20:439 - Missing clap.
- 01:25:624 (5) - Not sure if this clap is asccidently placed here, or this section is missing claps.
- 02:42:290 (3,4) - Similar thing, but I guess this one is less noticable if for some reason you really want to keep this one.
- 03:17:105 (1) - This could be a straight slider to match with 03:17:476 (2,3) better for neatness.
- 03:31:550 - Should be a clap.
litoluna's Insane
- 00:28:124 - It may be worth silencing this slider end just so it doesn't stick out as much on the silent beat.
- 00:30:346 - I feel like this is an appropriate place for a triple for the guitar strum (the diffs below this have done this).
- 01:05:068 (1) - This is unrankable under the new RC. It's a nice effect though, so my suggestion is to just offset it slightly.
RC
- 02:45:439 - I think this should be mapped to something clickable since the vocal note is more significant here.Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous cannot be used, such as burai sliders and hold sliders without straightforward slider borders. When perfectly overlapping two slider bodies, the first slider must be fully faded out before the second slider is fully faded in.
- 03:23:031 - Ideally this should also be clickable for the same reasons, plus the music begins to change its style a little here anyway.
- 03:25:901 - May be worth silencing.
- 03:26:364 - You could also consider reducing the volume of these slider ticks to match with the background guitar.
- 03:35:253 (4) - Should be a clap.
Call me back.